lepidopodus wrote:

[Kurai's Taiko Oni]
- It's not so good idea to adjust circle size and approach rate without some reasons. mh, I used these settings because I found them more more agreable to map with, now I guess I can set them back to 5 owo

00:18:216 (2) ~ 00:21:623 (1) - Too many repeats of same patterns. I think you can put some more notes in here, for example 'd dk kdddk k'(1/3) or something like that. fixed I think, (I used dkddk instead of kdddk though).
00:25:327 (2,3,1,1,2,1) - Similar with above but at least there will be stream in the next measure so whatever. ^
00:43:105 (1) / 01:39:994 (1) / 02:36:883 (2) - Hmm, actually we usually put SV change with measure line unless it is the end of the stream, like 00:57:327 (1). This case is kinda vague so whatever. Just to mention. It prevents 00:42:957 (2,1) - from overlapping
00:45:328 (1,1,2,1,1,2) / 00:52:439 (1,1,2,1,1,2) / 01:42:217 (1,1,2,1,1,2) / 01:48:438 (1,1,2,1,1,2) / 02:39:106 (1,1,2,1,1,2) / 02:46:217 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - 'k kd' can be better, there is slight change of pitch and also, 4 repeat seems to be a bit boring. ok
01:18:661 (1) ~ 01:25:772 (1) - As I said, there are too many repeats. And also, in the song this part is similar with previous part but you are using the same patterns with 01:25:772 (1) ~ 01:30:660 (1) and it isn't so good idea. okay, I have added some notes and changed some patterns.
01:43:550 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1) / 01:50:661 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1) / 02:40:439 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1) / 02:47:550 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1) / 02:54:661 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1) / 03:01:772 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - Exactly same with previous kiai, well it is possible, but consider slightly modifying it, like add a note in 01:44:142 or changing 01:44:290 (1) to kat or etc. changed some patterns
02:20:883 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - lol. Just telling you that this is kinda extreme, but if you ask me, fine. I can play it well o.o
02:29:031 (4) - If you want to stress vocal sound in 02:28:883 (3), you can remove this and change 3 to kat, whatever. ok
02:29:772 (1) ~ 02:35:105 (1) - I think adding some more notes with following vocal would be better. done

Personally I don't like these kind of slight SV change but whatever. Just a personal preference.
Patterns are generally ok, though beats are kinda repetitive.
Generally simple 1/3 map, good.

BTW I don't like T-ara these days.

Vass_Bass wrote:

Video ugly as shit. Remove it :<

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Bass wrote:

I've listened to it once time and now I can't stop.

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Vass_Bass wrote:

Video ugly as shit. Remove it :<

want me to get u a good quality MV?

Screencaps under the box

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Tony wrote:

still no video? D:
also RANK IT ALREADY D:

LKs wrote:

[Kurai's Taiko Oni]

01:00:280 (5,1) - since you used kk there 00:03:391 (1,2) - and there 01:07:391 (1,2) - maybe you'd also use kk dd here(kk kd good as well) ok
01:03:095 (1,1,2,3,1) - maybe it's just my personal like but I think it'd be played better if you make them d,kkk,d I don't really like this pattern, firstly because the first and the last note of this pattern are supposed to follow the claps in the song, and a d doesn't fit for that (imo), secondly because I find the kkk very noisy and superfluous.