[Insane]
AR9. AR8 is slow and doesn't fit this upbeat song. But this is up to you, the map isn't that jumpy so AR8 can work.
00:57:577 (1,2) - I'd start the new combo on 2 instead. It's on the downbeat and sort of notifies the player that this isn't and immediate stack.
[Normal]
01:51:577 (5,1) - Swap these combos to stay on the downbeat.
[Easy]
01:16:283 (1) - Take this spinner and end it here: 01:18:400. Then add a note at 01:19:106, and then put a new combo on 01:20:518 (2) - . The way you have this currently mapped feels really empty towards the song.
01:24:753 (1) - Extend this spinner out to 01:29:695? Again another really empty feeling section.
[Taiko Oni]
OD6? This is an Oni, OD5 is too low.
01:47:518 (2) - Delete this note. You need a break point here! This string of note is way to long.
[Muzukashii]
Okay... This needs work.
00:12:400 (2) - Finisher? There is no finish sound here so there is no need for a finisher.
00:13:812 (2) - ^
00:14:518 (1,2,1,2) - Double patterns like this should stay the same color for muzukashii, the quick transition in notes is a bit too hard for a newer player to understand.
00:15:224 (2) - Again no finish is needed here.
00:16:636 (2) - ^
00:19:459 (1) - ^
00:18:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - No need for a 5 note stream here. No beats resembling it and since this is muzukashii you shouldn't use too many.
00:20:871 (2) - Remove this finisher just like the others.
00:21:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is no need for a 5 note stream here either.
00:30:047 - add a note here? The current rhythm is pretty weird.
00:32:165 (2) - No need for a finish here either.
00:37:636 (1,1) - ^. Red to blue finishers like this are generally not acceptable for muzukashii either.
00:38:518 (1,2,3,4) - Make this 3 1/2 beats instead. This 4 beat stream kills the rhythm. (This pattern works well.
http://puu.sh/1nL6E )
00:47:342 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - These beats make no sense. With the vocals fading out there will be nothing to resemble them. Instead you should put a slider for the vocal until it fades out.
00:50:518 (2) - Why is there a finisher here? This part is so quiet a finisher is out of the question.
00:54:577 (1) - ^
00:55:989 (1) - ^
00:57:047 (4) - ^
00:57:489 (1) - Move this forward a tick so it's on 00:57:577. This is unsnapped.
00:58:283 (2) - Again this section is way too quiet for a finisher. And these finishers don't even fit. I'm not going to put down anymore spots for finishers but every single one needs to be removed until 01:07:812 (5) - . (This finisher can stay)
01:12:047 (2) - Add finish to this. Finishes are ok here for making the vocals stand out.
01:30:577 (4) - Remove this finisher, the note before was good enough to resemble the finish beat.
01:30:930 - add a beat here, you have a very awkward rhythm going.
01:31:989 (1) - Remove this finisher, then add a beat at 01:32:165 to keep your rhythm going.
EVERYTHING NEEDS TO BE CHANGED ON THIS DIFFICULTY OR I WILL NOT REBUBBLE.Sorry but all the random finisher placement and awkward rhythms are nowhere near acceptable.
Chyo I advise you work on your sense of rhythm and finisher use before you prevent another mapset from being ranked. Sorry.
Standard diffs and Mint's Oni were nice though. (And this song is awesome)