Hi o/
Moe mod time as requested in-game /o/
[General]
I think the second kiai fountain in your first kiai should be in 01:14:868 instead 01:15:095.
[Normal]
General review and suggestions.A nice diff to play, it fulfills the role of the easiest diff in the set, I'd only suggest some stuff and ask you to fix some more.
I'd use Approach Rate 5 (+1), 4 is good, but as you have some notes after spinners may disrupt the spinning for newbie players.
Rhythm00:33:476 - You can try this rhythm, fits better in my opinion
00:51:459 (4) - Move to 00:51:231 if following vocals here.
01:42:368 - 01:44:186 - Put some notes in this interval, it looks empty here :c
02:28:959 (2) - Try deleting this and putting a circle in 02:29:186
02:53:277 (2) - Move this to 02:53:504 if following vocals
02:54:186 (3) - Move this to 02:54:413 if following vocals, remember fix the spacing later.
02:56:004 (2) - Try a easer slider, like this, the actual is a bit confusing
03:27:140 - What about trying this, fits more, in my opinion.
03:39:413 (2) - Delete this and put a circle in 03:39:640
04:00:550 (5) - This should be a circle.
04:24:413 (3) - Delete this and put a circle in 04:24:640
04:27:822 (3) - Use an slider like this, easier to read and less confusing, like before.
Placement00:21:004 (1) - Move this a a bit down, to avoid some coverings by the HP bar of some player's skin, don't forget fixing the spacing for next notes if you do.
00:22:595 (4,5) - This is very jumpy, fix the spacing here~
Sounds01:35:550 - Use 60% volume here, or even 65%, 80% is too loud for the change
Aesthetics00:26:231 (3,4) - This looks a bit weird, you can try putting in another way.
00:48:504 (3,4) - Avoid this overlap, it doesn't looks too bad due to the flow, try something this and keep what you like more.
01:36:231 (2,3) - You can try a different way to put this, make something like a soft curve which begins with the tail of 01:35:095 (1), or make 01:36:459 (3) in a straight line.
[Hard]
General review and suggestions.Nice Hard, no bad comments about it, just increase Overall Difficulty and HP Drain by 1, this will match the difficulty it should have.
Rhythm00:15:095 (5) - Maybe put a note here.
02:11:231 (6) - A circle here, you shouldn't finish the stream like this x.x
Placement00:02:822 (1,2,3) - You can move this to stack (3) with 00:04:868 (1) and don't make too hard the change in the velocity
00:06:459 (1,2,3) - Something like above^
00:45:095 (3,4,1) - Make this flow like a stream, maybe like this, is easier to read
01:28:731 (5) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream
02:10:550 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make the changes in spacing smoother, maybe beginning with 1.3x between (3) and (4), then 1.5x, 1.7x and 1.9x
02:12:368 (3) - Reverse it (Ctrl+G) and it will match the next stream
02:56:004 (1) - ^
03:30:550 (4,5) - Put it like a stream these~ D:
04:27:822 (1,2) - ^ additionally, the flow must lead to the next stream
Aesthetics03:40:322 (6) - Maybe rotate around 15° anti clockwise to avoid the tiny overlap
[Insane]
General review and suggestions.Weirdly, I enjoyed this Insane, most of the times I felt in rage because I can't even read the notes, but not this time.
I'd recommend put some breaks, due to the HP Drain, some players are likely to get killed in this intervals without notes.
00:15:095 -
00:58:731 -
01:44:186 -
01:47:822 -
Rhythm00:14:640 (6) - One repeat more in this.
02:25:890 (2) - Maybe delete this and begin the stream in 02:26:004 (3)
Placement 00:22:368 (1) - Gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down
00:53:050 (5,6,7) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar
02:31:686 (4,6,1) - ^
02:52:140 (5) - This gets a bit covered by HP bar, move it down
03:25:095 (5) - ^
04:17:822 (2) - ^
04:25:322 (4,1) - You could move it a bit down, giving a good luck by not being too close to HP bar
03:44:868 (1) - Make the end of this lead to 03:45:550 (2)
04:27:822 (1,2) - Things like this is what I suggest to do in Hard
Aesthetics01:00:095 (1) - Are you making this to make the sliderball "wiggle"? if yes, leave as it is, if not, fix with the speed multiplier.
Well, I think that's all from my part, good luck in your way to rank, if you reply this, only put the ones you didn't follow and the reason -w-