Cool, i'll add it in right now :-3
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Okay.... better to add in the suggestions now to save time.
[Rustastic Stars]
00:22:05 (1) - The placement of this spinner feels kinda odd. I don't think making the spinner shorter would help either as it would be too short. Same for those like this too....
00:42:96 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern was really hard to read and to keep up with. I couldn't tell how and where to hit the notes.
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make sure the notes are set up right for the stream around here. if its too far apart, it would make it stressful to aim at. Same for those like this as well.
The notes are kinda all over the place in a unstable feeling. I know its still under work though but just wanted to point these out. (' ._.) But still, good job for putting in the effort.
[Azure's S.t.a.r.S]
01:49:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stack here would be questionable since the beats are not in the same timing altogether in one place.
02:38:76 (1,2) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
02:40:69 (2,4) - Slightly uneven link
02:52:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,
1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Basicly the whole section, but for this one the beats don't follow up too well with the next one. I know you're trying to map the beats carefully on this part but there are certain beats you don't need to strictly follow. The main concern for this part is to control the flow of the beats around this part. If it can get smoothed out a bit better, then it should be less trouble.
03:41:15 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Between here, you have to be really careful with as there is a slight off flow beat in 1/8's which throws the purpose of the stream off.
There are some other things, but from a similar error like more notes slightly uneven under slider ends and such. But the map is not as bad as before though. Keep up the good effort :-3
These are just suggestions btw.
[Rustastic Stars]
00:22:05 (1) - The placement of this spinner feels kinda odd. I don't think making the spinner shorter would help either as it would be too short. Same for those like this too....
00:42:96 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern was really hard to read and to keep up with. I couldn't tell how and where to hit the notes.
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make sure the notes are set up right for the stream around here. if its too far apart, it would make it stressful to aim at. Same for those like this as well.
The notes are kinda all over the place in a unstable feeling. I know its still under work though but just wanted to point these out. (' ._.) But still, good job for putting in the effort.
[Azure's S.t.a.r.S]
01:49:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stack here would be questionable since the beats are not in the same timing altogether in one place.
02:38:76 (1,2) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
02:40:69 (2,4) - Slightly uneven link
02:52:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,
1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Basicly the whole section, but for this one the beats don't follow up too well with the next one. I know you're trying to map the beats carefully on this part but there are certain beats you don't need to strictly follow. The main concern for this part is to control the flow of the beats around this part. If it can get smoothed out a bit better, then it should be less trouble.
03:41:15 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Between here, you have to be really careful with as there is a slight off flow beat in 1/8's which throws the purpose of the stream off.
There are some other things, but from a similar error like more notes slightly uneven under slider ends and such. But the map is not as bad as before though. Keep up the good effort :-3
These are just suggestions btw.
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osuwhymeman wrote:
Okay.... better to add in the suggestions now to save time.
[Azure's S.t.a.r.S]
01:49:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stack here would be questionable since the beats are not in the same timing altogether in one place. Moved the 4 so that the beats are spaced appropriately
02:38:76 (1,2) - Slightly uneven under the slider end. Changed, I think
02:40:69 (2,4) - Slightly uneven link Changed
02:52:51 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,
1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Basicly the whole section, but for this one the beats don't follow up too well with the next one. I know you're trying to map the beats carefully on this part but there are certain beats you don't need to strictly follow. The main concern for this part is to control the flow of the beats around this part. If it can get smoothed out a bit better, then it should be less trouble. I completely reworked this section
03:41:15 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Between here, you have to be really careful with as there is a slight off flow beat in 1/8's which throws the purpose of the stream off. not sure what you mean; I'll try and fix this later
There are some other things, but from a similar error like more notes slightly uneven under slider ends and such. But the map is not as bad as before though. Keep up the good effort :-3
These are just suggestions btw.
IMO if the notes are spaced correctly then it works out well. I noticed that your style is much different then mine and I can understand that. If you want though I will re-space everything.whymeman wrote:
Okay.... better to add in the suggestions now to save time.
[Rustastic Stars]
00:22:05 (1) - The placement of this spinner feels kinda odd. I don't think making the spinner shorter would help either as it would be too short. Same for those like this too.... I agree that it can't be shorter and because of that I made it that long in the first place. But I feel it sounds just fine the way it is, will take note if someone else mentions it though
00:42:96 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern was really hard to read and to keep up with. I couldn't tell how and where to hit the notes. Fixed, I was iffy about it too.
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make sure the notes are set up right for the stream around here. if its too far apart, it would make it stressful to aim at. Same for those like this as well. For this combo, I just took out the 1/4s, but later ones I made the spacing in half.
The notes are kinda all over the place in a unstable feeling. I know its still under work though but just wanted to point these out. (' ._.) But still, good job for putting in the effort.
Anyway, here's the update.
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Rustastic Stars].osu
Topic Starter
Well, not trying to force my style on you, but just saying you want to make sure the layout is reasonable.rust45 wrote:
IMO if the notes are spaced correctly then it works out well. I noticed that your style is much different then mine and I can understand that. If you want though I will re-space everything.whymeman wrote:
Okay.... better to add in the suggestions now to save time.
[Rustastic Stars]
00:22:05 (1) - The placement of this spinner feels kinda odd. I don't think making the spinner shorter would help either as it would be too short. Same for those like this too.... I agree that it can't be shorter and because of that I made it that long in the first place. But I feel it sounds just fine the way it is, will take note if someone else mentions it though
00:42:96 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern was really hard to read and to keep up with. I couldn't tell how and where to hit the notes. Fixed, I was iffy about it too.
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Make sure the notes are set up right for the stream around here. if its too far apart, it would make it stressful to aim at. Same for those like this as well. For this combo, I just took out the 1/4s, but later ones I made the spacing in half.
The notes are kinda all over the place in a unstable feeling. I know its still under work though but just wanted to point these out. (' ._.) But still, good job for putting in the effort.
Anyway, here's the update.
Sweet stars:
Tasty Stars:
Rustastic Stars:
Azure's S.t.a.r.S
S.t.a.r.S
Nice map. Ranking is an option if you lower the difficulty settings in Azure's S.t.a.r.S and S.t.a.r.S to bring them under 20 mil. The only thing I am worried about is if the maps are difficult enough to justify 20 mil.
Have a sweet star.
SPOILER
Normal mod:
01:13:87 (3) - I don't like how the repeat does not follow something
01:28:42 (3) - ^
02:28:42 (4) - ^
Combo mod:
01:18:87 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:28:42 (1)?
02:33:42 (4) - ^
01:13:87 (3) - I don't like how the repeat does not follow something
01:28:42 (3) - ^
02:28:42 (4) - ^
Combo mod:
01:18:87 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:28:42 (1)?
02:33:42 (4) - ^
Tasty Stars:
SPOILER
Combo mod:
01:18:87 (7) - same as Sweet stars
02:33:42 (5) - ^
01:18:87 (7) - same as Sweet stars
02:33:42 (5) - ^
Rustastic Stars:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:44:55 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - both of these combos were hard to read and did not look very good
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really don't like how this looks either, I would advise you make this into a nice looking star since that is what you seem to be aiming for
01:26:14 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - another item I don't like aesthetically and is slightly difficult to read
01:33:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
I have very similar complaints about many of the combos in the rest of the map, so it is your choice to change it
02:26:37 (3) - distance snap
Nazi mod:
01:19:33 (4) - made this look nicer and not have such rough edges or only add one corner
This diff feels like notes placed randomly with high distance snap. Also the low point score does not motivate me to play this map.
00:44:55 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - both of these combos were hard to read and did not look very good
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I really don't like how this looks either, I would advise you make this into a nice looking star since that is what you seem to be aiming for
01:26:14 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - another item I don't like aesthetically and is slightly difficult to read
01:33:87 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
I have very similar complaints about many of the combos in the rest of the map, so it is your choice to change it
02:26:37 (3) - distance snap
Nazi mod:
01:19:33 (4) - made this look nicer and not have such rough edges or only add one corner
This diff feels like notes placed randomly with high distance snap. Also the low point score does not motivate me to play this map.
Azure's S.t.a.r.S
SPOILER
Normal:
01:21:83 (6) - I don't like how 1-5 are so close, but 6 is almost impossible to hit correctyl without something to make it stand out such as a new combo
01:30:92 (7) - it felt unintuitive for this note to be stacked on top of 6 instead of continuing the pattern
02:36:37 (9) - same as 01:21:83 (6)
04:12:96 (9) - the spacing pause before this note throws me off, new combo or use reverse selection on this slider
Combomod:
00:26:14 (7) - new combo?
01:05:92 (5) - new combo?
02:00:46 (5) - ^
01:21:83 (6) - I don't like how 1-5 are so close, but 6 is almost impossible to hit correctyl without something to make it stand out such as a new combo
01:30:92 (7) - it felt unintuitive for this note to be stacked on top of 6 instead of continuing the pattern
02:36:37 (9) - same as 01:21:83 (6)
04:12:96 (9) - the spacing pause before this note throws me off, new combo or use reverse selection on this slider
Combomod:
00:26:14 (7) - new combo?
01:05:92 (5) - new combo?
02:00:46 (5) - ^
S.t.a.r.S
SPOILER
Normal mod:
03:45:12 (6,7) - spacing, compare to 12
Combo mod:
01:19:33 (10) - new combo?
02:33:87 (8) - ^
03:45:12 (6,7) - spacing, compare to 12
Combo mod:
01:19:33 (10) - new combo?
02:33:87 (8) - ^
Nice map. Ranking is an option if you lower the difficulty settings in Azure's S.t.a.r.S and S.t.a.r.S to bring them under 20 mil. The only thing I am worried about is if the maps are difficult enough to justify 20 mil.
Have a sweet star.
Topic Starter
The combos should be fine on my difficultes. I usually set them based on the lyrics + flow of the beats.
I did fix up the star shape set of notes in [S.t.a.r.S] though. And for the score thing, we'll make sure to look into that.
I did fix up the star shape set of notes in [S.t.a.r.S] though. And for the score thing, we'll make sure to look into that.
Topic Starter
OKay..... had an unexpeted flop in [S.t.a.r.S] with the star formation......
i'll make sure to look into it tomorrow.
i'll make sure to look into it tomorrow.
Overall
02:12:968 -
Sweet Stars
00:40:01 (6) - May be naziing but . . . . this isn't spaced
00:50:92 (6) - ^
01:25:46 (4) - ^
Tasty Stars
01:16:37 (5,6) - check these out, make sure they are spaced correct, I might be wrong, just check em, make sure
01:26:60 (3,4,5,1) - ^
02:22:96 (3,4,5,6) - idk, something wrong with these kinds of notes, check if u know what I'm sayin
Rustastic Stars
00:15:69 (4) - new combo
00:28:42 (1,2,3,4) - these are not aligned straight at each corner, also add new combo to all of em, even 5
01:13:42 (3) - new combo, because 4 is a big jump
Fix all ur Breaks dude, and uhhh, wow this diff looks tough to play
Azure's S.t.a.r.S
00:24:55 (3) - weird spacing
00:26:37 (8) - weird spacing
well score is high, I just noticed this, didn't check other diffs, anyways if this is going for approved, that's fine then
S.t.a.r.S
well other then the Insaneness, this one is pretty well done imo, just the score too high thingy, I wasn't aware what this map was aiming for, most likely Approved by the looks of it, anyways
*Star
P.S. I'd Hit that
02:12:968 -
Sweet Stars
00:40:01 (6) - May be naziing but . . . . this isn't spaced
00:50:92 (6) - ^
01:25:46 (4) - ^
Tasty Stars
01:16:37 (5,6) - check these out, make sure they are spaced correct, I might be wrong, just check em, make sure
01:26:60 (3,4,5,1) - ^
02:22:96 (3,4,5,6) - idk, something wrong with these kinds of notes, check if u know what I'm sayin
Rustastic Stars
00:15:69 (4) - new combo
00:28:42 (1,2,3,4) - these are not aligned straight at each corner, also add new combo to all of em, even 5
01:13:42 (3) - new combo, because 4 is a big jump
Fix all ur Breaks dude, and uhhh, wow this diff looks tough to play
Azure's S.t.a.r.S
00:24:55 (3) - weird spacing
00:26:37 (8) - weird spacing
well score is high, I just noticed this, didn't check other diffs, anyways if this is going for approved, that's fine then
S.t.a.r.S
well other then the Insaneness, this one is pretty well done imo, just the score too high thingy, I wasn't aware what this map was aiming for, most likely Approved by the looks of it, anyways
*Star
P.S. I'd Hit that
Topic Starter
EEeee wrote:
Overall
02:12:968 -
Sweet Stars
00:40:01 (6) - May be naziing but . . . . this isn't spaced
00:50:92 (6) - ^
01:25:46 (4) - ^ (All checked and fixed. Curse you again distance snap...)
Tasty Stars
01:16:37 (5,6) - check these out, make sure they are spaced correct, I might be wrong, just check em, make sure
01:26:60 (3,4,5,1) - ^ (These two are okay. I double checked them.)
02:22:96 (3,4,5,6) - idk, something wrong with these kinds of notes, check if u know what I'm sayin (Ah, I see. The change of pace with the notes causing some confusion with the fact that it is part of the combo. I'll make sure this is fixed.)
S.t.a.r.S
well other then the Insaneness, this one is pretty well done imo, just the score too high thingy, I wasn't aware what this map was aiming for, most likely Approved by the looks of it, anyways (I know the score is quite high and this map would most likely be better going for approved since its way past the recommended ranking score limit.)
*Star
P.S. I'd Hit that (Lolz)
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
S.t.a.r.S:
01:53:64 (2,3) - This'll prob confuse players.. map it in order, swap 2 and 3 since 5,6,7 are lined up fine (Acually, I decide to remove (3) since it was a "forced" note that ruins the flow.)
02:35:01 (2,3,4,5) - Reserve so 2 is ontop of 1 and goes 2,3,4 (for the left) and 5 in the middle (Hmm.... that could work.)
As of now I don't see why it can't go for ranked it's hard sure but...
Ahh nvm But I think if you gonna go all out why not put the lyrics at the bottom with SB?
If you want I'll hunt for them :3
Ahh nvm But I think if you gonna go all out why not put the lyrics at the bottom with SB?
If you want I'll hunt for them :3
Topic Starter
Hmm.... That would be cool. Though I just hope it doesn't get blocked by hitnotes and that I could fit it into the file size...
Topic Starter
Just about ready for pending then.....
Here's my updated difficulty
Changes:
*Fixes to the storyboard
*A few hitsound changes
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Changes:
*Fixes to the storyboard
*A few hitsound changes
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Hi whymeman ! Don't be down ! Here's a kudosu star for ya to encourage you. =D It's a very nice song and map, and yea, I really like it. *You're my star~~*
General : There's some stuff on video. Yea, some stuff. Maybe you should add a notice warning that there are some stuff there.
TASTY STARS
00:44:33 (10) - A clap amongst the sea of no claps sound really weird to me. If you wanna make that clap-at-the-end-of-every-lyric pattern, claps should be on 00:47:96 (11). Also consider add notes with clap at 00:40:694, 00:51:603. If you want to be consistent, you can also add notes with normal hitsound at 2 tick earlier to these 2 places too. =D
Extra point : I realize you do that on here, 01:55:01 (11,12) , so I think you should fix above for consistency.
00:48:194, 00:48:648 - This is just purely suggestion, because this part that doesn't have notes with the lyric is kinda weird and contradictory with earlier parts.
00:49:78 (5) - This clap is very random. XD
01:55:23 (12) - Clap ?
02:02:51 (10) - ^
02:05:921 - 2 notes here ?
AZURE STARS
00:52:05 (2,3) - I suggest changing these 2 sliders' type to linear type for a better cosmetic effect. XD (Notice that just change TYPE, not the slider itself)
00:52:05 (2,3) - Is out of grid a problem ?
02:33:87 (8) - Change to linear slider type ?
03:49:33 (1) - I think this spinner breaks the feelings of stream, but again, there's this score limit thingy D:
04:04:78 (1) - ^
04:08:194 - Add a note ?
And as always, I suki those cute star sliders. <3 :3
STARS
03:42:975 - Well done.
Not going to touch SWEET STARS since I believed I modded that already last time. XD
You also have support from this as well :
General : There's some stuff on video. Yea, some stuff. Maybe you should add a notice warning that there are some stuff there.
TASTY STARS
00:44:33 (10) - A clap amongst the sea of no claps sound really weird to me. If you wanna make that clap-at-the-end-of-every-lyric pattern, claps should be on 00:47:96 (11). Also consider add notes with clap at 00:40:694, 00:51:603. If you want to be consistent, you can also add notes with normal hitsound at 2 tick earlier to these 2 places too. =D
Extra point : I realize you do that on here, 01:55:01 (11,12) , so I think you should fix above for consistency.
00:48:194, 00:48:648 - This is just purely suggestion, because this part that doesn't have notes with the lyric is kinda weird and contradictory with earlier parts.
00:49:78 (5) - This clap is very random. XD
01:55:23 (12) - Clap ?
02:02:51 (10) - ^
02:05:921 - 2 notes here ?
AZURE STARS
00:52:05 (2,3) - I suggest changing these 2 sliders' type to linear type for a better cosmetic effect. XD (Notice that just change TYPE, not the slider itself)
00:52:05 (2,3) - Is out of grid a problem ?
02:33:87 (8) - Change to linear slider type ?
04:04:78 (1) - ^
04:08:194 - Add a note ?
And as always, I suki those cute star sliders. <3 :3
STARS
03:42:975 - Well done.
Not going to touch SWEET STARS since I believed I modded that already last time. XD
SPOILER
Well, my opinion on how to make the song not exceeding the score limit. (Stars)
00:37:285 - Start the map here.
03:27:681 - Remove this part ? But then the break would be too long. D:
I kinda understand your dilemma and feelings. *gives cookies*
*sigh* I hope these part won't needed to be cut off though, but... *sigh*
00:37:285 - Start the map here.
03:27:681 - Remove this part ? But then the break would be too long. D:
I kinda understand your dilemma and feelings. *gives cookies*
*sigh* I hope these part won't needed to be cut off though, but... *sigh*
You also have support from this as well :
Topic Starter
alvisto wrote:
Hi whymeman ! Don't be down ! Here's a kudosu star for ya to encourage you. =D It's a very nice song and map, and yea, I really like it. *You're my star~~*
General : There's some stuff on video. Yea, some stuff. Maybe you should add a notice warning that there are some stuff there.
TASTY STARS
00:44:33 (10) - A clap amongst the sea of no claps sound really weird to me. If you wanna make that clap-at-the-end-of-every-lyric pattern, claps should be on 00:47:96 (11). Also consider add notes with clap at 00:40:694, 00:51:603. If you want to be consistent, you can also add notes with normal hitsound at 2 tick earlier to these 2 places too. =D
Extra point : I realize you do that on here, 01:55:01 (11,12) , so I think you should fix above for consistency.
00:48:194, 00:48:648 - This is just purely suggestion, because this part that doesn't have notes with the lyric is kinda weird and contradictory with earlier parts. (I usually use both the lyrics and the flow of the beat when I map a song. This part goes with the beat and partly with the lyrics.)00:49:78 (5) - This clap is very random. XD01:55:23 (12) - Clap ?02:02:51 (10) - ^
02:05:921 - 2 notes here ? (If a cram a note here, it would cause confusion with the slowdown section...)
STARS
03:42:975 - Well done.
Not going to touch SWEET STARS since I believed I modded that already last time. XDSPOILERWell, my opinion on how to make the song not exceeding the score limit. (Stars)
00:37:285 - Start the map here. (Can't.... that would kill the point of the map itself.)
03:27:681 - Remove this part ? But then the break would be too long. D: (Yeah...)
I kinda understand your dilemma and feelings. *gives cookies*
*sigh* I hope these part won't needed to be cut off though, but... *sigh*
You also have support from this as well :
I'll just stick with how [S.t.a.r.S] is for the time being.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Haha! A bouncy map~
Starry! <3
Starry! <3
I strongly urge Azure to map the other 20 secs of the map. Feels very unfit where you previously ended it. :s
modded more in irc..
modded more in irc..
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osualvisto wrote:
Hi whymeman ! Don't be down ! Here's a kudosu star for ya to encourage you. =D It's a very nice song and map, and yea, I really like it. *You're my star~~*
AZURE STARS
00:52:05 (2,3) - I suggest changing these 2 sliders' type to linear type for a better cosmetic effect. XD (Notice that just change TYPE, not the slider itself) Done
00:52:05 (2,3) - Is out of grid a problem ? what do you mean?
02:33:87 (8) - Change to linear slider type ? Done03:49:33 (1) - I think this spinner breaks the feelings of stream, but again, there's this score limit thingy D:Either way, I changed this slightly.
04:04:78 (1) - ^
04:08:194 - Add a note ? done :3
And as always, I suki those cute star sliders. <3 :3
Skin looks beautiful, hitsounds sounded great, timing was spot on to me.
So far as playability issues go, my only concern was with the 01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern on Azure's. I just think it's a bit hard to read. (Though it is true there's a very small spot you can keep your mouse to hit all 6.) I think those 2 'Star Slider' patterns could use a little more star shape to em too. I can't say I was able to play 'S.t.a.r.S' difficulty, so that's about it.
whyme, please don't kudosu this post, lol.
*'star this map' joke goes here*
So far as playability issues go, my only concern was with the 01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) pattern on Azure's. I just think it's a bit hard to read. (Though it is true there's a very small spot you can keep your mouse to hit all 6.) I think those 2 'Star Slider' patterns could use a little more star shape to em too. I can't say I was able to play 'S.t.a.r.S' difficulty, so that's about it.
whyme, please don't kudosu this post, lol.
*'star this map' joke goes here*
SPOILER
I could probably do this SB/lyrics thing and it'd only add about 700kb to file size. I'm a little busy with skinning atm, but feel free to consider it and talk to me about it at some point. You can look at ztrot's Fly Away map to get an idea of what it'd look like, I did that one a few days ago. 2nd time around should be easier too, I'd guess it'd take around 6 hours.whymeman wrote:
Hmm.... That would be cool. Though I just hope it doesn't get blocked by hitnotes and that I could fit it into the file size...
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Thank you for the support 
Also, to anyone having an issue with the fail-background.png: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=17676
Also, to anyone having an issue with the fail-background.png: viewtopic.php?f=5&t=17676
I love the skin on this, all great maps, here are my suggestions, feel free to ignore them:
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Sweet Stars:
00:28:87 – Adding a beat here makes it easier to follow the beat I think.
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This beat is a little hard to follow, there’s nothing wrong with it, but I think the way you mapped it at 01:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5) – was easier to hit.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:41:60 (5) – Add a beat?
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Tasty Stars:
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Same as easy.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – ^
03:51:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:58:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Even though the same type of beat appears in the song at these places it was hardest to follow, again there’s nothing wrong with just difficult to hit at these times.
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Azure’s S.t.a.r.S:
I like this difficulty, even managed to pass it.
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S.t.a.r.S:
I didn’t pass this though, but I watched osu and it seems fine, I recommend:
00:38:42 (4) – Add a clap on the third beat.
00:41:37 (3) – Add a clap on the second beat.
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That's all, great map, star.
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Sweet Stars:
00:28:87 – Adding a beat here makes it easier to follow the beat I think.
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This beat is a little hard to follow, there’s nothing wrong with it, but I think the way you mapped it at 01:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5) – was easier to hit.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:41:60 (5) – Add a beat?
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Tasty Stars:
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Same as easy.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – ^
03:51:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:58:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Even though the same type of beat appears in the song at these places it was hardest to follow, again there’s nothing wrong with just difficult to hit at these times.
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Azure’s S.t.a.r.S:
I like this difficulty, even managed to pass it.
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S.t.a.r.S:
I didn’t pass this though, but I watched osu and it seems fine, I recommend:
00:38:42 (4) – Add a clap on the third beat.
00:41:37 (3) – Add a clap on the second beat.
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That's all, great map, star.
Topic Starter
Shulin wrote:
I love the skin on this, all great maps, here are my suggestions, feel free to ignore them:
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Sweet Stars:
00:28:87 – Adding a beat here makes it easier to follow the beat I think.
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – This beat is a little hard to follow, there’s nothing wrong with it, but I think the way you mapped it at 01:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5) – was easier to hit.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:25:92 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:22:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:41:60 (5) – Add a beat?
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Tasty Stars:
01:07:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Same as easy.
01:15:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – ^
03:51:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:58:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Even though the same type of beat appears in the song at these places it was hardest to follow, again there’s nothing wrong with just difficult to hit at these times.
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S.t.a.r.S:
I didn’t pass this though, but I watched osu and it seems fine, I recommend:
00:38:42 (4) – Add a clap on the third beat.
00:41:37 (3) – Add a clap on the second beat.
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That's all, great map, star.
My mapping style may be confusing but its because I tend to map at both the beats and the lyrics (in this case). But, i'll check into the hitsounds in [S.t.a.r.S] to make sure its in sync. Thanks for checking into the map though.
Offset -10
THIS IS SO LONG
Honestly, I reallllly don't think it would hurt to cut this shorter...
Sweet
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)
Tasty
~
S.T.A.R.S
16M high score, but it's freakin hard so ok
Azure
00:57:28 (10,11) - when this came up I was like "wait, what??" It's pretty easy to mistake 10 for a slider
01:20:01 (5,6,1) - Doesn't flow well from the previous combo
01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - REALLLLLLY MEAN AND NASTY you can't even see 6 coming
01:24:78 (4) - This slider's endpoint backtracks a tiny bit, fix?
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The increasing distances don't really fit imo
01:54:78 (1) - I would move this a bit closer to 6
02:02:05 (1) - ^
02:28:42 (6) - Same star thing
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - RAGE AGAIN
02:54:67 (8,9,10) - Move these ahead 1/4
02:56:26 (4,5,6) - ^, then add a hitcircle where 4 started before
erg, the whole part until the break here could really use some work, it sounds/plays pretty awkward. Try to stick to an intuitive rhythm/beat
03:42:96 (1) - This star isn't as pretty and symmetrical as the other ones ;_;
My only other complaint is that difficulties jump from a hardish-normal to two crazy Insanes; it doesn't have a real "hard" level difficulty, where a large percentage of players fall on.
THIS IS SO LONG
Honestly, I reallllly don't think it would hurt to cut this shorter...
Sweet
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)
Tasty
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S.T.A.R.S
16M high score, but it's freakin hard so ok
Azure
00:57:28 (10,11) - when this came up I was like "wait, what??" It's pretty easy to mistake 10 for a slider
01:20:01 (5,6,1) - Doesn't flow well from the previous combo
01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - REALLLLLLY MEAN AND NASTY you can't even see 6 coming
01:24:78 (4) - This slider's endpoint backtracks a tiny bit, fix?
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The increasing distances don't really fit imo
01:54:78 (1) - I would move this a bit closer to 6
02:02:05 (1) - ^
02:28:42 (6) - Same star thing
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - RAGE AGAIN
02:54:67 (8,9,10) - Move these ahead 1/4
02:56:26 (4,5,6) - ^, then add a hitcircle where 4 started before
erg, the whole part until the break here could really use some work, it sounds/plays pretty awkward. Try to stick to an intuitive rhythm/beat
03:42:96 (1) - This star isn't as pretty and symmetrical as the other ones ;_;
My only other complaint is that difficulties jump from a hardish-normal to two crazy Insanes; it doesn't have a real "hard" level difficulty, where a large percentage of players fall on.
Topic Starter
Sweet
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)
I see.... well, i'll have that fixed in the next update then.
00:42:96 (5) - Repeat sliders like this are tricky for beginners since it isn't obvious how many repeats there are. (I only point this out because it's the easiest difficulty)
I see.... well, i'll have that fixed in the next update then.
vectorized the fruit images
added the score images
fixed up the combobursts and added a cursortrail
^^
Download: Stars ctb.zip
Download: other images.zip
Download: Score images.zip
added the score images
fixed up the combobursts and added a cursortrail
^^
Download: Stars ctb.zip
Download: other images.zip
Download: Score images.zip
Awesome :3
Star
One question: Here is this song from? o.O
Star
One question: Here is this song from? o.O
Topic Starter
Its from the Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann: Kirameki Yoko Box :-3roxkyuubiforever wrote:
Awesome :3
Star
One question: Here is this song from? o.O
Topic Starter
Good question because I never noticed that either.Hillman_Q wrote:
I like it
but why i DL without video，there still with a video
I'll make sure to redo the upload to fix it right now.
Thanks for your mod0_o wrote:
Azure
00:57:28 (10,11) - when this came up I was like "wait, what??" It's pretty easy to mistake 10 for a slider... Kinda, I'll move the slider slightly to make it more readable
01:20:01 (5,6,1) - Doesn't flow well from the previous combo It's there to force players to jump back and do it but anyways. Made a little easier
01:21:14 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - REALLLLLLY MEAN AND NASTY you can't even see 6 coming Brilliant, huh?
01:24:78 (4) - This slider's endpoint backtracks a tiny bit, fix? I think fixed?
01:29:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The increasing distances don't really fit imo Changed
01:54:78 (1) - I would move this a bit closer to 6
02:02:05 (1) - ^ Done and Done
02:28:42 (6) - Same star thing Fixed
02:35:69 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - RAGE AGAIN Brilliant... Just Brilliant
02:54:67 (8,9,10) - Move these ahead 1/4 Done
02:56:26 (4,5,6) - ^, then add a hitcircle where 4 started before See that number in the Total objects section? I wanna keep it
erg, the whole part until the break here could really use some work, it sounds/plays pretty awkward. Try to stick to an intuitive rhythm/beat.
03:42:96 (1) - This star isn't as pretty and symmetrical as the other ones ;_; Changed
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Azure's S.t.a.r.S].osu
Topic Starter
For those trying to download without the video, yes, I already know about the problem now and trying to look into it (; ._.)
I like this song too!!!!!! Can I make a difficulty for it?? Please give me a chance!!!!
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Ex Boy's S.t.a.r.S.].osu
Download: Inoue Marina (Yoko Littner) - Pieces Of Sweet Stars (whymeman) [Ex Boy's S.t.a.r.S.].osu