This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年10月31日 at 1:02:00

Artist: Itou Shizuka
Title: Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver.
Tags: Hayate no Gotoku 2nd ED theme anime j-pop
BPM: 173
Filesize: 11921kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:

1. miccoli's Stream (5 stars, 603 notes)
2. Normal (3.48 stars, 214 notes)
3. orion's Tsundere (4.85 stars, 609 notes)
4. S i R i R u's Pleasant (4.97 stars, 397 notes)
5. taka's diff (4.98 stars, 396 notes)

Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver.
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Honjitsu mankai watashi iro ! Katsura Hinagiku Ver.

[: Detail:]
- Custom Skin
- Story Board
- Lighting

Progress

Normal : Finished (MOD Request)
S i R i R u's : Finished (MOD Request)
Orion's : Finished (MOD Request)
miccoli's : Finished (MOD Request)
taka's : Finished (MOD Request)

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Change miccoli, Norma, taka's Diffl







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Participant

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You can MOD in Thai , English and Japanese

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Thank you ALACE for your Check BPM and OFFSET in OSU for me

Hina~

H! I! N! A! Hinagiku!

S! T! A! R! Star <3

>A</

oh ! !

Thank you guys for come to see >v<//

Hina!!!!!!!!!~~~

+star >w< b

Finish O.O
Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [Orion's Tsundere].rar

sorry, please download again. fixed spacing D:

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [Orion's Tsundere].osu

i love S i R i R u's Pleasant but for the love of god remove half the skin it's making my eyes bleed. don't get me wrong the skin is very pretty and well made, but i CAN'T SEE ANYTHING AT ALL!. anyways ignore what i just said i will just remove the skin elements myself later just for future skinning, please make sure that :

The spinner should be easier to see where the actual big spinning circle is and have a center point (in this case you do have a center point so i don't mind that) and the hitburst is blending in with the skin/combo colors which makes it even more difficult to read.

btw it would be nice if you could also make a custom hp bar

setting that aside and on to the real mod

Please note, i like the map already so these are mostly suggestions

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
im a little worried about your combo colors. you let the vocals stay on the earlier combo for about 1-2 beats somtimes. since this seems to be a pattern, feel free to ignore all my new combo suggestions. i just felt that these needed changing the most.


00:51:91 (5) - New combo
00:52:26 (1) - Remove new combo
00:52:95 (3) - New combo
01:03:35 (1) - Remove new combo
01:04:22 (4) - New combo
01:12:20 (1) - Remove new combo
01:12:55 (3) - Add new combo
01:44:28 (6) - Add new combo
01:22:78 (1) - make it 2 1/4 shorter.
02:07:17 (1) - make it 2 /14 longer
02:58:85 (3,4,5,6) - this sounds a little strange.
03:04:57 (1,2,3) - ^ (i think it would be better if you stick too 1/2 vocals)

i might come back and mod the other diffs later, but for now

great song/map and great storyboard

Gabi wrote:

00:51:91 (5) - New combo Done
00:52:26 (1) - Remove new combo Done
00:52:95 (3) - New combo Done
01:03:35 (1) - Remove new combo Done
01:04:22 (4) - New combo Done
01:12:20 (1) - Remove new combo Done
01:12:55 (3) - Add new combo Done
01:44:28 (6) - Add new combo Done
01:22:78 (1) - make it 2 1/4 shorter. Done
02:07:17 (1) - make it 2 /14 longer Done
02:58:85 (3,4,5,6) - this sounds a little strange. Done
03:04:57 (1,2,3) - ^ (i think it would be better if you stick too 1/2 vocals) Done

i might come back and mod the other diffs later, but for now

great song/map and great storyboard

Thank you for your mod GABI !

you can replace skin in your folder o(*^▽^*)o~♪

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Thank you Cyborg ~ >v<♥

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Oh

Thank you for Detail Mystearica!

Mystearica wrote:

Tags: Hayate no Gotoku Season 2 ending theme anime j-pop Done

EDIT : oops...sorry about Double post = ="

Um

Just a small nitpick, but capitalize Shizuka in the artist name?

Otherwise the map is nice, very different style than my version, so it was really fun to see how you did things differently.

thank you for come to see.

yes , itou shizuka is artist name (Hinagiku voice)

i think slider tick 1.0 is better in all diffs(suggestion)

[Hard]
01:38:38 (9) - new combo
02:47:05 (1) --->>02:48:79 (2) its kinda empty

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:10:29 (1) - remove new combo

[Orion's Tsundere]
00:48:09 (5,6) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right
01:07:00 (1) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right
01:45:67 (1) - remove new combo
01:47:23 (8) - new combo
01:47:40 (1) - remove new combo
03:07:69 (1) - ^
03:09:08 (1) - ^
03:09:25 (2) - new combo

awesome map!!
nice skin and storyboard!
here are some stars for you <3

完成!

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [taka's diff].osu

gdeath wrote:

[Orion's Tsundere]
00:48:09 (5,6) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right < no
01:07:00 (1) - move 1 grid(level 2) to the right < no
01:45:67 (1) - remove new combo < done
01:47:23 (8) - new combo < done
01:47:40 (1) - remove new combo < done
03:07:69 (1) - ^ < done
03:09:08 (1) - ^ < done
03:09:25 (2) - new combo< done

0.0

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [Orion's Tsundere].osu

gdeath wrote:

i think slider tick 1.0 is better in all diffs(suggestion)

[Hard]
01:38:38 (9) - new combo Done
02:47:05 (1) --->>02:48:79 (2) its kinda empty Done

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:10:29 (1) - remove new combo Done

awesome map!!
nice skin and storyboard!
here are some stars for you <3

Oh thankyou for MOD >v<//

taka1235 wrote:

完成!

ぺたっっと張っておきましたｗｗ

でーきた♪

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [miccoli's Stream].osu

もーらい♪

go go go

見てくれてありがとうございました

*

thank you ^^

siriru

this slider 00:40:98 (5) - i feel not good for the rhytm
this part for sliders 01:01:45 (1) - i feel the spacing is not ok before the go so fast in spacing but here the music go fast but all in center

Hanyuu wrote:

siriru

this slider 00:40:98 (5) Done
this part for sliders 01:01:45 (1) Done

Thank you for advice Hanyuu ^^

I love this song.

Is this from hayate no gotoku Seasons2 Ed1, right?
Daisuki nante arigato
Watashi mo zutto sukidayo

yes !

ED1 but Hinagiku ver. ^^

Hinagiku cute ~

น่ารักเหมือนคนทำว่างั้น ?

[Normal]
Plz,fixed it bcz this is Normal and won't have confusing.
01:21:914(5) - sapcing - too far from (4) - ไกลกับ (4) มากไป
02:12:203(6) - spacing - too close from (5) - ใกล้กับ (5) มากไป
02:14:110(7) - จัดระยะใหม่
02:18:272(2) - spacing
02:22:261(4) - spacing - too far from (3)

[Hard]
Cool ~

[taka's]
Nice ~

[miccli's]
Yes ~ O.O

[Orion's] << i want to change name my diff, sorry guy
D:"

Very Nice SB !! ^.^

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

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laikung0 นิร้ายกาจจริง=3=

Star~*

thank you guys m(_ _)m

hahaha I don`t need to make a .osu for S i R i R u
taka's diff has the good hitsounds pattens

IMO
simple hitsounds fit this song very well
Green lines work is really time wasting and we don`t know if they really sound better lol
(i waste a lot of time to set green lines before XD)

good job have a star

<orion's Tsundere>
No one can hear the hitsounds lol plz up the volume XD

Alace wrote:

<orion's Tsundere>
No one can hear the hitsounds lol plz up the volume XD

I want to low volume for "tsundere" XD, i kidda ~

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

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Hinagiku is Cooldere.
orioncomet is Tsundere.


/me โกยแน่บ


Good maps, +Star

oh .

thank you all peple for come to see map m(_ _)m

half star for hinagiku!
other half for jumps

haha

I like jump too ^^

> DJPop
/me hits DJPop

> heartnetkung
not have half star for me ?

star

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Gah, personally I hate it when there are more than four difficulties in a map.

Fix all the breaks in the difficulties.

[Normal]
00:30:58 (3) - I hate this slider. The middle one doesn't make sense at all, and seems like it's only there so that the slider extends up to a certain point.
01:25:20 (1,2,3) - Spacing issues.
02:19:13 (4) - Same with 00:30:58.
02:51:56 (1) - This is a very awkward slider. I suggest that in the future you don't follow ALL the vocals, especially the one that is supposed to match this slider.
02:55:20 (2) - Same with 00:30:58.
02:55:20 (2) - ^

[Hard]
Personally, I felt this is just another variation of [Normal]. Nothing really hard about it, but I guess that makes up for the song being all cheerful and that.
01:03:18 (8) - I hate this slider. The middle one doesn't make sense at all, and seems like it's only there so that the slider extends up to a certain point.
01:06:82 (1,2,3,4,5) - ???
01:19:48 (3) - Same with 01:03:18
02:47:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - I see where you're going with this, but I honestly think there's a better pattern than this.

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:51:56 (3,4,5) - Same thing with the particular point in [Normal].

[micolli's Stream]
01:18:09 (6) - I don't think this is rankable. Change it.

[Orion's Tsundere]
03:10:46 (1) - I can't appreciate this slider art with that bad starting position.

changed it!

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [miccoli's Stream].osu

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vytalibus wrote:

Gah, personally I hate it when there are more than four difficulties in a map.

Fix all the breaks in the difficulties.

[Normal]
00:30:58 (3) - I hate this slider. The middle one doesn't make sense at all, and seems like it's only there so that the slider extends up to a certain point. Changed , Done
01:25:20 (1,2,3) - Spacing issues. Done
02:19:13 (4) - Same with 00:30:58. Changed , Done
02:51:56 (1) - This is a very awkward slider. I suggest that in the future you don't follow ALL the vocals, especially the one that is supposed to match this slider. Done
02:55:20 (2) - Same with 00:30:58. Changed , Done

[Hard]
if many Dif and this Dif not nothing really hard and look like NORMAL, I'll deleted it.


[S i R i R u's Pleasant]
02:51:56 (3,4,5) - Same thing with the particular point in [Normal]. Done

[micolli's Stream]
01:18:09 (6) - I don't think this is rankable. upload from his reply already. Done

[Orion's Tsundere]
03:10:46 (1) - I can't appreciate this slider art with that bad starting position. No change

please MOD by the beatmaps rules, don't mod by your own feeling....

Ok, thank for come

miccoliasms wrote:

changed it!

再うｐしときました！

change over all, not fixed that mod

Download: Itou shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

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TOT เน่า 1 วันเต็มๆ เพิ่งเข้าได้ >v<

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thank you YES ^^

Haha, you seem to like storyboarding/skinning your maps a lot.. however I think there are too many flashes.

Author: Itou shizuka > Itou Shizuka.

SiRiRu's Pleasant:
I really think some of the whistles sound weird.. especially the Normal whistles.

Orion's Tsundere:
Maybe some parts are a bit plain? Spice them up with hitsounds.

haha ^^"

where is weird point ? I'll go to change o(^v')b

thank you for come ^^

ขอติอะไรอย่างหนึ่ง สีสปืนกลืนมาก เป็นไปได้ทำให้มองขัดเจนกว่านี้

สีสปินที่ว่านี่ BG spin เหรอฮะ

spinner-circle << ไฟล์ตัวนี้นะ this file


ในความหมายผมคือ เพลงอามมีลูกเล่นเยอะนะดี แต่บางทีเราไม่รู้ว่าอันนี้สปินหรือeffect ที่ใส่ลงไป เลยอยากให้มองดูง่ายๆหน่อยนะ สงสารคนแก่มั้ง ภาพพื้นหลังก็สว่างแล้ว สปินให้ทึบๆหน่อยก็ดี เดียวสายตาจะเสียก่อน

i mean your map is very cool and good with those effect, subbtitle, picture but sometime i can't know something of that is spiner background or picture background the color is the same tone. i think you should use spinner-circle color in dark tone or use another color to see it easy. i am old(24 years) my eyes don't good like you. i don't want to force my eyes .

thank you

บอกใว้ให้พิจรณานะครับ ถ้าภาพรวมของคนอื่นๆบอกว่าดีก็ไม่เป็นไรครับ

O.O
Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu
sorry, when you wake up, plz, update again

Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

orioncomet wrote:

O.O

OK

pete2528 wrote:

spinner-circle << ไฟล์ตัวนี้นะ this file


ในความหมายผมคือ เพลงอามมีลูกเล่นเยอะนะดี แต่บางทีเราไม่รู้ว่าอันนี้สปินหรือeffect ที่ใส่ลงไป เลยอยากให้มองดูง่ายๆหน่อยนะ สงสารคนแก่มั้ง ภาพพื้นหลังก็สว่างแล้ว สปินให้ทึบๆหน่อยก็ดี เดียวสายตาจะเสียก่อน

i mean your map is very cool and good with those effect, subbtitle, picture but sometime i can't know something of that is spiner background or picture background the color is the same tone. i think you should use spinner-circle color in dark tone or use another color to see it easy. i am old(24 years) my eyes don't good like you. i don't want to force my eyes .

thank you

บอกใว้ให้พิจรณานะครับ ถ้าภาพรวมของคนอื่นๆบอกว่าดีก็ไม่เป็นไรครับ

OK งับ

งั้นไว้ Full sub next time ~ ผมจะลองให้มันเห็นง่ายหน่อยละกันฮะ =w=

So far there are several things on the skin I'd like to comment .

1. The "Skip" button is not visible, is this intentional?

2. When failed, the screen is rendered black (I can see a background there... but it's blacked out)

3. for S i R i R u's maps, I suggest a change in combo colors

I can see this beatmap pack is a hard combination lol
Good work~

Thai Translation~ ;-;

yongtw123 wrote:

So far there are several things on the skin I'd like to comment .
- มีหลายอย่างเกี่ยวกับสกินที่ฉันจะคอมเม้นท์

1. The "Skip" button is not visible, is this intentional?
- ปุ่ม skip ตอนเริ่ม ไม่ตั้งใจให้เห็นใช่มั้ย?

2. When failed, the screen is rendered black (I can see a background there... but it's blacked out)
- เมื่อfail จอก็ดำเลย แต่ว่ายังเห็นBG แต่มันมืดดดดดด
Me : I think it's blacked out bcz of BUG ^^"
that have all maps, If you get fail in it when you play.

3. for S i R i R u's maps, I suggest a change in combo colors
- สำหรับDiffของลุงอาม ฉันว่ามันต้องเปลี่ยนสีคอมโบ + +

I can see this beatmap pack is a hard combination lol
Good work~

=w=

yongtw123 wrote:

So far there are several things on the skin I'd like to comment .

1. The "Skip" button is not visible, is this intentional?

2. When failed, the screen is rendered black (I can see a background there... but it's blacked out)

3. for S i R i R u's maps, I suggest a change in combo colors

I can see this beatmap pack is a hard combination lol
Good work~

1. Yes , intentional use crean skip button =w=

2.oops, I think is BUG ? I and friend try to fail and when fail it's black too, and didn't only my song but all song.

3.Ok, changed

thank you for MOD and star ^^//


ps. thank orioncomet for tran ^^

star

m(_ _)m ♥

star

oh

thank you m(_ _)m ♥

BAT ~ ....


z z ZZ -..-"

Done!

Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [orion's Tsundere].osu

อันสุดท้ายตัวเกมหมุนถึง 2000 แต่ลองเล่นโดยใช้เมาท์เล่น ได้คอมโบ 100 แถมกระโดดมากดต่อเกือบไม่ทัน พอหมุนถึง 200 ก็วงกลับมากดรัวไม่ทัน



โหดร้าย XD ทรมารคนแก่

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

☆～T H A N K ♥ Y O U～☆

= Normal =
01:12:02 (3) - Move it 1/2 beat backward.
01:14:11 - Either add a hit circle here or stretch the slider at 01:13:41 (3) out by 1/2 beat (so it'll end at 1:14:11)
ใส่ hit circle ตรงนี้หรือไม่ก็จับ slider ที่ 01:13:41 (3) ยืดออกอีกครึ่งจังหวะ (รวมแล้วจะยาวหนึ่งจังหวะแล้วก็จบที่ 1:14:11)
02:27:11 (1) - Remove it. Move slider (2) here instead
ลบออกไป ย้าย slider (2) มาไว้ตรงนี้แทน
02:27:98 - Add a hit circle here.
02:32:83 (1) - Remove it.
03:04:92 (3) - Don't make it repeat. Stretch it out 1/4 beat.
แก้อย่าให้มันวกกลับ จับยืดออกอีก 1/4 จังหวะ
03:05:78 - Add a hit circle here.
03:10:29 (1) - Remove it.

To be honest, I think this map is too hard for normal. Try removing some of the 1/2 beat streams and leaving a 2 beat gap after each spinners should help.
จริงๆแล้วผมว่าแมปนี้มันออกจะยากไปหน่อยสำหรับ Normal นะครับ ลองเอาโน้ตที่มาติดๆกันออกไปบ้าง หรือไม่ก็แก้ slider สั้นๆให้ยาวขึ้น แล้วก็พยายามเว้นช่วงหลัง spinner สักอย่างน้อยสองจังหวะน่าจะช่วยได้ครับ

= miccoli's Stream =
00:35:61 (1) - Start a new combo here. This is mainly to eliminate the spacing issue in this green combo. Notice that the distance between (2)-(3) is much longer than between (5)-(6). I understand that you're attempting a jump here, but don't forget to start a new combo after the jump, or you'll have spacing issues.
01:44:28 (4) - Personally, I'm not a big fan of silenced notes as I believe many players rely on their ears to tell them if their click is accurate or not. Silenced notes lack that kind of audible feedback, making some players feel unsure of themselves. There are some other silenced notes in the later section of this song. You should correct those as well.

= taka's diff =
00:48:44 (1,2) - Move them higher and reduce the distance between them so that (1,2,3) is equally spaced (something similar to 01:56:42 (1,2,3)).
03:08:21 (1) - Shorten this by 1 beat.

อีกสองอันที่เหลือขอมาต่อพรุ่งนี้นะครับ

pete2528 wrote:

โหดร้าย XD ทรมารคนแก่

5555 (แก่ด้วย ToT)

มายิงดาว

x_x

Download: Itou Shizuka - Honjitsu Mankai Watashi iro! Hina ver. (S i R i R u) [taka's diff].osu

poypk > thank you ^^/

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