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Kana Asumi - Open Canvas (TV Size)

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HabiHolic
jyu
Hi :) m4m from your mod queue

General
Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset

scanter's Insane
00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard
00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack
nice diff :)

Normal
fine

Easy
re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets :)

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~
Topic Starter
Totoro
@AlpacaCokelat

Changed everything regarding letterbox during breaks, preview points, and offsets. Thank you!
HabiHolic

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi :) m4m from your mod queue

General
Uncheck letterbox during breaks for all diff
HaHoHard and scanter's Insane have different offset
Ok~ Done

scanter's Insane
00:57:339 (1) - remove nc
00:57:830 (4) - nc (big white line)
01:01:437 (1) - remove nc
01:01:765 (5) - nc (big white line)

Audio lead-in should be the same with other diff, it should be 3

HaHoHard
00:04:874 (6,7) - how about stack No.. Bad Patten... nice diff :) Thnaks...~

Normal
fine

Easy
re-adjust the preview point, because AiMod says this diff's preview point is different from other diff's

other than that, everything is fine

Nice mapsets :)

Here's my map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/77115
i hope you don't dislike the song..
oh and you don't have to mod them fully since i only gave you little mod because your mapset is great

Good luck for ranking~
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TMAstraf
General:
Make Audio Lead-In 3 seconds

Easy:
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here
01:02:748 - 01:03:076 Maybe put this on other place because it cross on 01:01:273
01:04:716 ^ cross 01:02:748

Normal:
00:00:126 put is on same position like 00:02:257
00:15:535 Maybe spinner should end here

scanter's Insane:
00:09:634 Make same position like 00:09:306
00:09:798 Make same position like 00:09:470
01:27:994 delete circle and beginn spinner

Well thats all =)
zorefire
will fix this post soon hold on
zorefire
Well seeing how all these people helped you with your map I see nothing wrong with it now :/ so I would say it's go to go for ranking by my opinion. I have played your Easy & Normal and have gotten 100.0% so it's good to go I guess.
Irreversible
Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[scanter's Insane]

First impression: Very fun to play! good job ~

00:05:371 (1,2) - I kinda suggest something like this. http://puu.sh/2xN0e It has a better flow, although it's a bit harder to play, but I think this is ok :)
00:16:355 (2,3,4,5,6) - Isn't this meant to be a star..? If yes, it's wrong made o.o
00:29:962 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo kinda threw me out of the concept. I think the jump between 00:29:962 (4,5,1) - is too hard in compare with 00:30:289 (1,2) - . You should fix this, with lowering the DS.
00:56:847 (2) - Make this one a bit rounder, only a little bit. xD
01:00:289 (5) - Move this one to x:316 y:252. It will look a bit better :P

Wow! This diff was really fun to play, I hope I'll see it ranked soon :P

[HaHoHard]

First impression: looks good :P

00:02:748 (1) - Make this a bit rounder, so it looks better with 00:03:404 (2) - (which also should be a LITTLE bit more round)
00:17:175 (5,6) - They should also be a little bit rounder :x
00:20:289 (7,1) - If you play your diff, you'll see that they touch each other, what doesn't look so nice. Try to place them a bit different!
00:24:388 (3) - This bow should be on the other side I suppose.
00:29:470 (3) - This one should be a bit rounder, because it will look nicer with 00:28:978 (1) -
00:31:109 (6,7) - Move them here: http://puu.sh/2xNFy
00:32:912 (6,7,8) - Try something like this? http://puu.sh/2xNGp

The rest is okay-ish! It's ok to play, but maybe you should get some more mods! but it's on the right way :)

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.


Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Totoro

Irreversible wrote:

Hey there!

From ~ ★ Dake's and Irre's Modding Queue ★ ~

[Normal]

First impression: Can't find anything really bad o.o

00:44:716 (1,1) - This could be a bit confusing for newbies, try moving them.
00:54:552 (5) - There is kinda no reason for a slider like this.. just make it straight.

[Easy]

00:11:929 (2) - Try rotate this by something like -3°, because then it will fit better with 00:12:912 (3) - (it looks like one straight)
00:53:896 (1,2,3) - Let this look like a circle? It looks a bit weird now.


Well that was my mod! I hope i was helpful a bit, since there weren't many points at Easy / Normal, but this just means that it's already good enough imo :3

Good luck!
Fixed everything. Thanks for the mod!
scanter
fix some :3

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Open Canvas.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 51273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Open Canvas (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:おーぷん☆きゃんばす (TV Size)
Artist:Kana Asumi
ArtistUnicode:阿澄佳奈
Creator:-iCo-
Version:scanter's Insane
Source:Hidamari Sketch
Tags:Opening HabiHolic Scanter
BeatmapID:211153
BeatmapSetID:74210

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hidamari Sketch x Honeycomb Opening.avi"
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
2,75079,79375
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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iyasine
hi~ iCo (^^)/

Easy

00:12:912 (3) - 2 grid up . 2grid left ?

01:14:552 - Delete finish . addclap ?

Normal

00:30:945 (6) - 1 grid down is point a dot ?

01:14:552 (1) - Delete finish . add clap ?

HaHoHard

00:42:093 (1) - Distance 1.1x ?

01:00:781 - add note ?

scanter's Insane

01:01:273 (1) - Distance 1.0x ?

00:31:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice!

good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
Totoro
@iyasine

i fixed the points little bit.

I don't accept your hitsound suggestion because it is there to give more emphasis. Thanks for the mod!
LunarSakuya
hey

Easy
OD +1 (to balance ODs of each diff)

00:27:994 (4,5) - try reversing this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707107 (note placement is just an idea)
00:42:093 (3) - NC, delete NC on next note
00:44:716 (3) - Finish would sound good. i would also suggest deleting the finish on (2) or lower the volume
00:45:371 (2) - you could make a blanket around the orange (3)~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707111
00:59:142 (1) - Move this pattern up around here to lessen overlapping with 00:58:814 (4) - ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707114
01:07:339 (1,2) - Reverse these rhythms, same with (3,4) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707119 sry if it's hard to get your old pattern back orz
01:10:945 (2) - Finish on tail
01:22:748 (1) - Finish on head
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:26:683 (3) - wrong rhythm, you can extend it like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707126

Normal
00:23:732 (1) - just a note for future maps, try to avoid multiple repeats like this in easier diffs
00:28:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - going the same direction as the combo before felt a little boring imo, try remapping these notes for a more special pattern
00:36:847 (1) - Finish on head?
00:54:224 (4) - NC, delete NC on 00:55:207 (1) -
00:59:798 (2) - Finish on tail, has the same emphasis as 01:00:617 (1,2,3) -
01:12:257 (1) - Finish on head i guess, i hear some cymbal
01:22:748 (1) - ^
01:25:371 (1) - ^
01:27:994 (1) - Silence/lower volume at the end of this spinner

HaHoHard
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:07:175 (6) - Delete clap unless it's intentional. if it's intentional, i would put a clap on 00:09:798 (6) - for consistency
00:20:289 (7) - Move/rotate to avoid the unnecessary overlap with 00:21:109 (1) - , something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707131
00:36:847 (1) - Finish to emphasize new stanza
00:41:765 (9) - Stack on the head of 00:42:093 (1) -http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707135 , i didn't really see the point of this antijump
01:06:847 (8,1) - perhaps combining these into a 1/2 slider will fit the vocals better
01:26:355 (3) - Finish on tail and Finish on head of 01:27:339 (5) - , the finish on (4) alone sounded a bit off imo?
01:27:994 (1) - Lower volume at the end of this spinner

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) -
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~ :lol:
00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst
00:32:257 (5) - NC?
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point
01:14:552 (1) - ^
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered
01:24:880 (1) - ^

8-)
HabiHolic
미안 요세 셤기간이라서 바빠서

Thanks Modder~

-Ico- Update Please~

http://puu.sh/2BbiW

Thanks~
scanter

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey o/ saku-chan xD

scanter's Insane
00:05:371 (1) - Finish on head yup
00:10:617 (1) - ^, i hear cymbals ^
00:11:929 (1,2) - Ctrl + G these, i think it's better cursor flow from 00:11:601 (5) - Nice
00:18:486 (1,2,3,4) - Love this~ :lol: o.o..!
00:25:863 (1,2) - Move this down away from the spinner's comboburst you're right~
00:32:257 (5) - NC? maybe it will become a NC spam
00:53:732 (1,2) - Reverse this rhythm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707141, also Ctrl + H on (2) to blanket (3)~ yup~
00:56:847 (2) - Curve upwards, better cursor flow imo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707144 \o/
01:02:912 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + G these separately, cursor flow =v= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707147 \o\
01:10:289 (1) - Delete NC, didn't see the point /o\
01:14:552 (1) - ^ T_T
01:22:257 (1) - i think you can move this somewhere else, so the pattern's not so clustered /o/
01:24:880 (1) - ^ xD

8-)
thanks your modding :)
And this is code!
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Topic Starter
Totoro
@LunarSakuya

Thank you so much for the mod!! Fixed everything except overlap in easy due to pattern and distance problems.
wcx19911123
m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks better

kinda nice diff

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal diff

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too)
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play)
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit?

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
scanter

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0)
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessary
offset=132(+6) is better to me

[scanter's Insane]
00:13:240 - same as 00:13:240 - in Hard diff yup
00:17:011 (6,1) - flow is bad when jump from 6 to 1.. maybe you can change the current pattern a bit here Ctrl + G number 1
00:34:716 (4,5) - ctrl+g, then the flow can be much better(don't forget to fix the hitsounds, too) kk~
00:38:158 (2,3) - how about putting 3 first and 2 later? adding a jump from 00:37:994 - to 00:38:158 - is a nice idea imo, and the flow also can be better(do ctrl+g on 00:39:142 (4,5) - if you think the later pattern is too hard to play) okay ~
01:00:945 (3,1) - this anti-jump plays bad to me, it doesn't fit the song well imo. my suggestion is to reduce the spacing of 01:00:617 (1,2,3) - a bit, and then put 01:01:273 (1) - to about x:256 y:28, pattern'll be much better imo fix like this.
01:09:470 (3,1) - maybe the jump is bit large.. how about reducing the spacing of 01:09:142 (1,2,3) - a bit? Ctrl + G each number 1,2,3,4. like this.

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too much nope you're best thanks so much ヾ(*>﹏<)ノ゙

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
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204,37,65699,2,0,P|232:165|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,304,66191,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,374,66355,2,0,P|197:246|215:206,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,264,66847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,156,67011,6,0,P|54:154|108:180,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,56,68814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,69142,5,8,0:0:0:0:
350,266,69306,1,8,0:0:0:0:
273,73,69470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,70945,12,0,71929,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,73076,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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255,277,80289,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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206,262,80781,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,164,80945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,166,81109,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,260,81273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,106,81437,5,4,0:0:0:0:
170,193,81601,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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342,191,81929,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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257,96,82912,1,4,0:0:0:0:
257,288,83240,5,0,0:0:0:0:
198,114,83404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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311,113,83896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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352,191,84552,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Totoro

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here, sorry for the delay

[General]
you need to fix the code:
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",1,1
to
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BGG.jpg",0,0
in all your diffs(either 0,0 or 1,1 is fine, but all diffs need to be the same and I recommend 0,0) fixed
lead-in=2000 is enough, 3000 is unnecessaryfixed :)
offset=132(+6) is better to mesure

[Easy]
I suggest AR+1, 2 is a bit slow..okay
00:20:781 (4) - put it 1 gird left(ctrl+1)? make it on line, looks betterokay

kinda nice diff Thanks :O

[Normal]
00:23:732 (1) - I highly suggest you to change it into 1 1/2 slider and 1 1/2 repeat slider, instead of the current one. a short sliders with too much repeating times is confusing to read in a Normal difffixed

this diff's rhyme is a bit boring imo:P

[HaHoHard]
00:13:240 - how about adding a circle with finish here, and start the spinner later? will fit the song much better imo
00:22:257 (6) - how about ending this slider at 00:22:585 - , and change 00:22:585 (7) - to a circle at 00:22:748 - ? will follow vocal much better imo
00:42:585 (2) - why not change it to a circle and a slider? a 1/1 slider doesn't fit the vocal too much imo
00:47:339 - same as 00:13:240 -Everything Fixed

a Hard diff with no jumps, maybe it's a bit to play..:X

this diff's flow still can be better after this mods imo, my suggestions maybe can't help too muchIt helped a lot. Thank you!

in overall, the map is well done as a first map. feel free to call me back
Thunderstorm
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Some suggestions

[Easy]
00:28:984 (5) - swap new combo w/ 00:29:312 (1) - ?
00:59:148 (1) - that slider sounds strange. Try to decrease it 1/2 and see if it'll work

[Normal]
AR -1?
Can't really find anything

[HaHoHard]
00:15:869 (1,2) - is this overlap is really needed?
00:47:509 - I'd suggest to deal something w/ that spinner spam
Spacing feels a bit strange. But okay.

[scanter's Insane]
00:09:312 (1,2,3) stack it properly under each other
00:31:607 (1-) - I'd suggest to do not use that HUGE spacing in streams
00:48:656 - spinner spam again
I really don't see any point to map fast songs w/ that amount of spacing breaks, but okay

Rest seems fine
scanter
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