DJ S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody [Osu|Taiko]‬ · forum‬

XinCrin

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-18T21:22:25+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, Mod from me! First off, *RAVE RAVE RAVE* *cough*, ok im done.

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 45ms BPM: 175,00 Done
I suggest to add something else to the circle element on the SB, its a bit, empty and alone
00:54:729 - There still is this "back" jump on the circle Fixed
00:32:959 - Should kiai start here instead of here 00:37:673 - Fixed

Easy

00:38:787 (2) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done , i guess
00:43:587 (1) - Remove NC add on next element Done
00:46:673 (1) - Remove NC There are sharp sound at each change of combo, led me to that sound
01:05:873 (1) - ^ Why ? . There is a very obvious voice change
01:31:930 (1) - ^ add Nc on next element Done
01:48:387 (4) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Fixed
02:14:445 (1) - Remove NC The same reason as above 00:46:673 (1)
02:27:473 (4) - NC remove next Done
02:30:559 (4) - ^ ^
02:38:445 (4) - ^ ^

Normal

00:44:958 (2) - Feels odd when playing, move it more left Yes , Done
00:56:272 (2) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:01:072 (1) - Remove Finish at start, its random
01:04:158 (2,3) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:08:272 (5) - ^ ^
01:10:329 (3) - ^ ^
01:29:186 (3) - ^ ^[/color]
01:33:129 (5) - NC remove next Obviously no , why ?
01:37:244 (5) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:40:158 (2) - ^
01:42:901 (4) - ^
02:29:529 (1) - Remove NC Nope , the vocal start in the middle of this slider
02:40:501 (1) - ^ My combo patterns always are shorts , Also, I think here is unnecessary

Hard

00:37:586 (4) - Dont make such a random jump for symmetry, move it closer to the preview element
00:48:901 (3,4,5) - Symmetry for consistance Done
02:24:044 (1) - Remove NC add NC here 02:24:558 (3) - I agree , Done

Unless its done for "rytmn" dont change this, otherwise do remove NC, what i really suggest to do on:
00:27:815 (1) - ^
00:40:158 (1) - ^
00:42:901 (1) - ^
00:45:301 (1) - ^
00:53:186 (1) - ^
00:57:643 (1) - ^
01:40:158 (1) - ^
01:42:901 (1) - ^
01:45:644 (1) - ^
02:02:444 (1) - ^
02:05:358 (1) - ^
02:08:958 (1) - ^
02:13:072 (1) - ^
02:28:672 (1) - ^
02:31:415 (1) - ^
02:35:529 (1) - ^
02:39:129 (3) - ^
02:25:758 (1) - ^
My pace is always to take the short combos. So do not remove any
Nothing more , good luck

Thank you BounceBabe

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-01-18T21:27:57+00:00

Why isn't this ranked yet?
Also, Xin..

I LOVE YOUR AVATAR

XinCrin

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Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-18T22:06:22+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Why isn't this ranked yet?
Also, Xin..

I LOVE YOUR AVATAR

Oh Thanks Gabe

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

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-kevincela- 2013-01-24T15:13:25+00:00

Hey!

[Hard]

00:35:529 (3) - I guess you forgot a clap here? I see you have always used these 1/2 claps on this refrain,so why not adding one here too? Imho,it fits quite nicely and good!

00:41:186 (1,2,3,4) - Like bass said,this pattern here does not really follow the whole synthesizer's pitch changement,therefore it does not really sound that good there... As you rejected bass' pattern,I'm trying to provide another one here: this should be good to follow the synthesizer there,and it does play quite good!

I also made a pattern for you to follow properly this pattern and to continue the flow and the spacing without breaking them,see if you like it!

SPOILER

100,248,40672,1,0,0:0:0
100,248,40843,2,0,P|64:228|44:196,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,168,41187,5,0,0:0:0
120,168,41359,2,0,P|176:216|160:308,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,192,42216,1,8,0:0:0
24,268,42387,1,0,0:0:0
80,324,42559,1,0,0:0:0
192,208,42901,5,8,0:0:0
256,160,43072,2,0,P|340:175|340:175|372:148|428:164,1,160
392,240,43586,2,0,P|408:276|400:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,372,43929,6,0,P|296:400|268:373|240:344|188:372,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,372,44443,2,0,P|64:324|88:240,1,160
229,209,44959,2,0,P|208:240|168:252,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:54:386 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little thing,feel free to fix if you want: what about making the spacing in this square pattern higher? Since the kicks here are taking the place,emphatizing them in this way would fit really good,other than being quite intense and fun to play! I would say using DS 1.2 would fit good enough,considering you have done the same with 01:49:244 (1,2,3,4) -
00:55:586 (1,2,3) - I see your intent here,but the second blanket between 00:56:101 (2,3) - does not really flow that smoothly,as the dropoff here gets again broken... What about instead continuing the whole pattern using an arc pattern there? It's not a really big changement,but it smooths out the flow there a bit,so try it out!
SPOILER
```
364,140,56443,1,0,0:0:0
436,172,56615,1,8,0:0:0
452,248,56786,1,0,0:0:0
392,304,56958,2,0,P|336:328|248:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,232,57472,1,0,0:0:0
144,292,57643,6,0,P|36:208|152:132,2,320,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:37:072 (5) - As the whole rhythmical pattern finishes here, I would actually see better this slider splitted up in a 1/2 slider and a note. That's not a really big deal,but anyways,other than following well the vocals being played there,they can play pretty good to finish this pattern,considering that you can even make a quite fun to play pattern,using a slider whose end matches 01:36:558 (4) - 's one. Here's what I have done
SPOILER
```
240,28,96558,2,0,P|164:60|88:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,24,97072,2,0,P|60:40|88:68,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,148,97416,1,4,0:0:0
```
01:42:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Heh,the transitions you used there felt kinda rough,as 01:44:273 (1,2) - 's oval flow did not continue well the pattern 01:43:415 (2,3,4) - neither the pattern 01:45:301 (3,1,2,3,4) - . I have a little idea there: what about taking advantage of 01:43:415 (2) - 's oval flow to continue right ahead with the following patterns? Here's how I rearranged the patterns,see if you like them!
SPOILER
```
256,272,103415,2,0,P|180:264|148:192,1,160
188,124,103929,1,0,0:0:0
231,193,104101,1,0,0:0:0
147,195,104273,6,0,P|108:152|136:56,1,160
234,56,104787,2,0,P|267:104|232:192,1,160
192,272,105301,2,0,P|228:284|272:272,1,80
328,220,105644,5,0,0:0:0
404,240,105815,1,0,0:0:0
444,172,105986,1,0,0:0:0
388,120,106158,2,0,P|328:120|328:120|308:72|244:72,1,160
```

02:06:730 (2,3) - As the last point,I felt this pattern was kinda unpleasing to play,especially with 02:06:730 (2,3) - . I have a little idea which may work pretty good there... What about making a pattern with 02:06:730 (2) - encircling 02:06:215 (1) - 's end and 02:07:244 (3) - encirlcling 02:06:730 (2) - 's beginning? That imho works really good,try it out!

SPOILER

60,220,126215,6,0,P|108:240|108:240|136:288|208:272,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,220,126730,2,0,P|292:272|236:352,1,160
203,274,127244,2,0,P|183:238|191:194,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,144,127586,6,0,P|152:108|196:92,1,80
256,52,127929,1,8,0:0:0
325,92,128101,2,0,P|360:108|380:144,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,216,128444,2,0,P|368:256|404:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,216,128786,1,8,0:0:0
480,296,128958,6,0,P|448:356|356:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

02:22:158 (1,2,3,1) - You could make the spacing higher here too,but using 1.00x fits pretty good too,as it could be considered as a transition,so
02:35:529 (1,2,3) - Uhm...Why are you mixing that curved slider with a linear flow there? Imho,it really doesen't play good,considering the transition with 02:36:386 (4) - too... what about instead inverting 's curve and structuring the other notes zig-zag so that they follow well 's oval flow? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
116,152,155530,6,0,P|120:220|184:296,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,308,156044,1,8,0:0:0
332,292,156215,1,0,0:0:0
376,360,156386,2,0,P|412:312|380:224,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
02:40:672 (1) - Shouldn't the New Combo be moved at 02:41:186 (2) - instead? I have seen that many times you have preferred the vocals over the synth,so why are you following the synth this time? Imho,the current setting suits better the pattern you have there.

That's all. I may mod the other diffs too later. For now that's a pretty good map as I've already said you via irc,good luck and I hope I have helped you ^^

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-24T19:17:11+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
Hey!

[Hard]
00:35:529 (3) - I guess you forgot a clap here? I see you have always used these 1/2 claps on this refrain,so why not adding one here too? Imho,it fits quite nicely and good! Oh yes , Added
00:41:186 (1,2,3,4) - Like bass said,this pattern here does not really follow the whole synthesizer's pitch changement,therefore it does not really sound that good there... As you rejected bass' pattern,I'm trying to provide another one here: this should be good to follow the synthesizer there,and it does play quite good! Oh yes you have all reason and changed the blankets you told me

I also made a pattern for you to follow properly this pattern and to continue the flow and the spacing without breaking them,see if you like it!
SPOILER
100,248,40672,1,0,0:0:0
100,248,40843,2,0,P|64:228|44:196,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,168,41187,5,0,0:0:0
120,168,41359,2,0,P|176:216|160:308,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,192,42216,1,8,0:0:0
24,268,42387,1,0,0:0:0
80,324,42559,1,0,0:0:0
192,208,42901,5,8,0:0:0
256,160,43072,2,0,P|340:175|340:175|372:148|428:164,1,160
392,240,43586,2,0,P|408:276|400:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,372,43929,6,0,P|296:400|268:373|240:344|188:372,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
112,372,44443,2,0,P|64:324|88:240,1,160
229,209,44959,2,0,P|208:240|168:252,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:54:386 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little thing,feel free to fix if you want: what about making the spacing in this square pattern higher? Since the kicks here are taking the place,emphatizing them in this way would fit really good,other than being quite intense and fun to play! I would say using DS 1.2 would fit good enough,considering you have done the same with 01:49:244 (1,2,3,4) - OH completely agree . Done
00:55:586 (1,2,3) - I see your intent here,but the second blanket between 00:56:101 (2,3) - does not really flow that smoothly,as the dropoff here gets again broken... What about instead continuing the whole pattern using an arc pattern there? It's not a really big changement,but it smooths out the flow there a bit,so try it out! Well Well .. I like your idea . Done
SPOILER
364,140,56443,1,0,0:0:0
436,172,56615,1,8,0:0:0
452,248,56786,1,0,0:0:0
392,304,56958,2,0,P|336:328|248:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,232,57472,1,0,0:0:0
144,292,57643,6,0,P|36:208|152:132,2,320,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:37:072 (5) - As the whole rhythmical pattern finishes here, I would actually see better this slider splitted up in a 1/2 slider and a note. That's not a really big deal,but anyways,other than following well the vocals being played there,they can play pretty good to finish this pattern,considering that you can even make a quite fun to play pattern,using a slider whose end matches 01:36:558 (4) - 's one. Here's what I have done You convinced me so funny.Done
SPOILER
240,28,96558,2,0,P|164:60|88:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
24,24,97072,2,0,P|60:40|88:68,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,148,97416,1,4,0:0:0
01:42:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Heh,the transitions you used there felt kinda rough,as 01:44:273 (1,2) - 's oval flow did not continue well the pattern 01:43:415 (2,3,4) - neither the pattern 01:45:301 (3,1,2,3,4) - . I have a little idea there: what about taking advantage of 01:43:415 (2) - 's oval flow to continue right ahead with the following patterns? Here's how I rearranged the patterns,see if you like them! Well , your idea is better for me . Done
SPOILER
256,272,103415,2,0,P|180:264|148:192,1,160
188,124,103929,1,0,0:0:0
231,193,104101,1,0,0:0:0
147,195,104273,6,0,P|108:152|136:56,1,160
234,56,104787,2,0,P|267:104|232:192,1,160
192,272,105301,2,0,P|228:284|272:272,1,80
328,220,105644,5,0,0:0:0
404,240,105815,1,0,0:0:0
444,172,105986,1,0,0:0:0
388,120,106158,2,0,P|328:120|328:120|308:72|244:72,1,160
02:06:730 (2,3) - As the last point,I felt this pattern was kinda unpleasing to play,especially with 02:06:730 (2,3) - . I have a little idea which may work pretty good there... What about making a pattern with 02:06:730 (2) - encircling 02:06:215 (1) - 's end and 02:07:244 (3) - encirlcling 02:06:730 (2) - 's beginning? That imho works really good,try it out! nice idea . Done
SPOILER
60,220,126215,6,0,P|108:240|108:240|136:288|208:272,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,220,126730,2,0,P|292:272|236:352,1,160
203,274,127244,2,0,P|183:238|191:194,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,144,127586,6,0,P|152:108|196:92,1,80
256,52,127929,1,8,0:0:0
325,92,128101,2,0,P|360:108|380:144,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,216,128444,2,0,P|368:256|404:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,216,128786,1,8,0:0:0
480,296,128958,6,0,P|448:356|356:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:22:158 (1,2,3,1) - You could make the spacing higher here too,but using 1.00x fits pretty good too,as it could be considered as a transition,so I increased the spacing a little, I think plays better
02:35:529 (1,2,3) - Uhm...Why are you mixing that curved slider with a linear flow there? Imho,it really doesen't play good,considering the transition with 02:36:386 (4) - too... what about instead inverting 's curve and structuring the other notes zig-zag so that they follow well 's oval flow? Here's what I have done,see if you like it! Totally agree.Fixed !
SPOILER
116,152,155530,6,0,P|120:220|184:296,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
252,308,156044,1,8,0:0:0
332,292,156215,1,0,0:0:0
376,360,156386,2,0,P|412:312|380:224,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:40:672 (1) - Shouldn't the New Combo be moved at 02:41:186 (2) - instead? I have seen that many times you have preferred the vocals over the synth,so why are you following the synth this time? Imho,the current setting suits better the pattern you have there Fixed
That's all. I may mod the other diffs too later. For now that's a pretty good map as I've already said you via irc,good luck and I hope I have helped you ^^

Thank you very much for the detailed mod, Kevin . I served very helpful

Faust

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Joined January 2009

Faust 2013-01-25T03:05:16+00:00

Hehe, Yosuga no Sora BG. I do find it silly you accept using anime BGs and yet not want to map any song related to anime. lol

Good usage of clap-based sliderticks.

Overall, I think this mapset is already there.
I don't know if you would feel shortchanged of a mod with me saying this, but I'll get kevin and discuss with him on this map.
I have a handful of very minor things to point out, symmetry among them but you won't really be doing any productive work on this by applying what I have in mind anyway.

But for now, I'd refrain from giving this a bubble before kevin comes back to you with an additional mod from where he left off since he may have more things to say. (It's very likely he will)

Would have liked to see an Insane difficulty with some jumping around though.

We'll get back to you.

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-01-25T03:07:18+00:00

Faust wrote:
Hehe, Yosuga no Sora BG. I do find it silly you accept using anime BGs and yet not want to map any song related to anime. lol

It becames very mainstream, that's why some people don't like it.

XinCrin

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Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-25T03:25:34+00:00

Faust wrote:
Hehe, Yosuga no Sora BG. I do find it silly you accept using anime BGs and yet not want to map any song related to anime. lol Is unrelated, but I like anime image combines with thecno

Good usage of clap-based sliderticks. Thanks e.e

Overall, I think this mapset is already there.
I don't know if you would feel shortchanged of a mod with me saying this, but I'll get kevin and discuss with him on this map.
I have a handful of very minor things to point out, symmetry among them but you won't really be doing any productive work on this by applying what I have in mind anyway. Thank you , i'm wait you mod

But for now, I'd refrain from giving this a bubble before kevin comes back to you with an additional mod from where he left off since he may have more things to say. (It's very likely he will) I think Kevin will come too late to my map, but I don't have problem

Would have liked to see an Insane difficulty with some jumping around though. I'm very bad with the diffs. Insane . Sorry

We'll get back to you .

Thanks for your opinion about my map , Faust . I'll wait

Bass

1,846 posts

Joined January 2009

Bass 2013-01-27T23:17:40+00:00

You can always ask someone to map Insane. Iif you feel like you need one, PM me then.

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-28T04:14:02+00:00

Sorry Bass, but [Te][Amo] made me the Insane. But thank you very much for your help

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-01-28T04:15:31+00:00

Yeah Bass, you're slow. I've even modded his diff by irc yesterday c:

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-01-28T17:51:36+00:00

[Easy]

00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD
SPOILER
```
476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160
```
00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation:

I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
SPOILER
```
408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160
```
00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern!
01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there.
01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here:
SPOILER
```
160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0
```
01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here?
01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again:
SPOILER
```
344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0
```

02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it!

SPOILER

364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0

02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction.

Also,why does the Normal diff finish with 01:41:529 (3) - when in the description it says it's 100% completed? o.o
Finish the Normal diff and I'll mod the rest along with the Insane too.

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-01-29T17:25:47+00:00

The problem is fixed now
I'll wait for you to finish the mod ^^

Chema

87 posts

Joined September 2011

Chema 2013-02-01T15:44:35+00:00

/me loves this map.

good luck ranking it!

Yuzeyun

7,650 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2013-02-01T15:46:24+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Sorry Bass, but [Te][Amo] made me the Insane. But thank you very much for your help

I MADE ONE WHEN IT HAD ONLY HARD ;____;
/me sad.
also yeah you can freely change the tick rate to 1 on my unsubmitted diff, lazy to upload it lel

Haya

580 posts

Joined August 2010

Haya 2013-02-01T15:54:03+00:00

Hey

Modding this for your Mod4Mod Queue ~
I really love symmetry so this could be a bit nazi at some points!

[General]
It looks better if you move the First timing point 00:00:045 - to 00:21:987 -

[Easy]
00:52:158 (1,2,3) - Would be cooler symmetrically
00:55:929 (2,3) - Do it like this http://puu.sh/1VPUA
01:03:129 (4) - 2 grids to the right
01:09:301 (2) - Looks a little bit lazy
01:31:930 (3) - Change the angle so it synergizes with the note before
01:57:986 (1) - Could be a little too short for an Easy Diff
02:20:616 (7) - Make this one more symmetric to the Y-Axis

[Normal]
00:40:501 (4) - one grid up
00:54:386 (1,2) - Looks weird. Maybe make 4 Circles and make a better shape
00:55:586 (1,2) - Get them on the same height and move them a half grid to the left
01:04:158 (2,3) - symmetrypls
01:38:786 (1,2) - symmetryplx
01:41:529 (3,4) - symmetryplz
02:17:186 (1,2) - ^
02:23:701 (3,4) - Stack those (?)

[Hard]
00:25:073 - Insert a circle here
00:53:186 (5) - Remove NC
01:29:701 (1) - Don't let the end touch the beginning!
01:35:186 (1,2) - Stack the end of (1) on the middle of (2)
02:23:186 (2) - Maybe do it like this http://puu.sh/1VQmq

[Insane]
Couldn't really find anything here

Map is really really fun to play

I hope that this gets ranked asap!

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-02-05T00:48:44+00:00

Rankeen la lesera si está bien hecha >:CCCCCCC

Mikarunoel131_DELETED

Mikarunoel131_DELETED 2013-02-05T19:59:06+00:00

Hey I know you

I love beatmap, Sb and song sooo much x3
Please get it ranked soon !

Lally

3,176 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2013-02-06T11:11:46+00:00

Hi >u< sorry for delay moe >_<

[General]

Remove taiko BG and use a normal one because it's unrankable since the new update
in all diff the 2nd break time is unsnapped
Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning
SPOILER
[Easy] : 1
[Hard] : 1
[Kin's Taiko Muzukashii] :
[Kin's Taiko Oni] :
[Normal] : 1
[TeA's Insane] : 1
Incostency in Kiai Time
Normal diff have a extra kiai time the ↓ add it in all diff or remove it >u<
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:33:130 - ends on 02:43:245 -

[Easy]

00:40:843 (5) - Unsnapped circle
00:48:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:50:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:52:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
00:57:643 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:00:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle
01:12:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
Hitsounds:
01:00:387 (3) - finish sounds better here
01:01:073 (1) - whistle sounds better at the slider start

[Normal]

01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
01:28:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
01:36:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:45:643 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:02:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
02:04:843 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:07:243 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:14:443 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:16:843 (4) - Unsnapped circle
02:33:643 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:36:043 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
02:40:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
Spacing/Rhythm an other stuff:
00:26:102 (4,5) - spacing
00:29:873 (4,5) - spacing
00:37:073 (3,4) - spacing
00:56:273 (2,3) - spacing
01:03:130 (1,2) - spacing
02:23:702 (3,4) - here for first time you change rhythm,why?, in a normal it sound so bad D: and i think you should use the same thythm as before first for costency and second becase the pattern is not moe o3o
02:29:187 (5,1) - spacing

Hitsounds:
and for hisounds same as easy here
01:00:387 (3) - finish sounds better here
01:01:073 (1) - whistle sounds better at the slider start

[Hard]

00:38:443 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:39:643 (4) - Unsnapped circle
00:40:843 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:44:443 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
00:56:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
00:57:643 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:00:043 (3) - Unsnapped circle
01:02:443 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:07:243 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
01:08:443 (6) - Unsnapped circle
01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)

[Insane]

00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - i think something like this ↓ will flow better
SPOILER

Hope it can help >u< good luck moe

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

2,858 posts

Joined February 2010

-kevincela- 2013-02-07T19:38:17+00:00

[General]

Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!

[Normal]

00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
SPOILER
```
4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0
```
00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
SPOILER
```
136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0
```
00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
SPOILER
```
152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
```
268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200
```

02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!

SPOILER

56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0

02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.

02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!

SPOILER

352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[TeA's Insane]

00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
```
256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0
```
00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0
```
00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
```
204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this?
01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:

A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
SPOILER
```
276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
SPOILER
```
472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180
```
02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^

And with this I have finally finished my mod. Sorry for the delay,this week brought me lots of exams,so I really didn't have the proper amount of time to mod. Anyways as already said this is a pretty good map,just get some mods for the Insane diff (as it's been just submitted,and it received just 2 mod posts,so xD) and call me back when you're done. I hope I have helped you for now! ^^

(no kds,it's a continuous of the precedent mod post)

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-07T22:11:50+00:00

-kevincela- wrote:
[Easy]
00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD Haha , Done
SPOILER
476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160
00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation: Done

I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
SPOILER
408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160
00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern! I feel that if I put the note here, is a bit hard to understand for beginners, so do not put here
01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there. Done
01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here: Sorry , i'm not a symetrical mapper . Fixed
SPOILER
160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0
01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here? Sure xD , Done
01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again: nice idea , Fixed
SPOILER
344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0
02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I like too , Done
SPOILER
364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0
02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction. Done[/list:5dde3]
[General]

Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!
[Normal]
00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
SPOILER
4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0
00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
SPOILER
136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0
00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
SPOILER
152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200
02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!
SPOILER
56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0
02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.
02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!
SPOILER
352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
All Done in this diff. . I used the codes because I'm too lazy :P

[TeA's Insane]
00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0
00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
SPOILER
100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0
00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this? It gives a better appearance to the sound, I'll leave it
01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:

A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
SPOILER
276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
SPOILER
472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180
02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^

All done in TeA's Insane except the hitsounds

Thanks for the mod that really helped me Kevin

Calling to you

. Updated

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-02-08T18:53:15+00:00

Hi, Mod for Insane diff

00:46:330 (1,2) - Spacing, done for symmetry, keep it normal please
01:09:645 (2) - ^
02:31:930 (1,2,3) - Jumps dont suit here, make normal spacing

Theres is nothing else i could find, really this diff is totally fine. No need for any more mods on the Insane.

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-02-08T18:55:18+00:00

hi~ request from via in-game
check insane diff only.

[TeA's Insane]

00:23:187 (4) - stack with 00:21:987 (1) - (x:186 y:138)
　
00:24:902 (5) - like this slider? little blanket for (7)
SPOILER
```
256,248,24902,2,0,P|224:218|180:253|140:284|84:238,2,180
```
　
00:27:987 (2) - parallelism to 00:27:473 (1) - . slider 2nd point move to x:228 y:160 (if you fix this suggestion, you should change 00:28:502 (3,5) - slider angle)
　
00:34:845 (1) - If you want to employ a complete symmetry slider, try this code.
```
184,220,34845,6,0,P|256:266|328:220,1,180
```
　
01:34:673 (1) - add whistle? maybe your pattern.

That's all. nice mapset~
good luck

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-08T19:04:59+00:00

BB

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, Mod for Insane diff

00:46:330 (1,2) - Spacing, done for symmetry, keep it normal please In my opinion the jump, it's a good idea, and fun to play
01:09:645 (2) - ^ ^
02:31:930 (1,2,3) - Jumps dont suit here, make normal spacing I'll ask about this with TeA , maybe is a good idea here

Theres is nothing else i could find, really this diff is totally fine. No need for any more mods on the Insane.

Guy

[TeA's Insane]

00:23:187 (4) - stack with 00:21:987 (1) - (x:186 y:138) Done
　
00:24:902 (5) - like this slider? little blanket for (7) Is the same slider lol . Done
SPOILER
```
256,248,24902,2,0,P|224:218|180:253|140:284|84:238,2,180
```
　
00:27:987 (2) - parallelism to 00:27:473 (1) - . slider 2nd point move to x:228 y:160 (if you fix this suggestion, you should change 00:28:502 (3,5) - slider angle)
　
00:34:845 (1) - If you want to employ a complete symmetry slider, try this code. Done
```
184,220,34845,6,0,P|256:266|328:220,1,180
```
　
01:34:673 (1) - add whistle? maybe your pattern. Done

Thanks to both ♥ . Updated ~

dkun

osu! Alumni

4,486 posts

Joined August 2009

dkun 2013-02-13T06:58:03+00:00

Hello. I'm from ♫ ~ Project Thorough Modding ~ ♫.

modding key

this is unrankable.
this should be highly considered.
this is just a normal suggestion/praise.

Let me know if there's any questions you might have with anything I say below!

General

You have a taiko-bg. Someone noted this above, but you said you've updated, when the bg is still there. Just use the default background for the Taiko diffs.
SB\2: Could you remove the cap on T in through? It's proper English for a lyric-sb, right?
SB\2: This image doesn't fade after the first break. It's behind the background, but nonetheless, it should be changed.
The set is really well done! Great job. (I looked through the standard set and didn't find anything to poke at, this is ready to go!)

Kin's Muzukashii/Oni

Quite a bit of these difficulty has unsnapped notes. It wouldn't hurt looking through AIBAT. Just run through and click resnap all notes in the timing section as the others have mentioned.

Mercurial

Mercurial 2013-02-13T14:25:12+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
-kevincela- wrote:
[Easy]
00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD Haha , Done
SPOILER
476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160
00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation: Done

I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
SPOILER
408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160
00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern! I feel that if I put the note here, is a bit hard to understand for beginners, so do not put here
01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there. Done
01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here: Sorry , i'm not a symetrical mapper . Fixed
SPOILER
160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0
01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here? Sure xD , Done
01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again: nice idea , Fixed
SPOILER
344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0
02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I like too , Done
SPOILER
364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0
02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction. Done[/list:e563a]
[General]

Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!
[Normal]
00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
SPOILER
4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0
00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
SPOILER
136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0
00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
SPOILER
152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200
02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!
SPOILER
56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0
02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.
02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!
SPOILER
352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
All Done in this diff. . I used the codes because I'm too lazy :P

[TeA's Insane]
00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
SPOILER
256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0
00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
SPOILER
100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0
00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
SPOILER
204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this? It gives a better appearance to the sound, I'll leave it
01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:

A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
SPOILER
276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
SPOILER
472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180
02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^
All done in TeA's Insane except the hitsounds

Thanks for the mod that really helped me Kevin Calling to you . Updated

Ehm... uhm.

You should give him a kudosu for his hard work, I think.

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-13T17:19:31+00:00

No tengo ganas de hablar en ingles

, pero bueno esta es la continuacion de su mod . El kudo ya fue dado en su primer post ya que este es el tercero que Kevin hace , ademas al final de su mod escribio que el kudo no es necesario ya que solo es la continuacion de su mod pasado

Mercurial

Mercurial 2013-02-16T19:06:32+00:00

Nevermind then.

Elly-chan

969 posts

Joined January 2011

Elly-chan 2013-02-17T17:05:54+00:00

Here's your mod from Project Thorough Modding! Sorry to say, but you're stuck with me as the MAT who's modding this instead.

[General]

Shouldn't the title be simply 'S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody', not 'DJ S3RL'? I'm not sure, but i've looked around and I don't seem to find it labeled as DJ S3RL much anywhere else. I'm sure just S3RL is fine. ((talked to -kevincela- about this, even if there is already a map ranked with DJ in front of S3RL)).

[Easy]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

00:24:730 (4) - Add a New Combo here; throughout the map, at least during the kiai sections, you add NCs each two measures. It's been two measures and this follows the music better. Afterwards, remove the NC at 00:25:759 -.
00:54:902 (1) - Add a finish in here? It fits in with the BGM seeing that there is a shattering sound being made at this moment. This also means remove the finish at 00:55:587 -; it has no real purpose since there is no finish sound in the BGM. It just makes it sound bad.
01:03:816 (4) - Remove the whistle here to keep consistent with your hitsound pattern! You only are using whistles for this short section not on her vocal holds, but where her voice is prominently saying something.
01:41:530 (3) - New Combo to make your NC-Every-Two-Measures pattern consistent!
01:47:016 (3) - Same as above~!
02:08:273 (1) - Remove the New Combo here and add it at (3)! To keep your combo pattern consistent and to follow the music better.
02:41:530 (5) - New Combo since you would've been following the girl's vocals.

00:33:987 (2) - No point to have a curve here imho; it doesn't really lead on a beat-circle curved transition, so i'd prefer it if you straightened it out.
01:09:302 (2) - Can you make this into a shorter repeat slider instead? It's a pretty long slider for this map when you can be following other tunes in the music. Try something like this.
SPOILER
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

[Normal]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

02:24:902 (5) - Why is this not a part of the New Combo afterwards? It follows the girl's vocals as well, so add one here and remove the one from the note directly afterwards.

Go to the Timing tab and then click 'Resnap All Notes'. There are around twenty unsnapped notes here, that being single beats or sliderends, which is unrankable.
00:40:502 (4) - Following the music, this is not an area where you would have put a slider before; you should replace this slider with a shorter one that ends at 00:40:845 -, and then add a note at 00:41:187 -. Since then you would have four hitcircles in a row and that may feel like much at a time for an easier difficulty, replace 00:41:873 (2, 3) - with another shot slider.
SPOILER
00:48:045 (3) - Why such a deep curve for such a short slider? Make it appear a bit longer by moving the slider curve point up a bit? It shouldn't effect the spacing too much.
SPOILER
00:56:102 (2) - Remove this note; throughout this normal difficulty, this is the only section/area where a beat is placed to follow the girl's vocals; the rest are coincidental and following solely the music's rhythm and beat. Plus, it doesn't flow all too well, honestly.
01:33:130 (5) - Could you move this to the right a bit more? It would give the feel of the note making a bit more curved transition, ( like a suddle angle transition)), rather then a quick one where (5) is now.
SPOILER
02:24:216 (4) - Imo, it'd flow a bit better if you made it as if (4) was a continueation of the (3) slider by moving it in the direct angle of where the (3) slider left off as opposed to being more near the top of the slider.
SPOILER
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

[Hard]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

00:55:587 (1) - Sincerely, there is no need for the finish. It just sounds bad, there's none in the BGM, and you've used it on the note previous; just remove it, it sounds much better.

01:29:702 (1) - Can you make this slider more like a curve rather than an arch? It's just plain out weird to play in this pattern imo.
01:37:245 (5) + 02:10:845 (2) - 'End of these sliders are hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the sliders so that you can see if they have a repeat or not, please!
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

[Insane]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

00:41:702 (5) - Add a New Combo here and remove the next New Combo coming after it; It follows your combo pattern and emphasizes this part of the music more.
00:46:330 (1) - Make this part of the previous Combo and add the New Combo where two is currently. It goes with the downbeat, which imho, is much better.
01:34:673 (1) - Remove the New Combo here, add it back on 01:35:530 -, and then remove it from 01:36:045 -. It follows the music much better and keeps your combo pattern consistent.
02:03:987 (6) - Add a new combo here and then remove the New Combo on the next note- It emphasizes the music much better.

01:35:187 (2) - With the standard hitburst (as all maps looking for this issue should be modded with), it leaves barely any time to see if there is a repeat here or not; also called a hidden slider end. This is moderate and not severe, but I hiiiiighly suggest you change this.

[Muzu]

01:15:473 - d; better with a note here!
01:19:587 - d; fill in the empty space. better then a break
01:20:959 - d; ^^^
01:21:473 - k; no need for a finish
01:25:073 - d; better then having a break
01:26:445 - d; ^^^
01:28:330 - make this a k instead, it fits better
01:32:445 - k; no need for a finish
01:36:045 - d; fill in the empty space
01:52:330 (3, 4, 1, 2, 1) - k k k d k
02:33:645 - D?

[Oni]

00:26:616 - there's no finish in the music; make it a regular d.
00:25:587 - k
00:27:816 (2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1) - k d k d k k d k or k d d k k k d d
00:35:359 (1, 2, 3, 4) - k kkd
00:39:645 (1, 1, 2, 3) - k kkd
01:21:473 - k
01:22:845 - k
01:32:445 - d

Call Me Back For A Recheck~ ♥

XinCrin

2,845 posts

Joined January 2012

Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-18T22:07:39+00:00

Elly-chan wrote:
Here's your mod from Project Thorough Modding! Sorry to say, but you're stuck with me as the MAT who's modding this instead.

[General]
Shouldn't the title be simply 'S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody', not 'DJ S3RL'? I'm not sure, but i've looked around and I don't seem to find it labeled as DJ S3RL much anywhere else. I'm sure just S3RL is fine. ((talked to -kevincela- about this, even if there is already a map ranked with DJ in front of S3RL)).The "DJ" is considered something that should always go before "S3RL" or something and "Sara" has to go in the title, because it is a voice that sings a duet with S3RL
[Easy]
Hitsound and Combo Mods
00:24:730 (4) - Add a New Combo here; throughout the map, at least during the kiai sections, you add NCs each two measures. It's been two measures and this follows the music better. Afterwards, remove the NC at 00:25:759 -. Done
00:54:902 (1) - Add a finish in here? It fits in with the BGM seeing that there is a shattering sound being made at this moment. This also means remove the finish at 00:55:587 -; it has no real purpose since there is no finish sound in the BGM. It just makes it sound bad. Done
01:03:816 (4) - Remove the whistle here to keep consistent with your hitsound pattern! You only are using whistles for this short section not on her vocal holds, but where her voice is prominently saying something. Done
01:41:530 (3) - New Combo to make your NC-Every-Two-Measures pattern consistent! Done
01:47:016 (3) - Same as above~! Done
02:08:273 (1) - Remove the New Combo here and add it at (3)! To keep your combo pattern consistent and to follow the music better. Done
02:41:530 (5) - New Combo since you would've been following the girl's vocals.
Done
00:33:987 (2) - No point to have a curve here imho; it doesn't really lead on a beat-circle curved transition, so i'd prefer it if you straightened it out. Nice idea , Done
01:09:302 (2) - Can you make this into a shorter repeat slider instead? It's a pretty long slider for this map when you can be following other tunes in the music. Try something like this. Done
SPOILER
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.Great idea , Done
[Normal]
Hitsound and Combo Mods
02:24:902 (5) - Why is this not a part of the New Combo afterwards? It follows the girl's vocals as well, so add one here and remove the one from the note directly afterwards.Done
Go to the Timing tab and then click 'Resnap All Notes'. There are around twenty unsnapped notes here, that being single beats or sliderends, which is unrankable. Done
00:40:502 (4) - Following the music, this is not an area where you would have put a slider before; you should replace this slider with a shorter one that ends at 00:40:845 -, and then add a note at 00:41:187 -. Since then you would have four hitcircles in a row and that may feel like much at a time for an easier difficulty, replace 00:41:873 (2, 3) - with another shot slider. Done
SPOILER
00:48:045 (3) - Why such a deep curve for such a short slider? Make it appear a bit longer by moving the slider curve point up a bit? It shouldn't effect the spacing too much. Done
SPOILER
00:56:102 (2) - Remove this note; throughout this normal difficulty, this is the only section/area where a beat is placed to follow the girl's vocals; the rest are coincidental and following solely the music's rhythm and beat. Plus, it doesn't flow all too well, honestly. Done
01:33:130 (5) - Could you move this to the right a bit more? It would give the feel of the note making a bit more curved transition, ( like a suddle angle transition)), rather then a quick one where (5) is now. Done
SPOILER
02:24:216 (4) - Imo, it'd flow a bit better if you made it as if (4) was a continueation of the (3) slider by moving it in the direct angle of where the (3) slider left off as opposed to being more near the top of the slider. Done
SPOILER
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs. Done
[Hard]
Hitsound and Combo Mods
00:55:587 (1) - Sincerely, there is no need for the finish. It just sounds bad, there's none in the BGM, and you've used it on the note previous; just remove it, it sounds much better.Done
01:29:702 (1) - Can you make this slider more like a curve rather than an arch? It's just plain out weird to play in this pattern imo Yeah! Done
01:37:245 (5) + 02:10:845 (2) - 'End of these sliders are hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the sliders so that you can see if they have a repeat or not, please! Fixed!
02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.Done
[Insane]
Hitsound and Combo Mods
00:41:702 (5) - Add a New Combo here and remove the next New Combo coming after it; It follows your combo pattern and emphasizes this part of the music more. Done
00:46:330 (1) - Make this part of the previous Combo and add the New Combo where two is currently. It goes with the downbeat, which imho, is much better. Done
01:34:673 (1) - Remove the New Combo here, add it back on 01:35:530 -, and then remove it from 01:36:045 -. It follows the music much better and keeps your combo pattern consistent. Done
02:03:987 (6) - Add a new combo here and then remove the New Combo on the next note- It emphasizes the music much better.Done
01:35:187 (2) - With the standard hitburst (as all maps looking for this issue should be modded with), it leaves barely any time to see if there is a repeat here or not; also called a hidden slider end. This is moderate and not severe, but I hiiiiighly suggest you change this.Change the position of one of the circles to fix the problem
[Muzu]
01:15:473 - d; better with a note here!
01:19:587 - d; fill in the empty space. better then a break
01:20:959 - d; ^^^
01:21:473 - k; no need for a finish
01:25:073 - d; better then having a break
01:26:445 - d; ^^^
01:28:330 - make this a k instead, it fits better
01:32:445 - k; no need for a finish
01:36:045 - d; fill in the empty space
01:52:330 (3, 4, 1, 2, 1) - k k k d k
02:33:645 - D?
All Done here

[Oni]
00:26:616 - there's no finish in the music; make it a regular d.
00:25:587 - k
00:27:816 (2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1) - k d k d k k d k or k d d k k k d d
00:35:359 (1, 2, 3, 4) - k kkd
00:39:645 (1, 1, 2, 3) - k kkd
01:21:473 - k
01:22:845 - k
01:32:445 - d
All Done here

Call Me Back For A Recheck~ ♥

Thank you Elly ! ♥

Elly-chan

969 posts

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Elly-chan 2013-02-18T23:55:41+00:00

Recheckie~! ♥

[Easy]

02:41:530 (1) - I think it would flow a bit better if you made it placed where a continuation of the slider would have occured; what I mean is like this!
SPOILER

[Hard]

02:11:016 (2) - 'End of this slider is hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the slider so that you can see if it have a repeat or not, please!

[Muzukashii]

00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k
00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d
00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k
00:42:216 (1) - d
00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk
00:46:759 (2) - remove
01:30:559 - d
01:31:930 - d
02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk
02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk

[Oni]

00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K
02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D

NO KDS PLEASE. Poke Me When Updated~! ♥

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-19T17:51:09+00:00

Elly-chan wrote:
Recheckie~! ♥

[Easy]
02:41:530 (1) - I think it would flow a bit better if you made it placed where a continuation of the slider would have occured; what I mean is like this!
SPOILER
DONE

[Hard]
02:11:016 (2) - 'End of this slider is hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the slider so that you can see if it have a repeat or not, please!
DONE

[Muzukashii]
00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k DONE
00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d DONE
00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k DONE
00:42:216 (1) - d DONE
00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk DONE
00:46:759 (2) - remove DONE
01:30:559 - d DONE
01:31:930 - d DONE
02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk DONE
02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk
DONE

[Oni]
00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K DONE
02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D
DONE

NO KDS PLEASE. Poke Me When Updated~! ♥

A lot of "Done" xD

Thank you Elly <3 , calling you again

Gero

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Gero 2013-02-20T23:35:15+00:00

Ranked Ranked plz !

Aurele

Global Moderator

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Aurele 2013-02-21T03:55:02+00:00

@Elly's Spoilerbox

~~dat breast~~

riffy

osu! Alumni

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Joined December 2010

riffy 2013-02-21T14:34:17+00:00

Maaaaan, I totally love TeA's and yous styles. You guys are awesome. Also, you know, I'm always glad to mod your maps.
NOW GO AND GET YOUR BUBBLE BABY

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-21T17:44:26+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Maaaaan, I totally love TeA's and yous styles. You guys are awesome. Also, you know, I'm always glad to mod your maps.
NOW GO AND GET YOUR BUBBLE BABY

Oh . . Thanks Bakari ! ♥

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and Gabe , so perver xD

Kin

Beatmap Nominator

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Kin 2013-02-21T18:05:12+00:00

please don't edit my taiko without ask me ...

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-21T18:27:36+00:00

Kin wrote:
please don't edit my taiko without ask me ...

Never showed up and had to do it , Sorry :c

Kin

Beatmap Nominator

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Kin 2013-02-21T19:16:26+00:00

Elly-chan wrote:
[Muzukashii]
00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k ok
00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d ok
00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k ok
00:42:216 (1) - d ok
00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk I won't make it
00:46:759 (2) - remove ^
01:30:559 - d ok
01:31:930 - d ok
02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk no change
02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk ok
[Oni]
00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K really strange for me no change
02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D ok fix'd

I make lil change on oni and muzu (mod + custom combo color changed + lil other change)

update please http://puu.sh/26ehJ
and I've got one taiko GD ranked name as Taikin oni, so can you rename my 2 taiko ?

thanks ~

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-22T17:56:39+00:00

Kin wrote:
Elly-chan wrote:
[Muzukashii]
00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k ok
00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d ok
00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k ok
00:42:216 (1) - d ok
00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk I won't make it
00:46:759 (2) - remove ^
01:30:559 - d ok
01:31:930 - d ok
02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk no change
02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk ok
[Oni]
00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K really strange for me no change
02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D ok fix'd
I make lil change on oni and muzu (mod + custom combo color changed + lil other change)

update please http://puu.sh/26ehJ
and I've got one taiko GD ranked name as Taikin oni, so can you rename my 2 taiko ?

thanks ~

Updated !

Aurele

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Aurele 2013-02-22T19:25:26+00:00

Log

13:04 XinCrin: Hey Gabe!
13:04 Gabe: Hi Xin!
13:04 XinCrin: Are you aceppting mod request ?
13:04 XinCrin: I've waited a long time in my map :/
13:04 Gabe: What map?
13:04 XinCrin: S3RL's map
13:04 *XinCrin is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/197737 DJ S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody]
13:04 Gabe: Elly wants to bubble it
13:05 XinCrin: But I think she is too busy
13:05 XinCrin: It's been 3 days
13:06 XinCrin: she did not return D:
13:11 Gabe: Okay
13:26 Gabe: Xin?
13:26 Gabe: Let's IRC
13:27 XinCrin: Sure
13:28 Gabe: In General, the names on the storyboard, you should make them at the same place, same size: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624934 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624935
13:28 XinCrin: Oh
13:29 XinCrin: Ok I'll fix it
13:29 Gabe: You can do it when we're done
13:29 Gabe: [Hard]
13:29 Gabe: 02:30:045 (1) - You should move this slider a bit since it's not making a great blanket with the previous circle
13:30 Gabe: 02:36:387 (4) - Same as this one, but move it one grid down
13:31 XinCrin: Done 
13:31 XinCrin: Done 
13:32 Gabe: Everything's good for Hard
13:33 XinCrin: :D
13:33 Gabe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/624945
13:33 Gabe: that hl
13:34 XinCrin: xD
13:38 Gabe: You have a custom hitcircle
13:38 Gabe: right?
13:38 XinCrin: Yes
13:39 Gabe: You should add a SliderBorder code
13:40 XinCrin: Could you help me in the color of sliderborder?
13:40 Gabe: sure
13:43 Gabe: ...
13:43 Gabe: the code seems to not working
13:44 XinCrin: D:
13:45 Gabe: I'm hungry
13:45 Gabe: brb
13:46 XinCrin: :/
14:01 Gabe: ok.
14:01 Gabe: SliderBorder : 180,180,180
14:01 Gabe: below every [Colours] tabs
14:01 Gabe: on the .osu
14:02 XinCrin: Ok
14:02 Gabe: When you're done, update
14:03 XinCrin: It is necessary to add the taiko diffs. ?
14:03 Gabe: no
14:04 XinCrin: Thank you :)
14:05 XinCrin: Updating . . 
14:06 XinCrin: Updated :3
14:14 Gabe: You should add an approachcircle
14:14 XinCrin: Oh shit
14:14 XinCrin: There was one in the folder
14:15 XinCrin: I'll get one, now I add
14:21 XinCrin: Done and Updated :3
14:21 Gabe: You're done? Alright!
14:21 XinCrin: Yeah

Tested both Taikos, looked at the whole mapset:

Bubbled~

XinCrin

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Topic Starter

XinCrin 2013-02-22T19:26:15+00:00

Thank you Gabe

Cloudchaser

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Cloudchaser 2013-02-22T19:28:03+00:00

GO GO GO FOR RANK <3

-kevincela-

Elite Mapper

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-kevincela- 2013-02-22T20:25:14+00:00

A little irc mod has been done via irc. Here's the log:

SPOILER

20:26 -kevincela-: okay,let's recheck :p
20:26 XinCrin: Thank you :D
20:27 -kevincela-: oh wow the new sb is awesome
20:27 XinCrin: Thank you :D
20:28 XinCrin: Done by me  :P
20:28 -kevincela-: on the easy diff
20:29 XinCrin: Ok ?
20:30 -kevincela-: 01:12:730 (2,3) - Huh,why the linear transition? Considering 01:12:730 (2) - 's oval flow,this totally breaks it :U Why not instead moving it at x:192 y:140? It seems a more reasonable point,as it continues perfectly its oval flow
20:30 -kevincela-: 01:12:730 (2,3) - Huh,why the linear transition? Considering 01:12:730 (2) - 's oval flow,this totally breaks it :U Why not instead moving it at x:192 y:140? It seems a more reasonable point,as it continues perfectly its oval flow
20:31 XinCrin: So ?
20:31 XinCrin: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/625034
20:32 -kevincela-: 01:31:587 (2) - What about adding a whistle here? It's a really little thing,but imho it fits quite well with the vocals being played there :P
20:32 -kevincela-: that setting seems good to me
20:32 -kevincela-: 01:45:644 (1) - I think you misplaced this New Combo
20:32 -kevincela-: as it doesen't really make sense there on its own
20:32 XinCrin: Totally agree !
20:34 XinCrin: What should I do?
20:34 XinCrin: Remove the NewCombo ?
20:34 -kevincela-: yep
20:34 -kevincela-: just do that
20:34 -kevincela-: 02:41:530 (1) - Same for this,I think it doesen't really need to stay there
20:35 XinCrin: Ok , Done
20:42 -kevincela-: 02:27:473 (1,2) - This a quite little thing,just fix if you want: What about reverting 02:28:502 (2) - 's curve,to make it continue 02:27:473 (1) - 's oval flow? Imho,it flows quite good there,and it continues pretty good the following pattern as well! Here's what I have done,see if you like it: http://puu.sh/26IW5 http://puu.sh/26IYp
20:42 -kevincela-: 02:27:473 (1,2) - This a quite little thing,just fix if you want: What about reverting 02:28:502 (2) - 's curve,to make it continue 02:27:473 (1) - 's oval flow? Imho,it flows quite good there,and it continues pretty good the following pattern as well! Here's what I have done,see if you like it: http://puu.sh/26IW5 http://puu.sh/26IYp
20:42 -kevincela-: 02:27:473 (1,2) - This a quite little thing,just fix if you want: What about reverting 02:28:502 (2) - 's curve,to make it continue 02:27:473 (1) - 's oval flow? Imho,it flows quite good there,and it continues pretty good the following pattern as well! Here's what I have done,see if you like it: http://puu.sh/26IW5 http://puu.sh/26IYp
20:44 XinCrin: Done
20:44 XinCrin: nice idea ^^
20:44 -kevincela-: thanks :p
20:49 -kevincela-: on the normal: 02:03:473 (1,2,3,4) - Well,I did not really like the hitobjects placement in this pattern... As of 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow,I expected 02:04:502 (2) - to go down,and I expected two curved sliders continuing the whole pattern instead of that linear-curve mix. What about using a pattern with these arc-shaped patterns to continue 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow there? http://puu.sh/26Jcl http://puu.sh/26Jdr
20:49 -kevincela-: on the normal: 02:03:473 (1,2,3,4) - Well,I did not really like the hitobjects placement in this pattern... As of 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow,I expected 02:04:502 (2) - to go down,and I expected two curved sliders continuing the whole pattern instead of that linear-curve mix. What about using a pattern with these arc-shaped patterns to continue 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow there? http://puu.sh/26Jcl http://puu.sh/26Jdr
20:49 -kevincela-: on the normal: 02:03:473 (1,2,3,4) - Well,I did not really like the hitobjects placement in this pattern... As of 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow,I expected 02:04:502 (2) - to go down,and I expected two curved sliders continuing the whole pattern instead of that linear-curve mix. What about using a pattern with these arc-shaped patterns to continue 02:03:473 (1) - 's oval flow there? http://puu.sh/26Jcl http://puu.sh/26Jdr
20:50 XinCrin: I like your idea
20:50 XinCrin: Done!
20:51 -kevincela-: on the Hard diff
20:52 -kevincela-: 00:36:730 (2) - What about adding a clap at the end? It is a little thing,though it keeps your 1/2 clap pattern,which fits really well there :p
20:52 XinCrin: Oh , Sure
20:52 XinCrin: Added
20:57 -kevincela-: on the Insane diff
20:58 XinCrin: Ok
20:59 -kevincela-: 02:04:502 (1) - You should totally remove this new combo,it doesen't have really much sense both rhytmically and pattern wise,and it makes 02:03:987 (1) - a lonely combo,which isn't really needed
20:59 -kevincela-: 02:04:502 (1) - You should totally remove this new combo,it doesen't have really much sense both rhytmically and pattern wise,and it makes 02:03:987 (1) - a lonely combo,which isn't really needed
20:59 XinCrin: Ok , Removed
21:04 -kevincela-: 02:18:216 (3,4,5) - I get the intent on this pattern,but this doesen't really flow that good as it should... 02:18:216 (3) - kinda breaks 02:17:702 (2) - 's oval flow, so the whole pattern is not really smooth to play. I have in mind another type of symmetric pattern which could flow really good: Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
21:04 -kevincela-: 02:18:216 (3,4,5) - I get the intent on this pattern,but this doesen't really flow that good as it should... 02:18:216 (3) - kinda breaks 02:17:702 (2) - 's oval flow, so the whole pattern is not really smooth to play. I have in mind another type of symmetric pattern which could flow really good: Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
21:04 -kevincela-: 02:18:216 (3,4,5) - I get the intent on this pattern,but this doesen't really flow that good as it should... 02:18:216 (3) - kinda breaks 02:17:702 (2) - 's oval flow, so the whole pattern is not really smooth to play. I have in mind another type of symmetric pattern which could flow really good: Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
21:04 -kevincela-: wait,posting the links
21:05 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/26JHi
21:05 -kevincela-: http://puu.sh/26JIi
21:07 XinCrin: I like
21:07 XinCrin: Done!
21:11 -kevincela-: ok
21:11 -kevincela-: update
21:11 -kevincela-: so that I can recheck
21:11 XinCrin: Done
21:11 XinCrin: Updatedª
21:11 -kevincela-: oh,already? you're fast haha
21:11 XinCrin: ª
21:11 XinCrin: yeah xD