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aabc271 wrote:
[General]
You probably want a better quality MP3. Currently it's too quiet and the drums aren't significant enough ~ /will do it later.
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[Oni]
It'll be better if you can make a specific part that follows drum / vocal only. Currently it's like random mixes of the 2 as there's no such distinct parts except the 2nd-half of kiai, making some hitsounds unfit imo. See "Suggested patterns" for details ~Suggested patternsSuggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
( I wonder if you're trying to follow drums in some ways, but imo they're followed in rather random moments. So I'll mod these with pitch as a higher priority
You may ignore any of them if your original purpose is to follow drums at a specific timing, but make sure they fit the overall feeling of the map )
00:19:600 ( 75, 76 ) - oo ? ( You can hear that the vocal goes down here, so kd will fit better imo ~ )
00:26:737 ( 111 ) - Blue note ? ( This time the vocal goes up from 109, so the hitsounds of the 3-plets should go up too. dkk fits well imo )
00:29:640 ( 124 ) - ^ ( The vocal has a higher pitch than 122, 123. So k sounds better imo )
00:30:366 ( 126 ) - ^ ( 125 has a lower pitch, while 126 is same as 127 in pitch. So using k for 126 & 127 will be better ) //sorry because it will sound weird if i change it to k.
01:08:350 ( 14 ) - ^ ( 13 has a lower pitch and 14 has a higher one. So d -> k fits well ) //I'm following the drum here so no.
01:10:285 ( 23 ~ 26 ) - o ooo ? ( This fits the pitch of vocal more ) //Change to d dkd.
01:14:156 ( 5 ) - Blue note ? ( Rising vocal from 3 to 5, so dkk fits well ) //following the drum here.
01:21:898 ( 44 ) - ^ ( Rising vocal from 42 to 44 )
01:14:882 ( 9, 10 ) - o o ? ( 10 has a higher vocal than 9 )
01:16:092 ( 14 ~ 18 ) - ooooo / ooooo ? ( They fit the vocal better ) //changed to kkddk instead.
01:43:672 ( 140 ) - Red note ? ( 140 & 141 have a same level of music pitch, so making them both d will be better )
[Muzukashii]
OD-1, HP-1 ? Currently you're using the same setting as Oni ~
00:08:592 ( 26 ~ 32 ) - kkkkkkd could be hard for muzu level players as it's a 7-plets and it ends with d. I suggest you deleting 29 so it becomes kkk kkd ~ ( Just like what you did at 00:00:850 ( 2 ~ 7 ) )
00:16:334 ( 53 ~ 59 ) - ^, what about deleting 58 and add finish at 59 ? ( kkkkk D )
01:35:205 ( 228 ~ 234 ) - ^, change to kkkkd k instead ?Suggested patternsSuggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:29:640 ( 104 ~ 107 ) - o o o ? ( k d k k fits the vocal better ) //i'm following the drum.
00:57:705 ( 87 ) - Red note ? ( Consider that you use k for 88. Hitsound effects could be lost if 85 ~ 88 are all k. Also d at 87 fits the drum better ) //no because i don't want to do so many variation on mazu diff.
01:18:995 ( 164 ) - Blue note ? ( 163 & 164 are at the same level of higher pitch, so using k for both will be better )
01:20:446 ( 172 ~ 176 ) - ooooo ? ( dkkkk sounds kind of weird to me )
01:42:221 ( 11 ~ 14 ) - K K for 11, 12, and D D for 13, 14 ? ( 11 has a similar higher pitch with 12, while 13 & 14 have same lower pitch )
[Futsuu]
Current beats could be a bit complex for futsuu ? Try to find some new players and see if they can hit well ?Suggested patternsSuggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:28:672 ( 35 ) - Blue note ? ( The pitch of vocal is quite high here, so imo k fits better )
00:43:188 ( 78 ~ 80 ) - o o o ? ( Fits the vocal better )
00:44:519 ( 82 ) - Red note ? ( Pitch is similar to 83, and both are lower than 84. so d d k fits well imo )
00:46:092 ( 86 ~ 88 ) - o o o ? ( All the notes here are high at pitch, so k fits better than d )
00:56:495 ( 118 ) - Red note ? ( It has a similar low pitch with 119, so using d is better ) //the pitch of this note is higher than 117 and 119, so kat would fit better.
01:08:108 ( 150 ~ 151 ) - o o ? ( 151 has a higher vocal than 150, so d -> k fits well )
01:23:592 ( 196 ~ 197 ) - ^ ( 197 > 196 in pitch )
01:25:527 ( 202 ~ 203 ) - ^ ( 203 > 202 )
01:34:237 ( 227 ) - Blue note ? ( 227 & 228 are both at same level of high pitch. So both k fit better ) //The pitch after this note is higher than this note so no.
[Kantan]
00:04:963 ( 6 ~ 8 ) - k d d could be hard for newbies. You probably need some testplayers. Try to use fewer 1/2s, esp those with different hitsounds. ( I won't mention this many times as there're quite a lot of 1/2s )
00:36:414 ( 4 ~ 7 ) - I'm not sure if this type of beat is too complex for newbies. Need testplayers ~ ( Also not mentioning many times )
Could be too hard for Kantan. Otherwise fine ~
~Will do a full upload later.ISHIDAMITSUNARI wrote:
[Kantan]
00:25:527 (51,52) - d k
如果你改了 ^ 這個的話,那麼 00:26:737 (54) - 請改成 k, 00:27:705 (57,58,59,61,62) - 請改成 k d K d k //不了,我這裡還是放鼓點好了~
01:04:479 (73) 125 BPM 以下的黃條是 1/8 連打,Oni 或許還好,對初學者來說太快了 //那我直接刪掉好了
01:22:786 (111) - K //不換kat, 反之我把finish刪掉
01:24:317 (114,115) - d K //^同
01:35:930 (141) - d //換了dk
[Futsuu]
00:01:576 (4) - D (另外,這段前奏建議將音量調小,有點太吵了..) //我覺得還好..
00:25:527 (25) - d
00:27:100 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - k d k k d k //好像有點怪 暫時保留
00:51:898 (105) - k //Already fixed.
00:56:495 (118) - d //no, sounds weird to me.
00:57:705 (122) - D //I don't find a reason to add a finish there.
01:04:479 (142) - 同 Kantan //fixed.
01:19:721 (185) - d
01:34:237 (227) - k //no due to high pitch.
[Muzukashii]
00:23:592 (79,80,81) kdk or ddk ? //Sound too difficult for muzu
00:25:527 (87) - ddk //^
00:26:737 (93) - k //no because i was going to follow the drum.
00:27:705 (96,97) - k d //sound weird for me.
00:32:301 (114,115,116) - kdk ? //Same as 00:23:592
00:52:624 (164) - k //no, sound weird for me.
01:20:205 (171) - d //dkkkk is much easy for muzu.
[Oni]
00:36:777 (155) - d
00:41:253 (169) - d //no sorry.It doesn't fit the music.
01:33:269 (102,103) - d k //weird for me.
01:36:293 (117) - d //d doesn't fit the music.
wmfchris wrote:
[Oni]
01:36:172 - like you've done before kdk fits the vocal variation better //but i think kkk is much better here.
01:41:979 - d to highlight the coming K? //done.
[Muzu]
00:51:656 - k k d? //I would like to follow the vocal here, so no.
00:57:705 - kkd like you've done before //k
00:59:398 - k like 0:51 //Same as 0:51.
[Kantan]
00:13:914 - In the music it sounds similar to the last K so K here as well //reasonable, done.
In overall it follows closely to the vocal and drums, no big problem with it. When you've find a bit more mods just ask me again.
spboxer3 wrote:
//不了,感覺現在的也可以general
Settings
(For the setting/general issue.)
- offset應該在所有的object前
- lead in調到1.25~1.5之間會好些 現在有點太快
Kantan
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:17:059 (28) - D 你可以看看這段後面的part全部都是D 為何這邊是K? 感覺有些不和諧 //難度問題
- 00:42:946 (19) - 這個rhythm可能對於Easy來說較難判別 前面沒有東西可以讓人知道這是綁在1/2節奏上的 會容易讓新手confuse //不覺得, 新手們不是以感覺來判斷位置的, 反而是看note
- 00:46:817 (28) - ^ //^
- 01:36:414 (140) - D 感覺會好些 因為前頭都是k 光用重音(K)感覺變化不夠明顯足以作出重音的效果 //高音, 所以用kat.
- 01:36:656 (1) - 對Easy來說spinner太短了 後面的節奏也接的蠻近的 不容易讓新手接到 //k
Futsuu
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:32:543 (46) - d較合音樂~imo //k
- 00:42:705 (76,77,78) - k d k 符合音調變化 //k
- 00:46:092 (86,87,88) - k d k/k d d?//dkd
- 00:49:963 (99) - D 這地方音樂開始變小聲 K太響了 反而D會比較適合些 //考慮難度
- 00:57:705 (122) - (關於上面) 這個看你個人感覺 其實用D或用K都OK 如果上面改了這位置就看你是要對稱或是作轉折了 //^
- 01:30:608 (214) - K 對應前面part //points lepidon's post.
- 01:36:414 (231) - 建議D //Same
Muzukashii
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:25:769 (87) - d合音樂 //難度問題
- 00:48:753 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - kdk kkk kkd?這只是個人建議 //^
- 01:20:446 (172,173,174,175,176) - dkkkd //^
- 01:35:930 (233,234,235,236) - k kkd //高音, 於是k
Oni
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
- 00:09:317 (34) - 由於這顆音調沒有這麼高 不適合用k 所以建議用00:08:592 (28,29,30,31,32,33,34) - kkkkdkd or kkdkdkd的類型 //還是不要
- 00:16:334 (57,58,59,60,61,62,63) - 其實這類型可以作成kdkkkkD這樣 你前面的幾個diff也有在這用finish 何不在這也用finish? 另外 我還是覺得d/D比較適合這地方 //因為個人不喜歡在1/4加上finish.
- 01:25:527 (62) - k合音樂 //k
- 01:35:930 (115) - ^ //為了和後面做對比
- 01:36:172 (116,117,118) - 如果上方有改kdd/kkd會比較適合 //^
Thanks :3arken1015 wrote:
[Kantan]
00:15:124 (22) - Delete this note? dkk might be little hard even on Kantan //k
00:32:543 (63) - Delete this note and move 00:32:785 (1) into here //fixing in other way.
01:36:414 - Move this Kiai end into 01:38:350 . This applys to every diffs too ;___; //okay
[Futsuu]
00:15:124 (38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46) - 9 1/2 notes might be long on Futsuu imo, try to cut :3?
01:36:414 (231) - Delete this note and move 01:36:656 (1) into here //both done.
[Muzukashii]
00:56:495 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - dk dk kkd might be hard even on Muzukashii, try to fix into kk kk kkd? //sure.
01:36:414 (236) - Same as Futsuu //I would rather keep this because I don't like 1/4 spinner and triplet sounds better imo.
meow :3
No you >_<uranechan wrote:
aru baka is Tsundere so I think this map would be bubbled soon :p
Whatever, gonna another thing to get fun...
/me hides
Garven wrote:
[Kantan]
I'd increase HP drain. It rises way too quickly imo. those suggested 4, and I'm finding that to be okay. //HP +1 here.
[Futsuu]
Kind of the same thing. HP drain 4 fits better. //k
[Muzukashii]
00:00:608 (1,2) - Why not do a slider (drum roll) to 00:01:334 - ? //because if the song is under 125BPM, the slider tick will change to tickrate2 automatically during gameplay. It is too hard for muzu's player to hit all the slidertick.
[Oni]
OD +1 or 2
01:35:930 (234,235,236,237) - k ddd? //I guess no becuase I want to follow the instrument from background music.