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Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size)

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Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013년 7월 19일 금요일 at 오후 3:02:28

Artist: Kana Asumi
Title: Open Canvas (TV Size)
Source: Hidamari Sketch
Tags: Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BPM: 183
Filesize: 14443kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.83 stars, 99 notes)
  2. HaHoHard (4.98 stars, 232 notes)
  3. Normal (4.01 stars, 130 notes)
  4. scanter's Insane (5 stars, 290 notes)
Download: Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size)
Download: Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
1st Map
Easy - Finished (By Me)
Normal - Finshed (By Me)
HaHoHard - Finished (By HabilHolic)
Scnater's Insane - Finished (By Scanter)
Last edited by Totoro , edited 27 times in total.
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
겟난이 지금 거의 다되갑니다

좀만 기다려주시길..ㅠㅠㅠ 8-)
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
하드 겟난 여기있음

추가부탁

http://puu.sh/1XO7q
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
수정했습니다 ~~ 업뎃해주시길. http://puu.sh/21K7C
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
[General]
  1. 프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
  2. 초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요
[Easy]

  • - 별로 잡을껀 없네요 lol
[Normal]

  • - 00:27:668 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
    - 00:30:292 (1) - ^
    - 00:39:802 (4) - 뉴콤
    - 00:40:786 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤삭제
    - 00:46:362 (2,3) - 빨간 1,2번이랑 겹치는거 추천요
    - 00:51:267 (1) - 앞쪽이 피니시
    - 00:57:824 (5) - 노말에서 이런 갑잓런 점프는 비추천 드려요
    - 00:59:792 (3) - 끝쪽에 피니시
    - 01:27:988 (1) - 01:29:300 - 여기서 끝내시는거 추천드려요
[Hard]

  • - 00:22:251 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/27Re3 이거 써보세요
    - 00:26:349 (1) - 앞 피니시
    - 00:31:103 (7) - 노트추가
    - 00:36:841 (1) - 피니시
    - 00:42:579 (2,3) - 박자 반대
    - 00:51:267 - 키아이 타임인데 언스냅이네요 꼭 수정해주세요
    - 01:13:398 (4) - 앞 피니시
    - 01:25:365 (1) - ^
    - 01:26:349 (3,5) - 뒤쪽에 피니시

[insane]

  • - 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게?
    - 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요
    - 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천
    - 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요
    - 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤
    - 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천
    - 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛
오예 쿠도스2개굿럭 xD
Broccoly
1,359 posts
Joined May 2012
Broccoly
안녕하세요~

[Normal]

전체적으로 노트들이 타임라인에 몇mm차이로 스냅이 안되있는데 수정해주세요.

00:04:055 (4) - 이 슬라이더 리핏이랑 꼬리가 타임라인에 스냅이 안됬네요. 00:01:431 (4) - 이것처럼 스냅시켜주세요
00:03:972 - 여기 타임라인에 초록선도 스냅시켜주세요.
00:59:792 (3,4,5,6) - 갑작스러운 엇박이라 노멀치고는 초보분들이 헷갈려 하실 수 있을텐데 굳이 안고쳐도 되긴 할것같고.. 일단 전 놔두는 쪽으로.
01:01:694 - 이 초록선은 필요없는것 같은데 지워주세요. Kiai타임 끊을 필요가 없어보이네요.
01:27:988 (1) - 스피너는 하얀선에 맞춰서 끝내주세요.

[Easy]

여기도 전체적으로 노트들이 타임라인에 몇mm차이로 스냅이 안되있는데 수정해주세요.

00:47:660 (1) - 이지인데 스피너가 슬라이더 1/4박자 뒤에 있네요.. 00:47:660 (1) - 여기서부터 00:47:660 (1) - 여기까지가 적당할것 같아요.
00:57:840 (3) - (nazi) 더 잘 감싸주세요 (서클이 쏙 들어가게 이쁘게)
00:59:136 (1,2,3,4) - 여기가 보컬이랑 잘 안맞네요.

이렇게 타임라인을 수정하시는걸 추천드려요.

Good luck!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic

HelloSCV wrote:

[General]
  1. 프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
  2. 초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요
[Easy]

  • - 별로 잡을껀 없네요 lol
[Normal]

  • - 00:27:668 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
    - 00:30:292 (1) - ^
    - 00:39:802 (4) - 뉴콤
    - 00:40:786 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤삭제
    - 00:46:362 (2,3) - 빨간 1,2번이랑 겹치는거 추천요
    - 00:51:267 (1) - 앞쪽이 피니시
    - 00:57:824 (5) - 노말에서 이런 갑잓런 점프는 비추천 드려요
    - 00:59:792 (3) - 끝쪽에 피니시
    - 01:27:988 (1) - 01:29:300 - 여기서 끝내시는거 추천드려요
[Hard]

  • - 00:22:251 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/27Re3 이거 써보세요
    - 00:26:349 (1) - 앞 피니시
    - 00:31:103 (7) - 노트추가
    - 00:36:841 (1) - 피니시
    - 00:42:579 (2,3) - 박자 반대
    - 00:51:267 - 키아이 타임인데 언스냅이네요 꼭 수정해주세요
    - 01:13:398 (4) - 앞 피니시
    - 01:25:365 (1) - ^
    - 01:26:349 (3,5) - 뒤쪽에 피니시

[insane]

  • - 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게?
    - 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요
    - 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천
    - 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요
    - 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤
    - 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천
    - 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛
오예 쿠도스2개굿럭 xD
http://puu.sh/27YKm

업데이트 바람
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

HelloSCV wrote:

[General]
  1. 프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
  2. 초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요
[insane]

  • - 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게? 반복 슬라랑 서클 2스택으로 대체
    - 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요 yeah
    - 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천 전반적으로 안 겹치게끔 다 이동시켜봤어요.
    - 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요 뉴콤으로 대체했음
    - 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤 okay
    - 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천 fix
    - 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛 yes
오예 쿠도스2개굿럭 xD ㅋㅋ
수고하셨어요 !
C O O K 1 E_old
C O O K 1 E_old
아이코 안녕~ 오랜만이야 ㅎ 부탁했으니까 해줄게 ㅋㅋ 허접해 ㅋㅋ

Easy

00:00:120 (1) - x:72 y:120으로 옮겨봐

00:01:431 (3) - x:256 y:184

00:05:365 (5) - x:450 y:155

00:19:468 (2) - x:256 y:268

00:21:109 (1) - 1칸 오른쪽

00:32:915 (2) - x:396 y:256

00:46:690 (3) - ctrl+j 하고 00:46:362 (2) - 랑 직선

00:58:824 (4,1,2,3,4) - 여기 고쳐봐

나머지는 그런대로 괜찮은듯? 잘해봐~ 랭크 꼭 돼!
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
YO!! M4M

[General]

(*) UNSNAPPED ALL INHERITED POINTS NOT POSITIONED CRRECTLY, CHECK THIS PLEASE..
(*) UNSNAPPED ALL NOTES OMG CHECK THIS NOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

(*) 00:13:890 - Have you considered adding a spinner here? I recommend placing spinner here
(*) Add scanter in the tags :)


[Easy]

(*) NAZI* 00:23:733 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is misaligned, move this note 00:24:716 (4) - X:28 Y:224
(*) 00:05:365 (5) - Add whistle here
(*) 00:28:324 (1,2) - You have broken the spacing distance here, please check this >//<
(*) 01:00:283 (2,3) - these notes are not well stacked with this 00:58:824 (4) - please move this notes 01:00:283 (2,3) - X:44 Y:272
although in a stacked notes never easy as it is to be confusing for new players :o
(*) WA WA WHAT!!! LOOK THIS.... because there are too points Inherited D:!, Very conveniently placed please check this
(*) 01:03:070 (2) - This slider is being covered by this 01:00:939 (4) - which, to confuse the player can play :o move this another part
Try this:

(*) 01:07:659 (3) - the NC should go here 01:07:988 - You should do this rhythm, check this out

(*) 01:13:562 (1,1) - this part is a ugly and boring :S please add more notes here :(
(*) 01:24:053 (3,1,2,3) - BAD FLOW 01:26:349 (2,3) - CTRL + H ><
Try this \:3/ looks better

(*) HEY HEY 01:27:988 (1) - I see that in the other difficulties came down the volume this spinner, because in easy and normal not? I think it would be better to do the same for all diff, as this will cause inconsistency in your map.

[Normal]

(*) 00:45:037 (2) - This note is being covered by this 00:43:398 (3) - move another part ><
(*) 00:05:367 (6) - add whistle here
(*) 00:45:037 (2,3) - are not perfectly stacked move this note 00:46:677 (3) - X:362 Y:209
(*) 00:52:251 (2,4) - SAME! ^ Move this note 00:54:218 (4) - X:174 Y:163
Nice Diff O:

[HaHoHard]

(*) 00:33:890 (8) - not perfectly stacked, move this note 00:33:890 (8) - X:413 Y:116 looks better :3
(*) 00:43:890 (7,2) - Same here ^ move this note 00:45:365 (2) - X:256 Y:62
(*) 01:21:923 (1,2) - ^ move 01:22:415 (2) - X:240 Y:306

[scanter's Insane]

(*) 00:01:595 (7) - move a X: 160 Y: 192 And 00:01:923 (9) - move X: 352 Y: 192 Looks better :P
(*) NICE DIFF >//<

I Luv the song \:3/ aww kawaii XD
Good lucky for rank :3
Joon
1,359 posts
Joined June 2009
Joon
hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Easy]
00:24:382 (3,4) - finish sound so big bc down volume 50%


[Normal]
00:04:054 (4,5) - down volume I recommend 50%
00:24:382 (3,4) - same[Easy]
00:55:693 (3) - end notes add clap
00:59:792 (3) - End notes change clap
01:00:939 (5) - change clap
01:10:939 (3) - 2st notes add clap
01:14:546 (4,5) - down volume


[HaHoHard]
00:24:382 (3) - start notes add finish (Suggestion)
00:32:251 (3) - End notes add clap
00:44:710 (1) - start notes add finish (Suggestion)
00:49:956 (1) - add whistle
01:25:365 (1) - start notes add finish


[scanter's Insane]
00:49:969 (1) - change whistle
01:25:389 (1) - start notes add finish

좋은결과 있으시길.
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
All fix

This is code.
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Open Canvas (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:Kana Asumi
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,5567,12638
2,75093,79541
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
120,327.958458595245,4,2,1,62,1,0
4055,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
15862,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
23733,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
26356,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
34227,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
44722,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
47346,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
49641,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
51281,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
61694,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
61776,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
72188,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
72270,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
74894,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
80141,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
89324,-100,4,2,1,11,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 0,255,128
Combo6 : 128,0,255

[HitObjects]
160,192,120,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,192,447,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,100,775,1,8,2:0:0:0:
176,238,939,1,8,2:0:0:0:
335,238,1103,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,100,1431,1,8,2:0:0:0:
160,192,1595,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,284,1759,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,192,1923,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,2251,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,2415,1,8,2:0:0:0:
380,192,2743,5,8,2:0:0:0:
132,192,3071,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,312,3399,1,8,2:0:0:0:
372,112,3563,1,8,2:0:0:0:
140,112,3727,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,312,4055,1,10,0:0:0:0:
375,192,4219,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,72,4383,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,192,4547,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4875,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5039,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5367,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13238,12,0,15206,0:0:0:0:
432,88,15862,6,0,P|456:156|392:264,1,200,4|8,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
396,261,16353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,16517,1,0,2:0:0:0:
220,316,16681,1,8,2:0:0:0:
228,116,16845,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,316,17009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,220,17173,6,0,P|52:152|116:44,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
111,46,17665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,188,17993,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,188,18157,1,8,2:0:0:0:
76,280,18485,6,0,L|128:384,1,100
397,287,18813,2,0,L|300:264,1,100,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,19141,2,0,L|266:358,1,100,0|8,2:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
481,167,19469,2,0,L|384:188,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,19797,6,0,P|352:24|240:64,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
255,47,20289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,20617,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,20781,1,8,2:0:0:0:
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312,208,23241,1,8,2:0:0:0:
312,208,23405,1,8,2:0:0:0:
255,106,23733,5,0,0:0:0:0:
206,260,23896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,165,24060,1,8,2:0:0:0:
175,165,24224,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,260,24388,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,188,24716,5,12,2:0:0:0:
420,296,25864,5,8,2:0:0:0:
420,296,26028,1,8,2:0:0:0:
416,88,26356,6,0,L|308:96,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
288,108,26602,1,0,2:0:0:0:
260,120,26684,2,0,L|140:128,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
144,152,26930,1,0,2:0:0:0:
160,176,27012,2,0,L|284:204,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
348,156,27340,2,0,P|368:240|344:288,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
304,332,27668,5,0,0:0:0:0:
132,228,27832,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,352,27996,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,204,28160,1,0,2:0:0:0:
136,60,28488,1,8,2:0:0:0:
136,60,28652,1,8,2:0:0:0:
232,40,28816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,28980,6,0,P|400:100|412:148,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
316,156,29308,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,192,29472,2,0,P|276:256|380:232,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,29964,1,8,2:0:0:0:
348,348,30128,1,0,2:0:0:0:
148,348,30292,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,217,30456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,267,30620,1,8,2:0:0:0:
52,317,30784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,186,30948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,140,31112,1,8,2:0:0:0:
344,140,31276,1,8,2:0:0:0:
444,324,31604,6,0,L|416:256,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
392,316,31767,2,0,L|372:264,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
340,304,31931,2,0,L|320:252,1,50,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
288,296,32095,2,0,L|268:244,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
284,200,32259,1,0,2:0:0:0:
248,108,32423,1,8,2:0:0:0:
156,68,32587,1,8,2:0:0:0:
60,92,32751,1,0,2:0:0:0:
60,192,32915,6,0,L|80:296,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
176,256,33243,1,8,2:0:0:0:
168,356,33407,2,0,P|280:344|313:273,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,274,33899,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,84,34227,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,260,34391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,34555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,34719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,34883,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,260,35047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,35211,1,4,0:0:0:0:
52,96,35703,2,0,L|160:68,1,100,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
128,168,36031,1,0,2:0:0:0:
64,244,36195,5,0,2:0:0:0:
80,268,36277,1,0,2:0:0:0:
104,288,36359,1,0,2:0:0:0:
132,296,36441,1,0,2:0:0:0:
160,300,36523,1,8,2:0:0:0:
188,292,36605,1,0,2:0:0:0:
216,280,36687,1,0,2:0:0:0:
236,260,36769,1,0,2:0:0:0:
252,236,36851,6,0,L|348:192,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
424,252,37179,2,0,L|328:300,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
420,352,37507,1,0,2:0:0:0:
112,96,37835,6,0,L|212:40,1,100,8|0,2:0|2:0,1:0:0:0:
260,128,38163,2,0,P|376:100|420:180,1,200,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
492,220,38655,2,0,P|376:248|332:168,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
240,228,39147,1,8,2:0:0:0:
148,192,39311,1,8,2:0:0:0:
64,244,39475,6,0,L|100:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
176,280,39802,2,0,L|244:372,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
332,340,40130,2,0,P|416:308|440:204,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
441,208,40622,5,0,2:0:0:0:
344,184,40786,2,0,L|124:120,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
112,36,41278,2,0,P|40:100|72:200,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
100,284,41770,1,8,2:0:0:0:
192,328,41934,1,8,2:0:0:0:
336,192,42098,6,0,L|452:168,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
232,180,42426,2,0,L|326:109,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
132,212,42754,2,0,L|188:107,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
56,280,43082,2,0,L|62:161,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
116,96,43410,6,0,P|188:40|288:80,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
376,112,43902,2,0,P|304:168|204:128,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
209,134,44394,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,276,44722,6,0,P|400:192|352:104,1,200,4|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
156,108,45378,2,0,P|108:192|156:280,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
252,292,45870,2,0,L|252:88,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
452,100,46362,2,0,L|350:88,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
452,100,46690,2,0,L|378:173,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
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292,308,47346,5,4,1:0:0:0:
140,228,47509,1,4,1:0:0:0:
220,76,47673,1,4,1:0:0:0:
372,156,47837,1,4,1:0:0:0:
229,310,48001,1,4,1:0:0:0:
166,109,48165,1,4,1:0:0:0:
372,156,48329,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,48493,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,48657,12,0,49641,2:0:0:0:
256,192,49969,12,2,50953,2:0:0:0:
104,64,51281,6,0,L|40:156,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
64,244,51609,2,0,L|132:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
220,144,51937,2,0,L|160:232,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
360,240,52265,1,8,2:0:0:0:
272,304,52429,6,0,P|268:200|334:139,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
360,240,52921,2,0,L|460:296,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
421,187,53249,2,0,L|334:140,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
244,96,53577,1,8,2:0:0:0:
144,92,53741,6,0,B|96:120|96:120|120:168|128:216|96:240|44:240,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
136,312,54233,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,332,54397,1,0,2:0:0:0:
336,316,54561,2,0,L|444:276,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
426,207,54889,2,0,L|332:240,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
476,120,55217,2,0,P|388:56|308:108,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,164,55708,2,0,P|296:200|228:140,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
228,140,56200,1,8,2:0:0:0:
48,228,56528,6,0,P|68:292|100:336,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
148,240,56856,2,0,P|200:292|324:296,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
408,352,57348,1,0,2:0:0:0:
456,264,57512,1,8,2:0:0:0:
452,164,57676,1,0,2:0:0:0:
408,72,57840,6,0,P|280:44|220:69,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
32,66,58332,2,0,P|160:94|220:69,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
264,156,58824,1,8,2:0:0:0:
188,220,58988,1,0,2:0:0:0:
88,216,59152,6,0,L|68:320,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
168,340,59480,1,8,2:0:0:0:
168,340,59644,1,0,2:0:0:0:
268,352,59808,2,0,P|384:336|424:260,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
324,260,60300,1,12,2:0:0:0:
192,108,60628,5,4,2:0:0:0:
380,180,60792,1,0,2:0:0:0:
228,308,60956,1,4,2:0:0:0:
256,192,61284,1,4,2:0:0:0:
420,80,61448,5,8,2:0:0:0:
428,108,61530,1,0,2:0:0:0:
432,136,61612,1,8,2:0:0:0:
428,164,61694,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,192,61776,2,0,P|384:240|344:252,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
380,348,62104,2,0,P|322:354|284:332,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
200,368,62432,2,0,P|158:328|153:286,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
216,212,62760,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,136,62924,6,0,P|201:106|242:112,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
264,12,63252,2,0,P|318:30|340:66,1,100,0|8,0:3|2:0,2:3:0:0:
428,20,63579,2,0,P|448:73|435:113,1,100,0|0,0:3|0:3,2:3:0:0:
384,196,63907,1,8,2:0:0:0:
384,196,64071,1,8,2:0:0:0:
420,288,64235,1,0,2:0:0:0:
384,196,64399,6,0,P|256:224|192:196,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
8,200,65055,2,0,P|136:172|200:200,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
192,8,65711,2,0,P|220:136|192:200,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
196,384,66367,2,0,P|168:256|196:192,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
193,196,66859,1,0,2:0:0:0:
96,216,67023,6,0,L|8:276,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
104,320,67351,2,0,P|160:344|208:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
320,180,67843,1,0,2:0:0:0:
360,272,68007,2,0,P|408:240|424:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
396,104,68335,2,0,P|332:52|208:104,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
225,79,68827,1,0,2:0:0:0:
136,260,69155,1,8,2:0:0:0:
376,260,69319,1,8,2:0:0:0:
257,54,69483,1,0,2:0:0:0:
164,96,69647,6,0,L|260:128,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
348,172,69975,2,0,L|248:208,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
160,252,70303,2,0,L|256:284,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
348,328,70631,2,0,L|244:364,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,70959,12,0,71942,2:0:0:0:
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256,192,72762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73910,2,0,P|136:192|180:276,1,200
337,271,74566,2,2,P|376:192|332:96,1,200
255,106,80141,5,4,0:0:0:0:
255,277,80305,1,4,0:0:0:0:
255,106,80633,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,165,80961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,165,81125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,260,81289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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170,192,81617,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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341,191,81945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,76,82765,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,308,82929,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,308,83257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,83421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,220,83585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,83749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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132,192,84241,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,76,84405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,192,84569,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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164,100,85881,2,0,P|276:68|368:112,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,86373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,64,87356,2,0,L|364:104,1,100,0|8,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
256,320,87684,2,0,L|162:285,1,100,0|8,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
256,192,88012,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88094,12,0,89324,0:0:0:0:
Sylphi
osu! Alumni
3,298 posts
Joined February 2012
Sylphi
Hi, -iCo-.

[General]
- How about change offset to 140(+20)?
- Change Audio Lead-in, Preview Time and Letterbox in during breaks to same value.
- Set combo color in Easy, Normal difficulty.
- Add this tags.
Opening HabiHolic scanter
- Change Artist and Title to this.
Artist: 阿澄佳奈・水橋かおり・後藤邑子・新谷良子・原田ひとみ・小見川千明
Romanised Artist: Asumi Kana, Mizuhashi Kaori, Gotou Yuuko, Shintani Ryouko, Harada Hitomi & Omigawa Chiaki
Title: おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Open * Canvas (TV Size)

[Easy]
00:01:431 (3,1) - it would be better to do this.
00:05:365 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:13:234 (1) - I don't know this spinner is focused on what sound. How about change to http://puu.sh/2fCiX or http://puu.sh/2fCjR?
00:38:152 (3) - How about change to this?
00:43:398 (2,3) - How about change to this?
00:44:710 - Add finish.
00:46:677 (4) - Add clap on slider end.
00:47:333 (1) - Remove clap. I think it is not need.
00:53:562 (4) - Add clap.
01:03:070 (3) - Same as 00:01:431 (3, 1). it would be better to do this.
01:10:939 (2,1,2) - How about change to this?
01:14:546 (7) - Remove finish on slider head.
01:29:300 - Reduce volume to 10%

[scanter's Insane]
- Why this difficulty's BPM is different to other difficulty? Change BPM to same value as other difficulty.
Flanster
5,938 posts
Joined August 2010
Flanster
Hello there, as requested I checked your timing.

This should do nicely.
183 BPM, 126 Offset
Moway
1,143 posts
Joined January 2012
Moway
Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:05:371 (5) - NC
00:18:486 (1,3) - I might be wrong, but I don't think these are identical.
00:24:716 (4) - Maybe NC here, feels right to me.
00:28:322 (1) - remove NC, this slider is part of the previous musical phrase.
00:29:306 (2) - NC
00:30:289 (1) - remove NC, although I can see why you wouldn't want to do this, it seems to make more sense in terms of what is going on musically.
00:45:044 (3) - NC
00:45:371 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (1,2) - having this separated 1/2 is bad for your Easy difficulty, maybe shorten 00:59:142 (1) to make it just a 1/1 slider instead, so that maybe it will be okay to have that slider on the opposite polarity.
01:04:716 (4) - NC
01:05:699 (1) - remove NC
01:07:339 (2) - NC
01:07:666 (1) - remove NC
01:20:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - shift all of these over so that 01:26:683 (3) is centered, I think it would look nicer to end the song with the slider right in the middle.

[Normal]
00:00:781 (3,4) - I don't like these being different like this, the player will go into (4) expecting it to be the same as (3) but its not. Consider replacing (4) with 2 sliders instead of this double repeat.
00:03:404 (3,4) - same here
00:05:371 (6) - NC
00:21:437 (5) - NC
00:21:765 (1) - remove NC
00:29:634 (3) - fix this so it has the same slope as 00:28:978 (1,2)
00:30:945 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (2) - NC
01:00:617 (4) - NC for emphasis on these hits
01:14:880 (5) - NC

[HaHoHard]
00:02:748 (3) - Maybe NC here, the beats before stand out on their own quite a bit, and since this is a new repetition of the original phrase, maybe NC here also.
00:04:880 (8) - NC, for consistency.

OR

00:02:257 (1) - remove NC
00:02:748 (3) - NC

either way works.

00:23:076 (7) - This plays better at (16,248) I think, adjust everything accordingly. That flow from 4 and 5 makes more sense to continue to the left instead of cutting upward and to the right.
00:28:486 (6,7) - maybe delete 7 and repeat 6 instead, I think it feels better.
01:10:945 (6,7) - I would prefer this to be unstacked, as you have another object 1/2 after, so I think it flows better to have these unstack.

[scanter's Insane]
00:00:781 (3) - NC
00:01:437 (6) - NC
00:02:257 (10) - NC
00:03:404 (3) - NC
00:04:060 (6) - NC
00:04:880 (10) - NC, all of these just because I think it looks cool.
00:25:044 - I'd like this section mapped to match that piano line, I think that would be nice.
00:43:896 (2,1) - a little picky, but I don't really like this overlap. Either move (1) so that the slider end is completely visable or have it stack with the head of (2).
00:47:994 (5) - NC
01:00:289 (5) - I like an NC here for that big hit
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - stack the ends, they seem a bit off
01:07:666 - I think you should add a circle here, the next gap is fine, but here I think needs an object to play.
01:22:257 (5) - Maybe NC this since you have an antijump?


Nice mapset, good luck!
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro

Moway wrote:

Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:05:371 (5) - NC
00:18:486 (1,3) - I might be wrong, but I don't think these are identical.
00:24:716 (4) - Maybe NC here, feels right to me.
00:28:322 (1) - remove NC, this slider is part of the previous musical phrase.
00:29:306 (2) - NC
00:30:289 (1) - remove NC, although I can see why you wouldn't want to do this, it seems to make more sense in terms of what is going on musically.
00:45:044 (3) - NC
00:45:371 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (1,2) - having this separated 1/2 is bad for your Easy difficulty, maybe shorten 00:59:142 (1) to make it just a 1/1 slider instead, so that maybe it will be okay to have that slider on the opposite polarity.
01:04:716 (4) - NC
01:05:699 (1) - remove NC
01:07:339 (2) - NC
01:07:666 (1) - remove NC
01:20:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - shift all of these over so that 01:26:683 (3) is centered, I think it would look nicer to end the song with the slider right in the middle.

[Normal]
00:00:781 (3,4) - I don't like these being different like this, the player will go into (4) expecting it to be the same as (3) but its not. Consider replacing (4) with 2 sliders instead of this double repeat.
00:03:404 (3,4) - same here
00:05:371 (6) - NC
00:21:437 (5) - NC
00:21:765 (1) - remove NC
00:29:634 (3) - fix this so it has the same slope as 00:28:978 (1,2)
00:30:945 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (2) - NC
01:00:617 (4) - NC for emphasis on these hits
01:14:880 (5) - NC

[HaHoHard]
00:02:748 (3) - Maybe NC here, the beats before stand out on their own quite a bit, and since this is a new repetition of the original phrase, maybe NC here also.
00:04:880 (8) - NC, for consistency.

OR

00:02:257 (1) - remove NC
00:02:748 (3) - NC

either way works.

00:23:076 (7) - This plays better at (16,248) I think, adjust everything accordingly. That flow from 4 and 5 makes more sense to continue to the left instead of cutting upward and to the right.
00:28:486 (6,7) - maybe delete 7 and repeat 6 instead, I think it feels better.
01:10:945 (6,7) - I would prefer this to be unstacked, as you have another object 1/2 after, so I think it flows better to have these unstack.

[scanter's Insane]
00:00:781 (3) - NC
00:01:437 (6) - NC
00:02:257 (10) - NC
00:03:404 (3) - NC
00:04:060 (6) - NC
00:04:880 (10) - NC, all of these just because I think it looks cool.
00:25:044 - I'd like this section mapped to match that piano line, I think that would be nice.
00:43:896 (2,1) - a little picky, but I don't really like this overlap. Either move (1) so that the slider end is completely visable or have it stack with the head of (2).
00:47:994 (5) - NC
01:00:289 (5) - I like an NC here for that big hit
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - stack the ends, they seem a bit off
01:07:666 - I think you should add a circle here, the next gap is fine, but here I think needs an object to play.
01:22:257 (5) - Maybe NC this since you have an antijump?


Nice mapset, good luck!
Everything Fixed >w< Thank you for the Mod!!
BounceBabe
1,626 posts
Joined October 2010
BounceBabe
Hi, M4M from #modreqs

General

The size of the BG has to be 800x600 or 1024,768. Currently it is 985x734
You didn't set any combo colours on Easy - > inconsistency on mapset.
- Try to find one combo set for all difficulties on the map, not changing in every diff
The mp3 is cut off at the end, let it fade out or try finding a better mp3
AudioLead-In is inconsistent on every diff.
- 3000, 1500

Easy

00:24:716 (1) - Remove NC, not needed
00:30:289 (1) - ^, combo spam
01:00:289 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this pattern timewise in an Easy, maybe try finding something else whats easier to play

Normal

Inconsistence spacing, use one only in Easy or Normals

00:23:732 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing change?
00:36:847 (1,2) - ^
01:00:617 (3,1) - Reverse NC so it matches the music, vocal
01:04:388 (1) - I dont advise using such slider shapes in Easy or Normals, they can confuse new players and cause misses or combo breaks

Hard

Spacing is inconsistent ... everywhere u.u
- Improve it with one kind of spacing and call me back for modding this

Insane

I advise you to change the whole spacing on the map, its really random sometimes and not consistent.

00:00:126 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The whole spacing here is totally inconsistent and done for symmetry, this is neither good than has any flow at all. It feels wrong and forced when playing and destroys already the whole map. Also some parts arent even symmetric.
- Try improving the spacing, you can leave the symmetry but fix the spacing
00:16:355 (2) - Not stacked well
00:54:880 (5) - Ctrl + G this so it flows better and the next jump is also not right, so i just advise this
01:00:945 (3,4) - Spacing
01:01:273 (4,1) - ^
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked well onto each other
01:08:814 (7) - ^
01:09:142 (8) - NC for jump
01:09:142 (8,9,10) - Not symmetric and spacing is also wrong
01:12:585 - Slider should end here
01:12:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing again, doesnt fit well with previous spacing too

Call me back for rechecking Hard and Insane once its fixed, spacing wise
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter

BounceBabe wrote:

Insane I remapped one part. Dx sorry. I'm forgotten that.

I advise you to change the whole spacing on the map, its really random sometimes and not consistent.

00:00:126 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The whole spacing here is totally inconsistent and done for symmetry, this is neither good than has any flow at all. It feels wrong and forced when playing and destroys already the whole map. Also some parts arent even symmetric.
- Try improving the spacing, you can leave the symmetry but fix the spacing okay ~~
00:16:355 (2) - Not stacked well okay ~
00:54:880 (5) - Ctrl + G this so it flows better and the next jump is also not right, so i just advise this nice ~
01:00:945 (3,4) - Spacing fix
01:01:273 (4,1) - ^[/color]
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked well onto each other fix
01:08:814 (7) - ^ fix
01:09:142 (8) - NC for jump ^
01:09:142 (8,9,10) - Not symmetric and spacing is also wrong nice fix
01:12:585 - Slider should end here good ~
01:12:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing again, doesnt fit well with previous spacing too fix

Call me back for rechecking Hard and Insane once its fixed, spacing wise
Thanks your modding ! >~<

And this is code !
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,5571,12640
2,75079,79525
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
126,327.868852459016,4,2,1,62,1,0
4060,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
15863,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
23732,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
26355,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
34224,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
44716,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
47339,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
49634,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
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74880,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
80125,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
89306,-100,4,2,1,11,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 0,255,128
Combo6 : 128,0,255

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168,340,59634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,108,60617,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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440,72,64060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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296,264,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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194,292,67339,2,0,P|156:293|109:274,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,140,67830,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,67994,2,0,L|408:76,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,236,69142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
350,266,69306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,73,69470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,70945,12,0,71929,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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307,260,81273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hi -iCo- (:3」_)=3

From my modding queue m4m :)

[General]

비디오 퀄리티가 별로 좋지않습니다. 바꾸시는게 좋겠구요.

전체적으로 모든 난이도가 언스냅되있습니다. 타이밍선들 확인하시구요. 타이밍선들 재설정해주세요.


[Easy]

00:05:207 (4,1) 여기는 박자가 좀 애매하네요. 이게 더좋을것같습니다. -> http://puu.sh/2jTEi

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 곡이 매우 짧고. 티비사이즈라서 여기엔 브레이크타임이 아닌 노트를 넣어주세요.
나중에 태클올 가능성 100%입니다. 꼭 넣어주세요.

00:40:781 (2) 이 슬라이더 박자 이렇게 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/jTl7 이지는 왠만해선 박자를 주로
맞춰주시는게 좋아요. 초보유저들에겐 읽기 쉽도록. 그리고 00:42:039 여기에 노트추가하시구요.

00:43:404 (2) 이 슬라이더 박자도 이렇게 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/2jTnT 위에서 말했던것처럼.
박자를 주로 주시하시면서 매핑하시는게 좋습니다. 00:44:716 여기에 노트추가하시구요.

00:51:273 (1) 슬라이더 머리에 피니쉬 추가해주세요. 키아이 시작하는부분이기도하고 피니쉬소리를 넣어주는게
더 좋습니다.

01:01:765 (1,2,3) 제가보기에는 이 패턴 모양은 별로인거같아요, 이렇게 바꿔주세요-> http://puu.sh/2jTv3

01:15:044 ~ 01:19:962 여기도 마찬가지로 쉬는구간처럼 보여도 노트를 넣어주세요. 짧은곡에 브레이크타임은
되도록이면 넣지 않으시는게 좋습니다.


[Normal]

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 여기는 이지와 마찬가지입니다.

00:15:863 (1) 슬라이더 머리에 피니쉬 추가해주세요

00:29:470 (1,2,3) 스페이싱 확인해주세요 3번의 거리가 2번거리와 다릅니다. 노말은 사소한 디스턴스라도
태클이 걸어오기때문에 최대한꼼꼼하게 디스턴스를 신경쓰시면서 해주시는것이 좋습니다.

00:32:912 (3) 여기 노트제거하시고 뒤에 4번 슬라이더를 여기에 옮기시구요 그리고 00:33:896 여기에 노트추가.

00:40:617 (1,2,3,4,5) 저는 이 박자는 안어울린다고 생각합니다. 이렇게 바꿔보시는건 어떠신가요? -> http://puu.sh/2jTU7

01:12:257 (1) 이 슬라이더 박자는 매우 어색하네요.. 가사를 잘들어보시면 이 박자와는 전혀다릅니다. -> http://puu.sh/2jU1b 이렇게 바꿔주세요.
01:13:076 여기에는 뒤에 3번노트를 옮겨주시구요.

01:14:060 (3,4) 여기도 박자 이렇게해주세요. -> http://puu.sh/2jU3o


[HaHoHard]

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 여기도 이지와 노말 같이 여기도 매핑을 해주세요. 곡이 매우짧고 더군다나 브레이크타임
을 곡시간이 짧은곡에 넣는건 더더욱 좋지않습니다. 실제로도 짧은곡에는 브레이크타임을 잘 넣지 않습니다. (2~3초 브레이크정도는 괜찮다고합니다)

00:00:781 (2,3,4) 한곳에 3노트 넣는건 좀 지루한거같네요.. 1/2슬라로 바꾸셔서 리피트 1번 넣으시거나.
http://puu.sh/2jU70 이렇게 하는게 더 흐름에 좋습니다.

00:15:863 (1) 슬라이더 머리 피니쉬 추가

00:49:962 (1) 스핀말고 긴 슬라이더를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다. 스핀이 긴것도 아니고. 스핀다음에 바로 나오는 짧은스핀은
플레이어들에게 갑작스럽게 느껴질것입니다.


[scanter's Insane]

AR - 1

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 이지,노말,하드,인세인 마찬가지.

00:34:716 (4,5) Ctrl+G 이게 더 흐름에 좋네요 동선으로 봐서도 좋구여.

00:49:962 (1) 하드와 마찬가지입니다.

00:55:207 (6) Ctrl+G 이게더 동선이 맞습니다.

01:05:207 (1,2,3,4) 스택 잘안되있네요.

01:05:535 (3,4) 너무 높고 너무 낮은감이있네요.. 3번은 hp바가 닿고.. 4번은 너무 밑으로되있네요..
저는 이패턴 별로 추천하고싶지않습니다.. 갑작스럽기도 하고. 갑자기 꽉찬 박자에서 이렇게 너무 단순한 박자로가는건.
저는 비추입니다. 여기도 박자를 꽉채워서 하시는게 더좋다고 생각합니다.

01:15:044 ~ 01:19:962 이지와 같습니다.


Good luck
Totoro
77 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Totoro

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi, M4M from #modreqs
The mp3 is cut off at the end, let it fade out or try finding a better mp3
Is this unrankable? because i can't find anything else >w<
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Raose
M4M! take these as suggestions except for this one:

- Keep the combo colors throughout the maps consistent. You didn't seem to have changed them for Easy!

Anyways :D

[Easy]
00:53:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is my personal opinion but you repeat the long slider - circle pattern for a whole eight-count. That can get boring quickly, why not mix it up? :)
Your volume for the majority of the map is at 100%! You should probably lower it to make the hitsounds during kiai time stand out, and even then you should lower the volume for kiai time to about 70-80%

[Normal]
00:32:912 (3,4) - suggestion: switch these 2 in the timeline
00:54:224 (4) - NC
Your volume for the majority of the map is at 100%! You should probably lower it to make the hitsounds during kiai time stand out, and even then you should lower the volume for kiai time to about 70-80%

[Hard]
is fine :D

[Insane]
Holy.. maybe lower the approach rate by 1? @_@

Good luck on your first map! ^__^
(Edit: I didn't read the rules thoroughly, sorryyy..)
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