- t e n n y a - wrote:

from my queue ~ hello amamiya yuko-san ~

[Easy]
D.S 0.8 - 1.0 please, the bpm is pretty fast and beginner will get confused .w.No change,I think 1.2 is not very hard for beginner
slider shape, circle placement

1. 01:58:037: how about move this 5 grid up ?Fixed~

Rhythms

1. 01:20:537: move the nc to 01:21:560?No change

Strawberry wrote:

EDIT: 翻页!~\液/
EDIT2: 二次是个讨厌鬼！

umm.. m4m? :p

[Lunatic]

00:15:253 (2,3) - = =要不要这么坑。。感觉这个切分音(3,4,5,6)有点牵强..改成五连怎么样. 或者是按现在的节奏，whistle应当下在00:15:679 (5) - 而不是(6)的开头，感觉好很多.总之现在听起来有点怪。。建议改改。 whistle下錯了 已改
00:17:043 (3) - 这个丑 右下一格? 換了個方向
00:17:299 (5) - 个人感觉这里可以改成一个切分，可以更好的贴合鼓声，类似这样http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398901 跟的音軌不同...
00:19:855 (4,5) - 这个切分也有点。。>_> 和00:15:253一样..感觉本来蛮流畅的这里突然断掉了 改了
00:39:969 (6) - (nazi)没叠上 右一格 =A=
00:40:310 (7,8) - ^[/color] ^
00:40:310 (7) - nc? 不了<__<
00:42:355 - 如果是我的话我会删掉00:42:185 (8) - ，然后00:42:355 - ~00:42:696 - 一个5连打，感觉更符合bgm而且好玩点呢。。理由同上 跟的音軌不同
01:15:083 (1,2) - --> 別這樣...

SPOILER

01:15:764 (4,5) - ^ (实在有点丑 ^...
01:20:878 (2,3) - 这两个时间轴上调换位置然后(3,4)ctrl+R? 後面同樣的地方也一樣 都是四個反向的slider啦lol

SPOILER

02:04:344 (2) - 感觉整个flow在这里停止了一样.. 听着voice明显应该是个四方跳啊。。這個梗就不打算改了...從第一個版本就一直用到現在<_<


[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]

`diff名改为Suzumiya's Hard?
00:05:196 (4) - whistle 聽著略奇怪
00:05:878 (2) - ctrl+R 然后左移一格感觉更流畅 好像不錯
00:07:924 (6) - whistle 既然整張圖都幾乎沒用whistle 這裡單獨加一個明顯不科學
00:10:310 (3) - 尾巴+whistle ^ 如果之後再被人挑了我再重新下<_<
00:10:821 - 这个note。。可有可无吧>_> 你開25%聽 明顯有個音>_>
00:12:696 (2,4) - whistle? 同前
00:16:105 (4) - 开头+whistle ^
02:17:810 (5) - add a repeat? 為了強調後面那個節奏這裡就留空一下吧=A=
02:20:538 (5) - ^ 如果上面改了的话.. ^
02:23:264 (6,7,8) - ......>_> 有点奇怪 >_>我一直覺得涼宮姥爺這裡下得好好誒...只有我一個人覺得嗎QAQ

很乖的Hard..挑不出什么毛病..


[Twi's Normal]

`为什么不是Twice's Normal (无视吧>_>
00:04:855 (2) - 结尾加上clap或者默认S音效的finish? 好像可以
00:25:139 (2) - 结尾+whistle然后去掉00:25:651 (3) - 的? 聽著比較奇怪:3
00:38:264 (1) - 结尾去掉whistle..然后加00:39:287 (2) - 上? 同上 不過現在也挺奇怪的 去掉算了:3
01:27:014 (2) - +默认s的finish? 改了下
01:32:128 (2) - 尾巴+默认s的finish? 好像可以×2

感觉whistle用的有点过..整体还不错


[thou's Easy]

`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了

恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题


进步很多 感觉还需要一些mod吧。。加油囖~

1. 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了
2. 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读
3. 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?

1. HP+1
2. 00:09:628 - 没看出这里加速的理由...
3. 00:53:264 (1) - 感觉可以改成1个slider加1个往返slider...往返这么多次好不舒服
4. 00:56:333 (6) - 顺时针转180°?

• 卧槽 好难

1. 00:10:992 (1) - 拉的不好看
2. 00:45:083 (8) - add NC
3. 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 卧槽这是啥
4. 00:35:537 - 这里空拍巨不自然 加点东西?

a3272509123 wrote:

Hi~From PM request~(膜拜星神



[General]
被吐槽这么多了应该没了吧




[Easy]

1. 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了
2. 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读
3. 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?

总体还好 就是1/2Slider有的地方略违和..



[Normal]
Fine





[Hard]

1. HP+1
2. 00:09:628 - 没看出这里加速的理由... 又吐這裡...話說這裡是減速不是加速 baka
3. 00:53:264 (1) - 感觉可以改成1个slider加1个往返slider...往返这么多次好不舒服 改了
4. 00:56:333 (6) - 顺时针转180°? 沒看懂...?

[Insane]

• 卧槽 好难

1. 00:10:992 (1) - 拉的不好看 怎麼不好看...重新拉了下 差不多啊
2. 00:45:083 (8) - add NC 不科學啊...
3. 01:35:537 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - 卧槽这是啥 臥槽/w\
4. 00:35:537 - 这里空拍巨不自然 加点东西? 不知道加啥...

就这么多...mod不出什么东西啊..Good luck~

Strawberry wrote:

[thou's Easy]

`不推荐在Easy这种难度用1/2的slider..因为看上去像是2个连着的circle所以容易让新手造成误读. 都改成单个note就好了 比如00:32:128 - 也不太影响节奏 下面就不提了BPM略高,改成单个note会加大难度

恩。。后面懒了大致的看了一下也没什么问题

a3272509123 wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:43:037 (3,1) - 这里hitsound好违和...吓着我了修改了一点
2. 00:45:594 (1) - 建议00:45:424开始 这个略难读没有修改
3. 00:39:628 (2) - 这个Ctrl+r一下比较好?没有修改

总体还好 就是1/2Slider有的地方略违和..

Leorda wrote:

[thou's Easy]All fixed~
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?

Leorda wrote:

Hi there


[Storyboarding]
* Some lyric SB are blend the BG while they appear. When you using a photoshop or GIMP, I suggest you to use a stroke with a light color. Like the lyric SB at kiai time I want to give the lyric SB in kiai time to prominence, so I have dimmed the SB in other part.

* All lyric SB are having an unecessary transparent space. You might want to trim it as possible. Otherwise, this map is might be lag for ancient PC Fixed. Thank you!


[thou's Easy]
00:54:628 (1) - Are you want to make this slider curve or linear?
01:09:628 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern
01:49:003 (1) - End the slider to 01:49:514 for following cymbal sound?


[Twi's Normal]
* AR +1? Your current approach rate seems bit slow for me

00:43:549 (2) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
01:51:560 (3) - Add whistle?

All fixed

[SuzumiyaSama's Hard]
00:29:912 (4,1) - Swap new combo for follows the pattern?
02:08:946 (3,4,5) - Perhaps replace this pattern into a slider, like 02:11:674 (3)? So players are having a good flow?

All fixed

[Lunatic]
00:35:708 - Add note here for following instruments at music? ok
01:34:685 (9,10,11) - If you do this, players are unable to tell which is head slider or tail slider. I suggest you to unstack them, so players able to tell Fixed!


Meiling <3

wmfchris wrote:

- the lyrics SB has similar colour with the BG with makes them very hard to read Remade the SB orz

[Lunatic]
00:15:083 - As the jumping varies so much I can't tell what's the time separation between (4) and (5) which could be avoided Reduce the spacing /w\
02:10:650 (8) - quite unexpected, how about shortening by 1/4? ok...
sounds good, though some big jumps are not very expected =d

[Hard]
01:56:674 (3,4,5,6) - they could be placed to look better like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405415
02:18:833 (7) - imo no need to place a jump here just to make it symmetrical, a normal spacing would be fine
All fixed

[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?

That's all, when you're ready just find me again.

wmfchris wrote:

[Easy]
Why the beginning is not mapped?Fixed~

wmfchris wrote:

- Fixed the song title

Looks fine now.

1. There are 2 osb file in your folder, please delete "Rizuna - Ichigeki Hissatsu Wo Ai Ni (Short Ver.) (AmamiyaYuko).osb"

1. 00:22:838 (2) - 3/4 beat space is a little hard to read in a normal diff. I strongly recommend you make 3/4 rhythm in a reverse slider
2. 01:19:174 (1) - This one sounds a bit weird, you can try this rhythm
   
3. 02:09:628 (3) - Try this code, it made your slider looked more pretty
   Here's the comparison:
   
   

   368,272,129628,2,0,B|312:264|312:264|296:288|261:296|231:277|224:240|248:208,1,200,6|6

1. 00:53:264 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to current 00:54:117 (3), add NC to 00:54:458 (5), and remove NC of 00:54:628 (1). Because 00:54:117 (3) is a sudden jump and from 00:54:458 (5) it's a new bar start

Breeze wrote:

[General]

1. There are 2 osb file in your folder, please delete "Rizuna - Ichigeki Hissatsu Wo Ai Ni (Short Ver.) (AmamiyaYuko).osb" Deleted

[Twi's Normal]

1. 00:22:838 (2) - 3/4 beat space is a little hard to read in a normal diff. I strongly recommend you make 3/4 rhythm in a reverse slider
2. 01:19:174 (1) - This one sounds a bit weird, you can try this rhythm
   
3. 02:09:628 (3) - Try this code, it made your slider looked more pretty
   Here's the comparison:
   
   

   368,272,129628,2,0,B|312:264|312:264|296:288|261:296|231:277|224:240|248:208,1,200,6|6

All fixed

[Suzumiyasama's Hard]

1. 00:53:264 (1) - Remove NC, add NC to current 00:54:117 (3), add NC to 00:54:458 (5), and remove NC of 00:54:628 (1). Because 00:54:117 (3) is a sudden jump and from 00:54:458 (5) it's a new bar start fixed

pgjhehe wrote:

说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了

pgjhehe wrote:

说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了

pgjhehe wrote:

说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错

pgjhehe wrote:

结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心

pgjhehe wrote:

不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子

pgjhehe wrote:

这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了

pgjhehe wrote:

如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了

nold_1702 wrote:

圖是自己的圖 自己的圖自己做 自己有自己的風格 如果rank出來不是自己想rank的 那還rank做甚麼?

pgjhehe wrote:

说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了

nold_1702 wrote:

雖然我接近afk,都出來說一下

好

pgjhehe wrote:

说真的，这图刚发布UNRANK的时候我觉得做得很好，很好玩，难度也不错
结果今天看到RANK很高兴，就跑去玩了，结果泥马，改得渣得1B，还改短了，结果就坑了，泥马要是以前的样子坑我也愿意，改成这渣样打起来让人恶心
不知道作者想的是什么，为了RANK一张图，随便那些人修改，把原来的感觉全改没了，改成那么恶心的样子
这个评分看起来有9分，很大的原因不就是BGM，但是改成这样，把歌毁了
如果是UNRANK的版本，我肯定给10分，改成这样，很抱歉，我只能给1分，作者你太让人失望了