1. Hard (4.87 stars, 637 notes)
2. Normal (2.48 stars, 254 notes)

1. 00:19:998 (4) - 1grid down? i think more beautiful placement it. (make triangle (2)'s end,(3) and (4)'s start point)
   　
2. 00:53:189 (1,3) - This is overlapping and is not beautiful. I suggest that move to (3).
   　
3. 01:25:955 (2,3,4) - not straight placement. 01:26:168 (3) - move to 1grid right?
   　
4. 02:01:274 (1,3) - same reason above 00:53:189 (1,3) -
   　
5. 04:14:572 (3) - remove note? not match this note here.
   　
6. 04:40:424 (4) - stack with 04:39:572 (1,2) -

fanzhen0019 wrote:

[Normal]
fine

[Insane]
04:09:785 (4) - missing finish fixed. i'll give you to kudosu. because it was helpful to me. thanks ~

orz cant find more... your map is great! :3
no kd plz

1. Why magic world in tags?
2. Add Iuchi Maiko to the tags? It's composer

1. OD +1?
2. 00:17:445 ~ 00:31:062 - music is quite strong here, so why soft? Maybe change to normal set? (And in the end)
3. 00:20:424 (5) - finish in the end?
4. 00:27:658 (1) - finish at beginning and reverse too
5. 01:08:509 (1) - finish, also, maybe make it look better? So strange shape lol
6. 01:13:615 (1) - you forgot finish!
7. 01:18:721 (4,5) - it better to stack them with 01:17:445 (1,2) -
8. 01:37:445 (1) - stack wi-- wait what. You're doing it again and again
9. 01:42:977 - end kiai here as in Hard
10. 01:42:338 (1) - uh, I think it's not good choice to end part with this strange shape. Dunno, looks wierd. Try this maybe or at least make this slider look to the left
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:13:189 (1) - whistle
12. 02:16:594 (1) - finish
13. 02:18:083 (2) - ^
14. 02:25:104 (1) - whistle
15. 02:50:423 (1) - again, maybe make it look to right?
16. 03:28:083 (1) - whistle to the beginning and end
17. 04:25:743 (1) - whyyyyyyyyyy
18. 04:44:679 (1) - whistle
19. 04:48:083 (1) - ^
20. 04:51:487 (1) - ^
21. 04:57:445 (1) - remove sound in the end (decrease the volume)

1. 00:17:445 ~ 00:31:062 - as in Normal, maybe change to normal set? And in the end too
2. 00:20:849 (1) - finish
3. 00:27:658 (3) - ^
4. 00:28:934 (2) - ^ in the end
5. 01:05:104 (1) - finish
6. 01:11:913 (1) - ^
7. 01:43:083 (1) - end at 01:44:253 - with normal hitsound and start next spinner at 01:44:360 -
8. 02:19:998 (1) - finish
9. 03:07:658 (1) - whistle
10. 03:11:062 (2) - ^
11. 03:12:764 (1) - ^
12. 03:19:572 (1) - ^
13. 03:21:275 (1) - ^ and so on (as in music)
14. 03:33:189 (1) - finish?
15. 03:34:892 (1) - ^
16. 04:57:338 (1) - as in Normal

1. The end of the second kiai time is inconsistent throughout the difficulties. I would recommend for them to be the same since every other kiai time is.
2. Tick rate 2 would sound better in both difficulties due to the nature of the song.
3. Offset 434 sounds more accurate.

1. 00:27:658 (1) - This slider is really nice and symmetrical. I like it a lot.
2. 01:13:615 (1) - There should probably be a finish at the beginning of this slider due to it being in the music as well.
3. 01:18:721 (4,5) - Why don't you just stack these under (1,2)? It would be neater and it seems really silly to do what you did. If you're worried about it being hard to read, you shouldn't be. The player, even a newer one, can see the approach circle and the hitcircle. The hitburst fades away at just the right time for it to be visible enough.
4. 01:26:806 (4) - There should be a clap here to follow the hitsound pattern.
5. 01:30:636 (1,2,3,4) - The way that these sliders overlap looks pretty ugly.
6. 01:37:445 (1) - Stack this under (2) for the same reason I mentioned before.
7. 01:41:700 (2) - You're missing a clap at the end of this slider.
8. 02:11:487 (1) - Put a whistles on this entire slider to be consistent with 02:08:083 (1).
9. 02:19:572 (3) - If you want to follow the music more accurately, this should end one tick earlier on the blue tick.
10. 02:24:679 (6) - Stack this under (4).
11. 02:45:104 (5) - There should be a clap on this note.
12. 03:46:806 (1) - It would look nice if you would move this slider up a bit so that it appears as if this is blanketing the start of (4). I'm sure you could easily re-arrange the sliders after it if you end up following this suggestion.
13. 03:59:998 (5) - Stack this under (3).
14. 04:00:849 (1) - ^ ...
15. 04:02:977 (3) - Curve this slider in the opposite direction (upwards). It looks nicer and flows better when paired with (2).
16. 04:13:189 (5) - Stack this under (3).
17. 04:25:104 (2) - This should have a clap at the end of it.
18. 04:48:083 (1) - Stack this under (5).
19. 04:54:892 (1) - I suggest lowering the volume on this slider because the slider-slide and slider-tick sound awkward in this part.

1. 01:20:646 (2,3,4) - I really like this part of the map. It's fun to play.
2. 01:24:263 (2) - I would remove the second node of this slider so that it looks like 01:26:391 (4). It looks better in my opinion.
3. 02:11:497 (1) - Straighten this slider. It looks odd for it to be this slightly tilted.
4. 04:18:731 (3) - You're missing a clap on this note.
5. 04:26:497 (1) - I understand you used a spinner here to be consistent with the previous parts of the map, but this spinner feels out-of-place and is really short. I suggest you map this part out without using a spinner.
6. 04:54:902 (1) - I suggest lowering the volume on this slider because the slider-slide and slider-tick sound awkward in this part.

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   - [Hard] :
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:232, ends on 01:42:977
   
   - [Normal] :
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:27:232, ends on 01:44:253

1. 01:13:615 (1) - Missing finish? It is the downbeat and kiai starts here, so finish is important in my view.
2. 02:19:572 (3) - I guess this slider should end at 02:19:892 not 02:19:998, since the vocal and the music both stop here.
3. 04:25:743 (1) - Highly recommend using light blue newcombo instead since the previous two slow sliders are also in this color, if it is not light blue, beginners maybe feel a bit confused about it.
4. 04:57:392 (1) - Extend this spinner 1/4 more, since the background music stops at this timing, it could sound better.

1. 00:17:445 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
   
2. 00:55:317 (4) - Recommend overlapping on 00:53:828 (2), looks better then :p
3. 04:48:721 (3) - What about this? Add a note here on the start of 04:48:934 (4), so it can keep the consistency. Also 04:49:572　, 04:50:424 .
4. 04:57:392 (1) - Extend this spinner 1/4 more, since the background music stops at this timing, it could sound better.

Kitagami wrote:

Yay! Kurosaki Maon! <3

Go, go! Good luck! o(>w<)o

indyinyou wrote:

Hard

02:05:325 : remove this note
02:05:431 : add note no fixed ;w;

they're just suggestions

no kd for this

Frostmourne wrote:

hi ! from my modding queue

General
consider adding tag "Iuchi Maiko" because Maiko is the composer of this song um, okay added

Hard
AR-1 , I find it too fast for this hard non-jumpy diff so DT on AR 7 plays really better than this um..once i'll keep it.
01:19:368 (5,6) - spacing , it should be around 1.2x not 1.6x like this good.fixed
01:31:389 (4) - remove this note and move 01:31:495 (5) - to 01:31:389 (1/4 back) and extend this slider end at 01:31:708 , it follows vocal really better
it's something similar to these 01:09:155 (4,5) - , 02:17:240 (4,5) - , 02:25:751 (3,4) -
02:39:368 (3,4,5) - fix like above ^ , to ruin the symmetry for rhythm is better imo fixed
03:28:091 (2) - I would add whistle on the head here because it follows something similar to the previous notes you added
I can barely hear though but it does work fixed
04:14:687 (3,4,5) - fix like I mentioned again fixed
04:21:708 (3) - better move 1 grid right for more balance (closer to 1.2x) fixed
04:23:410 (3) - if you fixed above, this would be fixed too (for perfect stacking) fixed

Good luck !

Frostmourne wrote:

Normal
01:57:027 (2) - whistle on first point? it doesn't sound badly (sound corresponds between "shoko" with "temo" on the end of slider) Sure
02:19:900 (4) - this slider better ends on 02:19:900 according to the music , didn't mention 01:08:517 (1) - because it is hard to fix I feel that it's better to end it on a 1/1 here

Quiz-chan wrote:

Heeellooow~ from my queue

[General]
Seems to be fine.

[Hard]
02:08:091 (1) - Kinda ugly slider. Make a better wave. i'll keep it ~
02:45:538 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern does not have much flow in it. Remake. 02:45:963 (2) for instance, could be curved in to pattern center. ^sorry~

This diff's maximum combo is 993. Maybe add a few beats to make it 1000?

Good map indeed!

neonat wrote:

No kudosu for this, I just have one thought for it:

Hard

03:38:304 - I feel there should be a note or something here um...i don't think so.. sorry D;

Nice map, good luck.

B2IN wrote:

neonat wrote:

No kudosu for this, I just have one thought for it:

Hard

03:38:304 - I feel there should be a note or something here um...i don't think so.. sorry D;

Nice map, good luck.

01:18:729 (4,5) - put in the same position with 01:17:453(1,2) . they are like this on purpose
03:35:112 (1) - start at 03:35:325 . alright
04:54:900 (1) - end till 04:57:027 . then 04:57:453 (1) - start at 04:57:240 . I actually wanna hear the finish sound, so I won't change this

gaten wrote:

[Hard]

02:51:176 (1) - 시작점을 02:51:283로 해주세여 nope.
04:57:240 (1) - 서클 없애고 스핀으로 메우는게 더 좋지 않을까여? 이 부분은 노말 힛사가 들어가는게 더 좋을거같아서 넣었어요.


쥐어짜낸 모딩 ㅠㅠ
찾으려고 해도 제실력으로는 무리인것 같네여..

Betsuto wrote:

From M4M >w<)//
[Hard]
00:57:027 (3,4,5)- Make it like this http://puu.sh/1YNx7 fixed
02:05:112 (3,4,5)- ^^^^ fixed
03:38:304 - Please insert breake time nope ' w '

Sorry ...
this is all I can find orz

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey there ~ M4M :33

Must be fix
It's only what I think

General

1. everything look fine

[Hard]

1. 00:31:070 (1) - I would remove this NC.l It is kinda unnecessary fixed
2. 01:40:432 (4) - add NC here and remove the next one =w= nope~ >.<
3. 01:40:644 (1,2) - these two notes don't follow the rhythm at all. maybe delete it? >< i think fine it now imo.i'll keep it sorry ~ orz..
4. 02:12:134 (2,3) - I would delete these two notes and add a slider there. sound's better for me imo >< um..nope. sorry~
5. 04:24:048 (1,2) - same as 01:40:644 (1,2) same as 01:40:644 (1,2)

That's all what I have to say ><
It is a really good map and a nice song
good luck with rank ~

Normal

Hard

Crimmi wrote:

Modding, CrimmiStyle!

Red: I recommend you fix.
Blue: Suggestion.

[Hard]

02:50:432 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). fixed

That's all I got, good luck!