1. Easy (2.21 stars, 227 notes)
2. Insane Collab (5 stars, 766 notes)
3. Nemis' Normal (4.12 stars, 280 notes)
4. Vass' Hard (4.91 stars, 590 notes)

[DBF] wrote:

GOOD LORD, STAR ATTACK!!

1. 00:19:256 (2) - I would have liked to have this slider somehow a bit smoother by making it go a bit upwards, considering how the next pattern will go on there. I think it would work quite better, as it would surely continue better this slider's oval flow by making an overall smoother to play pattern. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
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   300,368,19256,2,0,P|332:276|260:192,1,200,2|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,108,20493,5,2,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:24:823 (1,2) - Not a really big thing, though I'd make this pattern go from the opposite side (right ---> left), considering that it would go on really well with this almost linear slider, and it would also make a nice transition with the next slider. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
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   372,368,24823,5,4,1:1:0:0:
   372,368,25442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   204,288,26060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   204,288,26679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,112,27297,6,0,P|299:79|374:314,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:32:246 (1,2) - You should really switch the New Combos from 00:32:246 (1) - to 00:33:483 (2) - , considering that you have been using these 2-combo patterns for all the other patterns there, and also it works quite better to emphatize the sounds there. Remember that the same applies for 03:30:390 (1,2) - !
4. 01:06:885 (1) - You should really consider at least shortening this slider by 1/1 and adding a note at 01:08:431 - . Seeing this long slider finish on a weak beat isn't really that great, especially if you can actually cover that sound! Remember that the same applies for 02:06:267 (1) - and 03:05:647 (1) - if you decide to do this!
   
5. 01:39:050 - I would really consider adding a note here, considering that the rhuthmical pattern here isn't really over. I think that a note here would really go on well, maybe also with a soft sampleset! It would follow pretty good the synth there

• Modding in italian here :3

1. 00:13:998 (1,1) - Non mi piace molto come la curva di questo slider continua quello precedente... Avrei preferito una curva invertita, visto come va l'oval flow di 00:14:926 (1) - . Non è una grande cosa, ma penso che il pattern vada un po' più scorrevolmente in questo modo. Ecco cosa ho fatto qui, vedi come ti sembra:
   
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   424,64,13998,6,2,P|408:184|400:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   328,312,14926,6,2,P|264:336|152:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:35:957 (2,1,2) - Perché qui invece non continui il pattern seguendo la curva dello slider precedente al posto di blankare tutto? Non è proprio un grande cambiamento ma mi piace sinceramente come flowwa in questo modo. Potresti ad esempio fare qualcosa del genere:
   
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   144,168,37194,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   144,168,37349,2,0,P|136:152|136:64,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   168,48,37813,2,0,L|272:40,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   312,56,38277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   312,56,38431,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   448,64,38895,1,4,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:48:947 (2) - pleasepleasepleaseplease usa un sampleset soft alla fine dello slider, non ci sono alcuni beat visibili da enfatizzare in questa parte ed usare un sampleset normal qui è davvero esagerato, non è che ci stia molto :\ Ricordati che se usi il soft sampleset qui alla fine dello slider devi fare lo stesso per 01:08:741 (4) - 01:28:534 (4) - !
4. 02:20:957 (1,2) - Devo dire che non mi aspettavo per niente questo cambio di ritmo considerando che finora hai sempre basato i tuoi ritmi sui white tick orz Ti consiglierei di iniziare il pattern su 02:21:112 - o almeno fai finire tutto il pattern sui red tick così come li hai iniziati togliendo un repeat a 02:21:421 (2) - , così che il ritmo è facile da capire
5. 02:54:514 - Dovresti davvero aggiungere uno slider 2/1 qui che finisce su 02:55:132 - , considerando che hai fatto lo stesso anche in altri punti... Non è chissà che cosa ma penso possa essere usato abbastanza bene per seguire le vocali qui!
6. 03:24:668 (4) - Considerando come continua il pattern qui ti direi almeno di aggiungere un repeat a questo slider, così segue meglio i drum e continua anche bene con i prossimi slider 1/2 che vanno tutti sui white tick :>

1. 00:25:055 (1,2) - The more I hear this part and the more I'm sure that the vocals don't start there, or at least this pattern sound really off with them. Considering how you've been using your other patterns I guess it would be better to just remove these notes and start with the next slider, so that it goes on better!
2. 00:36:421 (2,3) - Just a little preference here: what about using CTRL+G on both this sliders? I like better how the dropoff from 00:35:957 (1) - goes on there, making also a quite cool jump with the next slider
3. 00:54:514 (1,2) - Not a bad pattern, though I would have really liked one of your pattern jumps 1/2 there instead, by moving 00:55:132 (2) - 1/2 back and also adding a note at 00:55:442 - . I think it flows quite smoother there, considering also the general pace of your map I guess it would also fit quite well there!
4. 01:24:050 (x) - Add a note here? I think it works quite good here to follow the vocals, even if it actually is a really minor thing, so feel free to ignore if you don't feel like fixing!
5. 01:49:875 (3,4) - Not a big thing, though after seeing the jump at 01:49:256 (1,2) - I would see quite good a vertical jump here as well, even if you can make the spacing normal after these jumps. It really flows well with your sliders there, and I also think it is quite fun to play overall! Here's what I have done here: see if you like it!
   
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   216,132,109875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   196,208,110029,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   120,204,110184,2,0,B|108:160|116:116,2,90,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 03:04:101 (3,4) - Similar as above, I would see pretty good a jumpy pattern there considering how thee next curved slider flows there. Here's a pattern that you could use without any problems:
   
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   424,200,184101,1,0,2:0:0:0:
   360,380,184256,1,0,2:0:0:0:
   328,276,184411,2,0,B|312:212|248:164,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:13:998 (4) - What about using a New Combo here? Not really a big deal, but consider that you've been using New Combos as well in other patterns like this, and it would work quite good to emphatize the synth there
2. 00:55:442 (6) - Seeing how the synth here is repeated with 00:54:978 - , what would you think about making a little jump by putting this note instead at x:312 y:176, in 00:54:978 (3) - 's position, so that it makes a fun jump following also a note that lands on the same synthesizer pitch? I think it works quite better than your actual pattern
3. 01:21:730 (1) - CTRL+G? I guess you'll have to readjust your next pattern a bit, but I think that this pattern works really great in this way, as the dropoff is really smooth to play! It's a little suggestion though, so feel free to ignore >_<
4. 01:34:565 (2,3) - Another pattern that could be easily reverted is this one, I think it works quite good with both the slider reversed with CTRL+G honestly talking :p
5. 02:04:411 (3) - Pretty much another slider that imho could work really good with a CTRL+G. Try it out!
6. 02:54:359 (6) - Hmm... Considering that the 1/8 part actually begins 1/4 later, you could easily turn this slider into a note and a 1/8 slider placed 1/4 later that ends on the same place. It would be pretty cool to play as it consists of a doublet which plays pretty well there! Just a personal preference though, so try and see if you like it!
   Love thissssssssssssssss <3

-kevincela- wrote:

[Normal]

• Modding in italian here :3

1. 00:13:998 (1,1) - Non mi piace molto come la curva di questo slider continua quello precedente... Avrei preferito una curva invertita, visto come va l'oval flow di 00:14:926 (1) - . Non è una grande cosa, ma penso che il pattern vada un po' più scorrevolmente in questo modo. Ecco cosa ho fatto qui, vedi come ti sembra: a me piace molto il movimento a V che si crea quì
   
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   424,64,13998,6,2,P|408:184|400:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   328,312,14926,6,2,P|264:336|152:280,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:35:957 (2,1,2) - Perché qui invece non continui il pattern seguendo la curva dello slider precedente al posto di blankare tutto? Non è proprio un grande cambiamento ma mi piace sinceramente come flowwa in questo modo. Potresti ad esempio fare qualcosa del genere: ottima idea
   
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   144,168,37194,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   144,168,37349,2,0,P|136:152|136:64,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   168,48,37813,2,0,L|272:40,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   312,56,38277,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   312,56,38431,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   448,64,38895,1,4,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:48:947 (2) - pleasepleasepleaseplease usa un sampleset soft alla fine dello slider, non ci sono alcuni beat visibili da enfatizzare in questa parte ed usare un sampleset normal qui è davvero esagerato, non è che ci stia molto :\ Ricordati che se usi il soft sampleset qui alla fine dello slider devi fare lo stesso per 01:08:741 (4) - 01:28:534 (4) - ! giusto
4. 02:20:957 (1,2) - Devo dire che non mi aspettavo per niente questo cambio di ritmo considerando che finora hai sempre basato i tuoi ritmi sui white tick orz Ti consiglierei di iniziare il pattern su 02:21:112 - o almeno fai finire tutto il pattern sui red tick così come li hai iniziati togliendo un repeat a 02:21:421 (2) - , così che il ritmo è facile da capire hmm boh non so io lo lascerei anche così sinceramente... non lo vedo come un'enorme problema
5. 02:54:514 - Dovresti davvero aggiungere uno slider 2/1 qui che finisce su 02:55:132 - , considerando che hai fatto lo stesso anche in altri punti... Non è chissà che cosa ma penso possa essere usato abbastanza bene per seguire le vocali qui! ho voluto lasciare lo spazio vuoto come ho già fatto 2 volte predentemente, però mi hai fatto notare che avevo piazzato uno slider a 00:55:751 (3) - e quindi l'ho tolto
6. 03:24:668 (4) - Considerando come continua il pattern qui ti direi almeno di aggiungere un repeat a questo slider, così segue meglio i drum e continua anche bene con i prossimi slider 1/2 che vanno tutti sui white tick :> insicuro ma fatto

-kevincela- wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:19:256 (2) - I would have liked to have this slider somehow a bit smoother by making it go a bit upwards, considering how the next pattern will go on there. I think it would work quite better, as it would surely continue better this slider's oval flow by making an overall smoother to play pattern. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it! Made a straight slider here
   
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   300,368,19256,2,0,P|332:276|260:192,1,200,2|4,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
   120,108,20493,5,2,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:24:823 (1,2) - Not a really big thing, though I'd make this pattern go from the opposite side (right ---> left), considering that it would go on really well with this almost linear slider, and it would also make a nice transition with the next slider. Here's what I have done here: see if you like it! I like it as is
   
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   372,368,24823,5,4,1:1:0:0:
   372,368,25442,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   204,288,26060,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   204,288,26679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   232,112,27297,6,0,P|299:79|374:314,1,400,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:32:246 (1,2) - You should really switch the New Combos from 00:32:246 (1) - to 00:33:483 (2) - , considering that you have been using these 2-combo patterns for all the other patterns there, and also it works quite better to emphatize the sounds there. Remember that the same applies for 03:30:390 (1,2) - ! I made new combos follow a 1234 1234 1234 pattern
4. 01:06:885 (1) - You should really consider at least shortening this slider by 1/1 and adding a note at 01:08:431 - . Seeing this long slider finish on a weak beat isn't really that great, especially if you can actually cover that sound! Remember that the same applies for 02:06:267 (1) - and 03:05:647 (1) - if you decide to do this! done
   
5. 01:39:050 - I would really consider adding a note here, considering that the rhuthmical pattern here isn't really over. I think that a note here would really go on well, maybe also with a soft sampleset! It would follow pretty good the synth there done

1. 00:13:998 (4) - What about using a New Combo here? Not really a big deal, but consider that you've been using New Combos as well in other patterns like this, and it would work quite good to emphatize the synth there it's following the 1234 pattern
2. 00:55:442 (6) - Seeing how the synth here is repeated with 00:54:978 - , what would you think about making a little jump by putting this note instead at x:312 y:176, in 00:54:978 (3) - 's position, so that it makes a fun jump following also a note that lands on the same synthesizer pitch? I think it works quite better than your actual pattern done
3. 01:21:730 (1) - CTRL+G? I guess you'll have to readjust your next pattern a bit, but I think that this pattern works really great in this way, as the dropoff is really smooth to play! It's a little suggestion though, so feel free to ignore >_< left as is
4. 01:34:565 (2,3) - Another pattern that could be easily reverted is this one, I think it works quite good with both the slider reversed with CTRL+G honestly talking :p also gonna keep it as is
5. 02:04:411 (3) - Pretty much another slider that imho could work really good with a CTRL+G. Try it out! didn't change
6. 02:54:359 (6) - Hmm... Considering that the 1/8 part actually begins 1/4 later, you could easily turn this slider into a note and a 1/8 slider placed 1/4 later that ends on the same place. It would be pretty cool to play as it consists of a doublet which plays pretty well there! Just a personal preference though, so try and see if you like it! didn't change
   Love thissssssssssssssss <3

Awesome map and song! Just get 3/4 mods (as you've got a really low amount of mods for now orz) and call me back! I hope I have been helpful in the meanwhile

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2014-02-10 17:52 h3k1ru: я тебе по коллабу сюда напишу
2014-02-10 17:52 Natteke: ок
2014-02-10 17:52 h3k1ru: а то мне лень на английском мелочи такие писать
2014-02-10 17:53 Natteke: пиши на русском чо
2014-02-10 17:54 h3k1ru: 00:39:823 (2) -
2014-02-10 17:54 h3k1ru: вот я не прав наверно
2014-02-10 17:54 h3k1ru: но не хочу сюда свисток
2014-02-10 17:54 h3k1ru: без него мне больше нравится
2014-02-10 17:55 Natteke: ну он к треку как бы
2014-02-10 17:55 Natteke: убери эти ноты
2014-02-10 17:55 Natteke: там хай хеты
2014-02-10 17:55 h3k1ru: да
2014-02-10 17:55 h3k1ru: но както по вокалу больше подходит
2014-02-10 17:55 h3k1ru: моим ушам
2014-02-10 17:56 Natteke: я все же оставлю его
2014-02-10 17:56 h3k1ru: 01:39:050 (1) -
2014-02-10 17:57 h3k1ru: я бы ее нк выделил
2014-02-10 17:57 h3k1ru: http://puu.sh/6QTrS.jpg
2014-02-10 17:57 Natteke: там же и так нк
2014-02-10 17:57 h3k1ru: она особенная
2014-02-10 17:57 Natteke: а
2014-02-10 17:58 Natteke: оке
2014-02-10 17:58 h3k1ru: 01:49:565 (3,4) -
2014-02-10 17:58 h3k1ru: вот тут играется плохо
2014-02-10 17:58 h3k1ru: нота заныкана слишком под слайдером
2014-02-10 17:58 h3k1ru: на всей мапе до етого не было такого ритма
2014-02-10 17:58 Natteke: потому что
2014-02-10 17:58 h3k1ru: и я когда играл думал что там все как обычно
2014-02-10 17:58 Natteke: тут часть каталины
2014-02-10 17:58 Natteke: анчинается
2014-02-10 17:59 h3k1ru: в общем если ее вынести из под слайдера немного
2014-02-10 17:59 Natteke: я могу кружочек выдвинуть
2014-02-10 17:59 h3k1ru: то она лучше прочитается
2014-02-10 17:59 h3k1ru: да
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: 01:53:586 (1) -
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: 7.05х
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: XD
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: вообще сложный кусок конечно, далеко тянутся
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: но пофиг
2014-02-10 18:00 Natteke:
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: о так там еще
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: с 1\4
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: 7.05х
2014-02-10 18:00 h3k1ru: жесть
2014-02-10 18:01 Natteke: ага
2014-02-10 18:01 Natteke: ну со слайдера
2014-02-10 18:01 h3k1ru: я то думал че я не попадаю
2014-02-10 18:02 h3k1ru: 02:08:199 -
2014-02-10 18:02 h3k1ru: я щас разве можно так спиннер начинать
2014-02-10 18:02 h3k1ru: знаешь в чем дело теке
2014-02-10 18:02 h3k1ru: ты когда манию играешь
2014-02-10 18:02 Natteke: почему нет?
2014-02-10 18:02 h3k1ru: в мании спиннеры
2014-02-10 18:03 h3k1ru: полоски
2014-02-10 18:03 h3k1ru: и там будет 1\8
2014-02-10 18:03 Natteke: похуй на манию
2014-02-10 18:04 h3k1ru: ок о..о
2014-02-10 18:05 h3k1ru: вот смотри такаяже нота
2014-02-10 18:05 h3k1ru: 02:12:916 (3) -
2014-02-10 18:05 h3k1ru: но к етому времени я думаю в ритме уже можно разобраться
2014-02-10 18:05 Natteke: выдвинул
2014-02-10 18:06 h3k1ru: 02:22:813 (3) -
2014-02-10 18:06 Natteke: чуствую эта карта много бурлений вызовет в модхелпе
2014-02-10 18:06 Natteke: ага уже выдвинул ету
2014-02-10 18:06 h3k1ru: да недумаю
2014-02-10 18:06 h3k1ru: ничего криминального
2014-02-10 18:08 h3k1ru: 03:18:019 (1) -
2014-02-10 18:14 Natteke: ну чотам
2014-02-10 18:14 Natteke: есть еще?
2014-02-10 18:14 h3k1ru: неа
2014-02-10 18:14 Natteke: ок
2014-02-10 18:14 h3k1ru: щас еще сб пофиксить надо

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h3k1ru wrote:

[Nemis' Normal]

00:38:431 (1) - Personally I don't like this kind of new combo placement. Will be better if you put new combos on every new pattern rather than every new big stanza.
01:07:504 (2) - Maybe rotate it like this, I think it's way too hidden: done!

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03:24:668 (4) - Tricky slider. I think you can reduce it by 1 tick. Vocal end on 03:24:978 and it will be more consistent with previous rhythm you used one the map. I know... kevin suggested me to do this, but i'm still unsure :\

h3k1ru wrote:

[Vass' Hard]

02:52:426 (7) - I found this slider pretty lonely. Maybe try something like this:

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