[General]
- mp3 bitrate is 320 kb/s. You know what to do. (I'm dumb and can't use Audacity, sorry)
- Add [Luanny] to the tags.
- 00:36:073 (2) - Remove the whistle from the body of this slider. Sounds really odd. Normally, I don't really have a problem with them, but this one is pretty loud.
- 00:50:254 (2) - ^
- 01:38:254 (2) - Shift this slider up a bit so that you can align it's end with the start of (4). Symmetry, yay.
- 02:20:313 (1,1) - You should probably give newer players more time after the spinner to recover before going straight into an object at the next beat. My solution would be to shorten the slider right after the spinner and move it closer to (2), like this.
- 03:18:677 (2,3) - Whistles on the bodies of these sliders are loud.
- 00:00:073 (1) - Move this two grids to the right so that it aligns with (3). I'm not a fan of lopsided triangles.
- 00:07:709 (3) - Tilt this slider diagonally so that it appears parallel to (4).
- 00:41:527 (4,1,1) - This arrangement of sliders looks a bit cluttered. I would unstack (1) from under (4) and then rearrange the following objects to your liking. It'd be worth it.
- 01:08:800 (2) - Move the node of this slider to be positioned like this. 01:07:709 (1) flows into it better like this. (2) also flows better into the next circle (aesthetically, I suppose).
- 01:45:891 (1,2) - Fit the end of (1) more neatly onto (2)'s track.
- 02:20:586 (1) - The end of this spinner is unsnapped ever so slightly. You need to snap it to the new timing section. Also, it should probably start on the next red tick rather than on a white tick since it currently doesn't follow the music very well as it is. While starting on the red tick, it starts on the vocals.
- 03:16:495 (4) - Slidertrack whistle ew
- 03:18:677 (2,4) - ^
- 01:21:891 (4,5,6) - Has relatively bad flow since with (4,5) it appears you're going downward, but (6) suddenly moves upward. I'm pretty sure the solution to this is self-explanatory.
- 02:21:955 (1) - Slider should be snapped to the next timing section. It's by like 5 ms, but oh well.
- 02:35:586 (3,4) - I read this as if (4) was directly 1/2 after (3). I would unstack (4) so that the approach circle is more easily readable.
- 02:37:631 (3,4) - I'm not a fan of this barely-overlap.