Kurai wrote:

[General]

1. Combo colour 1 blends with the BG, it may become annoying or confusing sometimes. For example in Hard :
   00:20:768 (2,3) - it is hard to notice there is a circle stacked on the slider at first sight.
   Just make it lighter so it doesn't blend maybe. Or just change the colour. made it lighter!
2. I don't like the difficulty settings spread, it isn't consistent. Imo something like OD/HPdrain 3 in Easy, 5 in Normal, 7 in hard and 88 in Insane would fit better. uh, changed in Normal, now : 2.2/4.4/6.6/8.7 (cuz i'm against od8 you know :S)

[Easy]

1. 00:28:826 (1) - imo this note is too close from the bottom border. For aesthetic purposes, I would rotate 00:28:826 (1,2,3,4) 6 degrees clockwise.
2. As this difficulty has been designed for very beginners I would increase the overall hitsound volume by 15~20% alright
   There only are few notes, mainly 1/1; 2/1 and over. It would be easier for the player to understand the mechanic of the game if the hitsounds are clearly audible. At the moment they blend with the music which may feel strange for novices. done

[Hard]

1. 01:10:997 (3) - Not symmetrical enough, it actually breaks the feeling of playing a good looking map :/ fixed!

[Insane]

1. 00:26:768 (3,4,5,6,7) - This stream is going upward and for some reasons it doesn't play correctly. I mean, when I play it it feels awkward. I don't know how to express this sensation with words, it simply doesn't fit to me, like it doesn't flow correctly. Something going downward actually feels better to me. uh, i tried another patterns, but want to save this
2. 01:17:168 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the stack should start with (1) but with (2). Something like this maybe ? http://puu.sh/1JAaA In my opinion it fits the music better. okay!
3. 01:49:397 (1,2,1) - It is a bad idea to have 1/4 just after the slowdown. Some people may think they are 1/2 because of the slowdown. "oh this slider is slower, so are the following notes 1/2 ?" or something like this. It actually disturbed me the first time I tested it. Maybe just remove (2) ? there is no actual need in 1/4 here anyway. It even emphasize the slowdown more imo. removed (2)

Nice map (and song choice). Beautiful sliders, nice flow, awesome hitsounding. Yeah this is a great map, just some little suggestions. All is up to you (except the combo colour thing ).

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IceBeam wrote:

10$ paypal and I'll rank.

IceBeam wrote:

10$ paypal and I'll rank.

Philippines wrote:

[Easy]
00:56:254 (1) - WHAT IS THIS!?! So late ._____.