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Yellow Zebra - Prism Love
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Topic Starter
LKs泡的好 現在就缺這種有特色圖又做的幾乎無懈可擊的mapper
[Normal]
increase the tick rate to 2 because you have so many sliders that are 1.5 beats long
02:13:544 (1) - could you move this so that it doesn't overlap so badly with 2?
03:25:369 (1) - ^
[DNAngel]
00:56:245 (5) - please space to 2.4x like the rest of the combo
01:42:669 (3) - space to 1.4x like the rest of the combo
[Taiko]
looks good
[Lunatic]
00:36:099 (4) - spacing
00:53:836 (3) - make this the same distance from 2 and 4 please: http://puu.sh/ZcOA
03:02:377 (7) - can you put this note somewhere more intuitive such as here: http://puu.sh/ZcRj
04:31:939 (1) - line this up with 3 and 4 like so: http://puu.sh/ZcTm
04:41:574 (3) - space this 1x from 2 like the rest of the combo
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts
Popped.
increase the tick rate to 2 because you have so many sliders that are 1.5 beats long
02:13:544 (1) - could you move this so that it doesn't overlap so badly with 2?
03:25:369 (1) - ^
[DNAngel]
00:56:245 (5) - please space to 2.4x like the rest of the combo
01:42:669 (3) - space to 1.4x like the rest of the combo
[Taiko]
looks good
[Lunatic]
00:36:099 (4) - spacing
00:53:836 (3) - make this the same distance from 2 and 4 please: http://puu.sh/ZcOA
03:02:377 (7) - can you put this note somewhere more intuitive such as here: http://puu.sh/ZcRj
04:31:939 (1) - line this up with 3 and 4 like so: http://puu.sh/ZcTm
04:41:574 (3) - space this 1x from 2 like the rest of the combo
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts
Popped.
thank for moddingSaturos-fangirl wrote:
[DNAngel]
00:56:245 (5) - please space to 2.4x like the rest of the combo //I don't know how to space to 2.4x,I decrease a bit spacing by myself.
01:42:669 (3) - space to 1.4x like the rest of the combo //I think it is fine since it looks good and fun to play to me.
[Lunatic]
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts
//Since the song is 4:49 long,many objects must cause the situation of the high score.
this is not a problem actually ...
http://puu.sh/ZeNK
Topic Starter
Thank you for modding , Saturos-fangirl >w<Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Normal]
increase the tick rate to 2 because you have so many sliders that are 1.5 beats long
02:13:544 (1) - could you move this so that it doesn't overlap so badly with 2?
03:25:369 (1) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:36:099 (4) - spacing
00:53:836 (3) - make this the same distance from 2 and 4 please: http://puu.sh/ZcOA
03:02:377 (7) - can you put this note somewhere more intuitive such as here: http://puu.sh/ZcRj
04:31:939 (1) - line this up with 3 and 4 like so: http://puu.sh/ZcTm
04:41:574 (3) - space this 1x from 2 like the rest of the combo
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts
Popped.
Upload!!!
[Normal]
looks good
[DNA]
looks good
[Lunatic]
talked to other BATs and they're fine with your score, so rebubbled ^^
looks good
[DNA]
looks good
[Lunatic]
talked to other BATs and they're fine with your score, so rebubbled ^^
Topic Starter
Thank you !! Saturos-fangirl >w<!Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Normal]
looks good
[DNA]
looks good
[Lunatic]
talked to other BATs and they're fine with your score, so rebubbled ^^
Hi.
[Normal]
Call me back after fix.
[Normal]
- 00:01:010 (1,2) - To read the timing is a bit too hard for newbie. I recommend you to change the pattern like below.
- 01:41:355 (3,1) - Please avoid overlapping a circle under a slider on the easiest diff. It's too strict for newbie.
- 01:53:836 (5) - ^
- 01:56:026 (1) - ^
- 03:06:099 (1) - ^
- 03:07:851 (1) - ^
- 03:20:114 (1) - ^
- 04:45:953 (1) - ^
- 04:47:705 (1) - ^
- 04:15:296 (4,5,1) - Umm...it's too hard for newbie to read such a overlapping as this...I recommend to change (5,1) to a slider.
- 01:42:669 (x) - Why not add a note with finish sound here?
- 01:43:763 (1,2,1) - I feel every-beat-clap doesn't fit around here. Just remove claps from the start of each slider?
- 01:58:654 (2) - As the same reason as above, remove a clap from the start.
- 03:07:851 (1,2,1) - ^
- 03:22:742 (2) - ^
- 03:42:450 (6) - Add a finish to the end of slider. (follow the cymbal sound)
- 03:49:457 (4) - ^
- 03:50:114 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6.
- 00:09:162 (4,1,2) - The note placement looks kinda random and weird. Try to make them be an equilateral triangle?
- 00:57:778 (4,5,1) - I don't think such a wide spacing is required here from the vocal. Consider to use the same spacing as 00:59:968 (1,2,3).
- 01:04:347 (1) - I know why you added a new combo on this, but it's better to add to 01:04:128 (3) rather than on the downbeat of the measure.
- 01:42:669 (2,3,4) - How about making them like below? IMO the flow becomes better.
- 02:27:559 (1,2) - Why not make them symmetric?
- 02:28:435 (1) - Just remove a new combo? It's not needed here I think.
- 02:40:698 (3) - (nazi) This slider can be more beautiful.(like surrounding (2))
- 03:05:661 (3,4,3,4) - Wow I love such a overlapping as this.(not a mod
) - 03:49:895 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6.
Call me back after fix.
all fixed ! \:D/
Thank for modding ~
Thank for modding ~
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212,280,156318,2,0,B|240:216|236:144,1,140,0|8
268,64,156975,2,0,B|336:40|408:48,1,140
468,104,157632,1,8
268,320,158070,6,0,B|336:344|408:336,1,140,0|8
412,252,158727,2,0,B|344:228|272:236,1,140
196,264,159384,1,8
112,272,159603,5,0
112,272,159712,1,0
112,272,159822,2,0,B|124:308|148:332,1,70
196,264,160260,2,0,B|196:192,1,70,8|0
168,116,160698,1,0
120,48,160917,1,0
88,124,161136,1,8
168,116,161355,1,0
244,80,161574,6,0,B|308:48|384:48,1,140,0|8
404,128,162231,2,0,B|340:160|264:160,1,140
240,240,162888,2,0,B|208:264,2,35,8|0|0
308,292,163325,6,0,B|376:320|448:308,2,140,4|8|0
200,112,164639,1,8
200,112,164858,6,0,B|132:84|60:100,1,140
104,172,165515,1,8
408,172,165953,1,0
449,99,166172,2,0,B|380:84|312:112,1,140
256,176,166829,6,0,B|256:320,1,140,0|8
336,344,167486,2,0,B|360:276|356:204,1,140
155,206,168143,1,8
155,206,168362,2,0,B|152:276|176:344,1,140
256,312,169019,5,8
256,72,169457,1,0
172,88,169676,2,0,B|184:120|216:144,1,70,0|8
297,142,170114,1,0
297,142,170223,1,0
297,142,170333,2,0,B|328:120|340:88,2,70,4|0|8
256,244,170990,1,0
187,334,171209,2,0,B|255:358|323:332,1,140,4|8
256,244,171866,5,0
256,244,171975,1,0
256,244,172085,1,2
168,168,172304,2,0,B|144:196|136:228,1,70,0|8
376,229,172742,2,0,B|368:196|344:168,1,70,2|0
256,44,173179,2,0,B|256:120,1,70,2|8
336,88,173617,5,0
336,88,173727,1,0
336,88,173836,2,0,B|376:24,1,70,4|0
176,88,174274,2,0,B|136:24,1,70,8|0
152,192,174712,2,0,B|168:224|192:248,1,70,4|0
360,192,175150,2,0,B|344:224|320:248,1,70,8|0
256,192,175588,12,4,177340
396,104,177778,6,0,B|328:76|256:84,1,140,8|8
120,280,178654,1,8
120,280,178873,1,0
176,184,179092,6,0,B|144:168|104:168,1,70,8|0
216,328,179530,2,0,B|248:344|288:344,1,70,8|0
120,280,179968,2,0,B|52:256|-20:276,1,140,8|8
336,248,180844,6,0,B|408:224|448:168,1,140,8|8
216,112,181720,1,8
124,80,181939,1,0
52,148,182158,2,0,B|40:184|44:216,1,70,8|0
192,272,182596,6,0,B|204:236|200:204,1,70,8|0
108,280,183034,2,0,B|96:316|100:348,1,70,8|0
272,320,183471,2,0,B|284:284|280:252,1,70,8|0
216,112,183909,1,8
136,56,184128,5,2
136,56,184238,1,0
136,56,184347,2,0,B|120:124|160:192,1,140,4|8
276,212,185004,2,0,B|348:220|416:200,1,140,4|0
460,112,185661,2,0,B|452:76|428:48,1,70,8|0
332,40,186099,5,4
332,40,186537,1,8
332,40,186756,2,0,B|280:88|212:108,1,140,4|0
116,128,187413,1,8
108,224,187632,1,0
168,304,187851,6,0,B|232:336|304:332,1,140,2|8
368,104,188727,2,0,B|400:168|396:240,1,140,2|8
240,40,189603,6,0,B|168:36|104:68,1,140,2|8
172,296,190479,1,8
248,356,190698,1,0
248,356,190807,1,0
248,356,190917,1,8
308,280,191136,1,0
232,216,191355,6,0,B|160:200|96:232,2,140,4|8|8
324,184,192450,1,0
415,156,192669,2,0,B|408:128|376:100,1,70,8|0
208,68,193107,5,8
208,68,193544,2,0,B|276:52,1,70,8|0
124,112,193982,2,0,B|56:128,1,70,8|0
48,228,194420,1,8
108,308,194639,5,0
108,308,194749,1,0
108,308,194858,2,0,B|180:320|248:308,1,140,8|8
452,188,195734,2,0,B|416:180|380:184,1,70,8|0
316,256,196172,1,8
384,328,196391,2,0,B|417:331|453:323,1,70,0|8
256,192,197048,5,8
256,192,197486,2,0,B|192:224,1,70,8|0
56,228,197924,2,0,B|120:196,1,70,8|2
184,76,198362,6,0,B|56:140,1,140,4|0
72,40,199019,1,4
440,40,199457,1,0
328,76,199676,2,0,B|453:138,1,140,8|4
255,347,200552,5,8
192,272,200771,2,0,B|224:250|257:240|292:250|322:277,1,140,4|0
408,232,201428,1,8
408,232,201647,1,0
408,232,201866,6,0,B|440:168|436:96,1,140,4|8
76,96,202742,2,0,B|72:168|104:232,1,140,2|8
256,192,203617,12,4,205369
256,192,205807,5,8
464,76,206245,2,0,B|488:48|496:16,2,70,0|0|8
412,144,206902,2,0,B|424:178|447:201,2,70
376,68,207559,2,0,B|339:61|308:70,2,70,8|0|0
376,68,208216,1,2
376,68,208435,1,8
256,192,208873,5,4
256,192,209311,1,8
48,308,209749,2,0,B|24:336|16:368,2,70,0|0|8
100,240,210406,2,0,B|88:206|65:183,2,70
136,316,211063,2,0,B|173:323|204:314,2,70,8|0|0
136,316,211720,1,2
136,316,211939,1,8
184,232,212158,5,0
184,232,212267,1,0
184,232,212377,2,0,B|200:196|200:160,1,70,4|0
164,72,212815,2,0,B|128:60|92:68,2,70,8|0|0
256,100,213471,2,0,B|296:108|324:104,1,70,0|8
420,76,213909,1,0
452,168,214128,5,0
380,236,214347,1,0
340,324,214566,1,8
428,364,214785,1,0
472,276,215004,1,0
380,236,215223,1,2
288,208,215442,2,0,B|248:208|216:224,1,70,8|0
108,240,215880,6,0,B|120:276|144:300,1,70,4|0
124,148,216318,2,0,B|84:148|56:164,1,70,8|0
232,128,216756,1,4
332,76,216975,1,0
436,124,217194,2,0,B|448:80|440:48,1,70,8|0
332,76,217632,5,0
348,188,217851,1,0
368,300,218070,1,8
452,228,218289,1,0
348,188,218508,2,0,B|312:180|280:188,1,70,0|2
188,252,218946,1,8
80,280,219165,5,0
80,280,219274,1,0
80,280,219384,2,0,B|92:316|120:340,1,70,4|0
188,252,219822,1,8
136,152,220041,2,0,B|100:92|28:48,1,140,4|0
37,54,220698,1,8
37,54,220917,1,4
312,100,221355,5,0
312,100,221464,1,0
312,100,221574,2,0,B|352:100|380:88,1,70,8|0
492,108,222012,1,0
496,220,222231,1,4
412,296,222450,2,0,B|348:332|272:328,1,140,8|4
164,316,223107,5,0
164,316,223325,1,8
164,316,223544,2,0,B|108:272|88:200,1,140,4|0
136,100,224201,2,0,B|100:84|64:92,1,70,8|4
332,184,224858,5,0
436,140,225077,1,8
348,72,225296,1,0
244,116,225515,2,0,B|224:148|220:180,1,70
156,272,225953,2,0,B|104:320|32:340,1,140,8|4
356,272,226829,5,8
356,272,227048,2,0,B|408:320|480:340,1,140
477,339,227705,1,8
477,339,227924,1,0
252,172,228362,6,0,B|216:156,2,35,0|0|8
256,284,228800,2,0,B|220:304|184:304,1,70
92,248,229238,1,4
116,140,229457,2,0,B|168:88|232:60,1,140,8|4
344,76,230114,6,0,B|372:72,3,23.3333333333333,2|0|0|2
280,168,230552,2,0,B|252:164,3,23.3333333333333,2|0|0|2
392,192,230990,1,0
316,272,231209,1,8
204,292,231428,2,0,B|232:320,1,35,0|4
256,192,231647,12,0,233398
156,88,242158,5,4
356,88,243909,5,4
256,280,245661,5,4
192,224,245880,2,0,B|168:256|172:288,1,70,2|0
339,289,246318,2,0,B|344:256|320:224,1,70,2|0
220,132,246756,2,0,B|256:144|290:132,1,70,2|2
256,48,247194,1,0
256,192,247413,12,4,249165
256,68,249603,5,8
256,68,250041,2,0,B|188:72,1,70,8|0
132,152,250479,2,0,B|200:148,1,70,8|0
156,236,250917,6,0,B|68:344,1,140,8|8
356,236,251793,2,0,B|444:344,1,140,8|8
324,100,252669,6,0,B|256:76|184:100,1,140,8|8
256,328,253544,1,8
307,244,253763,1,0
205,244,253982,1,8
256,328,254201,1,0
368,312,254420,6,0,B|392:280|396:244,1,70,8|0
116,248,254858,2,0,B|120:280|144:312,1,70,8|0
308,244,255296,2,0,B|332:212|336:176,1,70,8|0
176,180,255734,2,0,B|180:212|204:244,1,70,8|2
256,124,256172,6,0,B|200:84|124:80,1,140,4|8
256,124,256829,2,0,B|312:84|388:80,1,140,4|0
444,160,257486,2,0,B|432:200|412:220,1,70,8|0
316,292,257924,5,4
316,292,258362,1,8
196,292,258581,1,4
196,292,259019,1,0
144,212,259238,1,8
200,132,259457,1,0
104,124,259676,6,0,B|52:172|44:248,1,140,4|8
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256,192,261428,12,4,263179
440,240,263617,6,0,B|388:284|312:296,1,140,8|2
228,292,264274,1,0
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228,292,264931,5,2
228,208,265150,1,0
156,168,265369,1,8
156,168,265807,1,2
344,72,266245,1,8
344,72,266683,6,0,B|276:52|204:60,2,140,2|8|2
392,140,267778,1,0
308,152,267997,2,0,B|296:188|304:220,1,70,8|0
384,244,268435,6,0,B|352:308|280:332,1,140,2|8
160,128,269311,2,0,B|96:92,1,70,2|0
128,208,269749,2,0,B|55:196,1,70,8|2
124,296,270187,6,0,B|51:309,2,70,4|0|8
240,272,270844,2,0,B|304:244|352:188,1,140,4|0
396,80,271501,1,8
396,80,271939,6,0,B|328:52|256:56,1,140,4|8
168,136,272596,2,0,B|236:164|308:160,1,140,4|0
376,204,273252,1,8
384,288,273471,1,0
308,328,273690,6,0,B|240:344|168:344,3,140,4|8|2|8
196,64,275442,6,0,B|124:64|56:80,3,140,2|8|2|8
64,164,276975,5,0
64,164,277085,1,2
64,164,277194,2,0,B|136:164|204:148,1,140,4|8
276,108,277851,1,0
360,96,278070,1,2
444,108,278289,2,0,B|440:68|424:40,1,70,0|8
360,96,278727,6,0,B|360:168,1,70,0|2
380,248,279165,1,0
416,324,279384,2,0,B|448:300|468:268,1,70,8|0
380,248,279822,1,2
300,272,280041,1,0
220,248,280260,1,8
140,272,280479,1,0
56,272,280698,6,0,B|60:312|84:336,1,70,2|0
140,272,281136,1,8
152,188,281355,1,0
88,132,281574,2,0,B|48:128|16:144,2,70,2|0|8
168,104,282231,2,0,B|200:84|232:76,1,70,0|2
312,100,282669,5,0
312,100,282778,1,0
312,100,282888,2,0,B|344:116|380:120,1,70,8|0
440,176,283325,2,0,B|428:212|404:240,1,70,2|0
364,312,283763,2,0,B|392:340|420:352,1,70,8|2
292,264,284201,6,0,B|224:244|152:252,1,140,4|8
52,152,284858,2,0,B|120:172|192:164,1,140,4|0
240,96,285515,2,0,B|204:80|168:88,1,70,8|0
280,176,285953,6,0,B|348:196|420:188,1,140,4|8
460,76,286610,2,0,B|392:56|320:64,1,140,4|0
240,96,287267,1,8
176,152,287486,1,0
148,232,287705,6,0,B|144:304|184:368,1,140,4|8
404,280,288581,2,0,B|436:260,3,35
468,236,289019,2,0,B|488:196,4,35,0|0|0|0|4
256,192,289566,12,0,292961
Topic Starter
all fix! only 1 let me feel strange >w<Suzully wrote:
Hi.
[Normal][Insane]
- 00:01:010 (1,2) - To read the timing is a bit too hard for newbie. I recommend you to change the pattern like below.
- 01:41:355 (3,1) - Please avoid overlapping a circle under a slider on the easiest diff. It's too strict for newbie.
- 01:53:836 (5) - ^
- 01:56:026 (1) - ^
- 03:06:099 (1) - ^
- 03:07:851 (1) - ^
- 03:20:114 (1) - ^
- 04:45:953 (1) - ^
- 04:47:705 (1) - ^
- 04:15:296 (4,5,1) - Umm...it's too hard for newbie to read such a overlapping as this...I recommend to change (5,1) to a slider.
Good map. Your map became more creative than before :3
- 00:09:162 (4,1,2) - The note placement looks kinda random and weird. Try to make them be an equilateral triangle?
- 00:57:778 (4,5,1) - I don't think such a wide spacing is required here from the vocal. Consider to use the same spacing as 00:59:968 (1,2,3).
- 01:04:347 (1) - I know why you added a new combo on this, but it's better to add to 01:04:128 (3) rather than on the downbeat of the measure.
- 01:42:669 (2,3,4) - How about making them like below? IMO the flow becomes better.
- 02:27:559 (1,2) - Why not make them symmetric?
- 02:28:435 (1) - Just remove a new combo? It's not needed here I think.
- 02:40:698 (3) - (nazi) This slider can be more beautiful.(like surrounding (2))
- 03:05:661 (3,4,3,4) - Wow I love such a overlapping as this.(not a mod
- 03:49:895 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6.
Call me back after fix.
thank you for modding , Suzully >w<!
Upload!!!
No change made a big effect so rebubbling isn't required anymore.
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Topic Starter
Thank you , everyone :3
謝謝大家
謝謝大家
又一隨機check的ranked ! o.o
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嘛 ~ GJ !
(話說我忙大學的事忙到QQ所以...you know = = orz T.T)
Topic Starter
Thank you :3Metro wrote:
very nice map! really enjoyed it. even the sb is nice
and thanks everyone again >w<!
Topic Starter
Yeah ~ xDsospk0011 wrote:
Over 5,000,000 at all of the difficulties.
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