384059043 wrote:

hi there~

[General]
* The map require a easier diff that is at most 3 stars I have a already normal diff 3 stars

[Normal]
* 01:36:942 - (nazi)move this green line to 01:37:217 - ? Fixed for you leyko :;D

[Hard]
* 00:30:061 (3) - make it become a straight slidern and move it to the middle of the screen? k
* 00:32:813 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use Ctrl+Shift+D to make them better No
* 01:04:190 (1) - map this part could be better No
* 01:25:657 (1) - remove new combo and add new combo here 01:26:208 (3) - Done
* 01:46:024 (1) - move it to (384,192) Done

good luck

1. 00:57:584 (1) - I don't see any reason to use finish at the beginning of the slider, since the song doesn't support it with any heavy beats, so remove it?
2. 01:28:410 (1) - ^
3. 01:59:235 (1,2) - What's with the spacing here... Also, the finish on (1)...

1. 00:55:382 (1) - Remove finish? It really doesn't fit with the song...
2. 00:57:584 (1) - ^ (The beginning of the slider.)
3. 01:22:905 (6) - ^
4. 01:25:107 (5) - ^
5. 01:28:410 (1) - ^ (The beginning of the slider.)
6. 01:59:235 (1) - ^ (The beginning of the slider.)

1. You need more tags: xmas Stefani Joanne Angelina Germanotta
2. Normal should be under 3.24 stars. Otherwise you MUST have easy.
3. make your spinner-circle visible. (you had same problem with your previous map)
4. Your skin is a bit outated. It says 2008 in menu buttons, lol. le picture
5. Why do you use different kiais? :V

1. Song is slow, but because of many 1/2s - I'd recommend you to use AR4. It will to keep patterns readable without having OMGTOOMANY notes on the screen
2. There's too many 1/2s for EASIEST diff in mapset, imo. Even if BPM is quite slow, it still too hard for easiest diff, imo.
3. 00:38:868 (2) - NC bug! You should fix it! >.</ same with 00:43:272 (2)
4. 00:43:272 (1) - overllapped with spinner hitburst. Please fix it, if this diff is supposed to be easiest diff in the mapset.
5. 01:37:217 - circle with soft-whistle here. Let this break's start be more epic!
6. 02:20:290 - for all diffs - hm.. if it follows vocals spinner should be ended here. Check it once again

1. 00:24:556 (1,2,3) - hey! Ctrl+G them bcause this part feels so jumpy! And it will also give you a good flow
2. 00:59:511 (1,2) - same as above. If you've applied previous suggestion.
3. 01:25:933 (8) - this one feels extra in the pattern and in the rhythm! Try to remove it - it will give you better flow, imo.
4. 01:46:024 - You've mapped previous SLOW part that feels like BREAK and didn't map this part, that feels like regular one. orz Why? I'd recommend you to use same breaks as Leyko's diff
5. 02:02:538 (5) - man, you forget circle here, to follow background music!
6. 02:04:740 (5) - jump is so big! Add new combo here, to make it readable for us, please!

1. 01:59:235 (1) - This finish, it's a bit loud from your other objects and also, it's the first place that has a finish. Would you really like to keep it? Actually, it would be better if you delete it since the beginning of the two previous Kiai Time has no Finishes. Or at least, you can keep it and add finish to all beginning of Kiai Times.
2. 02:06:391 - Have you forgot to add a clap here? I think you've forgot. If not, you should add one to keep the consistency with your claps on upbeats.
3. 02:11:896 (4,2) - I don't really like the overlap here, it looks a bit awkward to see. I think you should, maybe, move this slider somewhere else so it won't be overlapping with the other. Look at the spoilerbox below, that's a bit obvious.
   
   Example

   

1. 00:20:153 (1,2,3) - So, at this place, it sounds very empty in some ways because there's only 3 circles when it would need 5 beats. Why 5 beats? It's because, if you follow the vocal, you can clearly hear that there's five "La". But it mostly does "Fa, la, la, la, la". So actually it would be very good if you emphasize these sounds by adding a short slider that has four reverse arrow. It's more simple and it won't be as hard as having 5 circles. Here's what I've did. (You should also do the same thing for 00:24:556 (1,2,3) - !)
   
   Example

   
2. 00:55:382 (1,2) - To make a better sound, I guess these objects should be reversed. I've found it because I thought the slider sounded a bit late and if you reverse the emplacement of the slider (2) with the circle (1) to make the Slider (1) and the circle (2), it will sound better since you have a slider on the next downbeat. It would be better if it was consistent. Also, I really think it would be better if at 00:55:932 it was a circle instead of the end of a slider. If you don't really understand what I was to say here, just look at the screenshot in the box below.
   
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3. 00:57:584 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea at this combo to make another clap consistency. To be honest, it doesn't sounds good with the claps on the red lines because at this combo, you have these claps and at the next combo, there's no claps on red lines. You should try to keep the consistency you've started here by adding hitsounds only on upbeats.
4. 00:57:584 (1,2) - Like Armin said, this has a bad overlap. It's has also a bad overlap with these objects 00:57:033 (5,2) - . So actually, you should keep these sliders but, move it somewhere else to make a better pattern, a better flow, etc. I guess this form of slider will be alright if you do this:
   
   Example

   
5. 00:59:511 (1,2,3) - I don't really like the emplacement of these circles. It makes it a bit bad to play. You should maybe try something else. I've placed these circles somewhere else and it makes a snowflakes and I guess it plays better than the current emplacement. Here's what I've did for more precision on what I meant.
   
   Example

   
6. 01:15:199 (1,2,3,4) - For these objects, it will sounds better if you emphasize the vocal, which is "Oh", by replacing these objects by three 1/2 sliders. I really thinks it's better having these sliders instead of having some circles between these sliders. Here's what I've did:
   
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7. 01:46:024 - It has a strong and loud sound here and I don't think it's a good idea if you skip it! To be honest, you should be adding a circle here to emphasize this sound instead of starting the break time here.
8. 02:02:263 (4) - I think you've misplaced this whistle. first, it doesn't sound good where it is and I think you've added it there by accident since you should have adding it on the next object. So delete this whistle and add it to the next object to make it consistent.

1. To be honest, I find [Leyko's Tree] too hard. Map an easier difficulty please, it shouldn't take much time.
2. There's a Timing Section missing in [Leyko's Tree] 01:37:219 - , actually I'm not completely sure if that section is necessary, try to get more opinions, I'll do the same.