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yozuca* - Da Capo II ~Asaki Yumemishi Kimi to~ (Short Ver.)

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Jenny
Impatience, indeed.
I will go grave all my maps because people don't fly at me and lick my butt.

  • Also, you might consider mapping more than just 1/6 of your own mapset as the host of it...
Wafu

BrokenArrow wrote:

Don't be so impatient, it was your fault.
It's not his fault.
Topic Starter
Sekai
Her* >.<
Wafu
Sorry messed it.:D
Loctav
Don't be so impatient. I'll throw a mod when I am back at home.
I don't really understand why you want to grave this now just because it doesn't get speed-reranked.
Topic Starter
Sekai
ok nvm that, Changed name and full submited ~
Loctav
As said, I'll mod this. Didnt result in being on a taiko mod. Whatever.

[Homu's Easy]

I don't like this inproper spacing, but I am pretty picky with this. Maybe you can try to resnap some hitobjects with 1,0x distance spacing activated.

01:23:250 (1,2) - this overlap looks very weird and ugly to me. And it looks very inconsistent compared to all the other more proper-spaced sliders.
01:44:540 (3,4,1) - inconsistent spacing. try resnapping.
01:49:379 (5,1,2) - ^

[Bless' Normal]

Also here, the spacing is pretty inconsistent at certain spots. Increase the grid level and try to resnap a few weird and inconsistent looking sliders with 1,20x Distance Snap.

01:07:282 (3,1) - inconsistent spacing. it probably results out of the low grid level. move (1) more away from (3).
01:12:605 (1,2) - ^ move (2) closer to (1)

[Hard]

00:36:798 (1,2) - (nazi) perfect-stack sliderends with 0,0x Distance spacing D:
00:56:879 (2,3,4) - bow the way of (2) and (3) a bit to introduce a better movement to (4)
01:26:395 (3,4) - add a repeat to (3). You leave out the upbeat which sounds VERY weird. Also readjust distance spacing then.

[Miya's Hard]

00:31:234 (4,5) - I'd prefer a simple repeat slider here, for consistency and playability (you did a repeat on 00:33:653 (2) - too)

[Dunskin's Taiko Oni]

00:15:750 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - I'd suggest kd dk ddk [...] here. It somehow sounds well better for me and gives me a better flow because of the gaps between the kats. (3 ticks)
00:23:613 (13) - same reason as above, make this a don?

[Laurier's Insane]

seemed fine to me.
Topic Starter
Sekai
ok fixed everything :3 thanks for modding~
Topic Starter
Sekai
ok Dunskin pm'd me told me to add a clap at 00:23:613 (13) - and he dont need to fix anything else~
Topic Starter
Sekai
orz.......
Topic Starter
Sekai

Sekai-nyan wrote:

orz.......
BrokenArrow
4 posts in a row, this will definitly make your map ranked immediatly!
Dark_Ai
Don't be so smitten of ranked. Remember this and make it better next time!
lolcubes
Oh hi.

[Insane]
*01:37:766 (4) - Would be nice to have a new combo here because of a change in music, that also means remove new combo on 01:38:734 (1).
*01:39:943 (4) - This is readable but if you put a new combo here it looks even better.
*01:48:895 (3) - Uh this plays bad. I can suggest a good alternative. End this slider at 01:49:137 and add a circle at 01:49:258 which is stacked on the slider end. This plays and sounds better.

[Normal]
*OD+1, AR+1. It's really slooooow and OD3 is too low since hard is OD6.
*01:00:992 (2) - I suggest that you create 2 sliders instead of this double repeater. This is quite unintuitive and would possibly lead to a 100 if the person reads it as a single repeater, especially because all single repeaters look like this.
*01:47:443 (3,4) - There is no reason for this to be stacked. It can only lead to confusion. Normal and easy diffs should be pretty clear and having different timings stacked isn't that good (what I mean is that if you stack 1/2 notes, don't stack 1/1). Unstack them and reposition please.

[Easy]
*01:34:621 (2) - This note should not be here. Move it to 01:34:379.

Let the mappers check this mod as well. :)
Laurier

lolcubes wrote:

Oh hi.

[Insane]
*01:37:766 (4) - Would be nice to have a new combo here because of a change in music, that also means remove new combo on 01:38:734 (1). ah I think so. changed .
*01:39:943 (4) - This is readable but if you put a new combo here it looks even better. add NC because spacing was changed*01:48:895 (3) - Uh this plays bad. I can suggest a good alternative. End this slider at 01:49:137 and add a circle at 01:49:258 which is stacked on the slider end. This plays and sounds better. nice idea. change and fix spacing


Let the mappers check this mod as well. :)
SPOILER
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Da Capo II ~Asaki Yumemishi Kimi to~ (Short Ver.)
Artist:yozuca*
Creator:Sekai-nyan
Version:Laurier's Insane
Source:D.C.II ~Da Capo II~
Tags:opening vocal album Eroge visual novel DarkDunskin Laurier Miya Akemi_Homura Bless

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Topic Starter
Sekai
updated :3
Bless
all fixed, thanks mod :P

http://puu.sh/18p5O
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Bless updated Normal diff now >w<
Aurele
Since you changed your name and you have ranked maps with the same -Sekai-, you must add "-Sekai-" on every difficulties' tags.
lolcubes
Lets try this. I added -Sekai- to online tags btw.
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks lolcubes :3
Tsukimi Luna
Gud luck baka Sekai >w</
Garven
[General]
Set your video offset to 1000
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
01:34:863 - End kiai here.

[Easy]
01:37:766 (1) - I'd prefer to have more time after a spinner in a 1.5 star Easy.
01:41:637 (5) - And short repeating sliders out of the equation for the same reasoning.
01:49:379 (5) - ^

[Normal]
00:29:056 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal. I'd give it 2 beats at least at this BPM
01:03:895 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:31:234 (2) - Eew. Do a rhythm like this instead of that overmapped rhythm

00:38:976 (1) - Same thing here
00:46:839 (3) - Delete
00:49:258 (5) - ^
00:52:161 (7) - ^
01:01:718 - Volume cuts out early on the spinner. Sounds weird. I don't even see why the volume is cutting out at all, honestly.
01:06:677 (3) - Delete
01:09:097 (5) - ^
01:11:032 (5) - ^
01:13:573 (1,2) - What are these following in the music?
01:15:387 (7) - Delete
01:17:322 (1) - A really awkward place for a spinner. It would work better to just map through it.
01:22:161 (4) - Eh, there's something there, but having triple 1/4s in a Hard is lame
01:27:484 (3) - Delete
01:37:282 (1) - Forget about your claps here?

[Miya Hard]
I really don't like all the extra 1/4 spam like from the previous map. Otherwise this is pretty nice.

[Laurier]
Same thing here, though I already know what you're going to say. ;p
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Garven fixed almost everything but not about Tick Rate xD
Andrea
Why isn't this reranked yet o.o
Topic Starter
Sekai

Andrea wrote:

Why isn't this reranked yet o.o
i'm waiting for lazy Garven ></ orz he's taking so much time......
Garven
I think he meant "Garven sucks and is slow"

Sorry 'bout that. I suck and I'm slow.

Did a couple more IRC fixes on the Normal.

Rebubbled!
Topic Starter
Sekai
lol i'm a She xD and thanks Garven
Flanster
Good luck with the re-ranking!

also
ew,im such a slider nazi


@Homu's Easy 00:32:927 (1)

:P
lolcubes
Well, honestly that slider doesn't looks half bad. Sure the anchors are off but the shape is quite okay, especially if you look at previous objects. :D

Anyways, I hope noone minds me reRANKing this.
Tsukimi Luna
Congrats on rerank <3 o/ =3=
Aurele
Congratulation Sekai ♥



You shouldn't my friend, mapping is really fun.
Flanster
put banana in tags thnxhue

She's overly emotional and sensitive but thats how it is.Congrats on the re-rank!
For future events like this, keep calm, have a laugh or two, then start working on how to improve the map so it gets re-ranked faster.

Also Gabe, I see you are a Windows XP user.
Topic Starter
Sekai
o.o wow Thanks lolcubes and all of you ><///
Sonnyc
Gratz rerank :)
Darksonic
I told you that you have to be patient, baka.

Congratz ♥
BeatofIke
Patience is key indeed! Anyways, congrats on re-rank!
Kite
congrats on having it reranked
a32
congrats~
Nichiyouki
Congrats again on re-rank, Sekai :3
Aurele

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

put banana in tags thnxhue
Also Gabe, I see you are a Windows XP user.
Ahah no, Im a Windows 7 users but my computer is really slow with the aero skin :p
terametis
congrats, finally~<33
Quilt
congratz again<3
Laurier
yey
Dino99
Gratz~ :)
Topic Starter
Sekai
Thanks Everyone >w</ once again <3
Mythol
Seka<3
Sure

Mythol wrote:

Seka<3
inyan
Milkshake
i thought the mapper has to make at least 2 diffs
like, are you for real
zeroclover

Garven wrote:

I think he meant "Garven sucks and is slow"

Sorry 'bout that. I suck and I'm slow.

Did a couple more IRC fixes on the Normal.

Rebubbled!
Stop saying "you were suck and slow" Garven q_q

i already told you to stop modding at anytime D:< (stalker)
you are not modding machine !! your time is precious ! dont get sick because someone rushing you to mod !!!

#out topic
kanpakyin
I found that the offset was early. I would say 13588 (+15 from current offset). I would like to collect you guys opinion before changing the online offset :p
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