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ALI PROJECT - Ashura Hime

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Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
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Guy
irc mod :3
SPOILER
17:09 Guy: これ旧スライダーなんですねー
17:09 P o M u T a: shapeって揺らす?_?
17:09 P o M u T a: 00:58:605 (1,1) - curve them in same shape? Or copy one from the other.
17:09 Guy: 多分スライダーの形とかのことじゃないかな
17:09 P o M u T a: たとえばこういうところは
17:09 Guy: カーブスライダーってあるから
17:10 P o M u T a: どう直せばいいか全く分からず
17:10 Guy: 同じ形にって言ってるね
17:10 P o M u T a: 放置でした・・・
17:10 P o M u T a: (1,2)はどちらも同じ形だけど
17:10 P o M u T a: うう？
17:10 Guy: 01:00:533 (1) -
17:10 Guy: これだよｗ
17:10 P o M u T a: おおおｗｗｗｗ
17:10 P o M u T a: そういうことですかｗ
17:10 P o M u T a: 全く
17:10 P o M u T a: 分からなくて
17:10 P o M u T a: ガイさん素晴らしいですｗ
17:11 P o M u T a: 男ですｗ
17:11 Guy: ｗｗｗｗｗ
17:11 Guy: まあちょっとこれ書き方悪いよねｗ
17:11 P o M u T a: ；ｃ；
17:12 Guy: んー悪いとこ全然ないのに
17:12 Guy: need more workはひどいな
17:12 Guy: 俺的には
17:12 Guy: 00:50:462 (5) -
17:12 Guy: このスライダーの形もなんとかしたいところ・・
17:12 Guy: 旧スライダー感があって汚く感じますね
17:12 P o M u T a: スライダーの形だけ変えるなら
17:12 P o M u T a: １回消して
17:13 P o M u T a: 造れば
17:13 P o M u T a: おｋですかな？
17:13 Guy: ですです
17:13 P o M u T a: おｋです！
17:13 P o M u T a: fix!
17:14 Guy: 俺も自分のとこ直そうかな・・
17:14 P o M u T a: 00:59:890 (1) - same as the opinion of above, though plays fine, wiggling slider is not a good choice here. 00:58:605 (1,2,1) should be similar patterns.
17:14 P o M u T a: 00:59:890 (1) - same as the opinion of above, though plays fine, wiggling slider is not a good choice here. 00:58:605 (1,2,1) should be similar patterns.
17:14 P o M u T a: ここはどうしても
17:14 P o M u T a: 譲れなかったりもします。。
17:14 Guy: fm
17:14 P o M u T a: 01:17:033 (11,12) - the pattern is trick for the spacing between them. It seems that there is 1/2 beat between the two sliders but actually it is 1/4 beat. So
17:14 P o M u T a: 01:17:033 (11,12) - the pattern is trick for the spacing between them. It seems that there is 1/2 beat between the two sliders but actually it is 1/4 beat. So
17:14 P o M u T a: ここもかなぁ
17:15 P o M u T a: 実際的には1/4リズムに値する置き方だし僕はどうも理解できん。＿。
17:15 Guy: なるほどなあ
17:15 P o M u T a: 要するにここも５連打が妥当らしいけどねぇ
17:15 P o M u T a: プレイ的にこういうのも欲しいという
17:15 Guy: まあmust fixじゃないし
17:15 P o M u T a: 01:28:819 (5,2) - manually stack them (move the later slider 1 grid right and down, or up and left) so that player can read it properly, especially with hidden mod.
17:15 P o M u T a: 01:28:819 (5,2) - manually stack them (move the later slider 1 grid right and down, or up and left) so that player can read it properly, especially with hidden mod.
17:15 P o M u T a: ここは直せそうだけど
17:15 Guy: この辺はスルーでもいいんじゃないかな
17:16 P o M u T a: 直し方が分からん
17:16 P o M u T a: ｋ
17:16 P o M u T a: guyさん的に今の5,2は
17:16 P o M u T a: みにずらいです？
17:16 Guy: えっとですね
17:16 Guy: Hiddenの場合だとこれはヤバイですね
17:16 P o M u T a: ....
17:16 P o M u T a: guyさんなら
17:16 P o M u T a: どう直します。。？
17:17 P o M u T a: 俺には
17:17 Guy: リピートにスタックするのはHiddenの敵だし・・
17:17 P o M u T a: 手が終えないorz...
17:17 Guy: 考えてみますね
17:17 P o M u T a: お願いします・・
17:17 P o M u T a: あとはほぼfixですね
17:17 Guy: 01:29:890 (2) -
17:17 Guy: これを
17:17 P o M u T a: ほい！
17:17 Guy: 01:28:605 (3) -
17:17 Guy: にスタックすればいいのでは・・・？
17:17 Guy: 特にスタイル的には変わらないし
17:18 P o M u T a: おおｗｗ
17:18 P o M u T a: porですｗ
17:18 P o M u T a: proですｗ
17:18 P o M u T a: 全難易度に言えることですが
17:18 P o M u T a: 最後の
17:18 P o M u T a: 1/6は
17:18 P o M u T a: 音量50%で
17:18 P o M u T a: 修正お願いします！
17:19 P o M u T a: こちらも変えておきます！
17:19 Guy: おっけーです！
17:19 P o M u T a: moddingありでした～
17:19 Guy: いえいえ(・´з`・)
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
2,049 posts
Joined March 2009
Guy

popner wrote:

[Guy's Mikoto]
01:03:748 (1) - remove whistle from head? You did not add whistle on 01:00:319 (1), so the whistle here is inconsistent. - I don't pour whistle into the place with finish.(e.g. 01:14:033 (1) - , 01:27:748 (1) - )
01:20:462 (5,6,1) - nazi - not exactly in a line, I think it is better to put them perfectly. - fixed
01:20:890 (1,2,3) - nazi - the spacing between them are not same. - fixed
02:20:033 (1) - decrease the volume of the slider to follow the volume change in music better? - fixed
Thank you popner ;)
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

popner wrote:

Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

[Kyouzi]
The claps in this diff seems messy. Try to put claps on 2nd & 4th white tick of every stanza. If it appears in middle of a slider, then ignore it or use slidertick/sliderbody/storyboard clap. Current hitsounds are really inconsistent in this diff.
01:29:462 (2,3) - make a better blanket? Like this:
SPOILER
Just need to move the last node 1 grid right.
02:20:033 (2) - decrease the volume of the slider to follow the volume change in music better?
All fixed!!!

[Mai]
00:38:890 (3,4,5) - the triple have nothing to follow in the music, so remove 00:38:998 (4)? fix!but, anotehr method~!
00:47:033 (2,3,4) - the sudden jumps does not works well here imo. You used much smaller spacing in the previous part, but there are no big difference between previous part and this one, in intensity of rhythm and music. okay o.o/
00:58:605 (1,1) - curve them in same shape? Or copy one from the other. fix!
00:59:890 (1) - same as the opinion of above, though plays fine, wiggling slider is not a good choice here. 00:58:605 (1,2,1) should be similar patterns. oh, i like this slider.... sorry keep for it!!
01:10:176 (4,3) - not a very serious problem but it is better to avoid overlap for the two sliders. fix~
01:17:033 (11,12) - the pattern is trick for the spacing between them. It seems that there is 1/2 beat between the two sliders but actually it is 1/4 beat. So fmm,sound is ok and i think enjoy part... sorry no ._.
01:28:819 (5,2) - manually stack them (move the later slider 1 grid right and down, or up and left) so that player can read it properly, especially with hidden mod. okay!
01:34:176 (6,2) - not stack properly okay!
02:05:247 (5) - move up a little to make a wiggling movement? like this: yes!
SPOILER
02:12:319 (1) - put this note somewhere else? It is a little hard to read such a stack closely after a spinner. Random example: ok
SPOILER
02:17:462 (1) - suggestion: move to the symmetric position of 02:17:247 (6)? It seems that the flow can be better. fixed!
02:20:033 (2) - same as [Kyouzi] fixed all diff! 50%!

Need more work on shape and flow ;_;
GL~
thanks !
lkx_Shore
1,454 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[General]
Hi
So lazy here .-.
02:20:033 - Maybe use soft is better

[Mai]
00:39:533 (4) - Move to x416 y28?
02:17:247 (6) - Move to x156 y140?
02:17:462 (1) - Move to x320 y316?

[fbs's Natsuki]
00:57:319 (2) - move to x360 y200?

[Other]
sorry,so late
Goodluck
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

lkx_Shore wrote:

[General]
Hi
So lazy here .-.
02:20:033 - Maybe use soft is better no my diff

[Mai]
00:39:533 (4) - Move to x416 y28? umm,keep
02:17:247 (6) - Move to x156 y140? ok
02:17:462 (1) - Move to x320 y316? ok

[Other]
sorry,so late
Goodluck
thx~
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec

lkx_Shore wrote:

00:57:319 (2) - move to x360 y200? um...many this mod. finally done.
thx~
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
Hello, from queue, sorry for being late...

General:

Kyouzi:
00:46:176 (2) - slightly covered by hitbrust from 00:44:462 (4) - which is bad for easy
01:07:176 (1) - same^
01:18:747 (2) - ok, again for this - this is not necessary to fix but consider in your future eases to avoid that :3

Guy's Mikoto:
AR+1 OD+1
00:49:605 (2) - straight just look not so-good imo, little curve? - http://puu.sh/29Htc
01:38:033 (1) - blanket? http://puu.sh/29Hxj
01:39:748 (3) - ^
02:19:176 (5) - again this straight slider look awkward, maybe try this - http://puu.sh/29HzD

fbs's Natsuki:
00:29:355 (5,1,2,3) -
00:30:855 (6,7) -
00:32:783 (6,1,2,3) - this 3 parts plays strange for me but nothing wrong I guess, just saying..
00:41:890 (4) - this slider looks bad, make something like this? - http://puu.sh/29HII

Mai:
01:17:033 (11,12) - that was little unexpected jump after 0.8 0.8 0.8 and few compressed streams

That's all I can suggest and mention. :3 Nice map. Good Luck!
P o M u T a
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Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Sieg wrote:

Hello, from queue, sorry for being late...

General:

Kyouzi:
00:46:176 (2) - slightly covered by hitbrust from 00:44:462 (4) - which is bad for easy ok,next try.. but, not change all them
01:07:176 (1) - same^
01:18:747 (2) - ok, again for this - this is not necessary to fix but consider in your future eases to avoid that :3

Mai:
01:17:033 (11,12) - that was little unexpected jump after 0.8 0.8 0.8 and few compressed streams yep,but, i like this part >,< sorry no!

That's all I can suggest and mention. :3 Nice map. Good Luck!
thanks modding ;)
100 post O:
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
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Joined March 2009
Guy
All fixed!
Thank you for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/2abEZ
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Guy wrote:

All fixed!
Thank you for modding ;)

http://puu.sh/2abEZ
@Guy.... Update Done 8-)
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
>sieg
sry, all no.
but,thx mod~
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Check the title in Guy's Mikoto diff.It got garbled.

Kyouzi

  1. the whole diff seems fine

Guy's Mikoto

  1. 02:20:033 (2) - add green tick here to mute the slider tick ? As said below in Mai diff

fbs's Natsuki

  1. 00:38:140 (2) - 4 grid up to x176 y36
  2. 00:50:890 (5) - move to x20 y64 ? seems better
  3. 00:55:176 (1) - not so necessary to put such a big round slider...
  4. 00:59:033 (2,4) - how about stacking these at two x164 y304 and place ③ to x328 y132 ? just suggestion
  5. 01:00:962 (3) - suggest to use curved slider
  6. 01:54:962 (6) - 4 gird left to x28 y240
  7. 01:56:890 (1,2,3) - really not so beautiful... at least trying place the 02:00:319 (3) - exactly surrounded by ②slider would be better than doing nothing
  8. 02:20:033 (2) - add green tick here to mute the slider tick ? As said below in Mai diff

Mai

  1. 01:15:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - sounds not suitable for the music...
  2. 01:04:176 (2) - how about rotating the slider by 10° clockwise ? seems better
  3. 01:50:462 (2,3) - not obvious arc, more curved or change into straight ?
  4. 02:20:033 (2) - add green tick here to mute the slider tick ? e.g. at 02:20:248

Good luck ~
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Mod from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Check the title in Guy's Mikoto diff.It got garbled.thx check fixed


Kyouzi

  1. the whole diff seems fine

Mai

  1. 01:15:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - sounds not suitable for the music...
  2. 01:04:176 (2) - how about rotating the slider by 10° clockwise ? seems better
  3. 01:50:462 (2,3) - not obvious arc, more curved or change into straight ?
  4. 02:20:033 (2) - add green tick here to mute the slider tick ? e.g. at 02:20:248
sorry all no. because i think better point. but, last suggestion is keep now.. maybe unrank? so,sliderslider and tick mute. so keep now.
Good luck ~
@Guy.... update your map plz. so,bug fixed~
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
blue = done
red = ignore
black = Leave it to pomuta

qkenan wrote:

[fbs's Natsuki]
00:38:140 (2) - 4 grid up to x176 y36
00:50:890 (5) - move to x20 y64 ? seems better
00:55:176 (1) - not so necessary to put such a big round slider...
00:59:033 (2,4) - how about stacking these at two x164 y304 and place ③ to x328 y132 ? just suggestion
01:00:962 (3) - suggest to use curved slider
01:54:962 (6) - 4 gird left to x28 y240
01:56:890 (1,2,3) - really not so beautiful... at least trying place the 02:00:319 (3) - exactly surrounded by ②slider would be better than doing nothing
02:20:033 (2) - add green tick here to mute the slider tick ? As said below in Mai diff [/list][/notice]
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Kyouzi
I like the sound of the sliderticks owo.
also, the new spinner from ppy really fits the video on the background, hehe
really nice diff. The rhythm and spacing were both good and provided a nice pacing.

Guy's Mikoto
huh, I didnt get the video on the background on this diff D:
Nice diff here as well, but I'm a bit worried about the diff spread now since this map is very similar to kyouzi.

fbs's Natsuki
shouldnt it be "fbs' Natsuki"? hurr grammar
this diff is not bad, but something is wrong with the flow. I think the spacing is too small compared to the sliderspeed which disturbs the pacing a bit.

Mai
getting the same flow feeling as fbs' diff here, but the jumps here are nice. A few patterns have a too small spacing with too fast sliders which imo doesn't fit in this song. I actually nearly failed on my testrun >.> some jumps felt a bit random, especially near the end
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

happy30 wrote:

Testplay ~ no kudosu please
Replays

Kyouzi
I like the sound of the sliderticks owo.
also, the new spinner from ppy really fits the video on the background, hehe
really nice diff. The rhythm and spacing were both good and provided a nice pacing.

Guy's Mikoto
huh, I didnt get the video on the background on this diff D:
Nice diff here as well, but I'm a bit worried about the diff spread now since this map is very similar to kyouzi.

fbs's Natsuki
shouldnt it be "fbs' Natsuki"? hurr grammar
this diff is not bad, but something is wrong with the flow. I think the spacing is too small compared to the sliderspeed which disturbs the pacing a bit.

Mai
getting the same flow feeling as fbs' diff here, but the jumps here are nice. A few patterns have a too small spacing with too fast sliders which imo doesn't fit in this song. I actually nearly failed on my testrun >.> some jumps felt a bit random, especially near the end
thanks comment! and Guy diff add video!
MiLu
426 posts
Joined March 2010
MiLu
こんにちは　リクエストありがとうございます :3
全部提案なので気に入らなかったら無視してください~

[General]
・tagsに"CIRCUS"を追加したほうがいいとおもいます。あとは"opening"とか入れてもいいと思います

[Kyouzi]
公式HPを見る限り"Kyoji"が正しいと思います

01:15:319 (2,3) - こんな音取りにしてみては？

01:24:319 (1) - このスピンが何にあわせて置いてるのか分かりませんでした...スピンの開始を01:26:033 - にして、そこまではnoteを置いてみては？
02:20:033 (2) - 音が大きいのが気になりました。Insaneと同じように音量50%で良いと思います

[Guy's Mikoto]
01:12:319 (3) - このスライダーの中にある音を取ってみては？こういうのとか

02:03:855 - 02:04:498 - 片方の緑線けしていいとおもいます
02:19:069 - 不要な緑線です
02:19:176 (5) - 他の難易度には全てついてるのでNC

[fbs's Natsuki]
最初から最後までずっとDS通りに置かれているのが.....
Hardなんだし音やボーカルが強調されているところはジャンプさせたほうが良いと思います
00:34:605 (1,2,3) - 前の00:32:462 (5,6,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りでいいと思います
01:56:890 (1,2) - 形があんまり綺麗じゃないのと、その直後の3と2のスライダーが被ってしまってます。3に被せるようにしてみては？
SPOILER
02:14:033 (1,2,3) - ↑↑と同じ

[Mai]
00:48:319 (1) - 始点のfinishをremove
00:50:462 (5,6) - スペーシングが狭すぎるのでもっと離したほうがいいと思うのと、この譜面のパターンだと5番のスライダーの折り返しは1回のほうがいいとおもいます
00:51:748 (1) - と00:53:462 (1) - だけNormalのfinishになってるのが気になります...
01:10:605 (1) - 特にパターンでもなくここにだけwhistleがついているので浮いてるように感じます

しょーもないmodばっかりでごめんなさい！
good luck~
Guy
Former osu! Champion: 2014
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Joined March 2009
Guy

MiLu wrote:

[Guy's Mikoto]
01:12:319 (3) - このスライダーの中にある音を取ってみては？こういうのとか - 一度試してみて良いと思ったのですが、その後の流れを大きく変えてしまい、修正が困難になってしまったので無理に変える必要もないと考え、すみませんが変更なしです。

02:03:855 - 02:04:498 - 片方の緑線けしていいとおもいます
02:19:069 - 不要な緑線です
02:19:176 (5) - 他の難易度には全てついてるのでNC
１つ除いてfixedです！Modありがとうございました ;)
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

MiLu wrote:

こんにちは　リクエストありがとうございます :3
全部提案なので気に入らなかったら無視してください~ 迅速な対応感激しています

[General]
・tagsに"CIRCUS"を追加したほうがいいとおもいます。あとは"opening"とか入れてもいいと思います 全diff追加しました。

[Kyouzi]
公式HPを見る限り"Kyoji"が正しいと思います 恐れ入ります

01:15:319 (2,3) - こんな音取りにしてみては？採用です

01:24:319 (1) - このスピンが何にあわせて置いてるのか分かりませんでした...スピンの開始を01:26:033 - にして、そこまではnoteを置いてみては？ 参りました
02:20:033 (2) - 音が大きいのが気になりました。Insaneと同じように音量50%で良いと思います 了解です。

[Mai]
00:48:319 (1) - 始点のfinishをremove 必要がありませんでしたね。少しfinishを乱用しすぎているかもしれません。
00:50:462 (5,6) - スペーシングが狭すぎるのでもっと離したほうがいいと思うのと、この譜面のパターンだと5番のスライダーの折り返しは1回のほうがいいとおもいます 出来る限りのことは尽くしました。
00:51:748 (1) - と00:53:462 (1) - だけNormalのfinishになってるのが気になります... 1個目をsoftにして、2個目は必要無さそうなので削除という形でいきます。
01:10:605 (1) - 特にパターンでもなくここにだけwhistleがついているので浮いてるように感じます whistle君は絶滅しました。

しょーもないmodばっかりでごめんなさい！ 素晴らしいmodでした。輝かしいです。自信を持ってください。
good luck~
最高の夜をありがとうございました。
frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec

MiLu wrote:

[fbs's Natsuki]
最初から最後までずっとDS通りに置かれているのが.....
Hardなんだし音やボーカルが強調されているところはジャンプさせたほうが良いと思います
検討します。が、とりあえず変更なしです。

00:34:605 (1,2,3) - 前の00:32:462 (5,6,1,2,3) - と同じ音取りでいいと思います
no

01:56:890 (1,2) - 形があんまり綺麗じゃないのと、その直後の3と2のスライダーが被ってしまってます。3に被せるようにしてみては？
done

SPOILER
02:14:033 (1,2,3) - ↑↑と同じ
no
Modありがとうございます。
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
Hi sorry for delay.


[fbs's Natsuki]
00:51:640 - let the end kiai section snap to here?


[Insane]
00:54:426 (4) - nazi spacing. X-1
01:03:747 (1) - the whistle feel weird here, for this whole part the using of the whistles seems randomly, so I suggest to remove it.
01:20:890 (1) - ^
01:23:890 (4) - ^


nothing serious, all of above are nazi suggestion, just as the modder before me said, the flow and slidershape stuff can still be improved in some level. I am not sure what to do next with this map, so call me when you have any reply and we can discuss it.
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
Did some bad IRC modding. :3

03:03 UnitedWeSin: 01:22:390 (5,6,1) - why triplet?
03:04 P o M u T a: oh missing.
03:04 P o M u T a: maybe (6) delete ok?
03:06 UnitedWeSin: hmm yes
03:06 P o M u T a: ok
03:06 P o M u T a: fix!
03:06 UnitedWeSin: follows vocals better
03:06 UnitedWeSin: that's the sort of thing that popner is mad about
03:07 P o M u T a: okay
03:07 UnitedWeSin: 01:48:747 (2,3,4) - confusing imo
03:08 UnitedWeSin: 01:48:319 (1) - follows vocals
03:08 UnitedWeSin: 01:48:747 (2,3) - is kind of overmap
03:08 P o M u T a: fmm
03:08 UnitedWeSin: also hitsounds too loud imo ._.
03:09 UnitedWeSin: 02:15:426 (7) - delete
03:09 UnitedWeSin: and have triplet at 02:15:533 -
03:09 UnitedWeSin: 02:14:569 (3) - delete
03:09 UnitedWeSin: ._.
03:10 UnitedWeSin: sorry I don't want to make you change
03:10 UnitedWeSin: but music doesn't call for that stream
03:10 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tCS5
03:10 UnitedWeSin: music is that
03:12 UnitedWeSin: 01:16:498 (7) - delete is better imo
03:12 UnitedWeSin: and make jump to triplet at 01:16:605 -
03:12 UnitedWeSin: stacked
03:13 P o M u T a: 1:16:498 thiis place keep sorry
03:13 UnitedWeSin: don't be sorry :3
03:14 UnitedWeSin: 01:24:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
03:14 P o M u T a: 2:14:569, sorry this place too
03:14 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tCVw
03:15 UnitedWeSin: how about chaging to that pattern
03:15 UnitedWeSin: don't be sorry ._.
03:15 UnitedWeSin: please don't change if you don't like suggestion
03:16 UnitedWeSin: 01:26:033 (1) -
03:16 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tCXl
03:16 UnitedWeSin: make more curved
03:16 UnitedWeSin: fits more
03:17 P o M u T a: ok
03:18 UnitedWeSin: 01:39:747 (1,2,3,4) - spacing weird
03:18 P o M u T a: ?
03:18 P o M u T a: oh
03:18 P o M u T a: okay
03:18 P o M u T a: notice
03:18 P o M u T a: 0.6 fix
03:22 UnitedWeSin: hmm
03:22 UnitedWeSin: 01:41:033 (4,1) - suggest changing placement
03:22 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tD2H
03:22 UnitedWeSin: 01:42:319 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
03:23 UnitedWeSin: make stream more interesting
03:23 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tD3E
03:23 UnitedWeSin: 01:41:033 (4,1,2) -
03:23 UnitedWeSin: juts idea :3
03:24 P o M u T a: ok try
03:26 UnitedWeSin: 01:50:890 (3,4,5) - move to the left so that the 4 is centered
03:26 UnitedWeSin: and stacked on the 01:52:390 (6) -
03:26 P o M u T a: ah, i can't making
03:26 P o M u T a: i not have skill
03:26 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tD6N
03:27 UnitedWeSin: sorry too fast ._.
03:27 UnitedWeSin: use "convert slider to stream
03:27 P o M u T a: i easy sugg and take
03:27 UnitedWeSin: "
03:28 UnitedWeSin: I give code if u want
03:29 P o M u T a: ok i fixed this
03:30 UnitedWeSin: 01:38:890 (3) - move to (184,216) for blanket?
03:32 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tDbP
03:32 UnitedWeSin: :3
03:32 P o M u T a: fix
03:32 P o M u T a: this?
03:33 UnitedWeSin: 01:43:605 (2,3,4) -
03:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tDdf
03:33 UnitedWeSin: ._.
03:34 P o M u T a: i confuse
03:34 P o M u T a: many
03:34 UnitedWeSin: sorry
03:34 UnitedWeSin: I bad at irc mod
03:35 P o M u T a: this code?
03:35 P o M u T a: what?
03:35 UnitedWeSin: code for 01:41:033 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
03:35 UnitedWeSin: actually
03:35 UnitedWeSin: 01:38:890 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1) -
03:35 UnitedWeSin: and 01:41:890 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) -
03:35 UnitedWeSin: ><
03:36 P o M u T a: (3) code start>
03:36 P o M u T a: ?
03:36 UnitedWeSin: 01:38:890 (3) -
03:36 P o M u T a: i don't kniow code place
03:36 UnitedWeSin: 01:38:890 -
03:36 P o M u T a: start?
03:36 UnitedWeSin: 01:38:890 - is start
03:36 P o M u T a: ok
03:36 P o M u T a: try
03:36 UnitedWeSin: 01:43:176 - is end
03:40 UnitedWeSin: 01:52:176 (4,5,6) -
03:40 UnitedWeSin: better to delete 5
03:41 UnitedWeSin: have 4 and 6 stack
03:41 UnitedWeSin: follow vocal
03:42 P o M u T a: code accept
03:42 P o M u T a: thanks you
03:42 P o M u T a: very much
03:42 UnitedWeSin: fix 01:43:605 (2,3) -
03:42 UnitedWeSin: did you>
03:42 UnitedWeSin: ?
03:42 P o M u T a: forget
03:42 P o M u T a: i fix it
03:42 P o M u T a: wait
03:42 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tDdf
03:42 UnitedWeSin: better imo
03:43 UnitedWeSin: 01:56:890 (1) - make symmetrical?
03:44 P o M u T a: ?
03:44 UnitedWeSin: umm
03:45 UnitedWeSin:
03:45 UnitedWeSin: :O
03:45 UnitedWeSin:
03:45 P o M u T a: how tu fix?
03:45 P o M u T a: to
03:45 UnitedWeSin: 対称の
03:45 UnitedWeSin: ><
03:45 P o M u T a: o.o
03:45 P o M u T a: sorry
03:46 P o M u T a: my noob shit fuck duck
03:46 UnitedWeSin: >< no sorry
03:46 P o M u T a: and suck
03:46 P o M u T a: sorry
03:46 UnitedWeSin: nihongo hard desu
03:47 UnitedWeSin: 01:56:890 (1) - just make straight slider?
03:47 UnitedWeSin: fits better into 01:55:176 (1,2,3,4) - stream
03:48 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tDpL
03:48 P o M u T a: ok
03:49 P o M u T a: fix
03:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:29:248 (1,2,3,4,5) - why this stream .5 spacing
03:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:32:676 (1,2,3,4,5) - this one .8
03:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:176 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this .6
03:50 P o M u T a: ._.
03:51 P o M u T a: 5 month ago making part
03:51 P o M u T a: my noob mapper map
03:51 UnitedWeSin: doesn't matter I guess
03:51 P o M u T a: bigginner mapping ._.
03:51 P o M u T a: yes, this ds not good..
03:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:36:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
03:52 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2tDtQ
03:52 UnitedWeSin: try like that?
03:52 UnitedWeSin: straight stream fits nice imo
03:53 P o M u T a: ok try
03:53 UnitedWeSin: sorry going to stop
03:53 UnitedWeSin: :D
03:53 UnitedWeSin: my mod is bad
03:54 UnitedWeSin: try to work with that and let me know if you need more
03:55 P o M u T a: thanks very much
04:00 P o M u T a: oh, you irc mod post please, i fix reason want ._.
04:00 UnitedWeSin: oh ok, should I post log?
04:01 P o M u T a: yes
04:01 P o M u T a: please ;_;
P o M u T a
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Nymph wrote:

Hi sorry for delay.


[fbs's Natsuki]
00:51:640 - let the end kiai section snap to here?　Fixed myself.


[Insane]
00:54:426 (4) - nazi spacing. X-1 fixed!
01:03:747 (1) - the whistle feel weird here, for this whole part the using of the whistles seems randomly, so I suggest to remove it. okay!
01:20:890 (1) - ^ okay!
01:23:890 (4) - ^ okay!


nothing serious, all of above are nazi suggestion, just as the modder before me said, the flow and slidershape stuff can still be improved in some level. I am not sure what to do next with this map, so call me when you have any reply and we can discuss it.
my opinion: i talked IRC UnitedWesin... so Insane diff wrong part some fixed. and uneasy element.
The present state does not include the regrets. And one's; think that did its best. (sorry poor eng)
and tag; add pomuta
Edit: i talked fbc... so, Hard diff is no problem now. so, keep going.　
　　　
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alright :) wish you good luck
P o M u T a
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Nymph wrote:

alright :) wish you good luck
Thanks Nymph :>
those
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I'm looking at around +10 for the current offset... can anyone confirm with me?
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+8 for me
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I agree with those im getting +10
P o M u T a
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finnaly offset+8 done.
thanks everyone.
wcx19911123
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sorry, but the current offset is wrong
it should be around 27738(-14), I promise mine would be better(please try to judge offset with the hardest diff or find some others if you can't play it)
P o M u T a
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all diff fixed offset. (-14)
i think fit offset. so, i can get SS.
thanks you.
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wcx19911123 wrote:

sorry, but the current offset is wrong
it should be around 27738(-14), I promise mine would be better(please try to judge offset with the hardest diff or find some others if you can't play it)
Deviation is pretty wide (16ms) so would appreciate more than just "current offset is wrong". I get SS with my suggested offset.
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I think that an opinion of wcx is right.
P o M u T a
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umm, I agree to wcx offset, too.
P o M u T a
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My opinion: wcx's offset fine.
Charles445
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I'm getting 27744. Tested till I got 0% with 0 ms deviation.
P o M u T a
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Charles445 wrote:

I'm getting 27744. Tested till I got 0% with 0 ms deviation.
thanks Charles445.
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sorry for inconvenience. so timing changed back to the first one before this map is bubbled. nothing changed, here is your bubble back.
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thanks Nymph!
Faust
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IRC log of all suggestions given in-game a couple of days ago.
Just a couple of minor touching up here and there, so the prior bubble still retains it's standing.

Log #1 is as follows.

SPOILER
08:39 P o M u T a: hi ._. can you irc mod ;_;?
08:39 Faust: sure
08:39 P o M u T a: thanks you ._.
08:40 *P o M u T a is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/194272 ALI PROJECT - Ashura Hime]
08:40 P o M u T a: btw, Normal and Hard diff is guest diff ...
08:40 Faust: I'm aware.
08:40 P o M u T a: okay..
08:46 Faust: On your Mai difficulty, the linear patterns are completely intentional ?
08:47 Faust: Just curious as to why you don't curve the streams.
08:48 P o M u T a: umm..
08:50 P o M u T a: linear stream is beautiful. so, i like it...
08:50 Faust: Ah.
08:51 P o M u T a: curve stream used this map.
08:51 Faust: Hmm, could suggest you adjust the angles for the stream.
08:52 Faust: maybe I'm not used to seeing long 45 degree streams
08:52 P o M u T a: fmm
08:54 P o M u T a: i made 45 degree streams, but, little weird seems. so, i changed linear stream.
08:54 P o M u T a: example place
08:54 P o M u T a: 00:37:172 (1) - [
08:55 P o M u T a: * (3)
08:55 P o M u T a: and flow is better now.
08:55 P o M u T a: this place
08:56 Faust: http://puu.sh/2DZdf.jpg ?
08:56 Faust: what do you think.
08:56 P o M u T a: oh
08:56 P o M u T a: i like it.
08:56 P o M u T a: but,
08:56 P o M u T a: between us i really can't make curve stream poor ._.
08:57 P o M u T a: if you can, this stream code want. i try this ...
08:57 Faust: haha
08:57 Faust: why do you think you're poor at it though
08:57 Faust: it's not too hard
08:57 P o M u T a: oh...
08:58 P o M u T a: my curve is very weird ... really really. i use convert slider to stream only ...
08:59 Faust: lol
08:59 P o M u T a: i am sad
08:59 P o M u T a: but, this map little old mapping
08:59 Faust: I noticed.
08:59 P o M u T a: now... maybe do my best.
08:59 Faust: have you tried remapping to your current abilities ?
09:00 P o M u T a: but, i not think bad stream. so, linear is beautiful and playable.
09:00 P o M u T a: i try this place.
09:02 P o M u T a: http://puu.sh/2DZdf.jpg anything of this kind
09:02 Faust: Sure, why not.
09:02 P o M u T a: you dislike linear stream?
09:03 Faust: Nah.
09:03 Faust: I just think the straight streams feel awkward to play against this song.
09:04 P o M u T a: (1,2) 00:36:315 - this is line, (3) is line better i thought
09:04 P o M u T a: fmm, okay.
09:10 Faust: actually, did you map this before your other 2 ranked maps ?
09:10 P o M u T a: yep
09:10 Faust: haha, alright.
09:11 P o M u T a: :3
09:11 Faust: If you like it the way it is right now without giving it a remap, then I'll be happy to rank. Give me a few more minutes to check through.
09:11 Faust: let me know when you've updated.
09:11 P o M u T a: oh, i made stream.
09:11 Faust: and I'll do one last check.
09:11 P o M u T a: (curve)
09:12 P o M u T a: sorry poor english (read and write) me
09:12 Faust: no worries.
09:12 P o M u T a: i am update→ call you?_?
09:12 Faust: yes
09:12 P o M u T a: maybe... your mean.
09:12 P o M u T a: okay~
09:14 P o M u T a: updated
09:15 P o M u T a: 00:37:172 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - how about you? this.
09:15 P o M u T a: i made curve stream, but, maybe weird ._.
09:15 Faust: looks fine to me
09:15 Faust: haha
09:15 P o M u T a: oh..
09:15 Faust: it's totally okay
09:15 P o M u T a: i am glad ;w;
09:15 P o M u T a: thanks you really much.
09:16 Faust: np
09:19 Faust: hmm, is frost-b-spec around >
09:19 P o M u T a: oh
09:19 P o M u T a: btw, 1 quesiton
09:19 P o M u T a: Mai diff
09:19 Faust: sure
09:19 P o M u T a: thanks
09:19 P o M u T a: 00:58:172 (1) - this
09:19 Faust: ah
09:19 P o M u T a: maybe 1/3 sound slider note ?
09:20 P o M u T a: and reverse
09:20 P o M u T a: idk
09:20 P o M u T a: but, sound much.
09:20 P o M u T a: how about you this?
09:20 P o M u T a: 1/3 reverse slider or, 1 note better?
09:21 Faust: 1 note is better
09:21 P o M u T a: okay~
09:21 P o M u T a: thanks check
09:23 P o M u T a: fbs is very old mapper. so, feel old mapping. o_o
09:23 Faust: haha..
09:23 Faust: that's not an issue
09:23 P o M u T a: :3
09:23 Faust: if he's around it'd be great
09:23 P o M u T a: wow
09:23 Faust: I have a few NC suggestions for him
09:24 Faust: but I don't know if you have permission to edit his diff for him
09:24 P o M u T a: oh, maybe myself fix can. because easy issue, leave to me.
09:25 P o M u T a: if note i cant.
09:25 Faust: Alright then
09:25 Faust: sure
09:25 P o M u T a: (change)
09:25 P o M u T a: NC around ok~. roger.
09:25 Faust: On Natsuki:
09:26 Faust: 00:29:351 (5) - add NC, remove NC on the next note.
09:26 Faust: 00:32:779 (6) - same for this
09:26 Faust: 00:34:601 (1) - Help curve this slider better
09:26 P o M u T a: done
09:27 P o M u T a: help curve?_?
09:27 Faust: make a nicer curve
09:28 P o M u T a: fmm, i don' know xD (because i poor curve maker ._.)
09:28 Faust: 01:09:958 (1) - remove NC
09:28 P o M u T a: i tell fbc this mod. (but, now offline)
09:28 Faust: sure
09:31 Faust: couple of small problems here and there.
09:31 Faust: 01:54:958 (6) - for example
09:31 P o M u T a: oh
09:31 Faust: last note has a different DS
09:31 P o M u T a: lol
09:31 P o M u T a: ok, i tell xp
09:31 Faust: it's a small problem, but it's better to polish the map
09:32 Faust: once ranked, you can't do anything
09:32 P o M u T a: roger :D
09:32 Faust: so it's better to do your best to make sure it's looking really good while Pending
09:32 P o M u T a: o.o
09:41 P o M u T a: btw, easy and normal?_? check?
09:42 P o M u T a: hard diff quote answer, little later~
09:52 Faust: alright
09:52 Faust: Mikoto:
09:52 Faust: 01:22:601 (3) - move 1 grid down
09:52 P o M u T a: Guy is online, dilectly IRC? or, my?
09:52 Faust: nah, just help him fix some minor stuff
09:52 P o M u T a: ok i'll check~
09:52 Faust: it won't affect the map a lot
09:54 P o M u T a: :3
09:55 Faust: I checked Easy & Normal yesterday
09:55 P o M u T a: oh :o
09:55 Faust: didn't find anything, which is why I wanted to IRC mod
09:55 Faust: update the map and I'll wait for frost-b-spec
09:55 P o M u T a: ok and thanks :3/
15:06 Faust: frost-b not around yet ?
15:07 P o M u T a: yep.. maybe tonight, come...o.o i don't know.
15:07 Faust: I have 3 hours left before I leave for camp. Haha.
15:08 P o M u T a: easy, normal , insane is upload done. hard is wait time ._.
15:08 P o M u T a: ;w;
15:08 P o M u T a: nice camp xD
15:08 Faust: If until then he does not come I will only be back on Friday night.
15:08 Faust: 26th
15:08 Faust: lol
15:08 P o M u T a: O:
15:08 Faust: don't hesitate to approach another MAT or BAT within that period of time.
15:09 Faust: or if you can wait, I don't mind.
15:09 P o M u T a: i can wait ~. if another MAT/BAT come, all ignore xD
15:09 Faust: I'll post this log in the thread so the next MAT or BAT who mods it knows what is going on
15:09 Faust: haha
15:09 Faust: you should try I guess
15:09 Faust: ask Pokie or something
15:09 Faust: lol

- Most recent log on 26/4/2013 -

Applied 10% volume setting to the first slidertick on the last slider concurrent on all difficulties.

SPOILER
20:33 Faust: Good evening.
20:33 P o M u T a: :D
20:33 P o M u T a: good morning :3
20:33 Faust: I'll recheck your map now
20:33 Faust: haha, it's evening here
20:34 P o M u T a: :D
20:34 P o M u T a: thanks you xD
20:34 P o M u T a: xO
20:39 Faust: anyway
20:39 Faust: just 1 last suggestion
20:39 P o M u T a: oh
20:39 P o M u T a: ok
20:39 Faust: 02:20:136 - silence the slidertick ?
20:39 P o M u T a: slience method i don't know o:
20:40 P o M u T a: silence tick file need?
20:40 Faust: just make an inherited timing section and put the volume to 10%
20:40 Faust: lol
20:40 Faust: green line
20:40 P o M u T a: 10% only setting :3?
20:40 P o M u T a: ok
20:40 P o M u T a: all diff?
20:41 Faust: yup
20:41 Faust: is that alright with you ?
20:42 P o M u T a: yeah
20:42 P o M u T a: i'll soon setting=
20:42 P o M u T a: :D
20:43 Faust: let me know when you update
20:46 P o M u T a: 02:20:136 - stack green line (10%) ?
20:46 P o M u T a: and this same O:?
20:46 P o M u T a: 02:20:565
20:46 P o M u T a: v
20:46 P o M u T a: 02:20:565 - this
20:47 Faust: basically, make the slidertick very soft
20:48 Faust: 02:20:244 - this is where the slider tick is at. So make a 10% volume section here
20:48 Faust: then a 50% volume section at 02:20:386
20:48 P o M u T a: ok~
20:48 P o M u T a: i try
20:50 P o M u T a: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/723106
20:50 P o M u T a: this is correct?
20:50 Faust: yup
20:50 Faust: correct
20:50 P o M u T a: ok~. and another diff go to change~.
20:54 P o M u T a: umm, sampleset soft?
20:54 Faust: sure
20:54 P o M u T a: ok
20:55 P o M u T a: 10%volume greenline ( sampleset changed soft!)
20:59 P o M u T a: updated :p
20:59 Faust: alright
20:59 P o M u T a: all diff :3/

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