Updated.
Gracias Moody ql :3MoodyRPG wrote:
GeneralEasy
- Solo tus dificultades tienen video, deberias añadirle tambien el video a las dificultades de Sekai Uy, ni idea como se me paso esto, hecho.
Insane
- -- Muy bien hecho
- - 01:30:279 (3) - nazi* Podrias mover un poco este slider para que no haga un overlap con el slider (1) Si te fijas bien no llegan a tocarse, lo que se toca es el circulo que se va cerrando y después queda ahí antes que el slider desaparezca :p
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Thanks ^^Sonnyc wrote:
Easy:
00:52:779 (2) - Try this for more blanket? Sure.SPOILER01:09:708 (2) - Add Whistle at the start? No, I'm following Piano sound with Whistles.296,252,52779,2,0,P|256:277|216:252,1,100,10|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:16:565 (2) - ^? ^
01:25:136 (4) - Delete Whistle like 01:23:422 (2) feels better here ^
Insane:
00:25:994 (6) - Can't you make more flatter? Why? o.o, it's ok like this.
00:37:350 (3,5) - Delete Whistle, since all is too loud I like how it sounds since I'm following voice here.
00:40:565 (3,4) - Do something similar with above ^
00:47:636 (1) - I don't think this note is the one to be emphasized with Finish Music sounds like a cymbal here, so it fits.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - It would be better if you made a perfect pentagon I have no idea how to do it even better, but I think this is not a problem after all xD.
Gracias :3[Yue] wrote:
ToraDoraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! *--------------*
Exelente mapa Bruno! te dejo una estrella >w<
BounceBabe wrote:
General
You have too much Kiai parts! Reduce them, overall its 49 seconds, and the song has 1 mintues 45 seconds time. You also start at 00:13:993 - Delete the first section maybe? I'll try to keep them for now since fits good with the song.
Easy
Nothing here
Insane
00:15:493 (1) - Spacing, jump is too sudden and doesnt fit at this part at all Ok, changed it.
00:20:851 (1) - Remove NC Nah, fits good imo because first Kiai starts here.
00:36:494 (1) - ^ Add on next element Why? o.o
00:44:851 (4) - You cant see this circle good, move it a little I like patterns with stacked notes, and this is one of them, so I'll keep this.
01:05:208 (8) - NC, delete new combo at 01:05:422 (1) - Following vocal here, and vocal starts at 01:05:422.
01:12:065 (1,2) - These doesnt fit at all, remove the 2nd one These fit, listen the song at 25% rate and you will see.
01:18:922 (7) - Remove NC, delete next Following vocal.
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
00:17:208 (3) - ^ ^
01:15:494 (4) - ^ ^
01:18:922 (7) - ^ ^
01:22:351 (5) - ^ ^
01:05:208 (8) - ^ (01:12:065 (1) - Here you did that)[/color] ^, and changed combos on that 01:12 pattern.
01:24:065 (1,1,1) - Remove NC This is ok for me.
01:25:565 (1) - I suggest a half beat reserve slider, fits the vocal better than this huge slider In this case I'm following music instead vocal.
01:37:136 (4,5) - This plays odd, try to move them a little different Flows nicely imo.
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a symmetric star Improved it.
Thanks guys :3Wolf wrote:
General
About the kiais, starting at 01:01:994 - you've pretty much used one after one after 2 seconds of the previous kiai. For example, you've ended one kiai at 01:13:994 - and started one at 01:15:708 - Have you tried "flashy" kiais here? I think they would fit well, but this is just me of course. Doesn't fit for me.
Easy
Nothing much I can add here. Looking solid to me.
01:00:279 (4) - Hmm not quite sure, you could've made this one to be a bit more aligned with 00:58:994 (2) - Something like this for a better looking. Improved this.
01:01:351 (1) - Don't quite like the position of this slider here due to the fact that 00:58:994 (2) - can still be seen fading. In other words, overlap doesn't look good imo. The slider that is overlapping this one is more than two seconds before, so I guess it's not a problem at all.
Insane
00:52:565 - Could've added a note here o3o Nah, no music here.
Couldn't find much stuff here as you can see. It looks pretty good to me.
BounceBabe wrote:
Normal
00:49:994 (1) - Remove NC ok
00:53:208 (1) - ^ Add on next element ^
Hard
General
You used tripples, but they dont suit at all. Remove them
Overal
00:16:136 - Here is no vocal, why starting slider here? thats weird Delete them 00:15:708 (4,5) - and move the slider to 00:15:708 - then it goes with the backkground music No, I followed the background so as the vocal here, so i think i want to keep them~
00:50:208 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Too much NC, reduce them ok removed some NC~
00:57:708 (1) - Spacing, move it further away Fixed~
01:17:422 (1) - ^[/color] I made this jump so be a bit fun so i'll keep it~
Overall the diff is ok Thanks :3
Wolf wrote:
Sekai's Normal
Oh, hi there Sekai. =w= Hi ~
00:19:136 (4) - NC because this starts on the "big" white tick? Plus, I think the consistency will look better. (Remove 00:19:994 (1) - NC if added suggestion ofc) Fixed~
00:25:994 (1,2,3,4) - This section has issues with spacing, you should fix them. Plus, (2) and (4) should be moved to match with (3) on the grid. ^
00:32:851 (1) - Hmm, feel like this circle could've been aligned with previous slider curvature. x:128 y:184 (http://puu.sh/1M54W) ^
01:06:708 (2) - Same as above, consider moving to be aligned with previous slider? ^
01:20:851 (4) - Fix spacing. ^
01:28:994 (4) - ^ ^
Sekai's Hard
Oh, hi again. o3o hi again~
00:48:279 (4) - NC should be here. (00:48:494 (1) - Remove NC) ok~
01:31:994 (2) - Uhh, are you fine with the overlap with 01:32:851 (4) - ? Imo it could've been improved a bit more here. Nah, i made it just like that and it looks cool to me xD so i'll keep it~
Thank you Moecarrot :3ykcarrot wrote:
[Insane]
00:25:994 (6) - It looks too curved in comparison with (5,7). Maybe change like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/564675 Ok.
00:31:565 (2,3) - Feels like random stacking. Convert them into a slider? Ok.
00:33:494 (2) - Spacing 1.7x ? Nah, it would feel like a random and weird jump.
01:34:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I wonder if you care about stack leniency. You can see (1,3,5,1) are stacked, which are not on the same position when you play. It looks a bit awkward, because (1,3,5,1) are not continuos notes. Try out stack leniency 4 and look at those notes, they won't be stacked and look tidier imo. Idk what to do here :c, they should see stacked..
01:36:708 (3,4,5) - This formation looks awkward to me. If you can't make them symmetrical, I suggest rotating. (by 120 dgrees, clockwise) Sure, seems nice. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/564721
01:37:994 (6) - If you take suggestion above, its position should be changed like this. ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/564727
01:38:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Then Ctrl+H ? ^
[Easy]
00:48:708 (1,3) - Can you make them symmetrical? I mean the curvature isn't same. Yeah it is, I'm using the same slider, but reduced it. (I did the same on 00:55:565 (1,3) -)
01:15:708 (1,2) - That encircling is too close. Moved slider.
Thanks both for modding :3UnitedWeSin wrote:
[General][Easy]
- I really don't like your bg ._.
Can you choose something that doesn't make Taiga looks so... weird? Weird?, lol, I like it.
Map Design/RhythmHitsounds
- 00:40:994 (4,1) - I think the 4 and the 1 are not fitting together very well and it doesn't look very nice because the 4 is just a straight slider. Can you consider making a double blanket here? Both ways are ok imo.
- 00:48:708 (1,2,3) - Since Ykcarrot also mentioned this in his mod, can I suggest something that may be better here? Copy the 00:48:708 (1) and paste it at 00:50:208 and flip it over the y-axis. Then add a circle at 00:51:279. Shorten the 00:51:494 (1) by one tick and move it to 00:51:708. Then instead of the slider 00:52:779 (2) we could have two circles. I think the two circles play better with the vocals at that point, and I really didn't like that blanket with the 1 and 2 for some reason. I don't want to ruin that blanket sliders pattern, and rhythm of your suggestion is the same, so I prefer to keep it as I did.
- 01:04:994 (4,1) - Maybe a bit nazi, but these blankets aren't consistent with nicer blankets such as the one at 01:18:708 (4,1) or 00:44:851 (1,2). But, perhaps that was on purpose, so I won't go to much into it. Yeah, it's on purpose.
[Insane]
- 00:58:351 (1) - Hm, maybe add a finish on the end of this slider to coincide with the one in the music. You have one there in the insane diff. Yeah, I forget it, added.
Map Design/RhythmHitsounds
- 00:34:136 (4) - This slider seems a bit out of place to me in this style. Can I suggest a different placement? Sure, seems good.
I just copied the 00:32:851 (1) and flipped it over for the 4. I also rotated the 3 a bit.
Or maybe this:
That's pretty similar to what you have I guess, I just don't like the slider you have now, it would flow better as this curved slider.- 00:37:994 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure I like this placement very much. Maybe try something like this: Ok, tried something like that.
- 01:00:065 (2,3) - I was sort of confused that these sliders aren't following symmetry here. Maybe try this: Ok.
- Seems fine.
Thanks for modding!popner wrote:
Just suggestions:
[Generall]
Offset +24 IMO but you'd be better to find some other timing. (I'm sure that current is fast.) Asked a BAT, and +16 would be ok, so changed it.
[Easy]
Fine! Nothing need to say about this diff.
[Insane]
00:19:244 (1) - the spinner is a little short: Although auto can achieve 2000 score, I think a longer spinner is better since the song is not fast. Maybe you can delete previous note(00:19:136 (5)) and start the spinner here. So this spinner will not cause so much difficulty: Okay, I guess seems good.
00:20:422 (1) - miss a NC? That's on purpose.
01:07:565 (6,7) - the vocal have a slight change at 01:07:779, so the stack here is a little weird while playing Nah, it's ok imo.
01:13:565 (4,5,1) - the jump and distance change follows stack is not so good in flow. I know you use 01:13:994 (1,3) to follow the music, but in privous part you mainly follows the vocal, so I think there should be a long slider (1/1 slider) start at 01:13:779 (1). The rhythm can be this: I think it's not a problem to follow music here instead vocal, seems good like I did.
For the pattern, maybe you can stack 01:14:422 (2) on head of 01:14:851 (4), like this:
01:15:708 (1,2) - maybe this two slider is too much curved? During test play, I found that the symmetric sliders is not so smooth. Also I changed the curve direction so (2) is different from 01:16:565 (3). Okay, did it less curved.
01:24:708 (2) - why not stack it under end of 01:23:208 (1), like 01:23:851 (2)? I think that is funny. No, because it would cause an overlap with the slider that comes next, and that seems bad.
01:27:494 (1) - this note is close to previous spinner end, but far from playfield center. It is generally ok, but if someone is not good at spinner, he need to stop spin in advance. Remember this is an Insane diff, so I think good players wouldn't have any problem with this.
I'm not looking for Taiko diffs at the moment, if I need one I'll poke you ^^kg2161012 wrote:
Hello~
Can I make diff for Taiko Oni and Muzukashii?
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Thank you Rika <3, will get some mods for Normal and Hard diff and then I'll call youKawayi Rika wrote:
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions[General]
- Use japanese artist : 堀江由衣 Sure, thanks.
[Insane]
- AR+1 is better,
i don't understand why you use 7,that's will be hard to read some partterns. Lol, this should be 8, I have no idea what happened here xD, fixed.- 00:20:438 (1) - Add new combo. Done.
- 00:32:010 (3,4) - Change same spacing likes 00:31:152 (1,2). Tried something related here, but it should be fine anyways.
- 00:50:438 (2) - Stack on 00:48:724 (1) - start point,looks better. Ok.
- 00:52:367 (4) - I would say stack on 00:51:724 (1) flow is better. This is already stacked there o.o
- 01:14:652 (2) - Why not stack on 01:14:867 (3) - end point? Mistake, fixed.
- 01:23:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - please don't spam new combo to here,looks confused. Ok.
[Easy]
- 01:27:724 - Add whistle to here,it's really fits with piano. Yeah, sounds nice.
Great, thank you Melo!!Melophobia wrote:
you might want to use japanese title as well; it's "バニラソルト". no kds please :3