Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size) · forum

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-02-24T23:22:11+00:00

[General]

프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요

[Easy]

- 별로 잡을껀 없네요 lol

[Normal]

- 00:27:668 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
- 00:30:292 (1) - ^
- 00:39:802 (4) - 뉴콤
- 00:40:786 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤삭제
- 00:46:362 (2,3) - 빨간 1,2번이랑 겹치는거 추천요
- 00:51:267 (1) - 앞쪽이 피니시
- 00:57:824 (5) - 노말에서 이런 갑잓런 점프는 비추천 드려요
- 00:59:792 (3) - 끝쪽에 피니시
- 01:27:988 (1) - 01:29:300 - 여기서 끝내시는거 추천드려요

[Hard]

- 00:22:251 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/27Re3 이거 써보세요
- 00:26:349 (1) - 앞 피니시
- 00:31:103 (7) - 노트추가
- 00:36:841 (1) - 피니시
- 00:42:579 (2,3) - 박자 반대
- 00:51:267 - 키아이 타임인데 언스냅이네요 꼭 수정해주세요
- 01:13:398 (4) - 앞 피니시
- 01:25:365 (1) - ^
- 01:26:349 (3,5) - 뒤쪽에 피니시

[insane]

- 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게?
- 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요
- 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천
- 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요
- 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤
- 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천
- 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛

~~오예 쿠도스2개~~굿럭 xD

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2013-02-24T23:42:06+00:00

안녕하세요~

[Normal]

전체적으로 노트들이 타임라인에 몇mm차이로 스냅이 안되있는데 수정해주세요.

00:04:055 (4) - 이 슬라이더 리핏이랑 꼬리가 타임라인에 스냅이 안됬네요. 00:01:431 (4) - 이것처럼 스냅시켜주세요
00:03:972 - 여기 타임라인에 초록선도 스냅시켜주세요.
00:59:792 (3,4,5,6) - 갑작스러운 엇박이라 노멀치고는 초보분들이 헷갈려 하실 수 있을텐데 굳이 안고쳐도 되긴 할것같고.. 일단 전 놔두는 쪽으로.
01:01:694 - 이 초록선은 필요없는것 같은데 지워주세요. Kiai타임 끊을 필요가 없어보이네요.
01:27:988 (1) - 스피너는 하얀선에 맞춰서 끝내주세요.

[Easy]

여기도 전체적으로 노트들이 타임라인에 몇mm차이로 스냅이 안되있는데 수정해주세요.

00:47:660 (1) - 이지인데 스피너가 슬라이더 1/4박자 뒤에 있네요.. 00:47:660 (1) - 여기서부터 00:47:660 (1) - 여기까지가 적당할것 같아요.
00:57:840 (3) - (nazi) 더 잘 감싸주세요 (서클이 쏙 들어가게 이쁘게)
00:59:136 (1,2,3,4) - 여기가 보컬이랑 잘 안맞네요.

이렇게 타임라인을 수정하시는걸 추천드려요.

Good luck!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-02-25T03:39:08+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
[General]
프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요
[Easy]

- 별로 잡을껀 없네요 lol
[Normal]

- 00:27:668 (1) - 뉴콤 삭제
- 00:30:292 (1) - ^
- 00:39:802 (4) - 뉴콤
- 00:40:786 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤삭제
- 00:46:362 (2,3) - 빨간 1,2번이랑 겹치는거 추천요
- 00:51:267 (1) - 앞쪽이 피니시
- 00:57:824 (5) - 노말에서 이런 갑잓런 점프는 비추천 드려요
- 00:59:792 (3) - 끝쪽에 피니시
- 01:27:988 (1) - 01:29:300 - 여기서 끝내시는거 추천드려요
[Hard]

- 00:22:251 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/27Re3 이거 써보세요
- 00:26:349 (1) - 앞 피니시
- 00:31:103 (7) - 노트추가
- 00:36:841 (1) - 피니시
- 00:42:579 (2,3) - 박자 반대
- 00:51:267 - 키아이 타임인데 언스냅이네요 꼭 수정해주세요
- 01:13:398 (4) - 앞 피니시
- 01:25:365 (1) - ^
- 01:26:349 (3,5) - 뒤쪽에 피니시

[insane]

- 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게?
- 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요
- 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천
- 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요
- 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤
- 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천
- 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛
~~오예 쿠도스2개~~굿럭 xD

http://puu.sh/27YKm

업데이트 바람

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-02-25T04:26:04+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
[General]
프리뷰 포인트 지정해주세요
초록색선 언스냅 부분있는데 전부 고쳐주세요 아니면 키아이는 필수로 수정해주셔야해요
[insane]

- 00:22:749 (4,5,6,7,8) - 지금 점프 패턴보다 00:23:077 (6,7,8) - 이 3개를 삼각형으로 점프하시는게? 반복 슬라랑 서클 2스택으로 대체
- 00:52:265 (4) - 다른 위치 추천dream 좀 애매하게 스택된듯 00:52:429 (1) - 그리고 이거는 좀 점프로 넣으시는거 추천해요 yeah
- 00:53:741 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/27QSy 춫천 전반적으로 안 겹치게끔 다 이동시켜봤어요.
- 01:00:792 (3) - 삭제하시는거 추천, 박자도 너무 뜬금포고 읽기 힘든 패턴이네요 뉴콤으로 대체했음
- 01:26:701 (5) - 뉴콤 okay
- 00:18:813 (2,4) - 이전패턴은 점프를 많이 주셧는데 여긴 좀 디스탠스 딱딱 지켜지니 지루?한느낌 저2개 슬라 각각 ctrl G 춫천 fix
- 00:44:722 (1) - 앞 피닛 yes
~~오예 쿠도스2개~~굿럭 xD ㅋㅋ

수고하셨어요 !

C O O K 1 E_old

C O O K 1 E_old 2013-03-04T02:54:04+00:00

아이코 안녕~ 오랜만이야 ㅎ 부탁했으니까 해줄게 ㅋㅋ 허접해 ㅋㅋ

Easy

00:00:120 (1) - x:72 y:120으로 옮겨봐

00:01:431 (3) - x:256 y:184

00:05:365 (5) - x:450 y:155

00:19:468 (2) - x:256 y:268

00:21:109 (1) - 1칸 오른쪽

00:32:915 (2) - x:396 y:256

00:46:690 (3) - ctrl+j 하고 00:46:362 (2) - 랑 직선

00:58:824 (4,1,2,3,4) - 여기 고쳐봐

나머지는 그런대로 괜찮은듯? 잘해봐~ 랭크 꼭 돼!

Gero

4,438 posts

Joined March 2012

Gero 2013-03-08T04:45:43+00:00

YO!! M4M

[General]

(*) UNSNAPPED ALL INHERITED POINTS NOT POSITIONED CRRECTLY, CHECK THIS PLEASE..
(*) UNSNAPPED ALL NOTES OMG CHECK THIS NOOOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!

(*) 00:13:890 - Have you considered adding a spinner here? I recommend placing spinner here
(*) Add scanter in the tags

[Easy]

(*) NAZI* 00:23:733 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is misaligned, move this note 00:24:716 (4) - X:28 Y:224
(*) 00:05:365 (5) - Add whistle here
(*) 00:28:324 (1,2) - You have broken the spacing distance here, please check this >//<
(*) 01:00:283 (2,3) - these notes are not well stacked with this 00:58:824 (4) - please move this notes 01:00:283 (2,3) - X:44 Y:272
although in a stacked notes never easy as it is to be confusing for new players

(*)

WA WA WHAT!!! LOOK THIS.... because there are too points Inherited D:!, Very conveniently placed please check this
(*) 01:03:070 (2) - This slider is being covered by this 01:00:939 (4) - which, to confuse the player can play

move this another part
Try this:

(*) 01:07:659 (3) - the NC should go here 01:07:988 - You should do this rhythm, check this out

(*) 01:13:562 (1,1) - this part is a ugly and boring :S please add more notes here

(*) 01:24:053 (3,1,2,3) - BAD FLOW 01:26:349 (2,3) - CTRL + H ><
Try this \:3/ looks better

(*) HEY HEY 01:27:988 (1) - I see that in the other difficulties came down the volume this spinner, because in easy and normal not? I think it would be better to do the same for all diff, as this will cause inconsistency in your map.

[Normal]

(*) 00:45:037 (2) - This note is being covered by this 00:43:398 (3) - move another part ><
(*) 00:05:367 (6) - add whistle here
(*) 00:45:037 (2,3) - are not perfectly stacked move this note 00:46:677 (3) - X:362 Y:209
(*) 00:52:251 (2,4) - SAME! ^ Move this note 00:54:218 (4) - X:174 Y:163
Nice Diff O:

[HaHoHard]

(*) 00:33:890 (8) - not perfectly stacked, move this note 00:33:890 (8) - X:413 Y:116 looks better :3
(*) 00:43:890 (7,2) - Same here ^ move this note 00:45:365 (2) - X:256 Y:62
(*) 01:21:923 (1,2) - ^ move 01:22:415 (2) - X:240 Y:306

[scanter's Insane]

(*) 00:01:595 (7) - move a X: 160 Y: 192 And 00:01:923 (9) - move X: 352 Y: 192 Looks better

(*) NICE DIFF >//<

I Luv the song \:3/ aww kawaii XD
Good lucky for rank :3

Joon

1,359 posts

Joined June 2009

Joon 2013-03-09T05:04:57+00:00

hi

Joon's Hit sound modding

[Easy]
00:24:382 (3,4) - finish sound so big bc down volume 50%

[Normal]
00:04:054 (4,5) - down volume I recommend 50%
00:24:382 (3,4) - same[Easy]
00:55:693 (3) - end notes add clap
00:59:792 (3) - End notes change clap
01:00:939 (5) - change clap
01:10:939 (3) - 2st notes add clap
01:14:546 (4,5) - down volume

[HaHoHard]
00:24:382 (3) - start notes add finish (Suggestion)
00:32:251 (3) - End notes add clap
00:44:710 (1) - start notes add finish (Suggestion)
00:49:956 (1) - add whistle
01:25:365 (1) - start notes add finish

[scanter's Insane]
00:49:969 (1) - change whistle
01:25:389 (1) - start notes add finish

좋은결과 있으시길.

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-10T18:15:09+00:00

All fix

This is code.

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Open Canvas (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:Kana Asumi
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,5567,12638
2,75093,79541
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
120,327.958458595245,4,2,1,62,1,0
4055,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
15862,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
23733,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
26356,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
34227,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
44722,-100,4,2,1,74,0,0
47346,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
49641,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
51281,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
61694,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
61776,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
72188,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
72270,-100,4,2,1,86,0,1
74894,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
80141,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
89324,-100,4,2,1,11,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 0,255,128
Combo6 : 128,0,255

[HitObjects]
160,192,120,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,192,447,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,100,775,1,8,2:0:0:0:
176,238,939,1,8,2:0:0:0:
335,238,1103,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,100,1431,1,8,2:0:0:0:
160,192,1595,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,284,1759,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,192,1923,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,2251,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,192,2415,1,8,2:0:0:0:
380,192,2743,5,8,2:0:0:0:
132,192,3071,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,312,3399,1,8,2:0:0:0:
372,112,3563,1,8,2:0:0:0:
140,112,3727,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,312,4055,1,10,0:0:0:0:
375,192,4219,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,72,4383,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,192,4547,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,4875,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5039,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,5367,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,13238,12,0,15206,0:0:0:0:
432,88,15862,6,0,P|456:156|392:264,1,200,4|8,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
396,261,16353,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,116,16517,1,0,2:0:0:0:
220,316,16681,1,8,2:0:0:0:
228,116,16845,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,316,17009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,220,17173,6,0,P|52:152|116:44,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
111,46,17665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,188,17993,1,8,2:0:0:0:
252,188,18157,1,8,2:0:0:0:
76,280,18485,6,0,L|128:384,1,100
397,287,18813,2,0,L|300:264,1,100,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
188,296,19141,2,0,L|266:358,1,100,0|8,2:0|0:0,3:0:0:0:
481,167,19469,2,0,L|384:188,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,84,19797,6,0,P|352:24|240:64,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,208,23405,1,8,2:0:0:0:
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136,60,28652,1,8,2:0:0:0:
232,40,28816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,60,28980,6,0,P|400:100|412:148,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
316,156,29308,1,8,2:0:0:0:
216,192,29472,2,0,P|276:256|380:232,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
448,316,29964,1,8,2:0:0:0:
348,348,30128,1,0,2:0:0:0:
148,348,30292,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,217,30456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
206,267,30620,1,8,2:0:0:0:
52,317,30784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,186,30948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,140,31112,1,8,2:0:0:0:
344,140,31276,1,8,2:0:0:0:
444,324,31604,6,0,L|416:256,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
392,316,31767,2,0,L|372:264,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
340,304,31931,2,0,L|320:252,1,50,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
288,296,32095,2,0,L|268:244,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
284,200,32259,1,0,2:0:0:0:
248,108,32423,1,8,2:0:0:0:
156,68,32587,1,8,2:0:0:0:
60,92,32751,1,0,2:0:0:0:
60,192,32915,6,0,L|80:296,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
176,256,33243,1,8,2:0:0:0:
168,356,33407,2,0,P|280:344|313:273,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
313,274,33899,1,8,2:0:0:0:
256,84,34227,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,260,34391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,180,34555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,34719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,180,34883,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,260,35047,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,220,35211,1,4,0:0:0:0:
52,96,35703,2,0,L|160:68,1,100,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
128,168,36031,1,0,2:0:0:0:
64,244,36195,5,0,2:0:0:0:
80,268,36277,1,0,2:0:0:0:
104,288,36359,1,0,2:0:0:0:
132,296,36441,1,0,2:0:0:0:
160,300,36523,1,8,2:0:0:0:
188,292,36605,1,0,2:0:0:0:
216,280,36687,1,0,2:0:0:0:
236,260,36769,1,0,2:0:0:0:
252,236,36851,6,0,L|348:192,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
424,252,37179,2,0,L|328:300,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
420,352,37507,1,0,2:0:0:0:
112,96,37835,6,0,L|212:40,1,100,8|0,2:0|2:0,1:0:0:0:
260,128,38163,2,0,P|376:100|420:180,1,200,0|8,2:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
492,220,38655,2,0,P|376:248|332:168,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
240,228,39147,1,8,2:0:0:0:
148,192,39311,1,8,2:0:0:0:
64,244,39475,6,0,L|100:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
176,280,39802,2,0,L|244:372,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
332,340,40130,2,0,P|416:308|440:204,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
441,208,40622,5,0,2:0:0:0:
344,184,40786,2,0,L|124:120,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
112,36,41278,2,0,P|40:100|72:200,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
100,284,41770,1,8,2:0:0:0:
192,328,41934,1,8,2:0:0:0:
336,192,42098,6,0,L|452:168,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
232,180,42426,2,0,L|326:109,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
132,212,42754,2,0,L|188:107,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
56,280,43082,2,0,L|62:161,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
116,96,43410,6,0,P|188:40|288:80,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
376,112,43902,2,0,P|304:168|204:128,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
209,134,44394,1,8,2:0:0:0:
352,276,44722,6,0,P|400:192|352:104,1,200,4|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
156,108,45378,2,0,P|108:192|156:280,1,200,0|8,0:0|2:0,2:0:0:0:
252,292,45870,2,0,L|252:88,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
452,100,46362,2,0,L|350:88,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
452,100,46690,2,0,L|378:173,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
452,100,47018,2,0,L|463:207,1,100,8|0,2:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
292,308,47346,5,4,1:0:0:0:
140,228,47509,1,4,1:0:0:0:
220,76,47673,1,4,1:0:0:0:
372,156,47837,1,4,1:0:0:0:
229,310,48001,1,4,1:0:0:0:
166,109,48165,1,4,1:0:0:0:
372,156,48329,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,48493,1,4,1:0:0:0:
256,192,48657,12,0,49641,2:0:0:0:
256,192,49969,12,2,50953,2:0:0:0:
104,64,51281,6,0,L|40:156,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
64,244,51609,2,0,L|132:148,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
220,144,51937,2,0,L|160:232,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
360,240,52265,1,8,2:0:0:0:
272,304,52429,6,0,P|268:200|334:139,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
360,240,52921,2,0,L|460:296,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
421,187,53249,2,0,L|334:140,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
244,96,53577,1,8,2:0:0:0:
144,92,53741,6,0,B|96:120|96:120|120:168|128:216|96:240|44:240,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
136,312,54233,1,8,2:0:0:0:
236,332,54397,1,0,2:0:0:0:
336,316,54561,2,0,L|444:276,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
426,207,54889,2,0,L|332:240,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
476,120,55217,2,0,P|388:56|308:108,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,164,55708,2,0,P|296:200|228:140,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
228,140,56200,1,8,2:0:0:0:
48,228,56528,6,0,P|68:292|100:336,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
148,240,56856,2,0,P|200:292|324:296,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
408,352,57348,1,0,2:0:0:0:
456,264,57512,1,8,2:0:0:0:
452,164,57676,1,0,2:0:0:0:
408,72,57840,6,0,P|280:44|220:69,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
32,66,58332,2,0,P|160:94|220:69,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
264,156,58824,1,8,2:0:0:0:
188,220,58988,1,0,2:0:0:0:
88,216,59152,6,0,L|68:320,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
168,340,59480,1,8,2:0:0:0:
168,340,59644,1,0,2:0:0:0:
268,352,59808,2,0,P|384:336|424:260,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
324,260,60300,1,12,2:0:0:0:
192,108,60628,5,4,2:0:0:0:
380,180,60792,1,0,2:0:0:0:
228,308,60956,1,4,2:0:0:0:
256,192,61284,1,4,2:0:0:0:
420,80,61448,5,8,2:0:0:0:
428,108,61530,1,0,2:0:0:0:
432,136,61612,1,8,2:0:0:0:
428,164,61694,1,0,2:0:0:0:
416,192,61776,2,0,P|384:240|344:252,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
380,348,62104,2,0,P|322:354|284:332,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
200,368,62432,2,0,P|158:328|153:286,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
216,212,62760,1,8,2:0:0:0:
152,136,62924,6,0,P|201:106|242:112,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
264,12,63252,2,0,P|318:30|340:66,1,100,0|8,0:3|2:0,2:3:0:0:
428,20,63579,2,0,P|448:73|435:113,1,100,0|0,0:3|0:3,2:3:0:0:
384,196,63907,1,8,2:0:0:0:
384,196,64071,1,8,2:0:0:0:
420,288,64235,1,0,2:0:0:0:
384,196,64399,6,0,P|256:224|192:196,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
8,200,65055,2,0,P|136:172|200:200,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
192,8,65711,2,0,P|220:136|192:200,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
196,384,66367,2,0,P|168:256|196:192,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
193,196,66859,1,0,2:0:0:0:
96,216,67023,6,0,L|8:276,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
104,320,67351,2,0,P|160:344|208:340,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
320,180,67843,1,0,2:0:0:0:
360,272,68007,2,0,P|408:240|424:192,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
396,104,68335,2,0,P|332:52|208:104,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
225,79,68827,1,0,2:0:0:0:
136,260,69155,1,8,2:0:0:0:
376,260,69319,1,8,2:0:0:0:
257,54,69483,1,0,2:0:0:0:
164,96,69647,6,0,L|260:128,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
348,172,69975,2,0,L|248:208,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
160,252,70303,2,0,L|256:284,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
348,328,70631,2,0,L|244:364,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
256,192,70959,12,0,71942,2:0:0:0:
432,288,72270,6,0,P|388:328|340:336,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72762,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73910,2,0,P|136:192|180:276,1,200
337,271,74566,2,2,P|376:192|332:96,1,200
255,106,80141,5,4,0:0:0:0:
255,277,80305,1,4,0:0:0:0:
255,106,80633,5,0,0:0:0:0:
206,260,80797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,165,80961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
175,165,81125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
306,260,81289,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,106,81453,5,4,0:0:0:0:
170,192,81617,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,277,81781,1,8,0:0:0:0:
341,191,81945,1,4,0:0:0:0:
308,192,82273,2,0,L|192:192,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,76,82765,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,308,82929,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,308,83257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,100,83421,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,220,83585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,83749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,100,83913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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132,192,84241,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,76,84405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,192,84569,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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348,284,85389,6,0,P|236:316|144:272,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,100,85881,2,0,P|276:68|368:112,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,86373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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384,192,87028,2,0,L|344:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,87356,2,0,L|364:104,1,100,0|8,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
256,320,87684,2,0,L|162:285,1,100,0|8,0:3|0:0,0:3:0:0:
256,192,88012,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88094,12,0,89324,0:0:0:0:

Sylphi

osu! Alumni

3,307 posts

Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2013-03-11T01:28:47+00:00

Hi, -iCo-.

[General]
- How about change offset to 140(+20)?
- Change Audio Lead-in, Preview Time and Letterbox in during breaks to same value.
- Set combo color in Easy, Normal difficulty.
- Add this tags.

Opening HabiHolic scanter

- Change Artist and Title to this.

Artist: 阿澄佳奈・水橋かおり・後藤邑子・新谷良子・原田ひとみ・小見川千明
Romanised Artist: Asumi Kana, Mizuhashi Kaori, Gotou Yuuko, Shintani Ryouko, Harada Hitomi & Omigawa Chiaki
Title: おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Romanised Title: Open * Canvas (TV Size)

[Easy]
00:01:431 (3,1) - it would be better to do this.
00:05:365 (5) - Remove whistle.
00:13:234 (1) - I don't know this spinner is focused on what sound. How about change to http://puu.sh/2fCiX or http://puu.sh/2fCjR?
00:38:152 (3) - How about change to this?
00:43:398 (2,3) - How about change to this?
00:44:710 - Add finish.
00:46:677 (4) - Add clap on slider end.
00:47:333 (1) - Remove clap. I think it is not need.
00:53:562 (4) - Add clap.
01:03:070 (3) - Same as 00:01:431 (3, 1). it would be better to do this.
01:10:939 (2,1,2) - How about change to this?
01:14:546 (7) - Remove finish on slider head.
01:29:300 - Reduce volume to 10%

[scanter's Insane]
- Why this difficulty's BPM is different to other difficulty? Change BPM to same value as other difficulty.

Flanster

5,938 posts

Joined August 2010

Flanster 2013-03-11T08:02:45+00:00

Hello there, as requested I checked your timing.

This should do nicely.
183 BPM, 126 Offset

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2013-03-13T00:03:14+00:00

Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:05:371 (5) - NC
00:18:486 (1,3) - I might be wrong, but I don't think these are identical.
00:24:716 (4) - Maybe NC here, feels right to me.
00:28:322 (1) - remove NC, this slider is part of the previous musical phrase.
00:29:306 (2) - NC
00:30:289 (1) - remove NC, although I can see why you wouldn't want to do this, it seems to make more sense in terms of what is going on musically.
00:45:044 (3) - NC
00:45:371 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (1,2) - having this separated 1/2 is bad for your Easy difficulty, maybe shorten 00:59:142 (1) to make it just a 1/1 slider instead, so that maybe it will be okay to have that slider on the opposite polarity.
01:04:716 (4) - NC
01:05:699 (1) - remove NC
01:07:339 (2) - NC
01:07:666 (1) - remove NC
01:20:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - shift all of these over so that 01:26:683 (3) is centered, I think it would look nicer to end the song with the slider right in the middle.

[Normal]
00:00:781 (3,4) - I don't like these being different like this, the player will go into (4) expecting it to be the same as (3) but its not. Consider replacing (4) with 2 sliders instead of this double repeat.
00:03:404 (3,4) - same here
00:05:371 (6) - NC
00:21:437 (5) - NC
00:21:765 (1) - remove NC
00:29:634 (3) - fix this so it has the same slope as 00:28:978 (1,2)
00:30:945 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (2) - NC
01:00:617 (4) - NC for emphasis on these hits
01:14:880 (5) - NC

[HaHoHard]
00:02:748 (3) - Maybe NC here, the beats before stand out on their own quite a bit, and since this is a new repetition of the original phrase, maybe NC here also.
00:04:880 (8) - NC, for consistency.

OR

00:02:257 (1) - remove NC
00:02:748 (3) - NC

either way works.

00:23:076 (7) - This plays better at (16,248) I think, adjust everything accordingly. That flow from 4 and 5 makes more sense to continue to the left instead of cutting upward and to the right.
00:28:486 (6,7) - maybe delete 7 and repeat 6 instead, I think it feels better.
01:10:945 (6,7) - I would prefer this to be unstacked, as you have another object 1/2 after, so I think it flows better to have these unstack.

[scanter's Insane]
00:00:781 (3) - NC
00:01:437 (6) - NC
00:02:257 (10) - NC
00:03:404 (3) - NC
00:04:060 (6) - NC
00:04:880 (10) - NC, all of these just because I think it looks cool.
00:25:044 - I'd like this section mapped to match that piano line, I think that would be nice.
00:43:896 (2,1) - a little picky, but I don't really like this overlap. Either move (1) so that the slider end is completely visable or have it stack with the head of (2).
00:47:994 (5) - NC
01:00:289 (5) - I like an NC here for that big hit
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - stack the ends, they seem a bit off
01:07:666 - I think you should add a circle here, the next gap is fine, but here I think needs an object to play.
01:22:257 (5) - Maybe NC this since you have an antijump?

Nice mapset, good luck!

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-03-17T17:23:48+00:00

Moway wrote:
Hi, M4M from my queue.

[Easy]
00:05:371 (5) - NC
00:18:486 (1,3) - I might be wrong, but I don't think these are identical.
00:24:716 (4) - Maybe NC here, feels right to me.
00:28:322 (1) - remove NC, this slider is part of the previous musical phrase.
00:29:306 (2) - NC
00:30:289 (1) - remove NC, although I can see why you wouldn't want to do this, it seems to make more sense in terms of what is going on musically.
00:45:044 (3) - NC
00:45:371 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (1,2) - having this separated 1/2 is bad for your Easy difficulty, maybe shorten 00:59:142 (1) to make it just a 1/1 slider instead, so that maybe it will be okay to have that slider on the opposite polarity.
01:04:716 (4) - NC
01:05:699 (1) - remove NC
01:07:339 (2) - NC
01:07:666 (1) - remove NC
01:20:125 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - shift all of these over so that 01:26:683 (3) is centered, I think it would look nicer to end the song with the slider right in the middle.

[Normal]
00:00:781 (3,4) - I don't like these being different like this, the player will go into (4) expecting it to be the same as (3) but its not. Consider replacing (4) with 2 sliders instead of this double repeat.
00:03:404 (3,4) - same here
00:05:371 (6) - NC
00:21:437 (5) - NC
00:21:765 (1) - remove NC
00:29:634 (3) - fix this so it has the same slope as 00:28:978 (1,2)
00:30:945 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (1) - remove NC
00:59:142 (2) - NC
01:00:617 (4) - NC for emphasis on these hits
01:14:880 (5) - NC

[HaHoHard]
00:02:748 (3) - Maybe NC here, the beats before stand out on their own quite a bit, and since this is a new repetition of the original phrase, maybe NC here also.
00:04:880 (8) - NC, for consistency.

OR

00:02:257 (1) - remove NC
00:02:748 (3) - NC

either way works.

00:23:076 (7) - This plays better at (16,248) I think, adjust everything accordingly. That flow from 4 and 5 makes more sense to continue to the left instead of cutting upward and to the right.
00:28:486 (6,7) - maybe delete 7 and repeat 6 instead, I think it feels better.
01:10:945 (6,7) - I would prefer this to be unstacked, as you have another object 1/2 after, so I think it flows better to have these unstack.

[scanter's Insane]
00:00:781 (3) - NC
00:01:437 (6) - NC
00:02:257 (10) - NC
00:03:404 (3) - NC
00:04:060 (6) - NC
00:04:880 (10) - NC, all of these just because I think it looks cool.
00:25:044 - I'd like this section mapped to match that piano line, I think that would be nice.
00:43:896 (2,1) - a little picky, but I don't really like this overlap. Either move (1) so that the slider end is completely visable or have it stack with the head of (2).
00:47:994 (5) - NC
01:00:289 (5) - I like an NC here for that big hit
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - stack the ends, they seem a bit off
01:07:666 - I think you should add a circle here, the next gap is fine, but here I think needs an object to play.
01:22:257 (5) - Maybe NC this since you have an antijump?

Nice mapset, good luck!

Everything Fixed >w< Thank you for the Mod!!

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-03-17T18:28:42+00:00

Hi, M4M from #modreqs

General

The size of the BG has to be 800x600 or 1024,768. Currently it is 985x734
You didn't set any combo colours on Easy - > inconsistency on mapset.
- Try to find one combo set for all difficulties on the map, not changing in every diff
The mp3 is cut off at the end, let it fade out or try finding a better mp3
AudioLead-In is inconsistent on every diff.
- 3000, 1500

Easy

00:24:716 (1) - Remove NC, not needed
00:30:289 (1) - ^, combo spam
01:00:289 (2,3,4) - Not sure about this pattern timewise in an Easy, maybe try finding something else whats easier to play

Normal

Inconsistence spacing, use one only in Easy or Normals

00:23:732 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing change?
00:36:847 (1,2) - ^
01:00:617 (3,1) - Reverse NC so it matches the music, vocal
01:04:388 (1) - I dont advise using such slider shapes in Easy or Normals, they can confuse new players and cause misses or combo breaks

Hard

Spacing is inconsistent ... everywhere u.u
- Improve it with one kind of spacing and call me back for modding this

Insane

I advise you to change the whole spacing on the map, its really random sometimes and not consistent.

00:00:126 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The whole spacing here is totally inconsistent and done for symmetry, this is neither good than has any flow at all. It feels wrong and forced when playing and destroys already the whole map. Also some parts arent even symmetric.
- Try improving the spacing, you can leave the symmetry but fix the spacing
00:16:355 (2) - Not stacked well
00:54:880 (5) - Ctrl + G this so it flows better and the next jump is also not right, so i just advise this
01:00:945 (3,4) - Spacing
01:01:273 (4,1) - ^
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked well onto each other
01:08:814 (7) - ^
01:09:142 (8) - NC for jump
01:09:142 (8,9,10) - Not symmetric and spacing is also wrong
01:12:585 - Slider should end here
01:12:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing again, doesnt fit well with previous spacing too

Call me back for rechecking Hard and Insane once its fixed, spacing wise

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-17T20:53:05+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Insane I remapped one part. Dx sorry. I'm forgotten that.

I advise you to change the whole spacing on the map, its really random sometimes and not consistent.

00:00:126 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - The whole spacing here is totally inconsistent and done for symmetry, this is neither good than has any flow at all. It feels wrong and forced when playing and destroys already the whole map. Also some parts arent even symmetric.
- Try improving the spacing, you can leave the symmetry but fix the spacing okay ~~
00:16:355 (2) - Not stacked well okay ~
00:54:880 (5) - Ctrl + G this so it flows better and the next jump is also not right, so i just advise this nice ~
01:00:945 (3,4) - Spacing fix
01:01:273 (4,1) - ^[/color]
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - Not stacked well onto each other fix
01:08:814 (7) - ^ fix
01:09:142 (8) - NC for jump ^
01:09:142 (8,9,10) - Not symmetric and spacing is also wrong nice fix
01:12:585 - Slider should end here good ~
01:12:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing again, doesnt fit well with previous spacing too fix

Call me back for rechecking Hard and Insane once its fixed, spacing wise

Thanks your modding ! >~<

And this is code !

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,5571,12640
2,75079,79525
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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126,327.868852459016,4,2,1,62,1,0
4060,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
15863,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
23732,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
26355,-100,4,2,1,56,0,0
34224,-100,4,2,1,68,0,0
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47339,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
49634,-100,4,2,1,62,0,0
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74880,-100,4,2,1,86,0,0
80125,-100,4,2,1,46,0,0
89306,-100,4,2,1,11,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,128
Combo3 : 0,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
Combo5 : 0,255,128
Combo6 : 128,0,255

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Gloria Guard

2,274 posts

Joined May 2011

Gloria Guard 2013-03-18T16:49:10+00:00

Hi -iCo- (:3」_)=3

From my modding queue m4m

[General]

비디오 퀄리티가 별로 좋지않습니다. 바꾸시는게 좋겠구요.

전체적으로 모든 난이도가 언스냅되있습니다. 타이밍선들 확인하시구요. 타이밍선들 재설정해주세요.

[Easy]

00:05:207 (4,1) 여기는 박자가 좀 애매하네요. 이게 더좋을것같습니다. -> http://puu.sh/2jTEi

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 곡이 매우 짧고. 티비사이즈라서 여기엔 브레이크타임이 아닌 노트를 넣어주세요.
나중에 태클올 가능성 100%입니다. 꼭 넣어주세요.

00:40:781 (2) 이 슬라이더 박자 이렇게 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/jTl7 이지는 왠만해선 박자를 주로
맞춰주시는게 좋아요. 초보유저들에겐 읽기 쉽도록. 그리고 00:42:039 여기에 노트추가하시구요.

00:43:404 (2) 이 슬라이더 박자도 이렇게 바꿔보세요. http://puu.sh/2jTnT 위에서 말했던것처럼.
박자를 주로 주시하시면서 매핑하시는게 좋습니다. 00:44:716 여기에 노트추가하시구요.

00:51:273 (1) 슬라이더 머리에 피니쉬 추가해주세요. 키아이 시작하는부분이기도하고 피니쉬소리를 넣어주는게
더 좋습니다.

01:01:765 (1,2,3) 제가보기에는 이 패턴 모양은 별로인거같아요, 이렇게 바꿔주세요-> http://puu.sh/2jTv3

01:15:044 ~ 01:19:962 여기도 마찬가지로 쉬는구간처럼 보여도 노트를 넣어주세요. 짧은곡에 브레이크타임은
되도록이면 넣지 않으시는게 좋습니다.

[Normal]

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 여기는 이지와 마찬가지입니다.

00:15:863 (1) 슬라이더 머리에 피니쉬 추가해주세요

00:29:470 (1,2,3) 스페이싱 확인해주세요 3번의 거리가 2번거리와 다릅니다. 노말은 사소한 디스턴스라도
태클이 걸어오기때문에 최대한꼼꼼하게 디스턴스를 신경쓰시면서 해주시는것이 좋습니다.

00:32:912 (3) 여기 노트제거하시고 뒤에 4번 슬라이더를 여기에 옮기시구요 그리고 00:33:896 여기에 노트추가.

00:40:617 (1,2,3,4,5) 저는 이 박자는 안어울린다고 생각합니다. 이렇게 바꿔보시는건 어떠신가요? -> http://puu.sh/2jTU7

01:12:257 (1) 이 슬라이더 박자는 매우 어색하네요.. 가사를 잘들어보시면 이 박자와는 전혀다릅니다. -> http://puu.sh/2jU1b 이렇게 바꿔주세요.
01:13:076 여기에는 뒤에 3번노트를 옮겨주시구요.

01:14:060 (3,4) 여기도 박자 이렇게해주세요. -> http://puu.sh/2jU3o

[HaHoHard]

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 여기도 이지와 노말 같이 여기도 매핑을 해주세요. 곡이 매우짧고 더군다나 브레이크타임
을 곡시간이 짧은곡에 넣는건 더더욱 좋지않습니다. 실제로도 짧은곡에는 브레이크타임을 잘 넣지 않습니다. (2~3초 브레이크정도는 괜찮다고합니다)

00:00:781 (2,3,4) 한곳에 3노트 넣는건 좀 지루한거같네요.. 1/2슬라로 바꾸셔서 리피트 1번 넣으시거나.
http://puu.sh/2jU70 이렇게 하는게 더 흐름에 좋습니다.

00:15:863 (1) 슬라이더 머리 피니쉬 추가

00:49:962 (1) 스핀말고 긴 슬라이더를 넣으시는것을 추천합니다. 스핀이 긴것도 아니고. 스핀다음에 바로 나오는 짧은스핀은
플레이어들에게 갑작스럽게 느껴질것입니다.

[scanter's Insane]

AR - 1

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 이지,노말,하드,인세인 마찬가지.

00:34:716 (4,5) Ctrl+G 이게 더 흐름에 좋네요 동선으로 봐서도 좋구여.

00:49:962 (1) 하드와 마찬가지입니다.

00:55:207 (6) Ctrl+G 이게더 동선이 맞습니다.

01:05:207 (1,2,3,4) 스택 잘안되있네요.

01:05:535 (3,4) 너무 높고 너무 낮은감이있네요.. 3번은 hp바가 닿고.. 4번은 너무 밑으로되있네요..
저는 이패턴 별로 추천하고싶지않습니다.. 갑작스럽기도 하고. 갑자기 꽉찬 박자에서 이렇게 너무 단순한 박자로가는건.
저는 비추입니다. 여기도 박자를 꽉채워서 하시는게 더좋다고 생각합니다.

01:15:044 ~ 01:19:962 이지와 같습니다.

Good luck

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-03-18T17:53:46+00:00

BounceBabe wrote:
Hi, M4M from #modreqs
The mp3 is cut off at the end, let it fade out or try finding a better mp3

Is this unrankable? because i can't find anything else >w<

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2013-03-19T05:07:24+00:00

M4M! take these as suggestions except for this one:

- Keep the combo colors throughout the maps consistent. You didn't seem to have changed them for Easy!

Anyways

[Easy]
00:53:896 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is my personal opinion but you repeat the long slider - circle pattern for a whole eight-count. That can get boring quickly, why not mix it up?

Your volume for the majority of the map is at 100%! You should probably lower it to make the hitsounds during kiai time stand out, and even then you should lower the volume for kiai time to about 70-80%

[Normal]
00:32:912 (3,4) - suggestion: switch these 2 in the timeline
00:54:224 (4) - NC
Your volume for the majority of the map is at 100%! You should probably lower it to make the hitsounds during kiai time stand out, and even then you should lower the volume for kiai time to about 70-80%

[Hard]
is fine

[Insane]
Holy.. maybe lower the approach rate by 1? @_@

Good luck on your first map! ^__^
(Edit: I didn't read the rules thoroughly, sorryyy..)

Natsu

8,076 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-03-20T04:16:33+00:00

Hi from my Queue

Should Fix
Suggestions

General

bgg.jpg is 985x734, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Inconsistency in combo colours you have to use same colours in all the diffs fix this plz
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn problem is on insane need to fix this
Inconsistency in Kiai Times maybe can use the same kiai?

Easy:

00:00:126 add clap or finish since music all for it.
00:00:126 remove clap from slider body since got no sense.
00:01:437 clap on the head slider you can hear that in music
00:04:716 really weird spacing add a circle here since music sound strong there..
00:04:388 whistle don fit imo add clap better
00:05:044 add new combo here since is better for read it
00:05:044 whistle don fit imo add clap better
00:13:240 missing finish
00:15:863 add finish music call for it imo
00:18:158 (4,1) - distance error here should fix
00:21:109 (1,2) - ^
00:23:732 (1,2,3) - this is so hard for a easy lvl maybe convert they in a slider?
00:24:716 finish + clap fit alot better here
00:30:289 remove new combo no sense here
00:30:289 (1,2,3,4) - this is so hard for easy make 2 slider better or something else
00:36:847 missing finish here too
00:51:273 ^
00:52:257 (2,3) - distance error here should fix
00:58:814 (4,1,2,3,4) - new player cant read this maybe make it in a clear and easy pattern plz
01:01:765 add finish here too is necesary
01:04:716 (1,2,3) - 3 circles are not a good choose in easy maybe make 1 slider and 1 circle gonna be nice
01:14:552 remove finish from slider body
Fix this
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Normal:

00:00:126 add clap or finish since music all for it.
00:00:781 clap in the head following music
00:00:126 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - try to use scanter hitsounds in this part fit alot better imo
00:00:453 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - use the same distance be consistent plz
00:13:240 missing finish
00:15:863 ^
00:15:863 (1,2,3,4,1) - distance is not the same here too..
00:23:732 (1,2,3,4) - so confuse for new players use 1.0 distance like you did before be consistent with this
00:24:388 (3,4) - remove whistles are no following nothing just keep the finish
00:26:355 finish fit alot here
00:26:355 (1,2,3,4) - distance error
00:44:716 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - add some slider really hard for a normal imo
00:54:224 add clap following your pattern
01:00:945 ths clap got no sense here remove t and add finish like 01:00:617 (3,2) -
01:01:765 finish
01:04:388 (1,2,3,4) - distance error use the same as before this dont make this just for symetry
01:14:880 remove this new combo no sense imo
Fix this
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HaHoHard:

00:00:126 add clap or finish since music all for it.
00:00:126 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - try to use scanter hitsounds in this part fit alot better imo
00:04:388 (4,5,6,7,1) - ths whistle dont fit her imo use claps better
00:29:470 clap in the tail following your patterns
00:36:847 add finish here music call for it
00:47:339 clap on the spinner following your clap pattern
00:49:962 ^
00:56:519 add finish music call for it
01:10:945 (6,7,8) - remove this and add a spinner better fit alot with vocal
01:12:257 (1,2) - ugly overslap
01:12:748 (2) - remove finish from body and tail so weird just let it on the head
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Scanter Insane:

00:13:240 add clap following your clap pattern
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern look a little random maybe make it better sure you can :3
00:24:798 add a spinner fit alot following vocals
00:25:863 remove this clap is not following nothing
00:26:355 add finsh music call for it imo
00:34:552 add clap really necesary o no very much add finish better like you did with the others circles
00:47:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why you change to normal finish sound really bad maybe change it to soft fit alot better imo
00:48:650 clap
00:49:962 remove this whistle dont sense you are not using they in all the map add clap following your pattern
01:12:257 clap dont fit here add finish that fit alot better
01:20:781 (2,4,3) - why not add finish like you did in the other star patterns?
01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:22:748 remove new combo no sense for me
01:28:076 end the song with a finish like the other diffs gonna be nice
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hope i help you in something

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-03-20T11:33:51+00:00

아.. 미안해 관리 너무 소홀했어...

고쳤음~

http://puu.sh/2kN0D

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-21T05:15:06+00:00

Gloria Guard wrote:
Hi -iCo- (:3」_)=3

From my modding queue m4m

[General]

비디오 퀄리티가 별로 좋지않습니다. 바꾸시는게 좋겠구요.

전체적으로 모든 난이도가 언스냅되있습니다. 타이밍선들 확인하시구요. 타이밍선들 재설정해주세요.

[scanter's Insane]

AR - 1 fix

00:05:535 ~ 00:13:076 이지,노말,하드,인세인 마찬가지. okay

00:34:716 (4,5) Ctrl+G 이게 더 흐름에 좋네요 동선으로 봐서도 좋구여. 지금이 더 나은거 같아요.

00:49:962 (1) 하드와 마찬가지입니다. 충분히 길다고 생각되니 그냥 냅둘께요.

00:55:207 (6) Ctrl+G 이게더 동선이 맞습니다. fix

01:05:207 (1,2,3,4) 스택 잘안되있네요. okay

01:05:535 (3,4) 너무 높고 너무 낮은감이있네요.. 3번은 hp바가 닿고.. 4번은 너무 밑으로되있네요..
저는 이패턴 별로 추천하고싶지않습니다.. 갑작스럽기도 하고. 갑자기 꽉찬 박자에서 이렇게 너무 단순한 박자로가는건.
저는 비추입니다. 여기도 박자를 꽉채워서 하시는게 더좋다고 생각합니다. 좀 더 생각해보구요. 일단 hp바는 고침

01:15:044 ~ 01:19:962 이지와 같습니다. 이쪽은 괜찮아보이니 그냥 브레이크로 처리함

Good luck

Thank you !

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-21T05:35:56+00:00

Natsu wrote:
Hi from my Queue

Should Fix
Suggestions

General
bgg.jpg is 985x734, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
Inconsistency in combo colours you have to use same colours in all the diffs fix this plz
Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn problem is on insane need to fix this
Inconsistency in Kiai Times maybe can use the same kiai?
Scanter Insane:

00:13:240 add clap following your clap pattern fix
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern look a little random maybe make it better sure you can :3 fix my owns.
00:24:798 add a spinner fit alot following vocals GJ
00:25:863 remove this clap is not following nothing why? it has drum sound.
00:26:355 add finsh music call for it imo okay
00:34:552 add clap really necesary o no very much add finish better like you did with the others circles finish is better to me. so, I keep this.
00:47:339 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why you change to normal finish sound really bad maybe change it to soft fit alot better imo fix
00:48:650 clap okay
00:49:962 remove this whistle dont sense you are not using they in all the map add clap following your pattern no. clap is not fit. keep this. I used somewhere.
01:12:257 clap dont fit here add finish that fit alot better fix
01:20:781 (2,4,3) - why not add finish like you did in the other star patterns? It hasn't any finish sound.
01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:22:748 remove new combo no sense for me but, it has anti-jump.
01:28:076 end the song with a finish like the other diffs gonna be nice no. it hasn't any finish sound.
Fix this
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: all fix
00:04:055 - snap to 00:04:060
00:34:227 - snap to 00:34:224
00:44:722 - snap to 00:44:716
00:47:346 - snap to 00:47:339
00:49:641 - snap to 00:49:634
00:51:281 - snap to 00:51:273
01:01:694 - snap to 01:01:683
01:01:776 - snap to 01:01:765
01:12:188 - snap to 01:12:175
01:12:270 - snap to 01:12:257
01:14:894 - snap to 01:14:880
01:20:141 - snap to 01:20:125
01:29:324 - snap to 01:29:306
hope i help you in something

Thank you ! and this is code. ~~baka Natsu..~~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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123,95,56191,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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408,352,57339,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,264,57503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,164,57666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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188,220,58978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,340,59470,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,340,59634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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192,108,60617,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,180,60781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Dolphin

1,167 posts

Joined January 2012

Dolphin 2013-03-24T19:38:13+00:00

M4M from the Modding Queue!

Sorry for the delay. My old laptop's hard drive broke and I needed a new one.
Also I don't usually mod Standard. So don't expect my mod to be any good or helpful.

M4M is an exception!

Bold - Should be fixed!
Dark Red - Unrankable
Normal - Suggestion

[General]

I like the custom hitsounds for this map! They fit well with the music!

[Easy]

Nothing much that I would change. Maybe set the OD and AR a tick higher? I am not sure. That is all.

[Normal]

Good Map. I wouldn't change anything here.

[HaHoHard]

Overall I nice map. Nothing in the Song Setup that I would change.

00:26:355 (1,2) - This compressed slider stream is not fun to play. Try changing it into something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/670630
01:27:994 (1) - I would remove the Finish hitsound on this spinner.

[scanter's Insane]

Oh my god those jumps. @.@ I am not sure how to mod this properly, but I tried. Btw the jumps aren't a bad thing!

00:16:355 (2) - Move this note somewhere else. It's too confusing with the jump.
00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to decrease the space between this jump. On Auto this looks weird.
00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn this into a circle stream. Compressed slider streams are not always so fun to play.
00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either decrease the spaces or change the order you hit these notes in.
01:00:781 (2) - Why is this note here? It doesn't follow the voice like what you have mapped elsewhere.
01:08:322 (5) - Move this to x: 480 y: 104. It looks better with the previous slider.

Thanks for the M4M! My work is done here! I hope you all listen a little to my mod, but remember I am not a good Standard modder. Please respond with reason and don't just say "no". Explain why you disagree.

If you have any questions about my mod just PM me anytime.

Good Luck~

qkenan

134 posts

Joined October 2010

qkenan 2013-03-27T10:39:09+00:00

Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion

Hi~M4M Here _(:з」∠)_

[General]

BG has so high quality and its size is over 600KB, but no problem~

[Easy]

Fine~

[Normal]

00:28:322 (5,6) - seems not parallel with previous notes
also 00:29:634 (3) - and 00:30:289 (4,5,6) - themselves
01:12:257 (1) - try this ?
SPOILER
Nice diff~

[HaHoHard]

Check the unsnapped inherited points !
00:04:060 -5ms
00:34:224 -3ms
00:44:716 -6ms
00:47:339 -7ms
00:49:634 -7ms
00:51:273 -8ms
01:01:683 -11ms
01:01:765 -11ms
01:12:175 -13ms
01:12:257 -13ms
01:14:880 -14ms
01:20:125 -16ms
and 01:29:306
00:11:929 (5,6,7) - I'm very fond of the flow like 00:10:617 (1,2,3) - so how about change ⑤⑥⑦ into similar pattern with it ? if you made it players would be happy to see the notes placed closer to center
00:24:388 (3) - maybe this shape better
SPOILER
01:09:634 (1,2,3,4) - plz adjust the curve of notes like
SPOILER
01:21:273 (4,5) - move them a little farther from the next slider, considering the spacing you used at 01:22:421 (2,3) -

[scanter's Insane]

Awesome jumps at a little high bpm, I prefer AR+1
00:12:748 (5,6) - the spacing may be error when previous notes using 1.7~2.0x. Also considering the placing,how about moving ⑤ to x260y72 and do CTRL+G to ⑥
SPOILER
00:22:748 (4) - it seems not so suitable with ③, try move the tail point to x176y240 for better flow
SPOILER
00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - when ar is still 8, the pattern could be very difficult to read .If you still keep using ar8 I suggest to do CTRL+G to ③④
00:47:994 (1,2,3,4) - isnt the spacing too large ? If I were you I will choose to make a square jump like previous pattern
01:12:748 (1,2,3) - under ar8, it would also confuse the player
01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'd better regard them as overmapping. Since the Kiai is over, the map need a smooth end but you even mapped here harder than kiai. what's more, the rhythm here is not so powerful as before, either. you'd better remap these notes for some other patterns, or at least, reduce the spacings and do some rotations

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-03-28T06:59:33+00:00

M4M request from your queue
General
Inconsistence Audio Lead-In Time, it's not Unrankeble but I suppose you should set same timing. I suggest 2000 is more better.
Inconsistence Preview Time. you must fix it.
Easy
Placement
00:18:158(4) to be nice flow, a bit moved like this?

SPOILER

00:20:781(4)^
00:39:470(4,1) a bit norrow spacing imo

SPOILER

00:42:421(1,2) current is fine but you can make more beautiful. like this?

SPOILER

01:02:748(2,3,1,2) like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:00:453 add clap at head and end
00:01:437(3) add clap at head and reverse
00:10:617(1) add finish at head
00:26:355(1)^
00:46:683(4) add clap at end
01:14:552(3) delete finish at head.

Normal
Placement
00:05:371(1,2,3,4) maybe you can put more symmetrically. like this?

SPOILER

00:18:158(4) x:328 y:300 to be same line at (2)
Rhythm
00:15:780 unnecessary green line
00:23:732(1,2,3,4) not bad but it's a bit difficult for Newbie. so you can put simply like this?

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
00:10:617(1) add finish at head
01:00:617(1,2,3) please make calm, it's loud.

HaHoHard
Placement
00:02:257(1) delete NC since 00:04:880 not added.
Rhythm
00:29:470(3) not fit imo. you can put them like this?

SPOILER

00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing.
Hit Sonud
00:04:060(3) add finish at head
01:07:011(1)^
00:05:371(1) add whistle or clap?

scanter's Insane
Placement
00:54:224(2,3) put a tiny jumping.

SPOILER

01:04:224(6) stack at next slider.
Rhythm
00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing.
01:04:388(1,2,3,4) a bit bored than other parts, so you can put notes at 01:04:880, 01:05:535, 01:06:191 on each head of slider.

SPOILER

01:13:076~ same as above. it's a example here so you can change freely,

256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73404,6,0,P|136:192|180:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,73896,2,0,P|376:192|332:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,74388,6,0,L|96:56,1,90
332,288,74716,2,0,L|416:328,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Hit Sonud

nice map. good luck with star~

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-03-28T10:13:06+00:00

Dolphin wrote:
M4M from the Modding Queue!

Sorry for the delay. My old laptop's hard drive broke and I needed a new one.
Also I don't usually mod Standard. So don't expect my mod to be any good or helpful. M4M is an exception!

Bold - Should be fixed!
Dark Red - Unrankable

[scanter's Insane]
[notice]Oh my god those jumps. @.@ I am not sure how to mod this properly, but I tried. Btw the jumps aren't a bad thing!
00:16:355 (2) - Move this note somewhere else. It's too confusing with the jump. okay ~
00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try to decrease the space between this jump. On Auto this looks weird. ^
00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5) - Turn this into a circle stream. Compressed slider streams are not always so fun to play. looks good even now. so I keep this.
00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either decrease the spaces or change the order you hit these notes in. ^
01:00:781 (2) - Why is this note here? It doesn't follow the voice like what you have mapped elsewhere. ? I think, follow well.
01:08:322 (5) - Move this to x: 480 y: 104. It looks better with the previous slider. okay ~
Thanks for the M4M! My work is done here! I hope you all listen a little to my mod, but remember I am not a good Standard modder. Please respond with reason and don't just say "no". Explain why you disagree.

If you have any questions about my mod just PM me anytime.
Good Luck~

qkenan wrote:
Red = Unrankable
Blue = It should be modified
Black = My suggestion
Hi~M4M Here _(:з」∠)_

[General]
BG has so high quality and its size is over 600KB, but no problem~
[scanter's Insane]
Awesome jumps at a little high bpm, I prefer AR+1 okay ~
00:12:748 (5,6) - the spacing may be error when previous notes using 1.7~2.0x. Also considering the placing,how about moving ⑤ to x260y72 and do CTRL+G to ⑥ looks good even now.
SPOILER
00:22:748 (4) - it seems not so suitable with ③, try move the tail point to x176y240 for better flow looks good even now.
SPOILER
00:34:224 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - when ar is still 8, the pattern could be very difficult to read .If you still keep using ar8 I suggest to do CTRL+G to ③④ pass
00:47:994 (1,2,3,4) - isnt the spacing too large ? If I were you I will choose to make a square jump like previous pattern decrease distance
01:12:748 (1,2,3) - under ar8, it would also confuse the player pass
01:23:240 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I'd better regard them as overmapping. Since the Kiai is over, the map need a smooth end but you even mapped here harder than kiai. what's more, the rhythm here is not so powerful as before, either. you'd better remap these notes for some other patterns, or at least, reduce the spacings and do some rotations reduce distance

kajiyatta wrote:
SPOILER
M4M request from your queue
General
Inconsistence Audio Lead-In Time, it's not Unrankeble but I suppose you should set same timing. I suggest 2000 is more better.
Inconsistence Preview Time. you must fix it.

scanter's Insane
Placement
00:54:224(2,3) put a tiny jumping. yup ~
[spoilerbox]
01:04:224(6) stack at next slider. sound is different. so I keep this.
Rhythm
00:48:650(1) extended to 00:49:798, I fell much in playing. looks good even now.
01:04:388(1,2,3,4) a bit bored than other parts, so you can put notes at 01:04:880, 01:05:535, 01:06:191 on each head of slider. very nice idea fix my own.
SPOILER
01:13:076~ same as above. it's a example here so you can change freely,
256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,73404,6,0,P|136:192|180:272,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,73896,2,0,P|376:192|332:112,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,74388,6,0,L|96:56,1,90
332,288,74716,2,0,L|416:328,1,90,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Hit Sonud

nice map. good luck with star~

Thanks all

And this is code

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 51281
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,75079,79375
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
126,327.868852459016,4,2,1,60,1,0
4060,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
15863,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
23732,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
26355,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
34224,-100,4,2,1,65,0,0
44716,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
47339,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
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51273,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
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72175,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
72257,-100,4,2,1,85,0,1
74880,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
80125,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
89306,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,255,0
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,0
Combo4 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
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Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-03-29T02:49:11+00:00

@qkenan

Thank you for your mod! fixed some for changing notes. Thanks!

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-03-29T02:56:30+00:00

@kajiyatta

Fixed most of it except for the flow due to the distance problem. Thanks!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-03-30T02:12:05+00:00

http://puu.sh/2qrPZ

Thanks Mod All Fix~~

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-03-30T02:28:30+00:00

다시 수정완료!

http://puu.sh/2qrPZ

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-03-30T22:09:29+00:00

Rechecking Hard as requested

00:43:726 (1,4) - reverse NC, since it destroys your actual combo pattern on previous elements, you had always long and now it isnt following it
01:00:119 (1) - Remove NC here reason same as above
01:27:333 (5) - Random whistle clap at the end of the slider?

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-03-31T00:45:38+00:00

http://puu.sh/2qXez

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2013-04-02T06:18:44+00:00

Hi

m4m from your mod queue

General

Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset

scanter's Insane

00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard

00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack
nice diff

Normal

fine

Easy

re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-04-02T20:02:54+00:00

@AlpacaCokelat

Changed everything regarding letterbox during breaks, preview points, and offsets. Thank you!

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-04-04T05:44:55+00:00

AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hi m4m from your mod queue

General
Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset
Ok~ Done

scanter's Insane
00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard
00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack No.. Bad Patten... nice diff Thnaks...~

Normal
fine

Easy
re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~

나중에 푸쉬로 줄게 미안해...

TMAstraf

100 posts

Joined February 2010

TMAstraf 2013-04-08T16:41:12+00:00

General:
Make Audio Lead-In 3 seconds

Easy:
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here
01:02:748 - 01:03:076 Maybe put this on other place because it cross on 01:01:273
01:04:716 ^ cross 01:02:748

Normal:
00:00:126 put is on same position like 00:02:257
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here

scanter's Insane:
00:09:634 Make same position like 00:09:306
00:09:798 Make same position like 00:09:470
01:27:994 delete circle and beginn spinner

Well thats all =)

zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2013-04-10T02:34:44+00:00

will fix this post soon hold on

zorefire

429 posts

Joined October 2012

zorefire 2013-04-11T00:10:35+00:00

Well seeing how all these people helped you with your map I see nothing wrong with it now :/ so I would say it's go to go for ranking by my opinion. I have played your Easy & Normal and have gotten 100.0% so it's good to go I guess.

Irreversible

osu! Alumni

4,315 posts

Joined December 2011

Irreversible 2013-04-11T02:03:28+00:00

Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[scanter's Insane]

First impression: Very fun to play! good job ~

00:05:371 (1,2) - I kinda suggest something like this. http://puu.sh/2xN0e It has a better flow, although it's a bit harder to play, but I think this is ok

00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't this meant to be a star..? If yes, it's wrong made o.o
00:29:962 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo kinda threw me out of the concept. I think the jump between 00:29:962 (4,5,1) - is too hard in compare with 00:30:289 (1,2) - . You should fix this, with lowering the DS.
00:56:847 (2) - Make this one a bit rounder, only a little bit. xD
01:00:289 (5) - Move this one to x:316 y:252. It will look a bit better

Wow! This diff was really fun to play, I hope I'll see it ranked soon

[HaHoHard]

First impression: looks good

00:02:748 (1) - Make this a bit rounder, so it looks better with 00:03:404 (2) - (which also should be a LITTLE bit more round)
00:17:175 (5,6) - They should also be a little bit rounder

00:20:289 (7,1) - If you play your diff, you'll see that they touch each other, what doesn't look so nice. Try to place them a bit different!
00:24:388 (3) - This bow should be on the other side I suppose.
00:29:470 (3) - This one should be a bit rounder, because it will look nicer with 00:28:978 (1) -
00:31:109 (6,7) - Move them here: http://puu.sh/2xNFy
00:32:912 (6,7,8) - Try something like this? http://puu.sh/2xNGp

The rest is okay-ish! It's ok to play, but maybe you should get some more mods! but it's on the right way

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.

Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-04-11T20:12:58+00:00

Irreversible wrote:
Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.

Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!

Fixed everything. Thanks for the mod!

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-04-13T03:21:35+00:00

fix some :3

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

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HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
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iyasine

1,135 posts

Joined January 2012

iyasine 2013-04-15T09:54:44+00:00

hi~ iCo (^^)/

Easy

00:12:912 (3) - 2 grid up . 2grid left ?

SPOILER

01:14:552 - Delete finish . addclap ?

Normal

00:30:945 (6) - 1 grid down is point a dot ?

SPOILER

01:14:552 (1) - Delete finish . add clap ?

HaHoHard

00:42:093 (1) - Distance 1.1x ?

01:00:781 - add note ?

scanter's Insane

01:01:273 (1) - Distance 1.0x ?

00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice!

good luck~ <3

Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-04-15T21:14:16+00:00

@iyasine

i fixed the points little bit.

I don't accept your hitsound suggestion because it is there to give more emphasis. Thanks for the mod!

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-04-16T05:27:51+00:00

hey

Easy
OD +1 (to balance ODs of each diff)

00:27:994 (4,5) - try reversing this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707107 (note placement is just an idea)
00:42:093 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
00:44:716 (3) - Finish would sound good. i would also suggest deleting the finish on (2) or lower the volume
00:45:371 (2) - you could make a blanket around the orange (3)~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707111
00:59:142 (1) - Move this pattern up around here to lessen overlapping with 00:58:814 (4) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707114
01:07:339 (1,2) - Reverse these rhythms, same with (3,4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707119 sry if it's hard to get your old pattern back orz
01:10:945 (2) - Finish on tail
01:22:748 (1) - Finish on head
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:26:683 (3) - wrong rhythm, you can extend it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707126

Normal
00:23:732 (1) - just a note for future maps, try to avoid multiple repeats like this in easier diffs
00:28:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - going the same direction as the combo before felt a little boring imo, try remapping these notes for a more special pattern
00:36:847 (1) - Finish on head?
00:54:224 (4) - NC, delete NC on 00:55:207 (1) -
00:59:798 (2) - Finish on tail, has the same emphasis as 01:00:617 (1,2,3) -
01:12:257 (1) - Finish on head i guess, i hear some cymbal
01:22:748 (1) - ^
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:27:994 (1) - Silence/lower volume at the end of this spinner

HaHoHard
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:07:175 (6) - Delete clap unless it's intentional. if it's intentional, i would put a clap on 00:09:798 (6) - for consistency
00:20:289 (7) - Move/rotate to avoid the unnecessary overlap with 00:21:109 (1) - , something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707131
00:36:847 (1) - Finish to emphasize new stanza
00:41:765 (9) - Stack on the head of 00:42:093 (1) -http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707135 , i didn't really see the point of this antijump
01:06:847 (8,1) - perhaps combining these into a 1/2 slider will fit the vocals better
01:26:355 (3) - Finish on tail and Finish on head of 01:27:339 (5) - , the finish on (4) alone sounded a bit off imo?
01:27:994 (1) - Lower volume at the end of this spinner

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) -
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~

00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst
00:32:257 (5) - NC?
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point
01:14:552 (1) - ^
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered
01:24:880 (1) - ^

HabiHolic

5,410 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-04-16T13:57:36+00:00

미안 요세 셤기간이라서 바빠서

Thanks Modder~

-Ico- Update Please~

http://puu.sh/2BbiW

Thanks~

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-04-16T20:39:22+00:00

LunarSakuya wrote:
hey o/ saku-chan xD

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head yup
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals ^
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) - Nice
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~ o.o..!
00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst you're right~
00:32:257 (5) - NC? maybe it will become a NC spam
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~ yup~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144 \o/
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147 \o\
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point /o\
01:14:552 (1) - ^ T_T
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered /o/
01:24:880 (1) - ^ xD

thanks your modding

And this is code!

SPOILER

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PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

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OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Topic Starter

Totoro 2013-04-17T20:22:30+00:00

@LunarSakuya

Thank you so much for the mod!! Fixed everything except overlap in easy due to pattern and distance problems.

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-05-04T06:16:24+00:00

m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1

to

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0

in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks better

kinda nice diff

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal diff

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too)
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play)
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit?

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back

scanter

2,390 posts

Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-05-04T20:42:15+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff yup
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here Ctrl + G number 1
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too) kk~
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play) okay ~
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo fix like this.
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit? Ctrl + G each number 1,2,3,4. like this.

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much nope you're best thanks so much ヾ(*>﹏<)ﾉﾞ

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back

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Totoro

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Totoro 2013-05-04T21:08:50+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0) fixed
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessaryfixed
offset=132(+6) is better to mesure

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..okay
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks betterokay

kinda nice diff Thanks :O

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal difffixed

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo:P

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -Everything Fixed

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..:X

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too muchIt helped a lot. Thank you!

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back

Thunderstorm

437 posts

Joined May 2009

Thunderstorm 2013-05-15T10:23:21+00:00

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2!

Some suggestions

[Easy]
00:28:984 (5) - swap new combo w/ 00:29:312 (1) - ?
00:59:148 (1) - that slider sounds strange. Try to decrease it 1/2 and see if it'll work

[Normal]
AR -1?
Can't really find anything

[HaHoHard]
00:15:869 (1,2) - is this overlap is really needed?
00:47:509 - I'd suggest to deal something w/ that spinner spam
Spacing feels a bit strange. But okay.

[scanter's Insane]
00:09:312 (1,2,3) stack it properly under each other
00:31:607 (1-) - I'd suggest to do not use that HUGE spacing in streams
00:48:656 - spinner spam again
I really don't see any point to map fast songs w/ that amount of spacing breaks, but okay

Rest seems fine

scanter

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Joined July 2012

scanter 2013-05-16T03:19:29+00:00

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