General00:00:133 - I don't see a reason to have a green line in the same place as a red line in any difficulty except Insane.
EasyYou did a good job holding back on this difficulty. Map could have easily been overmapped.
00:33:848 (3) - Should be at x 332.
00:32:499 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - IMO this plays weird to me. It's a strange case, because I feel it is easier to hit if each segment was just sliders instead of doing note slider, gap, note slider gap. The beat sounds fragmented to me and that makes it less intuitive. I'm not entirely sure whether it should be changed or not. Personally I would have either made the beat simpler or more complex. the more complex version sounds better, but it resembles more like a normal. It's probably best to keep your current design, but you could make it nicer looking. The straight lines are a eyesore. Take a look at this pattern I came up with.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/50772100:50:706 (3,1) - End of 3 is higher than 1. It would be better if they were even.
00:59:472 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this alignment. Does it look alright to you?
01:05:540 (2) - Move last point to x 104 y 280? Albeit a small spacing difference that can be corrected, this seems to be a better entry into the curve.
01:11:609 (3,4,5) - Too far to the right of 2? Maybe the curve could be touched up as well. What do you think?
01:24:084 - Add note? It will make the off beat spinners feel more natural IMO.
01:29:141 (1) - One unit to the right? Move the rest of the notes accordingly.
Normal00:08:899 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Spacing jumps around 0.99-1.01.
00:13:282 - Weird that you skipped over this sound. Personally I would have added a note here. Just my opinion.
00:18:339 (3,4,1,2,3) - Spacing jumps around again
00:32:499 (1,2) - Unsure if these patterns should be abstract. Well I guess it's fine, but you could probably make the second slider better. Something that would be more fitting for a mirrored pattern. (My note addition suggestions below don't work perfectly with the current design)
00:34:522 - Add note?
00:37:219 - ^
00:44:637 (3) - That red point, hmm. Maybe it should be a regular slider. I guess it looks alright but it's not like the other sliders.
00:55:426 (3) - add repeat?
01:07:563 (1,2) - Spacing?
01:15:318 (3,1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing is fluctuating through here. It should be more consistent. 01:16:329 (2,3) - spacing here doesn't necessarily have to be fixed, but anything unintentional you should clean up.
01:21:050 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Make this spacing perfect.
01:29:141 (1,2,3) - ^
HardNice relaxing difficulty.
00:12:944 (5,6) - Nazi Exactly 1.2
01:13:464 (2,3) - Put more in the center of 1?
01:26:444 (1,2,3) - 1.2?
01:36:559 - Whistle sounds weird after not having hitsounds for the part before it.
InsaneI looked at it and it looks fine to me. It's hard to judge flow with low volume soft hitsounds. I couldn't properly mod it, but for the most part it looked fun and playable.
ConclusionGood mapset. Probably still some flaws I missed, but this is close to bubble worthy.