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-Neipezi

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-Neipezi 2012-10-16T09:41:35+00:00

Hi M4M~
aiaiclala eaters' Modding Queue [m4m available]

[General]
BPM Offset a losing feel..
Somehow I seem to feel the high places.

[Normal]
CS -1??
00:35:627 (3) - NC?
00:39:056 (3) - NC?
01:00:699 (1) - Slide until 01:00:485 increasing boneunge What about you?
01:15:056 (1) - Slide starting point Finish Add?
01:15:913 (2) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
01:17:199 (3,4) - Whistle Add?
01:18:056 (5) - Slide starting point Whistle and End Finish add?
01:20:199 (4) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
01:25:342 (6) - NC?
01:39:057 (6) - ^?
02:21:056 (4) - Slide endpoint Clap Add?
02:25:342 (1) - Slide starting point
02:32:199 (1) - Finish Add?
02:33:913 (5) - NC and Whistle Add?
03:03:056 (1,1) - Finish Add?
03:08:199 (1,1) - Whistle Add?
03:11:627 (1) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
03:13:342 (1) - Whistle Add?
03:15:056 (1) - ^?
03:16:770 (1) - ^?
03:18:485 (1) - ^?

[yuca]
Is it hard?
00:20:199 (1) - Slide starting point Finish and End Finish add?
00:25:342 (4) - NC and Slide starting point Whistle Add?
00:28:770 (5) - ^?
00:39:056 (6) - ^?
01:50:627 (4) - NC?
01:57:913 (6) - NC?
02:08:199 (5) - NC?
02:27:056 (4) - NC?
02:33:913 (4) - NC?
03:03:056 (1,2,1,2) - Normal -> 03:03:056 (1,1) - Finish Add?

[Dream End]
01:00:592 (1) - Spinner is too short.

I'd like to speak to a slide.
01:08:413 (1,2,3) - The distance between nodes far away.

01:10:127 (1,2,3) - ^
01:37:342 (7) - NC?
02:02:199 (6) - NC?
02:09:913 (1,1,1,1,1) - wow~

02:11:627 (1) - Finishi Add?
02:25:342 (1) - Slide starting point Finish Add?
02:32:199 (1) - ^
02:33:913 (7) - NC?

Nice maps

Ranked hope.~~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-10-16T09:42:09+00:00

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Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-16T11:39:31+00:00

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-Kirito wrote:
Hi M4M~
aiaiclala eaters' Modding Queue [m4m available]

[General]
BPM Offset a losing feel..
Somehow I seem to feel the high places.

[Normal]
CS -1?? would be too hard for the easiest diff
I think note number is too small if i use NC on every long white line so I kept some NC stuff
also whistle using with clap could be noisy so I didn't add too much, finishes added though
00:35:627 (3) - NC?
00:39:056 (3) - NC?
01:00:699 (1) - Slide until 01:00:485 increasing boneunge What about you?
01:15:056 (1) - Slide starting point Finish Add?
01:15:913 (2) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
01:17:199 (3,4) - Whistle Add?
01:18:056 (5) - Slide starting point Whistle and End Finish add?
01:20:199 (4) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
01:25:342 (6) - NC?
01:39:057 (6) - ^?
02:21:056 (4) - Slide endpoint Clap Add?
02:25:342 (1) - Slide starting point
02:32:199 (1) - Finish Add?
02:33:913 (5) - NC and Whistle Add?
03:03:056 (1,1) - Finish Add?
03:08:199 (1,1) - Whistle Add?
03:11:627 (1) - Slide starting point Whistle Add?
03:13:342 (1) - Whistle Add?
03:15:056 (1) - ^?
03:16:770 (1) - ^?
03:18:485 (1) - ^?

[yuca]
I'll ask about her idea
Is it hard?
00:20:199 (1) - Slide starting point Finish and End Finish add?
00:25:342 (4) - NC and Slide starting point Whistle Add?
00:28:770 (5) - ^?
00:39:056 (6) - ^?
01:50:627 (4) - NC?
01:57:913 (6) - NC?
02:08:199 (5) - NC?
02:27:056 (4) - NC?
02:33:913 (4) - NC?
03:03:056 (1,2,1,2) - Normal -> 03:03:056 (1,1) - Finish Add?

[Dream End]
01:00:592 (1) - Spinner is too short. I'd like to speak to a slide. don't know how to make it long enough.. It's not aganst the guidelines right now though
01:08:413 (1,2,3) - The distance between nodes far away. I like it hard > <
01:10:127 (1,2,3) - ^
01:37:342 (7) - NC? fixed
02:02:199 (6) - NC? fixed
02:09:913 (1,1,1,1,1) - wow~ > < my favorite part
02:11:627 (1) - Finishi Add? fixed
02:25:342 (1) - Slide starting point Finish Add? fixed
02:32:199 (1) - ^ fixed
02:33:913 (7) - NC? fixed

Nice maps
Ranked hope.~~

thanks for modding

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-16T11:40:47+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
star

thanks

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2012-10-16T11:42:02+00:00

Forum mod since you keep DISCONNECTING lol.

General:
"370.ogg" I don't think that this file fits your music lol. It sounds really weird wth xD I think you should remove it.

Dream End:
00:00:270 - Maybe start spinner here? Similar to Yuca's.
00:16:984 (2,3) - I think that maybe don't have 2 and keep the same rhythm. Since this is still relatively "calm" part of the song, and not much is in the background, would be best to keep subtle.
00:18:699 (2,3) - ^
00:40:770 (1) - Continue with the clap pattern here? When you stop the clap, it feels kind of sudden. Since the music hasn't changed much, I don't think you should get rid of the claps yet.
02:46:556 (3) - Try this rhythmn, sounds kind of good

03:10:556 (5,6) - I still think this is better as just normal ^^
03:16:985 (2,3) - ^

yuca:
Nice diff, but I think some parts in the beginning are hard to hear. Maybe starting 00:20:199 (1) - you way to raise volume a little.

Normal:
Fine, maybe add the spinner at beginning too!

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-16T11:57:41+00:00

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yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:
Forum mod since you keep DISCONNECTING lol.

General:
"370.ogg" I don't think that this file fits your music lol. It sounds really weird wth xD I think you should remove it.
i don't know.. some guys says this is epic, some don't, i'll ask more people about this one lol
Dream End:
00:00:270 - Maybe start spinner here? Similar to Yuca's. ok
00:16:984 (2,3) - I think that maybe don't have 2 and keep the same rhythm. Since this is still relatively "calm" part of the song, and not much is in the background, would be best to keep subtle. dbf said they are sweet so i kept them on purpose > < if others mention this again i'll turn them into sliders
00:18:699 (2,3) - ^
00:40:770 (1) - Continue with the clap pattern here? When you stop the clap, it feels kind of sudden. Since the music hasn't changed much, I don't think you should get rid of the claps yet. nice point
02:46:556 (3) - Try this rhythmn, sounds kind of good kinda good
03:10:556 (5,6) - I still think this is better as just normal ^^ this is also controversial.. I'll collect more opinions
03:16:985 (2,3) - ^

yuca:
Nice diff, but I think some parts in the beginning are hard to hear. Maybe starting 00:20:199 (1) - you way to raise volume a little.

Normal:
Fine, maybe add the spinner at beginning too! ok!

thank you dude

yeahyeahyeahhh

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yeahyeahyeahhh 2012-10-16T12:12:07+00:00

NP baka net

y u c a

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y u c a 2012-10-16T13:53:15+00:00

i changed volume from 00:20:199 (1) -

no need NC there and whistle and finish sound weird.
so i didnt change those mod

thanks mod guys xD

/me hugs yyy >3 <

@飯 fixed file here~

http://puu.sh/1frBa
and Lead-in should be 2! (insane diff and normal diff both ne!)

Wafu

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Wafu 2012-10-17T12:30:01+00:00

Hi

M4M (Your queue)
[Dream End]

00:43:127 (3,4,5,6) - This is unconsistent and doesn't fit the map so resnap it properly.
00:44:199 (6) - NC here for consistency
00:44:842 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC is unnecessary and doesn't fit at all
01:08:413 (1,2,3) - Changing distance snap on this is unnecessary, use the same snap like 01:07:342 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:10:127 (1,2,3) - ^ (Don't tell me it's "pattern", I'll still say it's unnecessary and sudden)
01:11:627 (6) - NC because new instrumental starts
01:28:449 (8,9,1) - Distance snap..
01:50:842 (4,1) - ^
02:46:770 (4,5,6) - ^... totally unnecessary
02:49:770 (2) - Move on 424;204 to keep consistency with 02:47:627 (1,2)
03:00:913 (4) - Since it's kiai time, you can already change this snap, but also avoid overlaps and keep the same distance between sliders so move this on 80;112
03:03:485 (2) - Move on 264;348 to keep the same distance between sliders
03:03:699 (3) - 364;308 ^
03:04:556 (4) - Delete, copy 03:04:342 (3), make CTRL+H, CTRL+J and move on 304;104 ^ and for symmetry

I would use progressive volume on start spinner.

[yuca]

Kiai is missing!
Other is fine

[Normal]

Well.. normal is so linear... and there is missing some blanketing.

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-17T15:36:11+00:00

dragonxcz wrote:
Hi
M4M (Your queue)
[Dream End]
uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play
00:43:127 (3,4,5,6) - This is unconsistent and doesn't fit the map so resnap it properly. decreased a little
00:44:199 (6) - NC here for consistency
00:44:842 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC is unnecessary and doesn't fit at all no, this part needs to be highlighted for attention
01:08:413 (1,2,3) - Changing distance snap on this is unnecessary, use the same snap like 01:07:342 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:10:127 (1,2,3) - ^ (Don't tell me it's "pattern", I'll still say it's unnecessary and sudden)
01:11:627 (6) - NC because new instrumental startsfixed
01:28:449 (8,9,1) - Distance snap..
01:50:842 (4,1) - ^ bigger distance before bar line is cool, and fun to play
02:46:770 (4,5,6) - ^... totally unnecessary i don't see any problem here, just trying to make it look better
02:49:770 (2) - Move on 424;204 to keep consistency with 02:47:627 (1,2) fixed
03:00:913 (4) - Since it's kiai time, you can already change this snap, but also avoid overlaps and keep the same distance between sliders so move this on 80;112
03:03:485 (2) - Move on 264;348 to keep the same distance between sliders no i'm increasing distance here on purpose, crescendo part
03:03:699 (3) - 364;308 ^
03:04:556 (4) - Delete, copy 03:04:342 (3), make CTRL+H, CTRL+J and move on 304;104 ^ and for symmetry this is ok but doesn't seem better so I'll leave it as it is

I would use progressive volume on start spinner. ok

[yuca]

Kiai is missing!
Other is fine

[Normal]

Well.. normal is so linear... and there is missing some blanketing. i think what works is the times i break, not the length of the breaks, i think it's fine right now

DarkDunskin

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DarkDunskin 2012-10-17T17:44:55+00:00

Hi, an uxepected Mod 4 Mod for you~

[Generel]

1. Either Remove "370.ogg" or use it on every diff. I'd remove it because it sounds rather odd.
[Normal]
- 1. 00:33:913 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
  2. 01:28:770 (1) - ^
  3. 01:42:485 (1) - ^
  4. 01:56:199 (1) - ^
  5. 02:39:056 (1) - ^
  6. 02:59:627 (1) - Add Finish.
  Nothing else to say, Normal is perfect.
  
  [yuca]
  - 1. 01:10:556 (6) - This doesn't look right somehow, move it one grid down.
    2. 01:14:199 (7,1) - This isn't stacked correctly, disable grid snap to do so.
    3. 01:28:770 (1) - Add Finish?
    4. 02:10:449 (2,1) - Spacing isn't correct. I don't see a good reason to have a Jump here either :/
    Looks cool too~
    
    [Dream End]
    - 00:09:485 (4,5) - Move them 2 grids up.
      01:00:592 (1) - This Spinner is too short (below 1000 Points in auto-mode), which is unrankable as I remember.
      01:15:056 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart?
      01:28:770 (1) - ^
      01:56:199 (1) - ^
      02:16:342 (3) - Slidertail crosses lifebar, move it a bit down.
      02:47:092 (5,6) - Please don't stack them like this.
      Okay that's all I found.
      I had to look rly close to find something, well done~

Wafu

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Wafu 2012-10-17T18:11:22+00:00

Heatherfield wrote:
uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play

Well.. It's not for FC, but for consistency and sensibility, but okay. But it's quite sad that people don't want to undestand this.

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-18T02:05:50+00:00

dragonxcz wrote:
Heatherfield wrote:
uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play
Well.. It's not for FC, but for consistency and sensibility, but okay. But it's quite sad that people don't want to undestand this.

Mapping is not just converting a song into a beatmap, it's kinda like some re-creation. Some mappers tend to make Jpn styled map, I just don't, that's it.

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-18T02:20:03+00:00

why can't i quote DarkDunskin's post o___o
anyway, almost fixed everything, the spinner is ok i think since my auto had 1000 on it, thx for modding!

Wafu

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Wafu 2012-10-18T05:30:14+00:00

Heatherfield wrote:
Mapping is not just converting a song into a beatmap, it's kinda like some re-creation. Some mappers tend to make Jpn styled map, I just don't, that's it.

Well I just mean that if a map don't fit and has these unnecessary things, they has very often low rating. Exactly me, if a map has unnecessary things I rate something between 1-8, if it's without unnecessary things, I rate 9-10 and I don't think I'm only one who does this, so then don't cry you have bad ranking of beatmap :3

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-18T05:45:46+00:00

dragonxcz wrote:
Heatherfield wrote:
Mapping is not just converting a song into a beatmap, it's kinda like some re-creation. Some mappers tend to make Jpn styled map, I just don't, that's it.
Well I just mean that if a map don't fit and has these unnecessary things, they has very often low rating. Exactly me, if a map has unnecessary things I rate something between 1-8, if it's without unnecessary things, I rate 9-10 and I don't think I'm only one who does this, so then don't cry you have bad ranking of beatmap :3

feel free to rate 1 or whatever when this get ranked, i don't give a soar.

wantuole

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wantuole 2012-10-18T06:32:15+00:00

:3 from your queue
for M4M
中文mod？
[Generel]
Title？
第一个大写每个单词空格
00:00:270 (1) - 都从00:00:913开始更好
这种soft向的Nor难度不需要这么直来直去
[Normal]
00:21:056~00:32:199 长白还是来点音效的好soft whistle
00:44:199 (1) - 蓝线上的whistle remove
00:43:342 (3) - 感觉这个copy设计有点偏向右边,这个3面向左边的00:44:199 (1)
01:55:770 (6,1) - 只需要短kiai喷泉的话 kiai可以更短点不要牵扯到1了
02:06:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 太拥挤了我觉得还ok 但很显然我不说别人也会挑
02:46:770 (2) - ctrl+g 这里掉头不好玩
[yuca]
整体音效不错
00:06:806 (1) - 很长的转圈后不适合那么早的出现note
00:09:485 (5) - 想象中应该适合00:06:806 (1,2) 这样间距的大跳会比较一致
00:17:413 (2,3,4) - 应该有其他主意,我觉得00:16:770 (1,2,3,4) 这个就直接上下反转更好
00:25:342 (4,5) - 随着音效这两个滑条形状应该相近
00:26:627 (6) - 嗯~ 这个才应该是直的
00:47:199 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5个note叠加的偏移会比你预想的要远太多了.靠近前面的9一点
01:24:699 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - 设计上太直爽了但是音乐缺没有,旋转-15~30°左右给人点向左下移动的感觉
01:54:485 (6) -

设计可能是需要很小巧不过我感觉有点短小 6的end在01:54:806这里结束会更好 01:54:913 (7) 这个也没必要设计在中间位子
02:07:342 (3,4) - 渐升的感觉旋转30~45° 拉大间距

SPOILER

[Dream End]
cs-1？感觉这样会更好~~（鬼畜的我自重~~
01:00:592 (1) - atuo转不到2000是unrank的
01:02:413 (5,6) - 改成三连
01:55:663 (3) - 保持前后距离一致
02:06:485 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 这里sv渐渐减小会更好
02:15:485 (2) - ctrl+g 看起来是没问题还是改改好实际玩起来右边有点太空荡了
02:46:770 (4,5,6) - spacing

就这些

good luck and star~

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-18T07:31:56+00:00

SPOILER

wantuole wrote:
:3 from your queue
for M4M
中文mod？
[Generel]
Title？
第一个大写每个单词空格原曲名就是这样
00:00:270 (1) - 都从00:00:913开始更好声音大概是377ms的时候开始的不过蓝线起不太好就提前了
这种soft向的Nor难度不需要这么直来直去还好吧也不算soft向啊
[Normal]
00:21:056~00:32:199 长白还是来点音效的好soft whistle ok
00:44:199 (1) - 蓝线上的whistle remove 没必要吧,这声音本来就很小了
00:43:342 (3) - 感觉这个copy设计有点偏向右边,这个3面向左边的00:44:199 (1) 改了下后面slider的位置

01:55:770 (6,1) - 只需要短kiai喷泉的话 kiai可以更短点不要牵扯到1了保持自己diff kiai一致而已防挑
02:06:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 太拥挤了我觉得还ok 但很显然我不说别人也会挑没什么更好的摆法就这样吧,而且实际打起来object消失很快
02:46:770 (2) - ctrl+g 这里掉头不好玩感觉没所谓
[yuca] 这个其实是日本人的gd..我回头翻给她好了
整体音效不错
00:06:806 (1) - 很长的转圈后不适合那么早的出现note
00:09:485 (5) - 想象中应该适合00:06:806 (1,2) 这样间距的大跳会比较一致
00:17:413 (2,3,4) - 应该有其他主意,我觉得00:16:770 (1,2,3,4) 这个就直接上下反转更好
00:25:342 (4,5) - 随着音效这两个滑条形状应该相近
00:26:627 (6) - 嗯~ 这个才应该是直的
00:47:199 (1,2,3,4,1) - 5个note叠加的偏移会比你预想的要远太多了.靠近前面的9一点
01:24:699 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - 设计上太直爽了但是音乐缺没有,旋转-15~30°左右给人点向左下移动的感觉
01:54:485 (6) - 设计可能是需要很小巧不过我感觉有点短小 6的end在01:54:806这里结束会更好 01:54:913 (7) 这个也没必要设计在中间位子
02:07:342 (3,4) - 渐升的感觉旋转30~45° 拉大间距
[Dream End]
cs-1？感觉这样会更好~~（鬼畜的我自重~~ 这个风格的海猫map全都是大圈,其实是沿袭而已,我也觉得中圈稍微好看点不过我自己都hid不掉还是算了
01:00:592 (1) - atuo转不到2000是unrank的早改成1000了吧
Auto must achieve at least 1000 bonus points on spinners and the object following the spinner must not be visible before the spinner starts.
01:02:413 (5,6) - 改成三连这里节奏比较散感觉没必要说起来其实12 34之间有音 56之间还真没
01:55:663 (3) - 保持前后距离一致感觉这样好读一点而已往上稍微挪一点好了
02:06:485 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 这里sv渐渐减小会更好渐小好看一点但不合音乐倒不如把slider翻过来sv加大,但是这样又不符合被抄的铁斧原梗所以还是懒得改了233
02:15:485 (2) - ctrl+g 看起来是没问题还是改改好实际玩起来右边有点太空荡了换了个位置拖到右边了
02:46:770 (4,5,6) - spacing ..不太明白这个为什么好几个人说改成stack好了

就这些
good luck and star~

thx for modding

Ibuki Suika

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Ibuki Suika 2012-10-18T15:39:48+00:00

不rank赔我一倍kd啊

abalee

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abalee 2012-10-26T10:02:27+00:00

yuca那邊好像有一個 unsnapped note...
flow差點...不過也許是我要求太高了 Orz
其他沒什麼了...

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-26T10:58:05+00:00

abalee wrote:
yuca那邊好像有一個 unsnapped note...
flow差點...不過也許是我要求太高了 Orz
其他沒什麼了...

resnapped
稍微调整了一下insane和normal
offset都往前推了一小节,都给开头spinner加了渐强.
开头改了几个slider形状另外改小了sb音效的音量

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-27T01:22:43+00:00

Hi ~ Heatherfield ~ a super old map ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

02:11:627 - Unsnapped kiai time end point.
03:20:627 - ^
yuca's diff no kiai time,are you sure?

[Dream End]

01:00:592 (1) - This spinner too short and suddenly,how about change a slider?
01:27:270 (5) - Add new combo,looks better.
01:36:913 - Why not add a circle? follow with music.
02:31:985 - ^
01:47:199 (1,2,3) - Increase spacing or change a repeat slider.
02:00:913 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:663 (3) - Remove this circle,much better to here,because confused spacing and no fitting.
02:44:627 (9) - Add new combo,too long combo IMO.
02:52:127 (6) - ^,spacing change to here.
03:12:485 (5) - ^
03:04:556 (4,1) - Change same spacing.
03:07:235 (6) - Remove thi circle,sound better to me.
03:18:056 (1) - Remove short new combo.

[yuca]

OD+1 much better.
Change AudioLeadIn to 2000.
03:20:627 (1) - I suggest don't stack this circle on slider end,
because of hitbrust hidden by circle,it's kinda suddenly.

[Normal]

00:33:270 (4) - Move 1/2 rhythm later,much better.
01:13:770 (1,1,1) - Remove short new combo.
02:04:770 (5,8) - Make a symmetry to here.
02:11:413 (2) - I guess if change a circle on 02:11:628,it's more easy playable.

That's all ~ Kinda nice for old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-27T03:24:39+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Heatherfield ~ a super old map ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

02:11:627 - Unsnapped kiai time end point. fixed
03:20:627 - ^ fixed
yuca's diff no kiai time,are you sure?

[Dream End]

01:00:592 (1) - This spinner too short and suddenly,how about change a slider? though over and over again, ok changed
01:27:270 (5) - Add new combo,looks better. fixed
01:36:913 - Why not add a circle? follow with music. intended to be like this
02:31:985 - ^
01:47:199 (1,2,3) - Increase spacing or change a repeat slider. increased some spacing, too big would be bad looking
02:00:913 (1,2,3) - ^
01:55:663 (3) - Remove this circle,much better to here,because confused spacing and no fitting. i got a great way to fix this one
02:44:627 (9) - Add new combo,too long combo IMO. fixed
02:52:127 (6) - ^,spacing change to here. changed spacing but i think new combo is kinda weird.. i 'll keep as it is
03:12:485 (5) - ^
03:04:556 (4,1) - Change same spacing. fixed
03:07:235 (6) - Remove thi circle,sound better to me. i'll reserve this one
03:18:056 (1) - Remove short new combo. this part has crescendo and this note is the start of repating so i think this one makes sense

[yuca]
I'll ask for her ideas about this

OD+1 much better.
Change AudioLeadIn to 2000.
03:20:627 (1) - I suggest don't stack this circle on slider end,
because of hitbrust hidden by circle,it's kinda suddenly.

[Normal]

00:33:270 (4) - Move 1/2 rhythm later,much better. ok, also changed to circles
01:13:770 (1,1,1) - Remove short new combo. removed second and third, kept first because these three notes are for different sound
02:04:770 (5,8) - Make a symmetry to here. fixed
02:11:413 (2) - I guess if change a circle on 02:11:628,it's more easy playable.i know it's kinda hard here but change to note feels weird... i think i'll keep this one

That's all ~ Kinda nice for old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Last edited by Heatherfield 2012-10-27T03:55:36+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

y u c a

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y u c a 2012-10-27T03:54:28+00:00

i asked to frineds and random people to test play.
almost people said its fine

so i keep 03:20:627 (1) -

changed leadin to 2000~

thanks mod

http://puu.sh/1ja7p

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-27T04:55:24+00:00

Normal diff kiai time should end to 03:20:627 ?

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-27T05:00:18+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Normal diff kiai time should end to 03:20:627 ?

it looks the same though.. anyway fixed for consistency

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-27T05:13:18+00:00

OK ~ Much better now ~

Here you go :3

Aurele

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Aurele 2012-10-27T05:15:16+00:00

Oh shiet.
That map♥

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-27T05:16:06+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
OK ~ Much better now ~

Here you go :3

thank you very much

ok let's go

Niva

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Niva 2012-10-28T01:08:23+00:00

[General]

-> Hmm, it's better imo if your purple combo color is made darker (to extinguish it more from the pink) - try R:191 G:126 B:231~
-> Use PreviewTime: 159000 for more accurate preview point (sounds on the beat correctly)

[Normal]

-> Drag the two breaks' start to 02:21:913 and 02:28:770 manually (:

[yuca]

-> AR +1? (unlike Dream End, for me it's much better to read this diff in AR8...)

02:38:413 (7) - New combo (because of the spacing change)? Also for me personally it's better if this slider is made facing right...
03:10:556 (3,4,5) - Err, it's 1/6 here, use repeating 1/6 slider instead...

[Dream End]

-> AR +1? (AR9 may feel to fast, this one is up to you though)

00:27:056 (1) - Due to stacking's nature, move a bit upward (~x:76 y:248) so (1,2) shows correct spacing in play mode~

01:00:699 (1) - Hmm, I get your point here but this slider definitely can be made tidier though:

SPOILER

69,354,60699,6,0,B|72:338|69:322|69:322|77:302|77:302|61:302|61:302|77:286|77:286|61:286|61:286|77:270|77:270|61:270|61:270|77:254|77:254|61:254|61:254|69:235|69:235|66:217|69:200,1,240.000009155274

01:21:913 (1,1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like how this looks in play mode orz... Can't suggest a better pattern though >_<

My main concern is 03:10:556 on yuca's diff, and the combo colors...
Otherwise it's fine (:

y u c a

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y u c a 2012-10-28T09:00:47+00:00

fixed new combo

1/6 didnt fix.
because i never used 1/6 in this map.
its strange to play

also didnt fix AR too!

thaks mod

http://puu.sh/1jCTj

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Garven 2012-10-28T09:05:03+00:00

@Niva:

yuca asked me to take a quick look, and having a 1/6 snap there would play awkwardly considering the rhythms used for the majority of the rest of the map, along with the cellos in the background still providing the backbone rhythm with the rhythm she used, I'm okay with it at 1/4.

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James 2012-10-28T09:14:13+00:00

@ niva

about AR +1. its your preference. it doesnt needed to be followed if the mapper preferred not adding another tick to the AR since that is basically the mapper's discresion (wrong word?)

1/6 is weird as well. agreed with garven (for the first time LOL)

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Heatherfield 2012-10-28T09:14:25+00:00

Niva wrote:
[General]

-> Hmm, it's better imo if your purple combo color is made darker (to extinguish it more from the pink) - try R:191 G:126 B:231~ cool
-> Use PreviewTime: 159000 for more accurate preview point (sounds on the beat correctly) ok

[Normal]

-> Drag the two breaks' start to 02:21:913 and 02:28:770 manually (: fixed

[yuca]

-> AR +1? (unlike Dream End, for me it's much better to read this diff in AR8...)

02:38:413 (7) - New combo (because of the spacing change)? Also for me personally it's better if this slider is made facing right...
03:10:556 (3,4,5) - Err, it's 1/6 here, use repeating 1/6 slider instead...
[Dream End]

-> AR +1? (AR9 may feel to fast, this one is up to you though) AR9 is too fast for 140bpm imo..
00:27:056 (1) - Due to stacking's nature, move a bit upward (~x:76 y:248) so (1,2) shows correct spacing in play mode~ nice one!
01:00:699 (1) - Hmm, I get your point here but this slider definitely can be made tidier though: great
SPOILER
69,354,60699,6,0,B|72:338|69:322|69:322|77:302|77:302|61:302|61:302|77:286|77:286|61:286|61:286|77:270|77:270|61:270|61:270|77:254|77:254|61:254|61:254|69:235|69:235|66:217|69:200,1,240.000009155274
01:21:913 (1,1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like how this looks in play mode orz... Can't suggest a better pattern though >_<
chaged to something great

My main concern is 03:10:556 on yuca's diff, and the combo colors...
Otherwise it's fine (:

great mod, thank you very much!
also updated yuca's fixes

Last edited by Heatherfield 2012-10-28T09:22:01+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Niva

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Niva 2012-10-28T09:21:27+00:00

Well, it's fine though~ (talked to Garven in-game, and yep AR is just my preference, I'm just suggesting though :3)
I also understand the reasons above (:

Rechecking this now, please wait...

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EDIT: Submitted 16 Sep 2011 - after more than a year, ranked now xD

Ranked ~

Heatherfield

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Heatherfield 2012-10-28T09:34:55+00:00

\o/

y u c a

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y u c a 2012-10-28T09:37:55+00:00

yattaaaaaa♪ヾ(･∀･`*)ﾉomedetooo

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