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[Rin]i'm too noob for this diff
hope i was somewhat helpful
[Rin]
- 00:36:964 (1) - the sliders before this get all steeper, but this suddenly flattens out... maybe start 00:36:064 (1) - flatter and make it so that 00:36:964 (1) - is the steepest?
- 00:54:514 - it'd be nice to have something here, since the beat is pretty strong in this section (like you did at 02:11:314 (2) - )
- 01:40:264 (3,4) - these feel awkwardly close, maybe move (3) left a little
- 02:16:564 (4) - rotate this -15 degrees about itself? so that the diagonal symmetry is better
- 02:40:714 (1,1) - these match beats in the music, but 02:42:514 (1,1) - these don't. I would use something different for the first two than for the last two, to distinguish them
- 03:08:256 (3) - i would advise against hiding this... the spaced 1/4 immediately before it is already very challenging, the hidden note adds a LOT of reading strain
- 03:22:147 (1,2,3,4) - i think this would better match the intensity of the music if it was tilted like your other symmetries
- 00:32:764 (1,2) - really hard to read in an already intense section ;;
- 01:01:114 (1,2) - i'm not sure if this is deliberate, but it's really misleading D:
- 01:56:464 (6) - NC?
- 02:39:664 (3) - the placement of this (and the following 1/4 sliders) look a little messy imo, maybe just space it from the rest of the stream with the stream's spacing? like http://puu.sh/1W9Kx
- 03:04:110 (1,2,3) - this concealed backtracking may confuse players a lot. I like the backtracking flow, but i suggest putting it somewhere where it's more visible
- 03:27:388 (3,4) - i expected (3) to be where (4) was... because the preceding part 03:26:510 (1,2,1,2) - establishes clockwise rotation
hope i was somewhat helpful