144,312,18170,2,0,B|208:324|256:268|256:268|304:324|376:312,1,252

Darksonic wrote:

Nyan~

Easy:

00:18:170 (5): This is not symmetric, I fixed it for you, here is the code: thank you ~ fixed

SPOILER

136,316,18170,2,0,B|224:316|256:286|256:286|288:316|376:316,1,252

00:21:834 (3): ^
00:48:857 (1,2,3,4): What about this, and then, this ? I think it flows better. sorry because of next note ;w;

Normal:

Wow 4,46 stars O_o

00:09:010 (3): Move like this, flows better. Current better than this ;w;
00:23:972 (5): Move to 00:24:124 ? not bad , but start on this point not too hard.
01:20:918 (7): Unstack? Probably this can be confusing for beginners. 1/1 i guess fine.

The diff is good, but 1,2x spacing seems really high for a Normal, maybe you should try to make it easier by reducing spacing, and removing some notes, because the rhythm is hard to follow for a beginner. 1.0 spacing is confusing read note...

Rika:

00:07:941 (7): NC should be here. ok fixed
00:10:384 (3,4,5): Try something like this ? I just change angle here,not sane.
00:17:254: Add note. ok
00:58:475 (1,2,3): This spacing change is a bit confusing, try to space these notes with the same spacing. Follow with lyrics,so i guess fine spacing.

Sorry for poor mod, but the map is great, like always ^^

Good job on the way Rika <3

Gabe wrote:

Going to edit this when I am done modding ♥

[Easy]

•00:18:170 (5) - This slider's form can be improved by making it more curved just like this v yep,already
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144,312,18170,2,0,B|208:324|256:268|256:268|304:324|376:312,1,252

OR LOOK AT THE NEXT MOD.
lolbruno was more fast than me.
•00:21:834 (3) - Same as the previous point.
•00:45:651 (2) - This slider's form should be like the previous and next one, instead of having this one curved. Change it like this. sorry,it'fine imo.
•00:48:857 (1) - I really think this slider should be aligned with 00:47:483 (4) - on the same y: axis. So on x:380 y:260 will be perfect. After doing this, move the next circle because when moving the slider, the spacing after it won't be consistent. ^
•00:55:727 (3,5) - Both sliders are overlapping each others. Maybe moving the red dot some grid up will help. Also, move the circle (4) in the center just like this. just a bit overlapping not a issue,so i skip this sorry.
•01:06:720 (1) - Make this slider's form like this, as said on the previous point, both sliders are overlapping each others. Also, delete this slider: 01:08:552 (3) - , and copy/paste the previous slider. After that, make it like [img=http://puu.sh/1c7OD]this[/img] and then, and do "Reverse Selection", like this. ^
•01:27:330 (1) - This circle is breaking the spacing consistency by 0,08x. this is symmetry.
For the Hitsounds and New Combos, everything seems to be alright.

[Normal]

•00:09:010 (3,1) - The transition between these notes are not really good, mostly the way that the slider (1) has been made. Maybe rotating it by ~ -50 degres will look way more better. oh,yes fixed by -30.
•00:15:880 (2) - The reverse arrow here doesn't sound really good. In my opinion, deleting the reverse arrow and do something like this will sound way more better. http://puu.sh/1c8el i know,just make another rhythm here.
•00:23:514 (1) - A new combo should be added here because of the vocal. ok
•00:28:246 (5) - Look at your next patterns, you haven't added any combos like this one. So, delete this new combo. yep ~
•01:06:109 (3) - I do not suggest a slider placed like this one. The transition is totally not good. i don't know why..

[Rika]

♥♥
•00:05:651 (4,5) - When playing, I had problem to get to these circles because of the jump. Maybe making the jump more closer will be better. symmetry not too hard.
•00:36:491 (7) - Delete the new combo, maybe? nope,piano start here and symmetry.
•01:23:666 - Add a new combo here and also, to make a pattern with the combo, move these circles; 01:24:888 (4,5) - to x:356 y:44 no need add new combo and if move to that's will too suddenly ;w;

Sorry for the poor mod on both Normal and Rika. They're already really good, so nothing else to say (:
I want to Bubble this so fcking much Q.Q

BeatofIke wrote:

Hello Kawaii Rika. Request from #modreqs.

Easy:
-> Pretty much what Gabe suggested! Otherwise, no suggestions to point out here. Although, the map could be more nicer. It looks a bit messy imo.

Normal:
-> 4.46 stars? You mad girl? XD. That high spacing usage could be the main cause. Maybe reduce it? star rating really not a problem
-> This difficulty needs the most work imo. Mostly the spacing, some rhythm usuage, and the polarity.

Rika:
00:07:636 (6) - Move this 1 grid up (Grid level 4), so the combo is straight. yep fixed
01:16:033 (7) - Revome this note. It doesn't go to anything with the music. nope.
01:16:185 - Try adding a note here. sorry,sound weird to me.
01:16:338 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't understand what rhythm are you trying to follow here. I follow downbeat drum here.

Not really much to point out here, but your map is so moe as always. Good luck for rank!

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~mod for request~~

[General]

1. I suppose the offset might be 751 (-15ms to current one)... not very sure -7了
2. 另外我在想有没有可能把clap做成slidertick的音效来填补easy难度里那些长slider的2/4clap的空缺位置，比如像Easy里00:18:170 (5) -的tick这种 这个我想没必要硬加

[Easy]

1. 00:11:758 (1,2) - 这两个要不要试试放normal的whistle？ 有点吵
2. 01:24:582 (5) - 试试做成这样？ 不想一直弯到底
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 00:07:178 (5) - 因为音乐方向的缘故感觉这里应该是向下而且和前面的(4)平行会更舒服～～～嘛～～如果觉得改的麻烦的话无视就好了 不懂
2. 00:11:758 (1,2,3,4) - 依然是建议试试用normal的whistle
3. 00:15:880 (2) - 这里节奏不对，应该是对在1/3上像这样…………（可恶今天puush不能用只好in-game的了……） 故意这么弄的 总一个节奏很无i聊
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:19:544 (1) - 这里建议可以考虑来个NC，要不这combo有点太长了 我觉的不用

[Rika]

1. 00:11:758 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 依然是建议试试normal的whistle
2. 00:52:063 (1) - 其实这个slider也可以下个normal的whistle在sliderbody上
3. 00:52:979 (4) - ^
4. 然后其他的那天test的时候就和你说了～～ 不喜欢normal whistle

于是差不多就这样啦～～很好的图的说～～Star & good luck with rank :>

Konei wrote:

Freaking hard to mod this moe map but here we go :3~
Please reply to my mod and write what you didn't fix ~ :3

Please notice the color I use~


blue I recommend to change it
purple I saw it and wanted to mention it because it bothered me
black My suggestion and else~


[General]

Awesome~


[Easy]

00:11:147 (4) - This short Slider in this place could really be irritating for beginners, because they are not really managed to play this. I whondered if a circle at 00:11:300 isn't enough? Nah.
00:14:506 (5,6) - How about make the volume louder for those both notes? :3 It's pretty fitting I think. ^
00:14:506 (5) - And how about NC here? Music is changing here I think ^
00:26:414 (1) - This note is really close to Spinner for Easy diff and seeing that the Spinner is a bit short aswell, I think you should think of either shortning the Spinner or delete the note after Spinner. 1/1 not a problem.
00:51:147 (1) - I don't really know if this long Slider is fitting here. To be honest I expected a NC at 00:52:063 but it's not possible like this. I suggest making a Slider beginning at 00:51:147 and ending at 00:51:605. Then add Spinner at 00:52:063 and ending at 00:53:895 (remove note there too ofc) sorry i don't like that.
00:55:727 (3) - Why not NC here? It's on downbeat, the vocals are strong here and the combo is also a bit long for an Easy imo :3~ Lyrics start to 00:54:659 ,so no
01:16:338 (4) - really Nazi, I think one grid down is perfect of alligning Nah.
01:17:559 (6) - How about using the drum samplesets finish for the end of the Slider? :3 ^
01:24:582 (5) - I don't think repeat is really fiting here because on 01:25:498 should be NC. How about removing the repeat and just add a note? :3 ^


[Normal]

00:56:033 (4) - NC really fitting here? :3~ sorry,i don't think fitting here.
01:06:109 (3) - Space it out so that it doesnt touch 2? nah..
01:13:895 (5) - Drum clap to the end? :3~ ^ sound bad..
01:17:254 (5) - Same suggestion as in Easy~
01:19:391 (4) - This note sounds a bit too much, I think removing it should be fine~ ^


[Rika]

00:09:926 (1,3) - With their different direction they flow kinda bad. How about giving them the same angle? Also looks a bit nicer I think http://puu.sh/1cQcC Same direction is bored.
00:14:506 (1,2,3,4) - Starting the pattern here looks a bit random imo, how about starting here? http://puu.sh/1cQef nah.
00:22:292 (5) - Drum finish at end?~ ^
00:38:781 (4) - CTRL + G for jump?~ bad flow D:
00:44:582 (5) - ^ ^
01:06:720 (2) - I think this pattern would be nicer if the Slider was straight ok,fixed
01:06:720 (2) - ^at Start?
01:17:712 (7) - Same sugesstion as in Normal and Easy~ nah
01:21:376 (7) - Drum finish? :3
01:25:040 (3) - ^on end?


Okay~ This is all I found :3~
If I was XAT I would bubble lol ~ For now Star~
Good luck for your new moe map Rika~~

Akashi_S wrote:

Not modding this one..
I'm not really used to 1/3 snap divisor T__T; and too good of a map for me to mod as it is written in my disclaimer in the modding queue XP..

[Normal/Rika]
01:27:330 (1) - Instead of circle, how about a slider with one repeat that starts at 01:27:330 and ends at 01:27:483 ? no fit here..sorry.

Great map! Star~

wantuole wrote:

from my queue
第二次接到mod要求
看到sco的中文mod
我也写中文好了
[General]
title 里写 "Shikkokuni Odoru Haou Bushi (TV Size)" 或者"Shikkoku Ni Odoru Haou Bushi (TV Size)" 这很科学 你这才是错的
ni前面有空格不科学
[easy]
00:09:926 (3) -这里 tick声大点会更好 不用吧
重复就就不说了
01:06:720 (1) - 不好看的说 开头到第一个红点弄个凹槽给5更好 改了一点形状
[Normal]
fine
[Rika]
00:14:506 (1) - remove NC 还是处在大跳中 歌词下的NC

就这些 很干净利落的图

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Rika-chan :3

Your request from my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

1. Fine

Easy

1. 00:37:407 (1,2) - It's too hard for Easy diff. Please change (1) is a circle here. since two slider here,so i guess not too hard.
2. 01:15:880 (3,4) - ^ Please change (3) is a circle here, or make to same as 01:17:254 (5,6). ^

Normal

1. 00:15:880 (2) - Don't repeat it, then move slider end at 00:16:185. May be more appropriate for rhythm and vocals, and it also can play more easily, too. just make other rhythm to here.
2. 00:23:972 (2) - Slider start at 00:24:124, then add a circle here be better? sound not bad now.
3. 00:32:063 (5) - Remove this slider? It may too hard for Normal diff. Nah.
4. 00:36:185 (4) - ^ But perhaps, may add a circle at 00:36:388?
5. 00:42:292 (2) - Remove a circle, would be easier.
6. 01:15:671 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of it is rather strange. Make to this be better. Nah,it's too hard and i follow downbeat.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:22:292 (2) - Remove whistle in slider end. ok fixed

Rika

1. 00:54:659 (1) - Stack with slider begin of (2). hmm, i just make small jump here

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
nice map, give a star
Good luck~

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via in-game PM
时间不是很多mod略草率D:

[Easy]

1. 00:05:804 (2) - 叠加clap 我觉的没必要 其他diff也没加
2. 01:16:338 (4) - 总觉得要1 grid down的样子(?(我错觉? 好把 前面也提了 就改了

[Normal]

1. 00:07:178 (5) - 结尾少了whistle 确实 漏掉了

[Rika]

1. 00:09:315 - +note 不想
2. 00:11:147 (6,7) - ctrl+G 这样flow 不好

嘤昨天刚mod过王长喜一张中二病的图来着·_·

kajiyatta wrote:

hi from #modreq
General
almost suggestions
Easy
Placement
00:08:094(1,2) maybe this? sorry,it's fine imo.

SPOILER

01:11:758(2) Ctrl+H? Current flow better.

SPOILER

Rythem
00:54:659(3,4) probably this? Nah,it's follow with vocal.

SPOILER

Normal
Rythem
00:17:712(1) a bit weird. try to remove this note and put slider beginning 00:17:559? Nah.

SPOILER

01:15:880(1,2) maybe this? ^

SPOILER

Rika
Placement
00:18:628(5) upon slider?

SPOILER

Current flow better.

nice map and star~

Chewin wrote:

Hi Rika, mod request from my bubble queue ;3

[General]

1. I feel the offset slightly late, I have 754(-5ms). Try it, it's much better really, and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes ok after -7ms is better.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:751 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd use default normal whistles on each elements (and on sliders' bodies) sorry,sound noisy to me.
2. 00:24:575 (1,1) - Mh, since the 00:26:407 (1) is too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff I suggest you to remove the spinner and use an 1/1 slider (maybe with a slowdown?) on 00:25:033 with a repeat, so hitting the slider (1) isn't a problem anymore for novice players. I mean: reason in irc you know
   
   (Btw using this slider you can also hear as I was right about the late offset ;3)
3. 00:51:140 (1) - Remove new combo and use it on the long tick instead: 00:53:888 (2) also removing it from 00:54:652 (1) fixed
4. 00:55:720 (3) - Following my suggestion above about combing you should use new combo here according the new vocal sound yes new vocal here but too short ><
5. 00:59:384 (1) - Default normal finish on this slider's head sounds muuch better to start the kiai time noisy ;w;
6. 01:17:552 (6) - Why this short slider? Remove it and just use a circle on 01:17:705 instead. More enjoyable and easier to play for novice not hard i want skip this,really fitting here,all circle is bored.

[Normal]

1. Honestly for a slow BPM and for a Normal diff I'd reduce HP and OD by 1 i setting balance with easy,so i skip this.
2. 1.2x spacing? OMG, so hard rika ._. Reduce maybe to 0.8x or 0.9x? Considering that it's a Normal you must fix it, really. It's too huge to play for beginners :\
3. 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4) - Omg this spacing is too huge and really hard to play with this low AR for a normal diff. You should fix it rika not huge .. follow DS.
4. 00:13:583 (5) - New combo? ok
5. 00:11:751 (1,2,3,4) - Same of 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4). Really huge for a Normal <.< Reduce it please Same as 00:00:759 (1,2,3,4).
6. 00:16:789 (4) - Reduce by 1/3 to fit the vocal sound? sorry,it's sound fine to me.
7. 00:19:537 (1) - ^ ^
8. 00:23:965 (2) - Remove it and just use a circle on 00:24:117 it's follow with lyrics.
9. 00:32:056 (5) - Even if you are following the vocal sound you should remove it still because we are talking about a normal diff, the rhythm would be anyways good i just make a another rhythm here
10. 00:36:178 (4) - ^ ^
11. 00:57:705 (2) - Move 1/3 later removing a repeat like you did for 00:58:316 (3,4). It fits the sound much better yep,not bad,but repeat more fitting here.
12. 00:59:232 (1) - Delete circle and use new combo on 00:59:384 (2) sorry,same i follow with lyrics.
13. 01:08:697 (5) - Same of 00:32:056 (5)
14. 01:16:331 (2,3) - Change with an 1/3 slider :\ sorry, it's sound not bad.
15. Map is enough good but fix the spacing please

[Hard]

1. 00:10:224 (2,3) - Wrong spacing it's a small jump...
2. 00:35:720 (2) - Remove circle since it follows nothing? follow combo
3. 01:15:415 (6) - Reduce this slider by 1/3 adding a circle on 01:15:873 sorry,i want this rhythm.
4. Nice, I like how you mapped it Rika, good job

Hard and Insane are pretty good, I just want to see some improvement in the normal diff (especially about the wrong and huge spacing) then making it easier ;3
Just contact me in game and I'll help you to make the Normal diff better (:

SapphireGhost wrote:

Just this once.

[General]
- I'd end the first kiai at 00:24:568 since the intensity decreases a lot at that point and it;s the downbeat. ok fixed

[Rika]
00:58:461 (1,2,3) - Maybe have the spacing a little smaller here? It's a bit more than expected. sorry,i skip this because 00:58:767 (2,3) - make symmetry.
01:01:668 (4) - I feel like you could make the curve more smooth here. (example) fixxed

[Normal]
01:05:332 (2,3) - Remove the small overlap here. fixed

[Easy]
- There are some small overlaps I don't like here, but it's okay if you want to keep them. yep
00:24:568 (1,1) - It's sort of soon to put a note after a spinner here. i guess 1/2 start to slider is not too hard

Short map, short mod, we should be able to rank it after this.