Hi Sekai~
General
Well, overall this is a good mapset. But, the hard diff can be more harder.
Star for now.
See you~
General
- Hmm, i think you should increase your clap volume by 10% or 20%. Current clap volume is too low. Barely hear it >.<
- 00:21:925 (3) - You can improve this slider by makin this slider more rounded like this : http://puu.sh/1zl2p, so it will make this slider blanketed to the next circle properly. After that, copy pasta and ctrl + j + ctrl + h this slider to this slider 00:23:976 (1) - so it will look same. Don't forget to put new combo!
- 00:28:079 (4) - I guess you miss a whistle on this one. Not consistant with your whistle rythim and sounds awkward when i hear.
- 00:36:284 (1) - Hmm, same case with slider shape before. Make this slider more rounded and blanket.
- For kiai time, i suggest you add whistle every 2/1 rythim starting from 01:11:156- until 01:37:823- . The constant rythim of whistle will make the kiai time more interesting to hear. Try it.
- 01:33:207 (5) - It's better to not skip the heavy beat 01:33:720- since it will a bit ruin your rythim and doesn't very good to hear. So, just make this slider a repeatable slider which has a repeat at 01:33:720-
- 01:40:900 (1) - Place a whistle on this slider start. It follow the next whistle perfectly.
- 01:47:053 (4) - Urr, a whistle on this slider end should be clap instead. It really ruin your hitsounds pattern.
- 01:58:848 (1,2,3) - Umm, please improve this slider shape please. It's not blanketed properly again.
- 00:18:848- Lower this timing point volume by 10%. With 30% volume, the finish sounds is still too loud compare to the music which is awkward to hear.
- 00:46:541 (4) - I suggest to add a whistle on this slider start to make your whistle rythim more consistant.
- 01:00:900 (1) - Hmm, since this time is a beginning of lyrical change, i think you can change the whistle on this slider start to finish instead.
- 01:40:643 (5) - To make your rythim on this part more synchronized to the rythim and vocal, i suggest you move this slider to 01:40:900- and then shorten this slider length by 1/2. Then you can add another circle at this time 01:40:643-. Don't forget to add a clap at this time : 01:41:412-
- Nice diff btw~
- Honestly, this difficulty is just like normal+ with small circle. It's just too easy for a hard diff. There is a lot of 1/4 rythim in this music, you can use that to make this diff more harder. And you can make a little jump too to make thing more interesting.
- 00:28:079 (1) - A finish sounds at this slider start really doesn't fit in this time. It's too loud. Just remove it.
- 01:07:566 (3) - Just use soft finish sounds at this one. A normal sounds in the from nowhere is too awkward.
- 00:41:412 (3) - Nazi, but move this slider to 152 176 please to make this slider blanketed properly.
- 01:05:002 (1) - Since you add a finish sounds at this time 01:02:951-, it will be good if you continue the finish sounds at this slider start too.
- 01:58:335 (1) - ^
- 02:02:438 (1) - ^
- Oh yes, please review your combo pattern. I think it's a bit inconsistent.
- 00:27:053 (6) - Same as hard diff, i think a finish sounds is too loud at this time. So, remove the finish sounds from this slider end please.
- 01:28:848 (6) - I think whistle at this slider start is overused. Better to remove it.
- Nothing i can found again. Nice job!
Well, overall this is a good mapset. But, the hard diff can be more harder.
Star for now.
See you~