Yellow Zebra - Prism Love · forum

spboxer3

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Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2012-07-24T16:02:18+00:00

[Taiko]
lead-in建議1.5s
00:46:610 (1,1,1,2) - 聽感而言 dd dk會比dk dd來的好些
01:58:654 (2,1,2) - dkd/kkd給人感覺更合適些
03:36:756 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1) - kddkddk?
04:47:705 (1) - K?

真心沒什麼好挑的 GL

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-07-24T16:15:05+00:00

Flask wrote:
Val06188 O:

別黑咱 QAQ

spboxer3 wrote:
[Taiko]
lead-in建議1.5s
00:46:610 (1,1,1,2) - 聽感而言 dd dk會比dk dd來的好些
01:58:654 (2,1,2) - dkd/kkd給人感覺更合適些
03:36:756 (1,1,2,1,2,1,1) - kddkddk?
04:47:705 (1) - K?

真心沒什麼好挑的 GL

謝謝阿三醬的TK modding >w<

wmfchris

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5,072 posts

Joined March 2008

wmfchris 2012-08-04T13:02:51+00:00

~

[Taiko]
- sounds too loud, try N60%
00:50:114 - dkkkd?
01:04:785 - considering there's a melodic raise here, kdk?
01:32:596 - while the vocal stops here it's odd that the stream continues
02:28:435 - streams without k sounds odd here, try ddkdddd
02:56:683 - same as 01:32
03:53:836 - put notes following the vocal starting from here?

bossandy

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1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

bossandy 2012-08-06T14:55:17+00:00

wmfchris wrote:
~

[Taiko]
- sounds too loud, try N60% ok
00:50:114 - dkkkd? ok
01:04:785 - considering there's a melodic raise here, kdk? ok
01:32:596 - while the vocal stops here it's odd that the stream continues I think it's fine because I follow the music :3
02:28:435 - streams without k sounds odd here, try ddkdddd ok
02:56:683 - same as 01:32 Same
03:53:836 - put notes following the vocal starting from here? Nice , I follow vocal here!!!

Boss Taiko Oni

osu file format v9

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Title:Prism Love
Artist:Yellow Zebra
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Version:Boss Taiko Oni
Source:Touhou
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256,192,257486,5,2
256,192,257705,5,0
256,192,257924,1,4
256,192,258143,1,0
256,192,258362,5,2
256,192,258581,5,4
256,192,259019,1,0
256,192,259238,5,2
256,192,259457,5,0
256,192,259676,1,4
256,192,260114,5,2
256,192,260333,5,0
256,192,260442,1,0
256,192,260552,1,0
256,192,260771,1,0
256,192,260990,5,2
256,192,261209,5,0
256,192,261428,1,0
256,192,261647,5,2
256,192,261866,1,2
256,192,262085,5,0
256,192,262304,1,0
256,192,262413,1,0
256,192,262523,1,0
256,192,262742,1,0
256,192,262961,1,0
256,192,263180,1,4
256,192,263617,5,2
256,192,263946,1,2
256,192,264055,5,0
256,192,264274,1,0
256,192,264493,5,2
256,192,264712,5,0
256,192,264931,1,0
256,192,265041,1,0
256,192,265150,1,0
256,192,265369,5,2
256,192,265588,5,0
256,192,265698,5,2
256,192,265917,1,2
256,192,266026,5,0
256,192,266245,5,2
256,192,266355,5,0
256,192,266464,1,0
256,192,266683,5,2
256,192,267121,1,2
256,192,267450,1,2
256,192,267559,5,0
256,192,267778,1,0
256,192,267997,5,2
256,192,268216,1,2
256,192,268435,5,0
256,192,268544,1,0
256,192,268654,1,0
256,192,268873,5,2
256,192,269092,5,0
256,192,269201,1,0
256,192,269311,5,2
256,192,269530,5,0
256,192,269749,5,2
256,192,269858,1,2
256,192,269968,5,0
256,192,270187,1,4
256,192,270406,1,0
256,192,270625,5,2
256,192,270844,5,4
256,192,271282,1,0
256,192,271391,1,0
256,192,271501,5,2
256,192,271720,5,0
256,192,271939,1,4
256,192,272158,1,0
256,192,272377,5,2
256,192,272596,5,4
256,192,273034,1,0
256,192,273252,1,0
256,192,273471,5,2
256,192,273690,5,4
256,192,274128,5,2
256,192,274347,5,0
256,192,274566,5,2
256,192,274785,5,0
256,192,275004,5,2
256,192,275333,1,2
256,192,275442,1,2
256,192,275661,1,2
256,192,275880,1,2
256,192,276099,5,0
256,192,276209,1,0
256,192,276318,5,2
256,192,276428,5,0
256,192,276537,1,0
256,192,276647,1,0
256,192,276756,5,2
256,192,276866,1,2
256,192,276975,1,2
256,192,277085,1,2
256,192,277194,5,0
256,192,277413,5,2
256,192,277523,5,0
256,192,277632,5,2
256,192,277851,1,2
256,192,277961,5,0
256,192,278070,5,2
256,192,278289,1,2
256,192,278508,5,0
256,192,278727,5,2
256,192,278946,1,2
256,192,279165,1,2
256,192,279275,5,0
256,192,279384,5,2
256,192,279603,1,2
256,192,279713,5,0
256,192,279822,5,2
256,192,280041,5,0
256,192,280260,1,0
256,192,280479,1,0
256,192,280917,1,0
256,192,281136,1,0
256,192,281355,5,2
256,192,281574,1,2
256,192,282012,1,2
256,192,282231,5,0
256,192,282450,1,0
256,192,282669,5,2
256,192,282778,5,0
256,192,282888,5,2
256,192,283107,1,2
256,192,283216,5,0
256,192,283325,5,2
256,192,283544,1,2
256,192,283654,5,0
256,192,283763,1,0
256,192,283982,1,0
256,192,284201,1,4
256,192,284639,5,2
256,192,284858,5,4
256,192,285296,5,2
256,192,285515,5,0
256,192,285734,5,2
256,192,285953,5,4
256,192,286172,1,0
256,192,286391,5,2
256,192,286610,5,4
256,192,287048,1,0
256,192,287267,5,2
256,192,287486,5,0
256,192,287705,5,6
256,192,288143,5,0
256,192,288581,1,0
256,192,288690,5,2
256,192,288909,1,2
256,192,289019,1,2
256,192,289128,5,0
256,192,289238,1,0
256,192,289347,1,0
256,192,289457,1,0
256,192,289676,12,0,292961

謝了~

yongtw123

1,028 posts

Joined April 2009

yongtw123 2012-08-07T16:35:18+00:00

hello~

[Lunatic]
01:13:763 (4) - why no clap?
01:15:515 (4) - ^
01:17:267 (4) - ^ (if you decide to add claps for the above 3, find other similar occasions and fix them too)
01:36:209 (6,7) - consider stacking them (or use a slider), since i don't see two circles this far apart anywhere else
03:49:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use beat snap divisor 1/6 to work on these? sounds too off to ignore

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

AR+1 with this spacing?
02:46:172 (4) - i know you are trying make a symmetry here but 02:46:391 screams to have something placed on it
03:04:128 (1) - either a clap or a whistle?
03:17:924 (3) - either a clap or a whistle at the end?
03:50:114 (1,2) - use beat snap divisor 1/6?
03:51:318 - should add a note
04:15:734 (4) - clap at end?
04:29:749 (3) - either a clap or a whistle at the end?
04:43:763 (5) - ^

[Normal]
04:01:282 (4,1) - spacing, but since it's very slow this may be ignored
04:05:661 (1) - slidertick is too loud compared with 04:06:756 (2)

============================================

very nicely done, i'm impressed

i leave a star!

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-07T17:08:38+00:00

yongtw123 wrote:
hello~

[Lunatic]
01:13:763 (4) - why no clap?
01:15:515 (4) - ^
01:17:267 (4) - ^ (if you decide to add claps for the above 3, find other similar occasions and fix them too)
01:36:209 (6,7) - consider stacking them (or use a slider), since i don't see two circles this far apart anywhere else i only no change tihs
03:49:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - use beat snap divisor 1/6 to work on these? sounds too off to ignore

[Normal]
04:01:282 (4,1) - spacing, but since it's very slow this may be ignored
04:05:661 (1) - slidertick is too loud compared with 04:06:756 (2)

============================================

very nicely done, i'm impressed

i leave a star!

all fix~
Thank you for modding 和star , 司令 >w<!
Upload!!!

Last edited by Loneight 2012-08-08T00:46:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-08T00:31:11+00:00

yongtw123 wrote:
[D.N.Angel's Hard]
AR+1 with this spacing? //I think AR7 is better :O
02:46:172 (4) - i know you are trying make a symmetry here but 02:46:391 screams to have something placed on it //I want to not only make a symmetry but follow the vocal.
yeah,you are right,but I want to keep this part cuz it looks good to me ;w;
03:04:128 (1) - either a clap or a whistle? //added whistle
03:17:924 (3) - either a clap or a whistle at the end? //^
03:50:114 (1,2) - use beat snap divisor 1/6? //hmm...I'm considering this.
in my opinion,1/6 is a bit hard for a hard diff...maybe I should listen more advice from other people]
03:51:318 - should add a note //you're right again,but since my diff is "Hard",I don't want to make some complex rhythms like this.
04:15:734 (4) - clap at end? //added whistle
04:29:749 (3) - either a clap or a whistle at the end? //^
04:43:763 (5) - ^

Thank for modding (and star) ~

http://puu.sh/PBQc

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2012-08-09T13:51:32+00:00

hi

[general]

真心完全完全完完全全全全完完没有必要做这么长的图这个长度玩起来做起来mod起来都会显得比较尴尬好在分数和时间貌似合乎规定

[normal]

00:02:262 (1,3) -

228,196,2262,6,0,B|195:157|211:102|253:85,2,130,2|0|2
324,244,4062,1,0
224,272,4662,2,0,B|212:320|165:339|119:312,2,130,2|0|2

00:40:260 (4) - 结尾不要clap 可以换成whistle
00:43:982 (5) - 不要clap 可以换成whistle
02:18:581 (5) - ^
02:22:085 (4) - ^
00:45:077 (2,3,4,5) - 间距略蛋疼换个方式首要考虑间距然后美感也不能放下
00:47:705 (1) - 有提升余地例如http://puu.sh/Q4F9
01:01:501 (5) - 不建议clap 或者同时clap+whistle
01:15:953 (1,2,3) - 不太理解为什么不做成这样感觉更好 http://puu.sh/Q4GK
01:33:252 (1,2,3,4) - 间距问题
02:31:063 (4) - 这种slider这么短没必要用红点你用了红点反而看着不那么对称
02:54:274 (2) - 移动到x166y292
03:21:866 (1) - slider可以微调
04:43:763 (4,5,1) - 这种不推荐不如做成折返slider

[Hard]

00:02:210 - 这里音量略大变成40%

232,88,35442,6,0,B|164:108,1,70,6|2
116,260,35880,2,0,B|184:240,1,70,8|2
320,160,36318,2,0,B|252:180,1,70,2|2
204,332,36756,2,0,B|272:312,1,70,10|0
324,324,37085,5,10
324,324,37194,2,0,B|380:280|408:212,1,140,4|8

代码-音效替换建议
00:44:858 (2) - 感觉开头不用whistle？
00:50:552 (2) - clap?
01:04:566 (5) - ^
02:13:982 (1,1) - 两个slider都加NC
02:50:333 (1) - NC这里就好了前面不用
02:50:990 (2) - 往上一点

[Lunatic]

你要做的只是用我的.osu文件直接覆盖然后上传
我给你完善了一些细节但是懒得打字了 http://puu.sh/Q51l

don't see big issue in taiko

[Lunatic]

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-09T14:18:45+00:00

LKs wrote:
[Hard]

00:02:210 - 这里音量略大变成40%
232,88,35442,6,0,B|164:108,1,70,6|2
116,260,35880,2,0,B|184:240,1,70,8|2
320,160,36318,2,0,B|252:180,1,70,2|2
204,332,36756,2,0,B|272:312,1,70,10|0
324,324,37085,5,10
324,324,37194,2,0,B|380:280|408:212,1,140,4|8
代码-音效替换建议
00:44:858 (2) - 感觉开头不用whistle？
00:50:552 (2) - clap?
01:04:566 (5) - ^
02:13:982 (1,1) - 两个slider都加NC //...?不大懂意思，不是已經NC了麼:O
話說這邊NC pattern跟00:35:442 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6)是統一的應該沒問題才對
(後來聽說有人載下來是沒有NC的 !? 我重置一遍了)
02:50:333 (1) - NC这里就好了前面不用
02:50:990 (2) - 往上一点

除了那個獵奇現象之外
其他確定fixed lol

http://puu.sh/Q5n0

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-09T14:23:04+00:00

LKs wrote:
hi Lks醬 >w<!(hugs

[general]

真心完全完全完完全全全全完完没有必要做这么长的图这个长度玩起来做起来mod起来都会显得比较尴尬好在分数和时间貌似合乎规定
嗚..咱覺得好聽就做了,不知不覺就發現4分多鐘;w; 這張也是咱做過最久的...其實咱不喜歡做short版的感覺聽不夠 lol(被打

[normal]

00:02:262 (1,3) -
228,196,2262,6,0,B|195:157|211:102|253:85,2,130,2|0|2
324,244,4062,1,0
224,272,4662,2,0,B|212:320|165:339|119:312,2,130,2|0|2
00:40:260 (4) - 结尾不要clap 可以换成whistle
00:43:982 (5) - 不要clap 可以换成whistle
02:18:581 (5) - ^
02:22:085 (4) - ^
00:45:077 (2,3,4,5) - 间距略蛋疼换个方式首要考虑间距然后美感也不能放下
00:47:705 (1) - 有提升余地例如http://puu.sh/Q4F9
01:01:501 (5) - 不建议clap 或者同时clap+whistle
01:15:953 (1,2,3) - 不太理解为什么不做成这样感觉更好 http://puu.sh/Q4GK
01:33:252 (1,2,3,4) - 间距问题
02:31:063 (4) - 这种slider这么短没必要用红点你用了红点反而看着不那么对称
02:54:274 (2) - 移动到x166y292
03:21:866 (1) - slider可以微调
04:43:763 (4,5,1) - 这种不推荐不如做成折返slider

[Lunatic]

你要做的只是用我的.osu文件直接覆盖然后上传
我给你完善了一些细节但是懒得打字了 http://puu.sh/Q51l

don't see big issue in taiko
all change~但有些不像LKs醬說的那樣改~

[Lunatic] lol! 2個Lunatic (逃

謝謝LKs醬的modding~和star~

(戳
Upload!!!

and thanks cookiegonyaa three stars

LKs

3,119 posts

Joined August 2009

LKs 2012-08-10T13:50:39+00:00

bubbled

P.S. This buble doesn't mean your map is outright perfect just reminding you. I bubbled this map in order to encourage you and also drag more attention to your map so that it could be improved further more. Keep going, I'm expecting your better projects

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-10T14:51:55+00:00

LKs wrote:
bubbled

P.S. This buble doesn't mean your map is outright perfect just reminding you. I bubbled this map in order to encourage you and also drag more attention to your map so that it could be improved further more. Keep going, I'm expecting your better projects ok! i know, i dosen't think my map is perfect >~< , i think i need more helping for this map ,also, my style .

Very thank you >w<! LKs醬

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2012-08-13T03:14:39+00:00

(丟星

Kawayi Rika

osu! Alumni

3,635 posts

Joined December 2010

Kawayi Rika 2012-08-13T07:22:03+00:00

I'm sorry for the delay ~

Good luck with rank ~ star ~

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-13T11:04:05+00:00

Flask wrote:
(丟星

Flask醬謝謝你的star >w<

Kawayi Rika wrote:
I'm sorry for the delay ~ It's okay >w<

Good luck with rank ~ star ~

謝謝Rika的star >w<!!

bossandy

osu! Alumni

1,665 posts

Joined May 2010

bossandy 2012-08-14T04:10:34+00:00

LKs泡的好現在就缺這種有特色圖又做的幾乎無懈可擊的mapper

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2012-08-27T03:27:36+00:00

[Normal]
increase the tick rate to 2 because you have so many sliders that are 1.5 beats long
02:13:544 (1) - could you move this so that it doesn't overlap so badly with 2?
03:25:369 (1) - ^

[DNAngel]
00:56:245 (5) - please space to 2.4x like the rest of the combo
01:42:669 (3) - space to 1.4x like the rest of the combo

[Taiko]
looks good

[Lunatic]
00:36:099 (4) - spacing
00:53:836 (3) - make this the same distance from 2 and 4 please: http://puu.sh/ZcOA
03:02:377 (7) - can you put this note somewhere more intuitive such as here: http://puu.sh/ZcRj
04:31:939 (1) - line this up with 3 and 4 like so: http://puu.sh/ZcTm
04:41:574 (3) - space this 1x from 2 like the rest of the combo
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts

Popped.

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-08-27T06:03:10+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[DNAngel]
00:56:245 (5) - please space to 2.4x like the rest of the combo //I don't know how to space to 2.4x,I decrease a bit spacing by myself.
01:42:669 (3) - space to 1.4x like the rest of the combo //I think it is fine since it looks good and fun to play to me.

[Lunatic]
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts

//Since the song is 4:49 long,many objects must cause the situation of the high score.
this is not a problem actually ...

thank for modding

http://puu.sh/ZeNK

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-27T09:32:30+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Normal]
increase the tick rate to 2 because you have so many sliders that are 1.5 beats long
02:13:544 (1) - could you move this so that it doesn't overlap so badly with 2?
03:25:369 (1) - ^
all fix~

[Lunatic]
00:36:099 (4) - spacing fix~
00:53:836 (3) - make this the same distance from 2 and 4 please: http://puu.sh/ZcOA fix~
03:02:377 (7) - can you put this note somewhere more intuitive such as here: http://puu.sh/ZcRj no , because i feel not smooth ;w;
04:31:939 (1) - line this up with 3 and 4 like so: http://puu.sh/ZcTm i changed~ but not as this picture
04:41:574 (3) - space this 1x from 2 like the rest of the combo I think okay ?!
Additionally, the total score on this is too high given its difficulty level and you should probably reduce it to 17 mil or thereabouts i look the rule is 16 mil ~ 20mil , i think this score is okay , so keep it ;w; . if i reduce the score ... i think maybe only 1 way is remap

Popped.

Thank you for modding , Saturos-fangirl >w<
Upload!!!

Yuukari-Banteki

1,534 posts

Joined June 2008

Yuukari-Banteki 2012-08-28T22:44:11+00:00

[Normal]
looks good

[DNA]
looks good

[Lunatic]
talked to other BATs and they're fine with your score, so rebubbled ^^

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-08-29T03:00:45+00:00

Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Normal]
looks good

[DNA]
looks good

[Lunatic]
talked to other BATs and they're fine with your score, so rebubbled ^^

Thank you !! Saturos-fangirl >w<!

Suzully

osu! Alumni

2,446 posts

Joined July 2010

Suzully 2012-09-04T03:05:02+00:00

Hi.

[Normal]

00:01:010 (1,2) - To read the timing is a bit too hard for newbie. I recommend you to change the pattern like below.
01:41:355 (3,1) - Please avoid overlapping a circle under a slider on the easiest diff. It's too strict for newbie.
01:53:836 (5) - ^
01:56:026 (1) - ^
03:06:099 (1) - ^
03:07:851 (1) - ^
03:20:114 (1) - ^
04:45:953 (1) - ^
04:47:705 (1) - ^
04:15:296 (4,5,1) - Umm...it's too hard for newbie to read such a overlapping as this...I recommend to change (5,1) to a slider.

[D.N.Angel's Hard]

01:42:669 (x) - Why not add a note with finish sound here?
01:43:763 (1,2,1) - I feel every-beat-clap doesn't fit around here. Just remove claps from the start of each slider?
01:58:654 (2) - As the same reason as above, remove a clap from the start.
03:07:851 (1,2,1) - ^
03:22:742 (2) - ^
03:42:450 (6) - Add a finish to the end of slider. (follow the cymbal sound)
03:49:457 (4) - ^
03:50:114 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6.

[Insane]

00:09:162 (4,1,2) - The note placement looks kinda random and weird. Try to make them be an equilateral triangle?
00:57:778 (4,5,1) - I don't think such a wide spacing is required here from the vocal. Consider to use the same spacing as 00:59:968 (1,2,3).
01:04:347 (1) - I know why you added a new combo on this, but it's better to add to 01:04:128 (3) rather than on the downbeat of the measure.
01:42:669 (2,3,4) - How about making them like below? IMO the flow becomes better.
SPOILER
02:27:559 (1,2) - Why not make them symmetric?
02:28:435 (1) - Just remove a new combo? It's not needed here I think.
02:40:698 (3) - (nazi) This slider can be more beautiful.(like surrounding (2))
SPOILER
03:05:661 (3,4,3,4) - Wow I love such a overlapping as this.(not a mod )
03:49:895 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6.

Good map. Your map became more creative than before :3
Call me back after fix.

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2012-09-04T03:25:13+00:00

all fixed ! \:D/
Thank for modding ~

SPOILER

[HitObjects]
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408,232,201647,1,0
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76,96,202742,2,0,B|72:168|104:232,1,140,2|8
256,192,203617,12,4,205369
256,192,205807,5,8
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376,68,208216,1,2
376,68,208435,1,8
256,192,208873,5,4
256,192,209311,1,8
48,308,209749,2,0,B|24:336|16:368,2,70,0|0|8
100,240,210406,2,0,B|88:206|65:183,2,70
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136,316,211720,1,2
136,316,211939,1,8
184,232,212158,5,0
184,232,212267,1,0
184,232,212377,2,0,B|200:196|200:160,1,70,4|0
164,72,212815,2,0,B|128:60|92:68,2,70,8|0|0
256,100,213471,2,0,B|296:108|324:104,1,70,0|8
420,76,213909,1,0
452,168,214128,5,0
380,236,214347,1,0
340,324,214566,1,8
428,364,214785,1,0
472,276,215004,1,0
380,236,215223,1,2
288,208,215442,2,0,B|248:208|216:224,1,70,8|0
108,240,215880,6,0,B|120:276|144:300,1,70,4|0
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232,128,216756,1,4
332,76,216975,1,0
436,124,217194,2,0,B|448:80|440:48,1,70,8|0
332,76,217632,5,0
348,188,217851,1,0
368,300,218070,1,8
452,228,218289,1,0
348,188,218508,2,0,B|312:180|280:188,1,70,0|2
188,252,218946,1,8
80,280,219165,5,0
80,280,219274,1,0
80,280,219384,2,0,B|92:316|120:340,1,70,4|0
188,252,219822,1,8
136,152,220041,2,0,B|100:92|28:48,1,140,4|0
37,54,220698,1,8
37,54,220917,1,4
312,100,221355,5,0
312,100,221464,1,0
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492,108,222012,1,0
496,220,222231,1,4
412,296,222450,2,0,B|348:332|272:328,1,140,8|4
164,316,223107,5,0
164,316,223325,1,8
164,316,223544,2,0,B|108:272|88:200,1,140,4|0
136,100,224201,2,0,B|100:84|64:92,1,70,8|4
332,184,224858,5,0
436,140,225077,1,8
348,72,225296,1,0
244,116,225515,2,0,B|224:148|220:180,1,70
156,272,225953,2,0,B|104:320|32:340,1,140,8|4
356,272,226829,5,8
356,272,227048,2,0,B|408:320|480:340,1,140
477,339,227705,1,8
477,339,227924,1,0
252,172,228362,6,0,B|216:156,2,35,0|0|8
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92,248,229238,1,4
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392,192,230990,1,0
316,272,231209,1,8
204,292,231428,2,0,B|232:320,1,35,0|4
256,192,231647,12,0,233398
156,88,242158,5,4
356,88,243909,5,4
256,280,245661,5,4
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256,48,247194,1,0
256,192,247413,12,4,249165
256,68,249603,5,8
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132,152,250479,2,0,B|200:148,1,70,8|0
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256,328,253544,1,8
307,244,253763,1,0
205,244,253982,1,8
256,328,254201,1,0
368,312,254420,6,0,B|392:280|396:244,1,70,8|0
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316,292,258362,1,8
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196,292,259019,1,0
144,212,259238,1,8
200,132,259457,1,0
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256,192,261428,12,4,263179
440,240,263617,6,0,B|388:284|312:296,1,140,8|2
228,292,264274,1,0
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228,292,264931,5,2
228,208,265150,1,0
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156,168,265807,1,2
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344,72,266683,6,0,B|276:52|204:60,2,140,2|8|2
392,140,267778,1,0
308,152,267997,2,0,B|296:188|304:220,1,70,8|0
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240,272,270844,2,0,B|304:244|352:188,1,140,4|0
396,80,271501,1,8
396,80,271939,6,0,B|328:52|256:56,1,140,4|8
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376,204,273252,1,8
384,288,273471,1,0
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196,64,275442,6,0,B|124:64|56:80,3,140,2|8|2|8
64,164,276975,5,0
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276,108,277851,1,0
360,96,278070,1,2
444,108,278289,2,0,B|440:68|424:40,1,70,0|8
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380,248,279165,1,0
416,324,279384,2,0,B|448:300|468:268,1,70,8|0
380,248,279822,1,2
300,272,280041,1,0
220,248,280260,1,8
140,272,280479,1,0
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312,100,282669,5,0
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460,76,286610,2,0,B|392:56|320:64,1,140,4|0
240,96,287267,1,8
176,152,287486,1,0
148,232,287705,6,0,B|144:304|184:368,1,140,4|8
404,280,288581,2,0,B|436:260,3,35
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256,192,289566,12,0,292961

Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Loneight 2012-09-04T03:38:16+00:00

Suzully wrote:
Hi. Hi~ Suzully

[Normal]
00:01:010 (1,2) - To read the timing is a bit too hard for newbie. I recommend you to change the pattern like below.
01:41:355 (3,1) - Please avoid overlapping a circle under a slider on the easiest diff. It's too strict for newbie.
01:53:836 (5) - ^
01:56:026 (1) - ^
03:06:099 (1) - ^
03:07:851 (1) - ^
03:20:114 (1) - ^
04:45:953 (1) - ^
04:47:705 (1) - ^
04:15:296 (4,5,1) - Umm...it's too hard for newbie to read such a overlapping as this...I recommend to change (5,1) to a slider.
[Insane]
00:09:162 (4,1,2) - The note placement looks kinda random and weird. Try to make them be an equilateral triangle?
00:57:778 (4,5,1) - I don't think such a wide spacing is required here from the vocal. Consider to use the same spacing as 00:59:968 (1,2,3).
01:04:347 (1) - I know why you added a new combo on this, but it's better to add to 01:04:128 (3) rather than on the downbeat of the measure.
01:42:669 (2,3,4) - How about making them like below? IMO the flow becomes better.
SPOILER
02:27:559 (1,2) - Why not make them symmetric?
02:28:435 (1) - Just remove a new combo? It's not needed here I think.
02:40:698 (3) - (nazi) This slider can be more beautiful.(like surrounding (2))
SPOILER
03:05:661 (3,4,3,4) - Wow I love such a overlapping as this.(not a mod ) thanks :3
03:49:895 (1,2) - From 03:49:895 to 03:50:771, the beat snap should be 1/6. i find there have been 1/6 , ;w;
Good map. Your map became more creative than before :3 yeah~ maybe i find mapping style , but i am not sure , XD
Call me back after fix.