OnosakiHito wrote:

[R e d's Hard]
[*]Hitcircles
00:14:475 (2) - Slider-end as first beat is questionable in general as far as I know. Though I have no problem with it. i see no problem
00:17:182 (4,5) - Maybe this beat http://puu.sh/1Pqdb ? cant open the puush link
00:28:911 (2) - Same as above.^

p3n wrote:

[General]
Consider adding "Dr. Robotnik" to tags as this is his proper name.


[R e d's Hard]
00:00:490 (2) - the whistle should be on the end and not the turning point to match the melody. The whistle on the white tick just sounds off here because the rhythm and melody don't not support it. fix
00:04:325 (3) - ^ fix
00:14:926 (1) - starting this slider on the red tick is not a very good gameplay decision. Try to use compose -> convert slider to stream... in the options. Having a stream that matches the drums will mask the missed downbeat of the two sliders before and will be less confusing in terms of flow. added 2 circles instead



Taikos look fine. The long DDDDDD and KKKKKK sections on Oni are a bit weird but they kinda fit.
Poke me after you've worked through this post.

p3n wrote:

[General]
Consider adding "Dr. Robotnik" to tags as this is his proper name.

ho right, i forget add this, add



[Easy]
00:00:941 (2) - add whistle to make a nice melody follow here. The beat placement itself does already indicate what you follow here so it would be good to support it with hitsounds.yeah, true, the melody in red tick is really strong than white tick when i listen that fit lot, thank! fix!
00:04:550 (2) - ^^



[Normal]
00:00:265 (1,2) - I don't know how I feel about these sliders. They don't really match the song here. With the whistle on the 2 and 4 of the bar it also seems like a generic 4/4 placement but it doesn't reflect this part of the song. Maybe you should go with a repeat slider here to match the melody: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/577334 Also add whistles to the repeat and the ending point to match the song. truem better fit melody and whistle, fix
00:03:874 (1,2) - ^ fix
00:24:174 (2,3) - beat placement seems off here. It would be more fitting for this kind of difficulty to follow the melody properly here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/577307 Also adjust the hitsounds to the new placement afterwards.fix
00:31:392 (2,3) - ^ fix



[R e d's Hard]
00:14:926 (1) - starting this slider on the red tick is not a very good gameplay decision. Try to use compose -> convert slider to stream... in the options. Having a stream that matches the drums will mask the missed downbeat of the two sliders before and will be less confusing in terms of flow.
IRC mod with red, better add 2 notes is easy for play in hard and fit



[Insane]
00:00:716 (3,4) - switch the whistle from (3) to (4) to make it clear you are following the melody here. The stacks of 2 notes don't really indicate a long notefollow so you should focus on communicating that to the player in the beginning. Hitsounds are one way to do this...the other one would be combos but I don't think it would be better to split the notefollow. fix but the stack staying because when I listen song i don't feel the song are up or down, the melody in beginning look like is ready fight with boss, so that really fit with stack, sorry keep it
00:04:325 (3,4) - ^fix but stack staying




Taikos look fine. The long DDDDDD and KKKKKK sections on Oni are a bit weird but they kinda fit.
Poke me after you've worked through this post.

Lanturn wrote:

Short, Simple, but amazing! great map, and congrats!

Edit: The official name of this song is called "STH2 Boss 〜Mega Drive version〜" <-- what a stupid name.. Probably don't need to change this.. Regardless the name of the song is probably just "Boss"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sonic_the_Hedgehog_2_(16-bit) - Disc 1 - Track 20

also the artist name should be "中村 正人" "Nakamura Masato" Considering we have to follow these rules:
http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Metadata

"Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help."