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Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver.

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Gabi
i love S i R i R u's Pleasant but for the love of god remove half the skin it's making my eyes bleed. don't get me wrong the skin is very pretty and well made, but i CAN'T SEE ANYTHING AT ALL!. anyways ignore what i just said i will just remove the skin elements myself later ;) just for future skinning, please make sure that :

The spinner should be easier to see where the actual big spinning circle is and have a center point (in this case you do have a center point so i don't mind that) and the hitburst is blending in with the skin/combo colors which makes it even more difficult to read.

btw it would be nice if you could also make a custom hp bar ;)

setting that aside and on to the real mod

Please note, i like the map already so these are mostly suggestions

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
im a little worried about your combo colors. you let the vocals stay on the earlier combo for about 1-2 beats somtimes. since this seems to be a pattern, feel free to ignore all my new combo suggestions. i just felt that these needed changing the most.


00:51:91 (5) - New combo
00:52:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:95 (3) - New combo
01:03:35 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:22 (4) - New combo
01:12:20 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:55 (3) - Add new combo
01:44:28 (6) - Add new combo
01:22:78 (1) - make it 2 1/4 shorter.
02:07:17 (1) - make it 2 /14 longer
02:58:85 (3,4,5,6) - this sounds a little strange.
03:04:57 (1,2,3) - ^ (i think it would be better if you stick too 1/2 vocals)

i might come back and mod the other diffs later, but for now

great song/map and great storyboard
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Cyril Scarlet

Gabi wrote:

00:51:91 (5) - New combo Done
00:52:26 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:52:95 (3) - New combo Done
01:03:35 (1) - Remove new combo Done
01:04:22 (4) - New combo Done
01:12:20 (1) - Remove new combo Done
01:12:55 (3) - Add new combo Done
01:44:28 (6) - Add new combo Done
01:22:78 (1) - make it 2 1/4 shorter. Done
02:07:17 (1) - make it 2 /14 longer Done
02:58:85 (3,4,5,6) - this sounds a little strange. Done
03:04:57 (1,2,3) - ^ (i think it would be better if you stick too 1/2 vocals) Done

i might come back and mod the other diffs later, but for now

great song/map and great storyboard
Thank you for your mod GABI !

you can replace skin in your folder o(*^▽^*)o~
Aenna
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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Cyril Scarlet
Thank you Cyborg ~ >v<♥
Mystearica
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Cyril Scarlet
Oh

Thank you for Detail Mystearica! :oops:
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Cyril Scarlet

Mystearica wrote:

Tags: Hayate no Gotoku Season 2 ending theme anime j-pop :D Done
EDIT : oops...sorry about Double post = ="
MegaManEXE
Um

Just a small nitpick, but capitalize Shizuka in the artist name?

Otherwise the map is nice, very different style than my version, so it was really fun to see how you did things differently.
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Cyril Scarlet
thank you for come to see. ;)

yes , itou shizuka is artist name (Hinagiku voice)
gdeath
i think slider tick 1.0 is better in all diffs(suggestion)

[Hard]
01:38:38 (9) - new combo
02:47:05 (1) --->>02:48:79 (2) its kinda empty

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:10:29 (1) - remove new combo

[Orion's Tsundere]
00:48:09 (5,6) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right
01:07:00 (1) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right
01:45:67 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:23 (8) - new combo
01:47:40 (1) - remove new combo
03:07:69 (1) - ^
03:09:08 (1) - ^
03:09:25 (2) - new combo

awesome map!!
nice skin and storyboard!
here are some stars for you <3
taka1235
orioncomet

gdeath wrote:

[Orion's Tsundere]
00:48:09 (5,6) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right < no
01:07:00 (1) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right < no
01:45:67 (1) - remove new combo < done
01:47:23 (8) - new combo < done
01:47:40 (1) - remove new combo < done
03:07:69 (1) - ^ < done
03:09:08 (1) - ^ < done
03:09:25 (2) - new combo< done
0.0

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [Orion's Tsundere].osu
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Cyril Scarlet

gdeath wrote:

i think slider tick 1.0 is better in all diffs(suggestion)

[Hard]
01:38:38 (9) - new combo Done
02:47:05 (1) --->>02:48:79 (2) its kinda empty Done

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:10:29 (1) - remove new combo Done

awesome map!!
nice skin and storyboard!
here are some stars for you <3
Oh thankyou for MOD >v<//


taka1235 wrote:

完成!
ぺたっっと張っておきましたww
miccoliasms
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Cyril Scarlet
もーらい♪
taNa
go go go
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Cyril Scarlet
見てくれてありがとうございました :P
dkey
* :D
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Cyril Scarlet
thank you ^^
Hanyuu
siriru

this slider 00:40:98 (5) - i feel not good for the rhytm
this part for sliders 01:01:45 (1) - i feel the spacing is not ok before the go so fast in spacing but here the music go fast but all in center
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Cyril Scarlet

Hanyuu wrote:

siriru

this slider 00:40:98 (5) Done
this part for sliders 01:01:45 (1) Done
Thank you for advice Hanyuu ^^
termerys
I love this song.

Is this from hayate no gotoku Seasons2 Ed1, right?
Daisuki nante arigato
Watashi mo zutto sukidayo

Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
yes !

ED1 but Hinagiku ver. ^^

Hinagiku cute ~
Estelle18
คืนนี้ อยากนอนหลับฝนดีนะ - -

สอยดาวมาให้แล้ว ไม่ต้องโผล่มาเลยนะ แล้วก็ จงรับใช้ เล่น เพลงใหม่ให้หมดด้วย :3





ทำสวยดีนะ น่ารักด้วย สีชมพูทั้งเพลงเลย >W<~
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Cyril Scarlet
น่ารักเหมือนคนทำว่างั้น ? :P
laikung0
-*- ขยันอัพเดตเอาไปเลย 1 ดาว

ปล.ว่างๆๆก็พักบาง
orioncomet
[Normal]
Plz,fixed it bcz this is Normal and won't have confusing.
01:21:914(5) - sapcing - too far from (4) - ไกลกับ (4) มากไป
02:12:203(6) - spacing - too close from (5) - ใกล้กับ (5) มากไป
02:14:110(7) - จัดระยะใหม่
02:18:272(2) - spacing
02:22:261(4) - spacing - too far from (3)

[Hard]
Cool ~

[taka's]
Nice ~

[miccli's]
Yes ~ O.O

[Orion's] << i want to change name my diff, sorry guy
D:"

Very Nice SB !! ^.^

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
orioncomet
laikung0 หลอกลวง :evil:
Iluhiwizel
laikung0 นิร้ายกาจจริง=3=

Star~*
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Cyril Scarlet
thank you guys m(_ _)m
Alace
hahaha I don`t need to make a .osu for S i R i R u
taka's diff has the good hitsounds pattens

IMO
simple hitsounds fit this song very well
Green lines work is really time wasting and we don`t know if they really sound better lol
(i waste a lot of time to set green lines before XD)

good job have a star

<orion's Tsundere>
No one can hear the hitsounds lol plz up the volume XD
orioncomet

Alace wrote:

<orion's Tsundere>
No one can hear the hitsounds lol plz up the volume XD
I want to low volume for "tsundere" XD, i kidda ~

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu
illuminist
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DJPop
Hinagiku is Cooldere.
orioncomet is Tsundere.


/me โกยแน่บ


Good maps, +Star :D
Topic Starter
Cyril Scarlet
oh .

thank you all peple for come to see map m(_ _)m
heartnetkung
half star for hinagiku!
other half for jumps
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Cyril Scarlet
haha

I like jump too ^^
orioncomet
> DJPop
/me hits DJPop :evil:

> heartnetkung
not have half star for me ?
Furawa
:) star
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