1. Easy (3.24 stars, 102 notes)
2. Fumika's Hard (4.84 stars, 215 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 244 notes)
4. Normal (4.45 stars, 185 notes)

ReySHeL wrote:

good song!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

popner wrote:

ReySHeL wrote:

good song!
can i make a taiko maps? >w<

Sorry, but I don't want to add taiko in this mepset ;_;

1. You don't use Distance Snap, but you need to be aware of it a little more.
   The players don't have "pixel eyes", but it has a little discomfort.
2. I have not mention to hitsound, but it needs more work. It would be better to have a little regularity. and to add your favorite sound on it.
3. Set video to this diff.
   
   
4. 00:00:803 (1) - 1 grid left
5. 00:25:700 (5) - You put whistle on slider's body, it add a different sound to the slider. If you don't have any reason, please remove it.
6. 00:49:782 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 01:06:517 (2,3) - whistle + clap sound is doesn't fit to this diff, in my opinion. You can use more clearly hitsound.

1. 00:07:741 (5) - change to clap
2. 00:07:945 (6) - change to clap on the slider's head and remove clap on the slider's end.
3. 00:25:700 (5) - You don't put whistle here, is it intentional?
4. 00:56:109 (1) - change to finish, if you don't hate finish sound.
5. 00:57:741 (6) - add finish to the slider's head.
6. 00:59:374 (1) - ^
7. 01:12:435 (1) - ^

1. 00:08:149 (8) - change to whistle
2. 00:14:476 (8) - add whistle to the slider's end
3. 00:14:884 (9,10,11) - you use whistle to (10), but 00:19:782 (3,4,5) -, you use whistle to (3). If you don't have a reason, I recommend try to unify.
4. 00:56:109 (1) - change to finish on the slider's head, if you don't hate finish sound.
5. 00:57:741 (6) - add finish to the slider's head.
6. 00:59:374 (1) - ^
7. 01:12:435 (1) - ^

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. Clear.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:33:251 (5) - 觉得移到x:508 y:104听起来舒服多了 正好在钢琴音的结尾，强调下downbeat.
   2. 00:37:537 (2) - curve方向改成向左的吧
   3. 00:55:088 (3) - why.? such unfair for widescreen players !!
      ass you see

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:24:680 (2) - 结尾要不要clap

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:43:660 (2,3,4) - seriously?..try this :3
      so hard for a normal for now.

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 这里一些相同的长slider音效建议同insane, 这里就不废话了占版面.~ 喔对了，还有同样的finish建议lol
   2. 01:21:007 (6) - 这理当也放个clap..

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:45:598 - i'd prefer to add a circle between (9,10) since the bgm is ready for the switch imo, it will be much funnier to play even though it's a hard diff.. not such difficult.
   2. 01:10:802 (6) - make the slider cover (5)'s tail better? just move it to x:396 y:192 and then move the next circle to x:196 y:260 for spacing balance.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:17:333 (3) - reduce some volume of this finish hitsound plz~ i know your idea however i feel it should not be such strong for a non-down beat here.. 50~60% is much better imo. :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:21:415 (3,4) - 这里做对称吧。
      like this

      
   2. 01:24:680 (4,5,6) - 推荐这个节奏，现在的在(6)这里有个downbeat但是完全体现不出来.. 虽然听上去还ok..
      w

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:07:129 (1) - 这里clap听着很别扭。。要么开头clap换成whistle，要么结尾也加个clap.. 不过还是更倾向前者。~因为这里感觉还没到需要加强节拍的地方，直接clap反而觉得有点sudden.
   2. 00:08:762 (1) - 我觉得整谱的这种长滑条(用来体现bgm长音的)都应该开头加点什么(个人倾向于现在的whistle)，什么都没有的话让我感觉不出长滑条应有的“气势”啊~~ :p 下面的都略了.
   3. 00:59:374 (1) - 这里slider开头可以考虑加个50~60%的finish(或者别的什么你喜欢的)，不然和这kiai burst 不搭啊ww
   4. 01:05:905 (1) - 如果00:59:374 (1)加了finish，这里也理当加一个吧~

Strawberry wrote:

SPOILER

[ General]
　

1. Clear.

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:33:251 (5) - 觉得移到x:508 y:104听起来舒服多了 正好在钢琴音的结尾，强调下downbeat. 没看懂，貌似这里是(1)啊
   2. 00:37:537 (2) - curve方向改成向左的吧 为了对称。。
   3. 00:55:088 (3) - why.? such unfair for widescreen players !! 这个应该是可以的，因为只要锚点在格内就没问题(最大圈下刚好碰边)，不过为了避免出问题还是改了
      ass you see

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:24:680 (2) - 结尾要不要clap ok

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:43:660 (2,3,4) - seriously?..try this :3
      so hard for a normal for now.

      
      changed in my way
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 这里一些相同的长slider音效建议同insane, 这里就不废话了占版面.~ 喔对了，还有同样的finish建议lol
   2. 01:21:007 (6) - 这理当也放个clap.. ok

　
　
[ Insane]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:21:415 (3,4) - 这里做对称吧。 虽然觉得可以对称，不过这样调了下感觉影响flow了，而且AR8下这个对称打图的时候感觉觉不出来。。
      like this

      
   2. 01:24:680 (4,5,6) - 推荐这个节奏，现在的在(6)这里有个downbeat但是完全体现不出来.. 虽然听上去还ok.. 貌似和现在一样啊。。
      w

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:07:129 (1) - 这里clap听着很别扭。。要么开头clap换成whistle，要么结尾也加个clap.. 不过还是更倾向前者。~因为这里感觉还没到需要加强节拍的地方，直接clap反而觉得有点sudden. 加了几条绿线调音量
   2. 00:08:762 (1) - 我觉得整谱的这种长滑条(用来体现bgm长音的)都应该开头加点什么(个人倾向于现在的whistle)，什么都没有的话让我感觉不出长滑条应有的“气势”啊~~ :p 下面的都略了. 考虑到一致性还是不加了
   3. 00:59:374 (1) - 这里slider开头可以考虑加个50~60%的finish(或者别的什么你喜欢的)，不然和这kiai burst 不搭啊ww done
   4. 01:05:905 (1) - 如果00:59:374 (1)加了finish，这里也理当加一个吧~ ^

　
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that's all i think. go go rank

Kawayi Rika wrote:

SPOILER

Hi ~ popner ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Normal]

1. 00:34:272 (2) - Change a circle on 00:34:272,sound much better. ok
2. 01:25:088 - Add clap to here,sound much better. fixed.. consistent with Insane now
3. 01:25:496 - ^ I add finish on it (like fumika's diff, and do same thing to my Insane)

[Easy]

1. 00:24:476 (2) - Flip this slider,would be folw better,like this. ok, also change 00:26:721 (1) for symmetry.
   
   Screenshot

   
2. 00:36:721 (1,2) - Same as above. ^
3. 00:33:047 (5) - Make a symmetry with 00:30:598 (2) - end point. fixed

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice map and song ~ nothing many issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~ m4m

very late.. sorry

[Fumika]

●01:10:802 (6) - Change the shape a little?　http://puu.sh/1PVgW Done
●This diff is a really good map :3 Thanks !

Overall good map. But, I think you had better to add more new combo.(Insane diff) good luck~ :3

Darksonic wrote:

Hello, M4M here.

Fumika's Hard:

00:11:211 (7,8,1,2,3): Try this rhythm instead?, sounds much better.
00:19:986 (7): This repeat shouldn't be here since it's not following anything on the music, so try to remove it then move next note to x:196 y:232, this way you will fix spacing.
00:32:231 (7,8): Why jump here?, feels so random. Add NC
00:36:313 (7,1): ^ Because of vocal.
00:42:435 (1): Remove NC and add it on the next note? Nope, Follow the vocal
01:07:537 (5): NC here, fits good with vocal, and with the spacing change too. Done

Well, that's it for me, please consider to add some Finishes in your diffs as Fumika did, they sound really good at some places and you almost didn't add them.

Good luck!

Strawberry wrote:

[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:45:598 - i'd prefer to add a circle between (9,10) since the bgm is ready for the switch imo, it will be much funnier to play even though it's a hard diff.. not such difficult. Nah...Nope
   2. 01:10:802 (6) - make the slider cover (5)'s tail better? just move it to x:396 y:192 and then move the next circle to x:196 y:260 for spacing balance. Done in Gamu's mod.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:17:333 (3) - reduce some volume of this finish hitsound plz~ i know your idea however i feel it should not be such strong for a non-down beat here.. 50~60% is much better imo. :3 Done

　
that's all i think. go go rank

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ popner ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Fumika's Hard]

1. 01:13:047 (2) - Try ctrl+g,flow much better. Done !

OK ~ That's all ~ Nice map and song ~ nothing many issue ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~