congaan wrote:

http://puu.sh/JRCO
short irc mod for hard diff=w=

sospk0011 wrote:

이 비트맵이 더 빨리 랭크될 것 같네요^^

hibarirailwayz wrote:

from modding queues~
あくまで意見なのでよろしくお願いします。
[General]
無し。
[Normal]
01:10:454 (1) - 1grid右の方が、綺麗に見えるかも。 fixed~
01:40:902 (1) - 1grid 左の方が次のサークルとのつなぎが多少良く見えるかな・・・？ ^

[Hard]
02:39:335 (4,5) - 逆の方が個人的にはAIMしやすいですが、正直微妙なところですｗ 次のスライダーの流れから変えずにこのままにします =x=

[Collab]
00:05:753 (1,2) - 1 grid 右の方が３番のスライダーとのつながりが良いと思います。 fixed~
02:19:409 (3) - 2 grid 左の方が２番のスライダーとのつながりが綺麗かと。 ^
02:44:820 (4) - 2 grid 下の方が前のスライダーとのつながりは綺麗かな。 ^

殆ど欠点を見つけられませんでしたので、配置の微調整ばかりで申しわけない・・・
すばらしい譜面なので☆～

Good luck!!

Mystica wrote:

here comes my mod.

[collab]
00:50:305 (4) - some grid up
00:55:118 (4,5) - change a place?cause there no any part like that
01:45:156 - add a note feels well fixed
02:18:290 (4,1,2) - a little confuse about snap for this part ok. changed
02:29:708 (5,6,7) - ^
02:40:678 - add a note sorry, no change ><

[Hard]
00:41:350 (4) - a little hard for a hard diff ok. change it~

other seems fine
Star

other ask to mythol

wmfchris wrote:

[Collab]
00:17:171 (2) - comparing with (1) there's weak drum beat in the music. Consider a whistle? I think no need.. orz
00:48:514 (5) - Try (268,24)? Don't see the point to use different spacing for (4,5,6). ask to mythol~
01:46:499 - feel like the placement looks a bit odd. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/389715 ? I was not conscious of a starform. ok~ change it~
02:42:469 (4) - how about moving to (224,132)? Currently the "right angled triangle" arrangement looks odd in the spacing shift, but move there allows (4,1,2,3,4,5) to look like the vertices of a pentagon. looks good~ change~

[Hard]
00:10:454 (5) - like (4) last combo whistle on both ticks? no need whistle ><
01:16:947 (2) - what's going on with the 1.1x spacing while the rest is 1.4x? moving to (256,140) looks better. ok~ change it~
03:06:872 - there's a clear bass sound in the music but the spinner can't express that sound well. Add a note before spinner? ^

[Normal]
01:48:066 - how about merging these two sliders considering this is a normal?　　sliders=spinners o.o? Probably it does not merge ><; because kiaitime in the middle of the spinner. If you feel short spinner, this spinner that is available starting from 01:47:171. do not change it now =w=

In overall the notes are well placed, though the music sometimes sounds odd when there's two equivalent sentences, one with acccents while one without them -w- but you're following the song well.

1. I found that the offset a kinda off, probably try offset: 599 (-5) ? Remember to move all the storyboad elements and green line to the correct timing.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 so it can consistent with HP and OD?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:47:618 (3,1,2) - I higly suggest to change this to another pattern because current pattern is kinda confused to newbie due to hitburst. As you can see the situation here:
      
      ~

      
   2. 01:20:305 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes so it may looks prettier than now?
   3. 03:06:648 (x) - How about adding a note here because it is the end of the song and the pitch is higher than 03:06:424 - , so a note here would fit the music very well. If possible, please add a finish as well.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here?
   2. 00:31:499 (2) - Add a clap at the beginning of the slider to follow your hitclap pattern? Please do not remove the finish hitsound here, it fits the music very well.
   3. 03:06:872 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner because it fits the music very wll and turn the volume to 50% since I don't find a reason that muting is needed.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:14:260 (3,4) - The position of the slider look weird to me, I prefer this, change it as you like.
      
      ~

      
   2. 00:57:917 (1) - Sorry but I can't get the usage of long slider here, what you have done is using 1/2 and 1/1 before, you put a 2/1 suddenly really break the flows and the consistency, hence changing this is highly suggested.
   3. 01:00:604 (2) - (design) Probably make it balance with 00:59:708 (1) - ? It will look prettier.
   4. 02:23:887 (1,2,3,4) - These slider jump is really uncomfortable to me, really! Mostly because they are placed randomly. How about remake these jump or tidy up the slider position?
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:14:932 (1) - Please reduce the volume of the spinner because it is too noisy for a calm part.
   2. 00:16:275 - I would change this green line to soft hitsound. There is a cacophony if you use normal hitsound.
   3. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here?
   4. 03:05:529 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap here because I can hear the drum sound which fits the clap sound here.
   5. 03:06:984 (1) - Same as normal.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:701 (2) - How about adding a note here to follow the drum sound? You just need to put the note on the end of the slider 00:13:141 (1) - . If possible, please add a clap sound with 60% volume there.
   2. 00:14:932 - How about adding a spinner here like what you do in hard.Please take care of the volume on this spinner please.
   3. 01:06:872 (1) - I feel like a jump here because of 1) The accent here 2) The consistency of jump : 01:05:977 (4,5,6,7) -
   4. 01:19:186 (1,2,3) - I would suggest putting this at the beginning of the 01:17:618 (1) - , so it will look more neatly in my opinion.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:09:559 (1,3) - Add a whistle here because the pitch is highly than 00:09:783 (2) - , so a whistle can show a cool effect there.
   2. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here?
   3. 01:47:618 (6) - Add a whistle on the second reverse?
   4. 01:49:633 (4) - A whistle sounds good here because the vocal pitch is much higher than others.
   5. 02:57:133 (6) - I would put a clap here to follow the drum sound if I were you.
   6. 03:05:753 (1) - A whistle here because of the vocal pitch.
   7. 03:06:872 (1) - Mentioned in normal.

kanpakyin wrote:

From #modreq

[General]

1. I found that the offset a kinda off, probably try offset: 599 (-5) ? Remember to move all the storyboad elements and green line to the correct timing. changed with storyboad elements and green line~

[Normal]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. AR -1 so it can consistent with HP and OD? ok. changed ~
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:47:618 (3,1,2) - I higly suggest to change this to another pattern because current pattern is kinda confused to newbie due to hitburst. As you can see the situation here: hmm... changed pattern
      
      ~

      
   2. 01:20:305 (2,3,4) - Probably align these notes so it may looks prettier than now? sorry, what do you mean x.x;...orz
   3. 03:06:648 (x) - How about adding a note here because it is the end of the song and the pitch is higher than 03:06:424 - , so a note here would fit the music very well. If possible, please add a finish as well.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here? ok. fixed
   2. 00:31:499 (2) - Add a clap at the beginning of the slider to follow your hitclap pattern? Please do not remove the finish hitsound here, it fits the music very well. ^
   3. 03:06:872 (1) - Add a finish at the end of the spinner because it fits the music very wll and turn the volume to 50% since I don't find a reason that muting is needed. hm.. ok. changed vol and end of the spinner

[Hard]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:14:260 (3,4) - The position of the slider look weird to me, I prefer this, change it as you like. ok. changed~
      
      ~

      
   2. 00:57:917 (1) - Sorry but I can't get the usage of long slider here, what you have done is using 1/2 and 1/1 before, you put a 2/1 suddenly really break the flows and the consistency, hence changing this is highly suggested. hmm... ok. I changed a pattern. 1/1,note,1/1
   3. 01:00:604 (2) - (design) Probably make it balance with 00:59:708 (1) - ? It will look prettier. changed~
   4. 02:23:887 (1,2,3,4) - These slider jump is really uncomfortable to me, really! Mostly because they are placed randomly. How about remake these jump or tidy up the slider position? ok. However, I deleted the jump and made it simple slider patter
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:14:932 (1) - Please reduce the volume of the spinner because it is too noisy for a calm part. I thought, too lol. vol down to 60%
   2. 00:16:275 - I would change this green line to soft hitsound. There is a cacophony if you use normal hitsound. fixed~
   3. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here? ^
   4. 03:05:529 (1) - I guess you are missing a clap here because I can hear the drum sound which fits the clap sound here. ^
   5. 03:06:984 (1) - Same as normal. same as normal~

[Collab]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:701 (2) - How about adding a note here to follow the drum sound? You just need to put the note on the end of the slider 00:13:141 (1) - . If possible, please add a clap sound with 60% volume there. sorry, no change. because he want to follow the vocal here
   2. 00:14:932 - How about adding a spinner here like what you do in hard.Please take care of the volume on this spinner please. ok. added~
   3. 01:06:872 (1) - I feel like a jump here because of 1) The accent here 2) The consistency of jump : 01:05:977 (4,5,6,7) - ok. changed~
   4. 01:19:186 (1,2,3) - I would suggest putting this at the beginning of the 01:17:618 (1) - , so it will look more neatly in my opinion. ^
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:09:559 (1,3) - Add a whistle here because the pitch is highly than 00:09:783 (2) - , so a whistle can show a cool effect there. sorry, I thought that this did not match..orz
   2. 00:16:723 (1,2) - How about adding a whistle here? ok. fixed~
   3. 01:47:618 (6) - Add a whistle on the second reverse? ^
   4. 01:49:633 (4) - A whistle sounds good here because the vocal pitch is much higher than others. ^
   5. 02:57:133 (6) - I would put a clap here to follow the drum sound if I were you. ^
   6. 03:05:753 (1) - A whistle here because of the vocal pitch. ^
   7. 03:06:872 (1) - Mentioned in normal. same as normal~

Collab is nicely done.
Star!

1. The thumbnail doesn't work to several user which including me. Please try a full submission again!
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 01:20:300 (2,3,4) - hum...I mean probably make them like this:
   
   suggestion

   
2. 03:07:091 (1) - hum, I don't mean you should remove the whistle here, just keep a whistle with a finish here if you like.

1. 02:29:031 (4) - How about a whistle here to fit the vocal?
2. 00:14:927 (1) - 60% is still too noisy to me, I personally prefer 30% volume here, but this is up to you.
3. 03:06:979 (1) - Same as Normal

1. 00:14:927 (1) - Same as Normal, 60% is too loud. Consider 30% volume.
2. 03:06:867 (1) - Same as normal

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi, rechecking.

[General]

1. The thumbnail doesn't work to several user which including me. Please try a full submission again! oh... when I submitted it, I noticed it. However, I did not know how other people could see this. I try full submission. but It is likely to be the bug if not recovered..orz
   
   SPOILER

   

[Normal]

1. 01:20:300 (2,3,4) - hum...I mean probably make them like this: oh. thx >w< changed~
   
   suggestion

   
2. 03:07:091 (1) - hum, I don't mean you should remove the whistle here, just keep a whistle with a finish here if you like. ok~ fixed

[Hard]

1. 02:29:031 (4) - How about a whistle here to fit the vocal? sorry, I did not match double whistle here for me...orz
2. 00:14:927 (1) - 60% is still too noisy to me, I personally prefer 30% volume here, but this is up to you. fixed~
3. 03:06:979 (1) - Same as Normal ^

[Collab]

1. 00:14:927 (1) - Same as Normal, 60% is too loud. Consider 30% volume. fixed
2. 03:06:867 (1) - Same as normal ^

I will back after fixing the thumbnail. No kud please.

kanpakyin wrote:

ok.

Bubbled!

Garven wrote:

[General]
Your BG's aspect ratio is wrong. Everything is all squished. D:　　ok~. fixed( also SB BG ) :3 maybe all right o.o?

[Normal]
00:32:837 (4) - I'd silence the ticks on this slider (just use 5% volume) ok. fixed~

[Hard]
OD +1 ok~

[Collab]
00:32:837 (1) - I'd silence the ticks on this slider (just use 5% volume) fixed

Really nice work here. Just fix that BG (and I guess the SB flash images) >_>

Garven wrote:

Great job! Ranked!

kosiga wrote:

Source: Osu! Banchou 2