Mercurial wrote:

Agka, por qué no modeás también la otra taiko diff?

Thanks Nito for your CtB Mod n.n

flojera

Pretty old map~ Let's see if I find things.

[The Hospital]

00:59:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Use Whistle instead of clap, It sound much better imo,
00:34:051 - Break here seems weird. add a note to 00:36:175 00:38:299 00:40:423

[The Hell]

00:47:857 (3) - Better you reverse this (Ctrl+G) and make a blanket on the next note
00:49:980 (3) - ^
00:59:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Same in other diff

Oh and CTB map too! interesting..

[Deif's Meat Platter]

You should decrease the AR down by 1 tick, It feels much better with the lowish BPM

00:28:476 (7,8) - You should make these notes stand out, They are the high notes, You can put a jump or put in a interesting way up to you.
00:29:272 (5) - ^
00:22:104 (5,1) - Hyperdash / Jump definitely
00:32:989 (1) - ^
00:29:272 (5) - ^

Hope this helps~

— Overall

1. Quite a strange behaviour with kiai times. It differs only in Taiko Oni. You should consider either making Muzu kiai the same as Oni, or Oni's kiai the same as everywhere else. It just makes no real sense to set different kiai time only in one of the taikos.
2. You should try to add some combo colors. Standard ones are too bright and odd. Try these:
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 213,135,83
   Combo2 : 255,55,55
   Combo3 : 153,153,153

3. Tags: touche danny baranowsky deif catch the beat ctb imercurial coroquetz steam xbox 360 team meat
   Remove the last one, "meat", it already appears in Source field.

CtB

1. 01:08:034 (1) - This note in-game is red (hyperdashed or something), 01:08:963 - this too. But similar sound at 01:08:697 - is not, it would be nice to make a jump out of this one too maybe?
2. 01:12:281 (1,2,3,1) - The same here.

The Hell

1. Many encircles in this diff are done quite badly. You should pay more attention to this, esthetically this diff can look much better.
   For, example, 00:09:361 (2,3) - should look at least like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483173
   Try to revise all encircles and make them as good as you can.
2. 00:30:865 - Here, another rhythm can follow the music better (with 1/8s): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483180
   I still doubt if it will play good though, but try it, you may like this way.
3. 00:44:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo is massively overlapped (look: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483181 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483202), I'd suggest to rearrange it.
4. 01:10:157 (1,2) - This spacing looks like 1/2, but it is 1/4. This is confusing, so you'd better place it at 0.8x as everywhere later (e.g. 01:14:803 (2) - )
5. 01:24:494 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try this shape: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483203

Taiko Oni

1. 00:28:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo sounds weird, such a mix of double (ddkk) and single (dkdk) notes makes sense, but confuses. Optimal solution will be, in my opinion, changing 00:29:671 (12) - to kat. It still follows the music, compliments pitching up quite good and it is not so confusing.
2. 01:26:618 (287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) - such a kkkkkk spam sounds too noisy. It doesn't represent the song since it remains calm and bassy at that point. Place more dons there please.
3. 01:44:140 (1) - Spinners don't make the same sense in taiko as in standard. I just have to spam my keyboard with a loud hitsound when song is fading out? Definitely no. You'd better just end it like Muzukashii does. Delete everything after 01:42:016.

Taiko Muzukashii

1. 00:19:184 - Remove this and following green points. Soft sections are totally not recommended in taiko (see Taiko Guidelines) and sound horrible.
2. Also remove volume change on 00:29:273 (1) -
   I can understand the reason of volume changes in kiai and after it, but remove it from here.
   
3. And fucking CHANGE SV BACK TO 1.4. It is ridiculous to use 1.6 SV in Muzukashii. I don't know why Bakari has suggested it, but 1.6 SV is used only in high-bpm insane maps, when 1.4 is almost unreadable and too cluttered. It is totally not needed in Muzukashii, so revert Slider Velocity back to standard 1.4 please.

The Hospital

1. 00:42:547 (1) - Oh wow, this is quite bad! Such a fast speedup is too confusing for beginners. Try not to use anything beyond ~1.2x in the easiest diff. So, redo the kiai time with less speedup please.
2. Reduce OD and HP, they are too high, compared to AR.

Taris wrote:

Pretty old map~ Let's see if I find things.

[The Hospital]

00:59:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Use Whistle instead of clap, It sound much better imo, Hell answer.
00:34:051 - Break here seems weird. add a note to 00:36:175 00:38:299 00:40:423 I don't think so.

[The Hell]

00:47:857 (3) - Better you reverse this (Ctrl+G) and make a blanket on the next note I don't feel it fits.
00:49:980 (3) - ^ ^
00:59:538 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Same in other diff No, thanks. I like my hitsounding.

Hope this helps~

I'll wait for Deif response.

grumd wrote:

— Overall

1. Quite a strange behaviour with kiai times. It differs only in Taiko Oni. You should consider either making Muzu kiai the same as Oni, or Oni's kiai the same as everywhere else. It just makes no real sense to set different kiai time only in one of the taikos. I'll wait for my taiko guest mappers.
2. You should try to add some combo colors. Standard ones are too bright and odd. Try these:
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 213,135,83
   Combo2 : 255,55,55
   Combo3 : 153,153,153

   I like them, added.
3. Tags: touche danny baranowsky deif catch the beat ctb imercurial coroquetz steam xbox 360 team meat
   Remove the last one, "meat", it already appears in Source field.

Sorry but I won't, 'cuz the owners of the game are called "Team Meat".

The Hell

1. Many encircles in this diff are done quite badly. You should pay more attention to this, esthetically this diff can look much better.
   For, example, 00:09:361 (2,3) - should look at least like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483173 Done in another way.
   Try to revise all encircles and make them as good as you can.
2. 00:30:865 - Here, another rhythm can follow the music better (with 1/8s): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483180 I'll leave it as your suggestion, but I will change it again if someone poke it.
   I still doubt if it will play good though, but try it, you may like this way.
3. 00:44:671 (1,2,3,4,5) - This combo is massively overlapped (look: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483181 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483202), I'd suggest to rearrange it. Done
4. 01:10:157 (1,2) - This spacing looks like 1/2, but it is 1/4. This is confusing, so you'd better place it at 0.8x as everywhere later (e.g. 01:14:803 (2) - ) Done
5. 01:24:494 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try this shape: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/483203

Better :3


The Hospital

1. 00:42:547 (1) - Oh wow, this is quite bad! Such a fast speedup is too confusing for beginners. Try not to use anything beyond ~1.2x in the easiest diff. So, redo the kiai time with less speedup please. It's not that hard, and I like the challenge to the beginner players. Also, one of my newbie friends cleared this without problems.
2. Reduce OD and HP, they are too high, compared to AR. Since this is the most easiest diff, I'm not agree.

It's not meant to be a tricky difficult, just a Hard-ish. Thank you for your mods!

UPDATE: http://puu.sh/1mK6I (Fix'd 2 misplaced whistles as well)

@Mercu: Si cambias los colores de las notas, hazlo en mi diff también. Gracias!

HAPPY ANIVERSARY ♥

Oh wow, a year. o_o

Yep.

Oh Super meat Boy.

[General]
- Why is the (Cut Ver.) in the Title? It sounds like it just loops and this is not a reason to set (Cut Ver.) behind of it.
- You can derp me so much you want, but the Timing feels too early. With (at least) +7ms it's much more accurate.
- Uh.. derp, you missed the Combo Colours.

[The Hospital]
00:21:315 (1,2) - Make them curvy. Somehow I don't think that anchor sliders fits here with the Music.
00:25:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change it to this, you would hold the Distance and it has a better flow. http://puu.sh/1nf0Z
00:29:810 (1) - Add Finish.
00:32:996 (1) - Move it at x:256,y:280, since there is a Spinner before the Hitburst will overlap at the Circle and it could be hard to read for Beginner.
00:34:058 (2) - Move it at x:256,y:104, for a better transistion. Stacking is quite boring. :<
00:59:538 (x) - Reduce the Volume to 40 50%, it's much too loud now.
00:59:538 (1) - Add Whistle.
01:00:069 (2) - Move the 2nd white Slidertick at x:120,y:132 and the last at x:180,y:156. It's a better blanket. http://puu.sh/1nfbW
01:01:662 (1) - Whistle here.
01:03:786 (1) - Whistle at the Start.
01:05:910 (1) - Whistle here.
01:12:281 (1) - Why no Finish like at 01:08:034 (1) ? :<
01:14:936 (2) - The anchor slider is meh.. curve it.
01:19:184 (2) - The curve let it makes a bit crooked and crappy.. just make it like 01:17:060 (2).
01:31:396 (1) - I know that a Slider should end at the Downbeat, but if you extend it to 01:34:051, this sounds epic, especially because of the Finish.

[Muzukashii]
Remove the different Volumes and set it to 60%.
00:01:529 (4) - I don't like this Stream at all, and since the BPM is not very high, the Stream can be a Pain to play. I suggest to delete it.
00:03:653 (4) - ^
00:07:901 (4) - ^
00:14:412 (14) - k
00:16:536 (20) - k
00:32:996 (1) - k
00:36:182 (6,1) - k d is better.
00:38:306 (6,1) - ^
00:40:430 (6,1) - ^
00:41:492 (1,2,3,4,5) - derp.. I don't like this part very much.. delete the Circles from the blue Ticks.
00:46:271 (3) - k
00:51:049 (5,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Switch the Kats and Dons (So k d k d k d k d)
00:59:545 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Please for the sake of Creativity, do something more interesting here. :/
01:19:855 (9) - Remove it.
01:28:350 (9) - ^
01:34:987 (4) - ^
01:39:235 (4) - ^
01:34:058 (1) - Big K
01:36:182 (1) - ^
01:38:306 (1) - ^
01:40:430 (1) - ^

[Oni]
Nothing to say.. seriously, it's a great Diff. The only thing I have to complain is that your Diff is longe as the Muzukashii, but this is just my Opinion. It's fine for now.

[The Hell]
00:55:290 (1) - Whislte at the Start.
00:59:538 (1) - ^
01:01:662 (1) - ^
01:03:786 (1) - ^
01:05:910 (1) - ^
01:10:556 (2) - Move it to the white Tick, the Rhythm sounds way better as the current one.
01:14:936 (2) - ^
01:26:883 (7) - Replace it for Circles.
01:31:396 (1) - Same thing like in the Hospital. derp

Sorry that I cannot mod the CtB Diff. But I guess Nitojgrem will mod it somewhen. derp
I will recheck The Hell and Oni in some days, since I don't know that I am done here.

Stefan wrote:

Oh Super meat Boy.

[General]
- Why is the (Cut Ver.) in the Title? It sounds like it just loops and this is not a reason to set (Cut Ver.) behind of it. The full ver. just repeat the whole song again, that's why.
- You can derp me so much you want, but the Timing feels too early. With (at least) +7ms it's much more accurate. I'm not agree.
- Uh.. derp, you missed the Combo Colours. Cleared with grumd mod.

[The Hospital]
00:21:315 (1,2) - Make them curvy. Somehow I don't think that anchor sliders fits here with the Music. Nah, I like not curved sliders too. (Celldweller map)
00:25:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Change it to this, you would hold the Distance and it has a better flow. http://puu.sh/1nf0Z

SPOILER

348,248,25563,5,4,0:0:0
300,320,26094,1,8,0:0:0
212,336,26625,1,0,0:0:0
149,273,27156,2,0,B|99:248|75:194,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
75,106,28218,2,0,B|99:51|148:27,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,28,29279,1,8,0:0:0

I will think about it.
00:29:810 (1) - Add Finish. Sounds odd.
00:32:996 (1) - Move it at x:256,y:280, since there is a Spinner before the Hitburst will overlap at the Circle and it could be hard to read for Beginner. Clearly readable
00:34:058 (2) - Move it at x:256,y:104, for a better transistion. Stacking is quite boring. :< Sorry but no.
00:59:538 (x) - Reduce the Volume to 40 50%, it's much too loud now. Nah, thanks.
00:59:538 (1) - Add Whistle. Yey.
01:00:069 (2) - Move the 2nd white Slidertick at x:120,y:132 and the last at x:180,y:156. It's a better blanket. http://puu.sh/1nfbW Done in another way.
01:01:662 (1) - Whistle here. Nah.
01:03:786 (1) - Whistle at the Start. ^
01:05:910 (1) - Whistle here. ^
01:12:281 (1) - Why no Finish like at 01:08:034 (1) ? :< I don't like it.
01:14:936 (2) - The anchor slider is meh.. curve it. Meh.
01:19:184 (2) - The curve let it makes a bit crooked and crappy.. just make it like 01:17:060 (2). Okay then.
01:31:396 (1) - I know that a Slider should end at the Downbeat, but if you extend it to 01:34:051, this sounds epic, especially because of the Finish. Slider? Also, no.-

[The Hell]
00:55:290 (1) - Whislte at the Start.
00:59:538 (1) - ^
01:01:662 (1) - ^
01:03:786 (1) - ^
01:05:910 (1) - ^
01:10:556 (2) - Move it to the white Tick, the Rhythm sounds way better as the current one.
01:14:936 (2) - ^
01:26:883 (7) - Replace it for Circles.
01:31:396 (1) - Same thing like in the Hospital. derp

Nothing followed here.

Sorry that I cannot mod the CtB Diff. But I guess Nitojgrem will mod it somewhen. derp
I will recheck The Hell and Oni in some days, since I don't know that I am done here.

Thanks Stefan, I'll wait for my taiko mappers.

Thanks Coro, waiting for Touche.

grumd wrote:

Taiko Oni

1. 00:28:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This combo sounds weird, such a mix of double (ddkk) and single (dkdk) notes makes sense, but confuses. Optimal solution will be, in my opinion, changing 00:29:671 (12) - to kat. It still follows the music, compliments pitching up quite good and it is not so confusing. Pattern changed, I think it has more rhythm now.
2. 01:26:618 (287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294) - such a kkkkkk spam sounds too noisy. It doesn't represent the song since it remains calm and bassy at that point. Place more dons there please. Ready, thanks.
3. 01:44:140 (1) - Spinners don't make the same sense in taiko as in standard. I just have to spam my keyboard with a loud hitsound when song is fading out? Definitely no. You'd better just end it like Muzukashii does. Delete everything after 01:42:016. Deleted, putted a D in 01:44:140, thanks

This is a really nice mod for me, thank you so much grumd

Diffie: http://puu.sh/1nwgk

Stefan wrote:

Sorry that I cannot mod the CtB Diff. But I guess Nitojgrem will mod it somewhen. derp

You're blind, aren't you? I already did, derp... and I'm looking forward to see it ranked soon /o/

Stefan wrote:

[Oni]
Nothing to say.. seriously, it's a great Diff. The only thing I have to complain is that your Diff is longe as the Muzukashii, but this is just my Opinion. It's fine for now.

Awawawawawwwwwwwww ♥ Thank you a lot! I've waiting for the check for my diff, but thanks for your opinion :3

Do the IRC Modding


Bubbled

Mercurial wrote:

Me reí con eso.

Go <3

Yeeey! :3

Uii, late, although some mod ~


[The Hospital]

00:45:733 (3) - This "very" curve flows a bit bad imo. Following Sliderball is kinda mouse kicking to play and so I'd like to reduce the amount of bouncing in this Slidershape. Think if this could get good with your difficulty
00:59:538 - In general I quite feel that this part could use whistles to follow with the piano. Imo, the bg has very nice piano playing, which could be very good emphasized by whistles, try it ~
01:19:184 (2) - To be honest, I guess this Slidershape doesn't really look good. Nor does it play in a very other way than just a strange Slider would do


[The Hell]

00:27:414 (3) - This is quite no stacked perfectly with 1 http://puu.sh/1nVfb Just a nazi, but could be better fixing this
00:28:741 (3) - Same as above^
00:51:042 - Same for this part as in "The Hospital"
01:12:281 (1) - I guess you will want to add a finish here as you added it on the same sound on 01:08:034


Well, see if you can use something of this :3

Good luck ~

Konei wrote:

Uii, late, although some mod ~


[The Hospital]

00:45:733 (3) - This "very" curve flows a bit bad imo. Following Sliderball is kinda mouse kicking to play and so I'd like to reduce the amount of bouncing in this Slidershape. Think if this could get good with your difficulty I can't see anything wrong here.
00:59:538 - In general I quite feel that this part could use whistles to follow with the piano. Imo, the bg has very nice piano playing, which could be very good emphasized by whistles, try it ~ It was suggested before, and no.
01:19:184 (2) - To be honest, I guess this Slidershape doesn't really look good. Nor does it play in a very other way than just a strange Slider would do ^


[The Hell]

00:27:414 (3) - This is quite no stacked perfectly with 1 http://puu.sh/1nVfb Just a nazi, but could be better fixing this That's all what I got, and I don't like nazi things.
00:28:741 (3) - Same as above^ ^
00:51:042 - Same for this part as in "The Hospital" Same as Hospital.
01:12:281 (1) - I guess you will want to add a finish here as you added it on the same sound on 01:08:034 Nah, it was intentional.


Well, see if you can use something of this :3

Good luck ~

Thanks for your mod.

star and my message is not short

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Go rank it!

Stefan wrote:

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Go rank it!

Lol'd, thanks n.n

Waiting for a bat ;W;

~The Hell~

01:10:157 (1,2) - Confusing change of spacing.

Just that and I'll rank ^^

Spacing re-arranged.

Taiko mod~ (Oh god, no taiko combo colours on this ;_; Well I'll deal with it.)

[General]

1. Move up the character on the taiko background and center it? We can only see half of it :/

[Super Touche]

1. Why is the kiai time only different on this map? And it's on a quiet part, doesn't fit for a kiai time imo...
2. 00:13:343 (50) - Should be d instead of k imo. Fitting to the music and drums and fitting with the next pattern.
3. 00:19:449 (76,77,78,79,80) - ddkkd? Same reason, more fitting to the music imo.
4. 00:31:131 (121) - d? Fitting to the music and makes the whole pattern easier
5. 00:31:131 - After here it's 1/4 again.
6. 00:31:795 (126) - d? Same reason than before.
7. 00:55:556 (220,221,222) - ddk? dkk doesn't fit at all
8. 00:56:352 (224,225,226,227,228) - kkddk? Still the same reason, doesn't fit at all.
9. 00:57:680 (231,232,233) - ddk? Same reason
10. 01:26:618 (387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - kdddkddd? Better pattern and sounds better too.

[CQ Muzu]

1. Please use SV 1,4 instead of 1,6. Not only because I think 1,6 is ugly and should be unrankable but because the Oni has 1,4 and a Muzu faster than an Oni doesn't make any sense.
2. Remove the Soft and the 40% volume control points please. And I think you should make the sound louder (75%~90%) it's too much quiet.
3. 00:00:600 (1) - Finish here? Because of the obvious drum sound.
4. 00:02:724 (1) - ^
5. 00:04:848 (1) - ^
6. 00:06:972 (1) - ^
7. 00:34:051 - to 00:42:547 - Same here for the finishes on claps.
8. 00:51:042 - 01:08:034 - It's okay to make a slow break but it's way too long and boring. I think you should start to add more notes at 00:59:538 -
9. 01:33:520 - to 01:42:016 - same again about the finishes on claps

By the way I highly doubt that my taiko mod is enough, you should have a check from at least 1 good taiko modder. Please.

Call me once this is ready again.

Thank you, Andrea :3

Kurosanyan wrote:

[Super Touche]

1. Why is the kiai time only different on this map? And it's on a quiet part, doesn't fit for a kiai time imo... Fixed, thanks
2. 00:13:343 (50) - Should be d instead of k imo. Fitting to the music and drums and fitting with the next pattern. ^
3. 00:19:449 (76,77,78,79,80) - ddkkd? Same reason, more fitting to the music imo.^
4. 00:31:131 (121) - d? Fitting to the music and makes the whole pattern easierI think k is better, cuz i changed the pattern (check the down line) and fits for the music by me
5. 00:31:131 - After here it's 1/4 again. Fixed, sorry for the incorrect pattern
6. 00:31:795 (126) - d? Same reason than before. Fixed, thanks
7. 00:55:556 (220,221,222) - ddk? dkk doesn't fit at all Fixed, thanks
8. 00:56:352 (224,225,226,227,228) - kkddk? Still the same reason, doesn't fit at all. You know, it's better, thanks for it.
9. 00:57:680 (231,232,233) - ddk? Same reason I make this with ddk before this mod, so... i use ddk (?
10. 01:26:618 (387,388,389,390,391,392,393,394) - kdddkddd? Better pattern and sounds better too. I use kdddkkdd, so i do this change and i change a note too, thanks

Ready sir, thanks to Kurosanyan for this nice mod :3

Diffie: http://puu.sh/1oMEM

Mercurial wrote:

Al fín vieja.

Parece que me ganaras en rank ;__________;

all mods accepted~

We're ready to go.

Mercurial wrote:

We're ready to go.

Roger, I'm here for that.

Ranked~

First!

<3 /me loves Andrea

Oh yeah!! /O/

yey Rank <3

Deif wrote:

Oh yeah!! /O/

Gratz Deif, Touche and CoroQuetz :3

Bien gil.

Felicitaciones Guacho! :3

My first ranked diff ;W; *cries*

ahh sweet super meat boy~

congratz on the rank

Felicidades c:

Muchas gracias gente <3

Felicidades

day of my birthday <33

WHY I DIDN'T KNEW IT WAS BUBBLED?
WHAT IS THIS.

Congratulation Mercurial!

Congrats~

Yay <3

Congratulations Mercurial and Deif.

Wasn't rebubbled before rank, what is this

I don't see anything wrong with the ranking process of this beatmap o.o