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General
Good luck :3
General
- Kiai time: just a little thing, add green timing points at 02:23:025 for turn off the kiai time. seems unecessary kiai time until end but no notes in there.
- Difficulty Setting: Increase all setting +1 (except Circle Size). seems too slow moving.
- 00:05:222 (1) - can you remove whistle sound in the slider body? the sound was strange for me
- 00:11:888 (1) - same as above
- 00:18:869 (1) - add clap in the slider's end? the sound seems like before note imo, I'm sure adding clap in here is more comfortable.
- 00:21:946 (1) - same as above
- 00:23:485 (2) - this slider seems weird for me, I think just more curved this slider more sharp? like this
56,223,23485,2,0,B|94:272|70:327|70:327|115:308|163:331,1,200
- 01:09:883 (1,2) - remove all whistle in here, what reason you can add whistle in here? not fit with the backsound. beside that, the sound is still same with the before notes.
- 01:11:806 (3) - add clap in the slider's beginning? the sound seems more comfortable for me.
- 01:14:306 (2) - remove whistle in the slider's beginning
- 01:16:036 (1,2) - same as 01:09:883
- 01:38:344 (2) - add clap in the slider's end? I think the sound still similar with the beginning
- [00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
- 00:06:889 (3) - why you change the consistent whistle with clap? remove clap in the end, then add whistle in there.
- 00:32:963 (3) - add whistle in the end~
- 00:40:655 (3) - add finish sound in the beginning. for following the cymbal sounder. the finish sound is give better effect when the cymbal sounder is heard :3
- 00:43:732 (1,2,3) - uu, this pattern seems weird in some reason. the posisition isn't looked symmetry imo. I suggest to change them like this
160,184,43732,6,0,B|128:232|160:293,1,110,0|2
don't forget to fix spacing from (3) into (1).
226,236,44501,2,0,B|251:176|223:124,1,110,0|2
307,95,45271,2,0,B|339:175|299:279,2,165,2|0|0 - 00:51:424 (5) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
- 00:59:113 (1) - I know you following the rhythm, but the circle/note after spinner with 1/1, is too hard for normal (especially for newbie). delete this circle of course for the best way fix this. but, need you to know, if you do this, the rhythm still consistent (:
- 01:16:036 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning. same reason as I mentioned before. also, for consistent finish hitsounding like (1) and (2).
- 01:19:113 (1) - ^
- 01:31:421 (1) - same as I mentioned in 00:59:113, I suggest remove this slider, but longer the spinner in 01:29:883 (1) until the long white tick (01:31:421).
- 01:37:575 (1) - remove all whistle in here. doesn't fit with the song = =
- 01:40:652 (2) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
- 02:22:772 (1) - this circle will overlap with the hitburst after spinner. consider to move into another place for visible by players.
- 00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
- 00:45:271 (4,5) - I think these slider seems a bit messy and not good to look, do you want to try something like this ?
284,175,45271,2,0,B|262:141|209:141|209:141|134:141,1,160
but don't forget to fix spacing for another notes after doing this.
70,178,45848,2,0,B|93:214|146:214|146:214|221:214,1,160 - 00:47:963 (2) - ngg.. the slider's reverse is a bit overlap with (6). try to make it more visible to look?
- 00:51:424 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning, as I mentioned before about finish sound ;3
- 00:52:960 (1) - same as above
- 00:57:575 (1) - this spinner is too fast. really. (although auto can get bonuses >1000). I suggest to change this spinner into one slider instead the short spinner like this.
- 01:03:536 (4) - add finish in the slider's end
- 01:31:421 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning more better instead the whistle sound imo.
- 01:35:075 (4) - the slider's body is overlapped by (3)'s body. that's not good to look when gameplay. I think you should move to another place. the example like this maybe? then, still similar this, (5) can be move too -> picture
- 01:52:959 (3) - same as 00:51:424
- 02:07:791 (2,3,4) - the slider should be 1/6 for more following the song. I mean like this
- 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - why the slider speed is changed? unecessary changed because no slider in here. use back 1.0x speed for this. well, the other suggestion for this, make the 1/6 slider like as 02:07:791
Good luck :3