Nemis wrote:

[Hard]
00:25:920 (6) - Pon un beat aquì y edita 00:25:750 (5) - No quiero hacer streams ya que la cancion no lo requieres
00:30:378 (4) - Pon un beat aquì y edita 00:30:207 (3) - ^
00:48:207 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - No es muy divertito :c Si no lo modificas mueve todos los beats 1 square por la derecha
01:38:778 (1) - Rendelo mas adherente con 01:39:293 (2) - Hecho
01:39:293 (2) - Rendelo mas adherente con 01:39:807 (3) - ^
01:46:150 (4) - Perfecciona esta forma Listo
02:05:178 (4,1,2,3,4) - No es muy divertito, si no lo modificas mueve este beat 02:05:693 (3) - 1 square abajo
02:16:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - muy dificil respecto de los otros patterns D:
02:19:407 (4) - Ponly horizontal No , me gusta en vertical , la siento mas divertida
02:28:150 (3) - Mejora esta forma Listo
02:30:035 (1) - 2 squares por la izquierda
02:30:550 (2,3) - Rende estos sliders adherentes con 02:30:035 (1) - Hecho
02:33:464 (5,1) - Distancia? No , me gusto este jump
02:36:378 (4) - 2 squares por la derecha
02:43:235 (1) - Terminalo en 02:44:436 (2) - Hecho

[Normal]
00:41:521 (1,3) - Simetría Hecho
00:55:578 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:27:807 (1) - Rendelo mas adherente con 01:28:835 (2,3) - Hecho
01:38:778 (1) - 1 square por la izquierda grid supongo , Hecho xD
02:41:864 (1) - - Terminalo en 02:44:436 (2) - No , sigo un ritmo constante en toda la diff , buena sugerencia pero no

[Easy]
01:09:293 (2) - Rendelo adherente con 01:08:607 (1) - Hecho
02:08:950 (3,4) - Simetria (y distancialos mas!) Hecho
02:41:864 (1) - - Terminalo en 02:44:436 (2) - Hecho

Oh god why did I wrote in my queue that I can mod in spanish?!? First and last time. T_T

Nice map, good luck!

SilverJetter wrote:

Greetings from my queue ^^

General: Like the song und the bg ^^
02:22:664 (1) - there is a kiai time well placed (end 02:44:264 ) Fixed

Easy:

00:51:121 (4) - i think the slider starts too early maybe its better at 00:51:207 No , sounds bad with the music
02:05:521 (4) - this starts a bit too late better 02:05:350 in my opinion ^
02:09:978 (4) - you can place a circle there for a better flow I prefer the slider
02:15:464 (4) - this ^ ^

Normal:
Looks good ^^

Hard:
Looks good too ^^

Sorry if i made mistakes...im still beginner in modding (:

Andrea wrote:

~Normal~

02:32:264 (5) - Remove the custom clap from the 2nd tick. Done

~Hard~

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick at least. Done

Awesome job you did there.

• - 01:36:550 (4,5) - I really like this type of patterns, but my suggestion is moving the slider (4) more close from (5), like this

inverness wrote:

Oh. And you reminded me so much to Sapphireghost, your mapping style... and I like it so

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hola, perdon por la demora, bueno estas a punto de obtener una bubbled asi que hare el mod en ingles para que lo puedan entender

Hard

• - 01:36:550 (4,5) - I really like this type of patterns, but my suggestion is moving the slider (4) more close from (5), like this

Done , play better this pattern

That's all, good luck Xin

Kokatsu wrote:

Taiko Muzukashii

Reduce HP and OD by 1. It's a Muzukashii. Fix'd
Increase overall vol. to 75% (it's picky, deal with it :p ) Fix'd

01:27:807 (1,2,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1) - map it the same way as you did with the part b4, it fits really well and what you mapped here is..random. And it doesn't fit. it's feet the keyboard sound ... but okay
01:57:121 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,1) - this sounds really awkward, due to the fact that it doesn't amphesize the downbeats and there is nothing similar in the music itself. To avoid this weirdo stuff, just move all these notes 1/2 beat back, make the last note a small don and add a new big don at 01:59:350. No change, it's again fit the keyboard sound
02:11:178 (2,1,2,3,1) - ddd k d fits better. Fix'd
02:18:636 (2) - remove. Fix'd
02:24:378 (4) - remove. Fix'd
02:37:750 (2) - kat? Fix'd
02:38:950 (3,1) - (3) kat and (1) don? Fix'd

Taiko Oni

Same vol. as mentioned in Muzu-mod.
Fix'd
Argh, urgh, uuuu. q__q

00:25:921 (1) - kat no change i prefer k d d here
00:27:293 (2,1) - reverse hitsounding Fix'd
00:29:178 (1) - delete Fix'd
00:37:750 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - for a nice flow, use kkd ddk Fix'd
00:57:121 (1) - don Fix'd
00:59:693 (1,2,3) - D K D or D K K? changed to D K K
01:01:236 (1,1) - reverse hitsounding no change it fit the melody, and the melody change a bit later
01:03:293 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:07:064 (2,3,1,1,1) - kkddd fits better k deleted
01:09:807 (1) - kat? it sound a bit strange for me (just after this dk)
01:10:150 (3,4,1,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,1) - you could use ddkkk d ddkkd here. Fix'd
01:15:464 - I miss a spinner here. add'd
01:48:036 (1,2,1,2,1) - ddkdd fits better IMO true, fix'd
02:27:121 - you could add a kat here Fix'd
02:29:865 (2) - don no change, it sound too weard before ddd ddk

That's it, good luck with rank~

Kokatsu wrote:

B4 you get this bubbled, here I come! \:D/

Request taken from Loctav's and p3n's slavery modding queue!

Storyboard

SB\epilepsy.png should be displayed in the centre of the map. Added
SB\2.png has a typo: "Through" should not be capitalized. Done
01:14:093 - 01:15:893 I noticed that awesome SB-stuff only when in the design tab, because all diffs cover it by a spinner, which is quiet sad. Maybe move it to another place or remove it, since it's not visible while playing?
01:29:350 - SB\3.png is not visible, but scripted. Fixed
01:34:836 - SB\4.png is not visible, but scripted. Fixed
02:00:721 - where is the circle in the lower left corner? :< I miss it. Ok , Added
02:24:550 - The lyrics are here again, you can use SB\1-4 again. Added

Nice and simple storyboard.

Easy

01:09:293 (2) - remove the first red sliderpoint to create a neat blanket without that sharp edge. Done , better blanket now

Somewhat like this

01:59:521 - you could add a breaktime here, since unmapped draintimes in Easy's are somewhat unfitting. I can't add the break time
02:41:864 (1) - vol. from 70% down to 5% in one timingsection? In the middle of the spinner? I would recommend to add multiple timingsections, each 1/1 or 1/2 after each other and lower vol. by ~10% each line (so you get 70/60/50 and so on). Halfway through the song spinner low volume, so I think the spinner is the music

Normal

02:32:264 (5) - The clap on the slidertick is not on your regular beat (I don't know wether this is intentionally or not), if not, swap hitsounding from both sliderticks. It was intentional, because the voice in the song says a "feel feel the melody" double therefore feel that this sounds good
02:41:864 (1) - same as easy. Same

Hard

Hitsounding in first kiai seems a bit mixed up to me. Try the following changes and then decide what you like more:
00:33:978 (3) - you miss a clap on the sliderend.
00:35:522 (3) - clap?
00:37:578 (4) - remove clap from ending?
00:50:607 (4) - clap
00:51:293 (3,4) - remove clap from (3)'s ending, add clap on (4)'s ending.
00:52:664 (4,2) - remove clap from (4)'s ending, add clap on (2).

I prefer these :

If you didn't change the previous hitsounding, ignore the following, if you accepted my changes, also adapt these things:
02:01:750 (3) - clap on sliderend.
02:03:293 (5) - clap
02:04:493 (3) - clap on reverse.
02:05:864 (4) - clap on sliderend.
02:12:893 (4) - clap
02:17:007 (5) - clap
02:19:750 (5) - clap on sliderstart.
02:21:121 (2) - clap

All Claps Added

02:43:235 (1) - there should be a note here (with finish), so add a note and drag the spinner 1/4 or 1/2 later. Don't forget to move the timingsection to silence the spinner! Preferred to eliminate some notes have the same consistency with all the diffs.

That's it, good luck with rank~

1. I got Offset 40 (+4), only change it if you agree with that.

1. 00:23:350 (2,3) - I will change the rhythm like this since it's fit with lyrics. "Sound" this vocal appears at 00:23:864 - so it's better to place a slider there
   
2. 00:50:093 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is kinda strange imo. You always place the slider at downbeat as I see at the previous same part, so change like this maybe?
   
3. 01:31:578 (2) - I would remove this whistle for consistent with 01:27:807 (1,2) - 's ends, and it sounds awful to me
4. 01:45:636 (2) - nazi. Move to x:324, y:216 (left 1 gird) to make the blanket nicer (:
5. 02:02:778 (3,1,2,3) - Change rhythm like this is better imo ;_; Slider end at downbeat here makes the downbeat has less beatable D:
   

1. HP-1 for AR5 & CS4? That's a bit hard lol
2. 00:40:493 (4) - It sounds really strange for that 2/1 slider end at downbeat. I'd suggest you to make a 1/1 slider and a not to instead that. It would be fit with music :3
   
3. 00:43:921 (1,2) - I dislike the flow here, the slider goes down but the note at up. Move (2) to x:160, y:312 to make better flow
4. 00:55:578 (1) - I have no idea why here's finish. Consider to remove it or just add finish at Easy diff here to make consistent~
5. 01:30:550 (2,3) - (begin) whistle here please. Nothing here sounds really empty D:
6. 02:17:178 (1) - (begin) Finish to keep consistent with Hard diff? And it sounds really nice

1. 02:12:207 (2,3) - Catch you!
   
   
   This diff need some nazi change to make some slider more curve/better blanket. Otherwise, awesome!

1. 01:09:293 (2) - Move the 3rd Sliderpoint 2 Grids to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 01:12:721 (2) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:56|y:264 [Grid lvl: 4]
3. 01:30:550 (1) - Move the last Sliderpoint 1 grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
4. 01:34:664 (3) - Move this object 1 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4]
5. 01:36:035 (1) - Move the last Sliderpoint 1 grid up [Grid lvl: 4]
6. 01:38:778 (1,2) - This pattern aren't ''Perfect'' Mirrored.. Or whatever.. xD / Erase (2), Move the Object ''(1)'' 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4] and make a copy-paste with Ctrl+H for remake the Object ''(2)'' And that is all.. xD
7. 01:45:636 (2) - Move this object 1 Grid to the left [Grid lvl: 4]
8. 01:47:007 (3,4,5) - If you make the last change.. Move these objects 1 Grid down.. [Grid lvl: 4]
9. 02:40:493 (3) - Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:124|y:224 [Grid lvl: 4] and Move the last Sliderpoint to x:196|y:200 [Grid lvl: 4]

1. 00:31:578 (6) - Move this Object 1 grid down [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 01:49:750 (5) - Move this Object 1 grid to the right [Grid lvl: 4]
3. 02:05:521 (4) - Move this Object 2 grids to the left [Grid lvl: 4]

1. 00:44:950 (3) - I think you missed a Clap in the end of this Slider..
2. 00:47:693 (4) - Move this Slider to x:312|y:276 [Grid lvl: 4], After.. Move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:380|y:240 [Grid lvl: 4] And Move the last Sliderpoint to x:452|y:272 [Grid lvl: 4]
3. 02:32:264 (3) - Erase the 3rd Sliderpoint and move the 2nd Sliderpoint to x:80|y:272 [Grid lvl: 4]
4. 02:36:378 (4) - Move this Object 1 grid down [Grid lvl: 4]

1. I really think is better reduce the HP and OD by 1..
2. 00:36:550 (1,2,3,1) - Change this to ''k d k d''
3. 00:39:293 (1) - d
4. 00:39:807 (1) - d
5. 00:43:064 (2) - d
6. 01:21:807 (3,4,5,1) - Change this to ''k d k d''
7. 01:49:750 (4) - D

1. I really think is better reduce the HP and OD by 1..
2. 00:23:693 (2) - Erase this note
3. 01:40:321 (1,1,1) - Change this to ''d k d''

180,136,28836,2,0,P|215:187|263:219,2,120

312,48,63121,6,0,P|288:84|256:104|256:104|224:88|196:48,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

DaxMasterix wrote:

Kin's Taiko Muzukashii:

1. I really think is better reduce the HP and OD by 1.. it's muzu not futsuu
2. 00:36:550 (1,2,3,1) - Change this to ''k d k d''No change, d d d k is done on purpose, because d k d k will make the muzu harder
3. 00:39:293 (1) - d no change it's feet the melody
4. 00:39:807 (1) - d sound better so fix'd
5. 00:43:064 (2) - d I don't think k d feet here
6. 01:21:807 (3,4,5,1) - Change this to ''k d k d'' same reason as above
7. 01:49:750 (4) - D Okay fix'd

Kin's Taiko Oni:

1. I really think is better reduce the HP and OD by 1.. no change it's oni not muzu
2. 00:23:693 (2) - Erase this note no change, if I delete this note, the next don don't have any sense
3. 01:40:321 (1,1,1) - Change this to ''d k d'' k d k feet the melody, no change

OKAY- The map in general is good.. Good luck in the rank! ewe

Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,36,,1
 S,0,36,,0.625
 F,0,163236,164264,1,0

1. Pulse.jpg and Pulse2.jpg. Why don't you just use the smallest one and use it for all pulses across the map?
2. Black1.jpg are you copying this sprite from another storyboard? I'll optimize this sprite so you don't need to scale it (which affects SB load)
   
   1. First, download the optimized sprite here
   2. Replace this line on Black1.jpg's attributes on .osu:
      Find this

       M,0,36,,401,179
       S,0,36,,1.276194

      and replace both of them with this
      

       S,0,36,,0.625

   3. Some of the Scale transformations needs to be readjusted.
3. circle.png and circle2.png. Why not using one monochromatic sprite and then colorized on the storyboard?

1. Hmmm... Avoid using 1 as Fade value on pulses, 1 is too strong and too disturbing. Try at least 0.6 or 0.4

1. 00:54:893 - 01:16:836 - No lyrics? Only spriting some lyrics of the song might considered as "unfinished" storyboard. If you want to add lyrics, add the lyrics completely or don't use lyrics at all.

Remember, storyboard is always available for more creativity and innovations to be added on it. Don't hesitate to make a very good storyboards, don't afraid of using complicated transformations, and don't feel satisfied with your works, always wants more on it and always works harder on it. That way, you can make good storyboards (;

inverness wrote:

Storyboard assistance request from our queue ヽ( ・∀・)ﾉ

Guide

Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Regarding new background placement algorithm, it is now impossible to make storyboard that overlays the actual background. To solve this, I recommend you bypass this algorithm by manually add the background as a storyboard sprite

Put this code on .osu below the Background section Thanks , Done

Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
 F,0,36,,1
 S,0,36,,0.625
 F,0,163236,164264,1,0

Sprites Optimization
Optimizations for storyboard sprite filesize, dimensions, and property

1. Pulse.jpg and Pulse2.jpg. Why don't you just use the smallest one and use it for all pulses across the map?
2. Black1.jpg are you copying this sprite from another storyboard? I'll optimize this sprite so you don't need to scale it (which affects SB load)
   
   1. First, download the optimized sprite here
   2. Replace this line on Black1.jpg's attributes on .osu:
      Find this

       M,0,36,,401,179
       S,0,36,,1.276194

      and replace both of them with this
      

       S,0,36,,0.625

   3. Some of the Scale transformations needs to be readjusted.
3. circle.png and circle2.png. Why not using one monochromatic sprite and then colorized on the storyboard?

Technical Optimization
Optimizations for storyboard commands, scripts, and SB Load

1. Hmmm... Avoid using 1 as Fade value on pulses, 1 is too strong and too disturbing. Try at least 0.6 or 0.4

Optional Optimization
Optimization for "missing" or misplaced storyboard contents and other design/visual things

1. 00:54:893 - 01:16:836 - No lyrics? Only spriting some lyrics of the song might considered as "unfinished" storyboard. If you want to add lyrics, add the lyrics completely or don't use lyrics at all.

Only use lyrics in the sections that the player is not playing

If you find out that some of the mods here are too hard to apply, feel free to ask me to apply it for you, I'll give the codes for it (:

Remember, storyboard is always available for more creativity and innovations to be added on it. Don't hesitate to make a very good storyboards, don't afraid of using complicated transformations, and don't feel satisfied with your works, always wants more on it and always works harder on it. That way, you can make good storyboards (;

Thanks for the codes and images, I did everything except the lyrics.Thanks

ztrot wrote:

[Timing]
+8 to the offset make sure to re-snap your green sections! Fixed the offset and the green sections

[Taiko]
Seeing as the BG function is not going to be supported anymore I suggest you find something else to use for the background.BGTaiko corrected with a SB, you can check it if you wish

also I personally feel the muku is a bit to tough feels more like a 6 or 7 star oni get a taiko expert on that tho. In my opinion the muzu diff is not very difficult, I'm a newbie in taiko and I can pass that diff. smooth

[Standard mapset]
nothing to really point out sounds good and everything is spaced out really nicely SB is okay as well good job!

1. fine

1. 00:35:007 (1) - remove NC and 00:35:693 (3) - add NC. It is suggested the appearance to this. I prefer appearances to the number of combos
2. 00:37:836 - green line. Sudden volume change in the kiai middle o.o; I do not understand a meaning to lower the volume from here 　
   00:43:921~ When you want to emphasize from here, Volume increase from here(70⇒80%) or 00:33:036 - add green line. and volume 60% use here~00:43:921. is better imo~
3. 00:53:178 (2) - This is not problem rhythm. just suggestion: remove note here. http://puu.sh/1EhlW This improves the appearance and uniformity
4. 00:54:893 (1) - remove finish to end of the slider. This softfinish felt that it was not fit at first play. >_<; and 00:55:578~01:03:807 During this time, you have slightly random softfinish. If you want to really use it, I suggest it about these.
   ・00:57:636 (5) - add finish to end of the slider. The point that end is emphasized in the same way.
   ・01:02:436 (3,1) - this too ^ and i think also similar rhythm is most suitable for here like: http://puu.sh/1EhDX ( You do not want to break the form? In that case, 01:04:493 (1) - i do not mind even whistle here~ )
5. 01:14:093 (1) - 01:15:464~ I feel the sound is too large for the song. so i suggest that lower the volume from here ( about 30% )
6. 01:37:064 (2) - remove whistle. i think continuous whistle sounds is not good here @_@;
7. 01:37:407 (3) - form blanket nazi. try like this? http://puu.sh/1EiT8
   
   SPOILER

   220,108,96035,6,0,P|160:56|84:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   60,148,97064,1,2,0:0:0
   140,136,97407,1,2,0:0:0

8. 02:04:064 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out and with 02:04:236
9. 02:11:350 (1) - remove NC and 02:12:378 (2) - add NC and 02:13:064 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 00:43:578 (5) - ) If you think that this is a too long combo, I suggest a change of the rhythm http://puu.sh/1Ej8C
10. 02:16:836 (1) - add finish to end of the slider? ( same as 00:49:407 (1) -
11. 02:30:550 (4) - nazi. grid move to x108,y80
12. 02:33:636 (1) - add finish to start of the slider?

1. 00:37:844 - green line. same as Easy diff.
2. 00:55:586 (1) - remove finish to start of the slider. reason same as Easy diff 00:54:893 (1)~. There is only the beginning of the vocal, 00:54:901 - places to emphasize are enough only here and ↓
   ・01:04:158 (2) - add finish to end of the slider. constant finish
3. 01:14:101 (1) - same as Easy diff.
4. 01:37:072 (4) - Rhythm a little lonely for vocal so I suggest rhythm same as 01:32:786 (4,5). http://puu.sh/1EwI2 do not have sense of incongruity by putting such a rhythm that is not used constantly, and rhythm balance improves~
   
   
   02:22:672~02:33:301 I thought that
   This rhythm does not have any problem、but I cannot recommend that you use the rhythm unlike such others in last part for Normal diff. >_<
   If you use many such a rhythm, It should be used with more uniformity.
   this is that I thought, you do not need to change. Please refer to the future~

1. 00:55:586 (1) - same as Easy,Normal diff.
   ・00:57:643 (1) - add finish to end of the slider
   ・01:04:501 (4) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider
2. 01:14:101 (1) - same as Easy.
   
   others fine~

• If you change them, plz move elements +8 at first

1. SB\2.png Balance seems to be a little bad i think. It is the edge of screen and faster-moving than SB\1png.
   I suggest that slow its movement and approach to the middle. for ex: ↓
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\2.png",320,240
   M,0,18215,18386,-297,455,305,458
   S,0,18386,,0.6792575
   M,0,18386,20786,305,458,350,458 ⇒ M,0,18386,20786,305,458,320,458
   M,0,20786,20958,350,458,939,459 ⇒ M,0,20786,20958,320,458,939,459
   F,0,20958,21129,1,0
   M,0,83872,84215,932,426,312,429 ⇒M,0,83872,84215,932,426,345,429
   F,0,83872,84215,1
   M,0,84215,86444,312,429,298,429 ⇒M,0,84215,86444,345,429,300,429
   F,0,84215,86444,1
   M,0,86444,86786,298,429,-311,427
   F,0,86444,86786,1
   M,0,149872,150044,939,459,334,460
   M,0,150044,152444,334,460,307,457
   M,0,152444,152615,307,457,-297,457
2. SB/3.png ^ same
   and 02:35:358~ i think disappear faster than others.
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\3.png",320,240
   F,0,23701,,1
   S,0,23701,,0.616891
   M,0,23701,23872,-256,65,281,64
   M,0,23872,26444,281,64,359,68
   M,0,26444,26615,359,68,892,70
   F,0,26615,26786,1,0
   F,0,89358,,1
   M,0,89358,89701,892,70,291,74 ⇒M,0,89358,89701,892,70,323,70
   M,0,89701,92272,291,74,259,70 ⇒M,0,89701,92272,323,70,300,70
   M,0,92272,92615,259,70,-265,73 ⇒M,0,92272,92615,300,70,-265,73
   F,0,92615,92786,1,0
   F,0,155358,,1
   M,0,155358,155529,-264,63,313,65
   M,0,155529,157586,313,65,344,68 ⇒ M,0,155529,157929,313,65,344,68
   M,0,157586,157758,344,68,906,65 ⇒ M,0,157929,158101,344,68,906,65
3. SB\layer 02:11:701 - I suggest a method same as 1stkiai (00:43:929) because SB\circle stops for an instant. This is suggestion to improve a looks
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
   F,0,32958,33815,1,0
   M,0,32958,121065,320,240,318,240
   F,0,43415,43758,0,1
   F,0,43758,43929,1
   F,0,43929,44786,1,0
   F,0,54558,54901,0,1
   F,0,54901,55244,1
   F,0,55244,55586,1,0
   F,0,109415,109758,0.008771956,1
   F,0,109758,109929,1
   F,0,109929,110615,1,0.008771956
   F,0,120729,121586,1,0.01310679
   F,0,131358,131701,0,1 ⇒ F,0,131186,131529,0,1
   F,0,131701,,1 ⇒remove
   F,0,131701,131872,1 ⇒F,0,131529,131701,1
   F,0,131872,132558,1,0 ⇒F,0,131701,132558,1,0
   F,0,141301,,1
   F,0,141301,142672,1
   F,0,142672,,1
   F,0,142672,,1
   F,0,142672,144044,1,0
   R,0,143015,,0
   F,0,153644,154672,1,0
   F,0,163244,164272,1,0.006809354
4. SB\pulse.jpg This is only expanded the pulse2.jpg? if so unnecessary file. Because it can substitute this only in pluse2.jpg
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse2.jpg",320,240
   L,32958,8
   F,1,0,1371,0.8,0
   L,43929,14
   F,1,0,685,0.8,0
   L,120729,60
   F,1,0,343,0.8,0
   S,1,0,343,1,1.06
   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse.jpg",320,240
   L,120729,60
   F,1,0,343,0.8,0
   S,1,0,343,0.8,0.85 ⇒remove and also pulse.jpg file

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ XinCrin

sorry, for late

here my mod~ ( already Star icon and gets the many mods, so just a little suggestion @_@

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 00:35:007 (1) - remove NC and 00:35:693 (3) - add NC. It is suggested the appearance to this. I prefer appearances to the number of combos I agree , Done
2. 00:37:836 - green line. Sudden volume change in the kiai middle o.o; I do not understand a meaning to lower the volume from here Sorry , Fixed
3. 00:43:921~ When you want to emphasize from here, Volume increase from here(70⇒80%) or 00:33:036 - add green line. and volume 60% use here~00:43:921. is better imo~ I'd rather have the same volume in the kiai time
4. 00:53:178 (2) - This is not problem rhythm. just suggestion: remove note here. http://puu.sh/1EhlW This improves the appearance and uniformity I like , Done
5. 00:54:893 (1) - remove finish to end of the slider. This softfinish felt that it was not fit at first play. >_<; and 00:55:578~01:03:807 During this time, you have slightly random softfinish. If you want to really use it, I suggest it about these. Fixed
   ・00:57:636 (5) - add finish to end of the slider. The point that end is emphasized in the same way. Okay , Done
   ・01:02:436 (3,1) - this too ^ and i think also similar rhythm is most suitable for here like: http://puu.sh/1EhDX ( You do not want to break the form? In that case, 01:04:493 (1) - i do not mind even whistle here~ ) Very nice , Done
6. 01:14:093 (1) - 01:15:464~ I feel the sound is too large for the song. so i suggest that lower the volume from here ( about 30% ) Fixed
7. 01:37:064 (2) - remove whistle. i think continuous whistle sounds is not good here @_@; Fixed
8. 01:37:407 (3) - form blanket nazi. try like this? http://puu.sh/1EiT8 Done , Thanks for the code
   
   SPOILER

   220,108,96035,6,0,P|160:56|84:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   60,148,97064,1,2,0:0:0
   140,136,97407,1,2,0:0:0

9. 02:04:064 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out and with 02:04:236 Fixed
10. 02:11:350 (1) - remove NC and 02:12:378 (2) - add NC and 02:13:064 (1) - remove NC. ( same as 00:43:578 (5) - ) If you think that this is a too long combo, I suggest a change of the rhythm http://puu.sh/1Ej8C Fixed and I stay with my rhythm
11. 02:16:836 (1) - add finish to end of the slider? ( same as 00:49:407 (1) - The song not required finish here because the volume is constant
12. 02:30:550 (4) - nazi. grid move to x108,y80 Moved
13. 02:33:636 (1) - add finish to start of the slider?

Ok , follow the SB

[Normal]

1. 00:37:844 - green line. same as Easy diff. Fixed
2. 00:55:586 (1) - remove finish to start of the slider. reason same as Easy diff 00:54:893 (1)~. There is only the beginning of the vocal, 00:54:901 - places to emphasize are enough only here and ↓ Same in easy
   ・01:04:158 (2) - add finish to end of the slider. constant finish Done
3. 01:14:101 (1) - same as Easy diff. Same
4. 01:37:072 (4) - Rhythm a little lonely for vocal so I suggest rhythm same as 01:32:786 (4,5). http://puu.sh/1EwI2 do not have sense of incongruity by putting such a rhythm that is not used constantly, and rhythm balance improves~ I understand , Done
   
   
   02:22:672~02:33:301 I thought that
   This rhythm does not have any problem、but I cannot recommend that you use the rhythm unlike such others in last part for Normal diff. >_<
   If you use many such a rhythm, It should be used with more uniformity.
   this is that I thought, you do not need to change. Please refer to the future~

I wanted to vary slightly but Thanks

[Hard]

1. 00:55:586 (1) - same as Easy,Normal diff. Same , i change patterns a little in this section
   ・00:57:643 (1) - add finish to end of the slider
   ・01:04:501 (4) - add finish instead to whistle to start of the slider Ok
2. 01:14:101 (1) - same as Easy. Fixed
   
   others fine~

[SB]

• If you change them, plz move elements +8 at first Done

1. SB\2.png Balance seems to be a little bad i think. It is the edge of screen and faster-moving than SB\1png.
   I suggest that slow its movement and approach to the middle. for ex: ↓
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\2.png",320,240
   M,0,18215,18386,-297,455,305,458
   S,0,18386,,0.6792575
   M,0,18386,20786,305,458,350,458 ⇒ M,0,18386,20786,305,458,320,458
   M,0,20786,20958,350,458,939,459 ⇒ M,0,20786,20958,320,458,939,459
   F,0,20958,21129,1,0
   M,0,83872,84215,932,426,312,429 ⇒M,0,83872,84215,932,426,345,429
   F,0,83872,84215,1
   M,0,84215,86444,312,429,298,429 ⇒M,0,84215,86444,345,429,300,429
   F,0,84215,86444,1
   M,0,86444,86786,298,429,-311,427
   F,0,86444,86786,1
   M,0,149872,150044,939,459,334,460
   M,0,150044,152444,334,460,307,457
   M,0,152444,152615,307,457,-297,457
2. SB/3.png ^ same
   and 02:35:358~ i think disappear faster than others. Done
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\3.png",320,240
   F,0,23701,,1
   S,0,23701,,0.616891
   M,0,23701,23872,-256,65,281,64
   M,0,23872,26444,281,64,359,68
   M,0,26444,26615,359,68,892,70
   F,0,26615,26786,1,0
   F,0,89358,,1
   M,0,89358,89701,892,70,291,74 ⇒M,0,89358,89701,892,70,323,70
   M,0,89701,92272,291,74,259,70 ⇒M,0,89701,92272,323,70,300,70
   M,0,92272,92615,259,70,-265,73 ⇒M,0,92272,92615,300,70,-265,73
   F,0,92615,92786,1,0
   F,0,155358,,1
   M,0,155358,155529,-264,63,313,65
   M,0,155529,157586,313,65,344,68 ⇒ M,0,155529,157929,313,65,344,68
   M,0,157586,157758,344,68,906,65 ⇒ M,0,157929,158101,344,68,906,65
3. SB\layer 02:11:701 - I suggest a method same as 1stkiai (00:43:929) because SB\circle stops for an instant. This is suggestion to improve a looks Done
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
   F,0,32958,33815,1,0
   M,0,32958,121065,320,240,318,240
   F,0,43415,43758,0,1
   F,0,43758,43929,1
   F,0,43929,44786,1,0
   F,0,54558,54901,0,1
   F,0,54901,55244,1
   F,0,55244,55586,1,0
   F,0,109415,109758,0.008771956,1
   F,0,109758,109929,1
   F,0,109929,110615,1,0.008771956
   F,0,120729,121586,1,0.01310679
   F,0,131358,131701,0,1 ⇒ F,0,131186,131529,0,1
   F,0,131701,,1 ⇒remove
   F,0,131701,131872,1 ⇒F,0,131529,131701,1
   F,0,131872,132558,1,0 ⇒F,0,131701,132558,1,0
   F,0,141301,,1
   F,0,141301,142672,1
   F,0,142672,,1
   F,0,142672,,1
   F,0,142672,144044,1,0
   R,0,143015,,0
   F,0,153644,154672,1,0
   F,0,163244,164272,1,0.006809354
4. SB\pulse.jpg This is only expanded the pulse2.jpg? if so unnecessary file. Because it can substitute this only in pluse2.jpg Deleted the image and code
   
   SPOILER

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse2.jpg",320,240
   L,32958,8
   F,1,0,1371,0.8,0
   L,43929,14
   F,1,0,685,0.8,0
   L,120729,60
   F,1,0,343,0.8,0
   S,1,0,343,1,1.06
   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse.jpg",320,240
   L,120729,60
   F,1,0,343,0.8,0
   S,1,0,343,0.8,0.85 ⇒remove and also pulse.jpg file

map is good :3 star☆~

Good luck~

Thanks a lot kosiga , you mod I was helpful and thanks for mod my SB

• 
  00:27:815 (2) Imo, it would sound better if it was moved to the next red tick at 00:27:986
  00:41:186 (1) I think it would be better if you had a 2 beat slider here to sound like 00:39:815 (4) and 00:42:558 (4)
  02:23:358 (2) Imo, it would feel better if there was a 1 beat slider with a circle a beat later instead of a 2 beat slider.

• 
  00:39:815 (3,4) Imo, it might sound better if it was (2 beat slider-1 beat slider) instead of (1 beat slider-2 beat slider)

• 
  00:27:815 (1) I don't think this circle is really necessary.
  02:05:015 This feels missing without a circle imo.
  02:26:786 (4,5) I think it would be better if you merged these into one slider.

Lally wrote:

star o3o/

BounceBabe wrote:

SPOILER

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,77043,86615
2,109958,116786
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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  F,1,0,1371,0.8,0
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\circle.png",320,240
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Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\circle.png",320,240
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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//Background Colour Transformations
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Made some SB Code fixes, use them if you want

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Easy]
02:17:872 (4) - New combo Done
02:18:558 (1) - Remove new combo Done


[Normal]
01:00:044 (4) - Add clap? No because i use three whistles in this section in all diffs.


That's all I got, good luck!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, Mod from me! First off, *RAVE RAVE RAVE* *cough*, ok im done.

General

Right timing:
1. Offset: 45ms BPM: 175,00 Done
I suggest to add something else to the circle element on the SB, its a bit, empty and alone
00:54:729 - There still is this "back" jump on the circle Fixed
00:32:959 - Should kiai start here instead of here 00:37:673 - Fixed

Easy

00:38:787 (2) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done , i guess
00:43:587 (1) - Remove NC add on next element Done
00:46:673 (1) - Remove NC There are sharp sound at each change of combo, led me to that sound
01:05:873 (1) - ^ Why ? . There is a very obvious voice change
01:31:930 (1) - ^ add Nc on next element Done
01:48:387 (4) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Fixed
02:14:445 (1) - Remove NC The same reason as above 00:46:673 (1)
02:27:473 (4) - NC remove next Done
02:30:559 (4) - ^ ^
02:38:445 (4) - ^ ^

Normal

00:44:958 (2) - Feels odd when playing, move it more left Yes , Done
00:56:272 (2) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:01:072 (1) - Remove Finish at start, its random
01:04:158 (2,3) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:08:272 (5) - ^ ^
01:10:329 (3) - ^ ^
01:29:186 (3) - ^ ^[/color]
01:33:129 (5) - NC remove next Obviously no , why ?
01:37:244 (5) - Flip over and make a perfect symmetric position, then flip again Done
01:40:158 (2) - ^
01:42:901 (4) - ^
02:29:529 (1) - Remove NC Nope , the vocal start in the middle of this slider
02:40:501 (1) - ^ My combo patterns always are shorts , Also, I think here is unnecessary

Hard

00:37:586 (4) - Dont make such a random jump for symmetry, move it closer to the preview element
00:48:901 (3,4,5) - Symmetry for consistance Done
02:24:044 (1) - Remove NC add NC here 02:24:558 (3) - I agree , Done

Unless its done for "rytmn" dont change this, otherwise do remove NC, what i really suggest to do on:
00:27:815 (1) - ^
00:40:158 (1) - ^
00:42:901 (1) - ^
00:45:301 (1) - ^
00:53:186 (1) - ^
00:57:643 (1) - ^
01:40:158 (1) - ^
01:42:901 (1) - ^
01:45:644 (1) - ^
02:02:444 (1) - ^
02:05:358 (1) - ^
02:08:958 (1) - ^
02:13:072 (1) - ^
02:28:672 (1) - ^
02:31:415 (1) - ^
02:35:529 (1) - ^
02:39:129 (3) - ^
02:25:758 (1) - ^
My pace is always to take the short combos. So do not remove any
Nothing more , good luck

Gabe wrote:

Why isn't this ranked yet?
Also, Xin..

I LOVE YOUR AVATAR

1. 00:35:529 (3) - I guess you forgot a clap here? I see you have always used these 1/2 claps on this refrain,so why not adding one here too? Imho,it fits quite nicely and good!
2. 00:41:186 (1,2,3,4) - Like bass said,this pattern here does not really follow the whole synthesizer's pitch changement,therefore it does not really sound that good there... As you rejected bass' pattern,I'm trying to provide another one here: this should be good to follow the synthesizer there,and it does play quite good!
   
   I also made a pattern for you to follow properly this pattern and to continue the flow and the spacing without breaking them,see if you like it!
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   

   100,248,40672,1,0,0:0:0
   100,248,40843,2,0,P|64:228|44:196,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   120,168,41187,5,0,0:0:0
   120,168,41359,2,0,P|176:216|160:308,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   44,192,42216,1,8,0:0:0
   24,268,42387,1,0,0:0:0
   80,324,42559,1,0,0:0:0
   192,208,42901,5,8,0:0:0
   256,160,43072,2,0,P|340:175|340:175|372:148|428:164,1,160
   392,240,43586,2,0,P|408:276|400:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   344,372,43929,6,0,P|296:400|268:373|240:344|188:372,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   112,372,44443,2,0,P|64:324|88:240,1,160
   229,209,44959,2,0,P|208:240|168:252,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:54:386 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little thing,feel free to fix if you want: what about making the spacing in this square pattern higher? Since the kicks here are taking the place,emphatizing them in this way would fit really good,other than being quite intense and fun to play! I would say using DS 1.2 would fit good enough,considering you have done the same with 01:49:244 (1,2,3,4) -
4. 00:55:586 (1,2,3) - I see your intent here,but the second blanket between 00:56:101 (2,3) - does not really flow that smoothly,as the dropoff here gets again broken... What about instead continuing the whole pattern using an arc pattern there? It's not a really big changement,but it smooths out the flow there a bit,so try it out!
   
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   364,140,56443,1,0,0:0:0
   436,172,56615,1,8,0:0:0
   452,248,56786,1,0,0:0:0
   392,304,56958,2,0,P|336:328|248:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   196,232,57472,1,0,0:0:0
   144,292,57643,6,0,P|36:208|152:132,2,320,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:37:072 (5) - As the whole rhythmical pattern finishes here, I would actually see better this slider splitted up in a 1/2 slider and a note. That's not a really big deal,but anyways,other than following well the vocals being played there,they can play pretty good to finish this pattern,considering that you can even make a quite fun to play pattern,using a slider whose end matches 01:36:558 (4) - 's one. Here's what I have done
   
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   240,28,96558,2,0,P|164:60|88:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   24,24,97072,2,0,P|60:40|88:68,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   80,148,97416,1,4,0:0:0

6. 01:42:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Heh,the transitions you used there felt kinda rough,as 01:44:273 (1,2) - 's oval flow did not continue well the pattern 01:43:415 (2,3,4) - neither the pattern 01:45:301 (3,1,2,3,4) - . I have a little idea there: what about taking advantage of 01:43:415 (2) - 's oval flow to continue right ahead with the following patterns? Here's how I rearranged the patterns,see if you like them!
   
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   256,272,103415,2,0,P|180:264|148:192,1,160
   188,124,103929,1,0,0:0:0
   231,193,104101,1,0,0:0:0
   147,195,104273,6,0,P|108:152|136:56,1,160
   234,56,104787,2,0,P|267:104|232:192,1,160
   192,272,105301,2,0,P|228:284|272:272,1,80
   328,220,105644,5,0,0:0:0
   404,240,105815,1,0,0:0:0
   444,172,105986,1,0,0:0:0
   388,120,106158,2,0,P|328:120|328:120|308:72|244:72,1,160

7. 02:06:730 (2,3) - As the last point,I felt this pattern was kinda unpleasing to play,especially with 02:06:730 (2,3) - . I have a little idea which may work pretty good there... What about making a pattern with 02:06:730 (2) - encircling 02:06:215 (1) - 's end and 02:07:244 (3) - encirlcling 02:06:730 (2) - 's beginning? That imho works really good,try it out!
   
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   60,220,126215,6,0,P|108:240|108:240|136:288|208:272,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   268,220,126730,2,0,P|292:272|236:352,1,160
   203,274,127244,2,0,P|183:238|191:194,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   132,144,127586,6,0,P|152:108|196:92,1,80
   256,52,127929,1,8,0:0:0
   325,92,128101,2,0,P|360:108|380:144,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   360,216,128444,2,0,P|368:256|404:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   448,216,128786,1,8,0:0:0
   480,296,128958,6,0,P|448:356|356:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

8. 02:22:158 (1,2,3,1) - You could make the spacing higher here too,but using 1.00x fits pretty good too,as it could be considered as a transition,so
9. 02:35:529 (1,2,3) - Uhm...Why are you mixing that curved slider with a linear flow there? Imho,it really doesen't play good,considering the transition with 02:36:386 (4) - too... what about instead inverting 's curve and structuring the other notes zig-zag so that they follow well 's oval flow? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   116,152,155530,6,0,P|120:220|184:296,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   252,308,156044,1,8,0:0:0
   332,292,156215,1,0,0:0:0
   376,360,156386,2,0,P|412:312|380:224,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:40:672 (1) - Shouldn't the New Combo be moved at 02:41:186 (2) - instead? I have seen that many times you have preferred the vocals over the synth,so why are you following the synth this time? Imho,the current setting suits better the pattern you have there.

-kevincela- wrote:

Hey!

[Hard]

1. 00:35:529 (3) - I guess you forgot a clap here? I see you have always used these 1/2 claps on this refrain,so why not adding one here too? Imho,it fits quite nicely and good! Oh yes , Added
2. 00:41:186 (1,2,3,4) - Like bass said,this pattern here does not really follow the whole synthesizer's pitch changement,therefore it does not really sound that good there... As you rejected bass' pattern,I'm trying to provide another one here: this should be good to follow the synthesizer there,and it does play quite good! Oh yes you have all reason and changed the blankets you told me
   
   I also made a pattern for you to follow properly this pattern and to continue the flow and the spacing without breaking them,see if you like it!
   
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   100,248,40672,1,0,0:0:0
   100,248,40843,2,0,P|64:228|44:196,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   120,168,41187,5,0,0:0:0
   120,168,41359,2,0,P|176:216|160:308,2,160,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   44,192,42216,1,8,0:0:0
   24,268,42387,1,0,0:0:0
   80,324,42559,1,0,0:0:0
   192,208,42901,5,8,0:0:0
   256,160,43072,2,0,P|340:175|340:175|372:148|428:164,1,160
   392,240,43586,2,0,P|408:276|400:320,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   344,372,43929,6,0,P|296:400|268:373|240:344|188:372,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   112,372,44443,2,0,P|64:324|88:240,1,160
   229,209,44959,2,0,P|208:240|168:252,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:54:386 (1,2,3,4) - That's a really little thing,feel free to fix if you want: what about making the spacing in this square pattern higher? Since the kicks here are taking the place,emphatizing them in this way would fit really good,other than being quite intense and fun to play! I would say using DS 1.2 would fit good enough,considering you have done the same with 01:49:244 (1,2,3,4) - OH completely agree . Done
4. 00:55:586 (1,2,3) - I see your intent here,but the second blanket between 00:56:101 (2,3) - does not really flow that smoothly,as the dropoff here gets again broken... What about instead continuing the whole pattern using an arc pattern there? It's not a really big changement,but it smooths out the flow there a bit,so try it out! Well Well .. I like your idea . Done
   
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   364,140,56443,1,0,0:0:0
   436,172,56615,1,8,0:0:0
   452,248,56786,1,0,0:0:0
   392,304,56958,2,0,P|336:328|248:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   196,232,57472,1,0,0:0:0
   144,292,57643,6,0,P|36:208|152:132,2,320,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:37:072 (5) - As the whole rhythmical pattern finishes here, I would actually see better this slider splitted up in a 1/2 slider and a note. That's not a really big deal,but anyways,other than following well the vocals being played there,they can play pretty good to finish this pattern,considering that you can even make a quite fun to play pattern,using a slider whose end matches 01:36:558 (4) - 's one. Here's what I have done You convinced me so funny.Done
   
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   240,28,96558,2,0,P|164:60|88:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   24,24,97072,2,0,P|60:40|88:68,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   80,148,97416,1,4,0:0:0

6. 01:42:901 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Heh,the transitions you used there felt kinda rough,as 01:44:273 (1,2) - 's oval flow did not continue well the pattern 01:43:415 (2,3,4) - neither the pattern 01:45:301 (3,1,2,3,4) - . I have a little idea there: what about taking advantage of 01:43:415 (2) - 's oval flow to continue right ahead with the following patterns? Here's how I rearranged the patterns,see if you like them! Well , your idea is better for me . Done
   
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   256,272,103415,2,0,P|180:264|148:192,1,160
   188,124,103929,1,0,0:0:0
   231,193,104101,1,0,0:0:0
   147,195,104273,6,0,P|108:152|136:56,1,160
   234,56,104787,2,0,P|267:104|232:192,1,160
   192,272,105301,2,0,P|228:284|272:272,1,80
   328,220,105644,5,0,0:0:0
   404,240,105815,1,0,0:0:0
   444,172,105986,1,0,0:0:0
   388,120,106158,2,0,P|328:120|328:120|308:72|244:72,1,160

7. 02:06:730 (2,3) - As the last point,I felt this pattern was kinda unpleasing to play,especially with 02:06:730 (2,3) - . I have a little idea which may work pretty good there... What about making a pattern with 02:06:730 (2) - encircling 02:06:215 (1) - 's end and 02:07:244 (3) - encirlcling 02:06:730 (2) - 's beginning? That imho works really good,try it out! nice idea . Done
   
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   60,220,126215,6,0,P|108:240|108:240|136:288|208:272,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   268,220,126730,2,0,P|292:272|236:352,1,160
   203,274,127244,2,0,P|183:238|191:194,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   132,144,127586,6,0,P|152:108|196:92,1,80
   256,52,127929,1,8,0:0:0
   325,92,128101,2,0,P|360:108|380:144,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   360,216,128444,2,0,P|368:256|404:280,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   448,216,128786,1,8,0:0:0
   480,296,128958,6,0,P|448:356|356:352,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

8. 02:22:158 (1,2,3,1) - You could make the spacing higher here too,but using 1.00x fits pretty good too,as it could be considered as a transition,so I increased the spacing a little, I think plays better
9. 02:35:529 (1,2,3) - Uhm...Why are you mixing that curved slider with a linear flow there? Imho,it really doesen't play good,considering the transition with 02:36:386 (4) - too... what about instead inverting 's curve and structuring the other notes zig-zag so that they follow well 's oval flow? Here's what I have done,see if you like it! Totally agree.Fixed !
   
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   116,152,155530,6,0,P|120:220|184:296,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   252,308,156044,1,8,0:0:0
   332,292,156215,1,0,0:0:0
   376,360,156386,2,0,P|412:312|380:224,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

10. 02:40:672 (1) - Shouldn't the New Combo be moved at 02:41:186 (2) - instead? I have seen that many times you have preferred the vocals over the synth,so why are you following the synth this time? Imho,the current setting suits better the pattern you have there Fixed

That's all. I may mod the other diffs too later. For now that's a pretty good map as I've already said you via irc,good luck and I hope I have helped you ^^

Faust wrote:

Hehe, Yosuga no Sora BG. I do find it silly you accept using anime BGs and yet not want to map any song related to anime. lol

Faust wrote:

Hehe, Yosuga no Sora BG. I do find it silly you accept using anime BGs and yet not want to map any song related to anime. lol Is unrelated, but I like anime image combines with thecno

Good usage of clap-based sliderticks. Thanks e.e

Overall, I think this mapset is already there.
I don't know if you would feel shortchanged of a mod with me saying this, but I'll get kevin and discuss with him on this map.
I have a handful of very minor things to point out, symmetry among them but you won't really be doing any productive work on this by applying what I have in mind anyway. Thank you , i'm wait you mod

But for now, I'd refrain from giving this a bubble before kevin comes back to you with an additional mod from where he left off since he may have more things to say. (It's very likely he will) I think Kevin will come too late to my map, but I don't have problem

Would have liked to see an Insane difficulty with some jumping around though. I'm very bad with the diffs. Insane . Sorry

We'll get back to you .

Thanks for your opinion about my map , Faust . I'll wait

1. 00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD
   
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   476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
   400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
   320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
   260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
   132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
   184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160

2. 00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation:
   
   I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
   
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   408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
   372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
   112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
   256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
   228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
   220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160

3. 00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern!
4. 01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
   184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
   256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
   176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there.
6. 01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here:
   
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   160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
   108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0

7. 01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here?
8. 01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again:
   
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   344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
   264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
   296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
   216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
   256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0

9. 02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
   164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
   112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
   452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0

10. 02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction.

XinCrin wrote:

Sorry Bass, but [Te][Amo] made ​​me the Insane. But thank you very much for your help

1. Remove taiko BG and use a normal one because it's unrankable since the new update
2. in all diff the 2nd break time is unsnapped
3. Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning
   
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   [Easy] : 1
   [Hard] : 1
   [Kin's Taiko Muzukashii] :
   [Kin's Taiko Oni] :
   [Normal] : 1
   [TeA's Insane] : 1
4. Incostency in Kiai Time
   Normal diff have a extra kiai time the ↓ add it in all diff or remove it >u<
   Kiai #5: Starts on 02:33:130 - ends on 02:43:245 -

1. 00:40:843 (5) - Unsnapped circle
2. 00:48:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
3. 00:50:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
4. 00:52:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
5. 00:57:643 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
6. 01:00:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle
7. 01:12:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
8. 01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
   Hitsounds:
9. 01:00:387 (3) - finish sounds better here
10. 01:01:073 (1) - whistle sounds better at the slider start

1. 01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)
2. 01:28:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
3. 01:36:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
4. 01:45:643 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
5. 02:02:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
6. 02:04:843 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start)
7. 02:07:243 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
8. 02:14:443 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
9. 02:16:843 (4) - Unsnapped circle
10. 02:33:643 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
11. 02:36:043 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
12. 02:40:843 (2) - Unsnapped circle
    Spacing/Rhythm an other stuff:
13. 00:26:102 (4,5) - spacing
14. 00:29:873 (4,5) - spacing
15. 00:37:073 (3,4) - spacing
16. 00:56:273 (2,3) - spacing
17. 01:03:130 (1,2) - spacing
18. 02:23:702 (3,4) - here for first time you change rhythm,why?, in a normal it sound so bad D: and i think you should use the same thythm as before first for costency and second becase the pattern is not moe o3o
    
19. 02:29:187 (5,1) - spacing
    
    Hitsounds:
    and for hisounds same as easy here
20. 01:00:387 (3) - finish sounds better here
21. 01:01:073 (1) - whistle sounds better at the slider start

1. 00:38:443 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
2. 00:39:643 (4) - Unsnapped circle
3. 00:40:843 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
4. 00:44:443 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start)
5. 00:56:443 (3) - Unsnapped circle
6. 00:57:643 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start)
7. 01:00:043 (3) - Unsnapped circle
8. 01:02:443 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start)
9. 01:07:243 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start)
10. 01:08:443 (6) - Unsnapped circle
11. 01:14:101 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end)

1. 00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - i think something like this ↓ will flow better
   
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1. Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!

1. 00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
   
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   4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
   216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
   272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
   64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
   140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
   448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0

2. 00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
   
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   136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
   236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
   316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
   292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
   512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0

3. 00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
4. 01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
   
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   152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
   252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
6. 01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
7. 02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
   
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   268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
   268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
   364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
   452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200

8. 02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!
   
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   56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
   204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
   364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
   123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
   164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
   180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
   256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0

9. 02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.
   
10. 02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!
    
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    352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
    248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
    128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
    304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
    464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
    448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
    272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
    196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
    120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
    196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
   
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   256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
   360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
   300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
   392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
   272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
   300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
   360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
   332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0

2. 00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
   
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   100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
   132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
   44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
   188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
   256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
   324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0

3. 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
   60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
   92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
   300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
   388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
   416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this?
5. 01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:
   
   A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
   
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   276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
   360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
   364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
   448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
   236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
   248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
   172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
   88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
   56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
   304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
   336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
   304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
   356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

6. 01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
   
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   472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
   296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
   189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180

7. 02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
   A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^

-kevincela- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD Haha , Done
   
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   476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
   400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
   320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
   260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
   132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
   184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160

2. 00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation: Done
   
   I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
   
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   408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
   372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
   112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
   256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
   228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
   220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160

3. 00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern! I feel that if I put the note here, is a bit hard to understand for beginners, so do not put here
4. 01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
   184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
   256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
   176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there. Done
6. 01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here: Sorry , i'm not a symetrical mapper . Fixed
   
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   160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
   108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0

7. 01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here? Sure xD , Done
8. 01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again: nice idea , Fixed
   
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   344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
   264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
   296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
   216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
   256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0

9. 02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I like too , Done
   
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   364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
   164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
   112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
   452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0

10. 02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction. Done[/list:5dde3]
    [General]
    
    
    1. Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!
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    1. 00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
       
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       4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
       216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
       272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
       64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
       140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
       448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0

    2. 00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
       
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       136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
       236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
       316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
       292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
       512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0

    3. 00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
    4. 01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
       
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       152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
       252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    5. 01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
    6. 01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
    7. 02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
       
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       268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
       268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
       364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
       452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200

    8. 02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!
       
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       56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
       204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
       364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
       123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
       164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
       180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
       256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0

    9. 02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.
       
    10. 02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!
        
        SPOILER

        
        

        352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
        248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
        128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
        304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
        464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
        448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
        272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
        196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
        120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
        196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    All Done in this diff. . I used the codes because I'm too lazy :P
    
    [TeA's Insane]
    
    
    1. 00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
       
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       256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
       360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
       300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
       392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
       272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
       300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
       360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
       332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0

    2. 00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
       132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
       44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
       188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
       256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
       324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0

    3. 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
       
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       204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
       60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
       92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
       300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
       388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
       416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    4. 00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this? It gives a better appearance to the sound, I'll leave it
    5. 01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:
       
       A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
       360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
       364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
       448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
       236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
       248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
       172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
       88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
       56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
       304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
       336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
       304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
       356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    6. 01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
       
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       472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
       296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
       189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180

    7. 02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
       A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^

All done in TeA's Insane except the hitsounds

1. 00:23:187 (4) - stack with 00:21:987 (1) - (x:186 y:138)
   　
2. 00:24:902 (5) - like this slider? little blanket for (7)
   
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   256,248,24902,2,0,P|224:218|180:253|140:284|84:238,2,180

   
   　
3. 00:27:987 (2) - parallelism to 00:27:473 (1) - . slider 2nd point move to x:228 y:160 (if you fix this suggestion, you should change 00:28:502 (3,5) - slider angle)
   　
4. 00:34:845 (1) - If you want to employ a complete symmetry slider, try this code.
   

   184,220,34845,6,0,P|256:266|328:220,1,180

   　
5. 01:34:673 (1) - add whistle? maybe your pattern.

1. You have a taiko-bg. Someone noted this above, but you said you've updated, when the bg is still there. Just use the default background for the Taiko diffs.
2. SB\2: Could you remove the cap on T in through? It's proper English for a lyric-sb, right?
3. SB\2: This image doesn't fade after the first break. It's behind the background, but nonetheless, it should be changed.
4. The set is really well done! Great job. (I looked through the standard set and didn't find anything to poke at, this is ready to go!)

1. Quite a bit of these difficulty has unsnapped notes. It wouldn't hurt looking through AIBAT. Just run through and click resnap all notes in the timing section as the others have mentioned.

XinCrin wrote:

-kevincela- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:36:730 (x)- That's a quite little thing,and you may not agree with me there,but what about adding a note here? There's really no reason to skip over this synth's chord,as you have totally followed it 00:32:958 (1,2,3,4,5) - and by skipping this you have totally broken your 1/1 pattern. Here,I tried to modify the pattern with the new note,as in the current pattern it's kinda difficult to place the note without totally breaking the flow xD Haha , Done
   
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   476,272,33986,2,0,P|452:244|440:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   464,128,34672,1,8,0:0:0
   400,80,35015,1,0,0:0:0
   320,88,35358,1,8,0:0:0
   260,32,35701,6,0,P|184:44|148:124,1,160
   132,192,36730,1,8,0:0:0
   184,256,37072,2,0,P|224:300|256:156|288:300|328:256,1,160

2. 00:38:102 (1,2) - Oh well,not really a fan of the use of this kind of hitobjects. These sliders create a "press-hold rhythm" which is quite strange here,as there is no held of any instruments being heard there,making the whole transition quite weird to play. What about instead composing the whole pattern by a note - 1/1 slider - 1/1 slider to follow better both the drums and synth? Imho,that would be the best solution on this situation: Done
   
   I have made a pattern following this kind of pattern too. See if you like it
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   408,244,38102,1,8,0:0:0
   372,324,38445,6,8,P|336:344|296:344,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,344,39130,2,8,P|177:343|141:323,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   92,260,39815,2,0,P|124:212|56:156,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   32,80,40843,1,8,0:0:0
   112,76,41186,5,0,0:0:0
   256,144,41872,1,0,0:0:0
   228,216,42215,1,8,0:0:0
   220,296,42558,2,0,P|272:296|296:260|296:260|368:260,1,160

3. 00:54:559 (x)- Again,what about adding a note here? Actually,following the kicks there plays quite good and it continues well your rhythmical pattern! I feel that if I put the note here, is a bit hard to understand for beginners, so do not put here
4. 01:02:444 (3,4) - Considering where 01:01:072 (1) - 's oval flow is going,going directly downwards with this slider is not a really good idea imho. What about instead making this pattern go upwards to follow that oval flow and to make a nice wavy pattern which could work really well here? Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
   
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   256,184,62101,1,8,0:0:0
   184,148,62444,2,0,P|144:144|104:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   56,220,63129,2,0,P|28:164|76:84,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,236,65186,1,2,0:0:0
   256,304,65529,1,2,0:0:0
   176,312,65872,6,0,P|144:272|144:272|84:276|56:220,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:13:758 (3) - Hmm,I have a little idea there. What about moving this note instead at x:164 y:364,putting it above 01:12:043 (1) - 's beginning? That would actually play quite good,as it continues the clockwise turn started with 01:12:043 (1) - and continued with 01:12:729 (2) - ,which finishes the pattern quite well there. Done
6. 01:36:044 (1,2,3) - This is a reeeally little thing,just fix if you want: what about making 01:34:672 (2,1) - opposed sliders? By positioning them above 01:33:301 (1) - ,you could complete 01:34:672 (2) - 's oval flow, creating a really good to play pattern...Here's the outcome here: Sorry , i'm not a symetrical mapper . Fixed
   
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   160,208,96044,6,0,P|80:220|28:168,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   40,88,97072,1,0,0:0:0
   108,132,97415,1,2,0:0:0

7. 01:37:415 (3) - Shouldn't there be a finish instead of a whistle? I can clearly hear a cymbal being played there,and you have done the same on the other diffs,so why not here? Sure xD , Done
8. 01:44:272 (1,2) - Putting these two sliders above 01:42:901 (4) - using a linear pattern and blanketting 01:45:645 (2) - with 01:44:272 (1) - there kinda breaks the flow,as with the following sliders it plays quite bad and it feels unpleasing... What about instead using a different set using differently-rotated slider to prevent that? Here's what I have done there,once again: nice idea , Fixed
   
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   344,220,104272,6,0,P|404:199|435:141,2,120
   264,208,105645,2,0,P|217:163|152:161,2,120
   296,280,107015,2,0,P|316:324|368:316|388:356,2,120
   216,280,108386,2,0,P|196:324|144:316|124:354,2,120
   256,212,109758,1,4,2:0:0

9. 02:02:101 (2,3,4,1) - Huh... Using this linear transition with this curved slider,as I had already pointed out in the Hard diff,doesen't really flow that well... I'd use instead and arc-pattern,with 02:02:101 (2) - 's curve reversed,to make it flow smoothly... Here's what I have done,see if you like it! I like too , Done
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   364,196,122101,2,0,P|348:156|312:128,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   244,108,122786,1,0,0:0:0
   164,124,123129,1,8,0:0:0
   112,184,123472,6,0,P|64:224|72:328,2,160,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   248,100,125529,2,0,P|312:76|312:76|300:24|344:-16,1,160,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   392,52,126558,6,0,P|408:88|448:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   488,176,127244,1,8,0:0:0
   452,248,127586,1,0,0:0:0

10. 02:20:272 (6) - Shouldn't a New Combo be added there? Other than providing your combo chain from being too long,it will keep the consistency with 02:12:386 (1,2,3,4,1) - ,following the synthesizer transiction. Done[/list:e563a]
    [General]
    
    
    1. Lots of hitobjects are not correctly snapped... Lally has pointed almost all of them,though there are vatious unsnapped notes on the taiko diffs too. Remember to resnap them by going into the Timing menu ----> Resnap All Notes!
    [Normal]
    
    
    1. 00:26:615 (5,1) - Not really a fan of this kind of pattern... You see,the linear flow which 00:26:615 (5) - followed got totally broken there because of 00:27:473 (1) - 's placement which implies a returning back,and that actually felt quite umpleasing to play there... Wouldn't it be better if instead you kept your style,blanketting 00:27:473 (1) - with 00:26:615 (5) - ? That would definitely solve the problem,other than creating a quite fun to play pattern with 00:28:501 (2,3) - ,which follows up perfectly its oval flow there. Here's what I have done,see if you like it:
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       4,76,27473,6,0,P|52:52|140:84,1,150
       216,212,28501,1,0,0:0:0
       272,296,28845,2,0,P|217:319|138:273,1,150
       64,152,29872,1,0,0:0:0
       140,88,30215,2,0,P|256:8|372:88,1,300
       448,152,31587,1,4,0:0:0

    2. 00:41:529 (1,2,3,4) - I know your intent there on blanketting 00:42:215 (3,4) - ,but by doing that wou have created a quite sloppy to play diamond pattern,which does not really play well in there... :\ If you want to anyways continue your blanket there,what about instead using a different structure,such as an arc-pattern,combined with a "3" shaped slider, to continue well the pattern? That does actually play really smooth,other than following up 00:40:501 (4) -
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       136,48,41529,5,8,0:0:0
       236,28,41872,1,0,0:0:0
       316,92,42215,1,8,0:0:0
       292,188,42559,2,0,P|344:200|384:168|384:168|384:220|440:256,1,200
       512,316,43586,1,8,0:0:0

    3. 00:56:102 (x)- This isn't really needed,so feel free to skip if you don't want to change: What about adding a note here? It would create a pretty good transition between 00:55:586 (1,3) - ,and it would vary a bit the rhythm played there too! It plays quite good with these 2 sliders imho :3
    4. 01:04:158 (2,3,4,1) - Not really a big deal,thoughyou could smooth out a bit the flow there by making instead these two sliders curved. Using two linear sliders kinda felt not really smooth to play,and considering the nature of 01:03:129 (1) - ,using curved sliders would really benefit there,considering that with an arc-shaped pattern you could make 01:05:872 (1) - a wave slider,which works pretty good in both flow (considering the following sliders) and aesthetics!
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       152,200,64158,2,0,P|168:248|216:280,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       305,276,64845,2,0,P|344:248|360:200,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       352,100,65529,1,2,0:0:0
       252,80,65872,6,0,P|232:132|168:120|168:120|104:108|84:160,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    5. 01:30:558 (2) - I guess you missed a whistle at the beginning of this slider? It would really fit good with the vocals' pitch,and considering that you have added it too at 01:36:043 (3) - I can't see why not there
    6. 01:37:244 (5) - As already said in the Easy diff,why are you using a whistle there instead of a finish? I can't really understand this,as a finish would have fit much better there,and again considering you have used it in the Hard diff too,why aren't you using it here too?
    7. 02:07:245 (2,3,4) - Not really a big deal again,but instead of using these curved sliders I would rearrange the pattern using a note and 2 sliders 1/1 to make 02:07:245 (2) - blanket 02:06:215 (1) - continuing the pattern with 02:07:587 (3,4) - ,which are linear sliders starting from 02:06:215 (1) - 's head. I think this could flow more smoothly than the actual pattern,because of these transitions,which work pretty well with 02:08:958 (1) - too. Try it out!
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       268,244,126215,6,0,P|180:208|108:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       200,316,127245,1,8,0:0:0
       268,244,127587,2,0,P|260:132,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       356,120,128273,2,0,P|364:232,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       368,320,128958,6,0,P|452:280|448:180,1,200
       364,136,129986,1,8,0:0:0
       452,92,130329,2,0,P|404:28|324:48|324:48|272:32,1,200

    8. 02:14:445 (1,2) - Huhh...Why are you combining 2 sliders with exactly the same curve using a linear pattern? It really doesen't play well :< I know you are keeping the consistency there,but consider breaking it using two curved sliders with opposite curves - it will play way more smoothly than the actual pattern! Here's how I rearranged the whole pattern,see if you like it!
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       56,236,132386,2,0,P|104:272|148:236|148:236|192:204|244:236,1,200
       204,328,133415,2,0,P|236:364|288:360,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       372,312,134101,1,8,0:0:0
       364,212,134445,6,0,P|332:176|280:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       204,240,135130,2,0,P|155:242|123:206,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       72,120,135816,2,0,P|24:188|76:292,1,200
       123,206,136843,1,8,0:0:0
       164,116,137187,6,0,P|204:88|204:88|212:36,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       300,37,137873,2,0,P|307:87|307:87|347:115,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       440,152,138558,2,0,P|424:244|331:257,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       256,328,139586,1,8,0:0:0
       180,257,139930,2,0,P|88:244|72:152,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
       172,160,140958,1,8,0:0:0
       256,108,141301,1,4,0:0:0

    9. 02:23:701 (3,4) - This rhythm setting doesn't really fit with the instruments,considering the vocals do actually finish at 02:24:559 - ,1/2 before actually ends,wouldn't it be better if you actually folllowed them? Shortening 02:24:215 (4) - by 1/2,until 02:24:559 - , and adding a note at 02:24:902 - would totally solve the problem.
       
    10. 02:32:272 (5,1) - Similarly as 00:26:615 (5,1) - ,I don't really like that much how you are breaking 02:32:272 (5) - 's oval flow there... A possible solution would be using CTRL+G on the top of 02:33:643 (1) - to make it follow better 02:32:272 (5) - 's curve,but I have made some changes as well,see if you like them!
        
        SPOILER

        
        

        352,220,153643,6,0,P|436:160|432:72,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        344,120,154672,1,8,0:0:0
        248,96,155015,2,0,P|200:104|160:144,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        104,220,155701,5,0,0:0:0
        128,316,156043,2,0,P|176:296|212:324,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        256,232,156729,1,8,0:0:0
        304,320,157072,2,0,P|339:294|387:314,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
        452,236,157758,6,0,P|368:196|376:100,1,200
        464,148,158786,1,8,0:0:0
        448,48,159129,2,0,P|352:24|288:92,1,200
        272,188,160158,1,8,0:0:0
        196,252,160501,5,0,0:0:0
        120,188,160843,1,8,0:0:0
        196,120,161186,2,0,P|196:20,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    All Done in this diff. . I used the codes because I'm too lazy :P
    
    [TeA's Insane]
    
    
    1. 00:29:359 (1,2,3,4) - This is more a personal opinion that an issue,so feel free to fix just if you want: What about tranforming that triangular pattern in another one, which exactly follows 00:29:359 (1) - 's oval flow? It's rather a subjective thing,but I find this pretty much smooth to play and it creates a nice jump with 00:30:387 (1) - too. Try it out!
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       256,272,29359,6,0,P|348:272|392:192,1,180
       360,120,29873,1,0,0:0:0
       300,188,30045,1,0,0:0:0
       392,204,30216,1,0,0:0:0
       272,100,30387,6,0,P|224:104|224:104|180:156|180:156|116:164,2,180
       300,188,31245,1,0,0:0:0
       360,120,31416,1,0,0:0:0
       332,32,31587,1,4,0:0:0

    2. 00:44:959 (5,6) - Not really a big deal,but what about making a pattern with these two notes reversed? It would totally fit well there,as it follows 00:44:445 (4) - 's dropoff right ahead going from the right to the left and it would make a nice jump with 00:45:302 (1,2,3) - ,considering that you have been using many of these that would be even better! Here I have changed a bit the notes' position to keep the spacing regular there,see if you like it!
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       100,148,44445,2,0,P|80:184|25:191|25:191|80:200|100:236,1,180
       132,320,44959,1,8,0:0:0
       44,308,45130,1,0,0:0:0
       188,240,45302,5,0,0:0:0
       256,180,45473,1,0,0:0:0
       324,240,45645,1,8,0:0:0

    3. 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - Considering how you have placed 00:46:330 (1,2) - ,this blanket+wave slider didn't really play that smooth,and considering the almost linear pattern 00:47:702 (5,6,1) - ,I would instead suggest you to continue the flow with an arc-shaped pattern,from 00:46:673 (2,3,4) - to 00:47:187 (4,5,6,1) - : imho,following a bit more these dropoffs being played there wouldn't hurt at all,and on the other side,they make the map there smoother and nice to see too! Here's what I have done,see if you like it!
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       204,40,46673,2,0,P|164:20|120:12,1,90
       60,80,47016,1,8,0:0:0
       92,164,47187,2,0,P|118:244|202:174|233:253,1,180
       300,316,47702,1,8,0:0:0
       388,296,47873,1,0,0:0:0
       416,208,48045,6,0,P|360:144|464:108|412:40,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    4. 00:54:902 (3) - That's a quite little hitsounds thing,feel free to ignore it: what about switching the end of this slider to a soft-sampleset one? A normal-sampleset there does fit good,but considering you haven't followed this 2/1 normal-sampleset consistency,it will sound kinda strange,so wouldn't it be better if you actually removed this? It gives a better appearance to the sound, I'll leave it
    5. 01:34:673 (1,2) - Why didn't you follow the synth's changement of pitch there by skipping over it with a 1/1 slider? It sounds quite strange during the play,and it does not really match up with any of the song's instrument. What about instead using another pattern to follow that follows that changement of pitch? Using a pattern like this would fit quite good there:
       
       A pattern which could fit pretty good there could be using a 1/1 slider which blankets 01:34:673 (1) - and ends at 01:34:502 (4) - with an arc pattern right ahead... Here's what I have done:
       
       SPOILER

       
       
       

       276,28,94330,1,2,0:0:0
       360,64,94502,1,0,0:0:0
       364,152,94673,5,0,0:0:0
       448,184,94845,2,0,P|452:128|360:64,1,180
       236,196,95530,1,0,0:0:0
       248,284,95702,1,0,0:0:0
       172,336,95873,1,0,0:0:0
       88,308,96045,5,0,0:0:0
       56,224,96216,2,0,P|72:128|136:76,1,180
       304,108,96902,1,0,0:0:0
       336,192,97073,1,0,0:0:0
       304,276,97245,1,0,0:0:0
       356,352,97416,6,0,P|388:312|396:268,2,90,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    6. 01:42:559 (4) - Oh well... Why are you using the same curve as 01:42:045 (3,5) - ? I know your intent on ideally encircling 01:41:187 (3) - ,though it does actually break both 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow,which feels kinda unpleasing to play. Why don't you instead reverse this slider's curve? Imho,it would totally flow smooth because it follows quite good 01:42:045 (3,5) - 's oval flow being played right there.
       
       SPOILER

       
       

       472,104,102045,2,0,P|388:60|320:104,1,180
       296,188,102559,2,0,P|232:200|216:188,1,90
       189,100,102902,2,0,P|124:60|40:104,1,180

    7. 02:11:530 (2) - Why are you using this clap? It does kinda feel overused there,and it sounds kinda bad... What if you instead kept the consistency with the first refrain,by removing it? The whole pattern sounded quite better by doing so!
       A really good difficulty you have there,nice job! I enjouyes this quite a lot ^^

All done in TeA's Insane except the hitsounds

Thanks for the mod that really helped me Kevin Calling to you . Updated

1. Shouldn't the title be simply 'S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody', not 'DJ S3RL'? I'm not sure, but i've looked around and I don't seem to find it labeled as DJ S3RL much anywhere else. I'm sure just S3RL is fine. ((talked to -kevincela- about this, even if there is already a map ranked with DJ in front of S3RL)).

1. 00:33:987 (2) - No point to have a curve here imho; it doesn't really lead on a beat-circle curved transition, so i'd prefer it if you straightened it out.
2. 01:09:302 (2) - Can you make this into a shorter repeat slider instead? It's a pretty long slider for this map when you can be following other tunes in the music. Try something like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

1. Go to the Timing tab and then click 'Resnap All Notes'. There are around twenty unsnapped notes here, that being single beats or sliderends, which is unrankable.
2. 00:40:502 (4) - Following the music, this is not an area where you would have put a slider before; you should replace this slider with a shorter one that ends at 00:40:845 -, and then add a note at 00:41:187 -. Since then you would have four hitcircles in a row and that may feel like much at a time for an easier difficulty, replace 00:41:873 (2, 3) - with another shot slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:045 (3) - Why such a deep curve for such a short slider? Make it appear a bit longer by moving the slider curve point up a bit? It shouldn't effect the spacing too much.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:56:102 (2) - Remove this note; throughout this normal difficulty, this is the only section/area where a beat is placed to follow the girl's vocals; the rest are coincidental and following solely the music's rhythm and beat. Plus, it doesn't flow all too well, honestly.
5. 01:33:130 (5) - Could you move this to the right a bit more? It would give the feel of the note making a bit more curved transition, ( like a suddle angle transition)), rather then a quick one where (5) is now.
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:24:216 (4) - Imo, it'd flow a bit better if you made it as if (4) was a continueation of the (3) slider by moving it in the direct angle of where the (3) slider left off as opposed to being more near the top of the slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

1. 01:29:702 (1) - Can you make this slider more like a curve rather than an arch? It's just plain out weird to play in this pattern imo.
2. 01:37:245 (5) + 02:10:845 (2) - 'End of these sliders are hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the sliders so that you can see if they have a repeat or not, please!
3. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.

1. 01:35:187 (2) - With the standard hitburst (as all maps looking for this issue should be modded with), it leaves barely any time to see if there is a repeat here or not; also called a hidden slider end. This is moderate and not severe, but I hiiiiighly suggest you change this.

1. 01:15:473 - d; better with a note here!
2. 01:19:587 - d; fill in the empty space. better then a break
3. 01:20:959 - d; ^^^
4. 01:21:473 - k; no need for a finish
5. 01:25:073 - d; better then having a break
6. 01:26:445 - d; ^^^
7. 01:28:330 - make this a k instead, it fits better
8. 01:32:445 - k; no need for a finish
9. 01:36:045 - d; fill in the empty space
10. 01:52:330 (3, 4, 1, 2, 1) - k k k d k
11. 02:33:645 - D?

1. 00:26:616 - there's no finish in the music; make it a regular d.
2. 00:25:587 - k
3. 00:27:816 (2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1) - k d k d k k d k or k d d k k k d d
4. 00:35:359 (1, 2, 3, 4) - k kkd
5. 00:39:645 (1, 1, 2, 3) - k kkd
6. 01:21:473 - k
7. 01:22:845 - k
8. 01:32:445 - d

Elly-chan wrote:

Here's your mod from Project Thorough Modding! Sorry to say, but you're stuck with me as the MAT who's modding this instead.

[General]

1. Shouldn't the title be simply 'S3RL feat. Sara - Feel The Melody', not 'DJ S3RL'? I'm not sure, but i've looked around and I don't seem to find it labeled as DJ S3RL much anywhere else. I'm sure just S3RL is fine. ((talked to -kevincela- about this, even if there is already a map ranked with DJ in front of S3RL)).The "DJ" is considered something that should always go before "S3RL" or something and "Sara" has to go in the title, because it is a voice that sings a duet with S3RL

[Easy]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

1. 00:24:730 (4) - Add a New Combo here; throughout the map, at least during the kiai sections, you add NCs each two measures. It's been two measures and this follows the music better. Afterwards, remove the NC at 00:25:759 -. Done
2. 00:54:902 (1) - Add a finish in here? It fits in with the BGM seeing that there is a shattering sound being made at this moment. This also means remove the finish at 00:55:587 -; it has no real purpose since there is no finish sound in the BGM. It just makes it sound bad. Done
3. 01:03:816 (4) - Remove the whistle here to keep consistent with your hitsound pattern! You only are using whistles for this short section not on her vocal holds, but where her voice is prominently saying something. Done
4. 01:41:530 (3) - New Combo to make your NC-Every-Two-Measures pattern consistent! Done
5. 01:47:016 (3) - Same as above~! Done
6. 02:08:273 (1) - Remove the New Combo here and add it at (3)! To keep your combo pattern consistent and to follow the music better. Done
7. 02:41:530 (5) - New Combo since you would've been following the girl's vocals.

• Done

1. 00:33:987 (2) - No point to have a curve here imho; it doesn't really lead on a beat-circle curved transition, so i'd prefer it if you straightened it out. Nice idea , Done
2. 01:09:302 (2) - Can you make this into a shorter repeat slider instead? It's a pretty long slider for this map when you can be following other tunes in the music. Try something like this. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.Great idea , Done

[Normal]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

1. 02:24:902 (5) - Why is this not a part of the New Combo afterwards? It follows the girl's vocals as well, so add one here and remove the one from the note directly afterwards.Done

1. Go to the Timing tab and then click 'Resnap All Notes'. There are around twenty unsnapped notes here, that being single beats or sliderends, which is unrankable. Done
2. 00:40:502 (4) - Following the music, this is not an area where you would have put a slider before; you should replace this slider with a shorter one that ends at 00:40:845 -, and then add a note at 00:41:187 -. Since then you would have four hitcircles in a row and that may feel like much at a time for an easier difficulty, replace 00:41:873 (2, 3) - with another shot slider. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:48:045 (3) - Why such a deep curve for such a short slider? Make it appear a bit longer by moving the slider curve point up a bit? It shouldn't effect the spacing too much. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:56:102 (2) - Remove this note; throughout this normal difficulty, this is the only section/area where a beat is placed to follow the girl's vocals; the rest are coincidental and following solely the music's rhythm and beat. Plus, it doesn't flow all too well, honestly. Done
5. 01:33:130 (5) - Could you move this to the right a bit more? It would give the feel of the note making a bit more curved transition, ( like a suddle angle transition)), rather then a quick one where (5) is now. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:24:216 (4) - Imo, it'd flow a bit better if you made it as if (4) was a continueation of the (3) slider by moving it in the direct angle of where the (3) slider left off as opposed to being more near the top of the slider. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs. Done

[Hard]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

1. 00:55:587 (1) - Sincerely, there is no need for the finish. It just sounds bad, there's none in the BGM, and you've used it on the note previous; just remove it, it sounds much better.Done

1. 01:29:702 (1) - Can you make this slider more like a curve rather than an arch? It's just plain out weird to play in this pattern imo Yeah! Done
2. 01:37:245 (5) + 02:10:845 (2) - 'End of these sliders are hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the sliders so that you can see if they have a repeat or not, please! Fixed!
3. 02:43:245 (1) - 'Final bass drop is here. I suggest that you end the map here instead (the spinner to be exact). It feels a bit unnatural to follow the other short sound after the bass drop that occurs.Done

[Insane]

Hitsound and Combo Mods

1. 00:41:702 (5) - Add a New Combo here and remove the next New Combo coming after it; It follows your combo pattern and emphasizes this part of the music more. Done
2. 00:46:330 (1) - Make this part of the previous Combo and add the New Combo where two is currently. It goes with the downbeat, which imho, is much better. Done
3. 01:34:673 (1) - Remove the New Combo here, add it back on 01:35:530 -, and then remove it from 01:36:045 -. It follows the music much better and keeps your combo pattern consistent. Done
4. 02:03:987 (6) - Add a new combo here and then remove the New Combo on the next note- It emphasizes the music much better.Done

1. 01:35:187 (2) - With the standard hitburst (as all maps looking for this issue should be modded with), it leaves barely any time to see if there is a repeat here or not; also called a hidden slider end. This is moderate and not severe, but I hiiiiighly suggest you change this.Change the position of one of the circles to fix the problem

[Muzu]

1. 01:15:473 - d; better with a note here!
2. 01:19:587 - d; fill in the empty space. better then a break
3. 01:20:959 - d; ^^^
4. 01:21:473 - k; no need for a finish
5. 01:25:073 - d; better then having a break
6. 01:26:445 - d; ^^^
7. 01:28:330 - make this a k instead, it fits better
8. 01:32:445 - k; no need for a finish
9. 01:36:045 - d; fill in the empty space
10. 01:52:330 (3, 4, 1, 2, 1) - k k k d k
11. 02:33:645 - D?

All Done here

[Oni]

1. 00:26:616 - there's no finish in the music; make it a regular d.
2. 00:25:587 - k
3. 00:27:816 (2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1, 2, 1) - k d k d k k d k or k d d k k k d d
4. 00:35:359 (1, 2, 3, 4) - k kkd
5. 00:39:645 (1, 1, 2, 3) - k kkd
6. 01:21:473 - k
7. 01:22:845 - k
8. 01:32:445 - d

All Done here

Call Me Back For A Recheck~ ♥

1. 02:41:530 (1) - I think it would flow a bit better if you made it placed where a continuation of the slider would have occured; what I mean is like this!
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 02:11:016 (2) - 'End of this slider is hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the slider so that you can see if it have a repeat or not, please!

1. 00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k
2. 00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d
3. 00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k
4. 00:42:216 (1) - d
5. 00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk
6. 00:46:759 (2) - remove
7. 01:30:559 - d
8. 01:31:930 - d
9. 02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk
10. 02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk

1. 00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K
2. 02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D

Elly-chan wrote:

Recheckie~! ♥

[Easy]

1. 02:41:530 (1) - I think it would flow a bit better if you made it placed where a continuation of the slider would have occured; what I mean is like this!
   
   SPOILER

   

DONE

[Hard]

1. 02:11:016 (2) - 'End of this slider is hidden under a hitburst, therefore UNRANKABLE. Re-position the slider so that you can see if it have a repeat or not, please!

DONE

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k DONE
2. 00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d DONE
3. 00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k DONE
4. 00:42:216 (1) - d DONE
5. 00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk DONE
6. 00:46:759 (2) - remove DONE
7. 01:30:559 - d DONE
8. 01:31:930 - d DONE
9. 02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk DONE
10. 02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk

DONE

[Oni]

1. 00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K DONE
2. 02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D

DONE

NO KDS PLEASE. Poke Me When Updated~! ♥

-Bakari- wrote:

Maaaaan, I totally love TeA's and yous styles. You guys are awesome. Also, you know, I'm always glad to mod your maps.
NOW GO AND GET YOUR BUBBLE BABY

Kin wrote:

please don't edit my taiko without ask me ...

Elly-chan wrote:

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k ok
2. 00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d ok
3. 00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k ok
4. 00:42:216 (1) - d ok
5. 00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk I won't make it
6. 00:46:759 (2) - remove ^
7. 01:30:559 - d ok
8. 01:31:930 - d ok
9. 02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk no change
10. 02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk ok

[Oni]

1. 00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K really strange for me no change
2. 02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D ok fix'd

Kin wrote:

Elly-chan wrote:

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:330 (3, 1) - d k ok
2. 00:36:902 (3, 1) - k d ok
3. 00:37:416 (2, 3, 4, 1, 1) - k d d k k ok
4. 00:42:216 (1) - d ok
5. 00:40:673 (2, 3, 4) - kkk I won't make it
6. 00:46:759 (2) - remove ^
7. 01:30:559 - d ok
8. 01:31:930 - d ok
9. 02:05:702 (2, 3, 4) - kkk no change
10. 02:11:187 (2, 3, 4) - kkk ok

[Oni]

1. 00:54:387 (1, 1, 1, 1) - K D D K really strange for me no change
2. 02:22:159 (1, 1, 1, 1) - D K K D ok fix'd

I make lil change on oni and muzu (mod + custom combo color changed + lil other change)

update please http://puu.sh/26ehJ
and I've got one taiko GD ranked name as Taikin oni, so can you rename my 2 taiko ?

thanks ~