144,36,4324,2,0,B|260:36,2,114.750002188683,4|2|2
144,112,5673,6,0,B|95:145|85:218|130:277|190:285,1,229.500004377365,4|8
260,252,7021,2,0,B|280:200|260:132,2,114.750002188683,4|4|8
272,328,8369,2,0,B|238:365|190:357|190:357|134:301|60:316,1,229.500004377365,4|8

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey sorry about the delay...mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
i see 2 custom clap (2) files. delete one of them because you can only use 2 different kinds of hitsounds for every custom hitsound. not 3. ✿ smth strange happened with custom sounds,nvm full submited now
Add DuDiDuWa*lalala in the tags. that's the name of the album this song is in. here is proof if you don't believe me.. ✿ yeah now i remember where i saw this title.

[Easy]
00:03:313 (3) - Do Ctrl+H and move this to the left side of the grid. it should make a triangle for the 1st 3 notes for this. like this. i feels fine with this slider, but changed next one o:
if you follow the suggestion above, use the code below for (4,1,2,3) if you follow the suggestion above. i think doing this would continue the flow from the triangle. you can move some notes around, or change the looks of the slider if you do this.
00:27:246 (3) - i'm thinking a NC here because of new lyrics in the song. i feels like this lyrics belong to previous combo ^^
00:27:920 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above. the vocal tone is the same as the previous slider.
00:33:987 (3) - make this slider like this. not only it'll blanket (4), but it'll blanket (1) as well in the next combo, and i think doing this would make the flow smoother during gameplay. it looks better on the screenshot, but after previous note i prefer to move cursor in left direction instead of going down
00:38:032 (3) - same as 00:27:246, and i can hear a soft clash in the cymbals, so perhaps add a soft finish and decrease the volume to emphasize it? its sooo quite i think leaveng soft note sounds also fine
00:38:706 (1) - same as 00:27:920.
00:40:055 (2) - this circle can be stacked on the end of (3) a lot better. the transition looks weird during gameplay. ✿ i guess i missed it
01:07:695 (1) - hmm idk...i feel that beginners won't make this in time because the note is too far near the middle. i highly suggest that you move it near the middle and it should be fully visible for beginners to see clearly. well spinner's hit burst appears in the middle, but it doesnt mean that your cursor will be also in the middle after spinner ends, also people who playing easy diffs not *disabled persons* im sure they will be abled to move their hands a bit ^^
01:32:639 (2) - i'm thinking of removing a repeat and adding a circle at the end, or a 1/1 slider to make this pattern easier for beginners IMO. ✿ changed
02:04:324 (1) - it's near the middle, but the spinner-osu file is covering the beginning and that might be hard for beginners to see where the next note is during gameplay. i suggest moving this where it's fully visible for beginners to see. now its near wwwwww, show me perfect position plz \x.x/, i think its preety far from middle, and small touching from hitburst wont kill anyone :3
02:36:684 (1) - delete this and add a repeat on this slider. it'll be consistent with 01:17:808 since the slider ends there. it shouldnt be consistent actually, even if music is similar you still can use different patterns o:

[Normal]
increase the HP and OD by 1. the diff spread would be balanced as the star rating increases to 4 stars. tbh i never paid attention at HP/OD settings in E/N diffs i simply dont understand why some N diffs have HP/OD 3 and other have 4 or 5, and i dont know from what do they depends on, thats why i ussually keep 3/3 for N diff, if you could explain me why HP/OD - 4 is better here i would highly appreciate that, changing them just to get some + star rating sounds illogically a bit o:
00:21:010 - maybe add a 1/2 slider to follow the guitar? i think something like this would be perfect for a normal diff since there's a 1/1 gap and that should give players plenty of time to recover during gameplay. no i did this pause so players will have some time to recover
00:36:010 (3,4) - hmm i suggest replacing this for a 1/2 repeat slider and a circle. i think doing this would be easier for players during gameplay. i think this pattern fine for N diff
00:37:695 (7) - same as 00:38:706, but at the repeat arrow.
00:40:729 (4) - since you have a finish at the end of (1) and at (3), add a finish for consistency with the finish pattern. you have it at the beginning, so adding it here would continue the pattern. no i was aimed to start using finish together with vocal
00:56:572 (6) - i'm thinking of spacing this note out instead of stacking to give off a nice climax part to the kiai. i also think that it'll give off that exciting feeling when the vocals speed up a bit at this part during gameplay. i think 2 stacked notes plays more intuitive
01:33:145 (3) - i don't like this repeat slider. it breaks the flow in the vocals since (2) is following it. try this: a 1/2 repeat slider and 2 circles so that it'd be consistent with (2) as it follows the vocals. if you ignore this, then you can come up with a similar pattern to what i suggested. dont see problem here o:
01:53:201 (6) - same as 00:56:572.

[Hard]
00:03:819 (2,3) - hmm...how about curved sliders so that it can play nicely to the piano for this? i feel that the straight sliders break the flow in this since the sliders in this combo are curved IMO. actually i think straight fits more here (thats why i used them in insane diff)
00:09:044 (3,4) - replace this for a 1/4 kick slider. it'll be consistent with the last 2 kick sliders since they're following the drums. this part as well. no, sometimes sticking 100% to music is not that good, sliders plays fine here, more of it i think its better to move from slider to slider instead of holding button on 23424 repeat kickslider, previous 2 kick sliders just my laziness
00:22:527 (3) - there's something odd about this repeat slider. it follows the vocals yes, but there's no flow given off of this slider. replace this for s circle and a 1/2 slider. it'll follow the vocals and the transition will be smoother during gameplay. sounds fine for me
00:26:235 (2) - remove (3), and add a circle followed by a 1/1 slider. it'll follow the vocals for this a lot accurate than the current one IMO. i like current one
00:37:021 (2) - ^
00:38:032 (5) - same as easy.
01:31:796 (1) - align this to (6) at the previous combo. it'll look like as if this pattern is going around in circles during gameplay. dont understand what for o:
01:34:324 (4) - same as 00:38:032, but at the repeat arrow.
02:25:729 - maybe a circle here to follow the vocals in the song? nooooooo, adding circle on the next tick after spinner plays awkwardly especially in hard diffs

[Insane]
00:01:628 (2) - maybe Ctrl+R to continue the transition from the previous note. i think the flow would be smoother if you do this IMO.i want all sliders to follow 1 direction
00:31:965 (2) - do Ctrl+R for this. the lyrics change by 1/2 and i feel that since the lyrics change like that, a jump would fit here to emphasize the change in the lyrics for the vocals IMO.i dont hear any jump
00:32:302 (3) - if you follow the suggestion above, make this slider look like (1) to keep the flow going during gameplay.
00:56:572 (1) - remove the NC for this. yes the lyrics change, but the vocal tone is the same as the previous combo. changed this NC in other way
01:44:774 (3) - perhaps you can stack this under (4) so that the transition is a lot neater during gameplay? if you look carefully, there's a right angle triangle through (1,2,3). hmm no, i prefer current angle for jumps even if that note looks not preety

I guess that's it. GL

Muya wrote:

[Easy]
01:04:999 (1) - add clap?
01:30:617 (4,2) - a bit hidden (2)'s reverse arrow for a short time. but seems fine
02:07:021 (1,4) - overlap here, I think looks not good.
02:36:853 (1) - should start at 1/1 snap i know but i prefer to use spiners like that

[Normal]
01:04:999 (1) - add clap?
01:27:920 (1,2,3) - these spacing is confusing, you should unite spacing.
01:18:819 (1) - should start at 1/1 snap
02:36:853 (1) - ^

[Hard]
02:46:459 (3,4,5) - I feel this pattern has something missing. i think its fine o:
plz try this
or try some arrange.

also all diff
00:29:942 - add finish or remove finish, I think should unite hitsound.

espiritur00 wrote:

Hi.
From Modding Queue Of Tea and me.

[Easy]
00:46:122 (1) - copy this slider and put this in 00:43:426 - but its already copypasted o:
00:48:819 (1) - copy this slider and paste it in 00:50:167 "delete new combo , Ctrl+H , Ctrlk+R and make the distance exact didnt understand this x.x
00:51:515 (1) - make this slider: 1st point x:180 y:248 ,2nd point x:180 y:340 a line of up to down. but it will move it too far from previous....
00:52:190 (2) - Use this points in this slider http://puu.sh/10qtK current angle looks better for me o:
00:53:538 (3) - move this note to make the distance correct. im using 1.0 default, and this slider has 0.98, i think its correct
01:35:336 (1) - make this http://puu.sh/10qyR i think that slider head is too high, and its better to play current one
01:36:684 (2) - ctrl+j and move this slider to x:224 y:76 hmm, i dont like how ctrl+j looks with previous slider
02:36:010 (4) - move this note to x:128 y:236 if i move this note to ur position it would be fully hiddent by hitburst, ending pattern in the middle of the screan is the best way for me
02:51:178 (2) - i think that is a little hard to the newbies players follow the rhythm after this note changed but in different way


it is all for this diff.

[Normal]

00:00:954 (2) - make this end in 00:01:291 but it dont following music here o:
it is all for this diff >.<
Good Diff

I talk with you about the other diffs ..
Good luck with the rank and thanks for post in the queue.

Wreath wrote:

hi, cRyo and aabc
thx for request and sorry for late...

[General]

1. BG size is not so good (not 4x3) pls use this ah its only 1/2 pixxels wrong, i dunno which one i correct size, and i dont want to reduce to 800/600 ><, thx for bg *saved* will use it if i will have any problems later with my *1/2 pixxels wrong* x.x
2. adding "aabc271" to all of your tags
3. adding "DuDiDuWa*lalala" to guest diff tags

oh yeah dunno how could this happened <_<

[Insane]

1. Unsnapped inherited (Green) Sections
   
   1. 00:43:526 - snap to 00:43:510
   2. 01:53:301 - snap to 01:53:285
   3. 02:32:739 - snap to 02:32:723
   4. 02:33:076 - snap to 02:33:060
   5. 02:33:413 - snap to 02:33:397
   6. 02:47:571 - snap to 02:47:555
   7. 02:52:964 - snap to 02:52:948
   8. 02:56:672 - snap to 02:56:656
   9. 02:58:020 - snap to 02:58:004
2. 01:57:583 (4,5,6) - this section is same rhythm to 01:00:954 (4,1,2,3) - , 01:54:886 (1,2,3,4) - and 02:29:942 (4,5,6) -
   why you place the different pattern? i think its better to keep the previous pattern, unless if you have a reason

i think its same as others, but made some small fix :3

[Hard]

1. Unsnapped inherited (Green) Sections
   
   1. 00:43:526 - snap to 00:43:510
   2. 01:53:301 - snap to 01:53:285

[Normal]

1. Unsnapped inherited (Green) Sections
   
   1. 00:01:054 - snap to 00:01:038
   2. 00:05:436 - snap to 00:05:420
   3. 00:07:121 - snap to 00:07:105
   4. 00:07:627 - snap to 00:07:611
   5. 00:08:469 - snap to 00:08:454
   6. 00:43:526 - snap to 00:43:510
   7. 01:14:537 - snap to 01:14:521
   8. 01:53:301 - snap to 01:53:285
   9. 02:11:166 - snap to 02:11:150
   10. 02:33:413 - snap to 02:33:397
   11. 02:47:571 - snap to 02:47:555
   12. 02:52:964 - snap to 02:52:948
   13. 02:55:660 - snap to 02:55:645
   14. 02:58:020 - snap to 02:58:004

[Easy]

1. Unsnapped inherited (Green) Sections
   
   1. 00:01:728 - snap to 00:01:712
   2. 00:02:233 - snap to 00:02:218
   3. 00:03:413 - snap to 00:03:397
   4. 00:04:424 - snap to 00:04:409
   5. 00:04:930 - snap to 00:04:914
   6. 00:05:436 - snap to 00:05:420
   7. 00:06:784 - snap to 00:06:768
   8. 00:08:132 - snap to 00:08:117
   9. 00:09:565 - snap to 00:09:549
   10. 00:43:526 - snap to 00:43:510
   11. 01:14:537 - snap to 01:14:521
   12. 02:11:166 - snap to 02:11:150
   13. 02:32:739 - snap to 02:32:723
   14. 02:33:076 - snap to 02:33:060
   15. 02:33:413 - snap to 02:33:397
   16. 02:47:571 - snap to 02:47:555
   17. 02:52:964 - snap to 02:52:948
   18. 02:58:020 - snap to 02:58:004

that's all
sorry for short mod..
but i have nothing to say. its well good map
and i love this map
☆~
good luck
i know about unsanpped lines, but it was on purpose ^^

Suzully wrote:

Sorry for delay. not delay at all xD

[Normal]

• 
  Increase AR by 1 please so it'll be easier to read the notes. Also OD4 is better I think. hmm i dont remember i ever saw Normal diff at this bpm (180<<<) with AR-6
  also SV-is only 1.1 and spacing is small, umm im not sure it needs AR-6......about OD as i said before
  
  
  
  i will highly appreciate if you could explain me why OD-4 is better then OD-3 here :3

1. 01:14:437 (3) - I think this slider should start from 01:14:268 to follow the vocal. Just refer to 01:16:965 (4). umm im not aggree here, i think that BG music sound that appears at downbeat (like ring) is quite loud and pattern shouldnt ignore it, also pattern following directly white ticks there , and i think its more intuitive to click this loooong slider at current position o:
2. 02:11:066 (5) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:22:864 (1,2,3,4) - I felt this stream is kinda forced and sudden because there isn't such sound in the back.
   *-------------*
   There are some streams like above in the map. Please consider about them once.
   But I also think that's one of mapping style. They're not so confusing, just not so good gameplay imo.
   If you want to keep them, please explain the reason then I'll respect your thought. yesssss, it looks like overmap, actually it is ^^
   i will try to explain, if you remove this streams 00:22:864 (1) - , 00:24:212 (3) - , and other similar streams there, you will clearly hear triplet that starts at white tick ! At first i used it (white tick triplet+note/sliders) and realised that it plays bad....so i decided to make 5 note stream there, and i think it plays much better then triplet+note/sliders.
   *-------------*
2. 01:38:706 (1,2,3) - Make spacing consistent. rechecked and its consistant o: (+-3), but i moved 01:39:718 (4) - because of stack leniency, i think it looks little bit better now :3
3. 01:39:549 (x) - Hum...I expected there is a note here when playing...try to add it? 01:38:706 (1,2,3) - this antijumps following vocal, if i add more beat there it would be strange imo, its like #1 and #2 antijumps following vocal and then suddenly pattern starts to follow music, i think it should follow either vocal or music, so i picked vocal, trying to follow both little bit unbalanced i think :3

also made some changes
01:52:190 (1,2) - this troll part ww, i was waiting some suggestion from mods but didnt recieved anything so i decided to change it like that :3
02:14:774 (1,2) - and decided to use slider stream instead of increasing spacing for 5 notes.