Sorry for the delay >.<
[General]
[Kyouzuki]
[Guy's Mikoto]
[fb's Natsuki]
[Mai]
That's about it :3
Kinda nice Easy and Normal, but hard could need a bit tweaking.
Insane is a bit strange with this overmaped streams and also Hard could remove some useless triplets.
Good luck ></
[General]
- The diff spread between Natsuki and Mikoto is a bit too high, as Natsuki already uses 1/6 and triplets. To fix this, you could add a diff between Mikoto and Natsuki. Or just try to make Natsuki a bit simpler and Mikoto harder.
[Kyouzuki]
- 01:21:748 (2) - As your previous mapping was very neat and not overlaping, how do you think about removing this bad overlap? A good way of getting rid of it would be to add a repeat to 2, removing 3 CTRL + G and respacing 4 - have a try, I think it fits better :3
- 02:20:033 (2) - The end sounds too enduring to ignore it just like that. How do you think about a quit finish or clap for the end? I think it fits hitsounding quite well.
[Guy's Mikoto]
- 00:38:890 (2) - Considering you added whistles to all the strong vocal parts in this part, you will want to add a whistle to keep it consistent.
- 01:30:748 (4) - Uhm, the whistle on the end is inconsistent and sounds a bit unfiting and spammed with the following whistle on 5. What do you think about removing it?
- 01:41:033 (4) - If you remove the one above, I would remove this one too for consistency, anyways: I'd remove this one at all as it doesn't fit all of this sudden placed.
- 01:56:890 (1) - That overlap with 3 looks ugly. To fix this, I would rotate this or just replace this. I guess that would keep your pattern the most.
- 01:58:605 (3) - Try CTRL + G and I mean by this, to try the flow here. In my opinion, such pattern (these circles) flow much better like this, if you go to the one direction with the first Slider and in the other with the next Slider.
- 02:20:033 (6) - As this plays much later than the previous notes and instruments - and doesnt really belong to them - I would recommend you to add a NC here.
[fb's Natsuki]
- 02:13:176 (5,6,7,8,9) - This circle stream is a bit too long for hard difficulty, switching to a Slider would sure be easier.
- 02:08:676 (4,5) - This formation flows a bit unclean and doesn't fit with your previous mapping at all. I'd recommend to move 5 a bit to the right and up to create a better flow at this point, as I think it fits the preivous pattern better and makes transition from 4 to 5 a bit cooler.
- In general I think many of your triplets sound overmaped you could reduce some like 01:05:890 (2,3,4) - which sound really kinda odd and overdone.
[Mai]
- 00:45:748 (3,4,5,6) - Not only kinda tricky to read but flows annoying bad. Please unstack those 3 and 4,5,6 to have a better readability here.
- 00:50:462 (5) - To make your transition here work better, I'd recommend you to make this shape a bit smoother, not that much like a curve.
- 01:00:533 (1) - Please get rid of this antijump, it plays kinda bad after the powerful part here.
- 01:02:890 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is really overmaped - listening to the music will make you understand that there are no drums or other instruments following this stream.
- 01:15:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same for these one, which really sound annoying overmaped.
- 01:26:890 (2,3,4,5) - Having such a low spacing for this stream is kinda inconsistent and confusing to read. I think you should space it the same way you did on your previous streams.
- 01:30:319 (3,4,5,6) - Same as above.
- 02:07:176 (1,2,3,4) - Stacking their ends seems strange to me. How about increasing the spacing and create something like this http://puu.sh/1T6ru
It is your pattern just spaced out and I think it works better and looks neater. If you don't, ignore this suggestion. - 02:12:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:45:748
- 02:17:247 (6) - This is too hard to read in my opinion :< Unstacking and replacing this would make things much more pleasing and well flowing.
- 02:17:462 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:45:748
- 02:20:033 (2) - You did use finishes here. I think it would be a good thing to apply this on other diffs too, to keep a hitsound consistency between difficultys.
- I did say some things were overmaped. If you want to say, you want to make it hard or it belongs to your style, I would like to say that overmaping is not a style or a good way to map, you should be following the song, but I guess you know this
That's about it :3
Kinda nice Easy and Normal, but hard could need a bit tweaking.
Insane is a bit strange with this overmaped streams and also Hard could remove some useless triplets.
Good luck ></