nich95 wrote:

Hi, Rika-chan :3

Your request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. 00:37:407 (1,2) - It's too hard for Easy diff. Please change (1) is a circle here. since two slider here,so i guess not too hard.
2. 01:15:880 (3,4) - ^ Please change (3) is a circle here, or make to same as 01:17:254 (5,6). ^

Normal

1. 00:15:880 (2) - Don't repeat it, then move slider end at 00:16:185. May be more appropriate for rhythm and vocals, and it also can play more easily, too. just make other rhythm to here.
2. 00:23:972 (2) - Slider start at 00:24:124, then add a circle here be better? sound not bad now.
3. 00:32:063 (5) - Remove this slider? It may too hard for Normal diff. Nah.
4. 00:36:185 (4) - ^ But perhaps, may add a circle at 00:36:388?
5. 00:42:292 (2) - Remove a circle, would be easier.
6. 01:15:671 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of it is rather strange. Make to this be better. Nah,it's too hard and i follow downbeat.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:22:292 (2) - Remove whistle in slider end. ok fixed

Rika

1. 00:54:659 (1) - Stack with slider begin of (2). hmm, i just make small jump here

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
nice map, give a star
Good luck~

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via in-game PM
时间不是很多mod略草率D:

[Easy]

1. 00:05:804 (2) - 叠加clap 我觉的没必要 其他diff也没加
2. 01:16:338 (4) - 总觉得要1 grid down的样子(?(我错觉? 好把 前面也提了 就改了

[Normal]

1. 00:07:178 (5) - 结尾少了whistle 确实 漏掉了

[Rika]

1. 00:09:315 - +note 不想
2. 00:11:147 (6,7) - ctrl+G 这样flow 不好

嘤昨天刚mod过王长喜一张中二病的图来着·_·

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from #modreq
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:08:094(1,2) maybe this? sorry,it's fine imo.

SPOILER

01:11:758(2) Ctrl+H? Current flow better.

SPOILER

Rythem
00:54:659(3,4) probably this? Nah,it's follow with vocal.

SPOILER

Normal
Rythem
00:17:712(1) a bit weird. try to remove this note and put slider beginning 00:17:559? Nah.

SPOILER

01:15:880(1,2) maybe this? ^

SPOILER

Rika
Placement
00:18:628(5) upon slider?

SPOILER

Current flow better.

nice map and star~

Chewin wrote:

Hi Rika, mod request from my bubble queue ;3

[General]

1. I feel the offset slightly late, I have 754(-5ms). Try it, it's much better really, and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes ok after -7ms is better.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd use default normal whistles on each elements (and on sliders' bodies) sorry,sound noisy to me.
2. 00:24:575 (1,1) - Mh, since the 00:26:407 (1) is too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff I suggest you to remove the spinner and use an 1/1 slider (maybe with a slowdown?) on 00:25:033 with a repeat, so hitting the slider (1) isn't a problem anymore for novice players. I mean: reason in irc you know
   
   (Btw using this slider you can also hear as I was right about the late offset ;3)
3. 00:51:140 (1) - Remove new combo and use it on the long tick instead: 00:53:888 (2) also removing it from 00:54:652 (1) fixed
4. 00:55:720 (3) - Following my suggestion above about combing you should use new combo here according the new vocal sound yes new vocal here but too short ><
5. 00:59:384 (1) - Default normal finish on this slider's head sounds muuch better to start the kiai time noisy ;w;
6. 01:17:552 (6) - Why this short slider? Remove it and just use a circle on 01:17:705 instead. More enjoyable and easier to play for novice not hard i want skip this,really fitting here,all circle is bored.

[Normal]

1. Honestly for a slow BPM and for a Normal diff I'd reduce HP and OD by 1 i setting balance with easy,so i skip this.
2. 1.2x spacing? OMG, so hard rika ._. Reduce maybe to 0.8x or 0.9x? Considering that it's a Normal you must fix it, really. It's too huge to play for beginners :\
3. 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Omg this spacing is too huge and really hard to play with this low AR for a normal diff. You should fix it rika not huge .. follow DS.
4. 00:13:583 (5) - New combo? ok
5. 00:11:751 (1,2,3,4) - Same of 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4). Really huge for a Normal <.< Reduce it please Same as 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4).
6. 00:16:789 (4) - Reduce by 1/3 to fit the vocal sound? sorry,it's sound fine to me.
7. 00:19:537 (1) - ^ ^
8. 00:23:965 (2) - Remove it and just use a circle on 00:24:117 it's follow with lyrics.
9. 00:32:056 (5) - Even if you are following the vocal sound you should remove it still because we are talking about a normal diff, the rhythm would be anyways good i just make a another rhythm here
10. 00:36:178 (4) - ^ ^
11. 00:57:705 (2) - Move 1/3 later removing a repeat like you did for 00:58:316 (3,4). It fits the sound much better yep,not bad,but repeat more fitting here.
12. 00:59:232 (1) - Delete circle and use new combo on 00:59:384 (2) sorry,same i follow with lyrics.
13. 01:08:697 (5) - Same of 00:32:056 (5)
14. 01:16:331 (2,3) - Change with an 1/3 slider :\ sorry, it's sound not bad.
15. Map is enough good but fix the spacing please

[Hard]

1. 00:10:224 (2,3) - Wrong spacing it's a small jump...
2. 00:35:720 (2) - Remove circle since it follows nothing? follow combo
3. 01:15:415 (6) - Reduce this slider by 1/3 adding a circle on 01:15:873 sorry,i want this rhythm.
4. Nice, I like how you mapped it Rika, good job

Hard and Insane are pretty good, I just want to see some improvement in the normal diff (especially about the wrong and huge spacing) then making it easier ;3
Just contact me in game and I'll help you to make the Normal diff better (:

SapphireGhost wrote:

Just this once.

[General]
- I'd end the first kiai at 00:24:568 since the intensity decreases a lot at that point and it;s the downbeat. ok fixed

[Rika]
00:58:461 (1,2,3) - Maybe have the spacing a little smaller here? It's a bit more than expected. sorry,i skip this because 00:58:767 (2,3) - make symmetry.
01:01:668 (4) - I feel like you could make the curve more smooth here. (example) fixxed

[Normal]
01:05:332 (2,3) - Remove the small overlap here. fixed

[Easy]
- There are some small overlaps I don't like here, but it's okay if you want to keep them. yep
00:24:568 (1,1) - It's sort of soon to put a note after a spinner here. i guess 1/2 start to slider is not too hard

Short map, short mod, we should be able to rank it after this.