Frostmourne wrote:

hi ! from my modding queue

General
consider adding tag "Iuchi Maiko" because Maiko is the composer of this song um, okay added

Hard
AR-1 , I find it too fast for this hard non-jumpy diff so DT on AR 7 plays really better than this um..once i'll keep it.
01:19:368 (5,6) - spacing , it should be around 1.2x not 1.6x like this good.fixed
01:31:389 (4) - remove this note and move 01:31:495 (5) - to 01:31:389 (1/4 back) and extend this slider end at 01:31:708 , it follows vocal really better
it's something similar to these 01:09:155 (4,5) - , 02:17:240 (4,5) - , 02:25:751 (3,4) -
02:39:368 (3,4,5) - fix like above ^ , to ruin the symmetry for rhythm is better imo fixed
03:28:091 (2) - I would add whistle on the head here because it follows something similar to the previous notes you added
I can barely hear though but it does work fixed
04:14:687 (3,4,5) - fix like I mentioned again fixed
04:21:708 (3) - better move 1 grid right for more balance (closer to 1.2x) fixed
04:23:410 (3) - if you fixed above, this would be fixed too (for perfect stacking) fixed

Good luck !

Frostmourne wrote:

Normal
01:57:027 (2) - whistle on first point? it doesn't sound badly (sound corresponds between "shoko" with "temo" on the end of slider) Sure
02:19:900 (4) - this slider better ends on 02:19:900 according to the music , didn't mention 01:08:517 (1) - because it is hard to fix I feel that it's better to end it on a 1/1 here

Quiz-chan wrote:

Heeellooow~ from my queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[Hard]
02:08:091 (1) - Kinda ugly slider. Make a better wave. i'll keep it ~
02:45:538 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern does not have much flow in it. Remake. 02:45:963 (2) for instance, could be curved in to pattern center. ^sorry~

This diff's maximum combo is 993. Maybe add a few beats to make it 1000?

Good map indeed!

neonat wrote:

No kudosu for this, I just have one thought for it:

Hard

03:38:304 - I feel there should be a note or something here um...i don't think so.. sorry D;

Nice map, good luck.

B2IN wrote:

neonat wrote:

No kudosu for this, I just have one thought for it:

Hard

03:38:304 - I feel there should be a note or something here um...i don't think so.. sorry D;

Nice map, good luck.

01:18:729 (4,5) - put in the same position with 01:17:453(1,2) . they are like this on purpose
03:35:112 (1) - start at 03:35:325 . alright
04:54:900 (1) - end till 04:57:027 . then 04:57:453 (1) - start at 04:57:240 . I actually wanna hear the finish sound, so I won't change this

gaten wrote:

[Hard]

02:51:176 (1) - 시작점을 02:51:283로 해주세여 nope.
04:57:240 (1) - 서클 없애고 스핀으로 메우는게 더 좋지 않을까여? 이 부분은 노말 힛사가 들어가는게 더 좋을거같아서 넣었어요.


쥐어짜낸 모딩 ㅠㅠ
찾으려고 해도 제실력으로는 무리인것 같네여..

Betsuto wrote:

From M4M >w<)//
[Hard]
00:57:027 (3,4,5)- Make it like this http://puu.sh/1YNx7 fixed
02:05:112 (3,4,5)- ^^^^ fixed
03:38:304 - Please insert breake time nope ' w '

Sorry ...
this is all I can find orz

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey there ~ M4M :33

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

1. everything look fine

[Hard]

1. 00:31:070 (1) - I would remove this NC.l It is kinda unnecessary fixed
2. 01:40:432 (4) - add NC here and remove the next one =w= nope~ >.<
3. 01:40:644 (1,2) - these two notes don't follow the rhythm at all. maybe delete it? >< i think fine it now imo.i'll keep it sorry ~ orz..
4. 02:12:134 (2,3) - I would delete these two notes and add a slider there. sound's better for me imo >< um..nope. sorry~
5. 04:24:048 (1,2) - same as 01:40:644 (1,2) same as 01:40:644 (1,2)

That's all what I have to say ><
It is a really good map and a nice song
good luck with rank ~

Normal

Hard

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!

Red: I recommend you fix.
Blue: Suggestion.

[Hard]

02:50:432 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed

That's all I got, good luck!

1. 00:46:176 (1) - i suppose two notes here is much better than current
2. 00:48:091 (2) - move NC to here?
3. 00:49:793 (2) - ^, actually, i can't see any reason to not place NC on downbeats around here
4. 00:50:431 - add a note for consistent beat?
5. 00:55:751 (6,7,8) - increase the space here?
6. 01:22:134 (1,2,3) - the triplet here is on red-tick but not white-tick.
   
   or if you wanna follow vocal here, then the beat is:
   
7. 02:03:836 (5,6,7) - similar, larger space?
8. 02:30:219 (1,2,3) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) -
9. 02:48:091 (5) - move to 399:244 for better flow?
10. 03:10:857 - add a note here for transition?
11. 03:13:410 - ^
12. 03:14:261 - ^. In fact i really recommend that because your beat here is pretty odd..
13. 03:27:985 - add a note here to make a triplet?
14. 03:30:431 (4) - NC here for vocal?
15. 03:42:240 - i'd like to add a spinner from here to 03:43:410 -
16. 04:03:410 (1) - meaningless NC
17. 04:05:538 (1,2,3,4) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) -
18. 04:11:921 (1) - also unnecessary NC
19. 04:15:325 (1) - ^
20. 04:25:751 (1) - ^

1. 00:27:666 (1) - well, the hidden reverse arrow here is not serious, but also not recommended
2. 01:05:112 (1) - bad slider shape
3. 02:09:793 (2) - NC
4. 02:11:495 (1) - more reasonless NC
5. 02:23:836 (4,6) - stack them well
6. 02:33:623 (1) - remove NC
7. 02:50:431 (1) - ^
8. 03:35:006 - start your spinner from here?
9. 03:38:304 - 5% volumn here?
10. 03:59:155 (3,5) - stack them well
11. 04:12:346 (3,5) - ^
12. 04:25:751 (1) - remove NC
13. 04:47:240 (5,1) - Stack issue again

Scorpiour wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:27:666 (1) - well, the hidden reverse arrow here is not serious, but also not recommended The hitburst already faded out enough and this slider is more than enough to react
2. 01:05:112 (1) - bad slider shape I removed the red slider section
3. 02:09:793 (2) - NC I wanna keep those NC's as they are
4. 02:11:495 (1) - more reasonless NC
5. 02:23:836 (4,6) - stack them well These are custom stacks
6. 02:33:623 (1) - remove NC
7. 02:50:431 (1) - ^
8. 03:35:006 - start your spinner from here? I rather have some space here
9. 03:38:304 - 5% volumn here? no need, the silence comes after this beat
10. 03:59:155 (3,5) - stack them well same as before
11. 04:12:346 (3,5) - ^ ^
12. 04:25:751 (1) - remove NC
13. 04:47:240 (5,1) - Stack issue again as before

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from my queue~~ oh~~~~~hi Scorpiour~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[Hard]

1. 00:46:176 (1) - i suppose two notes here is much better than current not bad.but i'll keep it
2. 00:48:091 (2) - move NC to here? nope.sorry~ I prefer this NC pattern. >.<
3. 00:49:793 (2) - ^, actually, i can't see any reason to not place NC on downbeats around here same above
4. 00:50:431 - add a note for consistent beat? nope~
5. 00:55:751 (6,7,8) - increase the space here? fixed
6. 01:22:134 (1,2,3) - the triplet here is on red-tick but not white-tick. good!fixed
   
   or if you wanna follow vocal here, then the beat is:
   
7. 02:03:836 (5,6,7) - similar, larger space? fixed
8. 02:30:219 (1,2,3) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) - fixed
9. 02:48:091 (5) - move to 399:244 for better flow? fixed
10. 03:10:857 - add a note here for transition? fixed
11. 03:13:410 - ^ fixed
12. 03:14:261 - ^. In fact i really recommend that because your beat here is pretty odd.. fixed
13. 03:27:985 - add a note here to make a triplet? fixed
14. 03:30:431 (4) - NC here for vocal? fixed
15. 03:42:240 - i'd like to add a spinner from here to 03:43:410 - um..i'll keep it.. sorry ~
16. 04:03:410 (1) - meaningless NC fixed
17. 04:05:538 (1,2,3,4) - similar to 01:22:134 (1,2,3) - fixed
18. 04:11:921 (1) - also unnecessary NC fixed
19. 04:15:325 (1) - ^ fixed
20. 04:25:751 (1) - ^ nope.for slowdown slider

That's all~

• 
  - 00:27:666 (1) - repeat arrow is hidden
  - 02:08:091 (1) - delete NC
  - 02:11:495 (1) - ^
  - 02:14:900 (1) - ^

• 
  - 00:30:219 (6) - 뉴콤보?
  - 01:22:878 (5,6) - 전에 패턴에 비해 디스탠스 줄이셧는데 특별한 이유라도?
  - 01:59:580 (6,7,8) - 트라이 디스 타이밍 패턴 ( 하드인데 이것도 좋아보여요 http://puu.sh/22ZsM 이하는 생략해도 되죠? )
  - 02:30:963 (5) - 아까와 비슷한이유
  - 02:33:410 (3) - 뉴콤보 02:34:474 (1) - 여긴삭제
  - 03:34:900 (1) - 피니시보단 휘슬이 좋아보여요
  - 03:46:814 (1) - 올ㅋ
  - 04:06:282 (5,6) - ㅇㅇ
  - 04:26:495 (1) - 04:27:240 - 여기서 끝내시는게 음이나 플레이 둘다 좋아보여요
  - 04:45:538 (3) - Ctrl G 역시 플레이에서 좀더 나아보여요 다음 노트하고 연계도 좋고..
  -

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue

[Hard]

• 
  - 00:30:219 (6) - 뉴콤보? ㄴㄴ
  - 01:22:878 (5,6) - 전에 패턴에 비해 디스탠스 줄이셧는데 특별한 이유라도? 앞에서클 노트끼린 가깝게 붙이고싶어서 붙였어요.
  - 01:59:580 (6,7,8) - 트라이 디스 타이밍 패턴 ( 하드인데 이것도 좋아보여요 http://puu.sh/22ZsM 이하는 생략해도 되죠? ) 괜찮네요. 시간나면 한번 고쳐볼께요.
  - 02:30:96 3 (5) - 아까와 비슷한이유
  - 02:33:410 (3) - 뉴콤보 02:34:474 (1) - 여긴삭제 수정
  - 03:34:900 (1) - 피니시보단 휘슬이 좋아보여요 ㄴㄴ
  - 03:46:814 (1) - 올ㅋ
  - 04:06:282 (5,6) - ㅇㅇ ㅇㅇ
  - 04:26:495 (1) - 04:27:240 - 여기서 끝내시는게 음이나 플레이 둘다 좋아보여요 여기 파트에 대해 많이 고민도해보고, 여러 뱃들한테도 물어봤어요. 제 생각도 소리는 04:27:240 에서 끝내는게 좋아요. 하지만 플레이할때는 너무 짧아서 불편한 감이 있는 거같아서 늘렸어요. 물론 스피너가 끝나고나서 나오는 노트가 치기 좀 힘들겠지만, 짧은 스피너 나오는 것보단 나을거 같아서 늘렸어요. 스피너 자체를 없애는 것도 해봤는데, 앞부분은 다 스피너를 넣어서 통일성이 떨어지더라구요. 그래서 이렇게 바꿨습니다.
  - 04:45:538 (3) - Ctrl G 역시 플레이에서 좀더 나아보여요 다음 노트하고 연계도 좋고.. 괜찮긴한데 지금껏도 별로 나쁘진 않다고 생각해요.
  -

새벽모딩이라 멘탈이 좀 불안하군요 하하하하하ㅏ
굿럭포 랭크!

Edit : 아 노말이 외국인이 만들었네...

1. 01:10:006 (1) - use larger spacing likes http://puu.sh/25y3n
2. 02:18:091 (1) - ^
3. 03:42:985 (x) - add a note at here

1. SV 1.3 is a bit high for me.
2. 01:17:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I dont know these overlaps are acceptable or not.
3. 01:37:453 (1) - stack it better?
4. 02:24:687 (6) - ^
5. 02:31:921 (1) - spacing
6. 04:02:985 (3) - Doubt about it

goodbye wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[Hard]

1. 01:10:006 (1) - use larger spacing likes http://puu.sh/25y3n um.. not bad, but i think fine better now.
2. 02:18:091 (1) - ^ ^
3. 03:42:985 (x) - add a note at here yes, i also hear sound. but i don't want it.. orz

• • Rename this diff "Saten's Normal".
  • Overall Difficulty: 4
  • 00:12:346 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:10:644.
  • 00:16:602 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 00:17:027 (x) - ^
  • 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the spacing here, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:54:900 (1) - Delete this slider and map this part like you did at 02:02:985 (1,2,3,4,5).
  • 01:08:517 (1) - Same thing here, do something like 02:16:602 (1,2,3) to keep a consistency.
  • 01:38:304 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  • 02:08:091 (1) - ^
  • 02:11:495 (1) - ^
  • 02:14:900 (1) - ^
  • 02:46:389 (1,1,1) - ^
  • 03:09:793 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
  • 03:11:070 (2) - ...and add it here.
  • 03:45:112 (3,4) - Try this spacing: (don't worry if the spacing isn't always consistent, it doesn't really matter)
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 04:21:708 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  • 04:57:453 (1) - End this spinner at 05:00:325.

• • 00:28:942 (2) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:17:878 (1,1) - Too many repeats here! These are the only sliders with 2 repeats and they're kinda boring to play, remove them and try to map this part in a different way.
  • 03:38:091 (4) - Delete this circle, start a slider here and end it at 03:38:304.
  • 03:41:495 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to make it like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:46:814 (1) - Try to make this slider perfectly symmetrical. (since doing this is pretty hard I made it for you, if you don't know how to use this code call me)
  
  SPOILER

  

  317,143,226814,6,0,B|440:180|450:79|435:17|334:3|271:17|255:91|239:164|177:179|75:165|61:103|71:2|194:39,2,640

  • 04:54:261 (1,1,1) - Select all this stuff and move it at x:314 y:330.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

Normal

• • Rename this diff "Saten's Normal". nah, Normal is fine by me
  • Overall Difficulty: 4 I think the settings are fine. Added 4 on HP for a little more challenge
  • 00:12:346 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:10:644. The spinner would be too long imo
  • 00:16:602 (x) - Add a circle. too close to the spinner imo
  • 00:17:027 (x) - ^ ^as a follow up
  • 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the spacing here, try this: Each slider is rotated 45°, I don't wanna change this
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:54:900 (1) - Delete this slider and map this part like you did at 02:02:985 (1,2,3,4,5). unnecessary imo
  • 01:08:517 (1) - Same thing here, do something like 02:16:602 (1,2,3) to keep a consistency. I do not want to keep everything the same
  • 01:38:304 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  • 02:08:091 (1) - ^
  • 02:11:495 (1) - ^
  • 02:14:900 (1) - ^
  • 02:46:389 (1,1,1) - ^
  • 03:09:793 (1) - Remove the new combo here...
  • 03:11:070 (2) - ...and add it here.
  • 03:45:112 (3,4) - Try this spacing: (don't worry if the spacing isn't always consistent, it doesn't really matter) I like the current spacing/placement. And It's closer to the real thing
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 04:21:708 (1,1,1) - Remove all these new combos.
  • 04:57:453 (1) - End this spinner at 05:00:325. I would like to keep it as it is

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________


Hard

• • 00:28:942 (2) - Try this: um..nope ~
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:17:878 (1,1) - Too many repeats here! These are the only sliders with 2 repeats and they're kinda boring to play, remove them and try to map this part in a different way. nope. sorry ~
  • 03:38:091 (4) - Delete this circle, start a slider here and end it at 03:38:304. fixed. changed from circle to kick slider. and added whistle on slider end.
  • 03:41:495 (1) - I don't like this slider, try to make it like this: not bad. but i want to keep this shape.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:46:814 (1) - Try to make this slider perfectly symmetrical. (since doing this is pretty hard I made it for you, if you don't know how to use this code call me) fixed. thanks ~
  
  SPOILER

  

  317,143,226814,6,0,B|440:180|450:79|435:17|334:3|271:17|255:91|239:164|177:179|75:165|61:103|71:2|194:39,2,640

  • 04:54:261 (1,1,1) - Select all this stuff and move it at x:314 y:330. sure.fixed

Nice map, call me after your fixes for a recheck.

spboxer3 wrote:

congratz~

xxheroxx wrote:

Grats!

HelloSCV wrote:

Gratz!!

축하드려요!

LQA20Ans wrote:

축하드려요 히힣

쿠로사키 마온!

Satellite wrote:

congratz~~!

Saten wrote:

owo

alacat wrote:

/me late

omedeto :3

Garven wrote:

/me also late

orz おめ！

Colin Hou wrote:

I'm afraid this map has a wrong source.

It is from the PSP game 'Toaru Majutsu no Index'.

Saten wrote:

•_•)
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(⌐■_■)

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Gratz re-rank! <3