nao - Komorebi Fresnel (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

yanlu

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2013-01-11T08:35:35+00:00

Hi~ M4M from my Queue :>

[Insane]
00:46:564 (10)- x116 y352
00:48:494 (7)- more arc maybe?
01:00:227 (6,7)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkWH

[Artbox's Hard]
00:04:534 (2)- change to repeat once?
00:05:425 (3,4)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkZg
00:10:623 (4)- very hide o.o put other place?
00:19:979 (7,8)- http://puu.sh/1Ml25
00:36:910 (7,1,3)- overlap><
00:48:197 (3)- nc?
00:52:653 (5)- ^
01:12:554 (8)- chage? http://puu.sh/1Ml8e
01:21:910 (4)- hide
01:21:168 (3)- slider no rad point?(like above..01:19:979 (1,2)- )

[728's Normal]
00:36:613 (3,2)- overlap

[Easy]
fine!

sorry it's a short mod.. ><
good mapset! nothing else can say~

ganbatte rank~ 'w'/

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-01-11T14:29:31+00:00

yanlu wrote:
Hi~ M4M from my Queue :>

[Insane]
00:46:564 (10)- x116 y352 another fixed
00:48:494 (7)- more arc maybe? no fixed
01:00:227 (6,7)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkWH fixed

thanks for modding!

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-01-15T04:38:03+00:00

SPOILER

yanlu wrote:
[728's Normal]
00:36:613 (3,2)- overlap I don't know what problem with it.

Thanks for modding.

qkenan

134 posts

Joined October 2010

qkenan 2013-01-23T11:27:03+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

Since you have an Oni Taiko diff, according to recent rank criteria,You have to add another Kantan/Fuutsu Taiko diff
I'm not very sure,so you can ask others for advice.

Easy

00:46:712 You really want to blank here?I prefer add 1~2 one-beat circles but not big problem

728's Normal

00:22:356 (4,5) - Stack them at (448,192)
00:30:078 (4) - Place it at the centre
00:51:465 (1) - Not very suitable...Suggest to split it into two one-beat slider
SPOILER

Artbox's Hard

00:19:534 (6,7) - Dont fit the rhythm.Suggest↓↓
SPOILER
00:27:702 (2) - Bad shape. Make it like this 00:26:514 (5) - ?
00:32:603 Add a circle ?
00:49:088 (1,3,5) - Shapes not very consistent...Try make them smoother ?
00:58:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A little too close,farther？(1.3x or 1.4x)
01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？
01:21:168 (3) - Shape it like previous ①② slider

Insane

00:46:564 (10,1) - Place them closer? For here rhythm doesnt change much so not necessary to put so far.
01:00:821 (8) - A little weird The jump feels meaningless.Stack at the head of ⑦ ?
01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？
01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes are placed too close.Try put them farther?(1.2x or more)
01:14:633 (6) - Just my suggestion.Use a slower slider velocity here ?
01:24:732 (1,2,3) - Raising the ②③ a little would make the flow better ? such as ↓↓
SPOILER
01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Using Ctrl+Shift+R to rotate？

Nice mapset, Good luck~

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-01-23T12:30:43+00:00

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General
Since you have an Oni Taiko diff, according to recent rank criteria,You have to add another Kantan/Fuutsu Taiko diff
I'm not very sure,so you can ask others for advice. maybe not necessary because this map had submitted before new rule noticed. e.g) http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55318

Easy
00:46:712 You really want to blank here?I prefer add 1~2 one-beat circles but not big problem fixed

Insane
00:46:564 (10,1) - Place them closer? For here rhythm doesnt change much so not necessary to put so far. fixed
01:00:821 (8) - A little weird The jump feels meaningless.Stack at the head of ⑦ ? fixed
01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？ no fixed
01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes are placed too close.Try put them farther?(1.2x or more) fixed
01:14:633 (6) - Just my suggestion.Use a slower slider velocity here ? hmm, wait for another opinions.
01:24:732 (1,2,3) - Raising the ②③ a little would make the flow better ? such as ↓↓
SPOILER
maybe current seems fine
01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Using Ctrl+Shift+R to rotate？fixed

Nice mapset, Good luck~

thanks for modding~

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-01-24T18:46:56+00:00

SPOILER

qkenan wrote:
728's Normal
00:22:356 (4,5) - Stack them at (448,192) Oops, fixed.
00:30:078 (4) - Place it at the centre Uhm I couldn't get what you wanted to mean, but I think this section is fine.
00:51:465 (1) - Not very suitable...Suggest to split it into two one-beat sliderI don't think so. The vocal is continued through in this part so one long slider is the best.

Thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 60375
Countdown: 0
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Creator:kajiyatta
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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-01-26T03:25:39+00:00

~Mod Request from Queue~

[General]

Delete Taiko BG for widescreen setting support
Why don't use different bg at Insane diff? Because you use different BG in each diff :3
Maybe this will work ><

[Easy]

Not use soft-slidertick2 ? I very recommend to you to use it at this diff to make balance of the rhythm >_<
00:31:861 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x:412 y:288 and 3rd point to x:488 y:272to make them like this picture?
SPOILER
01:08:989 (1) and 01:09:583 - : try this rhythm ?
SPOILER

[728's Normal]

00:51:465 (1)- : I'm sure you can variate this slider more like this for example:
SPOILER
01:14:633 (4)- : add clap at slider reverse and slider's end?

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]

00:05:425 (1,2)- : try this rhythm?
00:10:475 (1)- : K would be good also, why don't you make the slider velocity to 1.0 at here?
00:30:078 (1)- : K ?
00:47:900 (3)- : k ?
01:05:722 (2)- : K ?
01:06:910 (1)- : D ?
01:24:286 (2)- : k ?

[Artbox's Hard]

00:15:227 (6)- : add clap on slider tail? suggestion tough
00:40:772 (3)- : 2 grid to right?
01:26:366 (1)- : why don't add circle here, and move the spinner to 01:26:514 ?

[Insane]

00:29:707 - : you did triplet at 00:26:663- so why don't you use triplet again at here? It'll fit the rhythm imo :3

nice mapset <3
good luck 9^o^)9

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-01-26T04:15:41+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:

~Mod Request from Queue~

[General]
Delete Taiko BG for widescreen setting support
Why don't use different bg at Insane diff? Because you use different BG in each diff :3 Easy & Insane made by me, so I use same picture.
Maybe this will work ><
[Easy]
Not use soft-slidertick2 ? I very recommend to you to use it at this diff to make balance of the rhythm >_< already used owo?
00:31:861 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x:412 y:288 and 3rd point to x:488 y:272to make them like this picture? fixed
SPOILER
01:08:989 (1) and 01:09:583 - : try this rhythm ? ok~
SPOILER
[Insane]
00:29:707 - : you did triplet at 00:26:663- so why don't you use triplet again at here? It'll fit the rhythm imo :3 another fixed~
nice mapset <3
good luck 9^o^)9

thanks for modding ;3

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-01-26T13:17:25+00:00

SPOILER

- t e n n y a - wrote:
[728's Normal]
00:51:465 (1)- : I'm sure you can variate this slider more like this for example: Good shape, but I don't think it will match with the song in this part.
01:14:633 (4)- : add clap at slider reverse and slider's end? In fact I could hear the drum sound, then added.

Thanks for modding :3

SPOILER

osu file format v11

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PreviewTime: 60375
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TitleUnicode:Komorebi Fureneru (Short Ver.)
Artist:nao
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Creator:kajiyatta
Version:728's Normal
Source:1/2 summer
Tags:Alcot Honey Comb one side summer eroge opening ArtBox h-728 hibarirailwayz visual novel
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[Difficulty]
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bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

bossandy 2013-01-27T06:51:25+00:00

Hi hi~ Sorry for late
　　
[

General]
　

Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>

　
[

Easy]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:01:564 (1) - This is not a complete symmetrical slider , copy 00:03:940 (1) - and Rotate by 180?
2. 00:18:197 (1,1) - Hmm , I think the rest of beat is not enough between these two objects , I may like to end the slider at 00:19:831 (1) - and use finish instead of whistle ^_^
3. 00:38:395 (2,3,1) - I would like to make this part more prettier and more flowable like this :
  Picture and Code
```
372,108,38395,2,0,B|392:80|392:52,2,60,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,164,39286,1,8,0:0:0
372,220,39583,6,0,B|392:248|392:276,2,60,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
4. 01:13:742 (2,3) - Hmm... there is a bad flow in my opinion , I prefer a circular one to wave one here
  Picture
5. 01:17:603 (1,2) - Maybe curving the slider to another direction and move stack 01:19:385 (2) - on 01:21:762 (2) - for a nice flow pattern!
6. Realy a nice Easy , I like it!
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:38:395 (2) - ( Highly Suggestion )Remove finish please , the cymbal which in the music should be at 00:38:544 -
2. 01:22:356 (1,2,1) - Why don't you use clap sounds here? It make no sense in my opinion :p

　
[

728's Normal]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:33:940 (2,3,4) - I would like to Ctrl+G on ( 3,4 ) and then change the hitsounds like before the amendment :3
2. Really really awesome difficulty , can't find more things
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:56:217 (1) - Use whistle instead of finish? I can't hear any cymbal in the music

　
[

Artbox's Hard]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:31:564 (5) - Move to x:396 y:220 ?
2. 00:38:692 (1) - Actually , the finish should be 00:38:544 - if you listen the music carrefully , Maybe use this rhythm ?
3. 00:57:702 (4) - Hmm.. I would use a symmetrical pattern here , only change this slider's shape , so I just give you this slider's code xD
  Picture and code
```
300,128,57702,2,0,B|319:83|308:32,2,97.50000371933,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
4. 01:13:148 (2) - Move this slider's endpoint to x:56 y:88 to make this part straight?
5. 01:14:781 (6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Change to a 1/3 slider to follow the music more
6. 01:26:514 (1) - End this spinner at 01:31:861 -
7. I haven't seen you name before ... but your mapping style is very great!!! I am so happy !
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 01:12:554 (8) - You forgot to add clap here?
2. 01:26:366 (7) - Add finish here , for the background music ^_^

　
[

Insane]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. 00:58:593 (1) - You should add a New Combo here , it is a bug
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like arrangement , because I always feel bad during gameplay, I prefer something else like this
  Picture
2. Nice a flowable difficulty!
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:38:395 (5,6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Finish should be on slider5's end , not slider6's start!
2. 00:40:772 (5) - Forgot add clap end?
3. 01:14:633 (6) - Remove clap end ?
4. 01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Whistles doesn't fits music at all here , remove all of them and only use finishes here?

About abbreviations

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

[

Hibari's Taiko Oni]

00:30:375 (1,1) - kd?
00:44:336 (2,3,1,2,1) - They are not follow the song at all , try ddkdd
00:48:049 (4) - k
01:09:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Overmap if you listen the music carrefully >~<
01:26:366 (1) - End this slider at 01:31:861 -

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Awesome mapsets!!! I am so happy now , so...
You can call me back! When you reply me mod ^_^
Good Luck for now :3

Notice

Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks !
Do not just "quote" my mod and say "Thanks for mod" or something else like this kind of sentence
If I see you don't do the thing as above , I will add you in my blacklist for 1 month!!
It means you can't get my mod for 1 month

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-01-27T08:38:30+00:00

bossandy wrote:
Hi hi~ Sorry for late
　　
[ General]
　
Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>
OK
　

[ Hibari's Taiko Oni]

00:30:375 (1,1) - kd? fixed
00:44:336 (2,3,1,2,1) - They are not follow the song at all , try ddkddfixed
00:48:049 (4) - k sorry, voice start at 00:48:197 and use "k". I think, if I follow your opinion, This balance collapse.
01:09:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Overmap if you listen the music carrefully >~< this may be overmap, but this point make Taiko player exciting, don't you? and I think this is not so overmap.
01:26:366 (1) - End this slider at 01:31:861 - fixed

Thanks for your mod!

http://puu.sh/1TkDZ
　

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-01-27T09:17:15+00:00

bossandy wrote:
Hi hi~ Sorry for late
　　
[ General]
　
Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>
　
[ Easy]
　
Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
00:01:564 (1) - This is not a complete symmetrical slider , copy 00:03:940 (1) - and Rotate by 180? fixed
00:18:197 (1,1) - Hmm , I think the rest of beat is not enough between these two objects , I may like to end the slider at 00:19:831 (1) - and use finish instead of whistle ^_^ another fixed
00:38:395 (2,3,1) - I would like to make this part more prettier and more flowable like this : I arranged this part based on your code.
Picture and Code
372,108,38395,2,0,B|392:80|392:52,2,60,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,164,39286,1,8,0:0:0
372,220,39583,6,0,B|392:248|392:276,2,60,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:13:742 (2,3) - Hmm... there is a bad flow in my opinion , I prefer a circular one to wave one here
Picture
fixed
01:17:603 (1,2) - Maybe curving the slider to another direction and move stack 01:19:385 (2) - on 01:21:762 (2) - for a nice flow pattern! fixed
Realy a nice Easy , I like it! :3
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
00:38:395 (2) - ( Highly Suggestion )Remove finish please , the cymbal which in the music should be at 00:38:544 - fixed
01:22:356 (1,2,1) - Why don't you use clap sounds here? It make no sense in my opinion :p fixed
　[ Artbox's Hard]
he or she isn't active for a long time, so I made some patterns and modified. 　
Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
00:31:564 (5) - Move to x:396 y:220 ? fixed
00:38:692 (1) - Actually , the finish should be 00:38:544 - if you listen the music carrefully , Maybe use this rhythm ? deleted finish at head. I suppose this rythem pattern seems better.
00:57:702 (4) - Hmm.. I would use a symmetrical pattern here , only change this slider's shape , so I just give you this slider's code xD thanks, fixed.
Picture and code
300,128,57702,2,0,B|319:83|308:32,2,97.50000371933,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:13:148 (2) - Move this slider's endpoint to x:56 y:88 to make this part straight? fixed
01:14:781 (6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Change to a 1/3 slider to follow the music more fixed
01:26:514 (1) - End this spinner at 01:31:861 - oops... fixed
I haven't seen you name before ... but your mapping style is very great!!! I am so happy !
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
01:12:554 (8) - You forgot to add clap here? fixed
01:26:366 (7) - Add finish here , for the background music ^_^ fixed
　
[ Insane]
　
Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
00:58:593 (1) - You should add a New Combo here , it is a bug fixed
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like arrangement , because I always feel bad during gameplay, I prefer something else like this ok, changed.
Picture
Nice a flowable difficulty!
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
00:38:395 (5,6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Finish should be on slider5's end , not slider6's start! fixed
00:40:772 (5) - Forgot add clap end? fixed
01:14:633 (6) - Remove clap end ? fixed
01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Whistles doesn't fits music at all here , remove all of them and only use finishes here? fixed
　
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Awesome mapsets!!! I am so happy now , so...
You can call me back! When you reply me mod ^_^
Good Luck for now :3

Notice
Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks !
Do not just "quote" my mod and say "Thanks for mod" or something else like this kind of sentence
If I see you don't do the thing as above , I will add you in my blacklist for 1 month!!
It means you can't get my mod for 1 month

thanks for modding!

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-01-28T14:12:25+00:00

SPOILER

bossandy wrote:
[ 728's Normal]
　
Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
00:33:940 (2,3,4) - I would like to Ctrl+G on ( 3,4 ) and then change the hitsounds like before the amendment :3 Hmm.. If I do so, the circle will completely be covered by the hitburst and hard to see, so I'd like to keep my placement.
Really really awesome difficulty , can't find more things
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
00:56:217 (1) - Use whistle instead of finish? I can't hear any cymbal in the music Sure.

Thanks for the modding :3

SPOILER

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bossandy

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bossandy 2013-02-01T11:42:02+00:00

Recheck here
　

Title and Artist : Now OSU accept original title and artist , So use other language's for title and artist is fine now~ Japanese title : 木漏れ日フレネル (Short Ver.) Example
Easy : Usused Timing Sections 01:24:138 - 01:24:732 - Remove them

Nothing more to point , fix them , and you can get a bubble from me

Last edited by bossandy 2013-02-01T12:31:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-02-01T11:53:24+00:00

bossandy wrote:
Recheck here
　
Title and Artist : Now OSU accept original title and artist , So use other language's for title and artist is fine now~ Japanese title : 木漏れ日フレネル (Short Ver.) Example fixed
Easy : Usused Timing Sections 01:24:138 - 01:24:732 - Remove them fixed
Nothing more to point , fix them , and you can get a bubble from me

thanks for rechecking!

bossandy

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Joined May 2010

bossandy 2013-02-01T12:51:51+00:00

Ya , I like this singer's voice , and I like this map!!! Well done guys!! enjoy this~

Bubbled!

7# bubble!!!

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-02-01T13:28:15+00:00

thanks for bubbled

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-02-02T05:16:07+00:00

Go go kajiyatta

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-02-02T06:03:32+00:00

ラストスパートじゃぁああ

10nya

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Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-02-02T10:13:39+00:00

goooooooooooooo ^q^

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2013-02-07T09:57:48+00:00

After some discussion on the title we decided to pop in order to change it to "Komorebi Fresnel".

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2013-02-07T11:12:40+00:00

Let's make double post! I rechecked over IRC and we fixed:

Unrankable video resolution.
Missing hitsounds in Insane, Hard and Easy.
Audio lead-in time in Insane and Hard since it was originally too short.

log

18:53 kajiyatta: こんにちは、PM読みました。
18:53 Melophobia: kondesu
18:53 kajiyatta: 名前変更してtagにfureneru持ってくればいいんでしょうか
18:54 Melophobia: hai
18:54 kajiyatta: 分かりました
18:54 Melophobia: じゃあ泡割っても大丈夫です？
18:54 kajiyatta: 大丈夫ですー
18:54 Melophobia: はい
18:54 Melophobia: 少々お待ちを
18:58 Melophobia: 終わりました
18:58 Melophobia: updateしてokです～
18:58 kajiyatta: はい
18:58 Melophobia: ご飯食べたらリチェックしますね
18:59 kajiyatta: よろしくお願いします
19:26 Melophobia: VideoのサイズがUnrankableなんですが
19:26 Melophobia: 適切なサイズのやつ用意したほうがいいですか？
19:26 Melophobia: 特に手間でもないのでリチェックしながらエンコードしますが
19:27 kajiyatta: 11Mbだと大きいんですか？
19:27 Melophobia: あ
19:27 Melophobia: 解像度のほうです
19:27 Melophobia: １２８０x～
19:27 kajiyatta: 800以下でしたっけ
19:27 Melophobia: 854*480以下ですね
19:28 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:28 kajiyatta: こちらで直します
19:28 Melophobia: 了解です
19:33 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
19:34 Melophobia: ちょっと他にも書くことあるっぽいので
19:34 Melophobia: 全部見てからpostしちゃいますね
19:34 kajiyatta: お手数かけます
19:34 Melophobia: 問題ないですー
19:41 Melophobia: あ
19:41 Melophobia: まだいますか
19:41 kajiyatta: はい
19:41 Melophobia: やっぱりそんなに書くこともなかったのでIRCで
19:41 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:41 Melophobia: ログはあとで英訳かなんかします
19:42 Melophobia: Insane
19:42 Melophobia: 00:19:831 - whistleつけ忘れ？
19:42 Melophobia: Hardも同じくです
19:42 kajiyatta: みたいですね
19:42 Melophobia: Easy
19:43 Melophobia: 00:09:286 - insaneではここがFinishだったのでこの難易度でもFinishの方がいいかなと
19:43 kajiyatta: 了解です
19:44 Melophobia: あとInsaneとHardのLead-inが短いので1500msに
19:44 Melophobia: 以上です
19:45 kajiyatta: Easy,Normalは1000のままでいいんですか？
19:45 Melophobia: 始まるのが遅いので
19:45 Melophobia: 揃えなくても大丈夫です
19:45 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:47 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
19:51 Melophobia: えっとVideoなんですが
19:51 Melophobia: 横を800にするなら縦は450です
19:52 Melophobia: 16:9の場合は854x480まで認められます
19:52 Melophobia: 特に問題でもなさそうなんですが直せますか？
19:52 kajiyatta: 直してみます
19:54 kajiyatta: 800×448になってしまうんですが大丈夫ですか
19:55 Melophobia: ソースのVideoが元々変ってことです？
19:55 Melophobia: あれ
19:55 Melophobia: ちょっと計算してきます
19:56 Melophobia: 16:9だと800:450ですよね・・
19:57 kajiyatta: サイズ指定で変換してるんですが、多少ずれてしまうようで
19:57 Melophobia: なるほど
19:57 Melophobia: じゃあそれで問題無いと思います
20:01 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
20:01 Melophobia: はい
20:04 Melophobia: Insane
20:04 Melophobia: 00:38:692 - clap?
20:05 kajiyatta: はい
20:05 Melophobia: Easyにどういうロジックで音つけてるのかイマイチつかめないんですがEasyにもついてないです
20:06 kajiyatta: 修正しました
20:06 Melophobia: 何度もすみませんupdateお願いします
20:08 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
20:10 Melophobia: おっけーです
20:10 Melophobia: post書いてきますね

Rebubbled!~

kajiyatta

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Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-02-07T11:35:34+00:00

thanks for modding!

Wreath

435 posts

Joined February 2012

Wreath 2013-02-20T05:33:51+00:00

go go!

Garven

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Garven 2013-03-04T15:06:54+00:00

やっ

[General]
Tick rate 2 is preferred for this song, though there isn't much of a point for having tick rate 2 if you have them all silenced... have you considered using a different sound for them in case you feel that they are too loud?

[Easy]
01:24:732 (1) - Extend this to 01:26:069 -
01:26:514 (1) - Start this at 01:26:366 -

[Taiko]
00:00:524 - Eh, why .5x? Feels like a huge transition for something that really isn't that big of an intensity change.

[Hard]
01:11:069 (3,4) - For a map that has very few jumps in it, this jump was out of place as it kind of comes out of nowhere, and you go right back to distance snapping for the rest of the map.

[Insane]
00:14:633 (4,5,6) - I'm not understanding why these are such large jumps.
00:18:940 (4,5) - The repeat on these sliders doesn't really go to anything in the music. It'd be better as just circles.
00:24:732 (6) - Maybe ctrl + g to keep with the jump flow from 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) -
00:39:286 (8,9,10) - Is there a need for 1/4s here? I'm not hearing it in the music. It also feels rather isolated and just plays awkwardly.
00:45:673 (6,7,8) - ^
01:00:376 (4,5,6,7) - This really isn't a good place for this type of pattern. It's a quiet part that's leading into the big explosion of chorus. Especially when you take out all of that extra momentum by going back to distance snap at 01:00:821 (7,1) -
01:21:168 (5,6,7) - Same thing as earlier: why are you adding all these extra beats where there's nothing in the music? Especially such a strong part with silence in between each pair of rhythms, but you fill it in anyway.

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-06T03:55:40+00:00

Garven wrote:
やっ

[Taiko]
00:00:524 - Eh, why .5x? Feels like a huge transition for something that really isn't that big of an intensity change.

change x.75!

Thanks for modding!!

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kajiyatta

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Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-03-06T03:59:03+00:00

Garven wrote:
やっ

[General]
Tick rate 2 is preferred for this song, though there isn't much of a point for having tick rate 2 if you have them all silenced... have you considered using a different sound for them in case you feel that they are too loud? I dunno why feels nice tick rate 2, but anyway changed to tick rate 2.

[Easy]
01:24:732 (1) - Extend this to 01:26:069 - fixed
01:26:514 (1) - Start this at 01:26:366 - fixed

[Hard]
01:11:069 (3,4) - For a map that has very few jumps in it, this jump was out of place as it kind of comes out of nowhere, and you go right back to distance snapping for the rest of the map. this jumping seems tiny and there are some jumping in this map, maybe if get rid of them the diff will be boring.

[Insane]
00:14:633 (4,5,6) - I'm not understanding why these are such large jumps. yeah I don't put a jump in this part first, but some modders say it feels bored. after some time, I suppose this jump seems better for this part to follow the music.
00:18:940 (4,5) - The repeat on these sliders doesn't really go to anything in the music. It'd be better as just circles. fixed
00:24:732 (6) - Maybe ctrl + g to keep with the jump flow from 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - fixed
00:39:286 (8,9,10) - Is there a need for 1/4s here? I'm not hearing it in the music. It also feels rather isolated and just plays awkwardly. fixed
00:45:673 (6,7,8) - ^ fixed
01:00:376 (4,5,6,7) - This really isn't a good place for this type of pattern. It's a quiet part that's leading into the big explosion of chorus. Especially when you take out all of that extra momentum by going back to distance snap at 01:00:821 (7,1) - fixed
01:21:168 (5,6,7) - Same thing as earlier: why are you adding all these extra beats where there's nothing in the music? Especially such a strong part with silence in between each pair of rhythms, but you fill it in anyway.I know but blank is weird for Insane, anyway I follow the rest of vocal.

thanks for modding.
EDIT ok, changed some stuff at start in Insane.

Last edited by kajiyatta 2013-03-07T06:23:10+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Garven

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Garven 2013-03-06T04:10:09+00:00

Im at work, so i cant give specific examples, but if you have a jump, its best to use them at the same place if that part in the music shows up again. It gives the map a more consistent feel. Thats why I pointed out the jumps in the Hard and Insane, though the ones at the start of insane are still a bit weird. If they fit the music better or if the pattern didnt stick out so much compared to the rest of the mapping, I wouldnt mind it as much. Just a thought before I get time to recheck.

Edit:

Rebubbled!

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2013-03-11T20:20:34+00:00

hi there~~~ high sp bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

Inconsistent kiai in 728's Normal where is unnecessary imo

[Insane]

AR+1, AR8 for bpm is too low
00:39:286 (8,9) - the stack here may break your flow, i would like to move (9) to 128:260
00:52:653 (4) - remove finish at end for consistent hitsound
01:25:772 (4) - NC here for beat change?

[Artbox's Hard]

AR+1, i think AR8 in a 202bpm hard is more comfortable
01:09:583 (5) - make it like this?
SPOILER

[Easy]

Different from other diffs.. STR2 is looked awful on some sliders like..so i suggest 1 as well
SPOILER

kajiyatta

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Topic Starter

kajiyatta 2013-03-12T08:59:37+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
hi there~~~ high sp bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
Inconsistent kiai in 728's Normal where is unnecessary imo
fixed

[Insane]
AR+1, AR8 for bpm is too low umm... sorry I don't like AR9 with this map and no one who modded this map said on your meaning.
00:39:286 (8,9) - the stack here may break your flow, i would like to move (9) to 128:260 fixed
00:52:653 (4) - remove finish at end for consistent hitsound fixed
01:25:772 (4) - NC here for beat change? fixed
[Artbox's Hard]
AR+1, i think AR8 in a 202bpm hard is more comfortable because of Insane with AR8, hold AR7 on this diff.
01:09:583 (5) - make it like this? fixed
SPOILER
[Easy]
Different from other diffs.. STR2 is looked awful on some sliders like..so i suggest 1 as well fixed
SPOILER

thanks for modding.

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2013-03-13T09:10:24+00:00

rebubbled~~

Kawayi Rika

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Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2013-03-14T04:30:20+00:00

Hi ~ kajiyatta ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[728's Normal]

00:30:078 (4) - Move 1 grid left,make triangle with 00:28:890 (2,3).
00:49:088 (1,3) - These sliders are isn't perfect symmetrical.

[Easy]

01:09:880 (3) - Try remove this circle,more easy playable.

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~

kajiyatta

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kajiyatta 2013-03-14T08:37:34+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ kajiyatta ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Easy]

01:09:880 (3) - Try remove this circle,more easy playable. fixed

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~

thanks for modding.

h-728

513 posts

Joined November 2010

h-728 2013-03-14T10:51:07+00:00

both fixed, thanks :3

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