GeneralAlright, Still <- remove comma between tags
Smile00:48:506 (1,2) - why not 2 1/2 sliders?
01:00:129 - add note+clap? too empty :U
01:32:957 (5) - it's not 1/4. 1/3 obviously
01:56:674 (2) - mmmh, i think end of slider better snap to 1/3 too, soumds more clear
02:15:208 (1) - 1/3, not 1/2. should be 1/6 later, no?
02:45:365 (2,3) - emmm, if you follow vocals, why not this pattern here?
http://puu.sh/1Bb8J03:02:642 (2) - sounds not in music
03:05:470 (1) - rly, again, these 1/2 follows nothing
03:08:925 (1) - i'd make end of spinner 1/2 later, because spinner ends and vocal continues
firstly i wanna know your point about 1/2 notes in places, where no beats or vocal. and i'll continue. better catch me in game.