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ALI PROJECT - Seishoujo Ryouiki (TV size)

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Armin
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on giovedì 3 settembre 2009 at 15.21.39

Artist: ALI PROJECT
Title: Seishoujo Ryouiki (TV size)
Source: Rozen Maiden
Tags: Harry Orunitia xxheroxx collab Oru Rozen Maiden Shinku Traumend TV size
BPM: 137
Filesize: 16414kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,9 stars, 245 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 309 notes)
  3. Normal (2,96 stars, 94 notes)
  4. xxheroxx's Hard (4,84 stars, 249 notes)
Download: ALI PROJECT - Seishoujo Ryouiki (TV size)
Download: ALI PROJECT - Seishoujo Ryouiki (TV size) (no video)
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My fourth Map. Again, I dediced to map another song of ALI PROJECT, Seishoujo Ryouiki.
Hope you like it D:
A BIG thanks to xxheroxx and HarryOrunitia which helped to me respectively with the difficulties "xxheroxx's hard"(made by him) and "Insane" (made by me and Oru :3).
And thank you Luxary for the storyboard~!
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Diasios
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Diasios
Starred :P
Fava_old
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Fava_old
starred! u_u
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
[Normal]
00:42:28 (4) - one level 3 grid to the right >:?

[xxheroxx]
as much as I dislike occupied blue ticks after spinners.
the map is fine, nothing I can find wrong.

[Hard]
01:29:14 (6,7,8,9) - I am not very sure about this, I think (6) should stay where it is and (7,8,9) should be 1/4 triplets beginning on the red tick. I don't know about this though.

eeedit: pretty sure now. You've done it in [Insane], why not here?

[Insane]
>< perfect

I'm sorry I cannot find much.
very cool map, star ^^
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Yumiko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
@_@ How many songs like this does there have to be...?

[Normal]
00:10:75 (3) - Add clap at beginning of slider
01:13:81 (3) - ^

[Insane]
00:58:70 (6) - Add a finish?
01:00:45 (6) - ^

[xxheroxx's Hard]
01:23:23 (2) - Hitsound this
Gabi
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Gabi
one of the BEST anime OP's ever. i will play/star tomorrow
Alice
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Joined October 2008
Alice
Yay for rozen maiden, yay for this song
Normal
nazi, suggestions, blah
SPOILER
00:23:01 (4) - End with a clap? Or something else but it seems to need hitsound here
00:26:51 (4) - ^
00:30:02 (4) - ^
00:37:02 (4) - ^
Actually I sometimes suck at hitsounds so if you don't like my suggestions that would be totally normal orz


xxheroxx
00:27:61 (1) - maybe a bit upper, like previous (1)?

Hard
Seems fine. :D

Insane
Awesome.


Well, 4 difficulties and only some semi useless suggestions to say?
It deserves a star. Awesome map. <3
Ekaru
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Ekaru
Only one thing...

The timing feels quite a bit early. Recheck, please.
Andrea
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Andrea
Star'd.
Lesjuh
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Lesjuh
Source: [Name of Anime]

Normal:
00:39:87 (1) - New combo (Follows previous colouring)
00:41:62 (5) - Uncombo (naturally)
00:45:13 (6) - New combo ^^
00:46:66 (1) - ^^

xxheroxx's Hard: I don't like this one :/
I highly recommend you to turn up the overall difficulty

00:36:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4 ) - Were you trying to fill this up?
00:58:48 (1) - You sure about this? People can get really angry of these things.
01:00:24 (1) - ^
01:21:80 (1) - Remove this beat. It's too hard to read with the overall diff as it is now. If you tunr it up it might not be much of a problem.

Hard:
01:14:25 (9) - New combo (Follows vocals and colouring in the rest of the map)
01:14:69 (1) - Uncombo (naturally)
01:25:20 (1) - (Follows previous colouring)

Insane: Fun map but the use of combo colours is irregular!
00:07:90 (1) - New combo (follows previous colouring)
00:08:12 (1) - Uncombo (naturally)
00:10:09 (1) - New combo
00:25:64 (1) - You forgot to put a finish here
00:25:64 (8) - New combo
00:25:86 (1) - Uncombo
00:26:73 (1) - Uncombo
00:28:92 (1) - Uncombo
00:29:14 (11) - New combo
00:32:64 (9) - New combo
00:32:86 (1) - Uncombo
00:56:73 (12) - Uncombo
01:02:53 (1) - End this spinner on the previous white tick (on the timeline) and fix the inherited sections
01:04:07 (1) - Move this spinner on tick to the right (on the timeline) and end it @ 01:07:247

That's about it. Plz use combo colours more frequently next time :3
bmin11
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bmin11
[xxheroxx's Hard]
01:01:97 (3) - clap? this is just my opinion, which you can ignore it

[Insane]
I think we need a break even this is 1min 30sec long song

That's all for me

Nice map, but I wonder if you can fill the gap btw [Normal] and [Hard]. It would be great if you can :)
A star for your well done
GbL
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GbL
Don't see anything wrong, nice. o.o

Star*
minyeob
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minyeob
[Normal]
00:17:97 (1), Break -> This part is strange for me >_> (Just my personal opinion)
My opinion is removing spinner and add a note on 00:18:63 ( ) then redo a breaktime.

[xxheroxx]
00:36:37 (1) ~ 00:48:41 (4) orz pattern is not good.

[Insane]
1:07:46(kiai)-> Starting this kiai from 1:07:68 is better for me.
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
xxheroxx~
Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen quite a bit.

That's practically all I've found. Pretty solid map~

Nice job!
mtmcl
mtmcl

Mafiamaster wrote:

xxheroxx~
Redo both breaks. They'll lengthen quite a bit.

That's practically all I've found. Pretty solid map~

Nice job!
Looks like this has been fixed.

Bubb.
Mogsy
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Popping for a tad, will be happy to rebubble upon fixing.

All difficulties:
-01:07:686 - Add a kiai section that lasts until 01:21:700. Insane has it but it fits everywhere else.

Normal:
-01:02:43 (1) - Add a Finish.

Hard:
-01:02:54 (1) - Make this section exactly like Normal, with the break and Finish on the spinner. You don't necessarily have to do this, but it feels like the spinner goes for much too long.

Insane:
-00:46:88 (2,3,4,5) - Reverse these patterns, in location and where they are on the timeline. Also, on the new location for the slider, the starting point should have a Whistle and the endpoint should have a Clap, whereas only the last note of the triple should have a hitsound, and that's a Clap.

Why change it, you ask? You've done a decent job at syncing to the vocals thus far, why stop for this phrase? The slider-then-triple thing syncs up better than what you have right now, as it syncs exactly up to the vocals.
tl;dr: Switch it because it syncs with the vocals better this way.
HarryOrunitia
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HarryOrunitia
starred of course, but [Insane] needs a sb D:
Armin
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Mogsworth wrote:

Popping for a tad, will be happy to rebubble upon fixing.

All difficulties:
-01:07:686 - Add a kiai section that lasts until 01:21:700. Insane has it but it fits everywhere else. Fixed.

Normal:
-01:02:43 (1) - Add a Finish. Fixed.

Hard:
-01:02:54 (1) - Make this section exactly like Normal, with the break and Finish on the spinner. You don't necessarily have to do this, but it feels like the spinner goes for much too long. Fixed.

Insane:
-00:46:88 (2,3,4,5) - Reverse these patterns, in location and where they are on the timeline. Also, on the new location for the slider, the starting point should have a Whistle and the endpoint should have a Clap, whereas only the last note of the triple should have a hitsound, and that's a Clap. ""Fixed.""
Mogsy
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Armin
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Armin

Mogsworth wrote:

Oops, sorry, one last complaint.

Insane:
-01:02:54 (1) - End on 01:04:182, add a Finish. fixed.
-01:03:96 (1) - Remove, put in a break. Fixed, I guess. D:

This is to let the player have a short opportunity to rest and the fact that I'm not a fan of having the spinner there. Fix THAT and I'll rebubble. Sorry for not mentioning it earlier. x_X;;
Mogsy
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There we go, I'm a man of my word, here's your bubble~!
tieff
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Backgrounds/Images should be at a maximum 1024x768 pixels, though 800x600 recommended.

I'll ask Mogs to rebubble, after you fix it, and I'll rank it.
Armin
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tieff wrote:

Backgrounds/Images should be at a maximum 1024x768 pixels, though 800x600 recommended.

I'll ask Mogs to rebubble, after you fix it, and I'll rank it.
Fixed ~___~
Mogsy
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Rebubbled.
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