1. 02:27:913 (4) - Break after this? Unless you wanted the hp drain to go down and for the player to pick it up.
2. 03:06:485 (1) - I think using whistles from here to the end sounds nice.

1. 01:01:342 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The placement looks really random. Maybe change it up a bit.
2. 01:08:842 - Having nothing here breaks the flow. Maybe add a note here with whistle or change the previous pattern up a bit.
3. 01:10:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it sounds better if u follow the previous hitsound pattern. Whistle on 1, 4, and the end of 5.
4. 01:58:127 (1) to 02:01:342 (4) - The beat placement looks really ugly here, like you just placed them anywhere.
5. 02:28:770 (1) to 02:31:770 (13) - ^
6. 02:56:413 (2,4,6,8) - Make these aligned like 1,3,5,7. Plays better imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/434799
7. 02:59:627 (1) to 03:11:199 (8) - Not sure if this was intentional, but the patterns just go in a circle during this part. I never thought excessive circle patterns were that interesting. This is just my opinion though, you might really like going in a circle like this.
8. 03:17:413 (1) to 03:20:306 (1) - Beat placement looks random again.

James wrote:

nice map

y u c a wrote:

if nice map, go play with hidden and get S

James wrote:

bad map

y u c a wrote:

sry no change them

i didnt add circle because some part need own sound.
if add circle,just play 4/4 rhythm. soo boring
also last spinner is really weird. 03:20:627 (1) - have sound. if add spiner, it will ne no sound.

anyway thanks modding also thanks baka飯 to traslate!

• 00:41:627 (3) - suggestion
  SPOILER

  
  01:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a triangle 01:31:770 (5) - move to x:60 y:233
  SPOILER

  
  02:21:913 (x) - add a note
  02:28:770 (x) - ^
  02:37:985 (3) - move to x:439 y:138

• 00:00:270 (1) - 他２つの難易度と同じで00:03:699 (1) - から？
  00:06:806 (1) - スピン直後なのでもう少し中央寄りでもいいかもしれません
  01:08:413 (2,5) - どちらかに形を統一したほうが綺麗だと思いました
  01:48:913 (6) - ここは01:47:627 (2) - このスライダーをコピー＆左右反転して置くと綺麗に見えると思います（その場合01:49:342 (1) - は削除）

• 00:40:342 (6) - make length into a half.
  01:00:592 (1) - too short
  02:51:270 (2) - hidden by score bar
  SPOILER

  
  03:20:306 (1) - finish at slider end

jamxx wrote:

yuca

• 00:00:270 (1) - 他２つの難易度と同じで00:03:699 (1) - から？　曲がここから始まってるのでここからスピン入れてます！
  00:06:806 (1) - スピン直後なのでもう少し中央寄りでもいいかもしれませんHard diffなので大丈夫です！
  01:08:413 (2,5) - どちらかに形を統一したほうが綺麗だと思いました直しました～！
  01:48:913 (6) - ここは01:47:627 (2) - このスライダーをコピー＆左右反転して置くと綺麗に見えると思います（その場合01:49:342 (1) - は削除）

今の音取りが好きなのでこのままで(´；д；｀)

jamxx wrote:

I'm a y u c a's fan<3

Normal

• 00:41:627 (3) - suggestion
  SPOILER

  
  fixed
  01:30:913 (3,4,5) - make a triangle 01:31:770 (5) - move to x:60 y:233
  SPOILER

  
  fixed
  02:21:913 (x) - add a note i'll just leave this one here since it looks fine
  02:28:770 (x) - ^
  02:37:985 (3) - move to x:439 y:138

fixed

yuca

• 00:00:270 (1) - 他２つの難易度と同じで00:03:699 (1) - から？
  00:06:806 (1) - スピン直後なのでもう少し中央寄りでもいいかもしれません
  01:08:413 (2,5) - どちらかに形を統一したほうが綺麗だと思いました
  01:48:913 (6) - ここは01:47:627 (2) - このスライダーをコピー＆左右反転して置くと綺麗に見えると思います（その場合01:49:342 (1) - は削除）

Dream End

• 00:40:342 (6) - make length into a half. no change here too
  01:00:592 (1) - too short auto can spin 1000 so i think it's ok
  02:51:270 (2) - hidden by score bar
  SPOILER

  
  fixed
  03:20:306 (1) - finish at slider end

added

short mod...sry ;w;

edit : star~!

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

star

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi

M4M (Your queue)
[Dream End]
uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play
00:43:127 (3,4,5,6) - This is unconsistent and doesn't fit the map so resnap it properly. decreased a little
00:44:199 (6) - NC here for consistency
00:44:842 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC is unnecessary and doesn't fit at all no, this part needs to be highlighted for attention
01:08:413 (1,2,3) - Changing distance snap on this is unnecessary, use the same snap like 01:07:342 (1,2,3,4,5)
01:10:127 (1,2,3) - ^ (Don't tell me it's "pattern", I'll still say it's unnecessary and sudden)
01:11:627 (6) - NC because new instrumental startsfixed
01:28:449 (8,9,1) - Distance snap..
01:50:842 (4,1) - ^ bigger distance before bar line is cool, and fun to play
02:46:770 (4,5,6) - ^... totally unnecessary i don't see any problem here, just trying to make it look better
02:49:770 (2) - Move on 424;204 to keep consistency with 02:47:627 (1,2) fixed
03:00:913 (4) - Since it's kiai time, you can already change this snap, but also avoid overlaps and keep the same distance between sliders so move this on 80;112
03:03:485 (2) - Move on 264;348 to keep the same distance between sliders no i'm increasing distance here on purpose, crescendo part
03:03:699 (3) - 364;308 ^
03:04:556 (4) - Delete, copy 03:04:342 (3), make CTRL+H, CTRL+J and move on 304;104 ^ and for symmetry this is ok but doesn't seem better so I'll leave it as it is

I would use progressive volume on start spinner. ok

[yuca]

Kiai is missing!
Other is fine

[Normal]

Well.. normal is so linear... and there is missing some blanketing. i think what works is the times i break, not the length of the breaks, i think it's fine right now

• 1. Either Remove "370.ogg" or use it on every diff. I'd remove it because it sounds rather odd.
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 1. 00:33:913 (1) - Add Finish on Sliderstart.
    2. 01:28:770 (1) - ^
    3. 01:42:485 (1) - ^
    4. 01:56:199 (1) - ^
    5. 02:39:056 (1) - ^
    6. 02:59:627 (1) - Add Finish.
    
    Nothing else to say, Normal is perfect.
    
    [yuca]
    
    • 1. 01:10:556 (6) - This doesn't look right somehow, move it one grid down.
      2. 01:14:199 (7,1) - This isn't stacked correctly, disable grid snap to do so.
      3. 01:28:770 (1) - Add Finish?
      4. 02:10:449 (2,1) - Spacing isn't correct. I don't see a good reason to have a Jump here either :/
      
      Looks cool too~
      
      [Dream End]
      
      • 1. 00:09:485 (4,5) - Move them 2 grids up.
        2. 01:00:592 (1) - This Spinner is too short (below 1000 Points in auto-mode), which is unrankable as I remember.
        3. 01:15:056 (1) - Finish on Sliderstart?
        4. 01:28:770 (1) - ^
        5. 01:56:199 (1) - ^
        6. 02:16:342 (3) - Slidertail crosses lifebar, move it a bit down.
        7. 02:47:092 (5,6) - Please don't stack them like this.
        
        Okay that's all I found.
        I had to look rly close to find something, well done~

Heatherfield wrote:

uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play

dragonxcz wrote:

Heatherfield wrote:

uh i don't think i'll change some of your ds advice, i'm not mapping for everyone to FC this at first sight, and i actually have reason for every increasing distance, and those parts are proved to be fun to play

Well.. It's not for FC, but for consistency and sensibility, but okay. But it's quite sad that people don't want to undestand this.

Heatherfield wrote:

Mapping is not just converting a song into a beatmap, it's kinda like some re-creation. Some mappers tend to make Jpn styled map, I just don't, that's it.

dragonxcz wrote:

Heatherfield wrote:

Mapping is not just converting a song into a beatmap, it's kinda like some re-creation. Some mappers tend to make Jpn styled map, I just don't, that's it.

Well I just mean that if a map don't fit and has these unnecessary things, they has very often low rating. Exactly me, if a map has unnecessary things I rate something between 1-8, if it's without unnecessary things, I rate 9-10 and I don't think I'm only one who does this, so then don't cry you have bad ranking of beatmap :3

abalee wrote:

yuca那邊好像有一個 unsnapped note...
flow差點...不過也許是我要求太高了 Orz
其他沒什麼了...

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Heatherfield ~ a super old map ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 02:11:627 - Unsnapped kiai time end point. fixed
2. 03:20:627 - ^ fixed
3. yuca's diff no kiai time,are you sure?

[Dream End]

1. 01:00:592 (1) - This spinner too short and suddenly,how about change a slider? though over and over again, ok changed
2. 01:27:270 (5) - Add new combo,looks better. fixed
3. 01:36:913 - Why not add a circle? follow with music. intended to be like this
4. 02:31:985 - ^
5. 01:47:199 (1,2,3) - Increase spacing or change a repeat slider. increased some spacing, too big would be bad looking
6. 02:00:913 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:55:663 (3) - Remove this circle,much better to here,because confused spacing and no fitting. i got a great way to fix this one
8. 02:44:627 (9) - Add new combo,too long combo IMO. fixed
9. 02:52:127 (6) - ^,spacing change to here. changed spacing but i think new combo is kinda weird.. i 'll keep as it is
10. 03:12:485 (5) - ^
11. 03:04:556 (4,1) - Change same spacing. fixed
12. 03:07:235 (6) - Remove thi circle,sound better to me. i'll reserve this one
13. 03:18:056 (1) - Remove short new combo. this part has crescendo and this note is the start of repating so i think this one makes sense

[yuca]

I'll ask for her ideas about this

1. OD+1 much better.
2. Change AudioLeadIn to 2000.
3. 03:20:627 (1) - I suggest don't stack this circle on slider end,
   because of hitbrust hidden by circle,it's kinda suddenly.

[Normal]

1. 00:33:270 (4) - Move 1/2 rhythm later,much better. ok, also changed to circles
2. 01:13:770 (1,1,1) - Remove short new combo. removed second and third, kept first because these three notes are for different sound
3. 02:04:770 (5,8) - Make a symmetry to here. fixed
4. 02:11:413 (2) - I guess if change a circle on 02:11:628,it's more easy playable.i know it's kinda hard here but change to note feels weird... i think i'll keep this one

That's all ~ Kinda nice for old map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Normal diff kiai time should end to 03:20:627 ?

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Much better now ~

Here you go :3

1. 02:38:413 (7) - New combo (because of the spacing change)? Also for me personally it's better if this slider is made facing right...
2. 03:10:556 (3,4,5) - Err, it's 1/6 here, use repeating 1/6 slider instead...

1. 00:27:056 (1) - Due to stacking's nature, move a bit upward (~x:76 y:248) so (1,2) shows correct spacing in play mode~
2. 01:00:699 (1) - Hmm, I get your point here but this slider definitely can be made tidier though:
   
   SPOILER

   69,354,60699,6,0,B|72:338|69:322|69:322|77:302|77:302|61:302|61:302|77:286|77:286|61:286|61:286|77:270|77:270|61:270|61:270|77:254|77:254|61:254|61:254|69:235|69:235|66:217|69:200,1,240.000009155274

3. 01:21:913 (1,1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like how this looks in play mode orz... Can't suggest a better pattern though >_<

Niva wrote:

[General]

-> Hmm, it's better imo if your purple combo color is made darker (to extinguish it more from the pink) - try R:191 G:126 B:231~ cool
-> Use PreviewTime: 159000 for more accurate preview point (sounds on the beat correctly) ok

[Normal]

-> Drag the two breaks' start to 02:21:913 and 02:28:770 manually (: fixed

[yuca]

-> AR +1? (unlike Dream End, for me it's much better to read this diff in AR8...)

1. 02:38:413 (7) - New combo (because of the spacing change)? Also for me personally it's better if this slider is made facing right...
2. 03:10:556 (3,4,5) - Err, it's 1/6 here, use repeating 1/6 slider instead...

[Dream End]

-> AR +1? (AR9 may feel to fast, this one is up to you though) AR9 is too fast for 140bpm imo..

1. 00:27:056 (1) - Due to stacking's nature, move a bit upward (~x:76 y:248) so (1,2) shows correct spacing in play mode~ nice one!
2. 01:00:699 (1) - Hmm, I get your point here but this slider definitely can be made tidier though: great
   
   SPOILER

   69,354,60699,6,0,B|72:338|69:322|69:322|77:302|77:302|61:302|61:302|77:286|77:286|61:286|61:286|77:270|77:270|61:270|61:270|77:254|77:254|61:254|61:254|69:235|69:235|66:217|69:200,1,240.000009155274

3. 01:21:913 (1,1,2,3) - Personally I don't really like how this looks in play mode orz... Can't suggest a better pattern though >_<

chaged to something great

My main concern is 03:10:556 on yuca's diff, and the combo colors...
Otherwise it's fine (:

UnderminE wrote:

WHY ERIKA WHY, IT HAS TO BE BATTLER OR SOMETHING ;_;

James wrote:

y u c a wrote:

if nice map, go play with hidden and get S

i take it back, bad map