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- I'd say that HP and OD are really low, compared to AR. However, HP Drain is fine while playing, but OD isn't. It's barely impossible to get 100s, lol. Increase OD by 2 ticks, and we will not get full SS scoreboard.
- 00:00:580 (1) - Either curve this a bit more to make the transition to the circle better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/512019
or move the circle a bit right: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/512020
That surely makes the flow visually better, don't you agree? - 00:02:865 (1) - Want to tell something about this 3/8 stuff. I was playing and honestly couldn't get what do I press, lol. Vocals are pretty tricky and it's hard to understand rhythm at once. Adding one repeat to the short slider makes it easier to understand.
- 00:03:722 (3) - Maybe remove this NC? You spam them too much.
- Two suggestions above apply to 00:07:437 (1,2,3) - as well.
- 00:10:294 (2,3,4,5) - This looks kinda bad, honestly :s Something more smooth like that fits better I think:
- 00:16:875 (2) - Stuff like this is not stacking. It is better to stack them, preventing possible confusion and making it a bit neater. Increase stack leniency by one tick.
- 00:14:589 - Add clap, you might have missed it.
- 00:22:160 - Add clap and remove clap from 00:22:875. ← This suggestion is similar to the one below, this pattern repeats there several times.
- 00:31:160 (3,4,1,2) - Clap pattern here should be a bit changed to follow music better. Add clap at 00:31:446 and remove clap from 00:32:017. Also you should have had claps at 00:30:160 and 00:30:303.
- 00:40:303 - Remove clap from here, there is no such sound in the music. But at 00:40:446 I can hear a clap, so maybe add note with clap there?
- 00:40:875 (4,5) - Hm, I can hear claps only at their ends here.
- 01:10:875 - As I suggest everywhere, remove this clap.
- 01:16:303 - Remove this clap too, nothing clappy in the music there.
- 01:21:446 (6,7,8) - Make a triangle here:
- 01:24:875 (1) - It's kinda too much NCs there. Remove NC from 01:24:875 - , add at 01:25:160 and remove from 01:25:446.
- Why do you set additional red lines in the end? ._. For Nightcore mod? Meh.. I'd remove them all.
And why here - 00:13:437? That's strange.
- 00:07:437 (1) - Try another rhythm, follows vocal better:
- Same for 00:02:865 (1) - end it at 00:03:294.
- 00:14:018 (1) - 00:32:875 (1) - 01:09:446 (1) - That's quite far from spinner for a Normal.
- 00:46:875 (2) - Move it a bit down, to 1.2x
- 01:26:446 - Vocal sound here. Rework your rhythm like that:
- 00:02:865 (1) - Your rhythm misses vocal sound at 00:04:294. Rhythm like that follows vocal better:
- 00:07:437 (1,2) - ^
- 00:34:018 (2) - 1 grid → for a better encircle!
- 00:46:018 (1) - Move red point couple of grids → to make it a bit better
- 01:16:732 - Vocal starts from here, so try this rhythm.. It kinda makes all the kiai the same, but I don't see other solutions.