KonataN wrote:

Hi, m4m

[General]

looks fine!
Since I don't have that much expirience (and you got waaaaay more modding as I usually accept) my mod is maybe not helpful.　not negative.
it's helpful because I'm noob mapper :p

[Easy]

00:56:533 (1) - this appears to fast after the spinner. It's places next to the middle, what is hard to hit for beginner. make spinner shortly.

[Normal]

00:50:304 (5,6) - maybe on y:160 like 00:49:648 (3) - ? fixed
01:38:992 (1,2,3,4) - a normal square does not fit your awesome-cute mapping. I'd at least rotate it a bit fixed

[Hard]

00:55:878 (2) - if you put the last sliderpoint on x:44 y:228 the slider is in perfect -45° style fixed
00:56:206 (3) - I'd recommend putting this one one tiny grid to the right, so its not that close to (2) and looks more like the difference between (1) and (2) maybe fixed
01:41:615 (2) - put this ony maybe one tiny grid down?another fixed

[Insane]

00:50:304 (5) - put higher that it comes from the direction of (4)? no fixed


Sorry thats all I can find.
Anyways, have 2 stars~

thanks for modding and star~

こんばんわ!

[Easy]
01:01:779 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - <333333333333

awesome!!!!!

[Normal]
00:13:911 (4,1,2,3,4) - 00:13:911 (4)から(1)への流れと(1)~(4)への流れがあっていないと思います。　こんなかんじはどうでしょうか!00:27:681 (1,2) - (3)のスライダーの動きにあわせてこんなかんじは!!
[Hard]
00:06:042 (5,6) - (6)から00:06:697 (1)への流れが少し悪く感じるので、こんなかんじにしてみてはどうでしょうか。00:06:042 (5) - 00:03:419でNCを付けてるので、ここにもNCをつけてみてはどうでしょうか。
00:56:533 (1) - 適当に配置にしてこんな音取りはどうでしょうか01:15:878 (3,4) - 少し流れが悪いとおもうので、DSを気にしないのであればこんなかんじはどうでしょうか
[Insane]
awesome map :33

素晴らしいmapだとおもいます!!!!!!!!
Ranked期待してます!!!!!!!!!!

terametis wrote:

こんばんわ!

[Easy]
01:01:779 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - <333333333333

awesome!!!!! ;3

[Normal]
00:13:911 (4,1,2,3,4) - 00:13:911 (4)から(1)への流れと(1)~(4)への流れがあっていないと思います。　こんなかんじはどうでしょうか!

SPOILER

fixed
00:27:681 (1,2) - (3)のスライダーの動きにあわせてこんなかんじは!!

SPOILER

fixed

[Hard]
00:06:042 (5,6) - (6)から00:06:697 (1)への流れが少し悪く感じるので、こんなかんじにしてみてはどうでしょうか。

SPOILER

fixed
00:06:042 (5) - 00:03:419でNCを付けてるので、ここにもNCをつけてみてはどうでしょうか。 fixed
00:56:533 (1) - 適当に配置にしてこんな音取りはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

迷いましたがfixed
01:15:878 (3,4) - 少し流れが悪いとおもうので、DSを気にしないのであればこんなかんじはどうでしょうか

SPOILER

fixed
[Insane]
awesome map :33

素晴らしいmapだとおもいます!!!!!!!!
Ranked期待してます!!!!!!!!!!

とても参考になるmoddingでした！☆ありがとうございます

Easy

00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
http://puu.sh/18MxL like this sound effect
00:27:681 (1) - slider's node? adjust it
00:53:911 (1) - in easy diff,this slider near the previous slider is too close
01:33:583 (1) - i think this slider can Symmetric 01:34:566 (2) - ← this slider



Normal

00:01:452 (1) - 00:02:435 (2) - i think this two places use system normal finish is better.
00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
00:20:796 (2) - i think this queue is better
01:40:468 (4) - this reentry can remove,and add a note instead.



Hard

00:01:452 (1) - & 00:02:435 (3) - i think this slider's reentry not fit this music
00:06:042 (5,6) - 00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!

Insane

00:03:419 (1) - slider's reentry?
00:12:927 (5) - NC
00:13:255 (1) - remove NC

beatmap & music is GOOD!
i love it
kd,GO!!
hope to rank this map quickly!

-[NYAN]- wrote:

:arrow: Easy

00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
http://puu.sh/18MxL like this sound effect soiunds good, but I like normal-whistle in it. sorry><
00:27:681 (1) - slider's node? adjust it fixed?
00:53:911 (1) - in easy diff,this slider near the previous slider is too close fixed
01:33:583 (1) - i think this slider can Symmetric 01:34:566 (2) - ← this slider oh yes.



Normal

00:01:452 (1) - 00:02:435 (2) - i think this two places use system normal finish is better. fixed?
00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!
00:20:796 (2) - i think this queue is better another fixed

SPOILER

01:40:468 (4) - this reentry can remove,and add a note instead. no fixed because this rythem fits better.



Hard

00:01:452 (1) - & 00:02:435 (3) - i think this slider's reentry not fit this music umm, if others say it, I'll fix it.
00:06:042 (5,6) - 00:06:042 (3,4) - if your sound effect have like"pa pa" sounds,it will be perfect!

Insane

00:03:419 (1) - slider's reentry? fixed
00:12:927 (5) - NC I usually put NC at Long white line so no fixed.
00:13:255 (1) - remove NC ^

beatmap & music is GOOD!
i love it
kd,GO!!
hope to rank this map quickly!

thanks for modding and star!

Reserve for mod

Okay, Lets start.

[Easy]

00:29:648 (3) - IMO, you should overlap this slider by adding a curve.
00:33:747 (3) - Add finish to end?
00:44:566 (2) - Maybe you should move to white tick.
00:59:156 (1) - Clap the start?
01:12:927 (2) - ^
01:21:451 (3) - ^
01:08:829 (3) - Clap the end?


[Normal]

00:08:665 (5) - Rhythm is weird here, maybe you should make it the same as this 00:11:288 (3,4) -
00:44:402 - Add a note here?

[Hard]

00:18:501 (5) - End slider point move up a bit?
00:47:845 - Add a note?
01:16:861 (3) - Finish the end

[Insane]

00:59:648 (2) - Remove note, Useless imo
00:48:665 (1) - Add Finish?
01:15:878 (4) - You should reverse this, for flow.
01:15:714 (3) - If you do the above make sure you stack this note with the slider above. Example : http://puu.sh/1bYU8
01:06:861 (6) - Maybe add new combo?
01:10:796 (1) - Remove it?


Done.

Hi, here's my mod from my Modding Queue.
Reply on what you haven't fixed and why, Thank you.

• Inconsistency in source on Easy. Capitalize "Head"

• Why on nya's taiko there (Short Ver.) when there's nothing on the title? Can you try to delete it on the background please?


This map deserve to be ranked soon, here's a star.

thanks for moddings and star~ both are so helpful for me

EDIT BG updated

sorry for the long wait e__e taiko bg repaired~! since I dont have the previous psd bg, I changed it hope you like it :3
http://puu.sh/1dTsm

Taiko mod here:

[General]

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

[n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:550 (1) - Please change this to big don for consistency since you have put a big note on every (first) accents in this part.
2. 00:08:173 (2) - Change this to big kat? The reason is same as above.
3. 00:22:271 - How about adding a note here? (You could add a kat here after change.)
4. 00:33:255 (1,2) - I would say changing it to big kat would be nice!
5. Well made difficulty!

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:27:435 (1) - I would change this to kat because of high pitch.
2. 00:32:927 (1,2,3,4) - Probably remove the big notes here? Because the consecutive finishs don't sound a cool effect here. This is my personally taste only, feel free to ignore it.
3. 00:45:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is too confusing! Due to the SV change, players may can't recognize the kat is 1/2 or 1/4, or player may think that the last note of the stream is a don. Thus, changing it is highly suggested.
   
   Check it here!

   
4. 01:12:271 (3) - kat here?
5. 01:40:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I don't think a stream is really needed here because there are no drum sound to support the stream. Only put a triplet at 01:40:632 - is good enough.

thnaks for taiko moddings!

probably this will be fixed by authers.

EDIT taiko diffs updated.

from my queue
may be it's M4M~
edit bug, I can't see Artist. in txt, I see "nao"， write it "Nao"
[General]
Del BG3, it's not used
[Easy]
00:29:648 (3) -
00:37:845 (3) - x:336 y:324
[Normal]
fine~
01:44:074 (1) - remove NC or mark it easily find,play FL is hardly find this
[hard]
clean and hardly mod this
00:11:288 (3) - ctrl+g
[insane]
00:01:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Early high jump is not good for start
00:06:042 (1,2,3,4) - Direction,Clockwise
00:12:435 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:16:533 (6) - this place
00:37:025 (5,6,7) - ^ you do too straight line
00:52:927 (1) - end cover 3 is butter
01:26:370 (4,5,6) -
01:37:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - x:284,y:104,this where play will be near middle,full overlapcircles would offset

that's all good luck and star

wantuole wrote:

:) from my queue
may be it's M4M~
edit bug, I can't see Artist. in txt, I see "nao"， write it "Nao"
[General]
Del BG3, it's not used fixed
[Easy]
00:29:648 (3) - fixed

SPOILER

00:37:845 (3) - x:336 y:324 fixed
[Normal]
fine~
01:44:074 (1) - remove NC or mark it easily find,play FL is hardly find this all diff has NC at this point, so no fixed.
[hard]
clean and hardly mod this
00:11:288 (3) - ctrl+g I put it with small jump.
[insane]
00:01:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ? Early high jump is not good for start some say this opinion, but others mention good. and I like this pattern, so no fixed sorry.
00:06:042 (1,2,3,4) - Direction,Clockwise I put it with DS

SPOILER

00:12:435 (2,3) - ctrl+g fixed
00:16:533 (6) - this place this jump doesn't seem good I suppose.

SPOILER

00:37:025 (5,6,7) - ^ you do too straight line nice flow. fixed.

SPOILER

00:52:927 (1) - end cover 3 is butter fixed

SPOILER

01:26:370 (4,5,6) - nice! fixed

SPOILER

01:37:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - x:284,y:104,this where play will be near middlefixed,full overlapcircles would offset

that's all good luck and star

thanks for modding and star!

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

I rename "Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin"

[Hibari's Taiko Oni]

1. 00:27:435 (1) - I would change this to kat because of high pitch.ok
2. 00:32:927 (1,2,3,4) - Probably remove the big notes here? Because the consecutive finishs don't sound a cool effect here. This is my personally taste only, feel free to ignore it.Sorry no fixed
3. 00:45:714 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is too confusing! Due to the SV change, players may can't recognize the kat is 1/2 or 1/4, or player may think that the last note of the stream is a don. Thus, changing it is highly suggested.
   
   Check it here!

   
   Sorry, I couldn't find it.
4. 01:12:271 (3) - kat here?thx
5. 01:40:468 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I don't think a stream is really needed here because there are no drum sound to support the stream. Only put a triplet at 01:40:632 - is good enough.

ok

Thanks for modding me!
Update
http://puu.sh/1fMZj
http://puu.sh/1fMW0

kanpakyin wrote:

Taiko mod here:

[General]

1. Muzukashii diff is way too difficult, this reachs oni level already. I would suggest rename 'n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii' to 'n y a -'s Taiko Oni' and 'Hibari's Taiko Oni' to 'Hibari's Taiko Inner Oni'. You don't need to worry about it is unrankable because this map was submitted before the announcement.

[n y a -'s Taiko Muzukashii]

1. 00:05:550 (1) - Please change this to big don for consistency since you have put a big note on every (first) accents in this part. done
2. 00:08:173 (2) - Change this to big kat? The reason is same as above. sorry no, since the pitch got lower D:
3. 00:22:271 - How about adding a note here? (You could add a kat here after change.) oh done~
4. 00:33:255 (1,2) - I would say changing it to big kat would be nice! done ^o^
5. Well made difficulty! thank you /___\

ok I made change to few notes since its Oni :3
hope you like it ~! http://puu.sh/1gYT3

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

umm....modding you?

Taiko mod Request~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Moe Nya's Taiko]
00:01:464 - maybe change like K K - D D - K K - D D
00:04:086 - ^ same
00:06:709 - ^ same
01:38:513 - ^ same
01:41:136 - D K - D D - D D - D K
00:41:463 - k

[Hibari-san Taiko]
00:32:939 - no mix 1/4 hitcircle with big Don, seriously. maybe remove this: 00:32:857 -
01:38:431 - ^same

i just can found this...

mintong89 wrote:

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

umm....modding you?

Taiko mod Request~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Moe Nya's Taiko]
tennya is not moe >3<
00:01:464 - maybe change like K K - D D - K K - D D
00:04:086 - ^ same
00:06:709 - ^ same
01:38:513 - ^ same no change sorry, it'll be the same as hibari-san's diff ;w; I want to make differences in here
01:41:136 - D K - D D - D D - D K done
00:41:463 - k done :3

i just can found this...

thanks for the mod mintong-san />w<)/

http://puu.sh/1h3fw

mintong89 wrote:

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Thanks for modding me!
Update

umm....modding you?

Taiko mod Request~

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[Hibari-san Taiko]
00:32:939 - no mix 1/4 hitcircle with big Don, seriously. maybe remove this: 00:32:857 - This have no problem, I think.
01:38:431 - ^same ok

i just can found this...

Thanks for your modding!

http://puu.sh/1hwOe

both updated. thanks!

from sp3's queue

[General]
Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin has wrong previewtime
"Inner Oni" is more common for Taiko diffs which harder than Oni, Why not?
Video is too long compared with mp3 file, you'd better to cut down useless part to reduce size of video

[n y a -'s Taiko Oni]
00:01:464 - change the sampleset to N

[Insane]
00:02:119 (4,6,8) - Since (2) has clap, you need to add it to these notes i guess
00:06:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^
00:06:054 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move them downward a bit to avoid overlapping?
ttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/469889
00:35:562 (1) - Finish
00:43:103 (9) - Consider adding clap or finish(or something else you want) this point should be more emphasized and whistle isnt enough.
01:06:873 (6) - This jump is not confortable to me, because (4,5,6) are placed straightly. i would suggest removing this note
01:09:168 - As you can see there's an extra percussion here, so clap would sound nice
01:11:791 - ^
01:14:414 - ^
01:19:660 (8) - ^
01:22:283 - ^

[Hard]
00:33:267 (2,3) - Hard to read this anti-jump here because of the previous jump
spacing between (1) and (2) is big (2.0x) but (2) and (3) is smaller, i thought (2,3) was jump at first play
the solution would be to space (2,3) at 2.0x as well i think
01:06:873 (6,1) - expected a jump here too, why did you stack them?
01:11:791 - for the same reason as Insane, add clap here
01:19:660 - ^
01:28:677 (4,5,6) - better to make slider shapes neater
01:44:086 (1) - would suggest spacing this note out because considering this rhythm stacking may be confusing even for hard diffs

[Normal]
00:34:742 - Better to use soft sampleset here, because there's not background music here
00:56:545 (1) - The following notes appear too suddenly considering the level of this difficulty.
01:21:136 (4) - The end of this sldier is overlapped by previous note, maybe you can change the angle to avoid it

[Easy]
00:20:480 (1,2,3) - looks too crowded to me. i would suggest placing them like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470300
00:34:742 - Same as Normal
00:56:545 (1) - too soon after a spinner for the easiest diff
指摘はしませんでしたが最低難易度にしては1.5rhythmが多くてやや難しめです　後ろに当たるNoteをSliderに変えるだけでもだいぶ易しくなるので次回は留意しておいて下さい

That's all I guess. Dont feel like giving this bubble or something for now because I think this map can be still improved a lot. But I saw some potential here And I would like to give you a chance because you're newbie. Anyway find more mods and call me back for a recheck when both you and mapset itself are ready. I will see if it deserves bubble, or not :3

Hi, kaji. Still remember me? If not, it's not that bad. I wish you luck for your map. 'Cuz I like it *more than mine*

Melophobia wrote:

from sp3's queue

[General]
Hibari's Taiko Tatsujin has wrong previewtime
"Inner Oni" is more common for Taiko diffs which harder than Oni, Why not?
Video is too long compared with mp3 file, you'd better to cut down useless part to reduce size of video　all fixed excluding taiko name.

[n y a -'s Taiko Oni]
00:01:464 - change the sampleset to N fixed

[Insane]
00:02:119 (4,6,8) - Since (2) has clap, you need to add it to these notes i guess fixed
00:06:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
00:06:054 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe move them downward a bit to avoid overlapping? fixed
ttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/469889
00:35:562 (1) - Finishfixed
00:43:103 (9) - Consider adding clap or finish(or something else you want) this point should be more emphasized and whistle isnt enough. added finish
01:06:873 (6) - This jump is not confortable to me, because (4,5,6) are placed straightly. i would suggest removing this note hmm... ok.
01:09:168 - As you can see there's an extra percussion here, so clap would sound nice nice!
01:11:791 - ^ ^
01:14:414 - ^ ^
01:19:660 (8) - ^ ^
01:22:283 - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:33:267 (2,3) - Hard to read this anti-jump here because of the previous jump fixed.
spacing between (1) and (2) is big (2.0x) but (2) and (3) is smaller, i thought (2,3) was jump at first play
the solution would be to space (2,3) at 2.0x as well i think
01:06:873 (6,1) - expected a jump here too, why did you stack them? ok, fixed.
01:11:791 - for the same reason as Insane, add clap here fixed
01:19:660 - ^ ^
01:28:677 (4,5,6) - better to make slider shapes neater maybe fixed.
01:44:086 (1) - would suggest spacing this note out because considering this rhythm stacking may be confusing even for hard diffs sorry I don't follow this suggestion because this changeing rythem would be expected if the man plays at first I suppose, non expect harder... just imo.

[Normal]
00:34:742 - Better to use soft sampleset here, because there's not background music here fixed
00:56:545 (1) - The following notes appear too suddenly considering the level of this difficulty. fixed
01:21:136 (4) - The end of this sldier is overlapped by previous note, maybe you can change the angle to avoid it fixed

[Easy]
00:20:480 (1,2,3) - looks too crowded to me. i would suggest placing them like this fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470300
00:34:742 - Same as Normal fixed
00:56:545 (1) - too soon after a spinner for the easiest diff fixed
指摘はしませんでしたが最低難易度にしては1.5rhythmが多くてやや難しめです　後ろに当たるNoteをSliderに変えるだけでもだいぶ易しくなるので次回は留意しておいて下さい はい

That's all I guess. Dont feel like giving this bubble or something for now because I think this map can be still improved a lot. But I saw some potential here And I would like to give you a chance because you're newbie. Anyway find more mods and call me back for a recheck when both you and mapset itself are ready. I will see if it deserves bubble, or not :3
all you saying supports my mapset. ok, I'll gather some mods and someday, I'll ask you for rechecking. thanks for modding.

　

@Quiz-chan thanks. I don't forget you.

[Normal]

00:34:742 (1,2) - stack each other?

[Hard]

00:03:431 (1,2) - change one slider?
00:12:283 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - frankly speaking, a bit boring..... even if this diff is hard diff.
00:41:300 (2) - delete it?
00:51:300 (1) -
01:18:677 (4,5) -
01:21:627 (6,7) -

[Insane]

00:08:677 (7) - remove NC
00:21:054 (5,8) - hmm.... remove notes?
00:44:742 (7,8) -what i think something during listen this part....
00:49:988 (4,5) - also,
01:06:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - if i am you, i use accelerated something here....
01:21:300 (4) - use 1/2 slider?

intoon wrote:

[Normal]

00:34:742 (1,2) - stack each other? fixed

[Hard]

00:03:431 (1,2) - change one slider? this back instrumental hears strong, so I think notes better.
00:12:283 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - frankly speaking, a bit boring..... even if this diff is hard diff. a bit changed
00:41:300 (2) - delete it? fixed
00:51:300 (1) - another fixed
01:18:677 (4,5) - another fixed
01:21:627 (6,7) - fixed

[Insane]

00:08:677 (7) - remove NC non, this is an regular pattern exists.
00:21:054 (5,8) - hmm.... remove notes? fixed
00:44:742 (7,8) -what i think something during listen this part.... another fixed.
00:49:988 (4,5) - also, no fixed still be good I guess.
01:06:054 (1,2,3,4,5) - if i am you, i use accelerated something here.... yeah, but I don't come up idea what to put.
01:21:300 (4) - use 1/2 slider?

another fixed.

thanks for modding. it's so useful.

chuchu

[General]
Ask a BAT to change the title text appearence to 00:22:447 - (22447) ?
Why do you have letterbox removed when the video is 16:9?

[Insane]
AR 9 fits better, more fun imo
00:04:086 (1,2,3,4) - This kinda ruins the flow imo
00:11:463 (7,8) - clap on (7) instead
00:16:545 (6,1) - move (1) higher up so it doesn't touch (6). You'd probably want to increase the average spacing on 00:17:037 (7,8,1) - then
01:14:250 (7) - I'd remove the repeat and att a 2,0x jump instead 01:25:398 (1) - finish on head
01:31:463 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer a jumpy pattern here~ (or more spaced notes)

[Hard]
00:35:562 (1) - finish
00:45:398 (5) - clap on end
01:04:086 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead? looks better imo
01:16:873 (7,1) - kinda evil, don't you think?
01:22:611 (8,1) - NC on (8)
01:38:349 (8,1) - ^

[Normal]
AR+1? I find it best for Normal diffs
00:32:939 (1,2) - somewhat confusing, but I guess it works out
00:35:562 (1) - finish
00:42:775 (4) - clap on tail
00:45:398 (3) - ^
00:48:349 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead
01:11:955 (4,1) - ^
01:14:578 (4,1) - ^
00:42:283 - what does this timing section do?

[Easy]
00:35:562 (1) - finish in head
00:43:103 (4) - add clap
00:44:578 (2) - whistle on tail
00:45:726 (4) - clap


nice mapset owo
Good luck

Saten wrote:

chuchu

[General]
Ask a BAT to change the title text appearence to 00:22:447 - (22447) ? when a BAT checks my map, I'll ask of changing title appearence.
Why do you have letterbox removed when the video is 16:9? oops, I forget it because recently I have changed the video.

[Insane]
AR 9 fits better, more fun imo hmm... I like AR8 and no one said this suggetion. so now no fixed but if others like XAT says this, I'll fix.
00:04:086 (1,2,3,4) - This kinda ruins the flow imo hmm... sorry no changed. I don't come up another idea...
00:11:463 (7,8) - clap on (7) instead another fixed.
00:16:545 (6,1) - move (1) higher up so it doesn't touch (6). You'd probably want to increase the average spacing on 00:17:037 (7,8,1) - then fixed
01:14:250 (7) - I'd remove the repeat and att a 2,0x jump instead

SPOILER

fixed.
01:25:398 (1) - finish on head fixed
01:31:463 (2,3,4) - I'd prefer a jumpy pattern here~ (or more spaced notes) yeah, but still no fixed now.

[Hard]
00:35:562 (1) - finish fixed
00:45:398 (5) - clap on end same as Easy
01:04:086 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead? looks better imo your suggestion is right, but I consistently put NC per 8 beats. (of course looks a bit bad, so I changed it in Normal for newbie)
01:16:873 (7,1) - kinda evil, don't you think? what? I don't think so lol.
01:22:611 (8,1) - NC on (8) same as above.
01:38:349 (8,1) - ^ ^

[Normal]
AR+1? I find it best for Normal diffs fixed.
00:32:939 (1,2) - somewhat confusing, but I guess it works out hmm, no problem imo but others mention that I'll change.
00:35:562 (1) - finish fixed
00:42:775 (4) - clap on tail same as Easy
00:45:398 (3) - ^ another fixed.
00:48:349 (4,1) - NC on (4) instead ok.
01:11:955 (4,1) - ^ ^
01:14:578 (4,1) - ^ ^
00:42:283 - what does this timing section do? to be silence at the slider tick.

[Easy]
00:35:562 (1) - finish in head fixed
00:43:103 (4) - add clap I suppose only finish hears good.
00:44:578 (2) - whistle on tail ok.
00:45:726 (4) - clap sorry no changed.


nice mapset owo
Good luck

thanks for nice modding.

Hi ~ kajiyatta ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions







That's all ~ Nice job for newbies mapper ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

all fixed.
thanks for moddings!

thanks Rika :3

Wow :O

Cute map and song :3

Ranked~

1st! Gratz!

おめでとう~ ＞＜

Congrats on your 1st ranked ~

congrats

Andrea wrote:

Cute map and song :3

Ranked~

thanks Andrea. and thanks everyne~

おめでとうございます。

gratz

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