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nao - Komorebi Fresnel (Short Ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
SPOILER

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[728's Normal]
  1. 00:03:940 (1,2) - この譜面の流れが私には綺麗で滑らかな流れとできていないように感じました ついでに角度も修正しました。
    妙な段差があり、初心者のゲームプレイにおいてやりさすさを追求していくならばこれが良いとは思えません
    理想としては画像のような今の位置より下に置く感じ、(1)からの滑らかな曲線を描いたこの配置の方がいいように思います
  2. 00:08:842 - 不必要な緑線 削除
  3. 01:04:831 (3,4) - (4)の延長線上から(3)が少しだけズレています
    01:05:128 (4) - 1 grid left (Tiny)
    左に少し動かすことで綺麗に整います 恐らく修正されたと思います。
  4. 01:06:316 (2,3) - ^に左右対称の合わせる感じで置くほうが統一面、見た目的にも綺麗になるのでは？ 前者で修正しました。それに伴い、後ろの流れを少し変更。
    もし今のままアプローチサークルに合わせつつ、作って行きたいならば、01:06:316 (2) - スライダーのリバース側の節の位置をx:168 y:200にすることで延長線上に綺麗に整わせる事が可能です
    ですがその場合、01:04:831 (3,4)の対称とはなりません
  5. 01:14:633 (4) - 個人的にはこのnoteはちょっと不安な感じが
    このリバースでも青線を踏ませるのが初心者にとっては曲のリズムを部分的に崩し、混乱させてしまう可能性があります
    無難に行くならばここを単純なリバースなしのスライダーにするのがベストです ここをリバースなしにすると、この後の流れと同調してしまうので、ここはこの音取りを維持したいと思います。
  6. 01:21:168 (3) - 01:21:762 (4)に合わせる感じで、節がそれぞれ真横に来るような配置の方が配置として合うように思えます
    今の状態は01:20:573 (2)との流れに置いて特に重要な意味を持たず、これが中途半端です 何となく前のセクションで曲げたスライダーを使いたかっただけなので修正
gl
るーらーさんModありがとうございました。
ほぼ修正しました。

あたらしいの
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. 全難易度でtagを統一してください
    ゲストの人の名前とかが抜けている難易度があります fixed
[Easy]
私には譜面はいくつかの問題があるように思えました
  1. まず1つ目がスライダーの速度に関して
    私にはSV0.8でもまだ早く感じ、私見では0.6程度まで落とすべきなように思えました
    DSに関しては適度に間隔の開いている今の状態で問題は感じませんでした
  2. 2つ目が譜面がEasyとしてのnoteの比率が高く難しいと思った箇所がいくつかありました
    00:15:227 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 　
    00:38:395 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - 　some remapped
    このような配置、1/1で置くのは一般的ならありだと思いますが、この200超の高いBPMでこれらの配置は連続で置かれるべきではないように思えます
    初心者にとってこれは一般的な譜面の赤線を踏んでいる状態に近く、難易度が高いです
    00:12:257 (2,3,1) - この程度のものなら"多少"使う程度はありだと思います
この2つの理由により私には大幅な改良が必要なように思えました
もし大幅な改良をしたならば私にフォーラムPMを送ってきてください
Easyだけ今回のModとは別枠でModします
確かに多少速いとは思いますが、今のところは保留させてください。（作り変えるのが億劫とかいうこともありますが…）他のmodderが同様のことを指摘した場合は作り変えますが、スライダーも多く配置してなるべく音取りしやすいようにしているので、作り変えるまでには至らないかなとも思います。もし、最依頼することがあれば、その時はよろしくお願いします。
[Insane]
  1. 00:00:970 - これをSoftのデフォルトのヒットサウンドに設定している理由はなぜ？
    Custom2の枠ならばsliderslideを無音化させることができ、Slidertickも見たところ影響しないのでそちらを使うべきです　fixed
  2. 00:20:573 - 不必要な緑線 fixed
  3. 00:28:890 (1,2) - 少し中央からズレています
    00:29:633 (2) - grid snapを外してx:334 y:100に移動させてみてください fixed
    それで見た目が綺麗になります
  4. 00:30:672 (3,4) - ここで妙な段差があり、それが譜面にとって見た目が良くなる感じがしませんでした
    00:31:118 (4) - x:412 y:212に移動させてみてください fixed
    それでこの段差が解消します
  5. 00:33:197 (2) - clapの付け忘れ？
    スライダーエンドにclapが付いていません fixed
  6. 00:36:019 (4) - 個人的には00:36:613 (6)に合わせる感じでもう少し角度を急にしたい感じが
    反時計回りに15度程度回転させるか、00:36:613 (6)を反転させたものをここにも置く等したほうが見た目は良くなります
  7. 00:48:494 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - プレイ時にスタックにより(7)のスライダーにサークルが触れてしまっています
    もう少し(1,2,3,4,1)の位置をずらしてみてください fixed
  8. 01:00:375 (6,7,1) - ここのDistanceは揃えるべきなのでは？
    少なくとも私はこれが綺麗に見えず、作りが雑に思われてしまう要因となってしまうように思えます fixed
gl
thanks for moddings~ :D
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
NewRulerさん指摘感謝です^^
修正版＝http://puu.sh/NDVs
ArtBox_old
105 posts
Joined February 2012
ArtBox_old

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[Artbox's Hard]
  1. 00:06:020 (5,1) - ここの繋ぎの縦に揃えている配置がスライダーの形と合っている感じがせず、見た目が好きではありません
    配置のイメージとしては(1)を少し左に動かし、譜面としての見た目を意識した画像のような配置にしてみてはどうでしょうか
  2. 00:22:950 (1,2,3) - ここも流れが少し不自然な感じがしました
    一例としてこういった流れなんてどうでしょう
    少なくとも画像のような配置にすれば00:23:395 (2,3)での不自然な流れを少しは改良することができます
  3. 00:41:960 (1) - このスライダーの左右対称な回り方が私は好きではありません 　　音取りを変えてしまったので使いませんでした＞＜、申し訳ないです・・・。
    316,136,41960,6,0,B|168:176|148:28|220:-8|292:28|272:176|124:136,1,390,0|8
    綺麗に整えたこのスライダーを使ってみてください
  4. 00:51:465 (3) - ^
  5. 01:00:227 (6,7,2) - 個人的にはこれらをスタックさせたい感じが　　きっちりやっても綺麗にならず・・・、微妙にずらしてそれっぽくしてみました
    プレイしていて気付くことはあまり無いとは思いますが、結構なズレが生じていてプレイヤーが少し注意してみれば気付く人も出てきます
  6. 01:05:722 (3,4,5) - (4)が譜面の流れを崩し、プレイしていて綺麗な流れを作れていないように思えました　　4は直線にしてみました
    個人的にはこういう流れのほうが綺麗で、かつ自然なバランスとなるように思えます
  7. 01:10:029 (6,1) - なぜここをDistance1.0で？
    これまでのパターンを見るとこの手の配置は0.8で置かれており、この中途半端な変化をここで起こす必要性が私には感じられませんでした
  8. 01:16:415 (3,1) - 01:00:227 (6,7,2)と同じ
gl
All fixed

MODありがとうございました～ :)

遅れてごめん＝＝
リマップしてたので・・・
http://puu.sh/NXve
fusya
90 posts
Joined February 2011
fusya
こんにちは :)
ほとんど提案なのでスルーでもいいと思います

[Easy]
01:28:296の緑線は必要？
00:58:593 (1) - Spinから配置が離れすぎかもです　位置かタイミングをずらすの推奨です
01:25:771 (2) - 1gird 下のほうが見栄えがいいかもです

[728's Normal]
01:00:375 (2) - 初期skinだと見辛い？(あまり問題無いかも
01:26:366 (1) - 他の難易度と同じようにspinの開始位置を01:26:663にしてみては？
それに伴ってこんな感じとか
SPOILER

[Artbox's Hard]
01:00:227 (6) - 1grid左？
01:25:326 (2) - 01:25:475まで短くするとか
01:26:069 (4) - 01:26:366まで伸ばすとか

[Insane]
01:00:301 (6) - note追加？(サビ前だから盛り上がるかなーとか
01:12:702 (8) - をx424,y196の位置にとか
01:25:697 (5) - 音に合ってないから消してもいいかも？

ショートmodすみません＞＜
(綺麗過ぎて他に言えること無かったです；；)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

fusya_vant wrote:

こんにちは :)
ほとんど提案なのでスルーでもいいと思います

[Easy]
01:28:296の緑線は必要？ fixed
00:58:593 (1) - Spinから配置が離れすぎかもです　位置かタイミングをずらすの推奨です fixed
01:25:771 (2) - 1gird 下のほうが見栄えがいいかもです fixed

[Insane]
01:00:301 (6) - note追加？(サビ前だから盛り上がるかなーとか バックの音に合わせたいので無理に追加しなくても良いかなと思いました
01:12:702 (8) - をx424,y196の位置にとか　fixed
01:25:697 (5) - 音に合ってないから消してもいいかも？ fixed

ショートmodすみません＞＜
(綺麗過ぎて他に言えること無かったです；；)
thanks for moddings and star~
EDIT updated
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h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

fusya_vant wrote:

こんにちは :)
ほとんど提案なのでスルーでもいいと思います

[728's Normal]
01:00:375 (2) - 初期skinだと見辛い？(あまり問題無いかも 確かに親切じゃないかもしれませんね。下方に移動させました。
01:26:366 (1) - 他の難易度と同じようにspinの開始位置を01:26:663にしてみては？ 個人的に音のない位置からスピナーを始めるのは好まないのでこのままで。また、音取りは良い提案だと思いますが、ノーマルで短いスライダー(ここでは1/2スライダーの事を指しますが、BPMが200以上と非常に速いので、それでも十分短いと感じます)の後にノートを配置するのは親切ではないと思うのでこちらもそのままで。
それに伴ってこんな感じとか
SPOILER

ショートmodすみません＞＜
(綺麗過ぎて他に言えること無かったです；；)
fusya_vantさんModありがとうございました。
加えて多少の配置変更を行いました。
http://puu.sh/13H9S
ArtBox_old
105 posts
Joined February 2012
ArtBox_old
土下座でどDone(１から作り直しましたorz)
SPOILER
osu file format v9

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Artist:nao
Creator:kajiyatta
Version:Artbox's Hard
Source:1/2 summer
Tags:Alcot Honey Comb one side summer eroge opening ArtBox h-728 hibarirailwayz

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320,224,43148,2,0,B|285:232|264:255,1,65,8|0
328,300,43445,2,0,B|363:292|384:269,1,65
440,324,43742,2,0,B|466:299|472:269,1,65,8|0
428,204,44039,2,0,B|398:143|415:76,1,130,0|8
264,36,44633,6,0,B|228:44|208:67,1,65
270,115,44930,2,0,B|261:150|238:170,1,65,8|0
292,228,45227,2,0,B|242:275|236:343,1,130,0|8
136,260,45821,2,0,B|100:251|80:228,1,65
144,184,46118,2,0,B|179:192|199:215,1,65,8|0
276,200,46415,2,0,B|323:249|391:255,1,130,0|8
488,132,47009,6,0,B|441:83|373:77,1,130,0|8
276,200,47603,2,0,B|325:247|331:315,1,130,0|8
180,276,48197,2,0,B|153:251|147:221,1,65
68,228,48494,2,0,B|62:192|77:165,1,65,8|0
24,108,48791,2,0,B|48:81|78:75,1,65
144,120,49088,1,12
144,120,49163,1,0
144,120,49237,2,0,B|184:120|184:120|228:100|228:100|280:100,1,130
252,176,49682,2,0,B|404:176,1,130,8|0
444,224,50128,1,0
476,296,50276,6,0,B|412:316|376:264|376:264|340:284,1,130,8|0
340,348,50722,1,0
340,348,50871,2,0,B|200:348,1,130,8|0
156,292,51316,1,0
209,234,51465,2,0,B|272:210|337:233,1,130,8|0
464,144,52059,2,0,B|401:120|336:143,1,130,8|0
272,100,52504,1,0
272,100,52653,2,0,B|207:118|144:89,1,130,12|0
68,108,53098,5,0
68,108,53247,2,0,B|41:132|35:162,1,65,8|0
100,208,53544,2,0,B|134:265|123:333,1,130,0|8
256,248,54138,1,0
256,204,54435,1,8
256,160,54732,1,0
388,76,55326,1,0
388,116,55623,1,8
388,160,55920,1,0
422,285,56217,6,0,B|370:305|334:269|290:285,1,130,8|0
140,312,56811,2,0,B|120:260|156:224|140:180,1,130,8|0
268,92,57405,1,12
268,92,57702,2,0,B|320:72|356:108|400:92,2,130,0|8|0
304,244,58593,5,8
184,192,58890,1,0
204,320,59187,1,8
204,320,59262,1,0
204,320,59336,1,0
252,200,59633,1,0
140,264,59930,1,0
268,276,60227,1,0
268,276,60376,2,0,B|320:296|356:260|400:276,1,130,8|0
300,152,60970,6,0,B|237:128|172:151,1,130,12|0
296,56,61564,2,0,B|359:80|424:57,1,130,8|0
412,188,62158,2,0,B|359:230|347:298,1,130,8|0
240,224,62752,2,0,B|216:197|186:191,1,65,8|0
220,120,63049,2,0,B|186:105|157:112,1,65
104,172,63346,6,0,B|40:172,1,65,8|0
64,248,63643,2,0,B|140:248,1,65
132,328,63940,2,0,B|172:328|172:328|216:308|216:308|268:308,2,130,0|0|8
220,232,64831,2,0,B|360:232,1,130,0|8
420,196,65276,1,0
440,120,65425,1,0
376,72,65574,1,0
312,120,65722,2,0,B|246:105|241:42|241:42|200:41,1,130,12|0
196,196,66316,6,0,B|220:223|250:229,1,65,8|0
264,152,66613,2,0,B|240:125|210:119,1,65
136,148,66910,2,0,B|83:192|72:259,1,130,12|0
224,296,67504,2,0,B|254:302|278:329,1,65,8|0
336,276,67801,2,0,B|358:296|366:331,1,65
436,368,68098,2,0,B|452:342|450:306,1,65,8|0
412,236,68395,2,0,B|353:203|328:138,2,130,0|8|0
488,216,69138,1,0
472,292,69286,1,8
332,360,69583,6,0,B|184:360,1,130,0|8
132,324,70029,1,0
112,248,70178,1,0
176,200,70327,1,0
240,248,70475,2,0,B|306:233|311:170|311:170|352:169,1,130,12|0
284,320,71069,2,0,B|347:297|376:232,1,130,8|0
232,168,71663,2,0,B|173:133|105:154,1,130,8|0
36,292,72257,6,0,B|163:326,2,130,8|0|8
156,192,73148,2,0,B|28:157,2,130,0|8|0
232,208,73890,1,0
232,208,74039,1,8
324,116,74336,2,0,B|386:88|451:117,1,130,0|8
472,192,74781,1,0
420,252,74930,1,0
420,252,75078,1,0
428,328,75227,2,0,B|365:355|300:326,1,130,12|0
260,204,75821,6,0,B|220:204|220:204|176:224|176:224|124:224,2,130,8|0|12
148,96,76712,1,0
148,96,77009,2,0,B|210:68|275:97,1,130,8|0
380,212,77603,2,0,B|442:185|436:122|436:122|476:114,2,130,12|0|8
256,308,78494,1,0
256,308,78791,6,0,B|120:308,1,130,12|0
36,180,79385,2,0,B|98:152|163:181,1,130,8|0
256,308,79979,2,0,B|308:328|344:292|388:308,1,130,12|0
291,180,80574,2,0,B|239:160|203:196|159:180,1,130,8|0
264,64,81168,2,0,B|224:64|224:64|180:84|180:84|128:84,2,130,8|0|8
264,64,81910,1,0
256,192,82356,12,0,85029
256,280,85326,5,0
256,280,85475,1,0
352,192,85772,1,0
256,108,86069,2,0,B|195:78|128:105,1,130,0|4
256,192,86514,12,0,91861

fusya_vant wrote:

[Artbox's Hard]
01:00:227 (6) - 1grid左？
01:25:326 (2) - 01:25:475まで短くするとか
01:26:069 (4) - 01:26:366まで伸ばすとか
MODありがとうございました :)
NewRulerNA
1,301 posts
Joined December 2010
NewRulerNA
hi

[General]
  1. すべての赤線の設定は同じである必要があります
    太鼓難易度には赤線がその他の難易度とは違った使われ方をしており、それがこの譜面のRankの妨げになります
  2. tagに"visual novel"を追加
  3. 一部にあるsliderslide.wavとslidertick.wavを同時に無音化させたヒットサウンドはUnrankableです
    無音tick.wavを削除し、tickの部分にのみ音量を減らすように工夫する
    あるいは新たにカスタム枠(Soft3など)を増やしてsliderslideを無音化、tickはデフォルトの音を流させる等の対応をする必要があります
[Easy]
  1. この譜面はデフォルトのsliderslideと無音のそれとが混在しており、ヒットサウンドのパターンに一貫性を持っていません
    sliderslideのデフォルト音は曲に対して浮いている感じがしたので、全てのslide音を無音化させるのがベターです
  2. 使われているslidertickの音量が大きく、通常のwhistle音と比較した際にかなり強調された音となってしまっています
    tickの箇所を-10%して40%の音量にするか、wav自体の音量を直接編集して下げる等の対応をする必要があります
    ただし後者は他の難易度に影響を及ぼす可能性があります
    それをするならば注意してください
  3. 00:01:564 (1,1) - 不完全な対称性を持っているスライダー
  4. 00:11:069 - Breakをここからスタートに変更
    この部分に関してEasyより優れているNormalとの一貫性の保持、及び曲と譜面のバランスを考慮するとこれをするのが望ましいです
  5. 00:18:197 (1) - このエンドがwavの音が強く、曲をフォローしている感じが私にはしませんでした
    音量を50%程度に下げるのがベターです
  6. 00:31:861 (2,1) - この部分の流れがやや不自然な感じがします
    画像のように(2)に対して角度をつけたりすることで今よりは改善をすることが可能です
    ただし簡易的な修正なので、完璧を求めるならばスライダー前後の流れを含めさらなる改良を行う必要があります
  7. 00:47:009 - 00:47:603 - add note
    00:37:207 (1,2) - との箇所と違いこのnoteのない時間が不自然で、私はそれが悪く思えました
    この指摘によるタイムはあくまでも個人的直感に基づくタイムで、あなたが別の白線にnoteを置きたいのならばその箇所に置いてしまって構いません
[728's Normal]
  1. 00:21:762 (3,1) - スタックに関して
    (1)を-2~3度した上でスタックさせれば外見をほとんど損なうことなく今より単純によくさせることができます
  2. 00:59:633 (1,2) - この(2)が前後にあるnoteの影響でヒットバーストにより隠れ、それがタイミングを見切りにくくさせているように感じました
    こういった感じでnoteに高さの差を加え、より見やすい配置にすることでそれを回避することができます
[Hibari's Taiko Oni]
  1. 01:28:296 (1,2,3,4) - これらのnoteがどこで音を取っているのか私には理解できず、単なる無駄なnoteの用に思えました
[Artbox's Hard]
  1. 00:32:752 - add note
    00:23:841 (4) とのリズムが異なり、それをこの箇所でする必要性を私は感じませんでした
  2. 00:59:336 (5,6,7,8) - add clap
    3連打の最後とその後のnoteにもclapを追加
    これらの箇所に音がないことでヒットサウンドの一貫性に問題が生じるように感じました
  3. 01:00:970 (1) - スライダースタートからclap削除
    finishとclapが同時に鳴ることにより、それぞれのヒットサウンドが邪魔をし合い、非常に音として悪く思えました
  4. 01:05:722 (1) - ^
  5. 01:06:910 (4) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:019 (4) - なぜ00:36:316にclapがないのでしょうか
    私はここに置かない理由がなく、ここまでの一連のヒットサウンドのパターンに反していることに違和感を感じました
gl
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. すべての赤線の設定は同じである必要があります
    太鼓難易度には赤線がその他の難易度とは違った使われ方をしており、それがこの譜面のRankの妨げになります     fixed
  2. tagに"visual novel"を追加 fixed
  3. 一部にあるsliderslide.wavとslidertick.wavを同時に無音化させたヒットサウンドはUnrankableです
    無音tick.wavを削除し、tickの部分にのみ音量を減らすように工夫する
    あるいは新たにカスタム枠(Soft3など)を増やしてsliderslideを無音化、tickはデフォルトの音を流させる等の対応をする必要があります
fixed

[Easy]
  1. この譜面はデフォルトのsliderslideと無音のそれとが混在しており、ヒットサウンドのパターンに一貫性を持っていません
    sliderslideのデフォルト音は曲に対して浮いている感じがしたので、全てのslide音を無音化させるのがベターです
  2. 使われているslidertickの音量が大きく、通常のwhistle音と比較した際にかなり強調された音となってしまっています
    tickの箇所を-10%して40%の音量にするか、wav自体の音量を直接編集して下げる等の対応をする必要があります 音量を下げました
    ただし後者は他の難易度に影響を及ぼす可能性があります
    それをするならば注意してください
  3. 00:01:564 (1,1) - 不完全な対称性を持っているスライダー　fixed
  4. 00:11:069 - Breakをここからスタートに変更 fixed
    この部分に関してEasyより優れているNormalとの一貫性の保持、及び曲と譜面のバランスを考慮するとこれをするのが望ましいです
  5. 00:18:197 (1) - このエンドがwavの音が強く、曲をフォローしている感じが私にはしませんでした
    音量を50%程度に下げるのがベターです soft-wshistleへ
  6. 00:31:861 (2,1) - この部分の流れがやや不自然な感じがします　fixed　
    画像のように(2)に対して角度をつけたりすることで今よりは改善をすることが可能です
    ただし簡易的な修正なので、完璧を求めるならばスライダー前後の流れを含めさらなる改良を行う必要があります
  7. 00:47:009 - 00:47:603 - add note ボーカルがないのと、ここにnoteを置くことでかえって難しくなるように思えてしまい、今のところは保留です。他に同様の指摘を受けたら変更します。
    00:37:207 (1,2) - との箇所と違いこのnoteのない時間が不自然で、私はそれが悪く思えました
    この指摘によるタイムはあくまでも個人的直感に基づくタイムで、あなたが別の白線にnoteを置きたいのならばその箇所に置いてしまって構いません
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:019 (4) - なぜ00:36:316にclapがないのでしょうか
    私はここに置かない理由がなく、ここまでの一連のヒットサウンドのパターンに反していることに違和感を感じました fixed
gl
リチェックありがとうございます！
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 1 time in total.
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

NewRulerNA wrote:

[728's Normal]
  1. 00:21:762 (3,1) - スタックに関して
    (1)を-2~3度した上でスタックさせれば外見をほとんど損なうことなく今より単純によくさせることができます ok
  2. 00:59:633 (1,2) - この(2)が前後にあるnoteの影響でヒットバーストにより隠れ、それがタイミングを見切りにくくさせているように感じました全く同じリズムが2回繰り返す部分なので多少見えなくても大丈夫かなとは思うのですが、もう少し配置に関して検討してみようと思います。個人的にはこれらのノートはお互いに同じ高さに対称になるように配置したいので、現段階ではひとまずこのままにしておきます。
    こういった感じでnoteに高さの差を加え、より見やすい配置にすることでそれを回避することができます
るーらーさんModありがとうございました。
http://puu.sh/1oeV8
Coro
2,394 posts
Joined September 2010
Coro
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]
00:30:078 - d
01:09:955 - d
01:16:712 - d

Good map~
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
NewRulerNAさん、modありがとうございました。
修正いたしました！
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
from #modreqs
緑色以外のところはすべて提案です

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:910 (3) - SC1 clap?　他にも01:01:861 (2) - みたいな裏拍の所にSC1 clapがあってもいいとおもいます、Slidertickの音にこのclap音があるので.
  2. 00:53:841 (1) - 頭にfinish
  3. 01:01:861 (2) - move to (x:134 y:238)? 01:02:158 (3,4,1) - の繋がりからこちらも直線上につなげた方が綺麗に見えると思います
  4. 01:22:356 (1,1) - 二つのスライダーの音付けが違うのが気になりました._.
[728]
  1. wow so many green lines OwO
  2. 00:08:692 (1) - 1番目と2番目にfinish? (音量下げて使ってもいいかもしれません
[Hibari]
  1. BG右半分: 1/2 Summer --> 木漏れ日フレネル (もしくは Komorebi Fureneru) much better
  2. 以下の緑線を修正してください。
    SPOILER
    1. 00:11:069 - Disable KiaiTime
    2. 00:11:143 - Delete
    3. 00:39:583 - ^
    4. 00:39:658 - ^
    Taiko譜面ではフラッシュのように短いKIAIを入れてはいけません.　（参考： http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria Rules --> Kiai time）
  3. SoftではなくNormal Hitsoundを使ってください。Softにすると音量が小さくなり合いません。 Normal 80%でいいとおもいます。
  4. 00:10:327 (4,1,2) - dkk? 速度0.50倍でこのKKは詰まってて見にくいというよりすこし汚く感じました
  5. 00:27:108 - add d --> delete 00:27:554 (1) - . ドラムのクローズ音が00:27:108 - に聞こえるのとvocalに合わせるという意味です
  6. 00:27:702 (2,3,4,1) - d ddk?
  7. 00:30:375 - add d?
  8. 00:41:811 - add d?
  9. 00:43:742 - add k
  10. 00:44:336 (2,3,1,1) - k ddk?
  11. 01:25:474 (1,2,1) - kkd?
[Artbox]
  1. 00:53:544 (8) - 終点: clap --> finish?
  2. 01:15:227 (1) - 頭からclap削除、01:17:603 (1) - も同様に。　01:15:821 (2) - （終点）や01:18:791 (4) - （始点）、そして01:19:979 (1) - （始点）で使われていないので、この二つだけclapあるのは不自然ですし個人的に合わないと思います
  3. 01:24:732 - （緑線） 01:26:514 - に移動?
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:692 (2) - delete clap -> Soft sound + Normal finish?
  2. 01:25:771 (5,1,2) - add finish?
ほとんどhitsoundの話しかしてないです :?
Good luck~! :)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Naryuga wrote:

from #modreqs　thanks~
　緑色以外のところはすべて提案です

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:910 (3) - SC1 clap?　他にも01:01:861 (2) - みたいな裏拍の所にSC1 clapがあってもいいとおもいます、Slidertickの音にこのclap音があるので.　色々追加しました
  2. 00:53:841 (1) - 頭にfinish fixed
  3. 01:01:861 (2) - move to (x:134 y:238)? 01:02:158 (3,4,1) - の繋がりからこちらも直線上につなげた方が綺麗に見えると思います fixed
  4. 01:22:356 (1,1) - 二つのスライダーの音付けが違うのが気になりました._.　fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:38:692 (2) - delete clap -> Soft sound + Normal finish? fixed?
  2. 01:25:771 (5,1,2) - add finish? fixed


ほとんどhitsoundの話しかしてないです :?
Good luck~! :)
all fixedです。
moddingありがとうございました :)
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 1 time in total.
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Naryuga wrote:

[728]
  1. wow so many green lines OwO
  2. 00:08:692 (1) - 1番目と2番目にfinish? (音量下げて使ってもいいかもしれません 少し違うパターンですがfinishを追加しました。
NaryugaさんModありがとうございました。
http://puu.sh/1r78h
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz

Naryuga wrote:

from #modreqs
緑色以外のところはすべて提案です

[Hibari]
  1. BG右半分: 1/2 Summer --> 木漏れ日フレネル (もしくは Komorebi Fureneru) much better　BGを完全に変更いたしました！かなり良いBGになったと思います。
  2. 以下の緑線を修正してください。　ok完全にアンランク要素のことを忘れておりました。感謝感謝
    SPOILER
    1. 00:11:069 - Disable KiaiTime
    2. 00:11:143 - Delete
    3. 00:39:583 - ^
    4. 00:39:658 - ^
    Taiko譜面ではフラッシュのように短いKIAIを入れてはいけません.　（参考： http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Taiko_Ranking_Criteria Rules --> Kiai time）
  3. SoftではなくNormal Hitsoundを使ってください。Softにすると音量が小さくなり合いません。 Normal 80%でいいとおもいます。ok
  4. 00:10:327 (4,1,2) - dkk? 速度0.50倍でこのKKは詰まってて見にくいというよりすこし汚く感じましたok
  5. 00:27:108 - add d --> delete 00:27:554 (1) - . ドラムのクローズ音が00:27:108 - に聞こえるのとvocalに合わせるという意味ですok
  6. 00:27:702 (2,3,4,1) - d ddk?ok
  7. 00:30:375 - add d?ok
  8. 00:41:811 - add d?ok
  9. 00:43:742 - add kok
  10. 00:44:336 (2,3,1,1) - k ddk?異なった方法で修正
  11. 01:25:474 (1,2,1) - kkd?
ok

Good luck~! :)
今回もmoddingありがとうございました！またお願いします！！

修正版：
http://puu.sh/1r9Uo

新画像
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mintong89
3,699 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Taiko Mod from My Queue ♪

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Hibari's Taiko]

00:13:296 - i think this k is better.
00:15:153 - maybe add a d?
00:17:455 - K is better.
00:29:039 - k.
00:41:366 - i think add some thing is better. add a d?
01:03:643 - k
01:08:989 - k too.
01:25:771 (2,3) - maybe this two can change to D?

just this. good luck.
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
M4M :3

Black = suggestion.　Blue = important thing for me.

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:564 (1) - 緑線と緑線の間だけsliderslideの音が無音なのが気になります。多分大丈夫だとは思うのですが、2個目の緑線のところのtickがtickもslideも実質無音状態ともとれるので、N:C2のsliderslideの音をいれた方がいいと思います。
  2. 00:03:940 (1) - ^
  3. 01:14:336 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:356 (1) - ^
  5. 01:24:732 (1) - ^
[728's Normal]
  1. 00:20:573 (1) - 開始のwhistleが合わないと思います。音量適当に下げてfinishつけるか、消してはどうでしょうか。　00:30:078 (4) - が曲的に同じ部分に当たると思うのですが、こっちはfinishがついています。
  2. 00:30:672 (1) - 長いスライダーがあまりあっていないと思います。前のnoteをスライダーに変更して、こんな感じにした方がより曲に合っているとおもいます。
    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:049 (1) - ^
  4. 00:47:900 (2) - 折り返しスライダーに置き換えたほうがかっこいいとおもいます
    SPOILER
  5. 00:53:841 (1) - 音量50%ぐらいでfinishを置いてみてはどうでしょうか
  6. 00:54:435 (2) - S:C1のclapをつけてみては
  7. 00:55:623 (4) - ^
  8. 01:00:969 (1) - 終わりのwhistle削除
  9. 01:02:158 (2) - ^
  10. 01:10:474 (1) - ^
  11. 01:11:663 (2) - ^
  12. 01:15:227 (1) - 開始のwhistleをfinishへ
  13. 01:17:603 (1) - ^
[Artbox's Hard]
  1. 00:38:989 (2,3,4,5,1) - ちょっと配置が汚いのと思うので適当に修正してみてはどうでしょうか
    SPOILER
  2. 00:49:088 (1,2,3) - 無理やり3連打を置いているように思えます。もし連打が欲しいならば、こんなかんじに直前の赤線から置くと自然だと思います。
    SPOILER
  3. 01:09:138 (3) - この赤線に音を乗せるのはちょっと不自然だと思います。こんなかんじの音取りに変えてみてはどうでしょうか
    SPOILER
  4. 01:13:890 (2) - ここを消したほうがかっこいいと思います。消す場合適当に(3)の位置の変更を忘れずに!
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:841 (1) - 開始に音量50%ぐらいでfinishを置いてみてはどうでしょうか
以上です!
Ranked期待しています!!!!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

terametis wrote:

M4M :3

Black = suggestion.　Blue = important thing for me.

[Easy]
  1. 00:01:564 (1) - 緑線と緑線の間だけsliderslideの音が無音なのが気になります。多分大丈夫だとは思うのですが、2個目の緑線のところのtickがtickもslideも実質無音状態ともとれるので、N:C2のsliderslideの音をいれた方がいいと思います。 忘れてました…all fixedです
  2. 00:03:940 (1) - ^
  3. 01:14:336 (3) - ^
  4. 01:22:356 (1) - ^
  5. 01:24:732 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:841 (1) - 開始に音量50%ぐらいでfinishを置いてみてはどうでしょうか　fixed
以上です!
Ranked期待しています!!!!
thanks for modding & star!!!!!
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

terametis wrote:

[728's Normal]
  1. 00:20:573 (1) - 開始のwhistleが合わないと思います。音量適当に下げてfinishつけるか、消してはどうでしょうか。　00:30:078 (4) - が曲的に同じ部分に当たると思うのですが、こっちはfinishがついています。 finishにしました。
  2. 00:30:672 (1) - 長いスライダーがあまりあっていないと思います。前のnoteをスライダーに変更して、こんな感じにした方がより曲に合っているとおもいます。同じスライダーを4回繰り返したくなく、変化をつけるために少しずらしたリズムにしてます。曲は十分にフォローできていると思うのでこのままで。
    SPOILER
  3. 00:33:049 (1) - ^
  4. 00:47:900 (2) - 折り返しスライダーに置き換えたほうがかっこいいとおもいます特にこの形とリズムに拘りがあるわけではないんですが、前後がNormalにしては結構難しめであるので、それらの間の部分はなるべく簡単なリズムにしておこうと思います。
    SPOILER
  5. 00:53:841 (1) - 音量50%ぐらいでfinishを置いてみてはどうでしょうか ok
  6. 00:54:435 (2) - S:C1のclapをつけてみては ok
  7. 00:55:623 (4) - ^
  8. 01:00:969 (1) - 終わりのwhistle削除 実質鳴る音の数が結構少ない場所なので、HSを減らすと少し寂しいかなと思うのでそのままで。
  9. 01:02:158 (2) - ^
  10. 01:10:474 (1) - ^
  11. 01:11:663 (2) - ^
  12. 01:15:227 (1) - 開始のwhistleをfinishへ ok
  13. 01:17:603 (1) - ^
terametisさんModありがとうございました。
SPOILER
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Laurier
1,786 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
from my queue

General

00:39:583 - KIAIいらない気がします

Easy
00:22:950 (1,2) - 1のNC消して２に追加 ほかの場所がこういうパターンなのでそっちのほうがいいと思います
00:45:821 (2) - 00:43:445 (2,1) - の流れで上に上がって行きたい感じがします　http://puu.sh/1x0Wb
00:58:742 -ドレインそんなされるわけでもないし breakないほうが演出的にgood movieもみやすいっ!
01:14:336 (3,1) - NC入れ替え

Normal
00:08:098 (2) - 00:03:940 (1,2,3,4) - この辺からの流れにあわせて谷になるように曲げてあげよう
00:32:158 (4) - 向きにAIMあわせにくいのでもう少しリバース部分を上にあげてもいいかも　http://puu.sh/1x0Z9　このぐらいがやりやすい
01:22:356 (1) - 最後に長いspinあるしここspinで使っちゃうのはもったいないなぁと　BGMにも取りやすい音いっぱいあるしnoteおいてみては？



Hard
00:21:316 (2)～　00:23:395 (2,3,4,5) - こっちと同じパターンの音取りのほうが叩きやすいし、このあともずっと後者のパターンなので一貫性ができていいので変更するのはどうでしょうか
00:39:583 - ここにKIAI入れないのはいい判断だと思います
00:41:960 (1,2) - この2個のsliderendと00:41:663 (4) - で三角形作るときれいにみえてgood
01:05:722 (1) - 逆向きのカーブのほうがきれいに見えますきっと
01:22:356 (1) - ノーマルと同じ。BGMで音取ってからのlastのspinのほうがbetter


Insane
00:00:970 (1) ～なんか蛇みたいにnote同士がずらずらつながってるのあんまりきれいに見えないしやりにくいだけなのでもう少しくっつかないかんじにspacingとってもいいかなーと。結構配置は上手だと思うので、難しいとか悪い方向にはならんと思います
00:11:960 (5) - jump作り始めるなら音的にこのnoteからかなーとおもいます　　http://puu.sh/1x1bw　適当だけどこんな感じとか
00:14:633 (1,2,3) - ここもjumpほしいかなぁ　http://puu.sh/1x1cH　ここからしばらくほとんど変化ないからもう少し遊ばせてもいいと思います
00:17:009 (1,2) - ^
00:39:286 (4,5,6,1) - 提案 http://puu.sh/1x1e9
00:52:653 (4) - nazi 天辺のwaypoint　１個右かな
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Laurier wrote:

from my queue

General

00:39:583 - KIAIいらない気がします fixed

Easy
00:22:950 (1,2) - 1のNC消して２に追加 ほかの場所がこういうパターンなのでそっちのほうがいいと思います
00:45:821 (2) - 00:43:445 (2,1) - の流れで上に上がって行きたい感じがします　http://puu.sh/1x0Wb
00:58:742 -ドレインそんなされるわけでもないし breakないほうが演出的にgood movieもみやすいっ!
01:14:336 (3,1) - NC入れ替え allfixed

Insane
00:00:970 (1) ～なんか蛇みたいにnote同士がずらずらつながってるのあんまりきれいに見えないしやりにくいだけなのでもう少しくっつかないかんじにspacingとってもいいかなーと。結構配置は上手だと思うので、難しいとか悪い方向にはならんと思います 作り変えました
00:11:960 (5) - jump作り始めるなら音的にこのnoteからかなーとおもいます　　http://puu.sh/1x1bw　適当だけどこんな感じとか　ここも作り変えました
00:14:633 (1,2,3) - ここもjumpほしいかなぁ　http://puu.sh/1x1cH　ここからしばらくほとんど変化ないからもう少し遊ばせてもいいと思います　fixed
　00:17:009 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:39:286 (4,5,6,1) - 提案 http://puu.sh/1x1e9 少し提案とは違いますがfixed
00:52:653 (4) - nazi 天辺のwaypoint　１個右かなfixed
とても参考になりました :)
modありがとうございます
niceplayer
33 posts
Joined July 2010
niceplayer
from　#modreqs
英語同じぐらいやばいので、日本語でいいですが？

[Easy]
•01:05:128 (1) - NCなくしたほうが読みやすい。
•01:11:366 - 歌声があるのに、コンボnoteがない、ひとつサークルでいい

[728's Normal]
•01:25:772 (1) - いる意味がわからない。tagを増やす（注：難しくないように）、あるいは削除する。場合によってはspinnerも調整。

[Artbox's Hard]
•01:08:880 (5) - パターン、01:05:128とはおなじらしいが、なせがclapがある
オーディオ作業こちのは少ない、だから(w)

[Insane]
•00:51:316 (8) - これNCにしよ、あとのnoteNCなし
•01:24:583 (4) - やっば見つからん、場所変えだ方がいい


オーディオ作業がおい、もう”凄い”しか言えない
絵綺麗、mapのランクを待ってる
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Laurier wrote:

Normal
00:08:098 (2) - 00:03:940 (1,2,3,4) - この辺からの流れにあわせて谷になるように曲げてあげよう 個人的な曲のイメージ的に直線の方が合っているのでそちらを優先しようと思います。
00:32:158 (4) - 向きにAIMあわせにくいのでもう少しリバース部分を上にあげてもいいかも　http://puu.sh/1x0Z9　このぐらいがやりやすい
01:22:356 (1) - 最後に長いspinあるしここspinで使っちゃうのはもったいないなぁと　BGMにも取りやすい音いっぱいあるしnoteおいてみては？01:21:762 (4) のノートでこのパートは明確に終わっている為スピナーの方が纏まりが良く感じます。
Modありがとうございました。

niceplayer wrote:

[728's Normal]
•01:25:772 (1) - いる意味がわからない。tagを増やす（注：難しくないように）、あるいは削除する。場合によってはspinnerも調整。
You see, there is so long interval between 01:22:356 (1) and 01:25:772 (1) which is enough to control your cursor if you are a newbie player. I don't think any problem with it.
Thanks for modding.

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82356,-100,4,2,2,65,0,0
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87405,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
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88296,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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88890,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
89187,-100,4,2,1,25,0,0
89484,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,32
Combo2 : 13,230,13
Combo3 : 147,244,239

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Last edited by h-728 , edited 1 time in total.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

niceplayer wrote:

from　#modreqs
英語同じぐらいやばいので、日本語でいいですが？

[Easy]
•01:05:128 (1) - NCなくしたほうが読みやすい。 fixed
•01:11:366 - 歌声があるのに、コンボnoteがない、ひとつサークルでいい fixed

[Insane]
•00:51:316 (8) - これNCにしよ、あとのnoteNCなし 規則通りに置いているので no fixed
•01:24:583 (4) - やっば見つからん、場所変えだ方がいい fixed


オーディオ作業がおい、もう”凄い”しか言えない
絵綺麗、mapのランクを待ってる
moddingありがとうございました :)
cirno-_old
cirno-_old
Mostly a Placement mod. Lots of it is personal preference and is not required, just suggestions. That is all.

General
Give green + yellow a bit of luminosity. Something like this:
http://i.imgur.com/MRvYf.png
http://i.imgur.com/4WMoB.png

Easy
00:31:861 (2) - Blanket (1) ( http://i.imgur.com/ihrRI.png ) then adjust other objects as necessary
01:17:603 (1,2,1) - I did this http://i.imgur.com/sN0D5.png
01:21:762 (2,1) - http://i.imgur.com/q7eI4.png
01:24:138 (2,1) - http://i.imgur.com/uYaMZ.png

Normal is good

Hard
00:51:465 (1,2,3) - http://i.imgur.com/cXiIf.png
01:24:732 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this could use some kind of pattern. idk something like this http://i.imgur.com/RT45k.png


Insane
00:51:465 (1,2,3,4) - http://i.imgur.com/ARc1L.png | http://i.imgur.com/yKjxr.png
00:53:395 (5,6,7) - http://i.imgur.com/TzlN6.png
00:59:930 (4) - Not a fan of this (4) so I recommend something like this: http://i.imgur.com/Bp2uh.png
to do that, bring 1, 2, 3 up and put 4 inbetween 3 and 5.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

cirno- wrote:

Mostly a Placement mod. Lots of it is personal preference and is not required, just suggestions. That is all.

General
Give green + yellow a bit of luminosity. Something like this: fixed
http://i.imgur.com/MRvYf.png
http://i.imgur.com/4WMoB.png

Easy
00:31:861 (2) - Blanket (1) ( http://i.imgur.com/ihrRI.png ) then adjust other objects as necessary fixed
01:17:603 (1,2,1) - I did this http://i.imgur.com/sN0D5.png another fixed
01:21:762 (2,1) - http://i.imgur.com/q7eI4.png well, I prefer current placement, sorry><
01:24:138 (2,1) - http://i.imgur.com/uYaMZ.png^

Normal is good

Insane
00:51:465 (1,2,3,4) - http://i.imgur.com/ARc1L.png | http://i.imgur.com/yKjxr.png sorry no changed.
0:53:395 (5,6,7) - http://i.imgur.com/TzlN6.png a bit fixed
00:59:930 (4) - Not a fan of this (4) so I recommend something like this: http://i.imgur.com/Bp2uh.png another fixed.
to do that, bring 1, 2, 3 up and put 4 inbetween 3 and 5.
thanks for modding~
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz

mintong89 wrote:

Taiko Mod from My Queue ♪

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Hibari's Taiko]

00:13:296 - i think this k is better.
00:15:153 - maybe add a d?
00:17:455 - K is better.
00:29:039 - k.
00:41:366 - i think add some thing is better. add a d?
01:03:643 - k
01:08:989 - k too.
01:25:771 (2,3) - maybe this two can change to D?

just this. good luck.
All fixed! Thanks!!
http://puu.sh/1yYPG
-Neipezi
2,266 posts
Joined October 2011
-Neipezi
hi~ kajiyatta
Sorry.I'm late a lot. :(
Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:21:168 (1) - circle add? (I think)
00:47:009 - ^
00:47:603 - ^

[Normal]
01:25:177 - 1/1 slider (01:25:772 (2) - Copy)

[Artbox's Hard]
np

[Insane]
00:11:960 (5) - Slider head Clap add

No, kudosu.. :( (Sorry.. :cry: )
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

-Kirito wrote:

hi~ kajiyatta
Sorry.I'm late a lot. :( np :3
Kin's Modding Quest Team~

[Easy]
00:21:168 (1) - circle add? (I think) fixed
00:47:009 - ^ aimming to space for newbie. sorry no fixed.
00:47:603 - ^ ^


[Insane]
00:11:960 (5) - Slider head Clap add oops... I forgot it. thanks

No, kudosu.. :( (Sorry.. :cry: ) why? it's useful for me... anyway I'll wait a response by h-728.
thanks for modding :)
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

-Kirito wrote:

[Normal]01:25:177 - 1/1 slider (01:25:772 (2) - Copy) we should take enough blank space between a spinner and the next note.
thanks for modding :3
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
From my queue~

SPOILER
AIBat
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks
Inconsistency in Kiai Times ( Insane and Easy made by you, you should change kiai as same time )
Inconsistency in combo colours ( insane and easy have same BG , plz make them have same color )

Easy
00:49:088 (1) - delete NC
01:24:732 (1) - increase slider's length by 01:26:217 - here and add finish on end?

728's Normal
00:08:692 (1) - add finish on repeat instead whistle?
00:59:633 (1) - delete NC
01:26:366 (1) - delete finish?

Artbox's Hard
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections
01:00:968 - snap to 01:00:970

00:01:564 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid right
00:19:534 (6) - if you want add finish here,i think you'd better add finish and clap 00:18:197 (1) - on start and 00:19:237 (5) - here ( but delete whitle )
00:45:821 (1) - NC ,00:47:009 (4) - delete NC, 00:48:197 (1) - NC
00:53:247 (7) - add finish on start?
01:24:732 (1) - 1 grid left?
01:24:732 (1,5) - Finish , clap is better

Insane
gooooooooooood xD

well-mapped beatmap :D good luck for rank!
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

HelloSCV wrote:

728's Normal
00:08:692 (1) - add finish on repeat instead whistle? It sounds noisy.
00:59:633 (1) - delete NC Why? The NC makes players easy to understand the pattern.
01:26:366 (1) - delete finish?ok
Thanks for modding.
Kajiyattaさん最後のスピナーのfinishを削除しておいて頂けますか
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

HelloSCV wrote:

From my queue~

[spoilerbox]AIBat
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks
Inconsistency in Kiai Times ( Insane and Easy made by you, you should change kiai as same time )
Inconsistency in combo colours ( insane and easy have same BG , plz make them have same color ) all fixed

Easy
00:49:088 (1) - delete NC　fixed
01:24:732 (1) - increase slider's length by 01:26:217 - here and add finish on end?　jus a bit difficult I suppose. if other modders mention that, I'll fix it.

well-mapped beatmap :D good luck for rank!

h-728 wrote:

HelloSCV wrote:

728's Normal
00:08:692 (1) - add finish on repeat instead whistle? It sounds noisy.
00:59:633 (1) - delete NC Why? The NC makes players easy to understand the pattern.
01:26:366 (1) - delete finish?ok
fixed
Thanks for modding.
Kajiyattaさん最後のスピナーのfinishを削除しておいて頂けますか
thanks for moddings!
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q~

I can't fing nothing, map looks good. Only Fix combo colors on easy~
It's all good luck :3
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta
fixed it. thanks!
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
- [728's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:39:583, ends on 00:39:658
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:00:969, ends on 01:22:356 ←

- [Artbox's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:970, ends on 01:10:177
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:10:475, ends on 01:22:356

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:969, ends on 01:10:177
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:10:475, ends on 01:22:356

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:969, ends on 01:10:177
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:10:475, ends on 01:22:356

[easy]

00:27:108 (2) x:120 y:320
00:28:296 (1) x176 y:246

insane
01:25:623 - delet note ?

nice mapcet *0*
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta
[Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:969, ends on 01:10:177
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:10:475, ends on 01:22:356

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:00:969, ends on 01:10:177
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:10:475, ends on 01:22:356 　fixed

[easy]

00:27:108 (2) x:120 y:320 fixed
00:28:296 (1) x176 y:246 maybe ignoring DS

insane
01:25:623 - delet note ? fixed

nice mapcet *0*[/quote]
thanks for modding!
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki


Hi, kajiyatta

My mod from M4M request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Kiai time of Hibari's Taiko Oni diff is different. Please start it on 01:00:970.

Easy

  1. 00:01:564 (1) - If you want these are symmetry, move it to left and down 1 grid. Then move 3rd point of slider to middle.
  2. 00:03:940 (1) - This, too. Move to right and down 1 grid. Then move 3rd point of slider to middle. Section of 00:05:772 (2,1,2,1,2), I hope you can move these yourself, to adjust the spacing them.
  3. 01:02:158 (3,4,1) - These are weird. I think that slider of (3) and (1) should reduce their curvatures.

    Comment: Look good. I don't find any more problems.

728's Normal

  1. 00:08:098 (2) - I prefer to put clap sound more
  2. 00:31:564 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:328 y:172. Then move last point of (4) by this be better?
    SPOILER

    Comment: Look good for me.

Artbox's Hard

  1. 01:26:069 (6) - Hitsound is too loud. You should use whistle instead of finish and clap.

    Comment: In addition 01:22:801 (2,3,4,5,6) which I think that they aren't beautiful for me, nice diff.

Insane

  1. 00:12:257 (6) - Make to this be more beautiful.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:534 (5) - Finish sound is too loud. Try use whistle instead, or if you don't change, reduce hitsound in slider begin about 60~65%. Then add whistle in slider end, too.
  3. 00:55:029 (4) - Add NC here be better.
  4. 01:21:168 (5) - Add NC?

    Comment: Nice diff, but I feel weird on 00:39:583 (1,2,3), but I don't think that these aren't problem.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall, your map is look good for me. I hope you can go to rank. Give a star ;)

Good luck~
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

Nichiyouki wrote:

728's Normal

  1. 00:08:098 (2) - I prefer to put clap sound more Actually this part of this song seems half and I don't think clap sounds fit here.
  2. 00:31:564 (3,4) - Move (3) to x:328 y:172. Then move last point of (4) by this be better? nice. fixed
    SPOILER
Thanks for modding.
SPOILER
osu file format v11

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ところで冒頭部のKiai Flashは何故削除されたのでしょうか。
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Nichiyouki wrote:



Hi, kajiyatta

My mod from M4M request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

  1. Kiai time of Hibari's Taiko Oni diff is different. Please start it on 01:00:970.[/color ]

Easy

  1. 00:01:564 (1) - If you want these are symmetry, move it to left and down 1 grid. Then move 3rd point of slider to middle. fixed
  2. 00:03:940 (1) - This, too. Move to right and down 1 grid. Then move 3rd point of slider to middle. Section of 00:05:772 (2,1,2,1,2), I hope you can move these yourself, to adjust the spacing them. fixed
  3. 01:02:158 (3,4,1) - These are weird. I think that slider of (3) and (1) should reduce their curvatures. being curved seems more easier for newbie imo.

    Comment: Look good. I don't find any more problems.


Comment: Look good for me.[/list][/notice]

Artbox's Hard

  1. 01:26:069 (6) - Hitsound is too loud. You should use whistle instead of finish and clap. fixed

    Comment: In addition 01:22:801 (2,3,4,5,6) which I think that they aren't beautiful for me, nice diff.

Insane

  1. 00:12:257 (6) - Make to this be more beautiful. fixed
    SPOILER
  2. 00:19:534 (5) - Finish sound is too loud. Try use whistle instead, or if you don't change, reduce hitsound in slider begin about 60~65%. Then add whistle in slider end, too. [/color]
  3. 00:55:029 (4) - Add NC here be better. keepning my NC pattern sorry...
  4. 01:21:168 (5) - Add NC? ^

    Comment: Nice diff, but I feel weird on 00:39:583 (1,2,3), but I don't think that these aren't problem.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall, your map is look good for me. I hope you can go to rank. Give a star ;)

Good luck~

h-728 wrote:

ところで冒頭部のKiai Flashは何故削除されたのでしょうか。
Hard　diffは本人がいないので多少変更しましたがNormalには手を付けていないはずです。仮に自分の不注意で消してしまったなら申し訳ないです :o

thanks for modding & star~
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728

kajiyatta wrote:

Hard　diffは本人がいないので多少変更しましたがNormalには手を付けていないはずです。仮に自分の不注意で消してしまったなら申し訳ないです :o
了解です。次の修正を行ったときに戻しておきますね。(もしくは他のDiffに合わせたほうが良さそうならそうします。)
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi~ M4M from my Queue :>

[Insane]
00:46:564 (10)- x116 y352
00:48:494 (7)- more arc maybe?
01:00:227 (6,7)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkWH

[Artbox's Hard]
00:04:534 (2)- change to repeat once?
00:05:425 (3,4)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkZg
00:10:623 (4)- very hide o.o put other place?
00:19:979 (7,8)- http://puu.sh/1Ml25
00:36:910 (7,1,3)- overlap><
00:48:197 (3)- nc?
00:52:653 (5)- ^
01:12:554 (8)- chage? http://puu.sh/1Ml8e
01:21:910 (4)- hide
01:21:168 (3)- slider no rad point?(like above..01:19:979 (1,2)- )

[728's Normal]
00:36:613 (3,2)- overlap

[Easy]
fine!
sorry it's a short mod.. ><
good mapset! nothing else can say~

ganbatte rank~ 'w'/
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

yanlu wrote:

Hi~ M4M from my Queue :>

[Insane]
00:46:564 (10)- x116 y352 another fixed
00:48:494 (7)- more arc maybe? no fixed
01:00:227 (6,7)- try this http://puu.sh/1MkWH fixed
thanks for modding!
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
SPOILER

yanlu wrote:

[728's Normal]
00:36:613 (3,2)- overlap I don't know what problem with it.
Thanks for modding.
qkenan
134 posts
Joined October 2010
qkenan
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Since you have an Oni Taiko diff, according to recent rank criteria,You have to add another Kantan/Fuutsu Taiko diff
    I'm not very sure,so you can ask others for advice.

Easy

  1. 00:46:712 You really want to blank here?I prefer add 1~2 one-beat circles but not big problem

728's Normal

  1. 00:22:356 (4,5) - Stack them at (448,192)
  2. 00:30:078 (4) - Place it at the centre
  3. 00:51:465 (1) - Not very suitable...Suggest to split it into two one-beat slider
    SPOILER

Artbox's Hard

  1. 00:19:534 (6,7) - Dont fit the rhythm.Suggest↓↓
    SPOILER
  2. 00:27:702 (2) - Bad shape. :( Make it like this 00:26:514 (5) - ?
  3. 00:32:603 Add a circle ?
  4. 00:49:088 (1,3,5) - Shapes not very consistent...Try make them smoother ?
  5. 00:58:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A little too close,farther？(1.3x or 1.4x)
  6. 01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？
  7. 01:21:168 (3) - Shape it like previous ①② slider

Insane

  1. 00:46:564 (10,1) - Place them closer? For here rhythm doesnt change much so not necessary to put so far.
  2. 01:00:821 (8) - A little weird :( The jump feels meaningless.Stack at the head of ⑦ ?
  3. 01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？
  4. 01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes are placed too close.Try put them farther?(1.2x or more)
  5. 01:14:633 (6) - Just my suggestion.Use a slower slider velocity here ?
  6. 01:24:732 (1,2,3) - Raising the ②③ a little would make the flow better ? such as ↓↓
    SPOILER
  7. 01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Using Ctrl+Shift+R to rotate？

Nice mapset, Good luck~
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

qkenan wrote:

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
M4M from qkenan's queue _(:з」∠)_

General

  1. Since you have an Oni Taiko diff, according to recent rank criteria,You have to add another Kantan/Fuutsu Taiko diff
    I'm not very sure,so you can ask others for advice. maybe not necessary because this map had submitted before new rule noticed. e.g) http://osu.ppy.sh/s/55318

Easy

  1. 00:46:712 You really want to blank here?I prefer add 1~2 one-beat circles but not big problem fixed


Insane

  1. 00:46:564 (10,1) - Place them closer? For here rhythm doesnt change much so not necessary to put so far. fixed
  2. 01:00:821 (8) - A little weird :( The jump feels meaningless.Stack at the head of ⑦ ? fixed
  3. 01:02:158 (3) - Slider head +Finish？ no fixed
  4. 01:10:920 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes are placed too close.Try put them farther?(1.2x or more) fixed
  5. 01:14:633 (6) - Just my suggestion.Use a slower slider velocity here ? hmm, wait for another opinions.
  6. 01:24:732 (1,2,3) - Raising the ②③ a little would make the flow better ? such as ↓↓
    SPOILER
    maybe current seems fine
  7. 01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Using Ctrl+Shift+R to rotate？fixed

Nice mapset, Good luck~
thanks for modding~
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
SPOILER

qkenan wrote:

728's Normal

  1. 00:22:356 (4,5) - Stack them at (448,192) Oops, fixed.
  2. 00:30:078 (4) - Place it at the centre Uhm I couldn't get what you wanted to mean, but I think this section is fine.
  3. 00:51:465 (1) - Not very suitable...Suggest to split it into two one-beat sliderI don't think so. The vocal is continued through in this part so one long slider is the best.
Thanks for modding :3
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10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya

~Mod Request from Queue~


[General]
  1. Delete Taiko BG for widescreen setting support
  2. Why don't use different bg at Insane diff? Because you use different BG in each diff :3
    Maybe this will work ><
[Easy]
  1. Not use soft-slidertick2 ? I very recommend to you to use it at this diff to make balance of the rhythm >_<
  2. 00:31:861 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x:412 y:288 and 3rd point to x:488 y:272to make them like this picture?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:08:989 (1) and 01:09:583 - : try this rhythm ?
    SPOILER
[728's Normal]
  1. 00:51:465 (1)- : I'm sure you can variate this slider more :D like this for example:
    SPOILER
  2. 01:14:633 (4)- : add clap at slider reverse and slider's end?
[Hibari's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:05:425 (1,2)- : try this rhythm?
  2. 00:10:475 (1)- : K would be good also, why don't you make the slider velocity to 1.0 at here? :D
  3. 00:30:078 (1)- : K ?
  4. 00:47:900 (3)- : k ?
  5. 01:05:722 (2)- : K ?
  6. 01:06:910 (1)- : D ?
  7. 01:24:286 (2)- : k ?
[Artbox's Hard]
  1. 00:15:227 (6)- : add clap on slider tail? suggestion tough
  2. 00:40:772 (3)- : 2 grid to right?
  3. 01:26:366 (1)- : why don't add circle here, and move the spinner to 01:26:514 ?
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:707 - : you did triplet at 00:26:663- so why don't you use triplet again at here? It'll fit the rhythm imo :3
nice mapset <3
good luck 9^o^)9
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

- t e n n y a - wrote:


~Mod Request from Queue~


[General]
  1. Delete Taiko BG for widescreen setting support
  2. Why don't use different bg at Insane diff? Because you use different BG in each diff :3 Easy & Insane made by me, so I use same picture.
    Maybe this will work ><
[Easy]
  1. Not use soft-slidertick2 ? I very recommend to you to use it at this diff to make balance of the rhythm >_< already used owo?
  2. 00:31:861 (2)- : move 2nd slider point to x:412 y:288 and 3rd point to x:488 y:272to make them like this picture? fixed
    SPOILER
  3. 01:08:989 (1) and 01:09:583 - : try this rhythm ? ok~
    SPOILER
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:707 - : you did triplet at 00:26:663- so why don't you use triplet again at here? It'll fit the rhythm imo :3 another fixed~
nice mapset <3
good luck 9^o^)9
thanks for modding ;3
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
SPOILER

- t e n n y a - wrote:

[728's Normal]
  1. 00:51:465 (1)- : I'm sure you can variate this slider more :D like this for example: Good shape, but I don't think it will match with the song in this part.
  2. 01:14:633 (4)- : add clap at slider reverse and slider's end? In fact I could hear the drum sound, then added.
Thanks for modding :3
SPOILER
osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Komorebi Fureneru(short ver.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 60375
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49088,60969,63271
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Komorebi Fureneru (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Komorebi Fureneru (Short Ver.)
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:kajiyatta
Version:728's Normal
Source:1/2 summer
Tags:Alcot Honey Comb one side summer eroge opening ArtBox h-728 hibarirailwayz visual novel
BeatmapID:167778
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
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bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,670 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Hi hi~ Sorry for late :(
　　
[ General]
　
  1. Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>
　
[ Easy]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:01:564 (1) - This is not a complete symmetrical slider , copy 00:03:940 (1) - and Rotate by 180?
    2. 00:18:197 (1,1) - Hmm , I think the rest of beat is not enough between these two objects , I may like to end the slider at 00:19:831 (1) - and use finish instead of whistle ^_^
    3. 00:38:395 (2,3,1) - I would like to make this part more prettier and more flowable like this :
      Picture and Code

      372,108,38395,2,0,B|392:80|392:52,2,60,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      348,164,39286,1,8,0:0:0
      372,220,39583,6,0,B|392:248|392:276,2,60,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    4. 01:13:742 (2,3) - Hmm... there is a bad flow in my opinion , I prefer a circular one to wave one here
      Picture
    5. 01:17:603 (1,2) - Maybe curving the slider to another direction and move stack 01:19:385 (2) - on 01:21:762 (2) - for a nice flow pattern!
    6. Realy a nice Easy , I like it!
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:38:395 (2) - ( Highly Suggestion )Remove finish please , the cymbal which in the music should be at 00:38:544 -
    2. 01:22:356 (1,2,1) - Why don't you use clap sounds here? It make no sense in my opinion :p
　
[ 728's Normal]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:33:940 (2,3,4) - I would like to Ctrl+G on ( 3,4 ) and then change the hitsounds like before the amendment :3
    2. Really really awesome difficulty , can't find more things :D
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:56:217 (1) - Use whistle instead of finish? I can't hear any cymbal in the music
　
[ Artbox's Hard]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:31:564 (5) - Move to x:396 y:220 ?
    2. 00:38:692 (1) - Actually , the finish should be 00:38:544 - if you listen the music carrefully , Maybe use this rhythm ?
    3. 00:57:702 (4) - Hmm.. I would use a symmetrical pattern here , only change this slider's shape , so I just give you this slider's code xD
      Picture and code

      300,128,57702,2,0,B|319:83|308:32,2,97.50000371933,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    4. 01:13:148 (2) - Move this slider's endpoint to x:56 y:88 to make this part straight?
    5. 01:14:781 (6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Change to a 1/3 slider to follow the music more
    6. 01:26:514 (1) - End this spinner at 01:31:861 -
    7. I haven't seen you name before ... but your mapping style is very great!!! I am so happy ! :)
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 01:12:554 (8) - You forgot to add clap here?
    2. 01:26:366 (7) - Add finish here , for the background music ^_^
　
[ Insane]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. 00:58:593 (1) - You should add a New Combo here , it is a bug
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like arrangement , because I always feel bad during gameplay, I prefer something else like this
      Picture
    2. Nice a flowable difficulty!
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:38:395 (5,6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Finish should be on slider5's end , not slider6's start!
    2. 00:40:772 (5) - Forgot add clap end?
    3. 01:14:633 (6) - Remove clap end ?
    4. 01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Whistles doesn't fits music at all here , remove all of them and only use finishes here?
　

About abbreviations

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
[ Hibari's Taiko Oni]

  1. 00:30:375 (1,1) - kd?
  2. 00:44:336 (2,3,1,2,1) - They are not follow the song at all , try ddkdd
  3. 00:48:049 (4) - k
  4. 01:09:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Overmap if you listen the music carrefully >~<
  5. 01:26:366 (1) - End this slider at 01:31:861 -
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Awesome mapsets!!! I am so happy now , so...
You can call me back! When you reply me mod ^_^
Good Luck for now :3

Notice

  1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks !
    Do not just "quote" my mod and say "Thanks for mod" or something else like this kind of sentence
    If I see you don't do the thing as above , I will add you in my blacklist for 1 month!!
    It means you can't get my mod for 1 month
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ Sorry for late :(
　　
[ General]
　
  1. Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>
OK
　

[ Hibari's Taiko Oni]

  1. 00:30:375 (1,1) - kd? fixed
  2. 00:44:336 (2,3,1,2,1) - They are not follow the song at all , try ddkddfixed
  3. 00:48:049 (4) - k sorry, voice start at 00:48:197 and use "k". I think, if I follow your opinion, This balance collapse.
  4. 01:09:880 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1) - Overmap if you listen the music carrefully >~< this may be overmap, but this point make Taiko player exciting, don't you? and I think this is not so overmap.
  5. 01:26:366 (1) - End this slider at 01:31:861 - fixed
Thanks for your mod! :)
http://puu.sh/1TkDZ
　
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ Sorry for late :(
　　
[ General]
　
  1. Background : Taiko BG is no longer available because of the updates , it is unrankable now , use the other BG like other difficulties' BG please <(_ _)>
　
[ Easy]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:01:564 (1) - This is not a complete symmetrical slider , copy 00:03:940 (1) - and Rotate by 180? fixed
    2. 00:18:197 (1,1) - Hmm , I think the rest of beat is not enough between these two objects , I may like to end the slider at 00:19:831 (1) - and use finish instead of whistle ^_^ another fixed
    3. 00:38:395 (2,3,1) - I would like to make this part more prettier and more flowable like this : I arranged this part based on your code.
      Picture and Code

      372,108,38395,2,0,B|392:80|392:52,2,60,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      348,164,39286,1,8,0:0:0
      372,220,39583,6,0,B|392:248|392:276,2,60,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    4. 01:13:742 (2,3) - Hmm... there is a bad flow in my opinion , I prefer a circular one to wave one here
      Picture
      fixed
    5. 01:17:603 (1,2) - Maybe curving the slider to another direction and move stack 01:19:385 (2) - on 01:21:762 (2) - for a nice flow pattern! fixed
    6. Realy a nice Easy , I like it! :3
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:38:395 (2) - ( Highly Suggestion )Remove finish please , the cymbal which in the music should be at 00:38:544 - fixed
    2. 01:22:356 (1,2,1) - Why don't you use clap sounds here? It make no sense in my opinion :p fixed
　[ Artbox's Hard]
he or she isn't active for a long time, so I made some patterns and modified. 　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:31:564 (5) - Move to x:396 y:220 ? fixed
    2. 00:38:692 (1) - Actually , the finish should be 00:38:544 - if you listen the music carrefully , Maybe use this rhythm ? deleted finish at head. I suppose this rythem pattern seems better.
    3. 00:57:702 (4) - Hmm.. I would use a symmetrical pattern here , only change this slider's shape , so I just give you this slider's code xD thanks, fixed.
      Picture and code

      300,128,57702,2,0,B|319:83|308:32,2,97.50000371933,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    4. 01:13:148 (2) - Move this slider's endpoint to x:56 y:88 to make this part straight? fixed
    5. 01:14:781 (6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Change to a 1/3 slider to follow the music more fixed
    6. 01:26:514 (1) - End this spinner at 01:31:861 - oops... fixed
    7. I haven't seen you name before ... but your mapping style is very great!!! I am so happy ! :)
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 01:12:554 (8) - You forgot to add clap here? fixed
    2. 01:26:366 (7) - Add finish here , for the background music ^_^ fixed
　
[ Insane]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. 00:58:593 (1) - You should add a New Combo here , it is a bug fixed
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - I don't like arrangement , because I always feel bad during gameplay, I prefer something else like this ok, changed.
      Picture
    2. Nice a flowable difficulty!
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:38:395 (5,6) - ( Highly Suggestion ) Finish should be on slider5's end , not slider6's start! fixed
    2. 00:40:772 (5) - Forgot add clap end? fixed
    3. 01:14:633 (6) - Remove clap end ? fixed
    4. 01:25:772 (4,5,6) - Whistles doesn't fits music at all here , remove all of them and only use finishes here? fixed
　
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
Awesome mapsets!!! I am so happy now , so...
You can call me back! When you reply me mod ^_^
Good Luck for now :3

Notice

  1. Please reply my mod and tell me which you fix which you don't fix , thanks !
    Do not just "quote" my mod and say "Thanks for mod" or something else like this kind of sentence
    If I see you don't do the thing as above , I will add you in my blacklist for 1 month!!
    It means you can't get my mod for 1 month
thanks for modding!
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
SPOILER

bossandy wrote:

[ 728's Normal]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:33:940 (2,3,4) - I would like to Ctrl+G on ( 3,4 ) and then change the hitsounds like before the amendment :3 Hmm.. If I do so, the circle will completely be covered by the hitburst and hard to see, so I'd like to keep my placement.
    2. Really really awesome difficulty , can't find more things :D
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:56:217 (1) - Use whistle instead of finish? I can't hear any cymbal in the music Sure.
Thanks for the modding :3
SPOILER
osu file format v11

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DistanceSpacing: 1
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CircleSize:3
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bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,670 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Recheck here
　
  1. Title and Artist : Now OSU accept original title and artist , So use other language's for title and artist is fine now~ Japanese title : 木漏れ日フレネル (Short Ver.) Example
  2. Easy : Usused Timing Sections 01:24:138 - 01:24:732 - Remove them
Nothing more to point , fix them , and you can get a bubble from me :D
Last edited by bossandy , edited 1 time in total.
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

bossandy wrote:

Recheck here
　
  1. Title and Artist : Now OSU accept original title and artist , So use other language's for title and artist is fine now~ Japanese title : 木漏れ日フレネル (Short Ver.) Example fixed
  2. Easy : Usused Timing Sections 01:24:138 - 01:24:732 - Remove them fixed
Nothing more to point , fix them , and you can get a bubble from me :D
thanks for rechecking!
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,670 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
Ya , I like this singer's voice , and I like this map!!! Well done guys!! enjoy this~

Bubbled!

7# bubble!!!
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta
thanks for bubbled :)
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
Go go kajiyatta :D/
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz
ラストスパートじゃぁああ :)
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
goooooooooooooo ^q^
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
After some discussion on the title we decided to pop in order to change it to "Komorebi Fresnel".
Melophobia
osu! Alumni
2,230 posts
Joined September 2011
Melophobia
Let's make double post! I rechecked over IRC and we fixed:
  • Unrankable video resolution.
    Missing hitsounds in Insane, Hard and Easy.
    Audio lead-in time in Insane and Hard since it was originally too short.
log
18:53 kajiyatta: こんにちは、PM読みました。
18:53 Melophobia: kondesu
18:53 kajiyatta: 名前変更してtagにfureneru持ってくればいいんでしょうか
18:54 Melophobia: hai
18:54 kajiyatta: 分かりました
18:54 Melophobia: じゃあ泡割っても大丈夫です？
18:54 kajiyatta: 大丈夫ですー
18:54 Melophobia: はい
18:54 Melophobia: 少々お待ちを
18:58 Melophobia: 終わりました
18:58 Melophobia: updateしてokです～
18:58 kajiyatta: はい
18:58 Melophobia: ご飯食べたらリチェックしますね
18:59 kajiyatta: よろしくお願いします
19:26 Melophobia: VideoのサイズがUnrankableなんですが
19:26 Melophobia: 適切なサイズのやつ用意したほうがいいですか？
19:26 Melophobia: 特に手間でもないのでリチェックしながらエンコードしますが
19:27 kajiyatta: 11Mbだと大きいんですか？
19:27 Melophobia: あ
19:27 Melophobia: 解像度のほうです
19:27 Melophobia: １２８０x～
19:27 kajiyatta: 800以下でしたっけ
19:27 Melophobia: 854*480以下ですね
19:28 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:28 kajiyatta: こちらで直します
19:28 Melophobia: 了解です
19:33 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
19:34 Melophobia: ちょっと他にも書くことあるっぽいので
19:34 Melophobia: 全部見てからpostしちゃいますね
19:34 kajiyatta: お手数かけます
19:34 Melophobia: 問題ないですー
19:41 Melophobia: あ
19:41 Melophobia: まだいますか
19:41 kajiyatta: はい
19:41 Melophobia: やっぱりそんなに書くこともなかったのでIRCで
19:41 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:41 Melophobia: ログはあとで英訳かなんかします
19:42 Melophobia: Insane
19:42 Melophobia: 00:19:831 - whistleつけ忘れ？
19:42 Melophobia: Hardも同じくです
19:42 kajiyatta: みたいですね
19:42 Melophobia: Easy
19:43 Melophobia: 00:09:286 - insaneではここがFinishだったのでこの難易度でもFinishの方がいいかなと
19:43 kajiyatta: 了解です
19:44 Melophobia: あとInsaneとHardのLead-inが短いので1500msに
19:44 Melophobia: 以上です
19:45 kajiyatta: Easy,Normalは1000のままでいいんですか？
19:45 Melophobia: 始まるのが遅いので
19:45 Melophobia: 揃えなくても大丈夫です
19:45 kajiyatta: 分かりました
19:47 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
19:51 Melophobia: えっとVideoなんですが
19:51 Melophobia: 横を800にするなら縦は450です
19:52 Melophobia: 16:9の場合は854x480まで認められます
19:52 Melophobia: 特に問題でもなさそうなんですが直せますか？
19:52 kajiyatta: 直してみます
19:54 kajiyatta: 800×448になってしまうんですが大丈夫ですか
19:55 Melophobia: ソースのVideoが元々変ってことです？
19:55 Melophobia: あれ
19:55 Melophobia: ちょっと計算してきます
19:56 Melophobia: 16:9だと800:450ですよね・・
19:57 kajiyatta: サイズ指定で変換してるんですが、多少ずれてしまうようで
19:57 Melophobia: なるほど
19:57 Melophobia: じゃあそれで問題無いと思います
20:01 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
20:01 Melophobia: はい
20:04 Melophobia: Insane
20:04 Melophobia: 00:38:692 - clap?
20:05 kajiyatta: はい
20:05 Melophobia: Easyにどういうロジックで音つけてるのかイマイチつかめないんですがEasyにもついてないです
20:06 kajiyatta: 修正しました
20:06 Melophobia: 何度もすみませんupdateお願いします
20:08 kajiyatta: アップデートしました
20:10 Melophobia: おっけーです
20:10 Melophobia: post書いてきますね

Rebubbled!~
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta
thanks for modding!
Wreath
435 posts
Joined February 2012
Wreath
go go! :x
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
やっ

[General]
Tick rate 2 is preferred for this song, though there isn't much of a point for having tick rate 2 if you have them all silenced... have you considered using a different sound for them in case you feel that they are too loud?

[Easy]
01:24:732 (1) - Extend this to 01:26:069 -
01:26:514 (1) - Start this at 01:26:366 -

[Taiko]
00:00:524 - Eh, why .5x? Feels like a huge transition for something that really isn't that big of an intensity change.

[Hard]
01:11:069 (3,4) - For a map that has very few jumps in it, this jump was out of place as it kind of comes out of nowhere, and you go right back to distance snapping for the rest of the map.

[Insane]
00:14:633 (4,5,6) - I'm not understanding why these are such large jumps.
00:18:940 (4,5) - The repeat on these sliders doesn't really go to anything in the music. It'd be better as just circles.
00:24:732 (6) - Maybe ctrl + g to keep with the jump flow from 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) -
00:39:286 (8,9,10) - Is there a need for 1/4s here? I'm not hearing it in the music. It also feels rather isolated and just plays awkwardly.
00:45:673 (6,7,8) - ^
01:00:376 (4,5,6,7) - This really isn't a good place for this type of pattern. It's a quiet part that's leading into the big explosion of chorus. Especially when you take out all of that extra momentum by going back to distance snap at 01:00:821 (7,1) -
01:21:168 (5,6,7) - Same thing as earlier: why are you adding all these extra beats where there's nothing in the music? Especially such a strong part with silence in between each pair of rhythms, but you fill it in anyway.
hibarirailwayz
446 posts
Joined June 2011
hibarirailwayz

Garven wrote:

やっ

[Taiko]
00:00:524 - Eh, why .5x? Feels like a huge transition for something that really isn't that big of an intensity change.

change x.75!
Thanks for modding!! 8-)

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kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Garven wrote:

やっ

[General]
Tick rate 2 is preferred for this song, though there isn't much of a point for having tick rate 2 if you have them all silenced... have you considered using a different sound for them in case you feel that they are too loud? I dunno why feels nice tick rate 2, but anyway changed to tick rate 2.

[Easy]
01:24:732 (1) - Extend this to 01:26:069 - fixed
01:26:514 (1) - Start this at 01:26:366 - fixed

[Hard]
01:11:069 (3,4) - For a map that has very few jumps in it, this jump was out of place as it kind of comes out of nowhere, and you go right back to distance snapping for the rest of the map. this jumping seems tiny and there are some jumping in this map, maybe if get rid of them the diff will be boring.

[Insane]
00:14:633 (4,5,6) - I'm not understanding why these are such large jumps. yeah I don't put a jump in this part first, but some modders say it feels bored. after some time, I suppose this jump seems better for this part to follow the music.
00:18:940 (4,5) - The repeat on these sliders doesn't really go to anything in the music. It'd be better as just circles. fixed
00:24:732 (6) - Maybe ctrl + g to keep with the jump flow from 00:22:356 (6,7,8,9) - fixed
00:39:286 (8,9,10) - Is there a need for 1/4s here? I'm not hearing it in the music. It also feels rather isolated and just plays awkwardly. fixed
00:45:673 (6,7,8) - ^ fixed
01:00:376 (4,5,6,7) - This really isn't a good place for this type of pattern. It's a quiet part that's leading into the big explosion of chorus. Especially when you take out all of that extra momentum by going back to distance snap at 01:00:821 (7,1) - fixed
01:21:168 (5,6,7) - Same thing as earlier: why are you adding all these extra beats where there's nothing in the music? Especially such a strong part with silence in between each pair of rhythms, but you fill it in anyway.I know but blank is weird for Insane, anyway I follow the rest of vocal.
thanks for modding.
EDIT ok, changed some stuff at start in Insane.
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 2 times in total.
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Im at work, so i cant give specific examples, but if you have a jump, its best to use them at the same place if that part in the music shows up again. It gives the map a more consistent feel. Thats why I pointed out the jumps in the Hard and Insane, though the ones at the start of insane are still a bit weird. If they fit the music better or if the pattern didnt stick out so much compared to the rest of the mapping, I wouldnt mind it as much. Just a thought before I get time to recheck.

Edit:

Rebubbled!
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
hi there~~~ high sp bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Inconsistent kiai in 728's Normal where is unnecessary imo
[Insane]
  1. AR+1, AR8 for bpm is too low
  2. 00:39:286 (8,9) - the stack here may break your flow, i would like to move (9) to 128:260
  3. 00:52:653 (4) - remove finish at end for consistent hitsound
  4. 01:25:772 (4) - NC here for beat change?
[Artbox's Hard]
  1. AR+1, i think AR8 in a 202bpm hard is more comfortable
  2. 01:09:583 (5) - make it like this?
    SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. Different from other diffs.. STR2 is looked awful on some sliders like..so i suggest 1 as well
    SPOILER

kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~~ high sp bubble check~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Inconsistent kiai in 728's Normal where is unnecessary imo
fixed

[Insane]
  1. AR+1, AR8 for bpm is too low umm... sorry I don't like AR9 with this map and no one who modded this map said on your meaning.
  2. 00:39:286 (8,9) - the stack here may break your flow, i would like to move (9) to 128:260 fixed
  3. 00:52:653 (4) - remove finish at end for consistent hitsound fixed
  4. 01:25:772 (4) - NC here for beat change? fixed
[Artbox's Hard]
  1. AR+1, i think AR8 in a 202bpm hard is more comfortable because of Insane with AR8, hold AR7 on this diff.
  2. 01:09:583 (5) - make it like this? fixed
    SPOILER
[Easy]
  1. Different from other diffs.. STR2 is looked awful on some sliders like..so i suggest 1 as well fixed
    SPOILER

thanks for modding.
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
rebubbled~~
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ kajiyatta ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[728's Normal]


  1. 00:30:078 (4) - Move 1 grid left,make triangle with 00:28:890 (2,3).
  2. 00:49:088 (1,3) - These sliders are isn't perfect symmetrical.

[Easy]


  1. 01:09:880 (3) - Try remove this circle,more easy playable.

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~ ;)
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
Topic Starter
kajiyatta

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ kajiyatta ~ :)



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions


[Easy]


  1. 01:09:880 (3) - Try remove this circle,more easy playable. fixed

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map ~

Call me back ~ ;)
thanks for modding.
h-728
513 posts
Joined November 2010
h-728
both fixed, thanks :3
SPOILER
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Creator:kajiyatta
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308,196,8692,6,0,B|404:147|500:195,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,10475,2,0,B|124:324,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,100,21465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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448,192,22356,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,22653,1,8,0:0:0:0:
470,93,22950,6,0,B|428:69|360:89|331:152|348:197,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,276,23841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,184,24138,2,0,B|214:141|160:143,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,244,24732,2,0,B|144:292|168:340,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,25920,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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152,192,28296,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,68,29484,2,0,B|166:36,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,30078,1,4,0:0:0:0:
72,248,30672,6,0,B|152:319|257:297,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,268,31564,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,168,31861,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,200,32158,2,0,B|485:215,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,136,33049,6,0,B|191:151|163:216|191:279|235:296,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,216,33940,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,216,34237,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,120,34534,2,0,B|370:136|387:187,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,336,35425,5,2,0:0:0:0:
120,192,36019,2,0,B|60:192,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,164,36613,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,76,36910,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,52,37207,6,0,B|362:104|327:144,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,216,37801,2,0,B|249:268|284:308,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,240,38395,2,0,B|444:175|443:67,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,28,39286,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,24,39583,6,0,B|170:20|121:84,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,120,40177,2,0,B|191:192|155:264,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,299,40771,2,0,B|168:361|248:359,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,356,41366,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,184,41960,6,0,B|256:260|112:184,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,43148,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,84,43445,2,0,B|172:60|220:84,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,128,44039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,308,44633,5,8,0:0:0:0:
396,208,44930,1,2,0:0:0:0:
309,258,45227,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,308,45821,5,8,0:0:0:0:
203,258,46118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,208,46415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,128,46712,6,0,B|193:84|256:56|321:84|336:129,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,252,47900,2,0,B|191:297|256:325|319:297|336:253,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,48791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,252,49088,6,0,B|122:191|138:112,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,49682,2,0,B|256:51|328:88,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,112,50276,2,0,B|390:191|336:252,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,287,50870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,360,51465,6,0,B|118:197|256:110,1,300,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,112,52653,1,4,0:0:0:0:
456,284,53247,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,284,53841,5,4,0:0:0:0:
56,284,54435,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,112,55029,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,284,55623,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56217,12,2,57999,0:0:0:0:
333,268,58593,6,0,B|376:275|376:275|389:287|389:287|429:293,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,254,59336,1,2,0:0:0:0:
185,268,59633,6,0,B|141:275|141:275|128:287|128:287|88:293,2,100,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,255,60375,1,2,0:0:0:0:
416,184,60969,6,0,B|448:227|416:275|416:275|488:348,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,225,62158,2,0,B|294:180|326:133|326:133|253:60,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,36,63049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,124,63346,6,0,B|115:177|160:207,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,63940,2,0,B|237:164|291:168,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,56,64831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,152,65128,2,0,B|493:202,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,188,65722,6,0,B|340:212|292:188,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,66316,2,0,B|182:202,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,56,66910,2,0,B|172:32|124:56,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,140,67504,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,140,67801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,232,68098,6,0,B|160:256|208:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,232,68692,2,0,B|352:256|400:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,40,69583,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,44,69880,2,0,B|488:97|444:127,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,70474,6,0,B|301:96|253:128|253:128|180:56,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,71663,2,0,B|257:248|209:216|209:216|136:288,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,288,72554,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,188,72851,6,0,B|39:134|84:104,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,188,73742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,188,74336,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,260,74633,2,0,B|470:322,2,75,2|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,284,75227,6,0,B|285:300|224:246,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,212,75821,2,0,B|172:133|226:72,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,37,76415,2,0,B|339:21|400:75,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,109,77009,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,304,77603,6,0,B|411:357|331:341,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,332,78197,2,0,B|207:306|181:229,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,78791,2,0,B|148:104|202:43,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,68,79385,2,0,B|296:92|344:68,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,40,79979,6,0,B|493:101|478:180,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,252,81762,2,0,B|216:252,1,50,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82356,12,2,84732,0:0:0:0:
208,280,85772,6,0,B|256:304|304:280,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86366,12,0,91861,0:0:0:0:
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Let's hope this won't get the same treatment :/
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