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mafumafu & amatsuki - Kasyokusei:Idol Syoukougun

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HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

Flask wrote:

(No kd for this)

Title Unicode: 過食性:イドル症候群 by checking nico nico douga
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Consider add Megpoid GUMI MAYU to tags since the original version of 過食性:アイドル症候群 has sang by them. If you need this
Also, Indulging: Idol Syndrome to tags. You know why :P
- All fixed

[Insane]
01:23:400 (2) - Watch out this slider reserve, it has been hidden by (1)'s sliderslide. is it unrankable? anyway fixed

I like スズム & 天月's version better than mayu/gumi lol Take my star :3 thanks xDD
thanks :D
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
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General
almost suggestions
eLtXXx's Easy
Placement
00:56:250(4) x:348 y:248
02:53:850(1) a bit down like this?
SPOILER
03:24:450(1) to make a nice blanket, this end point should be down some grids
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:08:475 unnecessary green line
01:08:550^
01:08:650^
01:58:725^
03:11:850^ and more...
Hit Sonud
01:36:150(3) add finish at end
03:28:950(1) add finish

KK's Normal
Placement
00:27:450(1) make blanket like (2)
SPOILER
01:08:550(1) I don't think it's good to ignore DS. there is not big blank so you can edit easily.
02:01:350(1,2) maybe like this?
SPOILER
Rhythm
00:46:650 unnecessary green line
02:11:250^

Hard
Placement
00:55:950(7,1) I suppose it's not good jumping , if you aim to jump you should do at (6,7), it's nice. e.g)
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:39:600 add a note to follow the vocal?
03:16:350 delete this note and like this?
SPOILER

Insane
Placement
00:33:450(6) to follow the flow (5,6), I suppose you can put a little jump better
SPOILER
03:27:000(4) this slider a bit touched with (3), to avoid this, it's more beautiful
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
01:22:950(1) delete finish at head, it's loud. and it's not added in your Hard diff.
03:13:200(1)^

flankly speaking I don't like Nico Nico music & songs... but mapset is cool. good luck
Kaburagi Kotetsu
903 posts
Joined September 2012
Kaburagi Kotetsu
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SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Idol.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46650
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 154950,159750,178950,183750,211350
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Kasyokusei:Idol Syoukougun
TitleUnicode:過食性:イドル症候群
Artist:mafumafu & amatsuki
ArtistUnicode:まふまふ & あまつき
Creator:HelloSCV
Version:KK's Normal
Source:Nico Nico Douga
Tags:Suzumu Saine Vocaloid eLtigreXXx Kaburagi Kotetsu Megpoid GUMI MAYU Indulging: Idol Syndrome
BeatmapID:217969
BeatmapSetID:76366

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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256,100,105300,2,0,P|256:50,2,50,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,148,105749,2,0,P|240:244|280:252|256:346,1,200
396,200,106950,6,0,P|496:200,2,99.9999999999999,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,200,107850,1,2,0:0:0
196,200,108150,2,0,P|100:224|4:200,1,200
160,76,109350,2,0,P|256:52|352:76,1,200
424,144,110250,5,2,0:0:0
352,212,110550,2,0,P|308:248|292:288,1,99.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,324,111150,2,0,P|100:324,1,99.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
0,308,111750,6,0,P|32:204|120:224|120:224|220:132,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,40,112950,2,0,P|280:40|321:124,1,200
280,216,113850,1,2,0:0:0
352,284,114150,6,0,P|400:304|448:300,1,99.9999999999999,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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400,112,115350,5,8,0:0:0
316,56,115650,1,2,0:0:0
216,56,115950,1,8,0:0:0
132,112,116250,1,2,0:0:0
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268,108,117450,1,2,0:0:0
336,184,117750,2,0,P|428:208|500:144,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,112,118650,1,2,0:0:0
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372,360,119850,5,2,0:0:0
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408,216,123450,1,2,0:0:0
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164,240,135150,1,8,0:0:0
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352,44,150150,6,0,P|396:68|428:108,1,99.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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125,92,152850,1,0,0:0:0
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72,320,159750,6,0,P|68:232|360:172|328:16,1,400,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
488,160,161550,1,2,0:0:0
359,314,162150,6,0,P|363:231|71:171|100:36,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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HelloSCV
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Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

kajiyatta wrote:

Hard
Placement
00:55:950(7,1) I suppose it's not good jumping , if you aim to jump you should do at (6,7), it's nice. e.g) Fixed
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:39:600 add a note to follow the vocal? hmm this part is down beat so i want to keep this
03:16:350 delete this note and like this? current looks fine
SPOILER

Insane
Placement
00:33:450(6) to follow the flow (5,6), I suppose you can put a little jump better AWESOME suggestion! i didn't think about it
SPOILER
03:27:000(4) this slider a bit touched with (3), to avoid this, it's more beautiful great great fixed
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
01:22:950(1) delete finish at head, it's loud. and it's not added in your Hard diff. finish is fit well with music imo
03:13:200(1)^same as above

flankly speaking I don't like Nico Nico music & songs... but mapset is cool. good luck thank you for accept my mod xD
and updated
Tari
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Tari
Request~

Mod time!

[General]

  1. Nothing.
[Easy]

  1. 01:36:150 (3) - Finish in end would be appropriate, since there a transition in music, from loud obnoxious part to soft, calm part, and it fit well to the cymbal in the background, and its inconsistent with finish here 00:39:750 (1) -.
  2. 02:05:850 - Hmm, Definitely a instrument beat here, feels empty here, so I suggest you add a note here, to make up for it. and maybe add a nice clap just for this note o3o? I have a clap you can use for this note only , just PM me if you want to know.
  3. 02:34:950 (2) - Again, there is a finish missing here, You must add it here actually because, with the upcoming break, this note is like the big end or the signal note for it, plus there is a loud percussion sound that goes with it.
  4. 00:28:950 (2,3) - Err, pretty hard for newbies, I think you should reframe from using 1/4th's rhythm in easy, it might be hard for newbies to click, I do have a rhythm suggestion you can possibly follow here : 00:38:550 (2,3) - , but it will require you to change some note positions.
  5. 00:38:550 (2,3) - ^
  6. 01:20:550 (1,2) - Maybe remove note 2 and reverse 1 for more simple rhythm? The flow is fine either way, but I think if you reverse it, it'll be easier for newbies to play (requires less clicking)
  7. 01:59:850 - Miss vocal note here on purpose or was it intentional?
  8. 02:19:950 (2) - Video change in end of slider, so finish is needed, if you add the finish though, please remove the clap from the end of the slider, adding them together don't sound good ><
  9. 03:06:450 - Add note either here, or 03:07:050 for constant and consistent rhythm, for both clicking and movement.
  10. 03:20:550 (3,4,1) - Symmetry is bad here, should move all this to right little bit so it is centered perfectly, and then after that you should check and make sure distance spacing and symmetry is perfect here.
[Normal]

  1. 00:39:000 (5) - Note should end in red tick, it follows the vocals more properly, and the use of claps here doesn't exactly go with the music anyway, so should fix that too.
  2. 00:42:150 (2) - Well, for clicking purposes and better flow and hitsound purposes, This note should end in white tick, if you end it in the white tick, add whistle with it please, (That's the only reason why it should end in white tick)
  3. 01:39:750 (2) - ^
  4. 01:08:550 (1) - Uh, Big spacing issue? o.O Huge spacing changes like this isn't needed for normal, but there two ways you can fix this, first you can move this note to correct distance spacing (1.0x) or you can add a note here 01:08:250, This note follows the music , so should be fine to play.
  5. 01:27:450 - Optional, but note here with finish.
  6. 01:56:550 (1,2,3) - Not symmetry, and its not correctly centered. Center it and make sure its correctly symmetrical, and use distance snap and grid snap lvl 4 for this, it'll help ><
  7. 02:11:850 (2) - Well, I think you weren't trying to make it overlap, but slider 02:09:750 (3) - does overlap this slider currently, so you should decrease the curve of this slider so it don't overlap ><
  8. 02:15:750 (1) - Blanket of this slider can be improved, use grid snap lvl 4 and try to make blanket here more beautiful ^^.
  9. 02:20:550 (1,2,3) - Same here for slider note 1 and 3, blanket can be a bit improved.
  10. 02:22:950 (1,2) - Look kinda blocked and squished with the other note, maybe change the position of this note, something like this http://puu.sh/23wrZ,
  11. 02:48:450 (3) - Move note, if its not stacked with note 02:46:650 (3) - , it looks bad, so try something like this http://puu.sh/23wwM. It make little trapezoid shape :>
  12. 02:56:550 (5) - New combo here, just for consistency and maybe want to add a finish here.
[Hard]

Stupid star rating, It says Hard is more difficult than Insane

  1. 00:12:150 (1) - This slider almost touch 00:11:550 (3) - , maybe move it a little bit more up ><?
  2. 00:44:400 - Well, maybe you should add a note here? and make it stack like this http://puu.sh/23xJ1 ? It plays quite nicely imo.
  3. 02:25:050 (2) - Well current stack position is fine, but I think you could try this http://puu.sh/23xXb
  4. 01:09:150 (3) - Better if you make blanket like this, http://puu.sh/23xWs
  5. 03:19:050 (4) - Try to make blanket here as well, http://puu.sh/23y0m
  6. 02:46:950 (1) - Maybe add a finish here?
  7. 02:52:800 (4) - Clap sounds interesting here :>
    Really Nice Diff ^^
[Insane]

  1. 00:33:750 (7) - Separate combo, because of separate pattern , I start to see pentagon shape now.
  2. 00:28:950 (1) - Purposely miss finish here? maybe you should add it.
  3. 00:32:550 (3) - Finish here too, for consistency with 00:34:950 (3) -
  4. 00:48:450 (1,2) - What, you should add notes between these notes, they fit really well. something like this http://puu.sh/23yj0 would work
  5. 00:58:050 (3) - Better if you Ctrl+G this.
  6. 01:34:950 (3) - Finish for consistency as well.
  7. 01:36:150 (5) - NC here instead? its to be consistent with 00:38:550 (1) - ><
  8. 02:30:150 (1) - Miss finish here as well?
Well, Hard and Insane are very nice ^^ not that many issues, just some hitsound fixes and it should be good ^^

Good Luck om this~
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
HelloSCV

Tari wrote:

[Hard]
Stupid star rating, It says Hard is more difficult than Insane just an error of Auto Star Rating

  1. 00:12:150 (1) - This slider almost touch 00:11:550 (3) - , maybe move it a little bit more up ><? Fixed
  2. 00:44:400 - Well, maybe you should add a note here? and make it stack like this http://puu.sh/23xJ1 ? It plays quite nicely imo. i think this part is Downbeat so current pattern is better
  3. 02:25:050 (2) - Well current stack position is fine, but I think you could try this http://puu.sh/23xXb Fixed
  4. 01:09:150 (3) - Better if you make blanket like this, http://puu.sh/23xWs Current slider works fine
  5. 03:19:050 (4) - Try to make blanket here as well, http://puu.sh/23y0m Fixed
  6. 02:46:950 (1) - Maybe add a finish here? Not Fixed because hears weired when i'm playing
  7. 02:52:800 (4) - Clap sounds interesting here :> Awesome
    Really Nice Diff ^^Thanks xDD
[Insane]

  1. 00:33:750 (7) - Separate combo, because of separate pattern , I start to see pentagon shape now. Fixed
  2. 00:28:950 (1) - Purposely miss finish here? maybe you should add it. Fixed
  3. 00:32:550 (3) - Finish here too, for consistency with 00:34:950 (3) - Not fixed :/
  4. 00:48:450 (1,2) - What, you should add notes between these notes, they fit really well. something like this http://puu.sh/23yj0 would work Seems nice suggestion but current is better for me
  5. 00:58:050 (3) - Better if you Ctrl+G this. Great
  6. 01:34:950 (3) - Finish for consistency as well.Fixed
  7. 01:36:150 (5) - NC here instead? its to be consistent with 00:38:550 (1) - ><Fixed
  8. 02:30:150 (1) - Miss finish here as well?oh ww fixed
Well, Hard and Insane are very nice ^^ not that many issues, just some hitsound fixes and it should be good ^^

Good Luck om this~ Thank you for modding xD
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
I know you're the last in my queue but I wanted to do the longest map first, since I have the time to do so.

Anyways.

Insane:
01:44:550 (1,2,3,4) - Use soft hitsounds here?
01:46:500 (5) - Maybe make it something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618923
Very nice job.

Hard:
01:09:150 (3) - I know it's going to be a bit of a challenge, but move this so it doesn't overlap with (1)
01:44:550 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe use soft hitsounds for these
01:50:850 (2) - If you could make this not overlap, that'd be cool owo
02:42:450 (1) - Make this not overlap possibly?
Good as well.

Normal:
In terms of hitsounds, I would have liked it if you used the snare sample for your 2s and 4s instead of the snap, especially in the chorus
00:39:750 (1) - Make this fade out?
00:44:550 (1) - ^
00:48:150 (4) - This looks really crammed where it is.
01:45:749 (4) - Same as before
02:04:950 (3) - Bit weird looking o-o. The end could be red pointed to make a sharper curve.
03:28:950 (1,2,3) - Use soft hitsounds here.

Easy:
Tick Rate 1
Same hitsounding issues as normal
03:26:550 (4) - You should totally make this straight.
Not much issues regarding the mapping but the hitsounds omg.

Normal and Easy need a fun trip down the hitsound lane. Hard and Insane are stellar.
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CDFA wrote:

Insane:
01:44:550 (1,2,3,4) - Use soft hitsounds here? Fixed
01:46:500 (5) - Maybe make it something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/618923 Current works nice :/
Very nice job.

Hard:
01:09:150 (3) - I know it's going to be a bit of a challenge, but move this so it doesn't overlap with (1) Fixed
01:44:550 (2,3,4,5) - Maybe use soft hitsounds for these Fixed
01:50:850 (2) - If you could make this not overlap, that'd be cool owo Fixed
02:42:450 (1) - Make this not overlap possibly? Fixed
Good as well.
thank you for mod LOL
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Nice Map!
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Thanks! :D
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http://puu.sh/24XCo :) :) :) :)
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Hi.


[General]
your BG is more than 1M big, maybe change it into a jpg it will save like 1M space. maybe try this one :
SPOILER


[eLtXXx's Easy]
01:04:050 (1,2) - spacing (2grid right)


[KK's Normal]
00:55:050 (X) - well feel a little weird that here is empty..(since here is the only place that is empty in this kiai part and it's empty kinda broke the consistent of your sliderslide clap, so). maybe consider add a note here?
01:44:100 (1) - the clap feel weird and sudden here. maybe remove it?
03:08:550 (5) - actually I think this slider fit the music pretty nicely, but I am afraid it will be a little hard to read in a normal diff, just a mention here.
03:15:450 (X) - same as 00:55:050
03:16:650 (2,3) - actually according to the music, I feel slider 2 should change to a note and should move slider 2 starts at 03:16:950, it feel much better.


[Hard]
00:47:700 (4,5) - although I know this is for symmetric, but the spacing did feel a little near with 23.. not a big issure though. maybe consider a way to make them farther away?(maybe move 23 away from the center of the screen or sth else.
03:28:950 (1) - add a break time just like the Insane diff?


[Insane]
00:20:400 (1,2) - why not move this green timing section to 00:20:550 (2) - ? so note 1 can still have a normal hitsound(just like the Hard diff), it sounds better imo.



pretty nice set. call me when you have any reply.
HelloSCV
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Nymph wrote:

Hi.


[General]
your BG is more than 1M big, maybe change it into a jpg it will save like 1M space. maybe try this one :
SPOILER
Changed

[Hard]
00:47:700 (4,5) - although I know this is for symmetric, but the spacing did feel a little near with 23.. not a big issure though. maybe consider a way to make them farther away?(maybe move 23 away from the center of the screen or sth else.hmm... ok fixed
03:28:950 (1) - add a break time just like the Insane diff? whoops


[Insane]
00:20:400 (1,2) - why not move this green timing section to 00:20:550 (2) - ? so note 1 can still have a normal hitsound(just like the Hard diff), it sounds better imo. Fixed
thank you for modding \:D/
and waiting Guest diff mapper's reply ~
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http://puu.sh/25896 done :D
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Updated all \o\
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Recheck.


[KK's Normal]
01:45:749 (4) - slider snap error (1ms... lol) (sorry I didn't notice this in my first post!)
03:17:550 (4,1) - this spacing is on purpose or just a mistake?


nothing else. Sorry for any inconvenience!
call me back~!
no kudosu for this post.
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Updated~
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Actually, there is nothing anymore that I can possibly point out. Good luck with this, ev'ry1!!
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Quiz-chan wrote:

Actually, there is nothing anymore that I can possibly point out. Good luck with this, ev'ry1!!
thanks :D
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Ok rerechecked and all fine for me~
Good luck with it!
Bubbled~
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\:D/
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cool
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어머 버블받음 컴은 내일모래나 가능할듯
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TitleUnicode:過食性:アイドル症候群

Although it is not important, please adjust before going to rank :3
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whoops, thanks :D

Edit : Fixed artist and title unicode orz
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Ok title artist fixed~
Rebubbled~
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Fixed slider Error on Normal diff orz..
and add 00:12:450 (2) - missed clap on here

sorry for inconvenience, my fault D:
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yeah it is ok. the bug did hurt me a lot too...

Check the map again, no slider bug found out anymore.

Rebubbled~ (take care this should be my last time I can reb this map. wish you good luck~)
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(┓^ω^)┛)) ヨイサヨイサ♪
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wwwwww
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Random modding FAIL
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Sonnyc// 정모에서 봅시다 ㅇㅅㅇ

23:28 Gloria Guard: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
23:28 Gloria Guard: 아
23:28 Gloria Guard: 그거 생각나네
23:28 Gloria Guard: 손닉님이 별1개주고 랭크!
23:28 scanter: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
23:28 Underflow: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
23:28 Gloria Guard: 과거의 낚시
23:28 scanter: 낚시 !
23:28 scanter: 나 낚였음 그거에

그런 의미에서 저도 낚시 :D

2주 이상 방치되면 모딩 할 수도 있어요 o.o/

To non-korean users
This is not modding post lol
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Sorry for the long wait for my mod. I only have like 5 ideal days to mod, and a limited window within those days to do everything.

Easy
Very little wrong with it, so I nazid it hard.

00:17:250 (3) - Not sure about this because vertical. Maybe it would be better if the curve was stretched slightly and the end was slightly angled. http://puu.sh/29oXI <something like that looks more appealing to me.
00:20:550 (1) - I was not expecting the beat to just go silent suddenly. IMO it's too much of a sound gap to go from 80% Normal to 50% soft. It wasn't as noticeable in the Hard, so I'll leave it up to you to make a decision here.
00:22:350 (4,5,1) - Perhaps just get this spacing difference out of the way. It's not that noticeable, but there's no point in leaving it different.
00:22:950 - Finishes are so quiet. It's just personal opinion, so I would only expect you to change if you agree or if it becomes necessary to fix the great sound change issue I mentioned
00:29:400 (3,1,2) - 0.98 goes into 1.03 spacing. your other transitions aren't like this. You should clean this up.
00:34:350 (3,4,1) - Maybe it's worth fixing this spacing too, but that's really nazi.
00:37:050 (4,1) - Small but perhaps this would be improved this part was less angled downward. It would be a minor shift. Even if you do not do that, consider making the spacing perfect.
00:37:350 (1,2,3) - IMO you should avoid transitions with angles that don't go well together. 1,2 is a rather sharp angle, which has nothing to do with 2,3. The ideal transition would be like this http://puu.sh/29q6M <The angle of 1,2 looks like it could form a curve into 3. 2,3 are horizontally aligned (not perfectly in the screenshot but there's some wiggle room).
00:49:350 (1,2,3) - Use equal spacing. I feel it's smoother that way. Fairly nazi though.
01:31:950 (2,3,1) - I'm not sure about this curve. It's quite shallow, and i'm not sure if shallow is the best option here. What do you think?
02:49:350 (1,2,3) - I suggest a perfect blanket with 1.
02:58:950 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Would sound nice with some soft whistles thrown in. I really think you should add hitsounds here personally.
03:09:750 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Is there any particular reason why each one of these transitions has a larger spacing go into a small one?

Normal
There were some part where personally I didn't prefer how the beat was portrayed, but overall it's a solid map.

00:16:950 (3,4,1) - Spacing could be cleaner. Make it so that it's at least 0.01 difference in the spacing.
00:38:550 (4,5) - 1.00 snap. 0.94 is not smooth.
00:57:750 (1,2,3,4) - <3 Terrific flow.
01:18:450 (1,2) - Why are you changing snap? I think it plays better using regular spacing. Please fix.
01:54:750 (2,1) - Have a perfect blanket here?
02:25:350 (1,2,3,4) - Lacking beat IMO. I guess it's fine, but it just stood out since you tended to not skip the beat in this way in other parts.
03:06:750 - Maybe whistle?

Hard

This is not a Hard mode, but I guess it doesn't have to be.

00:49:500 (2,3,4,5) - This note curve is imperfect. Look http://puu.sh/29sa9
00:59:550 (3,4,5,6) - Ugh this is difficult to keep beat for me. It's awkward going into that those sliders. 3,4 is an obnoxious angle to hit and the hitburst is covered most of 6 making it difficult to distinguish that it's a slider. You really should make this part flow better. Curves carry the beat easier than straight sliders and avoid overlapping a short slider with a hitburst.
01:28:950 (1,2,3,4) - Another imperfect curve. This is worse than the first one. It should be an entirely downward curve off of 2. That looks best to me. http://puu.sh/29sG9
02:44:100 (6,7,1) - Make spacing equal for better flow.
03:03:750 (1) - Make the blanket with 2 perfect?
03:30:750 (1,2,3) - Arrange in a more creative way? If you must have this kind of design http://puu.sh/29t8z < looks better

Insane

00:38:850 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Shape is poorly designed.
01:21:750 (1,2,3,4,1) - Rather crude transition IMO.
01:29:250 (5,6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/29tt9 ? or something similar.
01:34:050 (5,6,7) - ^ You have quite a few of these transitions.
02:47:400 (2) - Perhaps move slightly to the left. The transition with the previous part looks weird.
02:48:450 (2,3,4) - Maybe smooth it out? http://puu.sh/29tXj

Conclusion

Worth a star.
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TheVileOne wrote:

Hard

This is not a Hard mode, but I guess it doesn't have to be.

00:49:500 (2,3,4,5) - This note curve is imperfect. Look http://puu.sh/29sa9 seems fine
00:59:550 (3,4,5,6) - Ugh this is difficult to keep beat for me. It's awkward going into that those sliders. 3,4 is an obnoxious angle to hit and the hitburst is covered most of 6 making it difficult to distinguish that it's a slider. You really should make this part flow better. Curves carry the beat easier than straight sliders and avoid overlapping a short slider with a hitburst. this is hard diff, i think they are readable enough
01:28:950 (1,2,3,4) - Another imperfect curve. This is worse than the first one. It should be an entirely downward curve off of 2. That looks best to me. http://puu.sh/29sG9 fine for me :/
02:44:100 (6,7,1) - Make spacing equal for better flow. Fixed
03:03:750 (1) - Make the blanket with 2 perfect? already fine
03:30:750 (1,2,3) - Arrange in a more creative way? If you must have this kind of design http://puu.sh/29t8z < looks better hmm.. nope fine for me

Insane

00:38:850 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Shape is poorly designed. Fine for me
01:21:750 (1,2,3,4,1) - Rather crude transition IMO. ^
01:29:250 (5,6,7) - ^ http://puu.sh/29tt9 ? or something similar. why? they work perfectly
01:34:050 (5,6,7) - ^ You have quite a few of these transitions.^
02:47:400 (2) - Perhaps move slightly to the left. The transition with the previous part looks weird.^
02:48:450 (2,3,4) - Maybe smooth it out? http://puu.sh/29tXj ^
mods on bubbled map orz.. updated
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http://puu.sh/29OOt :) :)
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I can't touch this map anymore.
Let me see if I can do anything for you.
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Nymph wrote:

I can't touch this map anymore.
Let me see if I can do anything for you.
I asked rebubble to LKs already

hope i could get rebubble xDD
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