xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

>< Sorry D: Im not accepting any guest diffs but thanks for offering~ ^^

Then I guess I have to make a mapset by myself for this Good luck (again), anyway

;o Good luck with thatt~ ;D
and thannkyhuuu ^^

I really love this song >< /me throws kudosu star xD
Good luck ^^

Aokooo!
Thannkyhuu~ >w<

General

Shy Heart
Slider Tick Rate 2
00:59:657 (3) - Move to x: 304, y: 144
01:11:657 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:11:957 (red tick) and the end here: 01:12:257 (white tick)
02:22:157 (1) - That ends in: 02:22:757
02:23:057 - Remove the slider and place a note here: 02:23:357
02:23:657 - The slider has "reverse arrow" and ends here: 02:24:857
Why end there the map? xD!

Kind Heart
00:37:757 (6) - The slider ends in: 00:38:057
00:38:657 - Add a note.
00:39:257 - New combo.
01:05:357 - Add a slider to end here: 01:05:657
01:05:957 - Remove the note.
01:06:557 - Add a note.
01:19:757 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - That part is very confusing for a beginner, try to make a change there.
01:45:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
In this part you could do something like ~
01:46:457 - The slider ends in: 01:47:057
01:47:357 - Add a slider to end in: 01:47:657
01:47:957 - Add a slider to end in: 01:48:257
01:48:857 - Add a slider to "reverse arrow" here: 01:49:457 (white tick) and the end here: 01:50:057
03:11:357 - The slider ends in: 03:11:657
03:12:257 - Add a note and New combo
03:12:857 - New combo.

Brave Heart
This difficulty has a long way ~ :c
HP Drain Rate + 1
Overall Difficulty + 1
You put many streams unnecessary making the wrong play.
03:51:257 - That part was the least rate is. ~

Thank you for your mod ^^

From modding Queue


Told I only want diff which are shorter than 3 mins :/ But because it's you I will mod 2 Diffs of them



Black = advice

blue = very recommend you to follow

red = unrankable



Shy Heart

00:57:757 (1) snap slider on same ticks (red, red/white, white)

01:36:857 (1) add finish at slider beginning?

01:45:980 (1) ^

01:56:366 (1) on slider end finish?

02:25:032 (1) remove NC and add finish?


Kind Heart


OD + 1

00:47:057 (1) Slider end whistle?

00:48:998 (3) ^

01:36:903 (1) Finish? IMO it fits great to emphasize the Kiai time

01:41:075 (1) ^

01:46:590 (2) finish at slider beginning

01:53:780 (1) ^

01:54:500 (2) ^

02:05:643 (1) ^

02:10:457 (3) ^


So, that's what I found

Very beautiful song - good luck to your map

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

doesn't change the rule

But no problem Good luck

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I said you could skip some diffs if you wanted but thank you ! >w<

Double post - sry >.>

Hey!

General

1. Firstly, change offset to 29645 (it's not perfect, but it should be around this one D:)
   Don't forget to resnap all notes and move your sections too.
2. Also, default clap sounds very very bad. Try this one: link. For me it sounds more better.
3. 01:56:057 - end second kiai here.

Shy Heart

1. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap from the beginning
2. 00:37:457 (2,3) - looks and plays bad (you used 1/2 in such a easy Easy D:). Make this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:38:657 (1,2) - I don't like how you missed downbeat (yes, there should be downbeat, change offset and you'll see it C:). So, try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:557 (1) - finish to the end
5. 01:07:757 (1) - no-no-no, start it from 01:08:057 - and finish on 01:08:657 -
6. 01:09:257 (2) - missed clap in the end
7. 01:12:857 (1) - remove clap from beginning
8. 01:14:057 (2) - missed clap
9. 01:15:257 (1) - remove clap from beginning D:
10. 01:17:657 (4) - finish?
11. 01:18:257 - quite strange choice of break time. Map this part.
12. 01:30:257 - ^ as you have 2 notes and then one more break. Quite irrationally.
13. 01:34:757 (1,2,3) - this red tick are hard to read. Make a slider from 01:35:057 - to 01:36:257 -
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:36:857 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Use copypaste is bad >:O Try to make something unique! If not, make changes which I noticed earlier. Also,
    
    01:36:857 (1) - there should be clap on the end, not on the beginning
15. 01:44:657 (2,3) - make slider, you remember. And don't forget about clap
16. 01:45:857 (1) - remove clap, and again, missed downbeat. Fix it
17. 01:53:657 (1) - clap to the end
18. 02:00:257 (5) - extend to 02:00:857 - . Kick sliders are no-no.
19. 02:05:657 (1) - clap should be on repeat, not on the beginning
20. 02:09:857 (2) - clap
21. 02:14:657 (2) - extend to 02:15:257 - (kick slider again)
22. 02:19:457 (1) - start it from 02:18:857 -
23. 02:20:657 - and then add a note here
24. 02:21:857 (3,1) - transform it to the slider:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Maybe map till 03:32:057 - ? As Normal.
    Also, you have sloooooooowwwwwww slider velocity and little spacing. That makes your map quite inaccurate. Try to use 1,0x spacing

Kind Heart

1. I must say that your claps are sometimes off. For example, 00:32:657 (4) - here should be clap, but it's here 00:33:257 (6) - and so on. Please, put claps on every second beat (as in music). I won't notice this again.
2. Again, wide your spacing to 1,0x?
3. 00:29:657 (1) - remove clap
4. 00:37:757 (6) - I don't like how 00:36:857 (5) - overlaps almost half of this slider. It bad for players and looks bad :<
5. 00:58:457 (1) - finish?
6. 01:02:957 (1) - maybe remove this note? Too many 1/2 objects D:
7. 01:07:607 - You prefer strange places for breaks. Map this break, please.
8. 01:17:357 (1,2,3,4) - nononono, use this rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:23:657 (5) - make 1/1 repeat slider. And remove 01:24:857 (1) -
10. 01:41:957 (3) - you see, it touches 01:41:057 (1) - and it looks ugly :<
11. 01:48:557 (5,6,7,8,9) - make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:00:857 (1) - end spinner on 02:02:657 -
13. 02:08:057 (1,3) - hey, make it symmetrical!
14. 02:14:057 (1) - remove finish
15. 02:19:457 (1) - remove this spinner D:
16. 02:22:457 (2,3) - nooooo make repeat slider:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:35:057 - map this break.
18. 02:43:457 (1,2,3) - stack them all or unstack them
19. 02:54:557 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe make longer zigzag:
    
    SPOILER

    
    It will be more readable
20. 03:01:157 (1,2) - remove this notes. It will be good pause. Also, objects with the 1/2 distance after spinner in easy-normals are VERY bad.
21. 03:11:357 (7) - you remember? 00:37:757 (6) -
22. 03:20:057 (1,2,3) - this looks really bad, and (1) overlaps repeat arrow and makes it almost hidden. Rearrange them.
23. 03:23:057 (1,2,3) - stack them or unstack all
24. 03:24:257 (4,5,6) - and it's better to unstack it, as you have repeat slider
25. 03:27:257 (1,1) - look, make this:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Spinner starts 03:30:257 - here.

Brave Heart

1. Again, remember my suggestion about hitsounds. Put claps on every 2nd beat, pleaseee.
2. 00:56:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:08:057 (2) - maybe rearrange it so that it would not overlap 01:06:857 (5) - ? As it quite hard to read
4. 01:15:857 (2,3,4) - move it some grids right so that they wouldn't be overlapped by 01:15:257 (1) - :\
5. 01:17:657 (1) - ^
6. 01:17:807 - whyyyy you have such strange breaks? D: Map it!
7. 01:29:657 - ^
8. 01:36:857 (1) - remove finish from the end
9. 01:45:257 (1) - finish to the end
10. 01:50:657 (1) - ^
11. 01:56:057 (1) - ^ to the beginning
12. 02:07:307 (1) - wait wait, this slider is hidden! >:O
13. 02:07:757 (2) - ^
14. 02:15:257 (6) - change clap to finish and then remove all claps from this part 02:15:257 ~ 02:21:257
15. 02:25:457 ~~~ - claps?
16. 02:48:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reduce this jumps, they don't fit
17. 02:53:657 (1) - change clap to finish
18. 03:03:257 (1) - ^
19. 03:22:457 - end kiai here. And maaaap this break, huh?!
20. 04:02:057 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - naaah, separate them
21. 04:12:257 (1) - make normal speed. I don't feel speed up here
22. 04:46:457 (7) - new combo
23. 05:00:857 (4,5) - stack them as you have so tiny spacing D:
24. 05:07:757 (7) - remove finish

Not bad. But you should work more! Good luck!

Thank you !
I'll fix everything soon ><

Request From IRC >w< (or queue xD)

Crystal Crystal
[General]
well , some rhythm are bad ._. i don't want to point every and my bad Englishso i'll teach you
this is just basic , but it works on this map
[Shy]
00:48:845 (3) - add Finish at the end
00:59:645 (3) - remove clap at the beginning
01:07:445 (x) - add a note here because of the rhythm
01:09:245 (2) - spacing
01:34:445 (1,1) -
see ? (1) is behind 300 , please move it somewhere so the newbie player won't get confuse !
01:41:045 (2,3) - spacing
02:00:995 (1) - start on 02:01:145 -
02:14:045 (1,2) -

These 2 hit objects are behind "押忍" , please move it to some where .

[Kind Heart]
00:32:645 (4,5,6) - spacing
00:37:745 (6) - ^
00:47:345 (2) - spacing
01:01:145 (4) - spacing
02:17:795 (x) - add a break
02:22:145 (1) - behind "押忍"
03:04:445 (4) - spacing
03:06:845 (7) - spacing

[Collab]
00:56:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - something weird , try this
01:06:545 (4) - put on 308,248
02:02:645 (3) - touch the life bar x_x
02:06:695 (6) - ugly x_x

(6) is too high when testing , and it's messy on this part (5,6,1,1,2)
02:18:845 (3) - spacing
02:26:645 (4) - a few part overlaps on (3)
04:02:045 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - don't do this , it will make players confuse
04:48:395 (2,3) - touch the life bar x_x


That's all good luck for PonPonCrystal
Star!

PonPonAy <3
Thank you ~

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Shy Heart]
01:05:645 (1,2) - a little close....·~
01:08:045 (1,2) - ^
01:44:645 (2,3) - ^~
01:57:845 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
02:21:845 (2,1) - a little close~
02:23:045 (2,1) - alignment~

[Kind Heart]
00:35:645 (3,4,5) - distance not uniform~
01:41:645 - nc?
01:41:945 - remove nc?~
03:23:645 - nc?~
03:24:845 - nc?~

[]
00:30:845 - nc?~

00:34:745 - delete note?~
00:34:895 - add note?~
00:35:945 (6) - move to 00:36:095 - >?~just suggestion~
00:38:645 - remove nc?~
00:40:445 - to 00:42:095 - vocal a little strange~i have suggestion~maybe u can change like~~~~if u dont like ~just ignore it~xD
01:03:245 (2,3,4) - maybe u can keep to uniform distance~

02:20:045 - nc?~
02:21:245 - remove nc?~
02:22:445 - nc?~

02:39:545 (3,5) - hmm~~~just put more beautiful~like~

03:53:045 - tp 03:58:145 - vocal....is .........i feel no good....but idk how to change it......i think u can make like04:01:445 - to 04:05:645 - ......

04:41:345 - remove nc~
04:41:795 - nc~
04:46:445 - ^~

that's all~
nice song~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~xD

Thannnkyhuu A-tann ~ >w<

Hi, from my queue.
I will skip 1 diff to be correct with my queue's rules sorry

[General]
Offset: 845 is better

[Shy Heart]
00:37:445 (2) - Add whislte on the head and remove finish and whistle from the end. It fits better
00:38:645 (1) - Remove NC
00:39:245 (2) - Add NC and finish on the head
00:43:445 (1) - This slider: 00:46:445 (1) is too soon after the spinner for the easiest diff. To fix this you just have to reduce the spinner bye 1/1, and so: 00:45:245
00:48:245 (3) - This finish sounds too loud. Remove it and whistle is ok since it fits very good this part
01:34:445 (1) - Whistle on this slider's end
01:44:645 (2,3) - 1/2 slider with repeat would be easier:

01:45:845 (1) - You should reduce this slider so you can use a finish hitsound on the long white tick. Use this rhythm it's better:

01:50:645 (1) - This follows better since you should to use a circle on 01:50:645 to follow the voice:

01:56:645 (2) - Whiste on the tail for consistency
02:10:445 (1) - Reduce this spinner by 1/1 since the next circle is too soon from it
02:15:395 (1) - ^

[Kind Heart]
01:08:045 I'd add a circle with clap here
01:37:745 (1) - Remove NC
01:41:045 (1) - ^
01:46:445 (1) - ^
01:47:045 (1) - ^
02:03:545 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1) - Why so much new combos °-° Useless, remove some of them.
02:20:045 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a Normal. Remove this circle plz
03:06:845 (7) - Distance snap
03:10:445 (6) - New combo

That's all, good luck ;3

Thannkyhuu ~ ^^

Hi

[Brave Heart]

00:28:900 Remove New Color
00:28:600 to 00:30:700 instead of all whistle put claps on red ticks has a better feel to it
02:00:400 New Color
02:04:600 ^

that's about it Nice Song
and good luck in the ranking

Thannkyouu ~

EDIT: Here comes the English Ver. Sorry for my bad english.
HI，M4M


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All in all
Nice song .Good speed for my bad play skill 　＞　＜

lets talk about EASY .
【shy heart】

00:35:200 this slider and next slider's overlap is hard for new player to read.and the slider1 turns back 3 times, it seams new player cant handle it too. Maybe you can map this part like this?(the slider turns back one time, the screenshot didnt show it.)


01:02:800 (2) note2's distance is a little bit far from Prev.

01:21:700 (3) remove this note

01:22:000 (4) I dont like to say it,but maybe too hard for new player? my suggestion is that change the slider into notes
seems looks good like this

01:54:700 a note after spinner is hard for new player too. but it matches the song,just wait till other points it out.Maybe it is oK for easy.

02:15:400 (1,3) 和 02:16:000 (1,2,3) too many overlaps is hard for newplayer（I hate to say itT T）

02:42:700 (2,4) FOR EASY it is too hard. Is this a normal diff ?（if it is not, how about change it to a normal diff?）

04:39:400 (1,3) ^

04:40:300 Add finish instead of whistle,seems better for me.


Just ignore my "new player blah blah blah" i know its annoying


Let talk about HARD
【Brave heart】


00:07:000 (2,3) suggest to remove NOTE3 ,and change note2 to a slider ends at red line(00:07:300)

00:10:300 (5) remove Slider 5 then directly put a note on 00:10:600

02:10:900 (1) change the slider into notes feels better?

03:38:650 (1,2) 和 03:39:550 (3,4) how about add a note between two sliders?

03:47:350 (6) remove this note

04:20:650 (1,2) feel a little strange here,the rhythm starts from 04:20:800. suggest to remove SLIDER1 and make SLIDER2 start from 04:20:800

04:40:300 remove the NOTE,let the slider turns back one more time , add finish instead whistle


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All in all again ,HARD is fun to play， good luck!~ hope it can be RANKed soon

BAD MOD，and bad english， all for suggestions. if u dont like just ignore

:3
M4M
中文mod
[General]
first kiai is so fast,use short kiai is butter
[shy hrart]
Feel straight, some idea for looking.
00:10:300 (6,7) - 00:11:200 (7) - NC? and direction 6→7is bad for looking,6→7→1 is hard find the direction
00:31:000 (1) - end at 00:32:200 is butter
00:50:500 (2) - straight feel bad,00:50:500 (2,3,4,1) ,Crowding in the lower left corner
00:52:300 (1) - like my do in img,change rhythm is butter
01:10:300 (3,4,5) - all get a little up
01:14:200 (2,3,4) -^ a little down
01:28:300 (1) - remove NC
01:54:700 (1) - remove 1，rule say not fast start note after in easily diff
02:05:800 (4) - ctrl+h and ctrl+g
02:49:600 (6) - NC
02:57:400 (1) - on the right is better,on the left is too crowded
03:58:000 - 03:59:200 this 2 4white line use clap vol of tick sound:roll:
[Brave Heart]
00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - too crowded
00:13:000 (3) - remove one of white Point
00:15:400 (5,6) - like my do in img,5 end in blue line seem butter
00:28:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so bad.not follow music, like me do in img
00:45:100 (1) - not good foe look,move the red point
00:50:200 (1) - no need back,lower right corner is too crowded
01:20:200 (1,2,3) - you do it hardly read 3, I think 3start→1end→2start get a line is butter
01:39:400 (1) - remove NC
01:46:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - anti-clockwise is butter
01:55:000 (1,2,3,4,5) - ??，no follow music
02:30:700 (2,3,4) - two side of red point ,on one arc
02:40:600 (1,2) - short slider not good use covered,a little far of 1 start→1end
02:41:800 (4,5) - ^
03:23:800~03:52:300 - don't know how too mod
04:01:600 (1) - middle tick have clap vol
04:03:400 (3) - ^
end - in my img,follow music
last kiai? soft song not need so straight

good luck and star

Thankyou! >w<

haii~~(?

[General]

all looks fine

[Brave Heart]

01:02:800 - i think this break is unnecessary...maybe you can fill it

01:10:900 (2,3,4,5) - this fixs the vocal better~

01:17:200 (2) - i prefer this

01:20:650 - add note?

02:10:150 (2,3,4) - feels uncomfortable.. try 4 notes?

02:29:200 (4,5,6,7) - why not like 02:28:000 (1,2,3) - ?

02:31:900 (5,6) - this..a little strange. try just

02:37:900 (3) - move

03:05:500 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - xD

03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - try make it more good-looking

03:49:150 (3,4,5,6) - ^

03:59:050 - add note?

04:01:600 (1,3) - oh...it's lazy

04:20:200 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this may be better?

04:20:800 (1) - nc

04:25:600 (1) - this

[Shy Heart]

oh...because this is 2☆ so you'd better follow the DS....open AImod to adjust spacing

i don't know how to mod easy diff ;w;

00:35:800 (1) - please no stack

there are some silders which are too long..such as
01:40:600 (1) -
02:04:000 (2,4) -
02:21:400 (4) -
03:57:400 (2) -
04:07:000 (3) -

02:27:100 (1,1) - why nc?

03:38:800 (4) - plz no stack

star and good luck x3

Thannnkyouu sunshyy ~ <3 >w<

M4M~

[Brave Heart]

00:07:450 (3) - move to 00:07:300
00:29:650 (4,5) - maybe move to a diffrent place?
00:59:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is so alone q.q maby map the next Break?
01:25:900 (1) - RNC
01:26:500 (2) - NC
01:43:000 (1,4) - remove whistle
01:50:200 (3) - Maybe remove finish or just make it a bit lower
01:56:200 (3,4) - make a symmetrical square
03:26:200 (1) - RNC

[Shy Heart]

00:40:900 Nooo don't make a break here
02:07:150 - ^
02:39:400 (7) - remove finish or make it lower?
02:50:200 (1) - clap

Good luck :3

m4m from your queue
General[/color
The placement is NICE already!


01:22:000 (3) clap at the beginning
Maybe add three notes between the two spinners? at01:50:800 , 01:51:400 and01:52:000
03:01:900 (3) end at03:02:200 and make 03:02:800 (1) start at03:02:500
04:19:000 (6) clap at hte end, instead of finish and, add finish at 04:20:800 (1) 's end

Brave Heart
00:29:650 the notes here is kind of……hmm, confusing. Maybe make it fit the song better, it's up to you
Maybe move the finish sound from01:21:400 (3) 's end to01:23:200 (1) 's end
02:33:400 (1) remove the finish sound at its end
Maybe the KIAI should end at02:54:401 ?
04:25:600 change the placement like this may fit the vocal better http://puu.sh/1nPeb

And good luck~as newbie mappers ^_^ I love this song.

Thankyou ~

~ Mod again!

Red: Must be fixed.
Blue: Highly recommended.
Black: Just suggestion/nazi stuff.

[General]

1. There's no Title/Artist Unicode in both diff (check the notepad). Added it.
2. Inconsistency in kiai times: It's not really need to fix since it's different on collab diff, but if you change it would be great :3
   
   AIBat

   Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
   - [Brave Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 02:55:000
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000
   - [Shy Heart] :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:02:200, ends on 00:21:400
   Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:400, ends on 01:28:600
   Kiai #3: Starts on 02:35:800, ends on 03:04:000 (I think 02:55:000 - would be great imo :\)
   Kiai #4: Starts on 03:52:600, ends on 04:11:650
   Kiai #5: Starts on 04:11:800, ends on 04:31:000

[Shy Heart]

1. Check this!
   
   AIBat again

   Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
   04:25:670 - snap to 04:25:600
   04:28:670 - snap to 04:28:600
2. 00:10:300 (6) - (end) Finish is really weird here. Remove it and add whistle since I don't here any finish sounds in the music.
3. 01:13:000 (3) - ^
4. 01:17:800 (3) - ^
5. 01:21:400 (2) - ^
6. 02:39:400 (7) - ^
7. 02:43:000 (5) - (begin) ^
8. 04:04:000 (5) - (end) ^
9. 04:19:000 (6) - (end) ^
10. 00:30:100 (1) - Remove this? Not a very good start after this break. (Or you can make a reserve slider with 00:30:400 (2) - would be great, too :3)
11. 00:31:000 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is a bit weird imo, I can't explain why ;; so try mine?
    
12. 00:35:800 (1) - (reserve) Where's clap ;;?
13. 01:26:200 (1) - (end) ^
14. 03:08:800 (2) - (end) ^
15. 03:38:800 (4) - (begin) ^
16. 03:40:000 (5) - ^
17. 00:37:600 (2) - (begin) clap. And I'd suggest you to make it straight ._.
18. 00:40:600 (6) - Finish please!
19. 04:20:800 (1) - (end) ^
20. 00:51:700 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm weird again ;_; Try this
    
21. 00:56:200 (7,1) - Delete (1) and 1/4 longer to (7) is better than now. Reserve on the blue tick is really strange!
22. 01:16:000 (1) - Remove NC?
23. 01:22:000 (3) - That 1/4 slider is a bit hard to the newbies since your SV is low, and this is the easiest diff in your map ._. so 1/4 longer and remove (4) would be best :3
24. 01:23:200 (1) - Ehh, add a note here and move this spinner to 01:23:800 - (end at the same time). Because you do this at 00:16:000 (1,1) - something ;n;
25. 01:52:600 (1) - I'd suggest you to remove this and put a break here. 2 spinners here seems a bit empty ._.
26. 02:01:000 (1) - Unfit spinner. Changed like this would be better imo D:
    
27. 02:04:000 (2,4) - These slider is a bit ugly. Remake it by using the slider after osu! update?
28. 02:07:150 - Well just a suggest: map something here? It's mappable and shouldn't break here._.
29. 02:27:100 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These NCes is a bit messy to newbies. Suggest remove nc at 02:27:700 (1) -
30. 02:55:600 (1,2,1) - Remove nc at (1) first, then if you want to make overlaps part, just overlap these notes. Or you can place them to a straight line.
31. 02:56:800 (2,3,1) - ^
32. 03:02:500 (1) - Should begin at 03:02:800 - since the vocal appear on that time, not on the red tick.
33. 04:03:700 (4) - Remove this? Seems that 1/1 works on this parttern, not 1/2.
    This diff is rankable now o-o!! But needs some more nazi/suggest on your slider and placement though.

[Brave Heart]

1. Crystal's Part
2. 00:05:800 (3) - Same thing at Shy heart. So remove finish.
3. 00:10:300 (5) - (end) ^
4. 00:07:450 (3,4) - It's better if you overlap these 2, it would be more like stream here.
5. 00:09:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - Place like this since it's stream here. What you've done is like 1/2 imo ._.
   
   
6. 00:29:050 (2,3,4) - This parttern is extremely confused due to the notes at blue tick, a bit unreadable since we're talking about Hard diff. Use a 1/2 reserve slider to instead these notes please.
   
7. 00:32:800 (3) - (begin,end) Missing clap!
8. 00:34:300 (4) - Remove clap since there's no clap sound.
9. 00:37:900 (1) - ^
10. 01:59:200 (4) - (end) ^
11. 00:50:200 (1) - Place on somewhere else? I hate overlaps ;; but it's up2u owo
12. 01:02:350 - You should map here, break is unfit imo owo
13. 02:10:900 (1,3) - Make their shape same please
14. 03:08:200 (1) - Remove a reserve? It's better imo D:
15. 03:19:000 - Break start at here please
16. 04:01:600 (1) - Just suggestion. It's a bit empty at the downbeat if you make an 2/1 slider here o3o, so maybe change to 2 1/1 sliders? Don't forget to add finish on the downbeat if you except this~
17. 04:06:400 (1) - Again, a 1/2 slider at 04:06:400 - then move spinner to 04:07:000 -
18. 04:37:900 (1,2) - Swap NC?
    
19. Sun Rainbow's Part
20. 01:17:800 (3) - (end) Remove clap please. Clap is unfit here!
21. 01:37:000 (3) - ^
22. 01:46:600 (2) - ^
23. 02:31:450 (3) - ^
24. 02:31:900 (5,6) - (reserves) ^
25. 02:31:600 (4) - Missing clap.
26. 02:35:200 (3) - ^
27. 01:21:400 (3) - Remove finish. There's no finish sound here.
28. 01:44:800 (4) - Clap at begin&end, then whistle at reserve (if you want)
29. 02:46:900 (1,2,3) - I'd suggest you to add note at 02:46:900 - then move (1,2,3) 1/2 later (Remove (3)'s one reserve). Fits the vocal o3o
    
30. Reed R Gale's Part
    
    Huge Hitsound mod!!

    1. Fix these b4 fix anything in this part.
    2. 03:23:800 (1) - (end) Remove clap.
    3. 03:24:400 (1) - (begin) clap.
    4. 03:24:850 (2) - (begin) Remove clap.
    5. 03:26:650 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    6. 03:27:550 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    7. 03:28:000 (4) - clap
    8. 03:28:450 (6,1) - Remove clap
    9. 03:29:200 (3) - (begin) clap
    10. 03:29:200 (3) - (end) remove clap
    11. 03:30:100 (5) - (end) remove clap
    12. 03:31:000 (1) - (end) Soft-sound here, no Normal-sound.
    13. 03:33:100 (1) - ^
    14. 03:33:100 (1) - (begin) Remove finish.
    15. 03:33:100 (1) - (end) Remove clap, add finish.
    16. 03:34:600 (3,6) - Remove clap
    17. 03:35:500 (7) - (end)Soft-sound, remove finish.
    18. 03:36:400 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    19. 03:37:150 (8) - Soft sound.
    20. 03:37:450 (10) - (begin) Remove finish
    21. 03:38:350 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    22. 03:39:250 (3) - (end) Remove clap
    23. 03:39:700 (4) - (end) Remove finish
    24. 03:40:150 (1) - (begin) Remove finish
    25. 03:40:600 (2) - (body) Remove whistle
    26. 03:40:600 (2) - (begin) Remove finish
    27. 03:41:200 (3) - Soft-sound, clap
    28. 03:41:650 (2) - remove clap
    29. 03:43:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    30. 03:43:450 (2) - (reserve) clap
    31. 03:43:450 (2) - (end) Remove clap
    32. 03:43:900 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    33. 03:44:650 (5) - Remove finish.
    34. 03:44:800 (1) - (end)Soft-sound, Remove finish
    35. 03:45:400 (1) - (begin) Soft-sound
    36. 03:45:850 (2) - (reserve) clap
    37. 03:46:300 (3) - (end) Soft-sound
    38. 03:46:750 (4) - (begin) Soft-sound
    39. 03:47:200 (5) - Clap
    40. 03:49:300 (4) - Remove clap
    41. 03:49:450 (5) - Soft-sound
    42. 03:49:600 (6) - Remove finish
    43. 04:11:800 (1) - Finish, remove whistle
    44. 04:12:100 (3) - Soft-sound
    45. 04:12:700 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    46. 04:13:150 (2) - (begin) Remove clap
    47. 04:13:600 (3) - Remove finish, add clap.
    48. 04:13:900 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    49. 04:14:800 (2) - (begin) clap
    50. 04:14:800 (2) - (reserve) Normal-sound
    51. 04:15:850 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    52. 04:16:600 (3) - (reserve) Remove clap
    53. 04:17:050 (4) - (end) Soft-sound
    54. 04:17:800 (1) - Soft-sound
    55. 04:18:250 (4) - Remove clap
    56. 04:18:550 (5) - (begin) Remove clap
    57. 04:19:000 (1) - (end) Remove clap
    58. 04:19:900 (5) - Soft-sound
    59. 04:20:200 (6) - Remove finish
    60. 04:20:650 (1) - (end) soft-sound, clap
    61. 04:21:400 (3) - (begin) soft-sound, finish
    62. 04:22:150 (5) - (end) remove clap
    63. 04:22:600 (6) - (begin,end) Remove clap
    64. 04:23:500 (8) - soft-sound
    65. 04:24:100 (3) - (begin) soft-sound
    66. 04:24:100 (3) - (end) clap
    67. 04:24:700 (5) - Remove finish
    68. 04:25:000 (6) - Soft-sound, remove finish
    69. 04:25:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound, remove finish
    70. 04:28:600 (1) - (begin) soft-sound
31. 03:24:400 (1) - Remove NC, this nc is not really need imo
32. 03:31:900 (3) - 2 reserves is boring, remove 2 reserves and add a 1/2 slider at 03:32:500 - maybe?
33. 03:36:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This stream's placement is very un-flow. Try this or something else.
    
    
34. 03:44:650 (5,1) - Spacing...
35. 03:44:800 (1) - Please Remove this sv change here. Realllllly Reallllllly unfit.
36. 03:49:900 (1) - Maybe a jump to confirm the rhythm (1/2)? Hard to read without it ;;
37. 04:14:800 (2) - Change to a 1/2 slider?
38. 04:15:850 (1) - Remove this and add a note at 04:16:000 - since there's no sound at blue tick.
39. 04:20:650 (1) - ^ (add note at downbeat)
40. 04:16:600 (3) - Pretty messy part, so maybe rotate 90° this
41. 04:20:950 (2) - This slider is really ugly than others.
42. 04:25:600 (1) - end at downbeat to fit with vocal
43. Really needs work in this collab part. Really needs.

Good luck Crystal! You don't need to reply this but I wish you could change the hole things I mentioned .w.
*Notice: check this modpost when you have enough time. I put so many hitsound mods at Reed R Gale's part, and I think you fix the hole diff by yourself -w-
~

[General]

1. Mp3 is bad quality, consider changing a better one, and you cut this song in a odd place :/ Here is the full ver. mp3, and better quality, if you use this mp3, set offset to 375

My mod is based on your mp3

[Sky Heart]

1. 03:11:200 (5) - Missing a clap here?
2. 04:25:600 (5) - ^

Call me back for a full mod when you changed mp3

Do not kudos this post since I have already got 1

[General]

1. Set preview point to 00:29:175?
2. Maybe you should map the very beginning part, it's a little weird start at 00:29:175

[Shy Heart]

1. 02:49:575 (7) - NC this spinner
2. 01:05:775 (4) - Missing clap here?
3. 01:33:375 (2) - ^
4. 01:33:975 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, you can try use normal hitsound here, 60%-80% volume
5. 01:40:575 (1) - Clap?
6. 02:00:375 (1) - Clap instead of whistle
7. 02:54:975 (2) - Clap?
8. 02:57:975 (1) - End with normal hitsound would be better, also, 60%-80% volume
9. 03:27:975 (2) - Slider head, add finish, 03:28:875 (3) slider end, add finish, so that fit 03:21:975, 03:23:175, 03:24:375
10. 05:05:175 (2,4) - I don't think finish sound fit here very well, music here is quiet, using whistle or just leave them empty would be better

[Brave Heart]

1. 00:43:575 (1) - Finish here sounds bad, remove it would be better
2. 00:56:025 (1) - Why NC here?
3. 01:44:175 (2) - A reverse slider here feel kinda odd, a no reverse slider seems better and fit music more
4. 02:14:775 - 02:24:075 - Finish sound doesn't fit in this quiet part imo, considering use whistle or leave them empty
5. 02:34:575 (1) - Missing a clap?
6. 02:59:775 - Add a note here with clap so that fit the music
7. 03:00:375 (1) - Try normal hitsound to slider head?
8. 03:51:375 (1) - Why NC?
9. 04:06:675 (4) - (nazi) End point 1 grid up so that it's parallel to other 3 sliders before it
10. 04:11:775 (1) - Unreasonable jump :/
11. 04:59:475 - 05:07:275 - Well, I'm still feel finish sound doesn't fit in this part, just personal feeling

Thannkyou ~
Changed everything except normal hitsounds

Hi Crystal~
random F2 of this song ww

Nishino Kana<3

[overall]
I think it's a litte too many rest time in this...:<

[Shy Heart]

03:41:175 (1)- so looooooong spin OAO"3
04:15:975 (4,1)- maybe so far :/

[Brave Heart]

00:35:475 (6)- maybe change to: 00:35:625- add a note and slider 00:35:775- to 00:36:075- (like 00:34:425 (3,4)- )
00:36:525 (2)- dele this?
00:42:375 (4)- no slider here change to note?
00:57:075 (5)- end in 00:57:375-
01:05:025 (2)- maybe not so straight line (with 1.3)
01:12:075 (1)- add a note in 01:12:075- silder start in 01:12:375- ?(long white line~)
01:17:175 (1)- hide here isn't good when open hidden mod ;3...
01:40:275 (2,3,4)- not so straight ..?
01:44:775 (3)- not repeat here, isn't fit >_<
02:03:825 (2)- no this maybe o.o
02:34:575 (1)- not repeat too..?
02:47:475- note here~ empty
02:59:775- ^
03:02:775 (1)- change slider ?
03:22:275- to 03:32:175- not rest in your kiai time >_<
03:34:875- has vocal here~
03:50:775- to last :your slider stack half so many o_oa? i think it's no good that way :/

good luck >w< ganbatte~!

Hey M4M

Shy Heart

00:38:175 (7,1,2,3) - Place it right next to the preview sliderstart at the left side, it fits much better and easier to see
00:42:975 (1) - , 03:16:575 (1) - , 03:23:175 (1) - , 03:24:375 (1) - Combo really needed?
02:54:675 (1) - , 02:55:275 (1) - Remove new combo and add a new combo here 02:55:575 (2) -
04:10:275 (5,1) - These are hard to see, place them a bit up?

Brave Heart

00:31:575 (1) - , 03:20:775 (1,1) - , 03:36:375 (1) - , 04:11:775 (1) - ,04:17:475 (1) - , 04:33:375 (1) - , 04:41:325 (1) - , 04:57:375 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:575 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + H them? it looks better imo and plays better
00:37:125 - This end of the slider doesnt fit together with the vocal
00:56:325 (3,4,5,6) - I got REALLY confused at this part when playing, try to make it more easier to read
01:17:175 (1) - You cant see this circle good when playing, place it besides?
01:48:375 (4) - This slider is also hard to see at the beginning, try to move it abit more up
01:54:975 (1) - New combo really needed?
02:06:075 (5) - New combo remove next
02:18:075 (1) - Remove combo and add one at the next slider
02:57:675 (2) - I cant get good with this slider, you map with the vocal, and this slider doesnt fit the vocal
03:50:775 (1,2) - You follow the rythm and then suddenly at (3) you change to something else, this part is abit confusing, especially 03:52:725 (4) - , try change it into something what fits the rythm,same at 03:53:625 (1,2,3) - , 03:55:725 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
04:03:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - You cant here one bit of a sliderbeat in the BG music, why stream? , it breaks the whole mappingstyle and song so far and absolutely doesnt fit at all // this one 04:20:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - fits but not the other one
04:26:925 (1,2,3,4) - , 04:38:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream also doesnt fit, it breaks the song
04:52:575 (1) - The vocal ends at 04:53:175 - not 04:53:475 - here

Overall its almost rankable, try to change what i said at least, i tolarated a bit more than usual

From my queue~
sorry for late ;(


Nice song lol good luck for rank! xD

GET MOD SLOT!~ lol

hi
mod request from forum-PM

[Brave Heart]
* 01:53:475 (1,2,3,4,5) -
* 03:12:675 (4) - new combo
* 03:23:917 - it's not a good choice to put a break in kiai time
* 03:57:525 (7,8) - use 1/3 here e.g.
* 03:50:775 - imo the hitobjects in the rap part are off-beat e.g. 03:52:725 (4) - (a missing beat) plz fix them!
* 04:16:875 (7) - use 1/6. start at 04:16:875 - , end at 04:17:075 -
* ^btw SV changes here, so add a newcombo

good luck

hi, M4M

[Shy Heart]

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.

00:42:957(1)- remove this NC, doesn't really fit.
01:19:275 (1,2,3) - I think maybe this part would look better if it was more centered
01:42:975 (1) - remove the finish from the reverse
02:07:575 (1) - This would be better if it was symmetrical
02:09:975 (1) - ^
02:27:975 (1) - This spinner feels kind of random to me, I suggest mapping this part, or having it end at 02:29:175 - so that the spinner corresponds with her voice.
03:22:575 (1,2,1) - maybe replace this with a repeating 1/8 slider
03:23:175 (1) - if no to previous suggestion, remove NC here
03:23:775 (2) - NC
03:24:375 ( 1) - remove NC
03:27:975 (2) - replace finish at head with whistle
04:10:575 (1,2,3) - move (2,3) to the left more to make it more lined up with the curve formed by 1, right now the angle is too sharp I think
04:24:375 (2) - I'd like this to be more symmetrical as well
04:33:975 (3) - Make this more symmetrical
04:41:175 (3) - remove the finish from the end, maybe replace with a whistle, but the finish does not fit there.

I think overall finishes are a bit overused in this difficulty, try limiting their use to downbeats unless the music has a finish like sound at that part.


[Brave Heart]


Again, too many finishes in this difficulty. The music doesn't tell you to put that many in, so limit them to downbeats.

00:30:375 (4) - the overlap with this and 00:31:575 (1) - is a bit ugly, I'd suggest either have them stack or move further apart so they don't overlap.
00:36:375 (1,2,3,4) - This plays a bit oddly and the random spacing difference between (1,2,3) then (3,4) is odd. Make (4) spaced 1.26 like the others and maybe have it follow a curve set by (1,2,3), maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VX2I
00:41:775 (1,2,3,4) - I'd have 4 further away from (1,2,3). Right now the spacing looks too similar even though the time difference is not. Space (4) 1.2x. Also, make the spacing between (1,2,3) the same, right now it is not consistent.
01:02:625 (2) - Make this symmetrical so it makes a nice blanket around 01:02:475 (1) -
01:03:975 (4) - ^
01:05:175 (3) - stack end with 01:06:375 (5) -
01:13:575 (3,4) - replace with just a repeating 1/8 slider
01:34:275 - reduce the volume here, there is no instrumental and the sliderslide noise is too loud for what is happening.
01:46:275 (4) - NC
01:47:175 (1) - remove NC
01:48:375 (4) - NC
02:11:775 (4,1,2) - ugly overlap between (4) and (2)
02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please make this a perfect hexagon
02:34:575 (1) - Make this perfectly symmetrical, it will look a lot better.
02:46:875 (6,7,8) - Nazi, but make these perfectly spaced. I know its pretty close but I noticed it while playing. Maybe I'm weird.
02:47:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This would look better if these were just equilateral triangle patterns. Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/1VXkc
03:00:375 - Decrease volume here
03:21:975 - I really don't like this break being here. A break during a kiai time just doesn't seem right. You don't have a break here in the Easy diff, so you might as well map this part.
03:58:425 (2,3) - This overlap isn't very good looking. Moving 03:58:875 (3) - to (240,68) both looks and plays better to me.
04:09:975 (1) - Increase the BSD to 1/8 and increase the length by one tick. Do the same for 04:11:175 (4) - . I know that this causes overlap with the other parts, so you have to remap them. I recommend this rhythm. http://puu.sh/1VXua. It fits the vocal part better IMO
04:12:375 (1) - Same idea as before, increase BSD to 1/8 and increase length of this slider by 1 tick.
04:16:575 (6,7) - Don't do this. This is extremely confusing because the distance makes it look like this time difference is the same as 04:16:125 (3,4,5,6) - . The SV decrease here also does not fit at all. Move that timing point to 04:17:775 - and make 04:16:875 (7) - the proper length.
04:42:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part is just kind of messy to read and doesn't really fit either the music or the vocals. Try a rhythm like this if you want to keep those short slider parts. http://puu.sh/1VXCJ
04:52:575 - I don't think a SV decrease fits here. Remove that and remap to make slider lengths fit again.
04:59:475 - Decrease the volume here, too loud for this part.

That's all, good luck.

Hi
M4M from your queue~

[Shy Heart]


[Brave Heart]


That's it
Good luck :3