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FictionJunction YUUKA YUUKA - Akatsuki no Kuruma

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Topic Starter
deepsea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年8月20日 at 上午 04:25:58

Artist: FictionJunction YUUKA
Title: Akatsuki no Kuruma
BPM: 110
Filesize: 8398kb
Play Time: 03:20
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alazy (4.9 stars, 497 notes)
  2. deepsea's Hard (4.5 stars, 327 notes)
  3. ignore's Hard (4.51 stars, 368 notes)
  4. proseyu's Normal (3.63 stars, 259 notes)
Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Akatsuki no Kuruma
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finally all done.

Beatmapped by deepsea, proseyu , ignorethis and Alace.

Storyboarded by proseyu.

Thank you everyone for help.
proseyu
Alace
James
all diffs: 0.5 tick rate? tick rate 1 is fine imo

proseyu:
01:18:42 (1,1,2,1) - change this? doesnt look like newbie friendly to me
this diff is pretty darn cool. great job.

dipsy:
01:17:87 (2) - spacing, place it manually
01:22:24 (2) - same, unless both are intentional
02:37:78 (4,5,6,7,8) - intentional?

alace:
none, unless i overlooked something.
Topic Starter
deepsea
Sorry I put this so long, damn exams, damn projects, damn reports and damn my laziness.

Maybe I have to do this after semester, final comes after report hell.

Apologized.
Topic Starter
deepsea
Gonna to work on this next friday, final is shit, thats all.
Alace
Remap
the old version is sooooooooooooooooooooooo ugly

Final ver is coming

Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Akatsuki no Kuruma (deepsea) [Alazy].osu
kioukiou
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Topic Starter
deepsea
Remapped [deepsea's Hard], old one is a crap.

Then sounds and Easy. @_@


EDIT:Make normal easier and no [Easy]

hard sounds done.

go pending.
minyeob
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DeadAlready
star~~ <3 ☆★☆★☆★☆★☆★
Alace
To minyeob
you are right
fixed
hvick225
Good :)
antony11
Nothing I can say
Started
Card N'FoRcE
- Alazy:
1:27:695 - I want a beat here :< (should be like 01:48:42 (1,2,3))
2:24:422 - how about a beat here, too? :>
03:03:69 (4) - new combo?

Nothing else to say, but i noticed you used only one hitsound.
I mean, it seems kinda a waste xD

Anyway, great collab gets a star :)
DaRRi
this is quite good^^

deepsea
02:57:96 (1,1) - not cool

PRO
01:44:87 (4,5) - did you mean that spacing?
02:28:78 (5,6,7) - i think better change it into 2 sliders

Alazy
01:47:33 (2,3) - make it a long slider instead
02:53:87 (1) - should end on 1/2 tick
Alace
ignorethis
This song's just...

Great.
proseyu

DaRRi MIx wrote:

PRO
01:44:87 (4,5) - did you mean that spacing? fixed x_x
02:28:78 (5,6,7) - i think better change it into 2 sliders fixed
I'm "prose yu" not "pro seyu" =口=

Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Akatsuki no Kuruma (deepsea) [proseyu's Normal].osu
ignorethis
al2e10
HIHI ~
I have some opinion with your map ^^

[老師]
02:08:059 (5) new combo
02:11:332 (1) remove new combo
02:14:877 (6,7,8) put up a little bit

[迪西]
good...
用了愛...不用mod了 XD

[pro]
i think the slider tick rate can move to 2 or up to you ~
01:45:695 (6) new combo

[ALL]
STAR !!
Alace
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proseyu

al2e10 wrote:

[pro]
i think the slider tick rate can move to 2 or up to you ~
01:45:695 (6) new combo
NO
故意這樣叫很好玩是不是?
Topic Starter
deepsea
Added ign's difficulty.

@ign:

I personally don't like final spinner that much. >_>

But it's your difficulty after all so up to you.


Since Alace and proseyu already made decision so no change since last uploaded for now.

Change sliders of mine as Darri's suggestion.

@_@
Mystearica
[proseyu's Normal]

No problems with spacing or anything in general, but I would like to suggest using soft whistles/finishes to create
more hitsound patterns. I think it sounds a bit plain with all soft normal sounds. There are lots of places
where soft whistles would fit. For example, the 2 notes after your slider patterns.

[ign's Hard]

Fine overall, a couple suggestions:

00:51:42 (5,6,7,8,9) - Delete 8, stack 9 under 7 sounds better in my opinion.
01:48:69 - Add a note here.
02:41:60 - Maybe add a note here.

[dipsy]

All suggestions, not mandatory.

00:12:42 (7,8,9) - Add your custom whistle sound to this, try 10-15% incrementals in volume.
00:14:05 (2,3,4) - Same here.
00:16:78 (8) - Maybe 50% volume soft finish on the start of this slider.
00:20:05 (5) - Whistle.
00:21:69 (9) - 50% Finish.
00:42:42 (1,1) - Same combo, new combo on 00:43:51 (1)
00:51:96 (2,4) - Whistle.
01:09:42 (2,4) - Whistle.
01:13:51 (11) - Finish on the start and end of this slider.
02:06:96 (3,6) - Whistle.
02:09:14 (9) - Finish.

[Alazy]

Great.

Cyril Scarlet
star :P
Topic Starter
deepsea
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Larto
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proseyu

Larto wrote:

all diffs but proseyu's normal:
Fine

proseyu's normal:
00:12:42 (1) - Remove New Combo (very optional)
00:13:51 (4) - Add New Combo
00:53:33 (5) - Add New Combo
00:53:60 (1) - Remove New Combo


Dat's all
fixed
thx >w<


Download: FictionJunction YUUKA - Akatsuki no Kuruma (deepsea) [proseyu's Normal].osu
abalee
here have a reply.
Topic Starter
deepsea
Uploaded with proseyu's fix and adjust some sound in mine.

Thank you modders and testers.
Larto
>A< iesneS aespeed
Furawa
:) star
Starrodkirby86
That's some good stuff. :}
luke27
My japanese is not specially good but... Akatsuki's car?? O.o

Good beatmap ;)
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