1. 01:07:575 (7) remove finish
2. 01:17:175 (1) ^
3. 01:44:775 (3) ^
4. 01:41:475 (3)
5. 01:53:175 (1) remove finish
6. 02:17:175 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
7. 02:32:775 (4) I prefer
   and add clap in 02:33:375
8. 02:41:175 (1) remove finish
9. 02:45:975 (1) ^
10. 03:00:375 ^ and green line vol 60%→5%
11. 03:02:775 green line vol 100%→75%
    finish is too noisy I feel D:
12. 03:21:975 green line vol 100%→80%
13. 03:48:375 remove finish and green line vol 90%→5%
14. 04:02:775 (4) remove finish
15. 04:12:375 (1) ^
16. 04:14:775 (3) ^
17. 04:17:175 (4) ^
18. 04:23:175 (5) ^
19. 04:26:775 (4) ^
20. 04:31:575 (5) ^
21. 04:36:375 (3) ^
22. 04:41:175 (3) ^
23. 04:45:975 (6) 04:47:175 (6) ^
24. 04:50:775 (3) ^
25. 04:55:575 (1) ^ and add finish here 04:57:975 (3)
26. 05:02:775 remove finish and green line vol 55%→5%

1. 01:31:575 (1,2,3,4) DS?
2. 01:41:175 (1) remove finish
3. 01:57:975 (1) ^
4. 02:00:375 (1) ^
5. 02:09:975 (1) ^
6. 02:26:775 (5) ^
7. 02:37:875 (1) ctrl+G
8. 02:41:175 (1) ^
9. 02:48:375 (3) ^
10. 03:00:375 (1) ^
11. 03:48:375 ^ and green line vol 80%→5%
12. 04:14:175 (5) ^
13. 04:26:775 (5) ^
14. 05:00:375 (4) ^
15. 05:02:775 (9) ^

• prefer if you map this break 02:33:975 - /runs
  and how about adding a kiai fountain here 02:43:575 -

• 00:29:175 (1,2) - idk about this, it's all up to you, but try not to stack in easiest diff
  00:41:175 (4,5) - only suggestion, but you can rotate them (preferrably -9 if you want) so it won't be all linear
  01:05:775 (4,5,6) - suggestion too, to make it less linear
  
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  01:11:175 (3,4) - same as the first one about stack
  01:17:175 (1) - is kinda hidden by previous slider 01:15:375 (4) - , it kinda affect the performance, imo
  01:17:475 (2,1) - try not to overlap
  01:19:275 (1,2,1) - make it symmetry is better imo, you can copy this slider 01:19:275 (1) - then replace 01:20:775 (1) -
  
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  01:20:775 (1) - 1 1/2 reverse slider doesn't fit the song, imo, you can change the pattern
  
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  01:38:775 (6) - nc, since this is the easiest diff, let's make the combo pattern simple
  if you follow above 01:43:875 (4) - nc
  01:39:675 (7,8) - unstack? i'm afraid beginner can be confused with this
  01:45:375 (1) - i think this slider is still a part of this pattern 01:41:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so remove nc then add nc 01:45:975 (2) - (big white tick)
  02:00:375 (1) - spinner ends at 02:02:175 - ?
  if you follow above, how about ending the kiai time here 02:02:175 - then start it again at 02:05:175 - to accent the vocal
  02:07:575 (1) - add whistle at slider's head?
  02:05:175 (1,2,3,4) - only suggestion,you can make them less linear
  
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  02:42:975 (1,2,3) - try not to stack in easiest diff
  02:42:975 (1) - remove nc? 02:43:575 (3) - should be nc because long white tick
  02:44:175 (4) - add whistle at slider's reverse arrow? kinda fit the song
  02:45:975 (1) - add whistle?
  02:46:575 (2) - add whistle at slider's end?
  02:48:375 (4) - nc?
  02:57:375 (4) - red point isn't really necessary, though this doesn't affect game performance
  02:57:075 (3) - kinda hidden by previous slider, how about changing the position?
  
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  03:37:575 (4) - add whistle?
  03:39:975 (2) - the square point at slider's head should be 316|260 if you want it to align better with previous slider's blanket
  
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  03:41:175 (1) - well this is a relatively long slider for easiest diff

• 00:31:575 (6) - move down a bit for symmetry
  00:35:475 (5) - 280|268 ? so it won't be too close with previous circle
  00:36:825 (4) - the flow is kinda hard so i suggest moving it few grids to the right
  00:43:575 (1) - prefer if this spinner ends at 00:45:675 - so the player can continue spinning
  00:56:025 (2,3) - prefer if you unstack them since they represent two notes at different pitch, so it's confusing when the music has different pitch but we click a stack
  01:17:175 - a bit pity not to map this break, but this is only my opinion
  03:52:575 - add a note? there's a loud music at this part
  03:53:625 (1) - how about changing this into a reverse slider? it fits the vocal
  
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  03:58:425 (2,3) - should have the same distance like 03:57:975 (1,2) -
  04:03:075 (1) - this sudden anti-jump feels a bit weird
  04:05:325 (1) - ^
  04:10:425 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:10:575 - like the vocal
  04:12:825 (2) - prefer if this slider ends at 04:12:975 - like the vocal
  04:16:875 (7) - this anti-jump doesn't fit. i suggest to use 1.2x or 1.3x distance snap at this one
  04:33:975 (1) - how about spinner ends at 04:36:075 - ?
  04:43:575 (2) - prefer if you do the normal distance snap at this one
  04:44:025 (3,4) - well this can confuse the player. why not making it stream?
  04:47:625 (1) - remove nc, it's still a part of this pattern 04:45:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , then add nc 04:48:375 (3) -
  05:06:375 (6,7) - how about delete the circle 05:07:275 (7) - then lengthen this slider 05:06:375 (6) - ? it fits the vocal more
  
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1. 01:17:175 - Here was overlap，I try a new style here. Do you like it？If not，you can ignore this

1. 02:05:175 (1) - feel its end at 02:05:625 -

1. 02:07:575 (1) - here can be mapped better，Try

1. 02:34:275 - here do not need break~ you may map it~

1. I feel it was Insane's hit diff(5 star) and normal's jump diff(4 star). Your distance snap and sv a little small, (To tell the truth,you can make it more jump...)you may try to stretched out your notes

1. This diff was done well

1. 04:11:775 (6) - I feel it end at 04:11:925 - and add a circle at 04:12:075 -

1. 04:19:875 (2) - remove this circle.

1. 04:24:375 (1) - here slider feel it is 1.5 white line time but not 2 white line long.

gideon5504 wrote:

Mutual friend mod :3

General:
~Too many Kiais >< it's not too much, it's fine ~
~Check your combos and see if they are consistent to what u r following or not. owo
~PLS keep distance snap consistent. Even if not, pls make sure it makes sense. owo

Shy heart:
~I suggest removing some 1/2 beat circles in Easy diff :3
~00:42:975 (5) - Reverse selection and distance snap it. Better flow.
~01:19:575 - Slider starting here with a NC sounds better to me. Try this --> http://puu.sh/415pj.jpg quite a gap, i'll leave it
~Dun forget to distance snap everything behind.
~01:25:575 (3) - I dun think overlapping this note is good for easy. Just make a normal diamond shape here. i'll change if someone else says the same
~01:29:175 (1) - Make this parallel to 01:27:975 (3) 's head for better flow. Even though if you distanced the notes, it's just a reminder for better placement. ?
~ 01:45:375 (4) - Overlaps ><'' it's okay =w=
~02:06:975 (4) - ^ ^
~02:25:575 (2,4) - It's good to keep organised with overlaps, but I dun think it suits Easy diff too well. i'll change if someone else says the same
~03:22:575 (1,2,3,1,2) - This might be too hard for Easy. ^
~03:28:875 (3) - Make this straight and move it to X: 280 Y: 188 for better flow. did something a bit different
~04:05:925 (1) - I highly recommend you NOT to stack sliders in Easy. i think it's okay =w=
~04:07:275 (3,1,2,3) - Move them like this for more tidiness and flow. http://puu.sh/415Wp.jpg
~Distance snap everything else after of course.
~04:24:375 (1) - Reduce this by 1/1 beat and move the slider to the downbeat. The add note on 04:27:375 . It should look like this --> http://puu.sh/416wi.jpg if someone else suggests this too then i'll do it ~
~Distance

Brave Heart:
~I dun really recommend any slider stacks in this song, cuz the music is too slow and those sliders broke my flow a couple of times.
~00:41:775 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really follow anything here. Replace it with a 1/2 beat slider instead. i'd say that it's okay owo
~00:57:075 (6) - Reduce this by 1/4 beat. Just feels better to me. i'll wait for more opinion ~
~Distance.
~01:04:875 (1,2,3) - Why are these in different distance snap? Not consistent with 01:10:575 (2,3,4) .
~01:06:375 (5) - Now it's ok to stack on the tail of 01:05:175 (3) . would look odd, so keep the way it is
~01:13:275 (2,3,4) - Same distance problem.
~02:13:575 (2) - It's slightly overlapping with 02:11:775 (4) . Move it somewhere else so it won't overlap. it's okay =w=
~02:54:375 (3,2) - Actually same with these stacking circles, like I mentioned about the sliders. Although circles seem to be much better so it's up to personal opinion on weather this should be unstacked or not. ^
03:08:175 (2,5) - ^ ^
~03:09:975 (1) - This slider is overlapping with 03:09:375 (5) .
~03:12:675 (1) - Distance error.
~03:21:975 (1) - Blanket 03:22:875 (2) properly and avoid overlap with 03:21:675 (4) . already blanketed
~03:50:775 (1) - Make end point X: 256 Y: 128 for better flow. i don't
~03:54:075 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - I recommend re-mapping this part, cuz the notes dun really follow anything and it sounds weird.
~04:17:475 (1) - Remove NC. vocal verse here, no change
~04:17:775 (2) - NC to emphasis velocity change. ^
~04:40:125 (2) - Delete this, it doesn't fit. Add 3 circles instead, starting from 04:39:975. let mapper of this part decide =w=
~04:44:775 - This part sounds weird again Try this --> http://puu.sh/418gA.jpg
~04:53:475 (2,3,4,5) - Pls space these properly or players will get confused with 1/2 bet notes and 1/4 streams.
~04:56:475 (2,3,4,5) - ^
~05:00:975 (5) - Same as I mentioned about this kind of stacking. i'll wait for more opinions ~

Well, seems like this is all that I could come out with Hope this helped though. Overall, not a bad map, but work on some patterns and tidiness of the map. So good luck!~

General

• Looks in order.

Shy Heart

1. 00:36:375 (5) - Hmm, would be nice if the slider at this specific part was improved just a bit, since the inside curve it's kinda unlinear. This stuff is pretty much notable when making blankets, in this case with 00:35:775 (4) - . It's something pretty easy to do and makes the map more beautiful. Take a look and see for yourself:
   
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1. 00:46:875 (2,3) - Well, you could have made symmetry here, though ctrl+j and ctrl+g on 00:45:975 (1) - doesn't really work, since it changes automatically its shape. But their placement could've followed that up, placing the circle in the center of the vertical line and then moving 00:47:175 (1) - a bit up as well would make that feeling. Here:
   
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1. 01:01:575 (5) - You could move this up a bit, the way it overlaps with 01:00:075 (3) - isn't really nice. Also you could do a nice blanket with that slider as well here:
   
   Example

   

1. 01:14:175 (3) - Make a reflection with 01:12:375 (1) - here? Could improve the flow a bit:
   
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1. 01:21:975 (8) - I'd like to see a NC here, considering that 01:17:175 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - is too much for this kind of diff.

1. 01:31:575 (1) - If you came to change what I said on 00:36:375 (5) - you'll probably want to reshape this for the same reason.

1. 01:38:475 (5) - Move a tiny up, it'll be consistent with the placement you did with 01:39:675 (2,3) -.

1. 01:50:175 (1) - Spin here doesn't sound right, you should've followed the same pattern like 00:42:975 (5,1) - .

1. 02:44:175 (2,2) - Hmm, they look a bit diffent from the other sliders before, I suggest you to follow up their shape here, so you can also improve the blanket.

1. 03:41:175 (1,1) - I really think there could be some stuff between these two, it'll probably keep following up with the song, so it shouldn't be a problem in terms of mapping. Could even so something symmetric, but that's up to you.

1. 04:48:975 (2) - This section here looks kinda forced to me, would be awesome to change sliders in a more natural way of playing. Notice you'll have to change other sliders as well to fix the spacing, but I think it's worth the change, take a look.
   
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Brave Heart

1. 00:36:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kinda hard to see. Could you make them more clearer? Something like moving (2) a bit down would improve a bit, would also flow better:
   
   Example

   

1. 01:03:975 (3) - Do ctrl+g here, will play better.

1. 01:06:375 (5) - Would be good to move this a bit down, so it won't overlap with 01:05:175 (3) - . Alternatively, you can try rotating the slider downwards, so you can make the pattern consistent here as well:
   
   Examples

   
   

1. 01:30:375 (3) - Also do ctrl+g here, like in 01:03:975 (3) -.

1. 01:34:275 (1,2) - This feels pretty random, mainly because the sudden drop of spacing. Also, move their middles nodes more closer to the center, it'll smooth them up, which would make the blanket nicer:
   
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1. 01:40:275 (2) - Move where 01:38:475 (5) - is (x:228 y:220), looks more consistent like that.

1. 02:14:775 (6) - NC here, since the kiai ends.

1. 02:18:075 (1,2,3) - Better move them a bit more to the left so it won't touch with 02:17:175 (3) - . And yeah, you should still stick with the 1,2x spacing.

1. 02:21:975 (1,2,3,4) - Think you could make them more curved? I mean, this is pretty much a simple pattern. Here, take a look and see if you agree with me:
   
   Example

   

1. 02:37:125 (2,3,4) - You should move all this to the left where the slider 02:34:575 (1) - ends so it also won't overlap with it:
   
   Example

   

1. 02:47:475 (8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Very nazi, I know, but I really like if you move all of this a tiny bit to the left, this way all of them would be aligned to the center of the grid (symmetry). Make sure all of them are highlighted, so you won't have to change the spacing for each one of them:
   
   Example

   

1. 02:59:775 (8,9,1) - Spacing here is kinda dizzy. Better keep up with that 1.2x distance as well.

1. 03:16:575 (1) - You should really move this more closer to the center, since it's a good spot for the spin at 03:17:175 (1) - .

1. 03:27:975 (3) - Also ctrl+g here to improve flow.

1. 03:39:975 (3) - This is a cool place for symmetry if you move it to x:388 y:88:
   
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1. 04:09:975 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is very confusing to read. Try increasing the spacing from (2) to (3), this way it'll make all those sliders at least more easy to see. I'd say to use 1.5x there.

1. 04:12:825 (2,3) - Same as above, try increasing the spacing here since their patterns are different from 04:12:375 (1,2) - .

1. Better change up to 1.2x here, so there won't be a gap between this and the slider before.
   
   Example

   

1. 03:24:075 (2) - move to x:168 y:92 (avoid overlap)
2. 04:04:575 (3,1) - I prefer not to stack

1. 00:29:175 (1) - I prefer not to stack
2. 01:11:175 (5,6) - how about this?
   
3. 02:30:225- I prefer to add a note
4. 02:37:125 (2) - I prefer to delete
5. 02:53:775 (2) - end at 02:54:075
6. 02:54:975 (1) - end at 02:55:275
7. 03:08:775 (4,1) - it is better to avoid overlap
8. 03:58:875 (3) - I like the following
   

guineaQ wrote:

I was just striding by in #modreq and decided to give my two cents cause i <3 Nishino Kana

I haven't found any major problems that you should fix but here are my ^^ two cents

Normal

01:50:175 (1) - Instead of starting the spinner at 01:50 mark, it could be better to add two more notes at
01:49:875 (6) and 01:50:175 (7) and shift the beginning of spinner to 01:50:775. Since she sings the phrase 'believe' starting from 01:50:175 mark
and the pitch swings up at 01:50:775 which fits better with the spinner. i think if i did this, the spinner would be a bit too short owo

02:14:775 (1) - I would make the spinner shorter and add more notes/sliders and remove the break part since she is still singing.
But it doesn't really kill the feels and rhythm so I think it's totally optional. same as above ~

02:57:975 (1) - Same as the above one. Also optional ^

03:17:175 (1) - Again. I think this one is kinda too long of a spinner with all the singing going on i placed spinners in parts like this if you noticed xD

03:41:175 (1) - There's a lot more singing going on here and I think the spinner here is too long tbh. follows Kana's vocalizing ~

03:48:975 (1,2) - You can add two notes here to match the rhythm, kinda too empty here. i think it's fine with one note here owo

03:50:775 (1) - The break here seems unnecessary (I still can't spell this ffs) with all the singing going on. the song is a bit long, so i though i'd put in a break

04:17:475 (1) - This is where spinner should be used. There is singing, but BGM goes silent.

04:58:275 (1) - It's ok, but not ok, it is ok but not ok...I think you put the spinners on right place but for longer than needed. owo i don't know what to say about this xD

Everything else like sliders and note placements were <3. This turned out to be a longer list than i expected :S thank you ~

Hard Collab

00:43:575 (1) - WHY U LUV SPINNERZ SO MUCH?! Well if it's your style, I'm not going to judge, but I
think we can put more pretty stuffs other than two spinners in a row here with all the singing. i pretty much put spinners on all parts of the chorus

01:17:175 (1) - Do we really need this long break here with all the singing still going on? I mean it's not even quiet singing. i noticed how i never put in any break for this diff xD so i placed i there

03:41:175 (1) - Drives me nuts Such long spinner, wow, much spinning. We already have enough spinners, make it about only 2 ticks long and you can add more notes and sliders. D:

Less issues that comes jumping at me at the Hard Collab

Excellent work so far and I wish you get ranked

If it's hard to read PM me and I'll fix it.

1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times, maybe is a mistake, but I think for an error you removed the kiai time in 03:21:975 - (Hard diff)
2. Swap combo colour 2 and 3? since they are pretty similar is better to have: pink - white - pink - yellow
3. Remove ¨collab¨ from tags, since you can fin this with the ¨collaboration¨ one already
4. Just looking at your wallpaper and I believe the white combo colour can be an issue, since you can't see it in the white parts in the BG, consider to remove this combo colour
5. Your timing is ok at it is

1. 00:33:375 (1) - nazi, move this to x: 256, Just to be in the center of the grid look a bit better with your symmetric
2. 00:36:525 remove this circle, It doesn't follow the vocal line or some prominent sound in the music, I feel is better if you remove it to bring more emphasis to the vocals in 00:36:375 (1) - 00:36:675 (3) - 00:36:825 (4) -
3. 00:36:825 (4,5) - nazi, stack this properly
4. 00:40:425 (4,5) - add a slider instead? a slider will follow the vocals better and will be consistent with what you did in 00:36:825 (4) -
5. 00:41:775 (1) - remove NC and add it in 00:40:875 (6) - , since 00:40:875 (6) - is where the vocals change, make more sense to me have the new combo in 00:40:875 (6) - than in 00:41:775 (1) -
6. 00:55:575 make this slider a single circle, since the slider doesn't fit the music, trumpets? a single circle will do a better work taking in consideration the music in 00:55:875 is not prominent as the one in 00:56:325
7. 01:11:175 (5,6) - Maybe move 6 a bit? the connection between 5 and 6 is not nice now and feel a bit forced in game, maybe try to rearrange the slider in this way:
   
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8. 01:12:675 (2) - the rhythm here is not nice use a triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider? since the music and vocals at 01:12:825 are really prominent and need to be mapped properly, for better emphasis with the music
9. 01:27:975 (1) - remove NC, since it is pretty unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern or the music, is better if you remove it IMO
10. 01:50:175 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song consider to change this for two 1/2 sliders and a circle, since ending sliders in strong beats as 01:50:775 - and 01:51:375 doesn't represent the song, that beats with the strong sound in the music require a click actions for better gameplay, try this instead:
    
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11. 01:52:875 (5) - similar as above, the beat at 01:53:175 need a click action due to the prominent sound in it, also that's the place where your NC should be, try this instead:
    
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12. 02:04:575 (4) - something similar is happening here too, the strong beat in 02:05:175 should be mapped as a circle or slider head to represent the music better, try this:
    
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13. 02:05:175 if you follow my previous suggestion the NC should be in 02:05:175 but not in 02:06:375 (1) - for consistency with the music and with your combo pattern
14. 02:07:275 (3) - similar as 02:04:575 -, the beat in 02:07:575 should be mapped as a circle or slider head
15. 02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice pattern, but maybe do you want it to look more symmetrical? if yes try to move it to the center of the grid
16. 02:19:575 (1) - the repeat of this slider is not following nothing in the music if you notice the repeat sound a lot better if it land in 02:19:875 -, try this instead:
    
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17. 02:24:375 (5) - Add drum sampleset? It fit pretty nice the music at this point IMO
18. 02:45:975 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look a bit inconsistent here, try this: 02:45:975 (5) - add NC, 02:47:775 (1) - remove NC, 02:48:375 add NC, 02:48:675 remove NC, In this way they will be more consistent with the music
19. 02:54:975 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with the music and your combo pattern
20. 02:57:675 (2) - similar to 01:52:875 - when you end sliders in strong beats you're not fiting the music and at the same time in some cases you are breaking your combo pattern, try this instead:
    
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21. 03:11:175 (3) - similar as above, for this case remove the repeat of 03:11:175 (3) - and add a circle, like this:
    
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22. 03:14:175 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with your combo pattern, also remove the NC from 03:16:575 too
23. 03:20:775 remove this NC too, It is really unnecessary and doesn't fit nothing in the song
24. 03:33:675 also remove NC from here too it is unnecessary and your symmetric pattern will look better without it
25. 03:54:975 (7) - similar to to 01:52:875 -, try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since stanzas are the point where the music change and that beats need click'able actions to fit the song better
26. 03:57:375 same as above
27. 04:01:875 (4) - if you are mapping all the 1/4 rhythm here, I guess you should map the beat at 04:02:625 for consistency
28. 04:11:025 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since they should be triplets to fit the music and the vocals line correctly, try this:
    
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29. 04:16:575 (4) - same as 03:54:975
30. 04:26:175 (3) - similar as above
31. 04:28:575 (1) - ^
32. 04:48:375 (1,2) - mmm maybe just my opinion but this flow not nice, since 2 is placed in a really not nice place, making the cursor movement really forced, but maybe just me

tellertheworld wrote:

Hey~ Rakuen-san and Kanari-san hellooo ~

From forum PM.

Blue : Recommended to fix
Black : suggestion

[General]

1. Tap : Remove 'collab' . We can find it if we enter the 'collab' in the keywords.
   
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2. Artist is garbled
   
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3. A low of break in the 'Hard Callab' after 01:26:775 -. ?
   　
4. Offset : 00:00:375 - 00:00:975 - The longer while line should be main vocal in the beat. maybe, but the down beat is at 00:00:375

Hard Collab

• 
  Kanari-san~ ( 00:29:175 - )

1. 00:34:275 - add note? I think that your map should be keep 2/4 or 4/4 bits because it is more tender to match your song. (special place you can use other bit~) i like it like this owo
2. 00:55:575 (1) - Do you like this pattern? ↓ i think it's a bit odd since the triple starts at the blue tick
   
3. 01:44:775 (3) - is more strong than 01:43:575 (1,2) - .I think it make a jump or cross as well. i like the current flow of it owo the next few objects after the slider make a kind of circle-flow ~
   
   　
   Sun Rainbow -san ( 01:34:275 - )
4. 02:06:375 (1,2) - This is too fast in the rhythm ,IMO.
   　
   Kanari-san~ ( 02:24:975 - )
5. 02:48:675 (1,2) - compose a slider as well ? The 02:49:275 (3) - is strange now. i think it is okay o:
   　
   Sun Rainbow -san ( 02:53:175 - )
6. 03:00:375 (1) - remove the rebound? It is can outstanding the rhythm (fast) in the kiai time . If you fix thsi, plaese add note at 03:01:575 -
   　
   Kanari-san~ ( 03:21:975 - )
7. 03:33:675 - do you like this rtythm ?
   
8. 03:41:175 - delete this green line. It is repeated. nope, it ends the kiai
   　
   Rakueni-san~ ( 03:50:775 - )
9. 04:01:875 (4) - 反彈多了好似太奇怪 覺得很快 可以試試下面這個.
   
10. 04:13:275 (6) - NC
11. 04:14:175 (1) - remove NC
12. 04:19:275 (4) - 你可以刪了這個 也可以不刪喔~ 如果上面的 太陽彩虹san 改了 你可以考慮一下.
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:19:575 - )
13. NP
    　
    Rakueni-san~ ( 04:38:775 - )
14. 處理一下NC問題 有點奇怪...
15. 04:50:025 (4,5,6,7,8) - 會不會對HARD有點難? 整首多只有這裡是長的連打.
16. 04:56:025 (2) - 改為2/4 的slider 而且開始於 04:55:875 -
    　
    Kanari-san~ ( 04:59:475 - )
17. 04:59:475 (1,2) - Why you made a jump here. This part only have a jump here. It is strange fo rme.

Normal

1. 00:34:875 (2) - remove ? It is no reason to triple here.
2. 01:17:475 (2) - remove rebound? You made a lot of note on 4/4 bits. But it is special you are made note at 01:18:075 - . it seems okay owo
3. 01:33:975 (1) - ( slider ) please take care it. You are different with 04:17:775 - ( break time ) and 03:00:375 - .( spinner ) ^
4. 01:47:775 - there have a loudly vocal but you are not have a note here. Also ,it is different with 01:56:775 (3) - . ^
5. 01:48:675 - add note. I do not think it is separate (in the rhythm). the previous notes seems full already so i'll leave it
6. 01:55:425 - delete green line nope, kiai end
7. 01:55:575 - ^ kiai start
   
8. 02:00:075 (6) - remove ? same with 01:49:875 - . feels empty if i remove it
9. 02:03:975 (2) - loudly vocal at 02:04:575 - .Can you add note here? many notes are similar to what you're suggesting already so i think it's okay
   
10. 03:02:775 - delete green line kiai start
11. 03:50:775 - ^
12. 04:36:975 - add note.

Nice song~
Good luck...~^o^~

Natsu wrote:

Hi haii ~

General:

1. Inconsistency in Kiai Times, maybe is a mistake, but I think for an error you removed the kiai time in 03:21:975 - (Hard diff)
2. Swap combo colour 2 and 3? since they are pretty similar is better to have: pink - white - pink - yellow
3. Remove ¨collab¨ from tags, since you can fin this with the ¨collaboration¨ one already
4. Just looking at your wallpaper and I believe the white combo colour can be an issue, since you can't see it in the white parts in the BG, consider to remove this combo colour
5. Your timing is ok at it is

Hard:

1. 00:33:375 (1) - nazi, move this to x: 256, Just to be in the center of the grid look a bit better with your symmetric
2. 00:36:525 remove this circle, It doesn't follow the vocal line or some prominent sound in the music, I feel is better if you remove it to bring more emphasis to the vocals in 00:36:375 (1) - 00:36:675 (3) - 00:36:825 (4) - i'll remove if someone else says the same owo
3. 00:36:825 (4,5) - nazi, stack this properly help me D:
4. 00:40:425 (4,5) - add a slider instead? a slider will follow the vocals better and will be consistent with what you did in 00:36:825 (4) -
5. 00:41:775 (1) - remove NC and add it in 00:40:875 (6) - , since 00:40:875 (6) - is where the vocals change, make more sense to me have the new combo in 00:40:875 (6) - than in 00:41:775 (1) -
6. 00:55:575 make this slider a single circle, since the slider doesn't fit the music, trumpets? a single circle will do a better work taking in consideration the music in 00:55:875 is not prominent as the one in 00:56:325 ;w; everyone has many suggestions to map this part, i don't know what to do @@
7. 01:11:175 (5,6) - Maybe move 6 a bit? the connection between 5 and 6 is not nice now and feel a bit forced in game, maybe try to rearrange the slider in this way:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:12:675 (2) - the rhythm here is not nice use a triplet or a 1/4 repeat slider? since the music and vocals at 01:12:825 are really prominent and need to be mapped properly, for better emphasis with the music
9. 01:27:975 (1) - remove NC, since it is pretty unnecessary and doesn't follow your pattern or the music, is better if you remove it IMO
10. 01:50:175 (1,2) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song consider to change this for two 1/2 sliders and a circle, since ending sliders in strong beats as 01:50:775 - and 01:51:375 doesn't represent the song, that beats with the strong sound in the music require a click actions for better gameplay, try this instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:52:875 (5) - similar as above, the beat at 01:53:175 need a click action due to the prominent sound in it, also that's the place where your NC should be, try this instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:04:575 (4) - something similar is happening here too, the strong beat in 02:05:175 should be mapped as a circle or slider head to represent the music better, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 02:05:175 if you follow my previous suggestion the NC should be in 02:05:175 but not in 02:06:375 (1) - for consistency with the music and with your combo pattern
14. 02:07:275 (3) - similar as 02:04:575 -, the beat in 02:07:575 should be mapped as a circle or slider head
15. 02:13:275 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - nice pattern, but maybe do you want it to look more symmetrical? if yes try to move it to the center of the grid
16. 02:19:575 (1) - the repeat of this slider is not following nothing in the music if you notice the repeat sound a lot better if it land in 02:19:875 -, try this instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 02:24:375 (5) - Add drum sampleset? It fit pretty nice the music at this point IMO ?
18. 02:45:975 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - your comboing look a bit inconsistent here, try this: 02:45:975 (5) - add NC, 02:47:775 (1) - remove NC, 02:48:375 add NC, 02:48:675 remove NC, In this way they will be more consistent with the music
19. 02:54:975 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with the music and your combo pattern
20. 02:57:675 (2) - similar to 01:52:875 - when you end sliders in strong beats you're not fiting the music and at the same time in some cases you are breaking your combo pattern, try this instead:
    
    SPOILER

    
21. 03:11:175 (3) - similar as above, for this case remove the repeat of 03:11:175 (3) - and add a circle, like this:
    
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22. 03:14:175 (1,2) - swap NC, for consistency with your combo pattern, also remove the NC from 03:16:575 too
23. 03:20:775 remove this NC too, It is really unnecessary and doesn't fit nothing in the song
24. 03:33:675 also remove NC from here too it is unnecessary and your symmetric pattern will look better without it
25. 03:54:975 (7) - similar to to 01:52:875 -, try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since stanzas are the point where the music change and that beats need click'able actions to fit the song better
26. 03:57:375 same as above
27. 04:01:875 (4) - if you are mapping all the 1/4 rhythm here, I guess you should map the beat at 04:02:625 for consistency
28. 04:11:025 (2,3,4,5) - this rhythm doesn't fit the song, since they should be triplets to fit the music and the vocals line correctly, try this:
    
    SPOILER

    
29. 04:16:575 (4) - same as 03:54:975
30. 04:26:175 (3) - similar as above
31. 04:28:575 (1) - ^ i think i'll just leave this one owo
32. 04:48:375 (1,2) - mmm maybe just my opinion but this flow not nice, since 2 is placed in a really not nice place, making the cursor movement really forced, but maybe just me

GL nice map and sweet song <3 really long song desu

1. 01:56:775 (3,4) - blanket these
2. 02:43:575 (1,2) - improve blanket
3. 02:46:575 (2) - after fixing ^, copy/paste and flip horizontally for this
4. 03:21:975 (1,1) - don't need two new combos here

1. HP -1, OD -1
2. 00:34:425 (3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern, i'd rather stack them or make them farther apart
3. 01:02:475 (9,1) - improve blanket, it's too far in the middle
4. 01:17:175 (1) - i highly recommend not stacking this on 01:16:575 (6) - because too hard to read
5. 01:29:175 (1,2,3) - check your blanketing again, use the approach circle to help like http://puu.sh/akfTM/8891f5566a.png
6. 02:08:775 (8,9,10) - 9 and 10 shouldn't be lower
7. 02:29:775 (1) - stacking this a 1/2 beat before three 1/4 beats is confusing
8. 02:31:275 (5,6,1) - move (1) a little higher to line up properly
9. 03:14:175 (6) - this slider is a little curvier than the rest
10. 03:21:675 (5,1) - improve blanket
11. 03:26:475 (8,1) - 03:27:675 (2,3) - ^
12. 04:24:375 (1,2) - 04:25:875 (2,3) - ^
13. 04:45:075 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - don't overlap them like that, too hard to read
14. 04:59:775 (2) - move one grid to the right to make 04:59:475 (1,2,3) - symmetrical
15. how come you don't map the last part?

xxdeathx wrote:

i'm gonna try modding this per your request, but this seems to have been through a lot of mods already...

you also know you can ask jonathanlfj for a BAT mod because this map is more than 6 months old and has more than +50 star priority. alright, thank you owo

[Hard]

1. HP -1, OD -1 i'd say it's already low enough
2. 00:34:425 (3,4) - i'm not a fan of this pattern, i'd rather stack them or make them farther apart will do if it gets pointed out again
3. 01:02:475 (9,1) - improve blanket, it's too far in the middle i think it's okay, it's still nicely curved
4. 02:08:775 (8,9,10) - 9 and 10 shouldn't be lower ? do you have an older version of the diff perhaps? xD
5. 02:29:775 (1) - stacking this a 1/2 beat before three 1/4 beats is confusing i think it's okay owo but will change if mentioned again
6. 03:14:175 (6) - this slider is a little curvier than the rest
7. 03:21:675 (5,1) - improve blanket it's fine o3o
8. 03:26:475 (8,1) - 03:27:675 (2,3) - ^ ^
9. 04:24:375 (1,2) - 04:25:875 (2,3) - ^ ^
10. 04:59:775 (2) - move one grid to the right to make 04:59:475 (1,2,3) - symmetrical
11. how come you don't map the last part? ah, you didn't update the diff

Map still has a few technical things to iron out before pushing for rank. I don't know about the overall structure, since the song is quite slow, but I think you might need to work on that too.

thanks for modding~

• 
  Add "Beginning of The End" in tags (because This name album NERDHEAD)

• 
  AR +1 and OD +1
  01:45:975 (2) - x:296 y:244
  01:47:175 (3) - x:188 y:280
  01:48:375 (4) - x:264 y:284
  01:48:975 (5) - x:416 y:312

• 
  Add "Display epilepsy warning" (you have SB Names)
  Slider Tick Rate, i think is good is 2~
  Nothing and Perfect~
  if okay, add circle in 02:29:775

1. 00:45:975 (1,2,3) - How about you make it like this?

SPOILER

1. 01:12:375 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 01:14:175 (3) for sym
2. 01:15:375 (4) - NC ?
3. 01:19:575 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:20:775 (6) for sym
4. 01:50:175 (1) - This spinner should be at 01:50:775 and end at 01:52:575 because the long thing she says starts here
5. 02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - I find this a really weird shape, use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 03:22:575 (2,3,4) - I find this shape looks weird, try to move (4) to x:56 y:200 to make the shape better
2. 03:27:975 (2) - Make the slider more curvy for a good rhythm ?
3. 03:29:475 (1) - This spinner feels wrong, it should be at 03:29:775 and end at 03:31:575
4. 04:15:975 (4) - I honestly didn't like the slider shape, please make it like this:

SPOILER

1. Some slider shapes can be improved, but good diff ~ !

1. 00:36:825 (4,5) - Remove stack and make blanket ?

No major issues here.

1. 05:06:375 (3) - shorten by 1/4 and repeat, remove 05:07:275 (4)

1. 02:23:175 (4,5) - change position on timeline and reposition as necessary http://puu.sh/b1qyX.png
   This beat placement does not line up with vocals. Unless if you are mapping something else that I didn't hear.
2. 05:06:375 (6) - repeat slider, remove 05:07:275 (7)

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Mod as request ~
[Normal]

1. 00:45:975 (1,2,3) - How about you make it like this? not much different from how it is now o3o

SPOILER

1. 01:12:375 (1) - Copy this and paste it at 01:14:175 (3) for sym
2. 01:15:375 (4) - NC ?
3. 01:19:575 (4) - Copy this and paste it at 01:20:775 (6) for sym
4. 01:50:175 (1) - This spinner should be at 01:50:775 and end at 01:52:575 because the long thing she says starts here wanted the spinner to be a bit longer but will change if pointed out again
5. 02:54:075 (1,2,3,4,1) - I find this a really weird shape, use something like this:

SPOILER

1. 03:22:575 (2,3,4) - I find this shape looks weird, try to move (4) to x:56 y:200 to make the shape better i think it's okay o: i wanted to do a triangle
2. 03:27:975 (2) - Make the slider more curvy for a good rhythm ?
3. 03:29:475 (1) - This spinner feels wrong, it should be at 03:29:775 and end at 03:31:575 same reason as before
4. 04:15:975 (4) - I honestly didn't like the slider shape, please make it like this: changed it, but not like you suggested

SPOILER

1. Some slider shapes can be improved, but good diff ~ !

[Hard Collab]

1. 00:36:825 (4,5) - Remove stack and make blanket ? i like it like this actually o: but will wait to hear more opinions

Good map and nice song ~ ! thanks o3o

Good luck

1. Do you really had to put your old name into the tags )xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx)?
2. You may need a custom hitsound for these beats (e.g. at 02:26:775 (5,2,3) - ). Mind going on search for some in LKs' hitsound library?

1. 00:47:175 (3) - I'd prefer a whistle HS here, Finish HS is too loud and doesn't fit in here imo.
2. 01:02:775 (1) - Add some whistle HS on the sliderstart.
3. 01:18:375 (3) - whistle HS
   [*}01:27:975 - delete whistle HS, set it on the backsliders end at 01:26:775 (1) - if you want.
4. 01:30:375 (3,1) - Check the blanket again, it should be like this: http://puu.sh/bpikS/76aa5481e3.jpg
5. 01:37:575 - whistle HS here
6. 02:07:575 (1,1) - I'm pretty sure these are not blanketed yet. Use the following positions for the 02:07:575 (1) - :
   1st anchor: 144, 248 |2nd anchor: 256,144 | 3rd anchor: 360, 248
7. 03:17:175 (1) - This slider is just too long for a normal imo. If you want to hold the long nodes, add a longer slider after the spin: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2011702 (sry, that slider end isn't formed correctly ._.)
8. 03:41:175 (1) - This one's too long as well, mind stopping it at 03:45:975 - already? You had to fill the gap after the spin anyway.
9. 04:21:975 (3) - Did you forgot whistle here?
10. 04:30:975 (3,4,1) - not sure if you want to blanket here but you can try if you want.

1. 02:49:275 (4) - This sounds bad to me as the slider ends on a hard beat. swap it with 2 circles and make a pentageon shape maybe?
2. 03:09:975 (1,2,3) - Not properly blanketed yet.
3. 03:26:475 (8,1,2,3) - ^
4. 05:06:375 (6) - I'm not really sure whether the backslider is viable here or not... the instrument ends on 05:07:125 - while the vocals last till 05:07:275 -