1. 00:13:138 (2,3) - add whistle?
2. 00:21:561 (4) - move 2nd slider point to (112,256) 3rd slider point to (208,328)
3. 00:27:947 (3,4) - move up 1 grid because it's stacked then looks bad in that slider
4. 00:44:694 (3) - move 2nd and 3rd slider points 1 grid left
5. 01:11:806 (6) - 2nd slider point 2 grids right
6. 01:15:844 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285379 arrange like this
7. 01:23:536 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot334-1.jpg
8. 01:24:113 (3) - ^
9. 01:31:421 (1) - last point -> (32,192)
10. 01:43:729 (3) - it's not perfect triangle 0.0
11. 01:52:959 (8) - ^
12. 02:21:759 (1) - don't use 5% on the head of slider, just at the end... silence slider head is unrankable i think

1. 00:18:100 (5) - move to 00:17:908 (5) -> add 1 repeat
2. 00:51:424 (5) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot335-0.jpg

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hard

1. 00:13:138 (2,3) - add whistle? added whistle on (1)
2. 00:21:561 (4) - move 2nd slider point to (112,256) 3rd slider point to (208,328) moved 2nd slider point to (104,256)
3. 00:27:947 (3,4) - move up 1 grid because it's stacked then looks bad in that slider but I like this blanket circle
4. 00:44:694 (3) - move 2nd and 3rd slider points 1 grid left ok
5. 01:11:806 (6) - 2nd slider point 2 grids right I know this slider looks ugly, but if I doing so, it will make (6) and (7) too far
6. 01:15:844 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/285379 arrange like this ok
7. 01:23:536 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot334-1.jpg ok
8. 01:24:113 (3) - ^ ok
9. 01:31:421 (1) - last point -> (32,192) (48,192)
10. 01:43:729 (3) - it's not perfect triangle 0.0 ok
11. 01:52:959 (8) - ^ ^
12. 02:21:759 (1) - don't use 5% on the head of slider, just at the end... silence slider head is unrankable i think

29% is ok I think

Normal

1. 00:18:100 (5) - move to 00:17:908 (5) -> add 1 repeat deleted (4) and added 2 repeats
2. 00:51:424 (5) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot335-0.jpg

ok

easy is fine.

that's all

Good luck~

• 01:11:229 (2) It might be for beginners too difficult to hit this button because, it is not on the white Tick. Make a slider starting from 01:11:036 - 01:11:229, like this.

• 00:26:946 (1,2) - Snap the end of both sliders together.
  00:59:113 (1,2,3) - It doesn't fitcorrectly into the song. If you Ctrl+R 00:59:498 (2,3), it is way better, but you have to resnap them.
  My proposal: As i said, Ctrl+R 00:59:498 (2,3), then Ctrl+R 01:00:075 (3), and the Ctrl+shift+R 00:59:498 (2) by -60 degrees and put it like this.
  01:11:998 (4) - Make it maybe 1/4th longer.
  01:12:960 (1,2) - Both are 1/2th to long and destroy the flow. Shorten both by 1/2th and place a circle on 01:14:113 and place the second slider on 01:14:498. That's my idea Just an additive idea for 01:16:036 (5)

• 
  00:31:424 (1) - This Slider mustn't be hidden in any way by other slides. In this case 00:29:886 (3). Fix this.
  My proposal: Ctrl+Shift+R 00:31:424 (1,2,3) by 13 degrees and stack the end of 00:32:963 (3) on 00:33:924 (4) this way. Move 00:31:232 (4) one gridlength left on x:136 y:216 and all be good.
  00:43:732 (2) - Same Issue here. 00:42:194 (5) mustn't cover 00:43:732 (2).
  00:45:078 - Add a note and stack it on the slider 00:45:271 (5).
  
  02:21:759 (1) - I don't like this slider, but that is just my personal opinion.

1. 00:07:514 (4) - (optional) About this slider, how about creating a ?-shaped slider here, so it could encircle (1)'s start? Not that hard to do, but flows a lot better with (3) imo
2. 00:23:485 (2) - Hmm, is it intentional to curve the slider like this (without red waypoints)? With red waypoints, you could get the turning effect more imo...
3. 00:26:754 (2) - As this is an Easy diff, I think it would help beginners more if you stick to the previous rhythm (on the red line) - a short 1/2 slider on 00:26:754 will do, or even you can create a 1/1 slider as well. I just personally feel beginners will find its hard to time this circle perfectly because of the change of rhythm
4. 00:27:168 (1) - Why no finish here, to emphasize there's a new part from the song? I know you already had one on your previous circle, but adding another one here could drastically dramatize this part
5. 00:29:886 (2) - Not perfectly equal with 00:31:424 (2) if CTRL+H'ed (:
6. 00:36:040 (3,4) - Although straight sliders play fine here, but you definitely could go much more creative with slider shape here, as following: (this also gives more space between (4) and 00:40:655 (1))
   
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7. 00:46:809 (1) - Hmm, why no finish here (as you mostly did before)? I highly suggest to add one (as there's a splashing sound coming from the song)
8. 01:11:806 (3) - Clap on slider's start could really spice up this part (:
9. 01:16:036 (2) - (optional) Use a tilted slider wave here as well? Flows better than just a straight slider imo:
   
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10. 01:26:613 (4) - Finish on slider's start (you've done so on 01:14:306 (3) previously - just keep the hitsounding consistent as the song doesn't change much)
11. 01:34:498 (3,4) - I don't think stacking (4) under (3) is friendly enough for beginners, although it plays fine...
12. 01:35:459 (1) - The finish on slider's start is out of place. You shouldn't add finish on the red tick - instead, if you want to add one, it should belong in the downbeat
13. 01:44:498 (1) - (optional) I think by using two circles instead they can build a better post-spinner flow here (because there will be a followpoint accompanying), for example:
    
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14. 01:51:036 (1) - Hmm, missing clap here?
15. 01:54:883 (2,3) - (optional) Hmm, imo it would be nice if these two could be dragged more to the bottom-right to create a sharper angle, but it's purely optional
16. 02:18:737 (4) - Also with this one, the ending would be fancier imo if this slider is curved as well such as what you did on 02:13:062 (4)

1. 00:04:805 (4) - Is this placed too far from (3) by purpose? It's better to keep up with your 1.0x spacing here imo...
2. 00:05:222 (1) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid right to keep it parallel with (2) and (3)
3. 00:08:555 (1,2) - (optional) Because your previous (3) is a straight slider, I don't think you should suddenly go with bezier curve here, try to adapt with the linearity with this kind of slider:
   
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4. 00:11:888 (1,2) - Why the whistling pattern stops here? Would be much wiser to continue it imo. Also, that finish on (2) is definitely too strong for the intro
5. 00:17:715 (4) - Again here, although it's a 4x repeating 1/2 slider doesn't mean that you should stop your whistles - try to add some, at least one on the second repeat. This suggestion applies for next parts like this
6. 00:26:946 (1,2) - Definitely not intuitive, even for an Insane. It's not that hard to CTRL+R (2), furthermore you can arrange like this:
   
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7. 00:27:947 (1,2,3) - Considering that you're using maximum stack leniency here, I don't think this stack will do good for players (although it plays fine)
8. 00:37:578 (3,4) - (optional) Here's one fancy thing you can do here :3
   
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9. 00:39:117 (5) - Feels really empty here. Extend this circle into a 3/2 slider instead?
10. 00:45:271 (7) - Not a time for a finish yet imo (finish should be on 00:46:809 (1)) - use whistle on slider's start?
11. 00:52:578 (6) - Although it's readable, this note is closer to (5) instead of (1). Is it intentional?
12. 00:54:113 (2,4) - It is highly recommended to keep your clapping consistent every 2/1 instead of 4/1 here - if you decide to do this, take a look for the next parts' clap positioning
13. 01:03:344 (3) - Compared to (2), definitely you're curving this too much :3 (moving the waypoint to the right a bit with grid snap off shouldn't be that hard)
14. 01:11:998 (4) - Add one more repeat. 01:12:575 bears the key note for this rhythm - leaving that unmapped feels incomplete
15. 01:14:306 (2,3) - Hold SHIFT while placing (2) to let it perfectly stand beside (3). Also, (optional) to keep symmetry, I think this will do good on (3):
    
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16. 01:22:190 (3) - Add finish as well on slider's end? There's a splashing sound from the song
17. 01:36:036 (4) - Here as well, whistle fits a lot on the slider's end
18. 01:47:383 (3,4) - Why (4) is so close to (3) @_@ - hmm, dragging it few grids down won't be that hard, plus you can curve this slightly upward if you don't wanna break the distance from (4) to (5)
19. 01:52:190 (1,2,3) - (optional) With your current (3)'s shape, I'd rather arrange (1)'s end, (2), and (3)'s start on a straight line, but it's up to you
20. 02:12:251 (1,2,3) - You know, you could just rotate (1) 120° to each (2) and (3)...
21. 02:15:494 (1,2,3,4) - The overlap on (2,4) is very discouraged - I'd prefer curve (1,2) like this instead to avoid such overlap:
    
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1. 00:08:555 (1,2) - I think you're too forcing symmetry here... Which resulting in an ugly overlap between (5) and (1). It's not that hard to move these two downward so you can get more freedom to curve these two :3
2. 00:13:139 (2,3) - Same as before, why don't just let them flow by creating a triangle pattern, for example (rather than forcing a symmetry by stacking them)?
3. 00:17:331 (3) - Put the sliderwhistle (whistle on slider's body) on? Fits a lot here
4. 00:22:138 (5) - Put the new combo here, instead of on 00:22:908 (1) - new combo plays a lot better in the downbeat instead on the standard white tick :3
5. 00:24:254 (5,6) - (optional) Arrange (6) in an antagonistic direction with (5)? Looks better imo: (also new combo on (6) due to the stack)
   
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6. 00:33:924 (4,5,6,1) - I do get the point here, but they're still not perfect - move them a bit to the upper-right without grid snap on
7. 00:35:847 (2,4) - Stack these two? Also, (optional) would be fancier imo if these two is moved to the left a bit (mine is x:169 y:176), so there will be a slight arc between (1,2,3)
8. 00:38:155 (6,7) - (optional) Would be nice imo if you can encircle (5) from the outside like this:
   
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9. 00:44:694 (3) - Is this altered into a 1/4 slider by accident? Should be 1/2 here
10. 00:49:886 (1) - Seeing this slider is placed slightly lower than (3), I think it will be much better to direct this slider to the upper-right with a curve downward - this will also give players a better sight on 00:51:424 (3)
11. 00:51:809 (1,3) - (optional) CTRL+R these two if you wish ^^
12. 00:59:690 (2,3,4) - Hmm, it's quite obvious that the spacing suddenly goes dense on (3,4) - is this intentional?
13. 01:06:806 (4) - Starting from this slider, I think you should start to re-increase the volume back to 60% (45% just feels to weak for this energetic part)
14. 01:17:959 (8,1,2,3,4) - If you're going to create an arc here, it would be much better if first you curve (8) downward instead of upward:
    
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15. 01:27:767 (5,6,7) - (optional) I personally dislike how these three is arranged in a straight line - it won't be that hard to move (6) upward so there will be a zig-zag formation here
16. 01:31:421 (1) - This post-spinner note is missing a New Combo - you must add one manually
17. 01:36:421 (6,2) - Is it intentional you place these two this close? Again, moving (2) upward a bit wouldn't be that hard...
18. 01:40:652 (6,8) - (optional) Judging from your (7)'s position, I'd rather keep a symmetry between these two here, but that's not something really necessary
19. 01:47:959 (5,6) - Switch these two's position. This is to avoid such overlap happens on 01:46:806 (3,5)
20. 01:54:498 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Create this kind of jump? (With this, you can stack (10) and (2))
    
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21. 02:01:507 (4) - Move the whistle to (3)'s end to keep your previous whistling pattern consistent
22. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,...) - Gradually increase their volume here? (the music did it, so why not follow it as well~)

Niva wrote:

Mod request via Forum PM ~

[General]

-> Your comboburst has an unperfect cut on the right side - it causes a portion of the image incomplete! fixed
-> Hmm, do you really need that extra timing section on 00:52:960? It does not reset the metronome's tick, and the BPM doesn't change as well... well, I got this timing from Leorda http://puu.sh/oyZQ
-> And finally, slider tick rate 2 fits a lot for this song (using 1 is fine imo, but don't use 0.5 - this song is perfect for those sliderticks) ok

[Normal]

-> I don't think you'll need OD 6 here, would be more balanced imo if you use HP Drain and OD 4 ok

[*]02:12:251 (1,2,3) - You know, you could just rotate (1) 120° to each (2) and (3)... I tried and it doesn't work
[Hard]
01:31:421 (1) - This post-spinner note is missing a New Combo - you must add one manually I really don't know what this mean
[*]01:36:421 (6,2) - Is it intentional you place these two this close? Again, moving (2) upward a bit wouldn't be that hard...

[*]01:54:498 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) Create this kind of jump? (With this, you can stack (10) and (2)) I like it, but no change , sorry

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imo, it would help much if you use grid lv4 while editing (considering your mapping style is mostly encircling something)
Good luck~

1. remove first short kiai time, it's unnecessary for taiko diff to have short kiai time
2. please make the hitsound volume consistent, it doesn't affect much on gameplay
3. don't use 0.5 slider tick rate, it's unrankable

[general]

1. slider can be more pretty

[Dunskin's Easy]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   00:01:452 -
   00:15:723 -
   00:28:114 -
   00:52:731 -
   01:06:000 -
   01:31:288 -
   01:43:596 -
   02:07:265 -
   
   
2. 00:05:222 (3) - NC
3. 00:11:888 (3) - ^
4. 00:36:040 (3) - ^
5. 00:37:578 (4,5) - spacing
6. 00:43:732 (3) - NC
7. 00:48:347 (3) - ^
8. 01:15:652 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
9. 01:22:190 (5) - NC
10. 01:24:113 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
11. 01:27:959 (1,2) - ^
12. 01:34:498 (3) - NC
13. 01:35:459 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
14. 01:40:652 (4) - NC
15. 01:49:883 (3) - ^
16. 01:51:036 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
17. 02:09:616 (1,2,3,4) - spacing
18. 02:12:251 (3) - NC
19. 02:14:480 (1,2) - (1) remove NC and (2) NC
20. 02:18:737 (4) - NC

[Normal]

1. 00:03:555 (3) - NC
2. 00:17:331 (3) - ^
3. 00:31:424 (3) - ^
4. 00:37:578 (3) - ^
5. 00:43:732 (5) - ^
6. 02:18:737 (3) - ^

[Hard]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:07:057 -
   
   
2. Useless green line:
   01:31:421 -
   
   
   
3. 00:32:963 (3,4,5,6,1) - let (4),(5),(6),(1) covered by (3) ?
4. 01:59:278 (7) - NC
5. 00:31:424 (3) - ^
6. 00:37:578 (3) - ^
7. 00:43:732 (5) - ^
8. 02:18:737 (3) - ^

NoHitter wrote:

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As your request.

[General]
Your comboburst exceeds the 388x767 limit. ok
Kind of unsure about the timing. Get someone to confirm it perhaps.
Hitsounds need some work IMO. More claps would be nice. I changed somethinf in normal

[Normal]
I highly suggest you make the first timing section soft sampleset. It fits the song better IMO. ok
01:11:806 () - Was really expecting a note here.
01:37:575 (5) - New combo? ok

[Hard]
I highly suggest you make the first timing section soft sampleset. It fits the song better IMO. ok
00:25:023 (4) - New combo. Fits the music better. ok
00:25:600 (1) - Remove new combo. ^ ok
02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I would say this part is already considered an Insane. I can't find better pattern for this

Gatyaa wrote:

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Random mod

[Normal]
01:06:806 (1) - Remove whistle at the reverse arrow and put it at the start of the slider instead, oh and add finish too at the start of the slider
01:08:344 (2) - ^
01:16:036 (3) - Add whistle at the start of the slider
01:19:113 (1) - Remove whistle at the reverse arrow and put it at the start of the slider instead, add finish too at the start of the slider
01:20:652 (2) - ^
01:22:190 (3) - Add whistle at the start of the slider
01:24:690 (1) - Add whistle at the reverse arrow
01:37:575 (5) - Add whistle
01:43:729 (3) - Clap at the reverse arrow
01:45:267 (3) - ^
01:46:806 (2) - Clap at the end of the slider
01:47:383 (3) - ^
01:47:959 (4) - ^
01:49:883 (3) - ^
01:50:652 (4) - ^
01:51:421 (6) - ^
01:52:190 (1) - ^
01:52:959 (3) - ^
01:53:536 (4) - ^
01:54:113 (5) - ^

[Hard]
02:01:102 (3) - Add whistle at the reverse arrow

Most all mods are about hitsounds

not changed everything, but I fixed something

wmfchris wrote:

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01:31:421 - ~ 01:56:035 - is another considerable kiai section, you may put a kiai flash at 02:22:772 - too.
and yeah, combobrust exceeds dimension limit, remember to use full submit. ok


[Hard]
00:39:117 (4) - whistle at the end? ok
00:46:424 (6) - try other sldier path because it blocks the coming (2) recently fixed
01:00:267 (3,4) - left 1 grid lv4 to refine spacing ok

[Normal]
00:12:722 (2) - remove whistle at the end ok
00:27:362 (2) - ^ ok
01:11:998 (4) - As the diff is quite easy try not to put such slider because weaker palyers can't determine when it ends (4 or 5 tick?) Also it feels empty at the 1 beat break after that, though adding one more tick makes it even more difficult. uh yeah, gonna find any better pattern for this

Not bad, but try to make difficulty spread even (some parts are significantly easier and some are harder); and make smooth flow (1/2 vs 1 beat notes/break) throughout the diff


good luck~

why did you edit your post

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
- Remove flashing kiai
- Soften the sound a bit
00:39:886 - 臨尾個tone向上 所以似kkkkddk / kkddddk done!
nice!!

1. Kiai time: just a little thing, add green timing points at 02:23:025 for turn off the kiai time. seems unecessary kiai time until end but no notes in there.

1. Difficulty Setting: Increase all setting +1 (except Circle Size). seems too slow moving.
2. 00:05:222 (1) - can you remove whistle sound in the slider body? the sound was strange for me
3. 00:11:888 (1) - same as above
4. 00:18:869 (1) - add clap in the slider's end? the sound seems like before note imo, I'm sure adding clap in here is more comfortable.
5. 00:21:946 (1) - same as above
6. 00:23:485 (2) - this slider seems weird for me, I think just more curved this slider more sharp? like this
   

   56,223,23485,2,0,B|94:272|70:327|70:327|115:308|163:331,1,200

7. 01:09:883 (1,2) - remove all whistle in here, what reason you can add whistle in here? not fit with the backsound. beside that, the sound is still same with the before notes.
8. 01:11:806 (3) - add clap in the slider's beginning? the sound seems more comfortable for me.
9. 01:14:306 (2) - remove whistle in the slider's beginning
10. 01:16:036 (1,2) - same as 01:09:883
11. 01:38:344 (2) - add clap in the slider's end? I think the sound still similar with the beginning

1. [00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
2. 00:06:889 (3) - why you change the consistent whistle with clap? remove clap in the end, then add whistle in there.
3. 00:32:963 (3) - add whistle in the end~
4. 00:40:655 (3) - add finish sound in the beginning. for following the cymbal sounder. the finish sound is give better effect when the cymbal sounder is heard :3
5. 00:43:732 (1,2,3) - uu, this pattern seems weird in some reason. the posisition isn't looked symmetry imo. I suggest to change them like this
   

   160,184,43732,6,0,B|128:232|160:293,1,110,0|2
   226,236,44501,2,0,B|251:176|223:124,1,110,0|2
   307,95,45271,2,0,B|339:175|299:279,2,165,2|0|0

   don't forget to fix spacing from (3) into (1).
6. 00:51:424 (5) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
7. 00:59:113 (1) - I know you following the rhythm, but the circle/note after spinner with 1/1, is too hard for normal (especially for newbie). delete this circle of course for the best way fix this. but, need you to know, if you do this, the rhythm still consistent (:
8. 01:16:036 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning. same reason as I mentioned before. also, for consistent finish hitsounding like (1) and (2).
9. 01:19:113 (1) - ^
10. 01:31:421 (1) - same as I mentioned in 00:59:113, I suggest remove this slider, but longer the spinner in 01:29:883 (1) until the long white tick (01:31:421).
11. 01:37:575 (1) - remove all whistle in here. doesn't fit with the song = =
12. 01:40:652 (2) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.
13. 02:22:772 (1) - this circle will overlap with the hitburst after spinner. consider to move into another place for visible by players.

1. 00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too.
2. 00:45:271 (4,5) - I think these slider seems a bit messy and not good to look, do you want to try something like this ?
   

   284,175,45271,2,0,B|262:141|209:141|209:141|134:141,1,160
   70,178,45848,2,0,B|93:214|146:214|146:214|221:214,1,160

   but don't forget to fix spacing for another notes after doing this.
3. 00:47:963 (2) - ngg.. the slider's reverse is a bit overlap with (6). try to make it more visible to look?
4. 00:51:424 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning, as I mentioned before about finish sound ;3
5. 00:52:960 (1) - same as above
6. 00:57:575 (1) - this spinner is too fast. really. (although auto can get bonuses >1000). I suggest to change this spinner into one slider instead the short spinner like this.
7. 01:03:536 (4) - add finish in the slider's end
8. 01:31:421 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning more better instead the whistle sound imo.
9. 01:35:075 (4) - the slider's body is overlapped by (3)'s body. that's not good to look when gameplay. I think you should move to another place. the example like this maybe? then, still similar this, (5) can be move too -> picture
10. 01:52:959 (3) - same as 00:51:424
11. 02:07:791 (2,3,4) - the slider should be 1/6 for more following the song. I mean like this
12. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - why the slider speed is changed? unecessary changed because no slider in here. use back 1.0x speed for this. well, the other suggestion for this, make the 1/6 slider like as 02:07:791

Star Stream wrote:

lufi10 - its timing is good now imo

Yasora wrote:

yo

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General

1. Kiai time: just a little thing, add green timing points at 02:23:025 for turn off the kiai time. seems unecessary kiai time until end but no notes in there.ok

Normal

1. [00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too. ok
2. 00:06:889 (3) - why you change the consistent whistle with clap? remove clap in the end, then add whistle in there.ok
3. 00:32:963 (3) - add whistle in the end~ ok
4. 00:40:655 (3) - add finish sound in the beginning. for following the cymbal sounder. the finish sound is give better effect when the cymbal sounder is heard :3 ok
5. 00:43:732 (1,2,3) - uu, this pattern seems weird in some reason. the posisition isn't looked symmetry imo. I suggest to change them like this
   don't forget to fix spacing from (3) into (1). ok sip
6. 00:51:424 (5) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before.ok
7. 00:59:113 (1) - I know you following the rhythm, but the circle/note after spinner with 1/1, is too hard for normal (especially for newbie). delete this circle of course for the best way fix this. but, need you to know, if you do this, the rhythm still consistent (: I think the rhytm is weird
8. 01:16:036 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning. same reason as I mentioned before. also, for consistent finish hitsounding like (1) and (2). ok
9. 01:19:113 (1) - ^ ok
10. 01:31:421 (1) - same as I mentioned in 00:59:113, I suggest remove this slider, but longer the spinner in 01:29:883 (1) until the long white tick (01:31:421). ok
11. 01:37:575 (1) - remove all whistle in here. doesn't fit with the song = = ok
12. 01:40:652 (2) - add finish sound in the slider's beginning. for same reason as I mentioned before. ok
13. 02:22:772 (1) - this circle will overlap with the hitburst after spinner. consider to move into another place for visible by players. ok

Hard

1. 00:01:889 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning? like easy did. also, for following the cymbal sounder too. ok
2. 00:45:271 (4,5) - I think these slider seems a bit messy and not good to look, do you want to try something like this ?
   but don't forget to fix spacing for another notes after doing this. ok
3. 00:47:963 (2) - ngg.. the slider's reverse is a bit overlap with (6). try to make it more visible to look? ok
4. 00:51:424 (3) - add finish in the slider's beginning, as I mentioned before about finish sound ;3 ok
5. 00:52:960 (1) - same as above ok
6. 00:57:575 (1) - this spinner is too fast. really. (although auto can get bonuses >1000). I suggest to change this spinner into one slider instead the short spinner like this. I think it's fine, because it's hard diff
7. 01:03:536 (4) - add finish in the slider's end ok
8. 01:31:421 (1) - add finish in the slider's beginning more better instead the whistle sound imo. ok
9. 01:35:075 (4) - the slider's body is overlapped by (3)'s body. that's not good to look when gameplay. I think you should move to another place. the example like this maybe? then, still similar this, (5) can be move too -> picture but I like this overlapped sliders
10. 01:52:959 (3) - same as 00:51:424 ok
11. 02:07:791 (2,3,4) - the slider should be 1/6 for more following the song. I mean like this I don't want to make any snap above 1/4
12. 02:20:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - why the slider speed is changed? unecessary changed because no slider in here. use back 1.0x speed for this. well, the other suggestion for this, make the 1/6 slider like as 02:07:791 ^

That's all
Good luck :3

1. Hmm I'm not really sure about the long title. Isn't it suppose to be only "Border of Life" for the title?
2. The 2nd and 3rd combo color is very similar, please change one of them into another color (purple or maybe light blue)
3. It's recommended that the slider tick rate is the same through all diff, with that said, change the other two diff tick rate to 2 (and everyone have said that 0.5 slider tick rate is not allowed anymore, so why you no change it?)
4. I'm not sure about the sixth offset but that's because there aren't any fixed beat in that place. I suggest to ask more MAT/BAT that are more experience with timing as I'm not really great with it, oh but the other offset is fine so don't worry

1. Increase the OD and HP by 1. The current difficulty setting is very low compare to the normal diff

1. 01:11:998 (4,1) - I suggest to follow the music and add notes on 01:12:767. Here is my suggestion for this, of course you can use your own idea
   

1. 00:40:271 (1) - I don't understand why this have 0.7 distance snap, 1 DS is better
2. 00:43:732 (2) - The start of this slider is almost covered by the previous slider's end, and tbh it doesn't look good at all. I suggest to reposition the slider then make it a better blanket, something like this (here is the code if you're interested) you have to reposition the next sliders if you follow this
   

   168,268,43732,2,0,B|112:256|92:184|132:136,2,160,0|2|2

   
3. 00:47:963 (2) - This could be curved more better, try add 1 more anchor point so it'll be easier to make the slider have more neat curve (use grid level 4 for better precision)

popner wrote:

Skin as your request, sorry for delay. Luka is so busy now so I make this.
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followpoint.png

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thank you

Kawayi Rika wrote:

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Hi ~ lufi10 ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[Hard]

1. 00:06:889 (5) - Move 1 grid down looks better. I want to make it symetrical with (3)
2. 00:08:555 (1,2) - Move 1 grid left looks better. fixed
3. 01:04:498 (1,2) - Make a symmetry. fixed
   

[Normal]

1. 01:32:575 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. fixed

[Easy]

1. 02:09:616 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here fixed
   

That's all ~ Nice mapset ~

Good luck with rank ~

Sallad4ever wrote:

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Perasaan dulu wa pernah janji bikinin normal diff buat map ini, tapi lupa xD
Yah setidaknya di mod aja lha lol, iya, gw juga udah lupa kalo dulu pernah request

[General]

1. Hmm I'm not really sure about the long title. Isn't it suppose to be only "Border of Life" for the title? explained by Rei_fan49
2. The 2nd and 3rd combo color is very similar, please change one of them into another color (purple or maybe light blue) fixed
3. It's recommended that the slider tick rate is the same through all diff, with that said, change the other two diff tick rate to 2 (and everyone have said that 0.5 slider tick rate is not allowed anymore, so why you no change it?) fixed
4. I'm not sure about the sixth offset but that's because there aren't any fixed beat in that place. I suggest to ask more MAT/BAT that are more experience with timing as I'm not really great with it, oh but the other offset is fine so don't worry ok

[Dunskin's Easy]

1. Increase the OD and HP by 1. The current difficulty setting is very low compare to the normal diff fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:11:998 (4,1) - I suggest to follow the music and add notes on 01:12:767. Here is my suggestion for this, of course you can use your own idea maybe I will remap this part

[Hard]

1. 00:40:271 (1) - I don't understand why this have 0.7 distance snap, 1 DS is better gw bingung mau ngomen apa, *sigh*
2. 00:43:732 (2) - The start of this slider is almost covered by the previous slider's end, and tbh it doesn't look good at all. I suggest to reposition the slider then make it a better blanket, something like this (here is the code if you're interested) you have to reposition the next sliders if you follow this fixed, nice
3. 00:47:963 (2) - This could be curved more better, try add 1 more anchor point so it'll be easier to make the slider have more neat curve (use grid level 4 for better precision) fixed

Wow map yang sangat bagus buat pertama kali, kalau kamu bisa cari konfirmasi buat timing dan 1 atau 2 mod lagi buat taiko, wa mau re-check nih map. Jangan lupa buat fix NC yg Kawayi Rika sebut di atas ok nice
Good Luck~

Kokatsu wrote:

Taikomod from my queue~

Songsetup:
Use normal sampleset on all timingsections!
uncheck "letterbox during breaks" since there are no breaks
maybe increase od by 1 (?)

timing:
Maybe use some speedups for the kiaiparts?
Suggestions:

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00:28:348 - add timingsection, velo x1.06
00:52:963 - ^ (this is for the last note of the stream to be at the same speed as the rest of the stream)
00:53:056 - add timingsection, velo x1.00
01:31:517 - add timingsection, velo x1.06
01:56:035 - ^ (same as above)
01:56:136 - add timingsection, velo x1.00

02:22:772 - remove timingsection!!! (no flashes D:) DONE
02:23:025 - ^ DONE

notes:
01:06:036 (363) - remove this one D: done
01:06:806 (367,377) - change both to small kat
01:09:883 (387,393,407,416,425,430) - make them small o__O (yea, i hear the sound in the music, but with these bigs you just ruin that part, imo D:)I done a different changes.
same for the part following.
(other option would be to turn down the volume of these parts by ~10% and make all of your bigs kat, so that they actually fit the music but don't disturb with epic loud crashes D:)
01:41:421 (599,604) - big kat would fit better here done
01:50:075 (662,663,664) - just feels like kdk would sound better here.
01:56:035 - change to big kat (if you don't wish to use the speedups i suggested, please add a ts here however, the note suffers from the slowdown and volumedecrease of the timingsection there :/)
02:08:906 - add kat here?
02:20:562 - reduce spinnerlenght by 1/4

hope i could help~

Kurisuchianu wrote:

God taiko.
I don't think this need more mod's.

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26079,389.6103896104,4,1,0,100,1,0
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142788,384.615384615385,4,1,0,100,1,0

1. Hard has an extra red line at 00:01:417, BPM 59.2

1. 00:16:561 (1) - As a easy diff, slider start point away from screen centre too far, might be hard for newbie to heat
2. 02:09:616 (1) - ^
3. 02:20:359 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

1. 00:26:946 (1) - Remove whistle here sounds better imo, that fit your whistle partten more
2. 00:28:348 (1) - Slider start, add whistle sounds good
3. 00:34:117 (3) - Slider end, remove whistle
4. 00:40:655 (3) - Slider head, add whistle?
5. 01:16:806 (3) - Reverse point, use finish instead of whistle sounds better
6. 01:22:960 (3) - ^

1. 00:27:557 (2) - Remove this whistle sounds better
2. 00:32:578 (2) - Reverse point, nothing with adding whistle here, but it's inconsistent with others, for example, you didn't add whistle at 00:38:732 (3) slider head :/ So remove this whistle or add whistle other place similar to this are both fine, just for a consistence
3. 00:40:655 (3) - Add whistle
4. 01:05:075 (3) - ^
5. 01:51:229 (3) - Remove whistle, add whistle at 01:51:421 (4) slider head
6. 02:21:980 (1) - Sliderslide sounds loud here, try using a empty custom sliderslider sound here or just reduce the volume here

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. Hard has an extra red line at 00:01:417, BPM 59.2 deleted

[Easy]

1. 00:16:561 (1) - As a easy diff, slider start point away from screen centre too far, might be hard for newbie to heat
2. 02:09:616 (1) - ^
3. 02:20:359 (1) - Unsnapped spinner end

[Normal]

1. 00:26:946 (1) - Remove whistle here sounds better imo, that fit your whistle partten more ok
2. 00:28:348 (1) - Slider start, add whistle sounds good ok
3. 00:34:117 (3) - Slider end, remove whistle ok
4. 00:40:655 (3) - Slider head, add whistle? ok
5. 01:16:806 (3) - Reverse point, use finish instead of whistle sounds better but I still like the whistle
6. 01:22:960 (3) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:27:557 (2) - Remove this whistle sounds better ok
2. 00:32:578 (2) - Reverse point, nothing with adding whistle here, but it's inconsistent with others, for example, you didn't add whistle at 00:38:732 (3) slider head :/ So remove this whistle or add whistle other place similar to this are both fine, just for a consistence added whistle
3. 00:40:655 (3) - Add whistle ok
4. 01:05:075 (3) - ^ ok
5. 01:51:229 (3) - Remove whistle, add whistle at 01:51:421 (4) slider head ok
6. 02:21:980 (1) - Sliderslide sounds loud here, try using a empty custom sliderslider sound here or just reduce the volume here fixed

1. 00:13:972 (1) - there's a sudden pause after the rapid drum, so the finish sounds very awkward cause it's quite sharp. Removing the finish sounds better

1. I wonder why the second kiai time in this diff sounds lower than the Normal, and I figured it's because the objects in this kiai time don't have any clap on them, that's why it doesn't sounds as powerful as Normal diff. You should use claps in this diff to
2. 00:13:972 (1) - Same as above
3. 00:31:424 (1) - The slider start is almost covered by the previous slider, it very visible cause the previous slider still hadn't fade out. It looks bad so try to reposition it

1. 01:22:190 (1) - Make this slider so it'll blanket the next circle

1. 01:12:959 (1) - I try making the blanket more neat, like this
   
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   272,168,72959,6,0,B|192:168|144:256|192:344|272:344,1,275,6|0

1. 01:37:959 (5) - Hmm maybe try make this to blanket the next circle?
2. 01:39:113 (9) - ^

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Set preview time to 27822 done
00:04:276 (1) - Whistle on sliderslide sounds like D: Correct. Removed.
00:10:942 (1) - ^ Same
00:15:615 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy. Removed Repeat.
00:27:978 (1) - ^ Deleted Slider.
01:35:090 (1) - Remove new combo Done.
01:37:398 (2) - new combo Done.
01:43:552 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for an Easy Deleted First Note.
02:08:670 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy Replaced with Single Note at Sliderend.
02:21:034 - Set volume to 5% here? Okay.