p3n wrote:

[Hinsvar's EXTRA STYLE]You can keep CS5 if you have a different reason than "because my map will show above 'Insane' with CS4". This map is already designed with CS5 in mind, and using CS4 will make this a completely different thing. In my opinion, circle size is one of the most important thing on designing a map, and using a different size than the one I have used will ruin the map itself.

00:42:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - still badly overmapped. remove (2) and (4) to make it fit the song Done.

01:18:223 (1) - the sudden increase in spacing after this slider kills the good flow of this part. I'll try to explain what actually makes this whole part play as nice as it does and why the spacing after this slider is "bad": 01:16:404 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the 1/4 jumps (slider -> circle/slider-stack) of those 2 combos are equally spaces hence the equal movement of the cursor. However 01:18:223 (1,2,3) - and 01:19:132 (1,2,3) - don't match at all. I highly recommend to move 01:18:223 (1) - to achieve a similar distance/pattern as in 01:19:132 (1,2,3) - : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/524585 <--- if you move it to this point also adjust 01:19:132 (1,2,3) - to be on the same spot to make the transition better. Done. Not really sure about 01:19:132 (1,2,3) though...

01:39:473 (3,4) - why is this so far to the right? The 1/4 jumps are very challenging even if the player is expecting them and you should aim to present your challenges in a readable way that has some consistency. Improving the flow here is crucial. A consistent pattern fits best here (what the actual pattern looks like is up to you, this placement is just a suggestion): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/524570 Not sure if I did it right... But eh, I changed stuff here.

01:50:041 (1,2,3) - I don't know if this placement is intended...if not try to allign both sliders to the same height ...That must've been accidental. Aligned.

Hinsvar wrote:

This map is already designed with CS5 in mind, and using CS4 will make this a completely different thing. In my opinion, circle size is one of the most important thing on designing a map, and using a different size than the one I have used will ruin the map itself.

1. Remove first break from BakaCI STYLE, to make it consistent with other diffs? After that, I recommend +1 to HP Drain, Overall Difficulty and Approach Rate - I feel it's better that way (:
2. Also remove letterbox in breaks from BakaCI STYLE for consistency (not fully required though, due to other diffs doesn't have break)
3. Hinsvar's Extra Style: 02:00:495 (2) - I can't sightread this slider's repeat on test mode orz (covered by hitburst), my suggestion would be something like this: ((4) and (5) is stacked to your previous red combo)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. Your storyboard still has unnecessary transparency around it

Xinely wrote:

gratz ichiGUN and all who give GD for ichiGUN

SapphireGhost wrote:

Wow, it's ranked already, okay then. Good job!