Normal:
- 00:23:055 (3) - the custom slidertick here hits too hard (louder than the other softclaps), so lower the volume on it to 40% (hits harder because of normal sampleset)
00:30:962 (1) - ^ same here
00:40:729 (1) - ^
00:47:240 (5) - ^
00:49:101 (2) - ^
00:50:496 - add a note here?
00:50:961 (3) - again, custom slidertick appears to be too loud compared to your usual softclaps, reduce the volume
00:55:612 - imo, the sliderticks in the following section (custom sliderticks I mean) sound better at 50% volume as they stand less out and the first one somewhat surprised me; as a newby, I would've probably let the slider go loose
00:57:705 (3) - netpicky: this should end exactly on where 1 ended, right now it's a tiny bit different
01:06:775 (2) - you could make the bows go more smooth and let 1 and 3 get more blanketted by this slider, for that, use 2 sliderpoints each bow
01:10:728 (1) - I'd suggest replacing this with circle + slider as the start on the red tick feels a bit unused compared to the rest of the diff and it also feels better to start the slider on where the hitsound is
01:21:659 (2) - same as with 01:06:775
01:25:380 (1) - could you work this a bit more out so the central sliderpoint and -tick lie on the Y-axis? that'd be a bit more aesthetic; also, again, the sliderticks hit too hard from here on, use 40% as mentioned in the beginning
01:35:147 (1) - slidertick stuff
01:43:519 (1) - ^
02:04:914 - to be honest, I expected custom sliderticks inthe following section as you did it before (lower volume tho, maybe 25-30% instead of 40%); might add them?
02:18:170 (5) - as you use them again here, reduce volume as before and I pretty much suggest you to follow the above thingie for more consistency
02:36:774 (4) - I find the start of this slider a bit clunched as the bow to the right is hardly noticableto give you an idea of what I thought of what might suit better
Coordinates are:
[list:0ba27]Second Sliderpoint: 478|253
Third One: 424|272
Fourth: 368|254
02:43:983 (1) - reduce slidertick volume again here and in following section
02:46:541 (4) - similar as with 02:36:774; you may recycle that slider after change
02:47:703 (1) - netpicky: you can improve this blanket around 4's end
02:48:634 (2) - ^ similar, just around 1's end
02:49:564 (3) - ^ just around 2's
02:50:494 (4) - I'd like to see this build an equal triangle with 2's and 3's ends; for that, place it at 166|316
02:51:424 (6) - will have to adjust this one to change above
02:53:750 (1) - slidertick stuff again and in following sectionJudgement: Diff is very neat, just little stuffs to better out as stated - take care of these and it'll be fine.
Hard:
I find Drain 6 a bit high for such a, well, friendly song but that may also be me as I generally like OD higher than Drain and suchs.- 00:12:358 (3) - not exactly symmetric; also, could blanket 2 better
00:13:288 (1,3) - these could blanket 2 better
00:16:078 (3,4) - ^
00:18:869 (1,2) - could blanket 3 better
00:22:125 (3,4) - smooth them out and better the blanket more out aswell
00:23:985 (3,4) - ^
00:26:776 (1,4) - ^
00:31:892 (3,1) - ^
00:33:520 (3) - that may be me but the end of this wiggly slider appers to be a bit clunchy; moving 2nd sliderpoint to 250|254 and 3rd to 217|290 will do
00:35:613 (4) - smooth out around 3 please
00:38:403 (6) - similar to 00:33:520 (is this the same slider? ;v)
00:39:101 (1) - I suggest removing one reverse arrow and adding a circle there instead as this seems to suit the vocal's emphasis more
00:41:426 (2) - might smooth this more out
00:42:822 (2) - circle + slider suits the vocals better here
00:44:449 (2) - smooth out
00:45:612 (4) - ^
00:49:566 (3) - that should blanket 1 better, right now it's somewhat meeh and the distance to 1 is very inconsistent
00:51:426 (2) - ^
00:57:705 (1) - a bit more smoothing out here please
00:58:868 (3) - two circles fit better here as the "da yo" (?) appears to be single words or at least is pronounced like this, thus, two single hitobjects will suit the vocal's expression better than one slider to hold; hope you get me
00:59:566 (1) - smoothout
01:00:729 (3) - same as with 00:58:868, the vocals are now "yo ni" (?) tho but the emphasis stays
01:02:124 (4) - netpicky: not perfectly symmetric, also not flowing exactly through 2; could do that better with gridsnap off
01:03:054 (1) - not symmetric again, gridsnap off in the middle bow should do (central sliderpoint to 256|232)
01:06:775 (1) - ^ same, just other way around; recycle the slider after fix
01:09:566 (3) - the constellation of 3 sliderpoints makes this slidercurve somewhat meeh-ish, just use 2
01:15:380 (3) - as this appears to start a new sentence or at least there is a break in vocals (which you are focussing on) before, a New Combo would suit the emphasis of the song here
01:16:775 (2) - that could blanket the following heartshape better, use 2 sliderpoints
01:17:938 (1) - that hearty shape is a bit clunchy to the red point, might try to smooth it more out
01:21:659 (1) - ^same
01:38:402 (4) - uhh... something appears to have went wrong with this stack
01:41:658 (3,1) - as mentioned in easy,these sliderticks hit too hard because of the normal sampleset; reduce their volume to 40%
02:16:774 (2) - smooth this more out; also, you might try to let it have the same distance to 1 all throughout it's bow
02:17:705 (1) - to suit the accentuation in the song better, replace this with circle + slider, the sounds you are following with this one do not seem to belong together all in one; also, the NC should follow on the big white tick then
02:19:565 (1) - same
02:23:286 (1) - I guess this is okay as there's vocals here that appear to belong together
02:27:007 (1,2) - swap NC here as the vocals start on 2 and there's also the big white tick
02:33:286 - wow, this part of the SB is very neat
02:35:146 (3,1) - make these blanket 2 better and smooth them out
02:37:936 (2) - due to trapezoid sliderpoint placement, this curve appears ugly and boring, just use 2 sliderpoints and do not place them in this way; also, you can do a better blanket, I am sure
02:39:564 (1) - replacing this with circle + slider suits the emphasis of the song better as the vocals are becoming much stronger on the big white tick so add the NC there aswell
02:40:029 (2) - along with previous change, this should start on a white tick
02:41:192 (5) - could blanket 4's end better and could also be more smoothed out
02:42:355 (1) - smooth out
02:44:913 (3,1) - ^ + let them blanket each other's starts better
02:45:843 (2) - that curve appears a bit clunchy, move sliderend to 365|368 for a better one
02:46:541 (3) - as with previous wiggly sliders, I suggest recycling the earlier example here
02:48:401 (3) - replacing this with circle + slider will suit the vocal's emphasis better
02:50:262 (3,4) - this does not work out; you should just put a circle where 3 starts as the strong vocals which would suggest you put sliderstarts on them lie on the white ticks
02:51:657 (6) - replace this with circles
02:52:122 (1) - use 1/2s to go with the vocals here
02:54:447 (2) - we had this before, make it symmetric and try to get it a more consistent distance to 1
02:55:377 (1) - improve the blanket here
02:57:936 (2) - remove the reverse arrow and replace it with a circle, that suits the vocal's expression and rhythm more
03:00:959 (1) - ^
As for the diff names, I suggest using custom ones such as [Beginner] and [Relaxing] as that'll make your diffset appear less loose and suits the difficulty levels aswell. - 00:12:358 (3) - not exactly symmetric; also, could blanket 2 better